Nanoha FanFiction Discussion

[SNobleJr]

About the Vivio/Garyuu discussion... I'm not particularly squicked out - Garyuu's clearly sapient, there probably wouldn't be an issue with consent. Thinking about the different physiologies involved boggles the mind, though. What could they even do?

On second thought... to spare the sanity of those on the board who are not shameless xenophiles, it's probably better to leave that unanswered.

Originally Posted by Nanya01

Well, I know most of you probably don't care...

Which makes me wonder why I post it, but...

Anyway...

I wrote up another chapter to "Numbers in Nerima" and thought to share.

Cinque and Dieci are the main stars of this chapter.

Spoiler for Numbers in Nerima 8:

-snip-

I do read this series of yours, actually. While I admit that I'm utterly indifferent to Ranma 1/2 from what little I've seen of it, and the silliness sometimes goes overboard... well, I read it for the Numbers. I've probably made it clear enough in my dozen or so posts so far that I adore those girls, so I tend to quickly devour any decent fic that features them, this one included. Characterization is mostly fine IMHO - well, Sette did a 180°, but that was explained away, and Uno and Tre mellowing out a bit isn't implausible, either. And overall, I like the gags as well, other than the occasional moments when they get too random.

About the chapter... not that much to say, other than being pretty touching and amusing. Cinque and Dieci are very cute, and Sein... oh, Sein, you incorrigible, pervy little minx, you. I see much mischief down the road.

[RadiantBeam]

Originally Posted by SNobleJr

About the Vivio/Garyuu discussion... I'm not particularly squicked out - Garyuu's clearly sapient, there probably wouldn't be an issue with consent. Thinking about the different physiologies involved boggles the mind, though. What could they even do?

On second thought... to spare the sanity of most of the board who are not shameless xenophiles, it's probably better to leave that unanswered.

I could try a one-shot for it if anyone--

*murdered by Lutecia before sentence finishes*

[Amaterasu1963]

I seem to recall that Garyuu has tentacles...

[Nanya01]

Originally Posted by Amaterasu1963

I seem to recall that Garyuu has tentacles...

Vivio: I'm sorry, Lutecia, but you just can't satisfy me the way Garyuu can.
Lutecia: ...What?
Vivio: I mean, he has that awesome thorax and then there's his tentacles and...
Lutecia: But those are for combat purposes!
Vivio: He's very... Adaptable.

[Tabasco]

Originally Posted by Amaterasu1963

I seem to recall that Garyuu has tentacles...

Not that I don't believe you, but I clearly missed that somewhere?

[Rising Dragon]

Originally Posted by Tabasco

Not that I don't believe you, but I clearly missed that somewhere?

Final episodes, when Lutecia was pushing her summons to the limit thanks to that bitch Quattro.

[Nanya01]

Updated Numbers in Nerima.

You can read the whole story so far there.

[RadiantBeam]

Originally Posted by Rising Dragon

Final episodes, when Lutecia was pushing her summons to the limit thanks to that bitch Quattro.

So Garyuu could possibly find pain kinky?

...

*struck by plotbunny*

[Yasanagi]

Uploaded a new chapter of Material Days with some new scenes here and there and a few other rewritten items.

Available here.

[DezoPenguin]

Originally Posted by RadiantBeam

So Garyuu could possibly find pain kinky?

...

*struck by plotbunny*

Oy vey!

Vivio: Oh, sure, you won't give me my lemony goodness with Lulu, but the bug knight gets inter-species tentacle S&M?

Lutecia: I blame your one-track mind for interpreting the comment that way.

[sniperk]

Good Lord. What has come down on this place while I was away? @_@

Vivio: Thanks Cia.
Lutecia: Your welcome... For what exactly?
Vivio: Training Garyuu.

[00-Raiser]

Rise of the Daemon Kaiser chapter 7 is now up at FF.net.

[deathcurse]

Posted Chapter 4 of "A Familiar Life..." to Fanfiction.net .

[RadiantBeam]

Originally Posted by deathcurse

Posted Chapter 4 of "A Familiar Life..." to Fanfiction.net .

And you wanted to keep it short.

[itanshi1]

Just a note, I updated my archive with some links I had forgotten to add and the newer ones ^^

I also reorganized it, should be better

[Nanya01]

Due to certain "reviews" that I have read and the idiots on 4Chan, as well as the Manga thread, I HAD to write this...

