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Dream_Traveller
2008-09-03, 01:31
But even then, it's complex. And right off the bat, it sort of fails. "My name is Lelouch Vi Britannia. I'm suspiciously dressed in Britannian military attire and piloting a KMF when I've been exiled for almost ten years. Can I see my brother?"

Dilla
2008-09-03, 01:35
But even then, it's complex. And right off the bat, it sort of fails. "My name is Lelouch Vi Britannia. I'm suspiciously dressed in Britannian military attire and piloting a KMF when I've been exiled for almost ten years. Can I see my brother?"The main thing I would be looking for would for it to exactly follow canon, hence being AU. I would just need him to create the Black Knights, then on from there. It could be worked around, and only a great author could do it effectively.

Dream_Traveller
2008-09-03, 01:49
Lelouch's Geass practically...well, was the thing, even above the BKs, that elevated him to such great heights in R1 and...well, got him where he is in R2, even though it's been a mal-factor there, somewhat. And if this author gets to the point where the royal court's taken over, he's scuppered. There was no way that the court would accept Lelouch strolling in and taking the seat of the Emperor. Even with Suzaku on his side, Lelouch would simply be ousted moments after making his entrance (since Suzaku's claims aren't exactly going to be heeded because of racial prejudice on the part of most of the royal family), or simply shot dead.

Masterkeyes2
2008-09-03, 03:25
I am actually making a fiction that doesn't use the Geass plot at all. It actually is coming along very well.

sandykins
2008-09-09, 20:12
I found this fanfic pretty funny (even if you're not into Kalulu, you might enjoy it):

The No Talking Rule. (http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4469387/1/The_No_Talking_Rule)

Inferno Phoenyx
2008-09-09, 21:14
I found this fanfic pretty funny (even if you're not into Kalulu, you might enjoy it):

The No Talking Rule. (http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4469387/1/The_No_Talking_Rule)

I lol'd a lot.:heh:

Masterkeyes2
2008-09-10, 21:11
Okay third chapter for A Friend Indeed is out.

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4067912/3/A_Friend_Indeed

Haven't looked at the exact word count but its somewhere around 7,000 this time. Such a small number for the 5 months it took for me to get it out. Anyway now its time to start working on the outline for my original story and another Code Geass fiction plus the next chapter for AFI. Good thing I have plenty of free time now :)

Cal-Reflector
2008-09-14, 21:03
Writing has been on hold; law school calls.

On an unrelated note, staying true to the Code Geass canon seems like an almost impossible task (to me) now. I'm rather glad I get a relative clean slate (relative, because the UNDERLYING CORE SUPER IMPORTANT CONSPIRACY PLOT still happened and awaits addressing) because I began branching off from the canon time line in the beginning.

If I were attempting to writing a canon continuation fic from somewhere in the middle? I'd probably go nuts.

squaresphere
2008-09-15, 00:29
^ honestly Cal at this point I like your fic way better than the actual show. It was plenty of surprises and genuine emotional parts without having to go all twisty WTF or pulling something completely out of left field.

Really all the recent eps have really cheapened what season 1 set up as well as the characters themselves.

I mean they brought back Nunnally just to have a little (and i mean very little) angst for Lulu. The way LuSu bowl over it just cheapens that plot gimmick.

Hope law school works out so you can update your fic sooner than later :3

Cal-Reflector
2008-09-17, 00:57
I deleted my previous post so I wouldn't be double posting when I posted this:

http://community.livejournal.com/caveat__lector/40063.html

I think this is the best Code Geass fic I've read yet: A 6000 word fic about Clovis, from Clovis POV, on himself, his mother, Mariianne, and all his siblings as they grew up. The depth of character development is superior to what Sunrise has managed to accomplish in a whole season. It leaves you hungry for more.

This story has definitely raised the bar for me.

KrimzonStriker
2008-09-18, 23:12
Yoh Cal, just say a map of Britannia in the Geography thread on page 41, Pendragon is in Mexico!! :heh:

-KarumA-
2008-09-23, 15:00
Karu feels like celebrating she released chapter 60 of Realm of God today, omg 60 already and I just got half way hooray for that!
I made the story even longer now by adding a new plot twist and now I finally got all pointers figured out XD ha ha

Airi
2008-09-23, 15:29
Karu feels like celebrating she released chapter 60 of Realm of God today, omg 60 already and I just got half way hooray for that!
I made the story even longer now by adding a new plot twist and now I finally got all pointers figured out XD ha ha

Thanks Karuma!!!:D
I'm reading it now!!!:love:

Lunara
2008-09-25, 19:42
I found this fanfic pretty funny (even if you're not into Kalulu, you might enjoy it):

The No Talking Rule. (http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4469387/1/The_No_Talking_Rule)

Man I can't stop laughing from that!

Kyero Fox
2008-09-25, 20:41
In my Fan Fic a Dementional hole opens up to Armored Core's world causing them both to combine. and a Massive army of Nexts spill out of the hole and a voice echo's to both forces "This is the operator of White Glint...."

lol its a stupid Fan Fic that I just made up during work.

Cal-Reflector
2008-09-26, 11:07
In my Fan Fic a Dementional hole opens up to Armored Core's world causing them both to combine. and a Massive army of Nexts spill out of the hole and a voice echo's to both forces "This is the operator of White Glint...."

lol its a stupid Fan Fic that I just made up during work.

Well, maybe not to people who are fans of both series, but sadly I'm not familiar with Armored Core. Front Mission on the other hand...

Syphen
2008-09-26, 11:48
I found this fanfic pretty funny (even if you're not into Kalulu, you might enjoy it):

The No Talking Rule. (http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4469387/1/The_No_Talking_Rule)

I enjoyed reading it, quite entertaining.

Kyero Fox
2008-09-26, 15:10
Well, maybe not to people who are fans of both series, but sadly I'm not familiar with Armored Core. Front Mission on the other hand...

ah well.. Armored Cores couldn't really stand agenst Nightmares but... Armored Core's stand 5 times bigger than Nightmares, if all else fails they could win by Size.

In the Fan Fic my OC, the person Piloting White Glint and his Operator join Lelouches side, whats her name the tanned science chick upgrades the White glint to be able to match up agenst Nightmares like Kallen's.

I still don't have a GOOD reason for them to join Lelouch, but the other Armored Cores attack both sides, Lelouch and Britannia

Cal-Reflector
2008-09-26, 19:15
ah well.. Armored Cores couldn't really stand agenst Nightmares but... Armored Core's stand 5 times bigger than Nightmares, if all else fails they could win by Size.

In the Fan Fic my OC, the person Piloting White Glint and his Operator join Lelouches side, whats her name the tanned science chick upgrades the White glint to be able to match up agenst Nightmares like Kallen's.

I still don't have a GOOD reason for them to join Lelouch, but the other Armored Cores attack both sides, Lelouch and Britannia

Best of luck, but my guess is that you might have a hard time finding readers for a game-anime crossover.

And yeah, the No Talking Rule is pretty funny.

Kyero Fox
2008-09-26, 19:21
oh I don't right when I know people wont give two shits about it. I just do them in my head while I deal with Outside Work.

blitz1/2
2008-09-26, 20:27
In my Fan Fic a Dementional hole opens up to Armored Core's world causing them both to combine. and a Massive army of Nexts spill out of the hole and a voice echo's to both forces "This is the operator of White Glint...."

lol its a stupid Fan Fic that I just made up during work.

Armored core = win.

Working with Lulu = .....whatever.

Kyero Fox
2008-09-26, 22:34
Armored Cores > Nightmares

Rising Dragon
2008-09-27, 01:09
It'd be pretty interesting to see a bunch of Knightmare Frames swarming around an AC. Though I imagine they'd have an easier time destroying MTs.

lovescent
2008-09-27, 04:16
I deleted my previous post so I wouldn't be double posting when I posted this:

http://community.livejournal.com/caveat__lector/40063.html

I think this is the best Code Geass fic I've read yet: A 6000 word fic about Clovis, from Clovis POV, on himself, his mother, Mariianne, and all his siblings as they grew up. The depth of character development is superior to what Sunrise has managed to accomplish in a whole season. It leaves you hungry for more.

This story has definitely raised the bar for me.


wow, this is absloutly beautiful :).. it did raise a bar !!!! thanx for posting it ..

Dean_the_Young
2008-09-28, 19:42
I wrote a crack fic.

No Love for Tamaki (http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4562926/1/No_Love_For_Tamaki)

How crack is it? Take the summary.

Tamaki is a guy who gets no love. C.C. has no love left to give. Theirs is a hate-mock relationship. Tri-fic of a crack pairing never seen before.


Yes, that's right. A TamakixC.C. crack romance fic which is far more C.C. making Tamaki miserable than any sort of romance.

Dilla
2008-09-28, 21:25
^I read it. First, I was like :twitch:

Then I :eyespin:'d. Good job.

I wonder how long it takes for Code Geass fanfiction, on ff.net specifically, to come to a stall. The series is over and people will move to new fandoms. I hope the dubs would allow the fanfiction fandom to last a bit longer, but most people who watch the dubs suck at creating interesting stories. It wasn't that large to begin with.

Masterkeyes2
2008-09-28, 21:31
It's tough to say. Some series are still generating alot of traffic even though they have long since finished. I am not sure but I believe Death Note is one of these. It also depends how the finale may affect people.

yvj
2008-09-28, 21:32
With the ambiguous nature of the finale. There should be a torrent of new fanfics appearing over the next few months.

Dilla
2008-09-28, 21:38
It's tough to say. Some series are still generating alot of traffic even though they have long since finished. I am not sure but I believe Death Note is one of these. It also depends how the finale may affect people.Harry Potter is still going strong, I can find a new, readable stories pretty often. Naruto will probably still be pumping out stories at a decent rate when it ends.

Inuyasha, on the other hand, has basically stalled completely, especially my favorite fanon pairing, Inuyasha/Sango:mad:.

Masterkeyes2
2008-09-28, 22:04
Harry Potter is still going strong, I can find a new, readable stories pretty often. Naruto will probably still be pumping out stories at a decent rate when it ends.

Inuyasha, on the other hand, has basically stalled completely.

Naruto might as well be the Bible among the anime landscape for the amount of popularity it has. That said I the only way Naruto is going to die is when the world ends.

Micante
2008-09-28, 22:16
Dragon Ball Z also seems to be pumping out quite a number of fanfics.

*Prays that Code Geass fandom will live on.*

Lelouch: *Casts Geass* LIVE!

Magin
2008-09-28, 22:17
Naruto... is a subject I won't discuss

to get on topic, here's a little idea I ending up dreaming after I finished the series. I'm curious to see what y'all think (this is a very brief summary of a fanfic that may actually never come to light)-

10~15 years after the series ends, everyone has moved on with the passage of time, having grown in one way or another. But even with lelouch's sacrifice, Nunnally must still deal with problems, such as monetary, food, war bills, etc. (basically what we of this world face- Brittania may possibly been able to provide for a while, but I doubt it could hold for too long), and once again conflict is occuring. Not wanting a reapeat of what happened with Lelouch, Nunnally refuses to use KMF's and force to end these disputs, but is still caught in a pinch. At the same time, a young man is found traveling the world, slowly solving these problems as he travels the world. Word reaches "Zero" and Nunnally, and they also recognize these tactics as being far too similar to what lelouch would do. When they manage to meet him, he calls himself "the avatar of Lelouch"

... and no, this has nothing to do with A:TLA

just an idea, and there's more to this as well, as it combines a second idea I had into it

DeotoxSlayer
2008-09-28, 22:19
Naruto... is a subject I won't discuss

to get on topic, here's a little idea I ending up dreaming after I finished the series. I'm curious to see what y'all think (this is a very brief summary of a fanfic that may actually never come to light)-

10~15 years after the series ends, everyone has moved on with the passage of time, having grown in one way or another. But even with lelouch's sacrifice, Nunnally must still deal with problems, such as monetary, food, war bills, etc. (basically what we of this world face- Brittania may possibly been able to provide for a while, but I doubt it could hold for too long), and once again conflict is occuring. Not wanting a reapeat of what happened with Lelouch, Nunnally refuses to use KMF's and force to end these disputs, but is still caught in a pinch. At the same time, a young man is found traveling the world, slowly solving these problems as he travels the world. Word reaches "Zero" and Nunnally, and they also recognize these tactics as being far too similar to what lelouch would do. When they manage to meet him, he calls himself "the avatar of Lelouch"

... and no, this has nothing to do with A:TLA

just an idea, and there's more to this as well, as it combines a second idea I had into it

Sounds like a good idea, I'd like to read it if you ever write it.

Is C.C gonna be travelling with this Avatar of Lelouch?

Micante
2008-09-28, 22:22
Sounds like a good idea, I'd like to read it if you ever write it.

Is C.C gonna be travelling with this Avatar of Lelouch?

There will probably be an avatar of C.C. To make things more interesting... you should make the avatar of Lelouch a girl. >.<

Naruto might as well be the Bible among the anime landscape for the amount of popularity it has. That said I the only way Naruto is going to die is when the world ends.

"...and then Naruto walked on the water, but Sasuke betrayed him and stabbed him from behind. However, thanks to the will of the Hokages Naruto inherited, Naruto was reborn."

Worriors1
2008-09-28, 22:44
"...and then Naruto walked on the water, but Sasuke betrayed him and stabbed him from behind. However, thanks to the will of the Hokages Naruto inherited, Naruto was reborn."

