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I am no one
Join Date: Apr 2010
Location: Inside your head
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Writing another fic might give some refreshment... or maybe plain lucky, Sacred Twins NEVER meant to be a main project. It was made to promote the old TLR Stratos. Going to sleep, see you guys. =.=
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2012-01-08, 12:23 | Link #17204 |
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@ Senpai - Which OC's are you talking about?
Side note - So symptoms are insomnia and paranoia? That's it? Side note 2 - There is one challenger. Th only person who can match her in god moding: Tatenashi Side note 3 - Does the huge bathroom fill the same place as a spa? Might do a scene where Maya asks Irish when was the last time he took a bath. We don't hear the answer; but she's draghing him by the collar to the bathroom come the next scene. @ Demi - Still counts as being co-author Anyway, going to sleep as well. See ya guys tom.
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2012-01-08, 19:24 | Link #17207 | ||
I am no one
Join Date: Apr 2010
Location: Inside your head
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Hmm, can't name specific... less of a bad boy and more like grumpy and cold ass.
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That aside, I don't know. Location of Sauna usually close, but not in the same place as pond. You mean in I.S.-verse? Well, we can't really deduct since there's only two guys in the cast. By theory, guys are more easily provoked, but it was the girls that once provoked, they'll hard to stop. Anyway, went to school. Ja ne.
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2012-01-08, 19:40 | Link #17208 |
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@ Jak - Actually, males are more likely to be perverted due to testosterone. However, pervertedness between the genders nowadays is more balanced.
@ Senpai - I really don't know anyone who fits the archetypal bad boy niche. Side note - Just insomnia then. If he adjusts way too easily it'll be unrealistic. Side note 2 - That would be the ultimate slugfest Side note 3 - I meant the huge bathroom that Ichika and Charlotte talked in. It seemed pretty huge
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2012-01-08, 20:02 | Link #17209 | |
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2012-01-08, 20:05 | Link #17210 |
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@ Jak - There really is no way to judge. It depends on the individual rather than their gender. Ichika's a chaste hero who can't get a hint while Dan is more perverted and shows attractiok to cute girls. You can't just say one gender is more perverted than the other.
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2012-01-08, 21:27 | Link #17212 |
Tenshi's Defense Squadron
Join Date: Dec 2005
Location: Fighting against those who oppress the system
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I'd say you do a very good job in writing canon based fics, especially with those ideas you came up with, and the sample dialogue you wrote. You can write that instead.
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2012-01-09, 00:00 | Link #17216 |
~ Your Smile ~
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Join Date: Dec 2008
Location: 346Pro
Age: 38
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Now where the heck is Jung Kari's profile? I've got enough crack to run her with Riz's next segment. However, I can't find it. :s
And yes, I can't believe I forgot that Riz had a singing maid while writing Vandam...
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2012-01-09, 00:50 | Link #17218 |
That one guy
Join Date: Nov 2011
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Shouta: Mama
Maya: Hm? What is it honey? Shouta: Do you think I'm manly? Maya: ... huh? Shouta: Do you think I'm manly? Everyone in class calls me cute and the guys say that it's not manly at all. Maya: I'm not quite sure I follow. I mean, being cute isn't a bad thing. I like you and I like cute things. Shouta: I don't want to be cute anymore! Everyone just treats me like a kid *teary eyed* Maya: *stareing and blushing* Okay! *stern face* Mama has a plan! We're going to make you manly overnight. Shouta: *Shy peak* Really? Maya: *resists urge to glomp* Really! *Takes her son's hands* Now repeat after me. My name is Shouta("Ore wa Shouta") Shouta: O-o-ore wa Sh-Shouta. Maya: again! Ore wa Shouta! Shouta: Ore wa Shouta! next morning. Shouta: *breathes in cold morning air with only a Sarashi and shirtless gakuran get-up.* Okay ma! I'm going now. Maya: *waves* Have a nice day! *Sees Shouta off then sighs in satisfaction* Shouta in a gakuran looks cute too. |
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