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Old 2012-11-29, 18:57   Link #37381
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I want to give old_iron rep too.

That was...

Man, I should NOT be reading that stuff when I have the flu.

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Old 2012-11-29, 21:31   Link #37382
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That was really cool. I've never thought about Nanoha having that kind of connection.
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Old 2012-11-29, 21:35   Link #37383
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Makes sense though. The love had to come from somewhere.
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Old 2012-11-30, 00:35   Link #37384
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I am now totally getting this image of Manoha with rings on his fingers, wearing a fudora hat and a large purple fur coat with a cane in one hand and pimpslapping Arisa saying "dammit, I'm a pimp, not a magical girl!"

Oh, this had in me in stiches.

MANOHA's device of a pimp cane with Divine-pimp-slap that can befriend-any-women as the finisher.

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Hey, you all lucked out. I went home early from work today because sick. Now I can post a short that I might revisit in the future. But for now, enjoy.

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Yes, I agree with the others, you need a boost in your reputation. This is an awesome take of childhood dream and inspiration that made Nanoha the Ace she is today.

I wonder if you can also make a childhood moment out of other characters like; Yuuno being an archaeologist, Fate being an enforcer, Hayate being an Lieutenant Colonel, and Chrono as an Admiral.
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Old 2012-11-30, 14:34   Link #37385
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Wow, such a reaction. I'm really glad you all enjoyed it so much. Such is the inspiration of listening to Aces in Exile on repeat for hours on end.

I'll admit, there was a lot more I wanted to do with it. But it all came off as being a useless addition whenever I tried. One such thing being her actually dogfighting with someone. It didn't really work, so I scrapped it.

As for everyone else's inspiration... That's a little more difficult to try and flesh out. Nanoha's was broad enough to give me a lot of elbow room in interpretation. I'll have to think about it.

Still thank you all for your comments. I really appreciate it. =3

Also, whoever guesses the deal with the German gets a cookie~
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Old 2012-11-30, 19:36   Link #37386
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Wow, such a reaction. I'm really glad you all enjoyed it so much. Such is the inspiration of listening to Aces in Exile on repeat for hours on end.

I'll admit, there was a lot more I wanted to do with it. But it all came off as being a useless addition whenever I tried. One such thing being her actually dogfighting with someone. It didn't really work, so I scrapped it.

As for everyone else's inspiration... That's a little more difficult to try and flesh out. Nanoha's was broad enough to give me a lot of elbow room in interpretation. I'll have to think about it.

Still thank you all for your comments. I really appreciate it. =3

Also, whoever guesses the deal with the German gets a cookie~
Is that German ghost having a bet on who has a better looking wife with the Russian, and right after he take a good look at Nanoha, he then said, "She looks like my wife, but Japanese" with a grin and a thumbs up?

The Russian laughed at the Japanese part....
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Old 2012-11-30, 20:11   Link #37387
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... Sorry, but I just can't seem to enjoy that one as much as your other works.

As for everyone else's inspiration, I have a few propositions:

- Yuuno being an archeologist stems from his desire to find out more about his past.

- Chrono being an Admiral comes from the respect for his father.

- Fate being an Enforcer because she want to prevent anyone from having a fate like the Testarossa.

Not sure about Hayate though.
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Old 2012-11-30, 22:09   Link #37388
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I really liked Hard Work's Reward, and the Aces story made my throat close up.
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Old 2012-12-01, 03:33   Link #37389
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... Sorry, but I just can't seem to enjoy that one as much as your other works.

As for everyone else's inspiration, I have a few propositions:

- Yuuno being an archeologist stems from his desire to find out more about his past.

- Chrono being an Admiral comes from the respect for his father.

- Fate being an Enforcer because she want to prevent anyone from having a fate like the Testarossa.

Not sure about Hayate though.
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Old 2012-12-01, 09:20   Link #37390
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Isn't Hayate the atoner in canon Nanoha? Making up for the crimes that the Wolkenritter committed for her sake, and the past victims of the tome whose power she has inherited?
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Old 2012-12-02, 18:48   Link #37391
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My muse stopped working for today, or rather, I got to a point and I couldn't get a transition scene worked in, so, I stop there.

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Old 2012-12-14, 00:17   Link #37392
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This just kind of poped in to my head one day and refuses to leave me alone, so I decided to post it here and on ff.net, any constructive criticism would be appreciated those people can be cruel. Caro seems a little ooc to even me, but she has a lot to process. I promise other characters will be in the next chapter this will be encompassing a lot. So here is the start of a rare Epic Caro/Erio fic

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Old 2012-12-14, 12:03   Link #37393
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Wall of text man. Wall of text.
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Old 2012-12-14, 12:41   Link #37394
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Old 2012-12-16, 00:55   Link #37396
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Old 2012-12-16, 20:57   Link #37397
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Old 2012-12-16, 23:19   Link #37398
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Old 2012-12-16, 23:53   Link #37399
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Well grammar has always been a problem for me, but I could have sworn that ranks and titles were an exception to the number rule, and if it isn't it is for me. Caro not calling Erio-kun was simply an embarrassing mistake I can hardly believe I made.

The age is a little up in the air, but I think it is in-between vivid and force maybe fifteen for both of them.

As to the plot, thank you for the complement, I only hope I can keep it up after next chapter
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Old 2012-12-18, 05:19   Link #37400
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I'm planning to write a Kamen Rider x Nanoha fic using Yuuno as the protagonist.
The problem is I can't decide which KR series should I pick...
My three main picks are OOO, Fourze and Wizard.
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