2011-03-31, 14:01 | Link #6885 |
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Well I read the spoilers but actually reading the chapter itself Haruto expression makes it damn funny ^^,
Haruto "I'm not doing all of this for you". I need to look at the Japanese transcribe depending on how heavy the tone would be but Haruto needs to learn to be more tactful. |
2011-03-31, 14:49 | Link #6889 |
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Only good thing about this will be if his friends catch him and slap some shit into him.
God, this is so forced its painful to read. Remember when Eba had a problem and had to leave for a weekend? He went running after her leaving Nanami, the one he was trying to be with at the time, behind. Now your actual GF has problems, and instead of going over with her you decide spend time at your house when you know of the environment. At least try to have the MC think about his options and make a decision rather just try to write an excuse to throw him into that situation. |
2011-03-31, 15:47 | Link #6892 |
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Like that hasn't stopped him before, such as the whole going to Tokyo thing to chase after a girl who dumped him over a letter and didn't return calls.
Plus he doesn't even bring up going with her himself. "Oh, my GF might be going through a hard time at home. Oh well, off to my house for vacation with Eba(my ex) and Rin(my ex's shit disturbing sister) without telling my GF." That is not the thought process of any human being I know of. It's just another poor attempt to keep the plot moving through a 'twist'. |
2011-03-31, 16:06 | Link #6894 |
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Join Date: Jun 2007
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Who cares?
This entire chapter was a joke and I honestly laughed my ass off when it was over with. This is exactly what I want. It's forced, Seo's not even fucking trying, it's trite, god I could just exhaust the thesaurus trying to explain it fifty times over. I'll be watching unfold in a bunker 50 miles away with a pair of binoculars and sunglasses. I expect this shit to end in a mushroom cloud. WHAT EVER WILL YOU DO NOW HARUTO!??????????
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2011-03-31, 16:24 | Link #6897 | |
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You ride that train until it falls off a cliff into a ravine full of sharp pointy rocks surrounded by lava that's situated in front of a sleeping dragon's cave that only be awoken by the sound falling trains hitting sharp pointy rocks that are surrounded by lava.
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2011-03-31, 16:28 | Link #6898 | |
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God I hope the other girls go back home with him to witness this and slap him around a few times. |
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2011-03-31, 16:30 | Link #6899 |
Beautiful fighter.
Join Date: Dec 2005
Location: England, UK
Age: 37
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Hopefully the return home will be the last out of this world we never seen coming twist, so this series can end with Haruto still with Asuka.
But no, it's not going to happen. Asuka will be in tears by chapter 135.
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