To Aru ... Fanfiction Discussion Thread

[SmokinFerret88]

*Slow-clap*

Great outline allfictions.

[LevelSeven]

thanks allfictions,

i have understand what the difference between my idea and a plot is, this makes everything even a bit more difficult XD

thanks for the feedback, i will work on the story a bit and maybe write a short prologue

[Loremaster]

Wasn't sure about something, so I thought I'll ask on here. Other espers can't really sense each other AIM's right? Unless their have similar powers or an ability which gives them the power to track others.

[SmokinFerret88]

AIM Dispersion Field Resonance is the term I believe. I think it works primarily when its espers who have the same ability, otherwise it goes unnoticed. Some can detect it, mainly people who have abilities that specifically target AIM fields like Taketsubo Rikou, but most cases it doesn't.

Though I believe there are other cases of this to some degree. While I did forget who thought up the original concept, but someone here believed that people with certain characteristics may be subject to AIM Dispersion Field Resonance as well.

Using the example suggested at the time, if someone has an ability that focuses on magnitism, since the ability itself works on the foundation of an electromaster, then you can already guess that if an electromaster and a metal-manipulator crossed paths; there would be a reaction since they both share the same base stat of being espers who control electricity. While the base stat is the same, the manner in which the esper uses that ability is ultimately different but still able to create a reaction.

That, however, is just a theory and not something that can be claimed as fact. Given, it's credible and logical on most grounds; its still just a fan-crafted theory.

[demino_hellsin]

I think that was meister you guys are talking about.

[allfictions]

Having recently played the videogame Beyond: Two Souls (ugh, way too much hype, not quite what I expected, and disappointed), I could see potential in the storyline being merged with ToAru, especially since Beyond: Two Souls' s mythos doesn't contradict the Raildex Universe, it just adds an 'Infraworld' (think of it as some sort of Limbo or Purgatory) to Heaven, Hell, and the Artificial Heaven.

In an hypothetical fic, Jodie Holmes, the protagonist, instead of being brought in by the CIA, is secured by Academy City, as her powers can very well pass off as her being a Gemstone (and she may very well be, if we look at Himegami's own odd power). She grows up here, experimented on or manipulated (I mean, there is Aiden watching over her after all) by the Dark Side (and Kiharas if one feel adventurous, like Kihara Konshou, Kihara Sokuryou, or Kihara Kaihou)

The United States' Department of Paranormal Activity (DPA) and the CIA would be one of the major antagonists, trying to bring her back to America and uses to their own ends like in the games. Throws in that, when Magicians catch wind of her, they all come to the city to eliminate the threat they know she could pose. Possibly with the Russian Orthodox organization Annihilatus leading, as it was created specifically to deal with the supernatural (''disposal of things that should not exist'' indeed). One possible Russian magician could be called Snegurochka.

And Aiden would also be afraid shitless/hostile to Touma because of IB.

[Loremaster]

Originally Posted by SmokinFerret88

AIM Dispersion Field Resonance is the term I believe. I think it works primarily when its espers who have the same ability, otherwise it goes unnoticed. Some can detect it, mainly people who have abilities that specifically target AIM fields like Taketsubo Rikou, but most cases it doesn't.

Though I believe there are other cases of this to some degree. While I did forget who thought up the original concept, but someone here believed that people with certain characteristics may be subject to AIM Dispersion Field Resonance as well.

Using the example suggested at the time, if someone has an ability that focuses on magnitism, since the ability itself works on the foundation of an electromaster, then you can already guess that if an electromaster and a metal-manipulator crossed paths; there would be a reaction since they both share the same base stat of being espers who control electricity. While the base stat is the same, the manner in which the esper uses that ability is ultimately different but still able to create a reaction.

That, however, is just a theory and not something that can be claimed as fact. Given, it's credible and logical on most grounds; its still just a fan-crafted theory.

This helps a lot thank you, it's just a theory I know but it could still be used. Really my intention was not really allow Level fives to sense each other, but have the feeling their been in this area. But more so the level fives can notably feel the presence of the first level five.

Not accelerator but the first one to reach the level(6th ranked level five). My reasoning for this is that in my alternative world fanfic, Academy city decided to employ similar methods the first level five used to help the other level fives to reach that level. So there be some sort of connection at least within some calculations in their personal reality due to using similar methods to reach level five.

I also have an additional question, could a level five telekinetic user able to have a sub ability of Psychokinesis? I'm kinda confused but mainly because of this line on the wiki.

Apparently, a "scientific" rationale for it involves raising the motion of a target's molecules through Telekinesis in order to ignite it.

