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2011-01-03, 15:43 | Link #183 | |
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He knew what readers expect of him and proceed to bait us with mystery hooks. Worked well. In the next WTC series, he just needs to figure out what audience expect from him then and find a way to hook us in, again. Maybe we'll see a slight shift in genre. I doubt a straight up truth-finding mystery will work again. |
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2011-01-03, 15:43 | Link #184 | ||
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2011-01-03, 15:59 | Link #185 |
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Just talking about purely in terms of what disappointed us about the ending, I would say that the mystery aspect is the least of my concerns. I've said time and time again that I found the EP7 ending perfectly satisfactory in that regard, so there wasn't much more to work with from the "reveal" angle.
My issues really stem from the EP7 Tea Party. I think EP8, as a whole, would have been a lot stronger if the EP7 Tea Party had been cleanly excised from Umineko as a whole. (It's hard to get riled up about Ange burgering herself over the truth if she's already burgered herself over something that is, if not the truth, is very close to it. Likewise the sheer brutality of what Bern did made it hard for me to accept her role in EP8 without some resentment on my half.) But, I can't accept cutting it out either, because the EP7 Tea Party holds my entire heart in its grip. I am a Beatrice fan. I love Ange with all my heart. I am truly happy she got the ending she deserves. But throughout EP8, my mind kept on returning to Clair's body torn to bits on the silent stage, and of the young woman who looked out between the bars of her prison and dared to dream of Lion, only to have that dream cut down in front of her very eyes. In that respect, I found it hard to like the scenes where Will and Lion were dumped in with all the other meta characters without a word. I find it hard to accept a Lion that can blindly say "I'm Beatrice's last hope" without that having anything to do with the actual plot of EP8, as opposed to EP7 where it actually meant something. And Battler and Beatrice's ending was so beautiful it made me cry, but deep down it also felt a little hollow because there was so little context around it. I felt like EP7 ended the mystery beautifully. But I felt it left Beatrice in a place where she was still suffering, and it hurt to see that go unacknowledged in EP8. (I actually found the scene in the finale where Ange kept winking her in and out of existence because she dared to flirt with her own husband a little repulsive.) I felt like it flattened Will and Lion by bringing them in without giving them anything important to do. There are a lot of things to really love about EP8, but I did have those problems in particular with it.
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2011-01-03, 16:14 | Link #186 | |
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Let us not even mention not everyone reads R07's interviews, nor is the duty of the reader to do so. Maybe, but I'd wait until it ends, read some opinions on the whole thing, and then see if I think I want to read it.
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2011-01-03, 16:16 | Link #187 | |
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He's a good character writer, a good dialogue writer, a terrible descriptive writer, a terrible expository writer, handles his themes hamfistedly (but competently compared to most amateurs), and he desperately needs an editor. For a professional writer (and he is a professional writer, even if WTC is a "doujin" series), he is merely not bad at what he does. Call me a picky snob (I am) but I didn't get out of many years' interest what I put into it. I have no particular reason to believe he's likely to change and improve unless he makes a definite commitment to professionalism in the future.
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2011-01-03, 16:22 | Link #188 | |
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I'll read it with a "eh why not" sort of approach. It's not a very expensive series, and it has got decent length. |
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2011-01-03, 16:23 | Link #189 |
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I think one can look at the entire series more sympathetically if it's read back-to-back rather than as serialised. I read eps 1-7 two weeks ago in the space of five days and then ep 8 as it came out. As a result I didn't really spend that much time theorising over the whodunnits. Indeed by the end I felt most of eps1-4 didn't matter as much (that is to say I felt a resolution wasn't what r07 was aiming at). If you've been mulling this over for four years and were expecting a complete solution I can understand why you'd be annoyed (even though I don't agree).
On a more humdrum note: One particular flaw I found with the construction of Ep8 itself was the final battle with bern/erika. Whilst the library side of the battle was relatively interesting, if slightly drawn out, the golden land side was horribly boring, especially in the first half. Endless descriptions of a fake argument nearly sent me to sleep. In the entire battle nothing really happened and *was* as planned, simply a stalling tactic. That's all very well, but did r07 have to do devote so much time to it? I think a bit more fleshing out of the tea party and the ???? would have been a lot more productive. Also I rather felt that zts' lastendconductor was rather wasted on that fight scene. re the would you read another WTC game? Definitely. However as AuraTwilight said, it's essentially his magnum opus, so I'm not entirely sure where he'd go from here. Also I imagine that everyone would be rather more on the look out for hijinks EDIT: Damn, Will Wright read my mind. |
2011-01-03, 16:24 | Link #190 |
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I give up on his series for now. Unless his next one is going to sound interesting (like Umineko was), I'm not going to bother. He's good at writing characters, but he fails in the mystery department (yes, I know. Umineko was never said to be a mystery. But it really felt like one by the end of Alliance). Now, I'm going to lurk and be more butthurt about this...