Oh dude, that's.. That's just wrong, :heh:

Masterkeyes2
2008-09-28, 22:48
There will probably be an avatar of C.C. To make things more interesting... you should make the avatar of Lelouch a girl. >.<



"...and then Naruto walked on the water, but Sasuke betrayed him and stabbed him from behind. However, thanks to the will of the Hokages Naruto inherited, Naruto was reborn."

Actually Naruto reminds me more of Peter in some aspects, except Peter was never screaming about he was going to be Jesus one day.

Anyway I will probably posting a small slice-of-life C.C./Lelouch one-shot in a couple of days. It basically is a peek at there relationship living on the orange plantation with Anya and Jeremiah after the finale.

Dean_the_Young
2008-09-28, 22:55
^I read it. First, I was like :twitch:

Then I :eyespin:'d. Good job.
Ah, thanks. It's meant to be more crack and funny than serious romance. There's far too much "serious" romance in CG already, so crack pairings are far more interesting than ye old overdone cannon pairings. (I will never, for example, right a dedicated LelouchxCC/Shirley/Kallen, except for parody purposes.)


Oh, and I updated the second of three. It's more based around a word pun/innuendo than anything else, so it's less 'in character' than the first one. The third one will give a nice conclusion and reason why to the three.

I recently finished another, related-but-separate fic in the same vein that I'll post later this week after I finish its twinfic. Here's the title, to give you a hint.

"Go Tamaki, It's Your Birthday"



I wonder how long it takes for Code Geass fanfiction, on ff.net specifically, to come to a stall. The series is over and people will move to new fandoms. I hope the dubs would allow the fanfiction fandom to last a bit longer, but most people who watch the dubs suck at creating interesting stories. It wasn't that large to begin with.
The series is over in Japan, not the US. I'm not sure it even finished R1 yet in the US. And then there are reruns, for those who don't obsessively watch every episode as it comes out. So there's easily the better part of a year, assuming anyone watches it on CN.
Oh dude, that's.. That's just wrong, :heh:Indeed.

Everyone knows, assuming Naruto fanfiction mass = truth, that after stabbing Naruto Sasuke would proceed to make out with him.

Micante
2008-09-28, 22:58
Oh dude, that's.. That's just wrong, :heh:

Yeah, sorry about that. >.> Just wanted to point out main character walking on water thing. Although if Naruto follows the bible then...

NARUTO WILL DIE!!

Anyways, I just finished a V.V. fic I've been working on. Since it was on and off and took a few weeks, the mood drastically shifts throughotu the story and I can't even tell what genre it is anymore. >.<

I'll post it when I update my multi-chapter fic and if procrastination doesn't stick to me and not let go for weeks, probably sometime in the next few days.

Worriors1
2008-09-28, 23:19
Yeah, sorry about that. >.> Just wanted to point out main character walking on water thing. Although if Naruto follows the bible then...

NARUTO WILL DIE!!

Anyways, I just finished a V.V. fic I've been working on. Since it was on and off and took a few weeks, the mood drastically shifts throughotu the story and I can't even tell what genre it is anymore. >.<

I'll post it when I update my multi-chapter fic and if procrastination doesn't stick to me and not let go for weeks, probably sometime in the next few days.

Eh, nah. As long as you weren't compeletly serious. I'm just.. Bothered by that stuff.

Anyways, congratulations! You're actually getting stuff done. Everything I have to do is only.. Halfway finished, and I'm relying on my not-serious sinus infection as an excuse to do it later.

I'll be looking forward to the update, Micante, good luck. Also, remember, free times doesn't come to you, you have to make it. :heh:

Dilla
2008-09-28, 23:32
The series is over in Japan, not the US. I'm not sure it even finished R1 yet in the US. And then there are reruns, for those who don't obsessively watch every episode as it comes out. So there's easily the better part of a year, assuming anyone watches it on CN.
Indeed.I know, I said:
I wonder how long it takes for Code Geass fanfiction, on ff.net specifically, to come to a stall. The series is over and people will move to new fandoms. I hope the dubs would allow the fanfiction fandom to last a bit longer, but most people who watch the dubs suck at creating interesting stories. It wasn't that large to begin with.
From what I've seen anyway, Nate Grey is a pretty good author(he's going off the dubs), though.

It's on episode 22 of the first season on the dub by the way. I watch it, it's a pretty good dub imo and it's interesting to re-watch the series in English, like a new experience.

Jays
2008-09-28, 23:33
This was something I came up with after listening to one too many Pantera songs.

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I propose a distopian future, whereby the people and individuals from the past, realize that although they have attained "peace", they indeed do not fully grasp what peace truly is. This of course is the result of Lelouch's master plan, which although succeeded, did not seep deep within the hearts of the people whom he so desperately wished to set free.

To this extent, in my future, set five years after the events of the final episode, pits a grief-stricken Suzaku who has reached his limit, realizes that he is no wielder, but rather he is a sword. The shoes that he must fill are far too huge for him to ever be able to understand, and thusly he is having a hard time coping with the life he lives. The true pain in his heart though isn't his love for the dead Euphemia, but rather not being able to show the world how much his best friend had to suffer to the very end, something that he did himself did not realize until well after his death.

Nunally, the beloved sister of Lelouch and Empress of Britannia, has become obsessed with finding the truth behind the lies of her brother and family. Having been deeply scared twice by having her mother and brother die in her hands she is unable to deal with the present circumstances of the world. In short she has begun to revere her older brother as a God amongst men, losing her patience with anyone who dares to sully his name in her presence. Henceforth she, much like her farther, in denial, seeks to bring back the past, if not at the very least, be able to see her older brother once more, who's corpse was immidiately removed from that very day of his assassination.

-

Well it totally isn't a distopian future for the world, but one for the characters of Code Geass, who now realize that Lelouch was something more than them, someone whom transcended the very lives of men. I want to create a world where - and this is just an analogy, and the legalities of said individuals can discussed later, so please do not be offended - people truly did not understand what Jesus gave to them, but in a personal manner.

In essence, by attempting to shoulder the burden by himself, Lelouch inadvertantly hid the problems of this very world from the people that he wished to protect; upon unloading it, the burden became far too heavy for anyone to ever imagine. Indeed it depicts a world that needs a God, a world that needs the true Zero, something Suzaku laments as Lelouch himself not realizing the hell he has unleashed.

-

In truth I wish to explore the meaning of words like peace, good, happiness, love, ect. Do we really all understand them? Are we capeable of doing good? Is everyone truly equal? Was the Emperor right when he said that no one is created equal? Was V.V. right when he said that Lelouch and Charles were indeed the very same?

Did Lelouch really create a new world, or did he give the past a chance to redeem themselves? Was he really looking into the future, or was Lelouch simply trying to give people happiness? Only he knows...

chryss
2008-09-29, 02:28
This was something I came up with after listening to one too many Pantera songs.

-

I propose a distopian future, whereby the people and individuals from the past, realize that although they have attained "peace", they indeed do not fully grasp what peace truly is. This of course is the result of Lelouch's master plan, which although succeeded, did not seep deep within the hearts of the people whom he so desperately wished to set free.

To this extent, in my future, set five years after the events of the final episode, pits a grief-stricken Suzaku who has reached his limit, realizes that he is no wielder, but rather he is a sword. The shoes that he must fill are far too huge for him to ever be able to understand, and thusly he is having a hard time coping with the life he lives. The true pain in his heart though isn't his love for the dead Euphemia, but rather not being able to show the world how much his best friend had to suffer to the very end, something that he did himself did not realize until well after his death.

Nunally, the beloved sister of Lelouch and Empress of Britannia, has become obsessed with finding the truth behind the lies of her brother and family. Having been deeply scared twice by having her mother and brother die in her hands she is unable to deal with the present circumstances of the world. In short she has begun to revere her older brother as a God amongst men, losing her patience with anyone who dares to sully his name in her presence. Henceforth she, much like her farther, in denial, seeks to bring back the past, if not at the very least, be able to see her older brother once more, who's corpse was immidiately removed from that very day of his assassination.

-

Well it totally isn't a distopian future for the world, but one for the characters of Code Geass, who now realize that Lelouch was something more than them, someone whom transcended the very lives of men. I want to create a world where - and this is just an analogy, and the legalities of said individuals can discussed later, so please do not be offended - people truly did not understand what Jesus gave to them, but in a personal manner.

In essence, by attempting to shoulder the burden by himself, Lelouch inadvertantly hid the problems of this very world from the people that he wished to protect; upon unloading it, the burden became far too heavy for anyone to ever imagine. Indeed it depicts a world that needs a God, a world that needs the true Zero, something Suzaku laments as Lelouch himself not realizing the hell he has unleashed.

-

In truth I wish to explore the meaning of words like peace, good, happiness, love, ect. Do we really all understand them? Are we capeable of doing good? Is everyone truly equal? Was the Emperor right when he said that no one is created equal? Was V.V. right when he said that Lelouch and Charles were indeed the very same?

Did Lelouch really create a new world, or did he give the past a chance to redeem themselves? Was he really looking into the future, or was Lelouch simply trying to give people happiness? Only he knows...


You have there same interesting ideas and yes I would like to read and comment your story.
Lelouchs end kind of shocked me. :twitch:
I'm not to happy with the directors choice to let the main protagonist die and make him the Scapegoat of the world.:(

-KarumA-
2008-09-29, 13:39
plot bunnies ate my brain, I started a new story though not a long runner, this one will be around 20 or more chapters

Title: Code Geass: Requiem
Summary:
A man walks this world, his name and history unknown however the face he carries is one of a man who has sinned, a man he doesn't remember being, a man named Lelouch vi Britannia



“And now the world can be unified at one table, not through military force, but through negotiation and talk. It can embrace the future.”

2018 was now the year that the World had begun to change, it was the year that the angel on wings had stabbed the Devil in his heart and thereby had changed hell into Eden. The angel’s mask merely hid the fact that underneath his wings there were still horns, he would remain masked to hide this devilish feature so that he could serve as the messiah above them all.

However the death of the Devil is not eternal. He reopened his eyes when he was finally able to take in a deep breath of air, the dust in it made him cough and his eyes narrowed and filled with tears as he smelled the earth within the air he breathed. There was nothing but darkness and his hands clung up only to feel a wooden surface above and with that came panic. His hands rubbed against the surface as if looking for a hatch but there was nothing, the hands however didn’t stop looking and the speed with which they passed over the surface increased as well as his breathing.

“I don’t want to die”

He whimpered out as his nails dug deeper into the surface, he was afraid and remained still in hope that there would be help coming from outside to aid him but it remained dead quiet. He hated this silence.



typing chapter one now X3

Cal-Reflector
2008-09-29, 19:22
plot bunnies ate my brain, I started a new story though not a long runner, this one will be around 20 or more chapters

Title: Code Geass: Requiem
Summary:
A man walks this world, his name and history unknown however the face he carries is one of a man who has sinned, a man he doesn't remember being, a man named Lelouch vi Britannia



“And now the world can be unified at one table, not through military force, but through negotiation and talk. It can embrace the future.”

2018 was now the year that the World had begun to change, it was the year that the angel on wings had stabbed the Devil in his heart and thereby had changed hell into Eden. The angel’s mask merely hid the fact that underneath his wings there were still horns, he would remain masked to hide this devilish feature so that he could serve as the messiah above them all.

However the death of the Devil is not eternal. He reopened his eyes when he was finally able to take in a deep breath of air, the dust in it made him cough and his eyes narrowed and filled with tears as he smelled the earth within the air he breathed. There was nothing but darkness and his hands clung up only to feel a wooden surface above and with that came panic. His hands rubbed against the surface as if looking for a hatch but there was nothing, the hands however didn’t stop looking and the speed with which they passed over the surface increased as well as his breathing.

“I don’t want to die”

He whimpered out as his nails dug deeper into the surface, he was afraid and remained still in hope that there would be help coming from outside to aid him but it remained dead quiet. He hated this silence.



typing chapter one now X3

AHHHHHHH..... a Lelouch lives fic. So many ways that that one could be played around with. Good potential there. Good luck with that.

I have a question: Clovis and Cornelia are hugely popular characters, but they both ordered the massacre of Japanese civilians. Does anyone wonder why most fans don't seem to mind that aspect of their character? I'm curious because for something so heinous, I don't hold it against them. It's as if: "Clovis is fabulous, so I'll overlook his war crime..." I don't understand myself either.

Masterkeyes2
2008-09-29, 20:33
AHHHHHHH..... a Lelouch lives fic. So many ways that that one could be played around with. Good potential there. Good luck with that.

I have a question: Clovis and Cornelia are hugely popular characters, but they both ordered the massacre of Japanese civilians. Does anyone wonder why most fans don't seem to mind that aspect of their character? I'm curious because for something so heinous, I don't hold it against them. It's as if: "Clovis is fabulous, so I'll overlook his war crime..." I don't understand myself either.

Same reason people overlook what Lelouch as done I guess, all of them have redeeming parts to them but the good parts are far and few between.

I like Cornelia because she is a respectable army commander, as respectable as they get in Code Geass, in season 1. She doesn't like to forsake men but is also strict about following orders. Also she made for a good protagonist 1st season.

Clovis some people like simply for the sound episode he was in. And for the fact that its hinted that he actually liked the Lamperouge's despite the commoner status.

Funny enough in the national poll for Code Geass in USA he made number first. Rivalz 2, Lelouch 3, Shirley 4, C.C. 5.

Lunara
2008-09-30, 21:14
I recommend this story to those that want a more of what happens after the end...

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4564883/1/Immortal_Penance

Revolutionist
2008-09-30, 22:11
I recommend this story to those that want a more of what happens after the end...

