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DLH VII · 2015-01-24, 14:12

I thought of creating an alternate universe where Kamijou Touma does not exist. They would have three cities with equivalent technologies such as present in the academic city and four churches (Russian, Roman and Anglican. The latter would be a Spanish). It would be good to write this?

I even had the idea to create the synopsis. Would be interesting?

Spoiler for Synopsis:

Draco Spirit · 2015-01-24, 18:10

Random topic, but anyone got tips on how to write screams of fear that's interesting?

DLH VII · 2015-01-24, 18:14

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Originally Posted by Draco Spirit

Random topic, but anyone got tips on how to write screams of fear that's interesting?

You can repeat? I did not understand your question.

LevelSeven · 2015-01-25, 05:04

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Originally Posted by DLH VII

I thought of creating an alternate universe where Kamijou Touma does not exist. They would have three cities with equivalent technologies such as present in the academic city and four churches (Russian, Roman and Anglican. The latter would be a Spanish). It would be good to write this?

mmmhhhh :/
it sounds intresting but also like much work :/
i always wanted to use the "world-changing" as basis too

but dropped touma into a world where everyone was born as gemstone and the rare cases existed who had not a single ability... (50 or so people who are able to use magic), and touma finds himself without parents/friends/othinus in that world XD

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I even had the idea to create the synopsis. Would be interesting?

Spoiler for Synopsis:

i would give it a chance

Draco Spirit · 2015-01-25, 06:06

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Originally Posted by DLH VII

You can repeat? I did not understand your question.

You know something better than '"Ahh!" Touma screamed in terror.'

SmokinFerret88 · 2015-01-25, 07:26

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Originally Posted by Draco Spirit

Random topic, but anyone got tips on how to write screams of fear that's interesting?

Huh?

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Originally Posted by Draco Spirit

You know something better than '"Ahh!" Touma screamed in terror.'

Oh, okay, how's this then?

"GAAAAAAH!!!" The abrupt outburst which had erupted from the confines of Kamijou's vocal folds perfectly conveyed the amount of terror in that moment.

Even without taking his visage, any and all who heard it would be right to assume that it went beyond being simply startled; that had been a scream of someone who was legitimately terrified.

Hopefully this example will suffice....though I'm wordy so...yeah. >.>

LevelSeven · 2015-01-25, 08:16

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Originally Posted by SmokinFerret88

"GAAAAAAH!!!" The abrupt outburst which had erupted from the confines of Kamijou's vocal folds perfectly conveyed the amount of terror in that moment.

Even without taking his visage, any and all who heard it would be right to assume that it went beyond being simply startled; that had been a scream of someone who was legitimately terrified.

and now i will copy it and use it everytime i need it, with the exact same words in each situation

Draco Spirit · 2015-01-25, 11:27

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Originally Posted by SmokinFerret88

Huh?

Oh, okay, how's this then?

"GAAAAAAH!!!" The abrupt outburst which had erupted from the confines of Kamijou's vocal folds perfectly conveyed the amount of terror in that moment.

Even without taking his visage, any and all who heard it would be right to assume that it went beyond being simply startled; that had been a scream of someone who was legitimately terrified.

Hopefully this example will suffice....though I'm wordy so...yeah. >.>

Ok, that works >.<

DLH VII · 2015-01-25, 21:08

ATTENTION PEASANTS!!!

Spoiler for Toaru Majutsu no Alternative - Prologue:

NEW CHAPTER!!!

Aaaaaaaaand, explanations.

Spoiler:

Draco Spirit · 2015-01-26, 03:35

Nice start.

DLH VII · 2015-01-28, 12:06

Explanations about the scientific side.

Spoiler for Toaru Majutsu no Alternative - Science Side:

tsunade666 · 2015-01-29, 07:14

Interesting. If possible I would want the story of index be explored more. Specially the adult because I doubt that the graduate experts would be allowed to leave the city with their ability.

I'm thinking of a fic but I just can't solve or think of a good way to crossover champions or dxd to tamni verse. The way the people view the world is just vastly different. The people in Tammi verse won't despair in front of supernatural beings. They would create a spell to kill them but in campione and dxd. The humans are weak. If I can solve or get a good reason to mix it. I'll probably try myself in fan fiction.

demino_hellsin · 2015-01-30, 20:52

Since we have an idea of what IT is with the railgun manga. I'm wondering if it works for double IB on one arm to be one version of IT is inside the right arm and another version of IT is being restrained/wrapped around the right arm.

rubix22 · 2015-02-02, 23:09

Spoiler for :

I knew this would happen sooner or later.

