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demino_hellsin · 2012-06-16, 07:00

the beating or the handing? O.o

ZeroXSEED · 2012-06-16, 07:22

I mean "not to do" list, specifically handling the v-card (though it'll be a good plot for trollfic/ B-porn), the beating is necessary sometimes, though it applies to everyone male or female.

agetreme · 2012-06-16, 07:24

Yea.... Any idea of an average person is technically correct, since because this world is filled with different people afterall....

=

I have an idea about new Male lead....

Spoiler for New ideas:

wavehawk · 2012-06-16, 07:38

"To give the person you love their dream...

...what are you willing to become?"

As FYI, I've had a lot of tough stuff lately with moving house and a lot of serious disasters. Am in the midst of re-brainstormign my <Ren> fics fromt he ground up, so you may hear from me again on this.

...not that anyone gives a rats.

demino_hellsin · 2012-06-16, 07:39

first guy: smart idiot who is still an idiot at the end. (I don't mean idiot in a bad way.)

second guy: =)) sounds vaguely familiar.

@wavehawk: quote of the day for me:

"There are times that a man must cry. When he loses his wallet, or when he's dumped by a girl. But what do you do when you find out your girlfriend is slime!?"

EDIT: @wave again: Nah, the people that especially care just aren't here yet. You sound cool though. Hope to have a drink with you someday.

agetreme · 2012-06-16, 07:46

Should I change Anemo's name to Nemo instead?

Because the pet name of Anemo is.....going to be Ane-go....

(A)Nemo is an idiot and proud to be one.... (since female like to insult men as idiot.... to be an idiot is being acknowledge by females as a real man.)

Joan is the same person but this time with a big Dream

Edit:
@Wavehawk: Good luck with your life..... sounds kind of bad...so..... can't blame you for lack of updates...

demino_hellsin · 2012-06-16, 07:54

Indeed, some idiots I don't like. But there are just those idiots you can't help but chuckle at and take the ride to hell with them.

Well I can't say much on the nickname. I'm going to call Chifuyu Chief-chan(Chifu-chan).

So extremely hopeful?

HasuMasu · 2012-06-16, 08:20

Quote:

Originally Posted by wavehawk

"To give the person you love their dream...

...what are you willing to become?"

As FYI, I've had a lot of tough stuff lately with moving house and a lot of serious disasters. Am in the midst of re-brainstormign my <Ren> fics fromt he ground up, so you may hear from me again on this.

...not that anyone gives a rats.

Asdfghjkl more <Ren>? Somebody fund this.

demino_hellsin · 2012-06-16, 10:08

Did Ichika seem too pitiful in the scene I posted a page ago?

Eratas123 · 2012-06-16, 11:04

I really don't envy Ichika since "Hand over their V card" translates to "Permission to beat the crap out of him when he doesn't do things exactly how they want". Seriously, if he makes a choice, the other 4 are going to start beating him up till he says "Oh wait, I made my choice too fast. Let me choose again." Repeat ad infinitum whenever he tries to get into a relationship with another girl. It's literally impossible for him to move forward. The others won't let him>_>

I'd rather work for a girl and have a stable relationship than have their affections placed on me and apparently give them permission to abuse me.

demino_hellsin · 2012-06-16, 11:14

Well nothing comes for free

so is my version of Ichika worse than canon?

Eratas123 · 2012-06-16, 11:31

Let me save some time: The only way he could possibly be worse is if you make him Natsuru Senou version 2.0

demino_hellsin · 2012-06-16, 11:58

I have no idea who that is... but it sounds pretty bad

Eratas123 · 2012-06-16, 13:01

The literal definition of Useless protagonist. His reason for liking a girl is "Is there I reason I should like her?'. *Facepalm* The only thing worse than that is that he literally does nothing for the plot: You can take him out of the story and literally nothing major would change.

ZeroXSEED · 2012-06-16, 17:36

BTW, apparently there's no enough Non Action guy/Minor Badass, so I make Tsuda, Saruyama, and Charles one. Oh, and Non-action girls as well, but that goes without saying.

Tsuda is the lead, being a teacher and all, not so much weak as he already left action lifestyle of cadet rep for years, makes it up for being an experienced mentor figure. Charles lack actual Cadet rep training, he became resident manipulative chessmaster instead. Saruyama FAILED the pilot training, but manages to channel Solid Snake and run with it.