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2011-01-03, 16:29 | Link #191 |
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As I said before, I'll probably read it depending on the word of mouth. I wont follow it though thats for certain, I'll wait till all of it is done before I dedicate any time to it and it would be entirely passive. I'll just read it and go with it, I wont dedicate any time to reason with it or anything.
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2011-01-03, 16:40 | Link #192 |
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I haven't read the entirety of EP8, but I read the solution and some spoilers about it.
Mulling over the conclusion, I decided that it was both incredibly meaningful and wholly unsatisfying. If you consider the themes of the entire series (especially the stuff about the catboxes) then it makes sense. Ryukishi didn't betray us. He didn't troll us, either. I'm almost certain that he DID have a solution when he designed the series. He just didn't tell us what it was. He left the final solution to our own interpretations. I know a lot of people (mystery fans) will be upset by this ending. I know that some people will not be as accepting of this meaningful ending as I am. Even so, you shouldn't be angry at Umineko. You should not forget all of the good things that happened over the whole series. Events like Rosa Musou in EP2 and Logic Battles in EP6 kept me coming back. Yes, I wanted a solution, but there is more to Umineko than just solving mysteries. I will not forget all of the fun I had speculating here and reading everyone else's theories. Sure, I've been called stupid and my theories useless, but I still thoroughly enjoyed the series as a whole. It's what I call a more "open" ending instead of the typical mystery genre ending. Frankly, I think there should be more of these. I don't hate Umineko. I can't say I'm too pleased about not being given an answer to all of my questions, though. Still, that is not grounds to call EP8 "useless" or Umineko "a waste of time". In my opinion, anyway. |
2011-01-03, 17:06 | Link #194 | |
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There are too many loose ends for my tastes. Things that aren't fully addressed. Maybe Ryukishi just forgot about them or deemed them unimportant. Things like Maria Ushiromiya's signature. Like I said, I haven't read EP8 yet, I've been going on what people have been saying. I haven't decided for myself whether I like EP8's ending yet. I like the idea of it, the more I think of it. It does fit in with the themes of the series. But I cannot say I don't feel a little shafted from how this ended. |
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2011-01-03, 17:48 | Link #197 | |
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My assumption from this was that in Yasu-Beatrice's scenarios, she wanted to cast the message writer/narrator as her accomplice* Maria as a red herring and to share the fun, or perhaps to share some credit in the creation of her fantasy scenario. And as misdirection, it served its purpose, if not in the manner she intended. That said, I'm not done reading Twilight just yet. I'm just at the entrance to Bern's Marvelous Mysterious Maze of Perplexing Purple Proclamations. For my part, at the point where I'm at right now, I really feel like I'm getting a sense of what Ryuukishi07 is trying to accomplish, and it's actually rather moving, if so. If as R07 says, many mysteries do ignore the "heart", the true whydunnit, in favor of whodunnit/ howdunnit, then Umineko is a tale of the romance and fantasy that coyly lurks behind the surface of the mystery genre (perhaps behind the mystery creation process itself and/or the minds of the readers exploring the work), the magical realm of possibilities before the cat box is opened in those missing last ten pages. I really like the echoes of the events that reverberate throughout the eight arcs and the illustrative way concepts and rules are anthropomorphized or otherwise brought to life. It's not so much either a mystery or fantasy, but an illustration of appreciation for both. The "whydunnit" doesn't simply refer to the culprit, but the author of the mystery him/herself (whether in or out of the story). I have thus far found the work incredibly engaging. I hope I'll continue to feel so after turning the final "page". *Clarification: by accomplice, I don't mean as culprit, but as "apprentice witch and friend who helped inspire her". Sorry if my choice of words is confusing.
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2011-01-03, 17:54 | Link #198 | |
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I forgot to consider the "heart" of the mystery, anyway. And I certainly do like thinking of Umineko as an appreciation of the "whydunnit". It adds another layer of complexity to the whole. Thanks for that, man I can't wait until I'll be able to read EP8. Even if the ending does disappoint me. |
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2011-01-03, 18:01 | Link #199 | |
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I don't know if I can handle the trolling, a ending like this, or just the over all mass theory and thought I put in to everything while reading.
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