(For reference, see the last chapter of To Aru Super SS II)

tsunade666 · 2015-02-03, 01:16

^image not showing up.

Rising Dragon · 2015-02-03, 04:51

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I knew this would happen sooner or later.

(For reference, see the last chapter of To Aru Super SS II)

You can't hotlink from Pixiv.

rubix22 · 2015-02-03, 22:42

Aw phooey.

Spoiler for :

LevelSeven · 2015-02-04, 03:47

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Aw phooey.

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what is that for a thing in umidoris mouth

a dildo? no no no, dont think such stuff, worst isnt such a bad girl *shudder*

TkMacintosh · 2015-02-04, 08:33

I'm guessing it's a Sushi Roll

Loremaster · 2015-02-07, 03:14

Finally completed the A Certain series about my version of the Sixth ranked level five.

In order of timeline.

A Certain hidden past (Side story collection of past events)
A Certain Sixth Incident (Prequel)
A Certain Hidden Level Five (Book 1)
A Certain Hotspring Adventure (Side Story)
A Certain British Intervention (Book 2)
A Certain Story so far (Series Catch up)
A Certain Project Imperator (Book 3)

You can find them all on here.
https://www.fanfiction.net/u/4860627/LoremasterEolas

The series' main story is over, but I always intend to write an aftermath of the main series events. So you can consider apart of this series or not. But my upcoming story, The Legacy of Number Six. Will be started soon.

Spent over a year on this series and finally to see the main story completed is surreal. Honestly didn't think I'll ever finish it.

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DLH VII Itsuka Kotori's Hater Join Date: Nov 2014 Location: Brazil	I thought of creating an alternate universe where Kamijou Touma does not exist. They would have three cities with equivalent technologies such as present in the academic city and four churches (Russian, Roman and Anglican. The latter would be a Spanish). It would be good to write this? I even had the idea to create the synopsis. Would be interesting? Spoiler for Synopsis: In one of the creations of Othinus, there is a universe where the host of Imagine Breaker is not Kamijou Touma. Three big cities, four churches. How could be a world where Kamijou does not exist and another host is responsible for one of the main cities of the scientific world? __________________

2015-01-25, 21:08	Link #7089
DLH VII Itsuka Kotori's Hater Join Date: Nov 2014 Location: Brazil	ATTENTION PEASANTS!!! Spoiler for Toaru Majutsu no Alternative - Prologue: Prologue. No_Imagine_Breaker. [???] "Aleister Crowley. Long time no see." That robotic voice came from a light hall, where windows focused all the lights on the ground. It was a medieval hall, with pillars and brightening candles. At the end of the hall, there was a coffin representing a seated man. Inside the coffin, there was a certain man. Two holographic screens appear in front of that coffin. People shown by the holograms are Aleister Crowley and an unknown girl, the only one of two that were not maintained by machines. You could see a white blur in front of this girl. "Reige, I believe that its meeting is unnecessary." "Aleister's right. But before you decide something, say the reason for this meeting." The two voices were authoritarian, but nothing that would make the man in the coffin tense. He keeps talking to them, even when completely covered by a coffin. Reige went straight, trying to explain in a simple and not complex form for the two directors. "We are the only humans who had contact with Awaiss, right? He once told us about the existence of a magical god, is not it?" Reige sighs, before summarizing all in a serious tone. "Awaiss told me that our world is not the original." The two directors look with some tension to the man in the coffin. They were at strategic points, designed to cause the three mages to survive. Aleister gives a smile as the girl gives a chuckle. Reige decides to give a hint to the directors. "How about we use our influence to create a large project? If our world is not original, we can use this 'draft' to our plans." Aleister gives another smile, and the girl starts laughing. Reige continues by suggesting, so that the other directors could understand. They somehow had influence on the countries where they were. Kirie had influence in Europe, Reige had influences in the Caribs. Aleister already established in Japan and somehow have contact with many influential politicians. "We will betray the magic, we will use the science, we will become the new gods of this incomplete world. Artificial Earth, ASC Metropole and Academy City. The martyr of the Unova Project!" With the end of the speech, the holograms are turned off. Reige looked through the coffin dark circles, there existed a glass that allowed him to see the outside world. The man's left eye was watering, but the expression was not sad. It was with joy. NEW CHAPTER!!! Aaaaaaaaand, explanations. Spoiler: DLH here! I did a chapter trying to explain the beginning. I based myself in several works. I will not quote here for security measures. My best idea was to create another type of Aleister Crowley, placed in a coffin full of modern wiring, electronic gear and accessories. I relied on two characters with the same name. Cain from Xenogears and Strike the Blood. As you can see, Awaiss warned that this world was not original. It would be a reference to a certain magical god? I wanted to create an explanation from behind the creation of three cities based entirely on creating Espers / Gemstones. In the near future, I dream about extending the Unova Project. That's all! Eating Biscuits __________________

