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Neoqueenhoneybee · 2004-11-19, 10:51

Hello.

First of all, pleased to meet you! (well, I really haven't met anyone yet, but when I do I am sure it will be a pleasure)

I was wondering if anyone would like to crit my art? It really isn't fanart, but it is influenced by anime. If yes, then please click on the link below. (you can crit my website's layout too.)

http://gro-wings.com

ShinjiMuaddib · 2004-11-19, 13:53

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Originally Posted by Neoqueenhoneybee

Hello.

First of all, pleased to meet you! (well, I really haven't met anyone yet, but when I do I am sure it will be a pleasure)

I was wondering if anyone would like to crit my art? It really isn't fanart, but it is influenced by anime. If yes, then please click on the link below. (you can crit my website's layout too.)

http://gro-wings.com

By the title of the thread this sounded like a challenge to critize your art which I was gonna undertake. Until I visited your gallery and looked at each one, my resolute critic motive had evaporated but as I headed down to critize, I will leave you with one comment: "Stop drawing so well!"

You made a new fan today!

Asura · 2004-11-19, 22:41

Mel,
Many of them are well done, and I find the earlier illustrations to be especially appealing (2002). The laters, though more sophisticated, are not as appealing to me. For some of them, better use of light and dark elements will better define them.

silver_sanctuary · 2004-11-19, 23:06

Kyahaha, you can't get much critiques if you're going to draw that well.

They're flawless. I haven't looked at all of them, but the ones I've seen are good.

Mind telling me how you did your pics? ^^

Neoqueenhoneybee · 2004-11-21, 10:25

Thanks for your replies.

My images are far from flawless. There are times when I don't like my art at all.

Asura

I will keep in mind to use lights and darks better.

Silver

If you could narrow down a few pieces I could answer your question easier. I have many different ways of working.

Also, I am headed to Arizona today for
Thanksgiving vacation, so I don't know when I will be able to reply. Thanks again!

xfordained · 2004-11-22, 01:25

im surprized no one said this but ur faces lack certain definition and facial structure also a little more shading is needed uve got most of it down espically the color design to me it just seems like certain habits u have of drawing faces are hindering the pictures (both realistically/not so much in ur really cartoony drawings)

Raxial · 2004-11-22, 16:34

i love the costumes! some of those are awesome! are those just some you've seen, or actually made? they're pretty sweet

JERI · 2004-11-22, 17:27

Bloody site took forever to load.

I can tell the labours you put into those stuff. Designs were great, barely any repetitions in poses and costumes.

Most pictures are lacking on contrast, on top of that, the colors on all the pictures appears dim and unevenly spread. What did you color them with?

If I was to suggest anything I'd probably tell you to limit the colors you use to a common color theme, choose darker colors for shadowy parts, and maybe use a medium that will produce thicker colors.

That way your pictures will look more solid/organised in colors, and it will be cleaner.

fantD · 2004-11-22, 17:28

wow, fantastic designs. I love how you exagerate certain parts of anatomy for such a wide range of artistic purposes. Plus your gallery is quite varied style wise and the anime influence in many of the pics is there! My only critique is that there's something missing from the people's expression. Its hard to describe but its lacking a certain flare that brings the viewer into the art. Well im no artist so don't exactly take my word for it. In any case, your skillz are leet, keep up the good work!

2004-11-19, 10:51	Link #1
Neoqueenhoneybee Junior Member Join Date: Nov 2004	Anyone up for a critique? Hello. First of all, pleased to meet you! (well, I really haven't met anyone yet, but when I do I am sure it will be a pleasure) I was wondering if anyone would like to crit my art? It really isn't fanart, but it is influenced by anime. If yes, then please click on the link below. (you can crit my website's layout too.) http://gro-wings.com

2004-11-19, 22:41	Link #3
Asura should i stay longer? Join Date: May 2003 Location: Hong Kong until May 6 2006.... it's paradise ;)	Mel, Many of them are well done, and I find the earlier illustrations to be especially appealing (2002). The laters, though more sophisticated, are not as appealing to me. For some of them, better use of light and dark elements will better define them.

2004-11-19, 23:06	Link #4
silver_sanctuary Junior Member Join Date: Nov 2004 Location: The Silver Twilight	Kyahaha, you can't get much critiques if you're going to draw that well. They're flawless. I haven't looked at all of them, but the ones I've seen are good. Mind telling me how you did your pics? ^^

2004-11-21, 10:25	Link #5
Neoqueenhoneybee Junior Member Join Date: Nov 2004	Thanks for your replies. My images are far from flawless. There are times when I don't like my art at all. Asura I will keep in mind to use lights and darks better. Silver If you could narrow down a few pieces I could answer your question easier. I have many different ways of working. Also, I am headed to Arizona today for Thanksgiving vacation, so I don't know when I will be able to reply. Thanks again!

2004-11-22, 01:25	Link #6
xfordained you should die Join Date: Nov 2003	im surprized no one said this but ur faces lack certain definition and facial structure also a little more shading is needed uve got most of it down espically the color design to me it just seems like certain habits u have of drawing faces are hindering the pictures (both realistically/not so much in ur really cartoony drawings)

2004-11-22, 16:34	Link #7
Raxial CG / Color Join Date: Dec 2003 Location: Eastern United States Age: 36	i love the costumes! some of those are awesome! are those just some you've seen, or actually made? they're pretty sweet

2004-11-22, 17:27	Link #8
JERI Senior Member Join Date: Aug 2004	Bloody site took forever to load. I can tell the labours you put into those stuff. Designs were great, barely any repetitions in poses and costumes. Most pictures are lacking on contrast, on top of that, the colors on all the pictures appears dim and unevenly spread. What did you color them with? If I was to suggest anything I'd probably tell you to limit the colors you use to a common color theme, choose darker colors for shadowy parts, and maybe use a medium that will produce thicker colors. That way your pictures will look more solid/organised in colors, and it will be cleaner.

2004-11-22, 17:28	Link #9
fantD ³²¹¿Ðeath[§] Join Date: Jun 2004 Location: limbo	wow, fantastic designs. I love how you exagerate certain parts of anatomy for such a wide range of artistic purposes. Plus your gallery is quite varied style wise and the anime influence in many of the pics is there! My only critique is that there's something missing from the people's expression. Its hard to describe but its lacking a certain flare that brings the viewer into the art. Well im no artist so don't exactly take my word for it. In any case, your skillz are leet, keep up the good work!