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4564883/1/Immortal_Penance

Lol that story is pretty good. I enjoyed reading it for sure :)

Kyero Fox
2008-09-30, 22:25
in my Fan fic... wierd shit happens between Kallen and my OC's mechs (White Glint and Gurran).......... -_-

They Combine, I've yet to think of a ... non cracked up reason why yet.

Magin
2008-09-30, 22:37
Immortal penance... if I can put aside my pride about FF.net, then it's gettinga review that basically goes, WANT MOAR. NAO

Knight_of_Zero
2008-10-01, 01:35
White Glint... is a pain. I swear it never dies...

Anyways, 2nd attempt: I have no great hopes but this time I'm writing with a friend, so...
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4513350/1/Code_Geass_The_Lost

Kyero Fox
2008-10-01, 07:09
White Glint... is a pain. I swear it never dies...

Anyways, 2nd attempt: I have no great hopes but this time I'm writing with a friend, so...
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4513350/1/Code_Geass_The_Lost

Just use large explosive Granade Launchers to beat him(and yes the pilot is a guy)

anyways on topic, ur Fan Fic looks pretty good :)

hikaprincess
2008-10-01, 07:31
Umm...hello everyone!
Here is a fanfic I wrote after viewing episode 25.


Morning’s Arrival
“Zero Requiem----- to give this world another chance at happiness”

Broken by his very own sins
Weighed down by his sense of loss
Zero Requiem was created
Offering this world another choice

This lonely little world in total darkness
Trapped in a bubble of ominous stillness
What would he have done
To free it from this endless cycle?

He himself had crushed many tomorrows
Leaving the world in sorrow
But for all the futures made gone
A brighter one will soon be born

Zero Requiem had been a beautiful song
A song the world waited for so long
Never for a tragic funeral
Better befitting an eternal choir

At the breaking of dawn
Zero Requiem was commenced
The sword had already been drawn
And soon it was done

With a smile he ended his song
Giving the world the happiness it longed
Allowing the storm to clear above his head
Before quietly fading away

He had wait for dawn patiently
Despite knowing that he would be
Gone eternally.

He did not fear the imminent cold
For he knew no one else
Would be cold again

He did not fear the silent darkness
For he knew the future
Will always be brighter.

Morning has arrived, you can now close your eyes…


I am sorry if this really sucks. The brain working here is only thirteen...sigh~
And english is not my native language either...
So my poem kinda lost its pattern...T.T

Knight_of_Zero
2008-10-01, 10:21
Just use large explosive Granade Launchers to beat him(and yes the pilot is a guy)

anyways on topic, ur Fan Fic looks pretty good :)

Thanks!

I tend to go for medium mobility and sniper rifles, so...
I'll try the grenade launchers. BTW, is it even possible to damage it before the #1 pilot is killed?

Kyero Fox
2008-10-01, 12:06
Thanks!

I tend to go for medium mobility and sniper rifles, so...
I'll try the grenade launchers. BTW, is it even possible to damage it before the #1 pilot is killed?

I wont spoil it, if White Glint takes him out before u beat White Glint it doesn't mean game over.

White glint goes after you most of the time anyways.

Rising Dragon
2008-10-01, 12:08
This is Code Geass fanfiction thread.

Not Armored Core 4 strategy guide.

Keep it on topic, guys.

Kyero Fox
2008-10-01, 12:24
But Armored Core has somethin to do with my Fan Fic of Code Geass D: but yea, Sorry.. I didn't mean to go off topic, I just wanted to help him/her

for a little more oN topic stuff.... in my Fan Fic of Code Geass I made it a bit more of a Mech Anime XD

Knight_of_Zero
2008-10-01, 14:06
But Armored Core has somethin to do with my Fan Fic of Code Geass D: but yea, Sorry.. I didn't mean to go off topic, I just wanted to help him/her

for a little more oN topic stuff.... in my Fan Fic of Code Geass I made it a bit more of a Mech Anime XD

Darn, I keep on going off topic.

Anyways, I am slightly stuck on ch3...
No I'm not... will upload soon.

No, I'm stuck on Ch 4....

It may be a little clumsy at first, but I promise the end of the chapter will make up for it, so...

JDCT
2008-10-02, 00:25
Hey guys. Thought I'd let you know I'm starting a pretty long Code Geass story. Basically picks up after the events of the series. I got to thinking about the way things were left in the story, and came up with some really interesting ideas. Here's my summary on fanfiction.com:

Continued Story
In the wake of the 99th Emperor's death, Britannia tries to cope with a fundamentally changed world. Some plot to destroy the fruit of his sacrifice. Those who knew him lament that his peace will not last. All true stories are continuing stories.

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4570839/1/Continued_Story

Yeah, it's named for the song that plays at the end of episode 25.
Enjoy. More will be coming soon.

Dilla
2008-10-02, 00:53
Surprisingly, there has been a rush of angsty Kallen/Lelouch's Spirit fanfiction on ff.net since the series ended. I thought there would be more 'Lelouch is alive' C.C./Lelouch fanfiction. I'm genuinely surprised.

Kang Seung Jae
2008-10-02, 00:55
Surprisingly, there has been a rush of angsty Kallen/Lelouch's Spirit fanfiction on ff.net since the series ended. I thought there would be more 'Lelouch is alive' C.C./Lelouch fanfiction. I'm genuinely surprised.

Links would be appreciated.

Dilla
2008-10-02, 01:03
Links would be appreciated.
A Place for Flowers (http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4569552/1/A_Place_for_Flowers)

It's In the Way You Remember

No More Tears (http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4570809/1/No_More_Tears)

One More Chance (http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4561902/1/One_More_Chance)- This is actually before the finale, but whatever.

FoxxFireArt
2008-10-02, 02:49
So, out of curiosity.
Does anyone know about when to expect the latest Newtype and other magazines to be released? It is usually the first Friday of that month, or just within the first 10 or so days?

I remember last month they didn't come out until after the episode aired on the 7th. Made sense or otherwise it would of spoiled Kallen and Lelouch's kiss.
It feels pretty good Kallen and Lelouch got the last real kiss of the series. Her kiss had the best mood to and they teased up to it for most of the second season.
That's got to count for something. Not to mention she wears the key to her Guren so openly for all to see. That was Lelouch's gift to her.

blottyparchment
2008-10-02, 08:58
Surprisingly, there has been a rush of angsty Kallen/Lelouch's Spirit fanfiction on ff.net since the series ended. I thought there would be more 'Lelouch is alive' C.C./Lelouch fanfiction. I'm genuinely surprised.


Because the Lelouch is alive/LLxCC believers would express themselves more by drawing fanart, whereas KallenxLL fans would rather channel their frustration/angst/feelings/whatever-you-call-it into writing fanfiction. Angst translates better in writing. :heh:

-KarumA-
2008-10-02, 10:46
So, out of curiosity.
Does anyone know about when to expect the latest Newtype and other magazines to be released? It is usually the first Friday of that month, or just within the first 10 or so days?

I remember last month they didn't come out until after the episode aired on the 7th. Made sense or otherwise it would of spoiled Kallen and Lelouch's kiss.
It feels pretty good Kallen and Lelouch got the last real kiss of the series. Her kiss had the best mood to and they teased up to it for most of the second season.
That's got to count for something. Not to mention she wears the key to her Guren so openly for all to see. That was Lelouch's gift to her.

Don't know the exact answer but this isnt the right topic to ask, I suggest asking elsewhere =)

I also added the first chapter of Requiem for those interested:
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4566113/2/Code_Geass_Requiem

FoxxFireArt
2008-10-02, 13:53
Don't know the exact answer but this isnt the right topic to ask, I suggest asking elsewhere =)

I also added the first chapter of Requiem for those interested:
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4566113/2/Code_Geass_Requiem

Ah, I clicked on the wrong thread. I thought I hit General Discussion.

Knight_of_Zero
2008-10-03, 02:25
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4513350/4/Code_Geass_The_Lost
New chapter added.

Dilla
2008-10-03, 03:12
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4542786/1/Aftermath

Called Aftermath, it's a 'What If' based on Lelouch being captured by Kallen in that hangar during episode 24 and Schniezel had won the war. Pretty good start, though the chapters are a bit short.

It's Kallen/Lelouch centric, their pairing together isn't confirmed.

roon
2008-10-03, 06:03
A Place for Flowers (http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4569552/1/A_Place_for_Flowers)

It's In the Way You Remember

No More Tears (http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4570809/1/No_More_Tears)

One More Chance (http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4561902/1/One_More_Chance)- This is actually before the finale, but whatever.

Goodness, those were depressing but beautiful (especially It's In the Way You Remember). Definitely upping my urge to fanart...

hikaprincess
2008-10-03, 08:46
I wrote another story.
About some side characters of CG. Reviews appreciated. :)
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4571148/1/A_Ballad_to_Sing_Tonight

feels OOC...

linkinstreet
2008-10-03, 10:03
Lol, gonna do a oneshot fanfic after finals papers are finished and also my work that I promised my boss is sent. A Kalulu fanfic where she is sitting in her home, and then she saw a letter addressed to "Q-1". Guessing (correctly) who sent it, she would then utter the non existent gumline to the letter's owner.

Cal-Reflector
2008-10-03, 12:12
Lol, gonna do a oneshot fanfic after finals papers are finished and also my work that I promised my boss is sent. A Kalulu fanfic where she is sitting in her home, and then she saw a letter addressed to "Q-1". Guessing (correctly) who sent it, she would then utter the non existent gumline to the letter's owner.

That's a fantastic premise! Hope it turns out well.

A character question: Nina, just about no one likes her, and one of the reasons for that is because of her racism. But what's the reason for her racism? We see of course that many common Britannians (excluding nobles and soldiers) are racist, but these are more of what we'd expect; indifference to suffering, bullying, and sense of superiority. Nina's hatred seems borne out of a deep rooted fear instilled by a traumatic event--my friend suggested that perhaps her parents raised her to be racist, but that wouldn't make sense, as then she would feel superior rather afraid.

My conclusion, which I will then apply in my story, is that either she was attacked and/or raped or witnessed such an event on someone close to her. I am no expert in rape-victim psychology, but such an event may account for her emotional instability as well (see; response to Euphie's death, outburst at Milly at party).

Also, chapter 15 is now 7000 words long.

Masterkeyes2
2008-10-03, 12:53
That's a fantastic premise! Hope it turns out well.

A character question: Nina, just about no one likes her, and one of the reasons for that is because of her racism. But what's the reason for her racism? We see of course that many common Britannians (excluding nobles and soldiers) are racist, but these are more of what we'd expect; indifference to suffering, bullying, and sense of superiority. Nina's hatred seems borne out of a deep rooted fear instilled by a traumatic event--my friend suggested that perhaps her parents raised her to be racist, but that wouldn't make sense, as then she would feel superior rather afraid.

My conclusion, which I will then apply in my story, is that either she was attacked and/or raped or witnessed such an event on someone close to her. I am no expert in rape-victim psychology, but such an event may account for her emotional instability as well (see; response to Euphie's death, outburst at Milly at party).

Also, chapter 15 is now 7000 words long.

I was actually just watching the episode 8 of season 1 the other and wondered the same thing. Millay holds her hand when they are heading through the sub-way tunnel's and says "Don't worry it's not scary like the Ghettos. We won't leave you behind the second time."

So I concur with your conclusion Cal, she was either attacked or harmed in some way by the Japanese. I didn't hate her persay I just found her character rather shallow at first-it seemed like her constant presence in season 1 was to highlight the fact that Suzaku was an Eleven.

Dilla
2008-10-03, 13:46
Also, chapter 15 is now 7000 words long.This is good news, from what you were posting a couple of days ago, I thought you had discontinued.

As for Nina, I had thought her parents had been killed by a Japanese person or group with her present when she was young, like Bruce Wayne. If you don't know to much about rape psychology, I wouldn't go near it, unless you're only hinting at it.

Nogitsune
2008-10-03, 14:42
Hm... I really want to write a crossover. o.o
But how do you mix Code Geass with Prince of Tennis? xD
Oh my... I'm such a damn fangirl.
But I'll find a solution! xD

Masterkeyes2
2008-10-03, 17:02
This the inner StarWars nerd inside me speaking but I think a KOTOR story with Code Geass characters inserted inside would be a cool idea. I think Lelouch could be a Revan easily.

Dilla
2008-10-04, 01:35
Any smut/lemon fans up in here, up in here?

If the answer is 'yes' then I have a story for you.

The Castaway Prince (http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4350466/1/The_Castaway_Prince)

Don't worry, it's very well written and it has a great plot, starting with Kallen being rescued around the episode 13 area. Btw, it's C.C./Lelouch/Kallen.

dec4rhapsody
2008-10-04, 10:41
Anyone who reads Chinese here?
红莲之眼 (http://kongjian.baidu.com/lilymgxp/blog/item/9007210a4f307f38b0351d12.html)
Post-series, Kallen centric + Kalulu, surreal connections with Spice and Wolf
That fic made me cry....















Uh...cute Kagino fic...I guess I'm already sold. *dies*
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4554215/1/Better

Shadowcatch
2008-10-08, 02:01
Anyone know of some good C.C. Lelouch ones? I'm a total sucker for those two, ever was since they were introduced. Oh and if it is not a bother anyone mind checking a few of mine out? Any type of feedback would be helpful, I constantly am looking to improve. my pen name of fanfiction.net is FireIceWindEarth. Thanks in advance!

kazuki_yuki92
2008-10-10, 03:42
someone has fanfic lelouch x C.C?sharing please ^ ^

Levy
2008-10-10, 10:19
Uh...cute Kagino fic...I guess I'm already sold. *dies*
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4554215/1/Better

I recommend this too, altought not being a Karen/Gino fan, I found this piece particulary lovely and nice with characterization.
(thanks for posting it again - wanna share it with a KaGino friend but lost track of it and couldn't find back <3)

Dean_the_Young
2008-10-13, 22:02
I was actually just watching the episode 8 of season 1 the other and wondered the same thing. Millay holds her hand when they are heading through the sub-way tunnel's and says "Don't worry it's not scary like the Ghettos. We won't leave you behind the second time."