Obviously the level five would need to understand the method, but if he does this wouldn't count as having two abilities? But just an extension of his existing one. My friend keeps arguing it's impossible as it would count as two abilities. Not sure to be honest.

Another question would be can Misaki's power effect the other level fives. I know her powers can't effect Mikoto Misaka but does that also include number 4, 2, 1, 7? While I assume she could effect number 6 and 7. And we know she can't effect Mikoto, but what about the others I'm not sure.

All these questions are just so I can make a much better rewrite for a fanfic.

[SmokinFerret88]

This helps a lot thank you, it's just a theory I know but it could still be used. Really my intention was not really allow Level fives to sense each other, but have the feeling their been in this area. But more so the level fives can notably feel the presence of the first level five.

No problem and its fine. Frankly speaking, if other Level 5's could sense one another, you'd have found Kakine chasing Accel around all over the place trying to kill him. Jus sayin.

I also have an additional question, could a level five telekinetic user able to have a sub ability of Psychokinesis? I'm kinda confused but mainly because of this line on the wiki. Obviously the level five would need to understand the method, but if he does this wouldn't count as having two abilities? But just an extension of his existing one. My friend keeps arguing it's impossible as it would count as two abilities. Not sure to be honest.

Oh yeah, it'd be a sub-ability since the esper is using their original ability to make it happen. If you want an example, take a look at this. So long as the person is using their original ability to create the effect, it isn't a second power, just a different manner of applying the same ability. Though, technically speaking, it would be more like making something/someone spontaneously combust rather than allow them complete control over the flames.

Another question would be can Misaki's power effect the other level fives. I know her powers can't effect Mikoto Misaka but does that also include number 4, 2, 1, 7? While I assume she could effect number 6 and 7. And we know she can't effect Mikoto, but what about the others I'm not sure.

I'm pretty sure the other level 5's have their own means of defending themselves from her ability; otherwise Misaki would be the strongest Esper in the city. Going on the theory that her telepathy works via electrical signals or something of the like, Accel would alter the vectors of the signal away, with Mugino also able to something of a similar manner since she redirected Mikoto's during their fight. As for Gunha, well, since he's such a wildcard and nobody really understands his ability, I don't think Misaki would be willing to risk the possible backlash she would get from even attempt to take him over. Kakine, well, that's something I have no idea about but kinda follows the same rules as Gunha; she wouldn't want to try it but mainly due to fear of him coming after her.

[R.LocK]

Originally Posted by Loremaster

Another question would be can Misaki's power effect the other level fives. I know her powers can't effect Mikoto Misaka but does that also include number 4, 2, 1, 7? While I assume she could effect number 6 and 7. And we know she can't effect Mikoto, but what about the others I'm not sure.

Accel is a clear no-no. If Mikoto deflects Misaki's power than Accel's shield would, too.
Kakine's got his freaky invisible shield, so no.
Mikoto, you know about her.
Mugino... Not so sure. Either she picks up on Misaki's attempt and block it somehow or she's completely vulnerable to telepathy due to Mugino's powers' specifics.
We don't know anything about #6.
And no, she can't do anything to Gunha 'cause his power's weird and he's got some passive shield.

[Loremaster]

Thanks for the answers, regarding the last one. In my original fanfic I had Misaki wipe most of the level's fives memories clean of Number 6. Except for Mikoto Misaka.

But knowing this now, for my rewrite all the level fives will remember number 6 now. It's a difference but not a hindering one to the plot. Poor number 6 though hes got amnesia and doesn't remember any of the other level fives. But they remember him, talk about a leg up advantage.

[tsunade666]

Mugino and Mikoto's ability stem from the same electron based control. Which is why biribiri can deflect meltdowner. And Mugino has also her own shield ability. Maybe she also has that passive shield ability to protect her from Misaki's ability. Mugino is a member of the dark side of the city. She knows more than the others and probably knew the mechanics on how Misaki's ability work. She probably has counter for it. Fighting someone who has mind controlling abilities would be suicidal without a way to counter it, resist it or immune to it.

[LevelSeven]

