Nanoha FanFiction Discussion

[Satashi]

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Spoiler for T_T:

She wore the ring everywhere. When she was at work, under he armored glove while in her barrier jacket, even during showers. The simple golden band stayed on her finger always.

Fate T. Takamachi, adopted mother of Vivio T. Takamachi was crying her eyes out the first night her daughter was officially moved into her college apartment. The house they stayed in seemed so much larger now, and the annoying sounds of her teen's music and games blaring from the room were sorely missed. Now she had silence, and she hated it.

Gently she reached to her bedside and picked up the last taken picture of Nanoha, her lost lover. Killed in Action, passed in her arms, always smiling. "Nanoha," She whispered horsely as a tear fell onto the frame. "I miss you... I'm so lonely..." Pulling it to her chest, she sobbed out again and hugged herself. "Nanoha..."

The ring on her finger reflected in the light as she cried, but was soon covered by a gentle hand. The matching ring shone brightly as sparkling feathers that no one could see fell onto the large bed. Takamachi Nanoha slowly embraced Fate from behind, resting her cheek against the blond hair of her still living lover. "Don't cry, Fate-chan." She whispered gently. "I'm always with you, just look inside your heart." With those words, Fate's crying slowed and Nanoha kissed her wife's hair. "I love you, Fate-chan. Stay strong." Her white wings flapped once as she moved back towards the sky. "And I always will."

[NorthernFallout]

Originally Posted by Satashi

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Spoiler for T_T:

She wore the ring everywhere. When she was at work, under he armored glove while in her barrier jacket, even during showers. The simple golden band stayed on her finger always.

Fate T. Takamachi, adopted mother of Vivio T. Takamachi was crying her eyes out the first night her daughter was officially moved into her college apartment. The house they stayed in seemed so much larger now, and the annoying sounds of her teen's music and games blaring from the room were sorely missed. Now she had silence, and she hated it.

Gently she reached to her bedside and picked up the last taken picture of Nanoha, her lost lover. Killed in Action, passed in her arms, always smiling. "Nanoha," She whispered horsely as a tear fell onto the frame. "I miss you... I'm so lonely..." Pulling it to her chest, she sobbed out again and hugged herself. "Nanoha..."

The ring on her finger reflected in the light as she cried, but was soon covered by a gentle hand. The matching ring shone brightly as sparkling feathers that no one could see fell onto the large bed. Takamachi Nanoha slowly embraced Fate from behind, resting her cheek against the blond hair of her still living lover. "Don't cry, Fate-chan." She whispered gently. "I'm always with you, just look inside your heart." With those words, Fate's crying slowed and Nanoha kissed her wife's hair. "I love you, Fate-chan. Stay strong." Her white wings flapped once as she moved back towards the sky. "And I always will."

Sheesh, you don't have to make me cry T_T
Godly written.

[Plain Crackers]

Originally Posted by Satashi

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Spoiler for T_T:

She wore the ring everywhere. When she was at work, under he armored glove while in her barrier jacket, even during showers. The simple golden band stayed on her finger always.

Fate T. Takamachi, adopted mother of Vivio T. Takamachi was crying her eyes out the first night her daughter was officially moved into her college apartment. The house they stayed in seemed so much larger now, and the annoying sounds of her teen's music and games blaring from the room were sorely missed. Now she had silence, and she hated it.

Gently she reached to her bedside and picked up the last taken picture of Nanoha, her lost lover. Killed in Action, passed in her arms, always smiling. "Nanoha," She whispered horsely as a tear fell onto the frame. "I miss you... I'm so lonely..." Pulling it to her chest, she sobbed out again and hugged herself. "Nanoha..."