So I concur with your conclusion Cal, she was either attacked or harmed in some way by the Japanese. I didn't hate her persay I just found her character rather shallow at first-it seemed like her constant presence in season 1 was to highlight the fact that Suzaku was an Eleven.
I've always suspected that it goes a mite farther than just "harmed in some way." Going by her near terror around most any Japanese male, the left-behind reference, the behavior of Japanese men to solitary Britanians in the ghetto, and Nina's, ahem, batting for the other team tendencies, I think that the sub-tone suggestions are that Nina, left behind in the Ghettos one time, was victim of the oldest form of revenge, and that's what's left her as she is.

Skellington2612
2008-10-13, 23:42
I heard there are tones of Kalulu fics in japanese... care to share a link??
I´ll try to translate once I´m off school...

Cal-Reflector
2008-10-14, 11:42
I heard there are tones of Kalulu fics in japanese... care to share a link??
I´ll try to translate once I´m off school...

http://search.geass.info/html/04_01_03.html

The Japanese as far as I know don't have a ff.net, they have fansite search engines. Here's 92 fansites who have ID their site as containing the tag "Normal Love: Lulu-Kallen."

blottyparchment
2008-10-14, 13:02
Dragging this from the Kallen thread into its proper thread.

There's this beautiful jap fic that would have perfectly captured Lelouch's thoughts after the kiss in turn 22. You can read it here (http://karasora221.web.fc2.com/nov/n10.html), but link's not working right now, so I'll post the whole stuff here:

愚者の繰言

君は、あまりにも愚かしい。そして、等しく愚かなのは。

くちびるが離れ、こちらを見つめる瞳は揺らいでいる。
何も言わず、ただ見ていると、諦めたように視線をそらした。
「さようなら、ルルーシュ」
君にそんな声を出させてはいけなかった。もっと徹底的に嫌われるように終わらせなければならな かった。
「最高評議会は体育館で行う予定です」
事務的な口調。そしてカレンは遠ざかっていく。
「さようなら、カレン」
別れは、俺から告げねばならなかったのに。
君がさっさと見切りをつけて、忘れられるように。冷たく威張り散らして、嫌われるように。
どうしてそれをしないのか。
こんなふうにいじましく君に聞こえないようにしか、君に言われた後でしか別れを告げられないの か。
君のような愚直な人間を騙すのは簡単だ。嘘をつくのを呼吸をするように自然にやれる自信もある 。
それなのに、できなかった。詰めが甘すぎる。
あの時、「君は生きろ」といわなければ、カレンはもう整理をつけてここに来ないで済んだかもし れないのに。
嫌われることを、これほどに恐れている。

頭は悪くないのに、愚かしいほどまっすぐな君は、ただの利用しやすい駒のはずだった。
演出に簡単に酔って、ゼロのことをすぐに信じきるようになって。
ちょっと弱みをつつけばころころと表情を変えて反応する。
刷り込みでこちらを親だと思っているひよこをからかうときのように、ただ愛らしいと思っていたくらいだった 。
君と母親の事情を知って、わずかに自分の姿と重ねて、他の駒より目をかけていただけで、特別な感情は何もな かった。
見捨てて逃げたのだって、別にたいした問題だとは思わなかった。どうせ目の前のスザクへの憎しみだけで俺の 目はくらんでいたのだから。

君が俺を連れ戻しに来たのだって、利用できる力を取り戻したかっただけだと思っていた。
C.C.と違って、カレンは俺である必要はないはずだったから。
ただ仲間を取り戻すためには、俺の力が必要だと考えただけだろう。
真面目で仲間想いなカレンがそういうふうに考えるのは当然で。
そう思っていた。

いつでも手放せるようにしていたかった。
大事なものを増やしたくなかった。
幾度も幾度も嫌われるようなことをして、嫌われるように仕向けて。
それでも君はやってくる。
辛いときに、諦めたときに。
君が言葉を求めるのは、言葉なしで成り立っていた信頼を俺が裏切ったからだ。
それなのに、また言葉で裏切り続けているのに、君はやってきた。
何度もやってきて、そのたびに裏切られた君は泣くのだ。
そして、今日は、泣くことすらできていなかった君。

君にかけた言葉は、奇しくもスザクにかけたギアスと同じで、全く別の意味で呪いとして君を縛り付けてしまっ たのだろうか。
カレンが想いの意味に気づかないうちに、嫌われて終わりにするのが一番だったのに。

それなのに、嫌われることがこんなにも恐ろしい。
カレン、君が最初から好意を持たなければこんなことにはならなかった。
俺に何かを求めるという愚かしい行為をしなければよかった。
ひたむきな君が、こんな人間に好意を持つ必要はなかったのに。

君は生きて、幸せになれ。
俺の目に映らないところで。
光に誘われる羽虫のように、ふらふらと吸い寄せられずにに済むように。

自分を壊す覚悟ができても、君を壊す覚悟ができない。

だから

俺は、この感情に名前を付けはしない。



I made a translation of it. Translation isn't perfect and word-for-word. Haven't had anyone else beta-read it, so feel free to correct any translation or grammar mistakes. I had to rephrase a few lines differently from the original for, you know, artistic or not so artistic license...^^ I don't think I did it enough justice, but here it is:


A Fool's Tedious Talk
Reminder: This is a translation of a fanfic. Not be taken as canon, but the context is after the kiss in Turn 22.

You are too foolish. And then, I am equally foolish.

When our lips parted, you gazed at me, your eyes trembling.
Without saying more, you just looked at me and turned your gaze away in abandonment.
"Goodbye, Lelouch."
I could not let out my voice, to be more thorough in letting it end in hatred.
"The Supreme Council will convene in the gym."
She said in a business-like manner. Then, Kallen walked away.
"Goodbye, Kallen."
Even if I didn't say my part in this farewell.
To make you give up right away, so that you would forget me. To act like the cold-blooded tyrant, so that you would hate me.
Why didn't I do it?
Why did I only say my farewell after yours and in this manner of letting my words be unheard by you, who are only someone insignificant?
It is easy to deceive such an simple and honest girl like you. I have confidence that I can lie as naturally as breathing.
Yet, I couldn't do it.
At that time, if I didn't tell her to "Live on", Kallen would probably not have arranged to come here to meet me.
I feared to be hated this much.

You are not stupid, but a foolish and straight person like you should be easy to manipulate.
I have yet to easily draw you into Zero's performance, and you would easily believe his words.
If I stab at your weakness for a bit, your expression would change frequently.
Like when one makes fun of the chick who mistakens a drawing for its parent, I just thought that was charming.
When I understood about you and your mother's circumstance, I saw myself in you for a little bit. I favored you more than my other (chess) pieces, but there was no special feeling in it.
When you deserted me, I thought that it wasn't particularly a significant problem for me, because at the moment, my eyes were dazzled by my hatred towards Suzaku, who was in front of me.

Even if she came to bring me back, I thought that she was only trying to regain a power she could use.
Kallen was different from C.C.. she should have no need for me.
Just for the sake of taking back your comrades, she considered needing my power.
It would only be natural for Kallen, who was seriously concerned for her comrades.
That's what I thought.

I always wanted to relinquish everything.
I didn't want to add more to those that I considered precious.
Time and time again I did something hateful, cause you to hate me.
But still, you keep coming back.
You who seek my words, I broke your faith established on nothing but words.
And again, even if I continued to betray you with words, you still came back.
However many times you keep returning, while you felt betrayed, you cried.
And today, your tears couldn't fall.

The words that I cast on you, strangely they were similar to the geass that I cast on Suzaku. Would you still have been tied to me if I cursed you with a spell that meant something else entirely?
It would have been best if I did not notice the significance of Kallen's feelings, ended it all in hate.

Despite that, I dreaded to be hated this much.
Kallen, if you did not hold such good will from the very beginning, it would not have to be like this.
It would have been better if you did not commit these foolish acts, seeking things from me.
The single-minded you did not have to hold man in such good will.

Live on, be happy,
in a place where my eyes can't reach.
Let it end like a small insect who was tempted by the light, but let it keep away from the light, staggering on its wings. (2)

Even if I have the resolution to break myself, I do not have the resolution to break you. (3)

That's why,

I won't put a name to these feelings that I have.

Notes:
(1)The exact line is: "Like when one makes fun of the chick who thinks a print out is its parent, I just thought that was charming."
(2) It's like a metaphor for the firefly who gets attraced to the light, only to get fried or end up dead. In the fic, what Lelouch wants this time, is for the insect to not go to the light. Just like how Kallen was attracted to Lelouch. He does not want her to follow his path. Note that this is fiction-verse, but it sort of holds true canonwise, don't you yhink?
(3) Fic-wise, I believe this line says that Lelouch may be prepared to destroy himself, but he could not do the same to Kallen.

*The fanfic itself is confusing because it switches back and forth from third person (when Lelouch says Kallen's name) to second person (when Lelouch uses 'you' or doesn't use it at all). It's like, he's talking and not talking to her at the same time..:heh:

*Some sentences are broken off because the japanese text was written that way and couldn't translate it any other manner.

The last few lines are very beautiful. Quite Lulu-ish, if I must say.

Elicit
2008-10-14, 22:19
No love for any (good) Gino x Anya fics...? I guess Gino x Kallen got the hype on this end of the stick...

kazuki_yuki92
2008-10-17, 08:03
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4212727/1/The_Inconvenient_Truth

here..that lelouch and C.C fanfic~

darthfury78
2008-10-19, 12:28
Are there any Milly x Lelouch fanfiction?

Dilla
2008-10-19, 14:43
Are there any Milly x Lelouch fanfiction?http://www.fanfiction.net/anime/Code_Geass/10/0/1/1/0/3809/3828/0/0/1/

All three of them on ff.net right there. All three of them are decent.

Cal-Reflector
2008-10-20, 03:16
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3816236/15/Code_Geass_Lelouch_of_Brittania

Chapter 15: Kampfgruppe Kewell

Whew...

EDIT: Holy crap "The Measure of Greatness" and "Friends Indeed" were frigging amazing! *Spouting gibberish* Why didn't I read these sooner? Where have I been this past year??

Shuuda
2008-10-20, 03:35
Well, I may as well post a link to the first chapter of my fan-fiction here, just for kicks really.

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4605320/1/Code_Geass_The_Sutherland_Mask

I do hope that you will enjoy it. And here is a small preview for the next chapter.

“Good?” He chuckled boldly. “Why I am Garret Silverstone, one of the finest pilots in all of Britannia! Why, they even wanted me to be in the Knight of the Rounds...” Garret sighed and rested for a moment, conjuring up more fantasies. “But, I refused. I didn't want grumpy old Bismarck getting too jealous of me.”

“Bismarck? Is he a pilot too?” Sutherland was fascinated, it was like a wonderful bedtime story to him.

“Aye, and a good one at that, but not in my league. Heck, he couldn't beat me in a duel even if... even if he could see into the future.”

Claies
2008-10-21, 00:56
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3816236/15/Code_Geass_Lelouch_of_Brittania

Chapter 15: Kampfgruppe Kewell

Whew...

EDIT: Holy crap "The Measure of Greatness" and "Friends Indeed" were frigging amazing! *Spouting gibberish* Why didn't I read these sooner? Where have I been this past year??

Even if you stop the fic now, this chapter will stay as a crowning achievement.

Droplet
2008-10-21, 11:40
Hi, I'm just beginning to read CG fanfiction. To anyone who reads this, would you mind sharing the best fics you've ever read regarding CG? Kindly send it through PM or post it here. I'll be very grateful. :D

dec4rhapsody
2008-10-22, 01:58
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4609371/1/For_Two

This fic broke me...
Sigh, all the heartbreak/angst/I-don't-even-know-how-to-describe-it-anymore that is Kalulu.

Droplet
2008-10-22, 08:25
I absolutely adored how bittersweet that was. Thank you.

inconstant_heart
2008-10-22, 09:27
Did you have a specific character/pairing/genre you were looking for? I'm mostly a Lelouch/Kallen girl, so I can't recommend you many that aren't L/K, but I'll try! :)

General:

Flash in the Pan (http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4090828/1/Flash_in_the_Pan)

Orchid and Rose (http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4542549/1/Orchid_and_Rose)

The House of Usher (http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4434820/1/The_House_of_Usher)

Tamaki/C.C.:

No Love For Tamaki (http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4562926/1/No_Love_For_Tamaki)

Villetta/Ougi:

Weakness (http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4401703/1/Weakness)

Lelouch/Kallen:

Metal Heart (http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3721910/1/Metal_Heart)

Breaking Queens (http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4530550/1/Breaking_Queens)

Stratagem (http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4410436/1/Stratagem)

Thirteen Kisses (http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4495290/1/Thirteen_Kisses) (WIP)

Anthem of Arcadia (http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4567076/1/) (WIP)

Aftermath (http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4542786/1/Aftermath) (WIP, more Kallen centric than L/K)

Lelouch/C.C.:

The Witch's Strategy (http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4583322/1/The_Witchs_Strategy)

Suzaku/Kallen:

Critical Point (http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4349566/1/) (WIP, watch out for the M-rated chapter.)

... And I think there's more, but I can't remember them.

