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Eratas123 · 2011-11-19, 06:20

@ Zero - Posted Irish's part after your last post. Please read and review before I change it later.

@ Box - Is the song sad or upbeat?

HasuMasu · 2011-11-19, 06:23

Quote:

Originally Posted by Eratas123

@ Zero - Posted Irish's part after your last post. Please read and review before I change it later.

@ Box - Is the song sad or upbeat?

Which one?

Oh, and in case anyone missed it, here's my new one-shot.

BEHOLD

Reviews are ofcourse welcomed as always.

DarkJak2050 · 2011-11-19, 06:25

Left out in the cold as usual...

Eratas123 · 2011-11-19, 06:26

@ Jak - How was I supossed to reply? I'm using a phone so I can't watch youtube.

ZeroXSEED · 2011-11-19, 06:27

Sacred Twins OST :3

OP1: Nami Tamaki -Re_Birth-

OP2: Nami Tamaki -Speedway-

As for ED, I think the original would be suffice.

@Eratas : Nice Interrogation scene...

demino_hellsin · 2011-11-19, 06:27

don't worry jak. At least you have a well accepted fanon.

Eratas123 · 2011-11-19, 06:29

@ Zero - Is that sarcasm? I can't tell since I can't hear your voice but the uh-oh face is kind of implying it.

ZeroXSEED · 2011-11-19, 06:31

^ I meant it's appropriately enough instead of narmtastic

HasuMasu · 2011-11-19, 06:31

No no, Zero doesn't use

for sarcasm, he uses it because that's what his face looks like, if he's being sarcastic he'll use

.

ZeroXSEED · 2011-11-19, 06:33

Quote:

Originally Posted by Detective-san

No no, Zero doesn't use

for sarcasm, he uses it because that's what his face looks like, if he's being sarcastic he'll use

.

Huh?! I thought it's mean for "You know what I mean"

HasuMasu · 2011-11-19, 06:35

Quote:

Originally Posted by ZeroXSEED

Huh?! I thought it's mean for "You know what I mean"

If you hover your mouse over it, it'll give you the meaning.

Eratas123 · 2011-11-19, 06:36

@ Zero - Think I should remove the intro scene at the end? Her ignoring the fact that Irish was being physically attacked might not sit well with readers.

ZeroXSEED · 2011-11-19, 06:37

Quote:

Originally Posted by Detective-san

If you hover your mouse over it, it'll give you the meaning.

My mistake then, I once thought

= serious not mad, Blitz corrected me.

@ Eras: how about Tatenashi told him to stop and introduce herself?

Eratas123 · 2011-11-19, 06:41

@ Zero - Thank you! I'll have to extend the scene to have Irish get beat up more though. Maybe have him struggle with Mactavish for the knife. Then she barges in and stops the fight.

Side note - The original scene was Tatenshi entering the room and Irish tries the same thing like he did with Mactavish. Ends about just as well as you'd expect.

ZeroXSEED · 2011-11-19, 06:45

^ Have Tatenashi told him it's against "Child Protection Act" and she blackmailed him for that. That's how Tatenashi rolls.

Eratas123 · 2011-11-19, 06:48

@ Zero - Cue Irish raging.

Irish: I'm not a kid!

Mactavish: See? He says so himself!

Tatenashi: Quiet please, the adults are talking here.

StratoSpear · 2011-11-19, 06:48

Cue me series of music:

Inami's theme: Innocent Days

Tsurugi's theme: Pure Feelings

Inami and Tsurugi love theme: With You

Jinrai's theme: The Univers

Athena Bouclier OP: Colors of the Heart

Athena Bouclier ED: Anata no Kaze ga Fuku Kara

ZeroXSEED · 2011-11-19, 06:49

Mactavish is a jerkass isn't he, but either way he's boned because Tatenahsi has the footage....

Eratas123 · 2011-11-19, 06:55

@ Zero - Not a jerkass. Just believes that terrorists are terrorists no matter their age. Besides, he was nice enough to keep Joshua alive in the first place. Irish doesn't help his case hy acting like a prick throughout the entire interrogation.

Though Tatenashi saying she has footage would be funny and make Irish wonder what the hell her deal is.

ZeroXSEED · 2011-11-19, 06:58

Then he's an ignorant ass, not a jerk. At least he dedicated to his job.