The ring on her finger reflected in the light as she cried, but was soon covered by a gentle hand. The matching ring shone brightly as sparkling feathers that no one could see fell onto the large bed. Takamachi Nanoha slowly embraced Fate from behind, resting her cheek against the blond hair of her still living lover. "Don't cry, Fate-chan." She whispered gently. "I'm always with you, just look inside your heart." With those words, Fate's crying slowed and Nanoha kissed her wife's hair. "I love you, Fate-chan. Stay strong." Her white wings flapped once as she moved back towards the sky. "And I always will."

Grabs a tissue. *sniff*

[Black_Wolf]

Originally Posted by Satashi

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Spoiler for T_T:

She wore the ring everywhere. When she was at work, under he armored glove while in her barrier jacket, even during showers. The simple golden band stayed on her finger always.

Fate T. Takamachi, adopted mother of Vivio T. Takamachi was crying her eyes out the first night her daughter was officially moved into her college apartment. The house they stayed in seemed so much larger now, and the annoying sounds of her teen's music and games blaring from the room were sorely missed. Now she had silence, and she hated it.

Gently she reached to her bedside and picked up the last taken picture of Nanoha, her lost lover. Killed in Action, passed in her arms, always smiling. "Nanoha," She whispered horsely as a tear fell onto the frame. "I miss you... I'm so lonely..." Pulling it to her chest, she sobbed out again and hugged herself. "Nanoha..."

The ring on her finger reflected in the light as she cried, but was soon covered by a gentle hand. The matching ring shone brightly as sparkling feathers that no one could see fell onto the large bed. Takamachi Nanoha slowly embraced Fate from behind, resting her cheek against the blond hair of her still living lover. "Don't cry, Fate-chan." She whispered gently. "I'm always with you, just look inside your heart." With those words, Fate's crying slowed and Nanoha kissed her wife's hair. "I love you, Fate-chan. Stay strong." Her white wings flapped once as she moved back towards the sky. "And I always will."

O_O
Ok i come to the thread for more happy stuff and im hit in the face with the frying pan of angst! XD

Nice piece of writing, it really got the feelings across, i felt so sad for Fate, i know it was supposed to be a kind of, "its not so bad" ending but it still nearly made me cry.

Must....not......cry, MUST remain strong! gah!

[nictory]

Originally Posted by Satashi

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Spoiler for T_T:

She wore the ring everywhere. When she was at work, under he armored glove while in her barrier jacket, even during showers. The simple golden band stayed on her finger always.

Fate T. Takamachi, adopted mother of Vivio T. Takamachi was crying her eyes out the first night her daughter was officially moved into her college apartment. The house they stayed in seemed so much larger now, and the annoying sounds of her teen's music and games blaring from the room were sorely missed. Now she had silence, and she hated it.

Gently she reached to her bedside and picked up the last taken picture of Nanoha, her lost lover. Killed in Action, passed in her arms, always smiling. "Nanoha," She whispered horsely as a tear fell onto the frame. "I miss you... I'm so lonely..." Pulling it to her chest, she sobbed out again and hugged herself. "Nanoha..."

The ring on her finger reflected in the light as she cried, but was soon covered by a gentle hand. The matching ring shone brightly as sparkling feathers that no one could see fell onto the large bed. Takamachi Nanoha slowly embraced Fate from behind, resting her cheek against the blond hair of her still living lover. "Don't cry, Fate-chan." She whispered gently. "I'm always with you, just look inside your heart." With those words, Fate's crying slowed and Nanoha kissed her wife's hair. "I love you, Fate-chan. Stay strong." Her white wings flapped once as she moved back towards the sky. "And I always will."

*sniff* so sad... *runs away crying*

[Kha]

Originally Posted by Satashi

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Spoiler for T_T:

She wore the ring everywhere. When she was at work, under he armored glove while in her barrier jacket, even during showers. The simple golden band stayed on her finger always.

Fate T. Takamachi, adopted mother of Vivio T. Takamachi was crying her eyes out the first night her daughter was officially moved into her college apartment. The house they stayed in seemed so much larger now, and the annoying sounds of her teen's music and games blaring from the room were sorely missed. Now she had silence, and she hated it.