Droplet
2008-10-22, 10:08
@inconstant_heart:

I'm really grateful. :D Thanks for providing me an interesting variety of fics. No worries, I admire alot of KallenxLulu fics. I find myself searching for one when I'm craving for angst. On the other side, I read C.C.xLulu when I want to read something more on the humorous side.

That TamakixC.C. caught me off guard more than I can let on. Haha. ^^

SonOfHeaven
2008-10-22, 15:03
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4609371/1/For_Two

This fic broke me...
Sigh, all the heartbreak/angst/I-don't-even-know-how-to-describe-it-anymore that is Kalulu.

Now that was beautiful. Thanks for the link.

-KarumA-
2008-10-23, 15:37
Somehow I felt in the mood of Disney... and now I came up with the wacky idea of redoing geass Disney style with songs -_-; its been haunting me ever since

Nogitsune
2008-10-25, 11:07
Hm... I wish I had the time to translate my current fanfic to English. q.q
There's just not enough timetravel and Clovis stuff out there. xD

Does anyone know a good crossover? o.o

yezhanquan
2008-10-25, 19:39
Somehow I felt in the mood of Disney... and now I came up with the wacky idea of redoing geass Disney style with songs -_-; its been haunting me ever since

You'll probably have better luck with season 1. Euphie is the closest to a Disney princess in the whole series.

Cal-Reflector
2008-10-25, 19:44
You'll probably have better luck with season 1. Euphie is the closest to a Disney princess in the whole series.

Agreed. It's a good analogy.

Nogitsune: You know German and English? That's awesome, I would have loved to have had your help with my story, since I obviously don't know German aside from Sprachen si (insert language)?

There was a very, very, very good Clovis story. But it was not an Crossover. The link is somewhere back in this thread not too long ago.

Nogitsune
2008-10-25, 20:44
Nogitsune: You know German and English? That's awesome, I would have loved to have had your help with my story, since I obviously don't know German aside from Sprachen si (insert language)?

Always eager to assist. ^^
Even though I can't promise anything.

There was a very, very, very good Clovis story. But it was not an Crossover. The link is somewhere back in this thread not too long ago.

Hm.. is it a multichapter fic?
Because I found some very good oneshots already. Just not enough. o.o
*sigh* Why did I have to fall in love with a minor character, damn it?
Then again, he was such a good big brother... had he not lost focus in the end. *sighs again*

Levy
2008-10-28, 04:35
Hi guys, I was looking for some good Ohgi/Villetta fanfiction.
suggestion anyone?

Dean_the_Young
2008-10-28, 15:16
That TamakixC.C. caught me off guard more than I can let on. Haha. ^^Feel free to review it. I'm always open to critique and criticisms on my works.

CapoExecutor
2008-10-30, 09:35
Has anyone ever tried writing a Lelouch/Sayoko pairing?

Cal-Reflector
2008-10-30, 11:19
Has anyone ever tried writing a Lelouch/Sayoko pairing?

Not that I'm aware, but I'd like to see that.

Masterkeyes2
2008-10-30, 13:30
Has anyone ever tried writing a Lelouch/Sayoko pairing?

Tried but never finished. I might go back and try to write it up though.

Cal-Reflector
2008-10-30, 16:22
Tried but never finished. I might go back and try to write it up though.

Was it crack or serious? What was the premise?

Masterkeyes2
2008-10-30, 17:10
Was it crack or serious? What was the premise?

Partially serious. I had two premises worked up actually. The first premise was right after episode 18, which replaces Rolo being with Nunnally in the craft instead of Sayoko. Best way to describe is a hurt/comfort between Lelouch and Sayoko after she finds Lelouch wandering aimlessly around the ruins of the battle, which could be interrupted as romantic but doesn't necessarily have to be.

The second premise was far more light-hearted and it was my interpretation of why Lelouch showed Sayoko his identity in episode 8. This one I didn't have quite as thought as the first one.

TimelessEcholocation
2008-10-30, 21:45
Does anyone know if energy blades have been made in Code Geass or if it's possible to tone MVS down for humans to wield?

Regarding the Lelouch/Sayoko pairing, what's the age difference between them?

The recent Lelouch/Anya story was amusing.

Masterkeyes2
2008-10-31, 00:46
Does anyone know if energy blades have been made in Code Geass or if it's possible to tone MVS down for humans to wield?

Regarding the Lelouch/Sayoko pairing, what's the age difference between them?

The recent Lelouch/Anya story was amusing.

I think in the spin-off Suzaku manga has something like that.

In season one I believe Sayoko is 24 while Lelouch is 17.

Cal-Reflector
2008-10-31, 01:19
I think in the spin-off Suzaku manga has something like that.

In season one I believe Sayoko is 24 while Lelouch is 17.

Really, I thought she was 21/22.

I'm not sure about character's ages anymore, and getting hung up on the numbers seems fruitless.

CapoExecutor
2008-11-01, 15:11
I think in the spin-off Suzaku manga has something like that.

In season one I believe Sayoko is 24 while Lelouch is 17.

Seven year difference...

The harem fic Dream of a King really had variety.

Shuuda
2008-11-02, 13:09
Ahoy ahoy! A new chapter of my story be out now. I hope you enjoy.

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4605320/2/Code_Geass_The_Mirror_of_Sutherland

I have dedicated this chapter to all the hardcore Claudio fans everywhere. Oh, and yes, I did change the title of it.

Cal-Reflector
2008-11-02, 14:10
Advertising this fic by Vicks111, a wonderful work that really lets you view Kaguya in a different light. Sunrise, take note! This is how you develop a character!

Title: Supreme
Rating/Warning(s): PG. Spoilers for the entire thing.
Genre: Fluffy Angsty Instrospection.
Pairing(s)/Character(s): Kaguya, pretty much everyone close to Kaguya is in there too.
Summary: It matters not what you know to be true or not, nor what you believe, it seems. The world will always be right and you will always be wrong. But then again, as long as you are happy, it does not matter whether you are a wronged Goddess or a rightful Demon.
Lenght: 10,000 words.

http://vicks111.livejournal.com/9329.html#cutid1

Shuuda
2008-11-02, 14:15
I read that a few days ago on fanfic.net. I certainly enjoyed it.

Cal-Reflector
2008-11-08, 13:43
Lelouch of Britannia: Chapter 16 - The Price of Victory
Length: 4300 Words
Preview: "What sort of gentleman lets the lady bring him flowers instead?"

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3816236/16/

Dean_the_Young
2008-11-08, 21:28
Preview: "What sort of gentleman lets the lady bring him flowers instead?"

A modern one.

This is why I love modern women, rather than ye-old traditional women. Modern women insist on paying for their own food, are low maintenance, and are just as likely, if not more, to be able to kick ass as I am.

Or, as a family friend once told his wife, "Geeze, baby, I couldn't imagine marrying a woman who couldn't throw a hand grenade."


:heh::heh::heh:

Cal-Reflector
2008-11-08, 23:05
A modern one.

This is why I love modern women, rather than ye-old traditional women. Modern women insist on paying for their own food, are low maintenance, and are just as likely, if not more, to be able to kick ass as I am.

Or, as a family friend once told his wife, "Geeze, baby, I couldn't imagine marrying a woman who couldn't throw a hand grenade."


:heh::heh::heh:

Hopefully I'll be able to show, rather than tell, that many aspects of the Britannian Empire in my story will be much more similar to Jane Austen rather than modern day US/UK, particularly class lines, social norms, courtship, and romance.

TimelessEcholocation
2008-11-09, 21:46
A modern one.

This is why I love modern women, rather than ye-old traditional women. Modern women insist on paying for their own food, are low maintenance, and are just as likely, if not more, to be able to kick ass as I am.

Or, as a family friend once told his wife, "Geeze, baby, I couldn't imagine marrying a woman who couldn't throw a hand grenade."


:heh::heh::heh:

Ah, women have certainly been able to show their capabilities to their max.

By the way, anyone have any tips to character development? I have a feeling that I'm lacking something on this one fic of mine called Overture to a Future.

Cal-Reflector
2008-11-09, 22:51
Ah, women have certainly been able to show their capabilities to their max.

By the way, anyone have any tips to character development? I have a feeling that I'm lacking something on this one fic of mine called Overture to a Future.

Link please.

TimelessEcholocation
2008-11-10, 00:00
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4581943/1/Overture_to_a_Future

Cal-Reflector
2008-11-10, 00:57
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4581943/1/Overture_to_a_Future

I think starting a story In the Middle of Action with a brand new setting (i.e. non-canon) and original characters is very difficult. The number of unfamiliar names makes character development difficult as well, as do the amount of explanation required to inform the reader of your original setting. There's too much information too soon.

You writing is solid. Your grammar is good. It's important to intrigue the reader ASAP so they'll want to keep reading. The concept is good too: the descendants of Geass cast. A good strategy here may be to spend more time relating back/comparing these OCs to their parents to help familiarize the readers. Detailed physical descriptions for OCs as they appear may help.

I think readers would be interested in knowing what CG characters' offspring are like. You still have to do the work though; presently i feel no attachment to this Indiana. He seems like an asshole.

The flow between character interaction and the narratives informing the reader of the setting could use some work. It feels choppy now.

For an example of character development, I defer to this story by hopechan:
http://community.livejournal.com/caveat__lector/40063.html

Clovis is not an OC, but minor enough that an author would have a lot of white space to fill in.

TimelessEcholocation
2008-11-10, 13:19
I think starting a story In the Middle of Action with a brand new setting (i.e. non-canon) and original characters is very difficult. The number of unfamiliar names makes character development difficult as well, as do the amount of explanation required to inform the reader of your original setting. There's too much information too soon.

You writing is solid. Your grammar is good. It's important to intrigue the reader ASAP so they'll want to keep reading. The concept is good too: the descendants of Geass cast. A good strategy here may be to spend more time relating back/comparing these OCs to their parents to help familiarize the readers. Detailed physical descriptions for OCs as they appear may help.

I think readers would be interested in knowing what CG characters' offspring are like. You still have to do the work though; presently i feel no attachment to this Indiana. He seems like an asshole.

The flow between character interaction and the narratives informing the reader of the setting could use some work. It feels choppy now.

For an example of character development, I defer to this story by hopechan:
http://community.livejournal.com/caveat__lector/40063.html

Clovis is not an OC, but minor enough that an author would have a lot of white space to fill in.


Would a side story or some sort of prequel do any justice in regards to building the original characters and their backgrounds at this point?

Cal-Reflector
2008-11-10, 15:44
Would a side story or some sort of prequel do any justice in regards to building the original characters and their backgrounds at this point?

Since this is your project you ultimately decide, but my suggestion is: Remove the story, revise it as you see fit, re-upload it with a different name so it comes back to the top of ff.net's listings. Hopefully it will catch the attention of more readers this time around.

BTW, if you're concerned about this: Number of Hits and Reviews does not necessarily reflect the quality of a story. I think it's biggest benefit is helping a writer's motivation to continue.

TimelessEcholocation
2008-11-10, 19:58
Since this is your project you ultimately decide, but my suggestion is: Remove the story, revise it as you see fit, re-upload it with a different name so it comes back to the top of ff.net's listings. Hopefully it will catch the attention of more readers this time around.

BTW, if you're concerned about this: Number of Hits and Reviews does not necessarily reflect the quality of a story. I think it's biggest benefit is helping a writer's motivation to continue.

I'm not very concerned about reviews and the like. Just needed several different opinions.

I'll keep the suggestion in mind.

-KarumA-
2008-11-10, 20:23
BTW, if you're concerned about this: Number of Hits and Reviews does not necessarily reflect the quality of a story. I think it's biggest benefit is helping a writer's motivation to continue.

I agree on that, reviews make me smile and writers who demand reviews with threats to stop writing make me cry :heh:

edit: Requiem is being translated in Chinese atm lol someone asked me if she could do it for her blog

CapoExecutor
2008-11-12, 15:46
How about someone try this idea out?

Lelouch X C.C. X Kallen X Shirley X Milly X Nina X Sayoko X Nagisa X Inoue X Kaguya X Tianzi X Rakshata X Cecile X Villeta X Anya X Dorothea X Nonette X Monica X Grausam Valkyrie Squadron X ???

??? = anyone other hot female characters that I might have neglected

Cal-Reflector
2008-11-12, 18:21
How about someone try this idea out?

Lelouch X C.C. X Kallen X Shirley X Milly X Nina X Sayoko X Nagisa X Inoue X Kaguya X Tianzi X Rakshata X Cecile X Villeta X Anya X Dorothea X Nonette X Monica X Grausam Valkyrie Squadron X ???

??? = anyone other hot female characters that I might have neglected

You're missing: Cornelia, Euphie, the angry looking princess and the young sadistic princess whom Sunrise shoved in but ultimately didn't have time for.

Oh, and Ms. Romayer.

*Ponders* Lot of ingredients for just one story.

Claies
2008-11-12, 21:54
You're missing: Cornelia, Euphie, the angry looking princess and the young sadistic princess whom Sunrise shoved in but ultimately didn't have time for.

Oh, and Ms. Romayer.

*Ponders* Lot of ingredients for just one story.

Obviously, the chalk-mark-drawing girl should be a pivotal character to this massive harem.

CapoExecutor
2008-11-12, 21:58
You're missing: Cornelia, Euphie, the angry looking princess and the young sadistic princess whom Sunrise shoved in but ultimately didn't have time for.

Oh, and Ms. Romayer.

*Ponders* Lot of ingredients for just one story.


Even though the princesses are his half-sisters, wouldn't it still be incest?

Ms. Romayer is a little too senile in appearance.

I think I forgot that what's-her-name chinese lady that hung around Xingke.