Spoiler for Lutecia Omake:

"Oi vey!" Lutecia growled as she looked at the computer screen. "We need to have another out of canon moment, people!"

"What? Again?" Nove asked as she looked at the screen. "Wait, what? When was *I* ever a cold-hearted killer?"

"You *did* threaten to kill me, you know." Teana smirked. "And you were quite happy to do it too."

"No killing my Tea!" Subaru wailed and glomped Teana.

"Relax, I was mostly upset at you for nearly killing Cinque, Subaru." Nove rolled her eyes.

"I was never emo!" Lutecia pouted. "I was sad! There's a major fucking difference!" Hearing everyone gasp, she rolled her eyes. "Sorry, but there is. I just wanted my mother back, is that so wrong?"

Megane shook her head. "Nope, not at all, though I wish Zest had raised you a little better than to swear."

"Sorry, mother." Lutecia blushed and ducked her head. "But, seriously! It might not be realistic, but at least it's consistent!"

"How so?" Erio blinked as Lutecia suddenly grinned and held up a finger.

"You wanna know? Okay! Point 1..." She pointed at Nanoha. "You were only four or five years old when your father was hurt, you decided, during that time, that you would do all that you could to stay out of people's ways so that they wouldn't have to worry about you."

"Well, yeah..." Nanoha rubbed the back of her head sheepishly.

Lutecia then pointed at Fate. "Point 2! You, Fate, went from being even LESS emotional than me to being able to cry, smile, laugh and be happy in only six months!"

"Um, yes..." Fate blushed as people looked at her.

"Point 3! The Wolkenritter went from heartless killing machines to actual people in only the six months that they knew Hayate!" Lutecia then pointed at Subaru. "Point 4! You were Shinobu MK 2 before Nanoha rescued you. You needed people to hold your hand when you walked down the hallway so you didn't fall over and hurt yourself. Then in a week after meeting Nanoha, you became the tomboy we all loved later!"

Subaru just chuckled nervously. Oh, how true that was.

"Point 5!" She pointed at Teana. "You were a hot-headed, tempermental, over-achieving, underconfident gun fighter that straightened up to become one of the best mages around after Nanoha cooled your head a little."

Teana blushed hard as several people got a laugh out of that.

"Point 6!!" Lutecia pointed at Caro. "You were a very shy, quiet and nervous little girl when Fate-san found you, but it didn't take you too long to become a normal girl, did it?"

"Fate-san gave me so much kindness that, no, it didn't take long..."

"Point 7!" She then pointed at Erio. "You were a violent and broken mess when Fate finally took you in. All she had to do was hug you and you finally broke down and started to undo all the damage that had been done to you. And that was less than 3 years before you joined Riot Force Six, wasn't it?"

"Um, yeah..." Erio scratched the back of his head.

Lutecia put a hand on her chest and grinned. "So, with all of that, how can Nove's change, or my ILLUSTRIOUS change for the better be so shocking?" She then grumbled and crossed her arms. "What's so shocking about it is that it took four years."

"Huh?" Nanoha looked at the screen. "What's this? A sound stage basically sunk Yuuno-kun's chances with me?" She blinked, several times. "That's news to me. Sure, mine and Fate's voice actresses might support a lesbian relationship, but I'm not in one of those." She rolled her eyes. "Hey, Fate-chan, don't you still have your own home?"

Fate nodded and shook her head. "Really, those people call themselves fans and they say that I'd hate Yuuno for taking you away? I really wonder about them. I really think that they're idiots."

"I don't even think they watch this series." Nove rolled her eyes. "They just look at the artwork and think "oooh! Nanoha and Fate are so cute together, they must be a couple" without actually reading or watching. Of course, it doesn't help that the writers don't know how to please everyone... Really, the main guy should have had a few mangas that focused around myself, my sisters, my family, the wolkenritter should have had another manga... Maybe a manga that shows what happened in the 10 years from the Book of Darkness to when Riot Force Six started..."

"Yeah..." Nanoha shook her head. "Too bad it will never happen... Then again, neither will a confirmed pairing ever happen in this series."

"What about Amy and Chrono?" Caro asked, smiling brightly.

"Or Griffith and Lucino?" Erio added, grinning.

"I meant one that the casual fans care about." Nanoha rolled her eyes. Still... "Hey, Fate-chan..."

"Yes?" She blinked at Nanoha's grin.

