2010-04-06, 18:33 | Link #41 |
Paparazzi
Join Date: Mar 2008
Age: 41
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Thanks for the comments guys.
@ganbaru Tweaked the cloud layer a bit. Moved it up a little thus getting rid of the black spot on it and was able to up the quality a bit as a bonus. As for the train, I was more going for a window timelapse idea but the train works just as well @LKK I'm reluctant to make the animation slower. It's already hovering around being really jerky, tried it a little slower and it became a slideshow. |
2010-04-06, 18:47 | Link #43 |
books-eater youkai
Join Date: Dec 2007
Location: Betweem wisdom and insanity
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@ OceanBlue as Evil Rick said, it would need a border.
@ Periwinkle the second sig look better, and I suggest you to use JPEG insted of PNG 24 @ Haladflire65 and Cyz your latest choice of font really better. @ escimo it look betteer now without the dark cloud
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2010-04-06, 20:03 | Link #44 | ||
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Join Date: Dec 2007
Location: In the Netherrealm, thinking who to betray next...
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Yeah, a lot better, I like it! Quote:
Hmmm... the animation looks a bit forced, it doesn't seem to have enough frames to have a realistic enough, we could help this out bu slicing the sig.
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2010-04-06, 21:53 | Link #45 |
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BOOOOO!!!! where's the animation >_<
maybe you're not endrance j/k kinda weird since I always knew your entry will always be animated EDIT: just saw you're patchy sig.... ^^ don't know if she''ll puke in a moment... IMO it's better if she's smiling
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2010-04-06, 23:03 | Link #47 | |
is not amused
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Join Date: Jul 2007
Location: Naval Base
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I'm having a headache on which character to use, since I have lots of favorites.
On the other hand, what to do is the real challenge. Quote:
Spoiler for about her:
I like the pop-out aspect and the background looks okay. Only thing is, I don't like the font that much.
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2010-04-07, 10:46 | Link #51 | |
Not an expert on things
Join Date: Jun 2007
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As for the border idea for mine, I played around with it for a bit [Tried the border all around and the only-horizontal border], but it doesn't seem to work with the effect I'm going for [which is a more open-flow, expansive feeling]. Thanks for the advice though. |
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2010-04-07, 12:13 | Link #52 | |
Panzer Vor!
Join Date: Sep 2007
Location: Inside a WWII German tank
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I love it! I can say that it feels that it no longer needs any more touching up.
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V2 is definitely better but the shading is a bit too bright for the eyes. |
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2010-04-07, 13:57 | Link #53 |
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Join Date: Mar 2009
Location: Normandy SR-2
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It looks a little bit too washed out and the white feels empty, also I think you can change the font to make it look more visible. Also, maybe bring out the eye colour more, because I can't really see anything there
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2010-04-07, 14:03 | Link #54 |
Anxious bookseller
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Join Date: Aug 2006
Location: Shibuya Psychic Research
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Uguuu~~
Vers 1...maybe According to MiniT she is Youmu Konpaku. Personally I just liked the outfit she's wearing. I need some help, I have to save it as a gif for the transparency to work but Im losing tons of qual when I save it. I tried anything I could think of in IR improve the qual but nothing is working, even slicing it didnt help actually made it worse. When its in .png form size is 88kbs, in gif its only 27kbs and you can soooooo tell. Tips on how to improve this? C&C?
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2010-04-07, 14:19 | Link #55 |
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Join Date: Nov 2006
Location: Virginia, USA
Age: 62
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@ Manju: Did you try to horizontally slice the top from the border upwards & save as a png (or maybe a gif, maybe not) with the rest from the border downwards saved as a jpg with some compression? And maybe resize the whole sig slightly smaller?
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2010-04-07, 14:34 | Link #56 | ||
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Touhou - Icey, you're a genius. Thanks for a chance to compete with a sig I've always felt very proud of. Final Entry - Konpaku Youmu
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2010-04-07, 16:46 | Link #59 | |
~La-la Land~
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Join Date: Jul 2007
Location: Seattle
Age: 37
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While the faded colors are very nice and render/text placement perfect, I have no feeling of depth. The sig is overall flat and devoid of any lighting direction.
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2010-04-07, 16:53 | Link #60 |
books-eater youkai
Join Date: Dec 2007
Location: Betweem wisdom and insanity
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@ White Manju Bun as others suggested, you could slice your signature, the transparent slice in PNG ant the full slice in JPEG. And if the PNG slice is too big, you can slice it in 3 slice, using gif for the empty area ant PNG for the head slice.
EDIT: my 4th try, I reworked the text and the render. C&C would be welcome.
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