I wouldn't say it's a lot of ingredients for one story. I would bet that one could make an interesting battle royal between the ladies to see who gets Lelouch, who incidentally gets to spend time with each and every one of them throughout the madness. Either one prevails and gets the privilege to go further or they all share him as their boy-toy paramour and possibly Lelouch ends up impregnating all of them.

Rising Dragon
2008-11-12, 21:59
Even though the princesses are his half-sisters, wouldn't it still be incest?

Lots of fans apparently don't care that it'd be incest.

CapoExecutor
2008-11-12, 22:58
Obviously, the chalk-mark-drawing girl should be a pivotal character to this massive harem.

What ever happened to her?

By the way, would it be feasible to add every other beauty from Ashford Academy to the harem? I was thinking about stopping at the mark with the 108 ladies that Sayoko made appointments with and the Fantasy Seduction Team earlier.

morbosfist
2008-11-12, 23:06
What ever happened to her?Commited to an insane asylum because Lelouch's command forces her to travel back to that wall every day. As she's in Britannia, naturally this is something that is certainly strange.

TimelessEcholocation
2008-11-12, 23:27
I wouldn't say it's a lot of ingredients for one story. I would bet that one could make an interesting battle royal between the ladies to see who gets Lelouch, who incidentally gets to spend time with each and every one of them throughout the madness. Either one prevails and gets the privilege to go further or they all share him as their boy-toy paramour and possibly Lelouch ends up impregnating all of them.

Yeah, I'm sure it will be a blast. Perhaps if you go on that idea, you'd outdo that last fic "He's Mine!" and the substitute lemon chapter that you wrote for it some time ago.

If you do take that idea, stay consistent and make it worthwhile and good luck.

Shadowcatch
2008-11-13, 09:44
Hmmm, would anyone here be willing to beta story I will publish in a week or so? Looking to make it better than the fics I have written before. It's an alternative ending to CG (The one posted in the image thread =O)

Shuuda
2008-11-13, 09:53
It's an alternative ending to CG (The one posted in the image thread =O)

An ending where Schneizel has... relationships with a tiger? Okay... :twitch: Naw I'm just kidding, I would love to see SchneizelxTiger, really.

Oh, and would anyone here be able to direct me towards some information about Knight of Nine's (Nonette) Personality or other information please.

NyxOne
2008-11-13, 11:21
She's very outgoing and tremendously cheerful, and it's these facets that make Cornelia fear her- not because of her being a Rounds and being her senior, but because Nonette's personality is such the polar opposite of Cornelia's that the princess finds it hard to be around her sometimes.

CapoExecutor
2008-11-13, 11:50
She's very outgoing and tremendously cheerful, and it's these facets that make Cornelia fear her- not because of her being a Rounds and being her senior, but because Nonette's personality is such the polar opposite of Cornelia's that the princess finds it hard to be around her sometimes.

I thought Nonette's military prowess was one reason that Cornelia fears her. How is it that having an outgoing and cheerful personality can make someone like Cornelia a bit uneasy?

NyxOne
2008-11-13, 12:32
Mainly because Cornelia's the definition of stern and proper, and Nonette's the definition of merry and boistrous.

Cal-Reflector
2008-11-13, 12:45
Mainly because Cornelia's the definition of stern and proper, and Nonette's the definition of merry and boistrous.

... Nonette = Milly?

NyxOne
2008-11-13, 12:52
Pretty much. Minus the cosplay fetish.

Willowhugger
2008-11-13, 19:05
Lots of fans apparently don't care that it'd be incest.

*guilty*

Really, the incest of the Royal Family would be it's least problematic problem.

Willowhugger
2008-11-13, 19:07
How about someone try this idea out?

Lelouch X C.C. X Kallen X Shirley X Milly X Nina X Sayoko X Nagisa X Inoue X Kaguya X Tianzi X Rakshata X Cecile X Villeta X Anya X Dorothea X Nonette X Monica X Grausam Valkyrie Squadron X ???

??? = anyone other hot female characters that I might have neglected

The obvious answer for a fic like this is Lelouch as Emperor (foregoing the Zero Requiem) and now he must deal with the fact that as monarch, he's expected to have a VERY large number of consorts.

Probably need to shore up his claim to the throne as well (*marries a couple of his half-sisters*)

Cal-Reflector
2008-11-13, 19:34
*guilty*

Really, the incest of the Royal Family would be it's least problematic problem.

Europe's nobility has had a history of intermarriage for centuries.

"... Forming a trade union of majesties, King George V (Britain), Kaiser Wilhelm II (Germany) and Czar Nicholas II (Russia) were cousins who together ruled more than half the world. They were a family, and thus subject to the same tensions and turmoil that afflict every family. They had "played together, celebrated each other's birthdays... and later attended each other's weddings," but still, while George and Nicholas were close, Wilhelm was something of an outsider—a feeling exacerbated by his paranoia and self-loathing. Over time, his sense of exclusion and humiliation would avenge itself on the family and eventually contributed strongly to the murder of Nicholas and the loss of his own throne."
~King, Kaiser, Tsar: Three Royal Cousins Who Led the World to War

I'm getting Schneizel-Lelouch-Clovis vibes all over. World war stemming from family feuds? Lulu shooting Clovis to set things off? Archduke Ferdinand? We've seen it before.

There's no way to know, but I don't think Britannia gives a shit about marriage within the family. Marriage is the surest way to form an alliance after all, and if murder and coups are accepted methods of succession then... *shrug*.

CapoExecutor
2008-11-13, 20:34
Europe's nobility has had a history of intermarriage for centuries.

"... Forming a trade union of majesties, King George V (Britain), Kaiser Wilhelm II (Germany) and Czar Nicholas II (Russia) were cousins who together ruled more than half the world. They were a family, and thus subject to the same tensions and turmoil that afflict every family. They had "played together, celebrated each other's birthdays... and later attended each other's weddings," but still, while George and Nicholas were close, Wilhelm was something of an outsider—a feeling exacerbated by his paranoia and self-loathing. Over time, his sense of exclusion and humiliation would avenge itself on the family and eventually contributed strongly to the murder of Nicholas and the loss of his own throne."
~King, Kaiser, Tsar: Three Royal Cousins Who Led the World to War

I'm getting Schneizel-Lelouch-Clovis vibes all over. World war stemming from family feuds? Lulu shooting Clovis to set things off? Archduke Ferdinand? We've seen it before.

There's no way to know, but I don't think Britannia gives a shit about marriage within the family. Marriage is the surest way to form an alliance after all, and if murder and coups are accepted methods of succession then... *shrug*.

Makes me wonder if genetic problems would arise from in-breeding after inter-family marriages.

Then again, can Lelouch even make it past first base?

Shadowcatch
2008-11-13, 20:44
An ending where Schneizel has... relationships with a tiger? Okay... :twitch: Naw I'm just kidding, I would love to see SchneizelxTiger, really.

Oh, and would anyone here be able to direct me towards some information about Knight of Nine's (Nonette) Personality or other information please.

That would be rather...Interesting. "Go tiger. Kill them, or something. I need to finish my nails and world domination, I have no time for things like that."

http://img152.imageshack.us/my.php?image=60421943pf7.jpg
^^^^^
Is the alt ending, I've edited a bit for my tastes though.*Cough*C.C.LelouchLove*cough* I might plan on making a sequel to the story, since it leaves a rather large cliffhanger.

Yu Ominae
2008-11-13, 23:15
The obvious answer for a fic like this is Lelouch as Emperor (foregoing the Zero Requiem) and now he must deal with the fact that as monarch, he's expected to have a VERY large number of consorts.

Probably need to shore up his claim to the throne as well (*marries a couple of his half-sisters*)

How about someone try this idea out?

Lelouch X C.C. X Kallen X Shirley X Milly X Nina X Sayoko X Nagisa X Inoue X Kaguya X Tianzi X Rakshata X Cecile X Villeta X Anya X Dorothea X Nonette X Monica X Grausam Valkyrie Squadron X ???

??? = anyone other hot female characters that I might have neglected

Quoted for the truth that I believe in. :D

Except for Nina. ;)

Willowhugger
2008-11-13, 23:42
Great, now I'm in the mood for the elusive CornelliaXLelouch fanfic.

Yu Ominae
2008-11-14, 00:10
There are a few in FF.net though.

Willowhugger
2008-11-14, 00:56
It's always difficult to find stuff on FF.net.

But I may have to look.

Yu Ominae
2008-11-14, 01:50
Buzz me if you need help on any Lelouch/Cornelia stories. I'll provide links.

TimelessEcholocation
2008-11-14, 09:10
Lelouch/Cornelia. Hmm... too bad she's still at odds against him since he killed Euphemia. That pairing will likely be AU.

Yu Ominae
2008-11-14, 13:34
Lost Soldiers (http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4660610/1/Lost_Soldiers)

I was finally able to do this fic at long last. Enjoy! :D

Eliarine
2008-11-14, 18:23
Lost Soldiers (http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4654405/1/Lost_Soldiers)

I was finally able to do this fic at long last. Enjoy! :D

I probably shouldn't be reading the end notes before the fic itself in its entirety, but...

"I'm anti-Suzaku so I'll give him a lot of hell as much as I can"

...thanks but no thanks. Too bad, that sounded original.

Nogitsune
2008-11-14, 18:27
I probably shouldn't be reading the end notes before the fic itself in its entirety, but...

"I'm anti-Suzaku so I'll give him a lot of hell as much as I can"

...thanks but no thanks. Too bad, that sounded original.

O_O
I agree with that.
If there is one thing that makes me stay away from a fic - no matter how well-written it may be -, then it's character-bashing.

Eliarine
2008-11-14, 18:54
O_O
I agree with that.
If there is one thing that makes me stay away from a fic - no matter how well-written it may be -, then it's character-bashing.

Same here. Even if said character is someone I don't like either. Just...no.

Cal-Reflector
2008-11-14, 20:37
But what if it's Sunrise that's doing the character bashing? Did you see Schneizel being paraded around on the streets like a used up piece of meat? No hate-ficcer has gone to those extremes as far as I recall.

Yu Ominae
2008-11-14, 20:41
I'll respect that. But I'll balance him out later on if I can.

Dilla
2008-11-14, 21:32
But what if it's Sunrise that's doing the character bashing? Did you see Schneizel being paraded around on the streets like a used up piece of meat? No hate-ficcer has gone to those extremes as far as I recall.Be glad that you don't read Naruto or Inuyasha fanfiction. Or do you?

I don't anyone has put this one up yet: Back to the Drawing Board (http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4342569/1/Back_to_the_Drawing_Board) by Franchise

Pretty funny.

Yu Ominae
2008-11-16, 03:50
But what if it's Sunrise that's doing the character bashing? Did you see Schneizel being paraded around on the streets like a used up piece of meat? No hate-ficcer has gone to those extremes as far as I recall.

Maybe it's their fault? :eyebrow:

Just to please those who think I'm Suzaku-bashing in the future, I wish to clarify my position clearly. I still don't like Suzaku, but I'm a firm believer of not being a basher unless he/she's meant to be that way.

Hope that would calm things down. :(

NyxOne
2008-11-16, 09:21
Well, that's fine, but it comes off as being a little awkward when you said, explicity, in the chapter, "Now, I don't like Suzaku, so I'm going to bash him".

Yu Ominae
2008-11-16, 11:41
Er... Did I said that? Don't recall since that was said previously. I did say that he could seen in a positive way. You were probably speaking of the previous one when I had to change it to avoid being in heat. Though it may be possible that I'll receive some anti-anti-Suzaku hate rep for my reputation, I still stand by what I said that I didn't like Suzaku's character in his R1 days.

With all that aside, just wondering what others think about the story idea I had for Lost Soldiers. Thanks.

Shadowcatch
2008-11-16, 14:52
Shameless Advertising >_>
Just published new story, prologue to my in the works R3. Story prologue came from a comic, so I re-wrote it with just a bit more C.C.Lulu love. Feedback appreciated, as this is going to be a loooooong fan fic 0_o http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4655587/1/Code_Geass_R3_The_Empresses_Wish

TimelessEcholocation
2008-11-16, 16:08
Shameless Advertising >_>
Just published new story, prologue to my in the works R3. Story prologue came from a comic, so I re-wrote it with just a bit more C.C.Lulu love. Feedback appreciated, as this is going to be a loooooong fan fic 0_o http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4655587/1/Code_Geass_R3_The_Empresses_Wish

Who drew that alternative ending?

Shadowcatch
2008-11-16, 16:14
Who drew that alternative ending?

Honestly I don't know. It was posted in the image thread a month or two ago. if I did know who drew it I would have given them a bunch of hugs already

DX HBK
2008-11-18, 12:52
Great, now I'm in the mood for the elusive CornelliaXLelouch fanfic.


For all things, if you're in for a Cornelia/Lelouch lemon

http://anime.adultfanfiction.net/story.php?no=600043508

Willowhugger
2008-11-19, 09:36
Thanks.

Now on to finding some Yuffie-Lelouch.

Lelouch is such a sis-kun.

Yu Ominae
2008-11-19, 18:49
Some Lelouch/Euphie fics in FF.net

I'm still waiting for someone to do a Lelouch/Multiple Girls fic. The one written previously in FF.net wasn't finished.

Yu Ominae
2008-11-20, 02:35
A preview of Chapter 2. The link for the Lost Soldiers story is up on this page. Enjoy!

"You sure this is the right thing to do?" One of the men asked. The black-haired man wore a white shirt, JGSDF II Flecktarn pants and black combat boots. JGSDF web gear was strapped on his chest over his shirt, with the exception of its standard backpack removed.