"Wanna go visit Yuuno-kun when we get back?"

"Sure." If anyone could see Fate's mind at that moment, they would see a chibi version of her holding up victory fans and going "whoo hoo! Threesome!"

"Good." Nanoha smiled brightly.

[itanshi1]

Hehe, I still say they all being asexual is just as bad as all being bisexual or lesbians or straight

what can be done

[00-Raiser]

Originally Posted by Nanya01

Due to certain "reviews" that I have read and the idiots on 4Chan, as well as the Manga thread, I HAD to write this...

Spoiler for Lutecia Omake:

"Oi vey!" Lutecia growled as she looked at the computer screen. "We need to have another out of canon moment, people!"

"What? Again?" Nove asked as she looked at the screen. "Wait, what? When was *I* ever a cold-hearted killer?"

"You *did* threaten to kill me, you know." Teana smirked. "And you were quite happy to do it too."

"No killing my Tea!" Subaru wailed and glomped Teana.

"Relax, I was mostly upset at you for nearly killing Cinque, Subaru." Nove rolled her eyes.

"I was never emo!" Lutecia pouted. "I was sad! There's a major fucking difference!" Hearing everyone gasp, she rolled her eyes. "Sorry, but there is. I just wanted my mother back, is that so wrong?"

Megane shook her head. "Nope, not at all, though I wish Zest had raised you a little better than to swear."

"Sorry, mother." Lutecia blushed and ducked her head. "But, seriously! It might not be realistic, but at least it's consistent!"

"How so?" Erio blinked as Lutecia suddenly grinned and held up a finger.

"You wanna know? Okay! Point 1..." She pointed at Nanoha. "You were only four or five years old when your father was hurt, you decided, during that time, that you would do all that you could to stay out of people's ways so that they wouldn't have to worry about you."

"Well, yeah..." Nanoha rubbed the back of her head sheepishly.

Lutecia then pointed at Fate. "Point 2! You, Fate, went from being even LESS emotional than me to being able to cry, smile, laugh and be happy in only six months!"

"Um, yes..." Fate blushed as people looked at her.

"Point 3! The Wolkenritter went from heartless killing machines to actual people in only the six months that they knew Hayate!" Lutecia then pointed at Subaru. "Point 4! You were Shinobu MK 2 before Nanoha rescued you. You needed people to hold your hand when you walked down the hallway so you didn't fall over and hurt yourself. Then in a week after meeting Nanoha, you became the tomboy we all loved later!"

Subaru just chuckled nervously. Oh, how true that was.

"Point 5!" She pointed at Teana. "You were a hot-headed, tempermental, over-achieving, underconfident gun fighter that straightened up to become one of the best mages around after Nanoha cooled your head a little."

Teana blushed hard as several people got a laugh out of that.

"Point 6!!" Lutecia pointed at Caro. "You were a very shy, quiet and nervous little girl when Fate-san found you, but it didn't take you too long to become a normal girl, did it?"

"Fate-san gave me so much kindness that, no, it didn't take long..."

"Point 7!" She then pointed at Erio. "You were a violent and broken mess when Fate finally took you in. All she had to do was hug you and you finally broke down and started to undo all the damage that had been done to you. And that was less than 3 years before you joined Riot Force Six, wasn't it?"

"Um, yeah..." Erio scratched the back of his head.

Lutecia put a hand on her chest and grinned. "So, with all of that, how can Nove's change, or my ILLUSTRIOUS change for the better be so shocking?" She then grumbled and crossed her arms. "What's so shocking about it is that it took four years."

"Huh?" Nanoha looked at the screen. "What's this? A sound stage basically sunk Yuuno-kun's chances with me?" She blinked, several times. "That's news to me. Sure, mine and Fate's voice actresses might support a lesbian relationship, but I'm not in one of those." She rolled her eyes. "Hey, Fate-chan, don't you still have your own home?"

Fate nodded and shook her head. "Really, those people call themselves fans and they say that I'd hate Yuuno for taking you away? I really wonder about them. I really think that they're idiots."

"I don't even think they watch this series." Nove rolled her eyes. "They just look at the artwork and think "oooh! Nanoha and Fate are so cute together, they must be a couple" without actually reading or watching. Of course, it doesn't help that the writers don't know how to please everyone... Really, the main guy should have had a few mangas that focused around myself, my sisters, my family, the wolkenritter should have had another manga... Maybe a manga that shows what happened in the 10 years from the Book of Darkness to when Riot Force Six started..."

