2010-10-17, 15:29 | Link #164 |
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@ Sworn to Believe: I like the "other" version better than version 1. Like Hooves said, the text is easier to read. Plus the darker edges moving to the lighter center makes the picture more dynamic and gives it depth, in my opinion.
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2010-10-17, 19:10 | Link #165 |
~La-la Land~
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Join Date: Jul 2007
Location: Seattle
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Mmm, I like what you've done with it! New background fits, and I disagree with the comment to change the red leaves to yellow...if you do that, I'd find the colors very monotone. I also like your idea to change the text to kanji and to move it to the leaf. Right now, however, it still looks just slapped right on the leaf. I'd play with the text's texture and color a bit to blend it more in so it looks more natural.
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2010-10-17, 22:44 | Link #171 | |
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Join Date: Aug 2010
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I think the text is fine as it is. Nice work here CMHerrera, love the expressions on this one but the single white leaf does bug me a little, but not that much.
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2010-10-17, 23:58 | Link #172 |
Quietly Lurking
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Join Date: Mar 2010
Location: Beneath the prodigious sky...
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Wow I really like it Nice job with the lighting and shading of different parts of the signature. That's what stands out the most to me The only thing that is bothering me is the text and that is only a little bit Its most likely just my personal taste in fonts. But you did a really good job considering your sotm hiatus
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2010-10-18, 05:41 | Link #173 |
Call me MK! :)
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Join Date: Oct 2009
Location: The top of the world.
Age: 34
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Here are the entries so far (there are still four days until the end (in my time zone at least) so you still have time to post your final entries) If I made a mistake and missed someones entry please bring this matter to me and I will fix it Btv I posted a link next to each entry here from the post I took sigs so poeple can see if I took the sig from the right post.
I will edit this post when the time is up and I will link it in the end of the thread Spoiler for entries:
I apologize if I took someones job in doing this, but I have a free time now
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2010-10-18, 13:23 | Link #176 |
Strangely dependable...
Join Date: Nov 2006
Location: some random place out there...
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Okay here's version 2 with different fonts.
V1 for comparison: Spoiler:
C&C? I have so much trouble with text...orz. @Rennir: it's not your taste in fonts...I just suck at it.
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2010-10-18, 13:31 | Link #177 |
books-eater youkai
Join Date: Dec 2007
Location: Betweem wisdom and insanity
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@ Presage I do prefer this version 2
BTW, am I the only one surprised than nobody even made a entry showing any of the Aky sister, even thought we already have some Touhou entry ?
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