HEY HEY GUYS, I THINK I HAVE A HILAIOUS IDEA

Spoiler for my idea for a new fanifc:

a room,
she was about to go in, her name was Misaka Mikoto, Former #3 Level 5 Age: 22
the room she was about to go in wasnt dangerous,
actually this room was shining at least for her, she felt a hand on her shoulders and after turning back she could see two persons behind her, the first one was her Mother the other one was her father, both of them smiled and started to hug her,
"im happy Mikoto.....i will prey for your happiness" her mother said,
"if somethign happens, you know you can tell su everything"
Mikoto's Mother turned into a chibi version of herself "it isnt so that she is forced to that......BBAAKKKAA" yelled and slammed her fist into her husbands face
"aahahahahaaahahaha" mikito laughed "im happy" and her parents hugged her again,
several minutes later music started to play,
she entered the room, a shining white dress, a face which could easily reach the first place of the world most beautiful face list, she smiled and looked through a thin white veil before her face,
many MANY people was sitting and looking up to her, the one to her side was her father who walked alongside her and holded her arm,
many people who flustered pretty could be heard, after she reached the place where a certain person in black clothes and right hairs stood, his name was Styil Magnus, a 22 years old Magician who was also a priest at the same time,
to her right she saw a crying 21 years old Kuroko, a smiling 22 years old Misaki and a emotionless looking 24 years old Mugino, all of them weard completly black dressess,
to her right was a smiling 24 years old Hmazura, than a blond haired person, the second successfully magician which was 24 years old and weard the name Tsuchimikado and after that she saw a boy who was 24 years old, he possessed a strange powerr inside his right hand the 'Imagine Breaker, his name is Kamijyo Touma, this three weard completly white clothes...
after this three persons, there was the man she loved, he was called a Monster, he is the strongest being, he possessed a power equal to that of god, his alias WAS accelerator,
now completly in black clothes, he stood now before the altar, they holded hands,
after the usual version what a priest said on a wedding,
"XXX do you want to merry this woman before you??" Stiyl said,
"Yes!!" he replied,
"Mikoto will you...."
"yes" she yelled with a big smile on her face,
the priest couldnt hold himself and also smiled, after the ring was put on the fingers of them, the one who WAS known as Accelerator and as the former #1 Level 5 lifted the veil, looked directly with his red eyes into the brown eyes of his new wife and kissed her,

as if the room would blow into pieces all visitors started to cheer and clap into their hands, Yomikawa and Misaka Misuzu holded each other and cryed in happiness,
the three boys clapped at the back of 'the one who WAS known as accelerator' smiled and cheered for him and his new wife Misaka Mikoto

and than accel starts to remember on all the things which happened to him before he and misaka married, the adventures, the struggles, the fights etc.

i think it could be a good fanfic but unfortunatly im not good enough to write it, if someoen can do it i would LOVE to read it, it should call itself

" HOW I MET YOUR MOTHER "

[Draco Spirit]

Not sure about memory loss, but at some point I've got to do a Mikoto/Accelerator romance fanfic, just because there so much to play with it terms of tension and the fact there more like each other than either would admit.... but busy with 'The Fall' at the moment, so it be a while!

[SmokinFerret88]

Yo everyone; me again looking for some input on the scene I'm currently doing for the next update of Project Darkness.

I'm just looking to see if I kept Motoharu in character during one of his more 'darker' moments. Any opinions of this particular scene would be greatly appreciated.

Spoiler for Interrogation:

Touma, a button away from calling Anti-Skill, briefly paused in his actions as he caught sight of his friend picking up one of the barely conscious teens from the floor and proceeded to head out his door with the teen in tow. His interest peaked, Kamijou made a move to follow only for his eyes to widen as he witnessed his friend push the teen over the railing outside his room. Given, his attacker was still being held by the collar of his shirt over the railing, but even he could hear the sounds of tearing cloth from where he stood. With such a sight right in front of him, Touma all previous activities were immediately dropped as he rushed out to where his friend stood.

“Stay back Kami-yan!” That level of seriousness, that display of foreign coldness in his voice, was what ultimately made Touma freeze just as he entered the doorway. “I’ll take care of this; you have a phone call to make don’t you?”

“Tsuchimikado, this is-”

“Payback, Kami-yan, they were going to do the same to you, right? It’s only fair that he finds out for himself what it feels like to be thrown over a ledge wouldn’t you say so?”

“W-what the hell has gotten into you!? I don’t care about things like that if it ends with someone getting killed!”

“Then if he spills his guts like a good boy, he won’t have to falling to his death now will he?” This particular statement was not specifically addressed to Touma, rather it was being directed more so to the teen who’s only lifeline was hands gripping his shirt. It was to be expected that the teen in question was fearing for his life given his current predicament, but there was still a hint of doubt in his mind that the teen holding him would actually do what he said he would. “So, nya, who told you about this place and where can we find them?”

“Y-yeah, like you have the balls to do it specks.”

A predictable answer befitting to that of a pawn who didn’t want to sellout the group he was a part of. Understandable considering how most low-end groups tended to black-ball anyone who had a history of allowing information to slip from their loose lips. The underground was an unforgiving place to be a snitch, as it was a fast track to an early end if word got out about it. It didn’t matter what kind of group or organization one worked for, giving out any information of any sort was going to end up putting a target on their backs for the rest of their lives; which were usually cut short in a relatively short span of time.