Gently she reached to her bedside and picked up the last taken picture of Nanoha, her lost lover. Killed in Action, passed in her arms, always smiling. "Nanoha," She whispered horsely as a tear fell onto the frame. "I miss you... I'm so lonely..." Pulling it to her chest, she sobbed out again and hugged herself. "Nanoha..."

The ring on her finger reflected in the light as she cried, but was soon covered by a gentle hand. The matching ring shone brightly as sparkling feathers that no one could see fell onto the large bed. Takamachi Nanoha slowly embraced Fate from behind, resting her cheek against the blond hair of her still living lover. "Don't cry, Fate-chan." She whispered gently. "I'm always with you, just look inside your heart." With those words, Fate's crying slowed and Nanoha kissed her wife's hair. "I love you, Fate-chan. Stay strong." Her white wings flapped once as she moved back towards the sky. "And I always will."

...!

Is this the epic revival of the epic Nightcrack, Twist's Fate ~Nanoha Must Die~?!

[Advent000]

Originally Posted by Satashi

Vampire!Fate: Creation pt.1

http://www.mediaminer.org/fanfic/vie...154454/539590/

Vampire!Fate. The Vampire's past finally revealed!

( please don't let this leak out top anyone other than AS members, as FF.N hasn't made it there yet.)

Edit:

Pages: 6 | Words: 8716 | Size: 53 KB

@_@ 8,716 words......wtf!

Anyway, please post all comments adn stuff here so I can see them easier ^_^ Enjoy~

<3 Angel. Thanks for all the help!

That was fun.

Nice to see that Fate wasn't always so smart.

Originally Posted by Satashi

One thing that Access always told me was to think before you act, to always be two steps ahead of your opponent. I never understood his words in the depth that he could say them. I had just assumed I was stronger than everyone else, better because I was a vampire. Fin had trained me constantly for years, and Access also taught me things that humans could only dream about. They day, so long ago, was the first time I lost my fangs. It was a hard lesson, but one that I needed. Access began training me anew and each day was a struggle. We used our combined knowledge to infiltrate the paladin stronghold and walked among them as members. I claimed to be sent from their god and used my abilities to slay countless demons in front of them without remorse. Access was passed off as my enslaved, a way to communicate with the devils so I could hunt more. Of course, the king accepted me. Why wouldn't he? I was enlisted as a paladin and went by the name Joan of Arc. Years passed and my fangs regrew. No matter how much I filed them down, the became pointed again. People were starting to notice and it was only a matter of time before the already shaky outlook on me keeping a demon prisoner turned against me. I had risen in fame too quickly, had thirst for knowledge too much. The Paladins that I infiltrated demanded that I kill Access and enslave another demon to prove my loyalty...

Vampire!Fate: Creation II
By: Satashi

Looking forward to it.

[Keroko]

Originally Posted by Satashi

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Spoiler for T_T:

She wore the ring everywhere. When she was at work, under he armored glove while in her barrier jacket, even during showers. The simple golden band stayed on her finger always.

Fate T. Takamachi, adopted mother of Vivio T. Takamachi was crying her eyes out the first night her daughter was officially moved into her college apartment. The house they stayed in seemed so much larger now, and the annoying sounds of her teen's music and games blaring from the room were sorely missed. Now she had silence, and she hated it.

Gently she reached to her bedside and picked up the last taken picture of Nanoha, her lost lover. Killed in Action, passed in her arms, always smiling. "Nanoha," She whispered horsely as a tear fell onto the frame. "I miss you... I'm so lonely..." Pulling it to her chest, she sobbed out again and hugged herself. "Nanoha..."