2015-01-28, 12:06	Link #7091
DLH VII Itsuka Kotori's Hater Join Date: Nov 2014 Location: Brazil	Explanations about the scientific side. Spoiler for Toaru Majutsu no Alternative - Science Side: Science Side The most prevalent side of the world, with more than 5 billion believers. The decreasing number of Abrahamic religions have led to the belief in science to become one of the most popular beliefs of the time. With the effort of the three cities, almost 80% of the Abrahamic religions are at risk of extinction. Even with 80% of complete extinction, there are still religious powers with equivalent strength the Roman Catholic Church. - ASC Metropole - One of the three main scientific cities. ASC Metropole works in the natural development of Gemstones, using technologies based on meditation and brain stimulation. 80% of the students of this city are considered Gemstones, while a small portion of 20% of the students are Espers. The city was built in the European metropolitan area (between spain, france and italy), having the same base of Academic City. The presidential director of the city is Kirie Karleruski, a German-Irish magician. - Academic City - The main town of the scientific side. Academic City works in the forced development of Espers, with different technologies to work in several areas of development. 60% of the inhabitants of this city are students, while 40% are scientists or even common people, such as teachers or parents. Academy City is at the heart of the economic region of Tokyo, covering some 80% of this region. The superintendent of the city is Aleister Crowley, the biggest magician of all time. - Artificial Earth - The most advanced city of three. Artificial Earth works in the immediate development of Espers skills, using an artificial alternative reality to force the immediate creation of these skills. Unlike the other two cities, this is the one where only 20% of its inhabitants are students, while 80% are civilians or even scientists and teachers. It is in the Amazon region, covering 40% of the area. The superintendent of the city is Reige Cruserfarl, an unknown magician. __________________

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tsunade666 Senior Member Join Date: Mar 2009 Location: In my room	Interesting. If possible I would want the story of index be explored more. Specially the adult because I doubt that the graduate experts would be allowed to leave the city with their ability. I'm thinking of a fic but I just can't solve or think of a good way to crossover champions or dxd to tamni verse. The way the people view the world is just vastly different. The people in Tammi verse won't despair in front of supernatural beings. They would create a spell to kill them but in campione and dxd. The humans are weak. If I can solve or get a good reason to mix it. I'll probably try myself in fan fiction. __________________ To A certain Lonely Hero

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rubix22 On Cleaning Duty Join Date: Jun 2011	Spoiler for : I knew this would happen sooner or later. (For reference, see the last chapter of To Aru Super SS II) __________________

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Draco Spirit Senior Member Join Date: Jun 2013	Random topic, but anyone got tips on how to write screams of fear that's interesting?

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Draco Spirit Senior Member Join Date: Jun 2013	Nice start.

2015-01-30, 20:52	Link #7093
demino_hellsin That one guy Join Date: Nov 2011	Since we have an idea of what IT is with the railgun manga. I'm wondering if it works for double IB on one arm to be one version of IT is inside the right arm and another version of IT is being restrained/wrapped around the right arm.

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tsunade666 Senior Member Join Date: Mar 2009 Location: In my room	^image not showing up. __________________ To A certain Lonely Hero

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rubix22 On Cleaning Duty Join Date: Jun 2011	Aw phooey. Spoiler for : __________________

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TkMacintosh Senior Member Join Date: Mar 2010	I'm guessing it's a Sushi Roll

2015-02-07, 03:14	Link #7100
Loremaster He who writes too much. Join Date: Jul 2013 Location: United Kingdom Age: 32	Finally completed the A Certain series about my version of the Sixth ranked level five. In order of timeline. A Certain hidden past (Side story collection of past events) A Certain Sixth Incident (Prequel) A Certain Hidden Level Five (Book 1) A Certain Hotspring Adventure (Side Story) A Certain British Intervention (Book 2) A Certain Story so far (Series Catch up) A Certain Project Imperator (Book 3) You can find them all on here. https://www.fanfiction.net/u/4860627/LoremasterEolas The series' main story is over, but I always intend to write an aftermath of the main series events. So you can consider apart of this series or not. But my upcoming story, The Legacy of Number Six. Will be started soon. Spent over a year on this series and finally to see the main story completed is surreal. Honestly didn't think I'll ever finish it.