Though grunts didn’t usually have the most valuable information one could gain, they were at least a means leading to someone who did.

And Motoharu, who knew this, also knew that these types of people were usually the easiest one’s to break.

“I’ve got three other punks like you I can get the information from.” Based solely on his tone, even a casual observer such as Touma could tell that the blonde wasn’t making an empty threat. To both Kamijou and the other teen’s growing realization, it was a clear indication that Motoharu was more than willing to turn the teen into a smear on the concrete if he refused to answer him. “Then again, maybe it would be a good idea to set an example. If one of you gets thrown off, I’m sure the rest will figure out how serious I am and how far I’ll go to get what I want.”

To emphasis this, Motoharu relinquished on his hands being used to hold the teen’s shirt; thus allowing the said boy’s body to tilt backwards. This erected a startled cry from the teen in question, especially when the fabric of his shirt made another tearing sound due to being forcibly stretched beyond its limits.

“My arm’s getting tired~”

At this point, Kamijou had enough of the sight in which he was witnessing and actually made a move to put an end to it himself. Though this treatment may have been justified given how he was almost a victim of the same fate, he was not willing to have another person’s death on his conscious. What kind of person could live with themselves if they simply sat and watched as another person’s life ended right in front of them? What kind of person would he be for just allowing it to happen without so much as lifting a finger to stop it? So what if the guy had tried to kill him, what did it matter if he got a few bruises at the end of it all?

Kamijou was still alive, so in his mind there was no reason for him to die over something that may have happened opposed to what actually did happen.

“A-Alright, alright fine, the guys overseeing the job gave us the address!”

And just like that, Motoharu pulled the teen’s body back up to relative safety. He was still keeping the teen suspended a bit over the edge, yet not as much as before where he couldn’t be caught in the event that Motoharu released his grip entirely. It was also during the course of this time that he acknowledged Kamijou’s presence behind him, the boy’s steps again coming to a halt once the teen began to speak up. Since the teen wasn’t taking any action to stop him, he could only assume that he too was interested in what was to be said; even if he felt reluctant to accept the method being used to attain it.

“Go on.”

“They just told us to kill the guy, didn’t matter how as long as we weren’t caught. After that we call them, send some proof, and then disappear. We weren’t supposed to meet them after the job, so I don’t know where they are; they contact just contact us.”

“You said their overseeing the job; so that tells me their nearby along with the fact that you’re lying.”

“N-NO! They’re never around for these jobs, they’re just in charge of giving out the orders they get from the boss; I swear! I-I never even met them before in person, so nobody knows who they really are.”

“And who is their boss, nya? Who’s the person giving them the orders?”

[demino_hellsin]

I think you should drop the nya and add more 90's hollywood toughguy flick talk.

Or reread NT7 or was that 8?

[Loremaster]

Before I can even read the above going to need to read the rest before it. I'll do that later today, but before I go to sleep for tonight. I thought I'll post a link to chapter 2 of my fanfiction rewrite if you're interested.

Chapter 2: The Ghosts of the Past
https://www.fanfiction.net/s/9986081...Fated-Memories

[SmokinFerret88]

Okay, so I got bored, and like everyone who's bored with internet access; I went random net surfing. During that time, I came across this:

In the Hebrew Scriptures, and the Old Testament, the prophet Daniel experiences a vision after having undergone a period of fasting. In the vision in Daniel 10:13-21 an angel identifies Michael as the protector of Israel. Daniel refers to Michael as a "prince of the first rank"Later in the vision in Daniel 12:1 Daniel is informed about the role of Michael during the "Time of the End" when there will be "distress such as has not happened from the beginning of nations" and that:[7]
"At that time Michael, the great prince who protects your people, will arise."

Now I don't know how to alter kanji to make someone's name mean 'the great prince who protects your people' but I was able to work with 'prince of the first rank' and what I got was Ichiryū ōji.

So, having said all that, I now have the full intention of making a character with that name and be an antagonist at some point in my Darkness Project. The question I have is what kind of power should they have and if they should be magic-side or science side. I'm honestly leaning more towards magic, but I'm not ruling out the possibility of making him a science side antagonist.

Thoughts on this anyone?

[demino_hellsin]

An avatar for the archangel Michael? that would be loltastic.

[SmokinFerret88]

I don't know what loltastic is, but I can guess.

Truthfully, I'm not aiming to have this character be affiliated with Michael at all. I'm only using the title that Daniel used to refer the archangel and that's it.

[tsunade666]

that guy screams magic side and can't be affiliated to science side. Though it might be a magician that sides in science side like tsuchimikado and etzali.