The ring on her finger reflected in the light as she cried, but was soon covered by a gentle hand. The matching ring shone brightly as sparkling feathers that no one could see fell onto the large bed. Takamachi Nanoha slowly embraced Fate from behind, resting her cheek against the blond hair of her still living lover. "Don't cry, Fate-chan." She whispered gently. "I'm always with you, just look inside your heart." With those words, Fate's crying slowed and Nanoha kissed her wife's hair. "I love you, Fate-chan. Stay strong." Her white wings flapped once as she moved back towards the sky. "And I always will."

... Oh great, and I'm about to eat dinner too. Now I hav to explain these tears. T_T something happened to put you in that mood, Satashi?

[krisslanza]

Originally Posted by Keroko

... Oh great, and I'm about to eat dinner too. Now I hav to explain these tears. T_T something happened to put you in that mood, Satashi?

Say you were doing totally manly things and those tears are actually just MANLY TEARS OF AWESOME.

Don't say you cried from reading such a sad short T_T

[Keroko]

No, I did cry from such a sad short. It was sad, and I'm a sucker for drama. T_T

Gah, now I feel like playing Clannad again.

[Satashi]

Originally Posted by Kha

...!

Is this the epic revival of the epic Nightcrack, Twist's Fate ~Nanoha Must Die~?!

huh? @_@

Originally Posted by Keroko

T_T something happened to put you in that mood, Satashi?

I just wanted to see if I could write something emotional.

(and I blame Angel for not giving me a goodnight kiss last night : p )

@Thread: *hands tissues* sorry T_T

[krisslanza]

Originally Posted by Satashi

huh? @_@



I just wanted to see if I could write something emotional.

(and I blame Angel for not giving me a goodnight kiss last night : p )

@Thread: *hands tissues* sorry T_T

*Takes tissue* T_T
So sad... So sad...

[Evangelion Xgouki]

>_>

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Spoiler for ;_;:

The sound of clinking glass and metal echoed in the early evening. A grunt followed by more clinking as the large, black bag was hefted into the recycling pile. Silence resumed its hold as the figure stared at the black bag.

Black...like the void.

The void...which is empty.

Empty...like how she felt for so long.

Like the black bag, she tried to fill that emptiness...that void with the substance in those cans and glass bottles. She didn't know why she started. Maybe because it was the easiest and most available way. At first it was easy to forget; to down her sorrows in the fermented fluids. Perhaps that was why she continued...it was all so easy. Day after day she drank. She drank to stop the tears, the memories from overcoming her. Sometimes the tears wouldn't stop...so she drank some more.

A bird flew by overhead. Soaring with its wings spread along the cooling breeze. Oh how she had wished to be free from the pain and fly away like that bird. She had tried to free herself from the mortal pain. Sometimes she couldn't bring herself to do it. Others...were unsuccessful. It was all too easy to blame it on the alcohol. She wasn't thinking straight. She didn't know what she was doing. But it would have all been a lie. Each time she knew what she was doing. She knew what she was getting herself in to. Her thumb unconsciously rubbed along the dull line on her wrist.

The door shut softly behind her as she entered the room. Calm eyes scanned around the room and fell upon a picture frame. It was an old picture, of happier times. Had it not been for those in the picture, she wouldn't be staring at it right now. She had pushed them away, putting on a mask to make them believe that she was alright. But they saw right through it. It was something friends seemed to be good at. She tried to push them away, like she tried to push away the pain. But they wouldn't cave in. No matter how much she screamed, yelled...and hurt them. No matter what she did they persisted and pressed on to get to her. At the time she hated them. Now...she was eternally grateful.

She sat on the bed and stared out the window at the reddish-orange sky. At the time she thought no one could have understood the pain she was going through. Now she realized she was hurting them a lot more...especially Vivio. To have to live with her in that state. To have to watch as she drowned her sorrows in alcohol. To have to watch her degrade day after day.

...to have to try and stop the blood from flowing from her wrists in the bathroom.

A tear fell. Though this was not the same kind of tear she had shed before. This was for her friends, who wouldn't give up on her. Another tear, for Vivio who stayed by her side during her darkest hours and whom she had put through so much.

