2016-10-17, 06:12 | Link #58765 |
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I feel like I made the same mistakes with Rong that I tried to correct using Brave. I want to rebeuild his character as more human but at the same time keep the whole former child terrorist angle with a self-induced obssession to avoid complete indoctrination.
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2016-10-17, 06:39 | Link #58766 | |
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2016-10-17, 07:10 | Link #58771 |
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I blame the fact the LN was so bad I practically skimmed the thing.
Apologies zero but what do you think of a reboot of Rong? Isit possible to humanize a former child terrorist that escaped indoctrination by self induced obsession?
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2016-10-17, 07:38 | Link #58773 |
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Well that's currently the major thing I want to keep about him. The whole obssession as his way of escape. I want him to be ruthless but capable of empathy. How should I say... showing no restraint for violence but also no retraint for kindness. But he's odd in his expression because his late childhood and onwards is built on violence and his own self-induced insanity. I wanted his escape to be math, warping his mind so he sees things in terms of numbers. How he weighs values. Other than his own safety he calculates his options by the number.
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2016-10-17, 08:38 | Link #58776 |
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No worries mate, I've been working on expanding that character into a semi-OC in my story:
Spoiler for character bio:
Also a seperate entry for her personal IS: Spoiler for IS info:
As for her appearance--imagine her as an adult version of the civilian identity of this particularly badass magical girl warrior: Spoiler for appearance:
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