"I'm sure, Nagata." The other man replied, who wore a brown bomber jacket with a yellow emblem that resembled the Star of David. He also had a yellow shirt, gray military-style pants and black combat boots also like Nagata. "I mean, these are the guys that all resistance over Japan are talking about. The legend that we've heard about ever since the Second Pacific War."

"I hope you're right, Ougi." Nagata saw Ougi play around with the red headband on his head, gripping the IZHMASH AKMS' sling on his right shoulder.

"How are we suppose to meet them, Ougi?" A young 17-year old girl sporting red semi-messy hair with a red headband on his head like Ougi. She only wore a red and brown suit with red stockings covering most of her legs. Her boots were seemingly worn under her red stockings with white sleeves that covered her arms. "Did they leave some message or something?"

"I have no idea, Kallen." Ougi sighed.

"No need to wait."

"W-who's there?!" Kallen shouted, looking around when she heard the voice before she took aim with the IZHMASH AKMS that she had ported on her hands without any trouble; Kallen had been previously trained with the said weapon. The red-haired girl was careful that the sling on her left shoulder was not getting in her way of potentially firing the Russian-made weapon.

"Relax."

Nine figures emerged from the dilapidated gymnasium, all wearing Britannian Army uniforms and armed with Britannian-made assault rifles slinged on their shoulders. Even the standard respirators and goggles were also worn.

"Hold it!" Ougi motioned to Nagata and Kallen to lower their weapons, recognizing who the figures were. "It's them!"

"W-what?" Nagata was startled to see the Britannian soldiers had emblems on their body armor, which were national flags of various countries painted on them.

"A...Japanese?" Kallen whispered, seeing one of the Britannian soldiers had a Japanese flag on his chest. What even startled her was that two of the soldiers had the 13-stars flag supposedly used in the attempted American Revolt back in the day. But...how?

"It's the Lost Soldiers." Nagata faced Ougi, who chuckled after seeing them emerge out of the building. "You were right, Ougi."

"I apologize for spooking you." Marc spoke to the three, who had the Philippine flag on his body armor. "We had to carefully ensure to the public that we're from the army."

"I understand." Ougi nodded and shook hands with Marc. "I take it that you agree to help us."

"Of course." Marc nodded. "It's only fair that we help the NRA, like we did so to other anti-occupation guerrillas during the war."

So far, got 2 saves on Favorite Story and 4 on Story Alert in FF.net

Yu Ominae
2008-11-24, 16:31
Already have Lost Soldiers's 2nd chapter up.

So far, 3 saves on Favorite Story and 5 on Story Alert.

Lost Soldiers (http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4660610/1/Lost_Soldiers)

Yu Ominae
2008-12-01, 21:41
Updated with a 3rd chapter. Have made it to 5 saves on the Favorite Story List.

TimelessEcholocation
2008-12-02, 11:50
Here's an idea for someone to try out.

In Episode 7 of the first season, how would things go had Lelouch been discovered when all the Knightmare pilots were told to show their faces?

NyxOne
2008-12-02, 11:57
He would have been discovered by Cornelia and would have been either summarily executed on the spot for turning terrorist, or taken back to the homeland or whatever.

CapoExecutor
2008-12-02, 17:09
Unless he Geassed those facing him around to attack Guilford. The realization of an unknown pilot among them and then the reaction to it could give Lelouch some seconds to pull it off if he's fast enough.

I think he had some close calls in season 1. The part where Villeta discovers his identity would have had him in something worse than hot water, especially if the aftermath involves Nunnally getting dragged out for interrogation regardless of her crippled state.

Anyways, seeing that a number of Lelouch's soldiers retreating atfter his death, wouldn't it be possible for someone to utilized the Geass still on them by impersonating as Lelouch?

AmrodAegnor
2008-12-05, 12:45
Hi there, finally read through most of the threads here. =)

I started writing a fanfic myself a few days after finishing the series. The ending just bugged me too much. Writing stories is a hobby of mine and when going to bed, sometimes the ideas are just flying to my head. ^^

The fic revolves about Kallen, dealing with the events in the last few episodes of R2, starting with the imprisonment in episode 25. It will be a quite long story I think, because I didn't want to write just some chapters with a pseudo-story, so it might develop into something bigger ;)

Here it is, enjoy reading =)

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4697363/1/The_Path_to_the_Future

Yu Ominae
2008-12-09, 03:11
Updated with Chapter 4 of Lost Soldiers

Stats:

14 Reviews
8 on Favorite Story
7 on Story Alert

Cal-Reflector
2008-12-12, 23:26
Lelouch of Britannia, Chapter 17: Homecoming
Length: 5100 Words
Summary: Girls scream and faint when they see him. Boys want to be like him. Lelouch comes home.

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3816236/17/

CapoExecutor
2008-12-13, 18:01
Lelouch of Britannia, Chapter 17: Homecoming
Length: 5100 Words
Summary: Girls scream and faint when they see him. Boys want to be like him. Lelouch comes home.

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3816236/17/

Any chance Marika will play another role aside from just appearing at Soresi's funeral?

Cal-Reflector
2008-12-14, 02:26
Any chance Marika will play another role aside from just appearing at Soresi's funeral?

Yes, there's a chance.

DeotoxSlayer
2008-12-14, 19:53
Lelouch of Britannia, Chapter 17: Homecoming
Length: 5100 Words
Summary: Girls scream and faint when they see him. Boys want to be like him. Lelouch comes home.

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3816236/17/

nice summary lol

Good Chapter.

squaresphere
2008-12-15, 12:10
Lelouch of Britannia, Chapter 17: Homecoming
Length: 5100 Words
Summary: Girls scream and faint when they see him. Boys want to be like him. Lelouch comes home.

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3816236/17/

Loved the chap, fitting celebration for Lelu's home coming. I do love how in just one chapter you've managed to flesh out 3 of the knights of the round more than the show did in a whole season. Heck not mention Clovis who we only really got to know in post mortum.

Can't wait for the next sets of chapters and how you'll present the show. I might have mentioned it before but I like the Prince much better without Geass. It really highlights his careful planning and gives more impact to his decisions.

TimelessEcholocation
2008-12-17, 19:55
Has anyone ever tried a Sayoko/Suzaku pairing?

ZeroSama
2008-12-18, 05:27
Just as a matter of interest for a fan-fic i'm in the middle of writing i have a question in relation to balancing issues of mechas.

What would you rather have done in relation to the original Lancelot and Guren.

1.UnHAX the Lancelot by removing its blaze Luminous forearm mounted shields(they made it broken) and keep the Guren the same.

or

2.Keep the Lancelot the same but enhance the Guren by either increasing the npe's power and making it quicker acting or removing the useless left forearm canon and replacing it with a shield emitter and upgrading its parrying dagger(its supposed to be a CQ's, defensive orientated mech and its ridiculous if the Lancelot has better defenses than it).


Has anyone ever tried a Sayoko/Suzaku pairing?

Not that i've seen anyway but FOR THE LOVE OF GOD NO!. Just think of the children.

TimelessEcholocation
2008-12-18, 09:03
Not that i've seen anyway but FOR THE LOVE OF GOD NO!. Just think of the children.

Well, I thought someone could work off that entry of Sayoko's Diary when she met Suzaku for the first time and fell for him.

ZeroSama
2008-12-18, 13:46
Well, I thought someone could work off that entry of Sayoko's Diary when she met Suzaku for the first time and fell for him.

Yes i know that in her diary she gets all warm and fuzzy when Suzaku helps her.

I was talking more along the lines of what sort of superhumanly freakish monster child they would produce.

Skippy
2008-12-18, 15:48
Yes i know that in her diary she gets all warm and fuzzy when Suzaku helps her.

I was talking more along the lines of what sort of superhumanly freakish monster child they would produce.

There'd be spin-kicks and throwing knives everywhere...

Rising Dragon
2008-12-18, 15:50
There'd be spin-kicks and throwing knives everywhere...

Spin kicks that throw throwing knives.

Skippy
2008-12-18, 15:53
Spin kicks that throw throwing knives.

My head just exploded.

From a spin-kicked throwing knife.

TimelessEcholocation
2008-12-18, 16:16
Imagine Suzaku and Sayoko having a daughter that could do all that stuff while having BDSM tendancies.

Rising Dragon
2008-12-18, 16:22
The real monster would be child that is:

The grandchild of Orange and Sayoko, and Suzaku and Kallen. Orange and Sayoko have a child, and Suzaku and Kallen have a child, and those two have a child.

Then you have a real monster of a child. Cyborg ninja knight that's got mad Knightmare skillz.

Eliarine
2008-12-18, 16:29
The real monster would be child that is:

The grandchild of Orange and Sayoko, and Suzaku and Kallen. Orange and Sayoko have a child, and Suzaku and Kallen have a child, and those two have a child.

Then you have a real monster of a child. Cyborg ninja knight that's got mad Knightmare skillz.

...do want.

No, seriously. :D

TimelessEcholocation
2008-12-18, 16:55
Would it be a male or a female?

Rising Dragon
2008-12-18, 17:04
Would it be a male or a female?

Beats me. The only difference is that if the child was female, it'd eventually get PMS, and that can only end in tears for everybody.

AceFlashheart
2008-12-18, 17:15
The real monster would be child that is:

The grandchild of Orange and Sayoko, and Suzaku and Kallen. Orange and Sayoko have a child, and Suzaku and Kallen have a child, and those two have a child.

Then you have a real monster of a child. Cyborg ninja knight that's got mad Knightmare skillz.

If only they were also somehow a pirate.

bladeofdarkness
2008-12-18, 17:19
since Orenge was practicly killed and then made alive again
does that also mean that it would be part zombie

yvj
2008-12-18, 17:34
The real monster would be child that is:

The grandchild of Orange and Sayoko, and Suzaku and Kallen. Orange and Sayoko have a child, and Suzaku and Kallen have a child, and those two have a child.

Then you have a real monster of a child. Cyborg ninja knight that's got mad Knightmare skillz.

I got admit that kid sounds bad ass.

He/she might be the first Super Saiyan in the CG universe :heh:

Nobodyman9
2008-12-18, 17:44
If only they were also somehow a pirate.
Oh god, you're right. Now I know the one thing the CG universe was missing.

AceFlashheart
2008-12-18, 17:47
I got admit that kid sounds bad ass.

He/she might be the first Super Saiyan in the CG universe :heh:

What does the scouter say about their power level?

DeotoxSlayer
2008-12-18, 20:13
What does the scouter say about their power level?

ITS OVER 9000!!!!!!!!!!

What would happen if Lelouch was alive and said baby had children with the son of Lelouchs son......*Is Horrified*

CapoExecutor
2008-12-18, 21:18
ITS OVER 9000!!!!!!!!!!

What would happen if Lelouch was alive and said baby had children with the son of Lelouchs son......*Is Horrified*

It'll add the intellectual factor to someone who's nearly invincible in physical and Knightmare combat as long as certain liabilities aren't passed over.

Then again, who would be giving birth to Lelouch's child in this case?

Nobodyman9
2008-12-18, 22:19
It'll add the intellectual factor to someone who's nearly invincible in physical and Knightmare combat as long as certain liabilities aren't passed over.

Then again, who would be giving birth to Lelouch's child in this case?
C.C. I would presume. Since everyone else is taken.

Skippy
2008-12-18, 22:38
C.C. I would presume. Since everyone else is taken.

woot, I approve.

Kyero Fox
2008-12-20, 14:00
heres a little something from my Fan fic that someone is drawing for me :)

http://img156.imageshack.us/img156/6753/1212commitn3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
on the left is Kallen of course and on the right is my OC Satosu from a Alternate univers where Britannia lost the war back before japan.

CapoExecutor
2008-12-21, 15:52
With the type of modifications that Jeremiah went through, he probably can't have kids.

Who would Lloyd be paired with, Cecile or Rakshata?

Rising Dragon
2008-12-21, 15:59
Who would Lloyd be paired with, Cecile or Rakshata?

Are you kidding? We all know his true love is Lancelot.

CapoExecutor
2008-12-21, 16:18
Are you kidding? We all know his true love is Lancelot.

Okay, I asked a dumb question then.

I can still see Lloyd and Rakshata try to outdo each other, though.

TimelessEcholocation
2008-12-21, 22:31
Well, there's still open field for other pairings.

Anyone up to trying a reverse harem for Code Geass?

CapoExecutor
2008-12-22, 10:01
Was it ever mentioned on who Bismarck received his Geass from?

bladeofdarkness
2008-12-22, 10:06
Was it ever mentioned on who Bismarck received his Geass from?

had to be V.V

SonOfHeaven
2008-12-22, 17:33
Getting this back on topic.

I found a pretty good fanfic about Kallen post season.

www.fanfiction.net/s/4732871/1/Code_Geass_One_More_Chance

Akakishi
2008-12-22, 18:15
I like the end
“I love you Lelouch... I will always do...”
as if Kallen'd say that
lol
(I only read the end, of the fanfic :p, I'd read it later,
maybe :eyespin:)

Kyero Fox
2008-12-22, 21:46
;_; guess no one is interested in my fan fic :heh: OC's normaly get ignored -_-

Cal-Reflector
2008-12-22, 22:23
To the above: OCs are hard to do well.

In time for Christmas, and a new record between updates!

Title: Code Geass: Lelouch of Britannia
Chapter 18: De-escalation
Rating: PG-13
Characters: Lelouch, Schneizel, Euphie, Cornelia
Summary: Christmas time at the Aeries Palace. Schneizel and Lelouch demonstrate how clever they are. A familiar face makes his debut. Pirates, AP History Exam, and so forth.