Light. Her eyes wandered down to the shining object on her lap. Through all of it, it never left her finger. Even now it adorned her finger, but not as a painful reminder of what she had lost. It was a reminder of what she has to live for. The feelings were still there, that urge to join her love and hold her in her arms once again. The time would come, just not now. She couldn't go to her life this. After everything her friends had done her her, after what they helped her to come to realize, she could wait. She would live on. Then, maybe she could redeem herself for what she had done out of selfishness. She would live a full life...for the both of them. Her eyes looked out at the golden sunset. After all, what was a lifetime compared to an eternity?

"Wait for just a little longer, Fate-chan."

[Evil Rick]

Now everybody is writing sad fics?

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I join then

Spoiler for Painful Choise:

Fate didn't know what to do, she had never faced a enemy like that, the strange sorcerer don't only beated her and Nanoha, but also had captured Vivio

"It's your choice Fate" He said under the black cap who was covering him

"Nanoha or Vivio? Wich one you want to save? One of they will die, but I'll give you the choice of save the other... Wich one?"

"You can't... you can't force me to..."

"Choice! If you don't I will kill them both!" Nanoha and Vivio were floting unconsius inside that strange purple bubble

"CHOICE!!!" The sorcerer comanded once more to Fate

Fate was shaking and cring. Wich one to save? Her beloved one or her little child?

"NOW!!!" Screamed the sorcerer

"I... I..."
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Which one you should choice?

A) Nanoha
B) Vivio

[Alouscrie]

I've noticed that 90% of the stories where one or the other has died leave Fate as the survivor. It's a strange phenomenon.

I know that when I tried to write a story like that, it was going to be Nanoha who survived....until paragraph 3, when suddenly my hand wrote her to her grave.

Loving the angst. A bunch of very good, touching shorts here.

[Thesinwithin]

Okay guys... you keep making me cry. STOP KILLING OFF MY CHARACTERS.

edit; not that they're mine or anything. D:

edit edit; actually, yes, Fate is mine. :P

[Evangelion Xgouki]

Originally Posted by Alouscrie

I've noticed that 90% of the stories where one or the other has died leave Fate as the survivor. It's a strange phenomenon.

I know that when I tried to write a story like that, it was going to be Nanoha who survived....until paragraph 3, when suddenly my hand wrote her to her grave.

Loving the angst. A bunch of very good, touching shorts here.

I think it tends to be the case because most of the time Nanoha succumbs to the injuries she got between A's and StrikerS and/or over-stressing herself from her use of high-powered magical attacks.

[Alouscrie]

Originally Posted by Thesinwithin

Okay guys... you keep making me cry. STOP KILLING OFF MY CHARACTERS.

edit; not that they're mine or anything. D:

But..... but, the angst! And, murder....

Uh-oh.... You just gave me a terrible idea for Higurashi No Naku Koro Ni Nanoha

.....

I need more free time

[Tk3997]

Meh you guys are going to need to try harder if you want to effect me but then my heart is black and ice water runs through my veins so I might not be the ideal barometer.

Originally Posted by Alouscrie

I've noticed that 90% of the stories where one or the other has died leave Fate as the survivor. It's a strange phenomenon.

I know that when I tried to write a story like that, it was going to be Nanoha who survived....until paragraph 3, when suddenly my hand wrote her to her grave.

It really dosen't make sense if you think about it she's acutally acting as an instructor most of the time were as Fate is acutally working active cases which one would tend to assume would entail noticeably more exposure to mortal peril. Part of it could be that I think most writers subconsciously realize that Nanoha might be in a funk for awhile, but is unlikely to brood over it forever. More importantly though let’s face it if Fate’s dead Yunno’s getting Nanoha and the Yuri fans can’t have THAT.

[Evangelion Xgouki]

*stares at the tags*

Alright, who added the "angst Thursday" one?

EDIT:

Page claim in the name of...uh...

*flips through recent activity*

...angst?