@ Hawke
Seriously? You make a Self Insert, of all things, a high quality literature. I can understand people in FF.net because of the leftover damage by marty stu shitstorm, but here, you are our guide to the light. Also, I can see Box waiting there

Eratas123 · 2012-06-16, 19:11

@ Senpai - By the way, I found a male OC stand in at the Novels

A friend of Dan and Ichika from middle school who hangs out with Dan at times

Lucky coincidence his name was the same.

ZeroXSEED · 2012-06-16, 19:37

Eh, you already tell me that, but it was long ago so I forgot the name, who is he and where did he appear?

Eratas123 · 2012-06-16, 19:47

Mitarazashi, I think. Sorry, I'm a bit dstracted right now. Meeting my Dad for father's day....sure you know why.

ZeroXSEED · 2012-06-16, 20:02

Oh yes, I'll go check it myself.

Eratas123 · 2012-06-16, 20:07

Volume 5, just before Dan gets invited by Ichika to the festival. It's a flashback or exposition, I think.

Side note - Something to add: Having a nice guy protagonist isn't bad. Having a nice guy protagonist when the girls are borderline abusive, on the other hand, just makes him look like a tard.

2012-06-16, 07:22	Link #32422
ZeroXSEED I am no one Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: Inside your head	I mean "not to do" list, specifically handling the v-card (though it'll be a good plot for trollfic/ B-porn), the beating is necessary sometimes, though it applies to everyone male or female. __________________

2012-06-16, 07:24	Link #32423
agetreme Just another Idiot Join Date: Sep 2009 Location: Delusion world	Yea.... Any idea of an average person is technically correct, since because this world is filled with different people afterall.... = I have an idea about new Male lead.... Spoiler for New ideas: "I AM ONLY HERE BECAUSE I WANTED A GIRL FRIEND!" Anemo Machin > He is technically not a pilot but control an machine (Recycled Dream Catcher idea) >End up being sent into ISA....because of a rigged machine which Tabane actually rigged for Ichika..... >Can't actually pilot one..... > a (edit: High level) pervert who like peeking at girls but will never hurt one physically (a Chivalrous Pervert) > Mecha Otaku (to give him the creepy status.... just in case the above is not enough) > Hot blooded and big ham (to make him appear manly?!) > No girl friend (hence the above statement) > Don't mind people who is into 2d girls because.... love has no boundary?! >Has a friend who is into 2d girls (up creepy factor, 3rd is a charm after all) > Do In the Name of the Moon (in Noboru(akibaranger) style) before every battle but is actually a failed/backfired attempt at badass creed (edit: Make him sounded like a loser.... 4th is death). > Smarter than he look or acted.... (He always has a backup plan....the problem is: Backup plan back fire almost of the time...) > Plotted to: Get kicked out of ISA.... for being a man so that others will not beat him up.... for not acting like a man. ==== Joan (the same one) > Girly guy > So girly, that even IS machine think he is a girl. > Bulky power-type machine > IS machine > Defense type > Wanted to be an actor but forced into ISA. > Plotted to get kick out of ISA to go back into acting. __________________ Ara Han

2012-06-16, 07:38	Link #32424
wavehawk Some say I'm the Reverse Join Date: Jul 2006	"To give the person you love their dream... ...what are you willing to become?" As FYI, I've had a lot of tough stuff lately with moving house and a lot of serious disasters. Am in the midst of re-brainstormign my <Ren> fics fromt he ground up, so you may hear from me again on this. ...not that anyone gives a rats. __________________ "We haven't been properly introduced..."

2012-06-16, 07:46	Link #32426
agetreme Just another Idiot Join Date: Sep 2009 Location: Delusion world	Should I change Anemo's name to Nemo instead? Because the pet name of Anemo is.....going to be Ane-go.... (A)Nemo is an idiot and proud to be one.... (since female like to insult men as idiot.... to be an idiot is being acknowledge by females as a real man.) Joan is the same person but this time with a big Dream Edit: @Wavehawk: Good luck with your life..... sounds kind of bad...so..... can't blame you for lack of updates... __________________ Ara Han

