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Old 2008-06-23, 15:53   Link #6641
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Chapter 65

Vatican Knights

Spoiler for The last tear:
Poor Vivio, if this keeps up she's gonna snap.

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Spoiler for Vampire!Fate pt.1a (Nanoha):


A.) Nanoha
B.) Fate
So Fate's still against Nanoha becoming a vampire, but their relation ship is progresing.
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Old 2008-06-23, 15:56   Link #6642
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First part of a small, fluffy piece I'm working on.

Spoiler for "Lamaze" is the Magic Word?:

i can't wait to read it, i am looking forward for it.
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Old 2008-06-23, 15:58   Link #6643
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First part of a small, fluffy piece I'm working on.

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Good work on this one. Catching reality are we? Good feeling about that conversation in the car that was so right.
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Old 2008-06-23, 16:00   Link #6644
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@Satashi : I pick B this time ^^
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Old 2008-06-23, 16:49   Link #6645
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I was listening to a song and got some inspiration. So why not make a short around it

Spoiler for Sayonara:
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Old 2008-06-23, 17:02   Link #6646
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Well, this segment is decidedly shorter than the others, but was necessary due to the way I (didn't) plan the story. I'll make it up with the next and intended final segment later this week.

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Spoiler for Vampire!Fate pt.1a (Nanoha):

A.) Nanoha
B.) Fate
I'd like to vote B, if I may.

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Nice, I like it. What is with 5th part? some NSFW stuff?
Hmm... maybe. It's only partially written thus far...

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...Im interested to see what sort of reaction you make Nanoha have. More!!!
Thanks. Yeah, I'm enjoying writing it. I expect some people aren't going to like the ending, while most hopefully will. Hmm...
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Old 2008-06-23, 18:30   Link #6647
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Spoiler for Vampire!Fate pt.1a (Nanoha):

B
Want to see what Fates thoughts are on Nanoha's revelation of love and persistance of possible turning into a vampire.

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@ Black wolf: i just read your fiction, chapter 3 and well.

it's rock, keep going.

i am looking forward for update.
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@B_W and Pink on Blonde: (copy+pastaaa from ff.net)
B_W!!!!! *glomps* Nice fic!!!! X3 What's nice about it is you have managed to make the steamy semi-NSFW aspects of the story work with the more serious parts (Shagnum romance) to make this fic an enjoyable read. Like the crack is there surely but I can still see Shagnum's budding feelings for each other as the main driving force. Eh..whatever am I saying?? *fears that she is speaking incoherently again* I like it very much! *huggles* Oh and chapter 3 didn't even need to have full blown smex to make me blush so hard. *blushes* Ah plus points for that as well for making it steamy with just a few actions and words. *thumbs up* So yayy!!!
Hehe *Grins Stupidly* thanks for that . A lot of people dont like the really submissive Fate, which i can see as its a bit different to the norm. I mean she was just caught being molested by Signum, so i figured she wouldn't have much grounds for putting up a fight against Nanoha. I may drop some hints or snippets in the next chapter of a little Fate payback....

Yeah, to me the chapter felt steamy even though there wasnt really anything strictly said? something about implying it that leaves stuff to the imagination i like more. Plus i dont think i could write stuff, so...detailed XD

Will try and make the next chapter better. I have a few more bits of..........embarrassing and steamy stuff on the way


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And Now I bring you....

The completed prologue.


Magical Girl Lyrical Nanoha RebelS

Prologue
A New Hero, Vivio H. Takamachi, age 15

My God Tss, looks awesome! The device, the bad guys! the mechanical tail! *wants one* the sarcy device made my day "those old timers are boring" ! Looking forward to the continuation of this one! but.............what about MBLZ!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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First part of a small, fluffy piece I'm working on.

Spoiler for "Lamaze" is the Magic Word?:
This was different. Many put Nanoha as the pregnant one so was nice to see the different perspective. Fate was incredibly emotional, maybe a little too much? i dont have much life knowledge of dealing with pregnant women so i cant really say much in that respect. Was a cute scene though, especially the Vivio Vita and Bunny XD are you going to continue?

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Well, this segment is decidedly shorter than the others, but was necessary due to the way I (didn't) plan the story. I'll make it up with the next and intended final segment later this week.

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Thanks. Yeah, I'm enjoying writing it. I expect some people aren't going to like the ending, while most hopefully will. Hmm...
I think i see where your going if your warning about the ending...i sense angst incoming XD and all in time for angst thursday, whose tag was removed

Really good so far though, i thought Nanoha might have clued in on what Fate was saying, but i guess the Kiss would have got the point across, although the last line kind of made me sad....

Think thats everything! gah i need to come on the forum more. damn IRC XD hopefully continue Sigmal, Fatenum some point this week. Currently in middle of moving! XD
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Old 2008-06-23, 19:58   Link #6648
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And Now I bring you....

The completed prologue.


Magical Girl Lyrical Nanoha RebelS

Prologue
A New Hero, Vivio H. Takamachi, age 15
This is going to be a fun ride. Go Shiny Sword! Go! By the way, great name for Vivio's ID.