"Yeah..." Nanoha shook her head. "Too bad it will never happen... Then again, neither will a confirmed pairing ever happen in this series."

"What about Amy and Chrono?" Caro asked, smiling brightly.

"Or Griffith and Lucino?" Erio added, grinning.

"I meant one that the casual fans care about." Nanoha rolled her eyes. Still... "Hey, Fate-chan..."

"Yes?" She blinked at Nanoha's grin.

"Wanna go visit Yuuno-kun when we get back?"

"Sure." If anyone could see Fate's mind at that moment, they would see a chibi version of her holding up victory fans and going "whoo hoo! Threesome!"

"Good." Nanoha smiled brightly.

Hehe, too bad people won't listen =/ Thanks Nanya, but in the future it's probably best to just ignore them and not dignify them with a response. Though admittedly that's pretty hard to do... *sigh*

[Moczo]

Originally Posted by Nanya01

Due to certain "reviews" that I have read and the idiots on 4Chan, as well as the Manga thread, I HAD to write this...

Spoiler for Lutecia Omake:

"Oi vey!" Lutecia growled as she looked at the computer screen. "We need to have another out of canon moment, people!"

"What? Again?" Nove asked as she looked at the screen. "Wait, what? When was *I* ever a cold-hearted killer?"

"You *did* threaten to kill me, you know." Teana smirked. "And you were quite happy to do it too."

"No killing my Tea!" Subaru wailed and glomped Teana.

"Relax, I was mostly upset at you for nearly killing Cinque, Subaru." Nove rolled her eyes.

"I was never emo!" Lutecia pouted. "I was sad! There's a major fucking difference!" Hearing everyone gasp, she rolled her eyes. "Sorry, but there is. I just wanted my mother back, is that so wrong?"

Megane shook her head. "Nope, not at all, though I wish Zest had raised you a little better than to swear."

"Sorry, mother." Lutecia blushed and ducked her head. "But, seriously! It might not be realistic, but at least it's consistent!"

"How so?" Erio blinked as Lutecia suddenly grinned and held up a finger.

"You wanna know? Okay! Point 1..." She pointed at Nanoha. "You were only four or five years old when your father was hurt, you decided, during that time, that you would do all that you could to stay out of people's ways so that they wouldn't have to worry about you."

"Well, yeah..." Nanoha rubbed the back of her head sheepishly.

Lutecia then pointed at Fate. "Point 2! You, Fate, went from being even LESS emotional than me to being able to cry, smile, laugh and be happy in only six months!"

"Um, yes..." Fate blushed as people looked at her.

"Point 3! The Wolkenritter went from heartless killing machines to actual people in only the six months that they knew Hayate!" Lutecia then pointed at Subaru. "Point 4! You were Shinobu MK 2 before Nanoha rescued you. You needed people to hold your hand when you walked down the hallway so you didn't fall over and hurt yourself. Then in a week after meeting Nanoha, you became the tomboy we all loved later!"

Subaru just chuckled nervously. Oh, how true that was.

"Point 5!" She pointed at Teana. "You were a hot-headed, tempermental, over-achieving, underconfident gun fighter that straightened up to become one of the best mages around after Nanoha cooled your head a little."

Teana blushed hard as several people got a laugh out of that.

"Point 6!!" Lutecia pointed at Caro. "You were a very shy, quiet and nervous little girl when Fate-san found you, but it didn't take you too long to become a normal girl, did it?"

"Fate-san gave me so much kindness that, no, it didn't take long..."

"Point 7!" She then pointed at Erio. "You were a violent and broken mess when Fate finally took you in. All she had to do was hug you and you finally broke down and started to undo all the damage that had been done to you. And that was less than 3 years before you joined Riot Force Six, wasn't it?"

"Um, yeah..." Erio scratched the back of his head.

Lutecia put a hand on her chest and grinned. "So, with all of that, how can Nove's change, or my ILLUSTRIOUS change for the better be so shocking?" She then grumbled and crossed her arms. "What's so shocking about it is that it took four years."

"Huh?" Nanoha looked at the screen. "What's this? A sound stage basically sunk Yuuno-kun's chances with me?" She blinked, several times. "That's news to me. Sure, mine and Fate's voice actresses might support a lesbian relationship, but I'm not in one of those." She rolled her eyes. "Hey, Fate-chan, don't you still have your own home?"