2012-06-16, 11:04	Link #32430
Eratas123 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2011	I really don't envy Ichika since "Hand over their V card" translates to "Permission to beat the crap out of him when he doesn't do things exactly how they want". Seriously, if he makes a choice, the other 4 are going to start beating him up till he says "Oh wait, I made my choice too fast. Let me choose again." Repeat ad infinitum whenever he tries to get into a relationship with another girl. It's literally impossible for him to move forward. The others won't let him>_> I'd rather work for a girl and have a stable relationship than have their affections placed on me and apparently give them permission to abuse me. __________________

2012-06-16, 07:00	Link #32421
demino_hellsin That one guy Join Date: Nov 2011	the beating or the handing? O.o

2012-06-16, 07:39	Link #32425
demino_hellsin That one guy Join Date: Nov 2011	first guy: smart idiot who is still an idiot at the end. (I don't mean idiot in a bad way.) second guy: =)) sounds vaguely familiar. @wavehawk: quote of the day for me: "There are times that a man must cry. When he loses his wallet, or when he's dumped by a girl. But what do you do when you find out your girlfriend is slime!?" EDIT: @wave again: Nah, the people that especially care just aren't here yet. You sound cool though. Hope to have a drink with you someday.

2012-06-16, 07:54	Link #32427
demino_hellsin That one guy Join Date: Nov 2011	Indeed, some idiots I don't like. But there are just those idiots you can't help but chuckle at and take the ride to hell with them. Well I can't say much on the nickname. I'm going to call Chifuyu Chief-chan(Chifu-chan). So extremely hopeful?

2012-06-16, 10:08	Link #32429
demino_hellsin That one guy Join Date: Nov 2011	Did Ichika seem too pitiful in the scene I posted a page ago?

2012-06-16, 11:14	Link #32431
demino_hellsin That one guy Join Date: Nov 2011	Well nothing comes for free so is my version of Ichika worse than canon?

2012-06-16, 11:31	Link #32432
Eratas123 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2011	Let me save some time: The only way he could possibly be worse is if you make him Natsuru Senou version 2.0 __________________

2012-06-16, 11:58	Link #32433
demino_hellsin That one guy Join Date: Nov 2011	I have no idea who that is... but it sounds pretty bad

2012-06-16, 13:01	Link #32434
Eratas123 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2011	The literal definition of Useless protagonist. His reason for liking a girl is "Is there I reason I should like her?'. Facepalm The only thing worse than that is that he literally does nothing for the plot: You can take him out of the story and literally nothing major would change. __________________

2012-06-16, 17:36	Link #32435
ZeroXSEED I am no one Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: Inside your head	BTW, apparently there's no enough Non Action guy/Minor Badass, so I make Tsuda, Saruyama, and Charles one. Oh, and Non-action girls as well, but that goes without saying. Tsuda is the lead, being a teacher and all, not so much weak as he already left action lifestyle of cadet rep for years, makes it up for being an experienced mentor figure. Charles lack actual Cadet rep training, he became resident manipulative chessmaster instead. Saruyama FAILED the pilot training, but manages to channel Solid Snake and run with it. @ Hawke Seriously? You make a Self Insert, of all things, a high quality literature. I can understand people in FF.net because of the leftover damage by marty stu shitstorm, but here, you are our guide to the light. Also, I can see Box waiting there __________________ Last edited by ZeroXSEED; 2012-06-16 at 19:01.

2012-06-16, 19:11	Link #32436
Eratas123 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2011	@ Senpai - By the way, I found a male OC stand in at the Novels A friend of Dan and Ichika from middle school who hangs out with Dan at times Lucky coincidence his name was the same. __________________

2012-06-16, 19:37	Link #32437
ZeroXSEED I am no one Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: Inside your head	Eh, you already tell me that, but it was long ago so I forgot the name, who is he and where did he appear? __________________

2012-06-16, 19:47	Link #32438
Eratas123 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2011	Mitarazashi, I think. Sorry, I'm a bit dstracted right now. Meeting my Dad for father's day....sure you know why. __________________

2012-06-16, 20:02	Link #32439
ZeroXSEED I am no one Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: Inside your head	Oh yes, I'll go check it myself. __________________

2012-06-16, 20:07	Link #32440
Eratas123 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2011	Volume 5, just before Dan gets invited by Ichika to the festival. It's a flashback or exposition, I think. Side note - Something to add: Having a nice guy protagonist isn't bad. Having a nice guy protagonist when the girls are borderline abusive, on the other hand, just makes him look like a tard. __________________