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This was different. Many put Nanoha as the pregnant one so was nice to see the different perspective. Fate was incredibly emotional, maybe a little too much? i dont have much life knowledge of dealing with pregnant women so i cant really say much in that respect. Was a cute scene though, especially the Vivio Vita and Bunny XD are you going to continue?
Fate's pretty much on par with any pregnant woman you'll meet (or try to avoid) in the third trimester. Nothing fits, constant discomfort, mood swings, swelling, etc...It just sucks for them. Thus, it sucks for their partners as well. Yeah, I'm a little pitbullish when it comes to stories. I'll clamp down and won't release till they're done. However, keep in mind that this one will be as deep as a kiddie pool. Just trying something a bit lighter.
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Old 2008-06-23, 20:45   Link #6649
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I was listening to a song and got some inspiration. So why not make a short around it

Spoiler for Sayonara:
The mood and theme features strongly in this piece. I certainly could feel the ending from the beginning, probably due to the influx of Fate angst lately.

Just one minor comment: It might just be me, but the timing of the song during transition in the middle was rather long, but you had just 1 line. And as the song carried on, the amount of content seems to drop. Could've been more I think...

But other than that, good job! :3

...and Macross Khrack has travelled to fluff.
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Old 2008-06-23, 21:03   Link #6650
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Okay guys, here it is :3

Whoever can get this riddle can ask me for anything (that I can do). Interactive~ Write your answer/guess in a small ficcy format! whoever wins gets a fic from me of their choosing.

Spoiler for Fate's Riddle:


[edit] If you were in the OC chat about a month or so ago when I asked this, you are not eligible to win :3
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Old 2008-06-23, 21:48   Link #6651
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Okay guys, here it is :3

Whoever can get this riddle can ask me for anything (that I can do). Interactive~ Write your answer/guess in a small ficcy format! whoever wins gets a fic from me of their choosing.

Spoiler for Fate's Riddle:


[edit] If you were in the OC chat about a month or so ago when I asked this, you are not eligible to win :3
I know the true answer!
That's a lie

Spoiler for The answer:


In other words... I have no idea
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Old 2008-06-23, 21:57   Link #6652
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I know the true answer!
That's a lie

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In other words... I have no idea
*dies laughing* TSS you're the best!

But you're wrong (though Yuuno's answer was spiffy!)
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Old 2008-06-23, 22:52   Link #6653
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Okay guys, here it is :3

Whoever can get this riddle can ask me for anything (that I can do). Interactive~ Write your answer/guess in a small ficcy format! whoever wins gets a fic from me of their choosing.

Spoiler for Fate's Riddle:

Oh hell, I'll give it a go.

Spoiler for Nanoha's Answer:
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Old 2008-06-23, 23:08   Link #6654
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And Now I bring you....

The completed prologue.


Magical Girl Lyrical Nanoha RebelS

Prologue
A New Hero, Vivio H. Takamachi, age 15
I really really like this one. I'll be looking foward to more of it


Also, um, B for Vampire!Fate
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Old 2008-06-23, 23:13   Link #6655
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Okay guys, here it is :3

Whoever can get this riddle can ask me for anything (that I can do). Interactive~ Write your answer/guess in a small ficcy format! whoever wins gets a fic from me of their choosing.

Spoiler for Fate's Riddle:


[edit] If you were in the OC chat about a month or so ago when I asked this, you are not eligible to win :3
I'll take a whack at it...

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I know the true answer!
That's a lie

Spoiler for The answer:


In other words... I have no idea
Mine is a continuation of Tss and his

Spoiler for Riddle...:


This is hard... I hurt my brain thinking haha
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Old 2008-06-23, 23:38   Link #6656
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B for the Vampire Fate.

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Okay guys, here it is :3

Whoever can get this riddle can ask me for anything (that I can do). Interactive~ Write your answer/guess in a small ficcy format! whoever wins gets a fic from me of their choosing.

Spoiler for Fate's Riddle:


[edit] If you were in the OC chat about a month or so ago when I asked this, you are not eligible to win :3
I felt the need to delurk for this.

Spoiler for answer:
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Old 2008-06-23, 23:50   Link #6657
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I know the true answer!
That's a lie

Spoiler for The answer:


In other words... I have no idea
Signum: Yuuno, what the hell have you been snorting?!

XD lol tss! i lol'd!

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Oh hell, I'll give it a go.

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Now this here is the ultimate win!!! WIN!!! XD XD XD XD very funny ending. moar crackkk!!!!
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Old 2008-06-24, 00:49   Link #6658
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Chapter 66
Vatican Knights

Spoiler for Hate and wrath:
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Old 2008-06-24, 02:11   Link #6659
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Spoiler for Vampire!Fate pt.1a (Nanoha):


A.) Nanoha
B.) Fate
Voting for B.

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Originally Posted by TheShinySword View Post
And Now I bring you....

The completed prologue.


Magical Girl Lyrical Nanoha RebelS

Prologue
A New Hero, Vivio H. Takamachi, age 15

Spoiler for Part 1:


Spoiler for Part 2:


Spoiler for Preview:


Spoiler for Bonus:
Haha, awesome story! I'm liking the start, lots of humour and action too. Vivio's device was pure win.

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Chapter 66
Vatican Knights

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Oh no. Oh no. (what else is there to say?) Things look gruesome!
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Old 2008-06-24, 03:39   Link #6660
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And Now I bring you....

The completed prologue.


Magical Girl Lyrical Nanoha RebelS

Prologue
A New Hero, Vivio H. Takamachi, age 15

Spoiler for Part 1:


Spoiler for Part 2:


Spoiler for Preview:


Spoiler for Bonus:
hahah that was nice TSS... tho Vivio's barrier jacket reminded me if a pick lol XD

Spoiler for Pic Size:


Edit: err... claim for... FOR FFT!! >_>
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