Fate nodded and shook her head. "Really, those people call themselves fans and they say that I'd hate Yuuno for taking you away? I really wonder about them. I really think that they're idiots."

"I don't even think they watch this series." Nove rolled her eyes. "They just look at the artwork and think "oooh! Nanoha and Fate are so cute together, they must be a couple" without actually reading or watching. Of course, it doesn't help that the writers don't know how to please everyone... Really, the main guy should have had a few mangas that focused around myself, my sisters, my family, the wolkenritter should have had another manga... Maybe a manga that shows what happened in the 10 years from the Book of Darkness to when Riot Force Six started..."

"Yeah..." Nanoha shook her head. "Too bad it will never happen... Then again, neither will a confirmed pairing ever happen in this series."

"What about Amy and Chrono?" Caro asked, smiling brightly.

"Or Griffith and Lucino?" Erio added, grinning.

"I meant one that the casual fans care about." Nanoha rolled her eyes. Still... "Hey, Fate-chan..."

"Yes?" She blinked at Nanoha's grin.

"Wanna go visit Yuuno-kun when we get back?"

"Sure." If anyone could see Fate's mind at that moment, they would see a chibi version of her holding up victory fans and going "whoo hoo! Threesome!"

"Good." Nanoha smiled brightly.

Well, I chuckled. Not a bad little omake, and it does make some good points.

That said, I'm afraid the people this is actually aimed at will not be listening to it, or if they do will react only with quite a bit of rage. But then I'm sure you already knew that

[Nanya01]

Heh, thanks guys.

And, Moczo, I know that those people would be upset.

I don't care.

Anyway...

Raiser, this one's for you.

Spoiler for Erio/Lutecia:

Sighing as she relaxed in her outdoor bath, Lutecia smiled as she looked up at the night sky. She was dressed in a modest, for her anyway, light purple bikini that matched her hair. Smiling, she turned as she heard the door open. "Glad you could make it." She slid over and let her companion, who was wearing a red swimsuit, into the water with her.

"Well, you asked nicely." Her companion smiled at her.

"Thanks for joining me, Erio." Lutecia smiled as she slid up next to him, sighing softly as he wrapped an arm around her shoulders. "I'm surprised Caro isn't jealous..."

Erio chuckled softly. "We don't have those feelings for each other. She's more like a sister to me than anything else..."

"Fufufufufufufu... I beat the midget at something then." Lutecia grinned, causing both of them to laugh. "Still, thanks for coming out here." Closing her eyes, Lutecia smiled more as he squeezed her shoulder.

"How about you, Lutecia... You could join the Bureau and get transferred to work with Caro and myself, then you could see us all the time?"

Lutecia shook her head. "I'm happy as it is. Maybe in a couple of years, but my restrictions aren't as bad as they used to be." She still had her limiter, but it wasn't as strong as it had been before, thankfully.

"Well... I wouldn't mind you joining us." Erio smiled as she blushed. "It would be nice to have you around more often too."

She smirked and moved so that she was straddling his lap. "Why? So you could make out with me every day?"

Erio blushed slightly, but smirked back at her. He didn't mind her teasing, in fact, he was pretty used to it. "I don't see the problem."

She leaned in closer to him. "People might say we're a couple."

He shrugged as he moved his head closer to hers. "People say too much, I think."

"What if they call me your girlfriend?"

"You say that like it's a bad thing." Erio whispered to her.

Both of them closed their eyes as their lips met, their arms wrapping around each other as they kissed and revelled in the sensation of skin on skin. Both of them shuddered into the kiss. They wanted to do more, they both did, but they both knew the risks, and they both knew that they weren't ready, not yet, for the results if they went that far.

"Sorry..." Lutecia whispered as she leaned against him, her head resting on the crook of his neck. "I am."

"It's okay..." Erio didn't like it either, but he wasn't ready, not yet. "Maybe in a few years."

"Yeah..." She smiled as he rubbed her back. She could feel that he wanted it as much as she did, but she was thankful that he wouldn't push it.

Watching them from the house, Megane smiled. Erio was good for Lutecia. Her eyes sparkled in happiness. Maybe in a couple of years, they would get more serious. At least, she hoped so. "Fufufufufufufu..." She rubbed her hands together while chuckling. She wouldn't push it though, she wanted to see how it developed on its own.

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