And yes, that'll be one hell of mood whiplash.

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Eratas123 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2011	@ Zero - Posted Irish's part after your last post. Please read and review before I change it later. @ Box - Is the song sad or upbeat? __________________

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Eratas123 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2011	@ Jak - How was I supossed to reply? I'm using a phone so I can't watch youtube. __________________

2011-11-19, 06:27	Link #8405
ZeroXSEED I am no one Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: Inside your head	Sacred Twins OST :3 OP1: Nami Tamaki -Re_Birth- <p>No iframe support, please <a href="http://youtu.be/QeazcmD8lPM">watch on YouTube</a>.</p> OP2: Nami Tamaki -Speedway- <p>No iframe support, please <a href="http://youtu.be/QeazcmD8lPM">watch on YouTube</a>.</p> As for ED, I think the original would be suffice. @Eratas : Nice Interrogation scene... __________________

2011-11-19, 06:29	Link #8407
Eratas123 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2011	@ Zero - Is that sarcasm? I can't tell since I can't hear your voice but the uh-oh face is kind of implying it. __________________

2011-11-19, 06:31	Link #8408
ZeroXSEED I am no one Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: Inside your head	^ I meant it's appropriately enough instead of narmtastic __________________

2011-11-19, 06:25	Link #8403
DarkJak2050 Senior Member Join Date: Aug 2011	Left out in the cold as usual...

2011-11-19, 06:27	Link #8406
demino_hellsin That one guy Join Date: Nov 2011	don't worry jak. At least you have a well accepted fanon.

2011-11-19, 06:31	Link #8409
HasuMasu Senior Member Artist Join Date: Apr 2011 Location: The Middle Way	No no, Zero doesn't use for sarcasm, he uses it because that's what his face looks like, if he's being sarcastic he'll use . __________________

2011-11-19, 06:36	Link #8412
Eratas123 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2011	@ Zero - Think I should remove the intro scene at the end? Her ignoring the fact that Irish was being physically attacked might not sit well with readers. __________________

2011-11-19, 06:41	Link #8414
Eratas123 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2011	@ Zero - Thank you! I'll have to extend the scene to have Irish get beat up more though. Maybe have him struggle with Mactavish for the knife. Then she barges in and stops the fight. Side note - The original scene was Tatenshi entering the room and Irish tries the same thing like he did with Mactavish. Ends about just as well as you'd expect. __________________

2011-11-19, 06:45	Link #8415
ZeroXSEED I am no one Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: Inside your head	^ Have Tatenashi told him it's against "Child Protection Act" and she blackmailed him for that. That's how Tatenashi rolls. __________________

2011-11-19, 06:48	Link #8416
Eratas123 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2011	@ Zero - Cue Irish raging. Irish: I'm not a kid! Mactavish: See? He says so himself! Tatenashi: Quiet please, the adults are talking here. __________________

2011-11-19, 06:48	Link #8417
StratoSpear Titans Test Team Pilot Join Date: Feb 2008 Location: The Elysium	Cue me series of music: Inami's theme: Innocent Days Tsurugi's theme: Pure Feelings Inami and Tsurugi love theme: With You Jinrai's theme: The Univers Athena Bouclier OP: Colors of the Heart Athena Bouclier ED: Anata no Kaze ga Fuku Kara __________________ "You cannot be bad at watching a movie. You cannot be bad at listening to an album. ...But you can be bad at playing a videogame, and the game will punish you and deny you access to the rest of the videogame."

2011-11-19, 06:49	Link #8418
ZeroXSEED I am no one Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: Inside your head	Mactavish is a jerkass isn't he, but either way he's boned because Tatenahsi has the footage.... __________________

2011-11-19, 06:55	Link #8419
Eratas123 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2011	@ Zero - Not a jerkass. Just believes that terrorists are terrorists no matter their age. Besides, he was nice enough to keep Joshua alive in the first place. Irish doesn't help his case hy acting like a prick throughout the entire interrogation. Though Tatenashi saying she has footage would be funny and make Irish wonder what the hell her deal is. __________________

2011-11-19, 06:58	Link #8420
ZeroXSEED I am no one Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: Inside your head	Then he's an ignorant ass, not a jerk. At least he dedicated to his job. And yes, that'll be one hell of mood whiplash. __________________