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3816236/18/

Kyero Fox
2008-12-23, 00:39
@ Cal-Reflector - well I've had practice and help with making good OC's the only thing wrong is his Intrance, Parallel world and such opening up

lua thien
2008-12-24, 21:51
Is the chalk-marking girl still in the asylum or has Jeremiah cancelled her Geass?

morbosfist
2008-12-24, 22:24
Is the chalk-marking girl still in the asylum or has Jeremiah cancelled her Geass?Only if Lelouch remembers, and it's not likely such a trivial thing (to him) would have come to mind.

Cal-Reflector
2008-12-26, 22:00
Title: And then We Meet Again
Characters: Lelouch, Euphie
Genre: General, angst, comfort, romance?
Rating: G
Length: 1100 Words
Author's Notes: Set after the end of Season 2, so spoilers for those who have not finished the series.


*****

Lelouch was not a religious man, not in the Christian sense of the word. But in those rare instances of private reflection—instances which took place with increasing frequency after his final plan had been set in motion and the date of his death drew near—he would sometimes contemplate how an omniscient God, who had existed before time and seen the best and foulest of His creation, would judge him. Lelouch, like so many of the great minds in history, had read the Bible in its entirety. He understood enough to know that he was unqualified for salvation—he possessed no faith—but he also understood the concept of God’s supreme will, which meant that all matters went according to His plan in spite of the freedom given to man.

He was not so naive to think that he could be blameless if that were true; he knew what it was to be a cog within the designs of others, including his very own parents. And yet he had pulled the trigger out of his own will; Clovis, Euphie, and others. He murdered them, their blood was on his hands, and if God were just He would surely find him wanting and condemn him to suffer alongside the Neros and Hitlers. Lelouch wondered whether the act of killing himself—thus removing the scourge to the world and saving countless others—would be seen as an act of redemption, or whether it was just one more sin for which he must answer. No matter, for he was certain that, as the pain from the sword stuck in his abdomen subsided—as the feeling of Nunally’s hands framing his face grew cold and distant—the first thing he should see if he ever opened his eyes again would be the unquenchable fires of hell.

Which was why he was surprised when after a long, long sleep he felt a breeze upon his skin. He awoke in the same posture in which he’d fallen, on his back and looking skywards, but rather than columns of bellowing smoke rising into an impenetrable darkness, he saw a limitless expanse of clear blue sky dotted with clouds. Gentle rays of sunlight filtered through the swaying branches of a tree above, and he imagined that he heard the chirping of birds.

“Good morning, sleepyhead.”

It was a voice he last heard a lifetime ago, which haunted him in both dreams sweet and terrible, where the happy dreams were hardest to bear. His head was resting in her lap, and a few strands of her pink tendrils fell close to his face.

“Euphie?”

He wondered if this was a trick; a preamble to his torture with a perversion of the image of someone he loved. But she felt real; her skin was warm as she stroked the side of his face. Her smile was warm, not pale and waning but glowing and full of life. As though reading his mind, her fingers pinched him in the cheek and he sat up abruptly with a yelp. He turned and watched her with eyes wide as saucers; she was giggling.

“That’s for thinking that I’m some demon in disguise.”

And he knew then that it was indeed Euphie, but how? “Where are we?”

“Heaven.”

His wealth of knowledge and understanding failed him. They were on a grassy knoll in the midst of what appeared a vast garden filled with flowering trees and plants. The scene conformed to what many artists imagined Heaven would look like; it certainly did not resemble hell. But that did not explain the most crucial question. “Why am I here?”

“Why shouldn’t you be?”

He found himself looking straight at the princess. Didn’t she remember? Even if the effects of Geass caused her to forget, surely the truth was revealed after she came here. The expression on the her face was inscrutable; perhaps she only wanted to hear him say it himself.

“I don’t deserve to be here.”

He remembered the look on her face when he shot her, the lingering red glow in her eyes, questioning as the patch of crimson spread through the front of her dress.

“No, you don’t.”

Lelouch felt his heart drop. Her voice held no accusation or malice but she had confirmed his suspicions. He smiled—perhaps this was the small reward that his sacrifice amounted to. Surely now he would descend to where he belonged. “I’m glad I got to see you one last time, Euphie… I’m sorry.”

He bowed his head, convinced that his time was up, and waited for his surroundings to vanish into blackness; the chance to apologize to his first love was more than he could have hoped for. He waited, and waited, and then his eyes flew open when he felt himself wrapped in a close embrace. He was still here, and he could feel the happiness emanating from Euphie as she pressed her cheeks against his.

He didn’t understand.

“Lelouch, ever so vain.” She chided him in a gentle voice like childhood times, when she used to lecture him on his failure to perceive the way a girl’s mind worked (she was right). “Why do you assume that everyone shares your standard of judging good and evil?”

“But I…”

She placed a finger against his lips. “It is true that you’ve done many bad things. Some were mistakes, some were not your fault, but many were. If God was fair then you should not be here.”

He scrunched his brows. “Then what, God is unjust?”

“He is just, but He is also merciful, and ultimately He prefers grace over punishment; it is the only reason why any of us are here. Besides…” And then a grin that was mischievous and beautiful spread across the girl’s face. “Rather than listening to you, don’t you think God would grant my wish to have you keep me company instead?”

Euphie’s answer left him speechless and feeling like a child. The prince stared at the girl before him, his mind filled by her astounding words, and then he understood. It came as little surprise to him that once again she was right, unseating all the cunning and logic which he was so proud of but which ended up hurting so many people, including himself. In the end, she always seemed to know the answers to the questions that mattered most.

“How did you get to be so wise?”

She folded his hands in her own. “I always was. You just didn’t like to give me credit.”

Lelouch laughed.

The End

CapoExecutor
2009-01-03, 17:54
If Marianne's Geass allowed her to travel to other body when her current host dies, can she still use her Geass from within her new host to make another transfer if need? It sounds like that her spirit has been moving from host to host every time the former dies.

Who
2009-01-04, 16:49
Not really into this fan-fic business, so I think I'm pretty ill-equipped to start a fanfic about the events after Lulu's assassination... cause peace is only so fleeting, right? ...Right?

azul120
2009-01-04, 19:05
Title: And then We Meet Again
Characters: Lelouch, Euphie
Genre: General, angst, comfort, romance?
Rating: G
Length: 1100 Words
Author's Notes: Set after the end of Season 2, so spoilers for those who have not finished the series.


*****

Lelouch was not a religious man, not in the Christian sense of the word. But in those rare instances of private reflection—instances which took place with increasing frequency after his final plan had been set in motion and the date of his death drew near—he would sometimes contemplate how an omniscient God, who had existed before time and seen the best and foulest of His creation, would judge him. Lelouch, like so many of the great minds in history, had read the Bible in its entirety. He understood enough to know that he was unqualified for salvation—he possessed no faith—but he also understood the concept of God’s supreme will, which meant that all matters went according to His plan in spite of the freedom given to man.

He was not so naive to think that he could be blameless if that were true; he knew what it was to be a cog within the designs of others, including his very own parents. And yet he had pulled the trigger out of his own will; Clovis, Euphie, and others. He murdered them, their blood was on his hands, and if God were just He would surely find him wanting and condemn him to suffer alongside the Neros and Hitlers. Lelouch wondered whether the act of killing himself—thus removing the scourge to the world and saving countless others—would be seen as an act of redemption, or whether it was just one more sin for which he must answer. No matter, for he was certain that, as the pain from the sword stuck in his abdomen subsided—as the feeling of Nunally’s hands framing his face grew cold and distant—the first thing he should see if he ever opened his eyes again would be the unquenchable fires of hell.

Which was why he was surprised when after a long, long sleep he felt a breeze upon his skin. He awoke in the same posture in which he’d fallen, on his back and looking skywards, but rather than columns of bellowing smoke rising into an impenetrable darkness, he saw a limitless expanse of clear blue sky dotted with clouds. Gentle rays of sunlight filtered through the swaying branches of a tree above, and he imagined that he heard the chirping of birds.

“Good morning, sleepyhead.”

It was a voice he last heard a lifetime ago, which haunted him in both dreams sweet and terrible, where the happy dreams were hardest to bear. His head was resting in her lap, and a few strands of her pink tendrils fell close to his face.

“Euphie?”

He wondered if this was a trick; a preamble to his torture with a perversion of the image of someone he loved. But she felt real; her skin was warm as she stroked the side of his face. Her smile was warm, not pale and waning but glowing and full of life. As though reading his mind, her fingers pinched him in the cheek and he sat up abruptly with a yelp. He turned and watched her with eyes wide as saucers; she was giggling.

“That’s for thinking that I’m some demon in disguise.”

And he knew then that it was indeed Euphie, but how? “Where are we?”

“Heaven.”

His wealth of knowledge and understanding failed him. They were on a grassy knoll in the midst of what appeared a vast garden filled with flowering trees and plants. The scene conformed to what many artists imagined Heaven would look like; it certainly did not resemble hell. But that did not explain the most crucial question. “Why am I here?”

“Why shouldn’t you be?”

He found himself looking straight at the princess. Didn’t she remember? Even if the effects of Geass caused her to forget, surely the truth was revealed after she came here. The expression on the her face was inscrutable; perhaps she only wanted to hear him say it himself.

“I don’t deserve to be here.”

He remembered the look on her face when he shot her, the lingering red glow in her eyes, questioning as the patch of crimson spread through the front of her dress.

“No, you don’t.”

Lelouch felt his heart drop. Her voice held no accusation or malice but she had confirmed his suspicions. He smiled—perhaps this was the small reward that his sacrifice amounted to. Surely now he would descend to where he belonged. “I’m glad I got to see you one last time, Euphie… I’m sorry.”

He bowed his head, convinced that his time was up, and waited for his surroundings to vanish into blackness; the chance to apologize to his first love was more than he could have hoped for. He waited, and waited, and then his eyes flew open when he felt himself wrapped in a close embrace. He was still here, and he could feel the happiness emanating from Euphie as she pressed her cheeks against his.

He didn’t understand.

“Lelouch, ever so vain.” She chided him in a gentle voice like childhood times, when she used to lecture him on his failure to perceive the way a girl’s mind worked (she was right). “Why do you assume that everyone shares your standard of judging good and evil?”

“But I…”

She placed a finger against his lips. “It is true that you’ve done many bad things. Some were mistakes, some were not your fault, but many were. If God was fair then you should not be here.”

He scrunched his brows. “Then what, God is unjust?”

“He is just, but He is also merciful, and ultimately He prefers grace over punishment; it is the only reason why any of us are here. Besides…” And then a grin that was mischievous and beautiful spread across the girl’s face. “Rather than listening to you, don’t you think God would grant my wish to have you keep me company instead?”

Euphie’s answer left him speechless and feeling like a child. The prince stared at the girl before him, his mind filled by her astounding words, and then he understood. It came as little surprise to him that once again she was right, unseating all the cunning and logic which he was so proud of but which ended up hurting so many people, including himself. In the end, she always seemed to know the answers to the questions that mattered most.

“How did you get to be so wise?”

She folded his hands in her own. “I always was. You just didn’t like to give me credit.”

Lelouch laughed.

The End

Awww. Euphie could pinch my cheeks anytime. :D Though not to split hairs, but the decision to gun her down was an apparent necessity at that time, due to the accidental geassing.

stardrago
2009-01-13, 02:00
I have a possible sequel I could recommend; but how often those guys at sunrise even check these sites.
The Code and Geass was used during the time of Atlantis and faced an enemy that had a power that was powerful as Geass and could destroy the Code; and that battle wiped out most of the Code Bearers and a few survived after that time.
I will give a further detail story later.

Nobodyman9
2009-01-15, 23:47
Didn't know where else to put this, but this was a sort of spontaneous idea of mine. A Code Geass version of the Bible. A call it "The Book of Geass." Rather, it's something of a Bible for Code Geass fans, but it's strictly for humor only. Keep in mind I am very harsh on Lelouch during this. Also, it's not complete, just a few paragraphs. I hope you enjoy

In the beginning, Sunrise anointed (or is it “appointed”? …well, whatever) Okouchi and Taniguchi. Now their idea was formless and empty and so they declared “Let there be light!” and they called it Code Geass and it shined with all of their epicness.

On the first day they created the Code Geass universe. On the second day they created the Knightmare Frames. On the third day they created the epic dialogue. On the fourth, fifth, sixth, and most of the seventh day, they created the fanservice. For the remainder of the seventh day they created the story and characters (That’s right, Code Geass was made in seven days, bitches!).

It was then Okouchi and Taniguchi declared “Let the main character be sculpted in our ima- (Ppphhhbblllthh-Ha ha ha ha! Oh sorry, I couldn’t say that with a straight face! Ha ha! Oh, God forbid! Aaaahh. *clears throat*) No, truly they said “Let us create the most bishie character possible and give him the mind of Light Yagami as well as the innate ability to make everyone else on the show look like complete twats. That’ll make everyone happy!” And thus the most sexually ambiguous anti-hero in the history of anime was born and they called him “Lelouch”.

For a time it was good, but one day Lelouch came before Okouchi and Taniguchi and said to them “Oh creators I have a problem. You see, I have all this extreme bitchiness, but no one to bitch at.” And so Okouchi and Taniguchi put Lelouch into a deep sleep, during which they removed his penis and gave it to someone who could actually conceivably use it. And they named this man “Suzaku”.

And Okouchi and Taniguchi said unto them “Be fruitful and increase in number!” (…no seriously, they really said this). And Suzaku answered to them “Oh creators, I would rather have my legs cut off with a hacksaw while guzzling a bucket of Drano and then give fellatio to a horse, then have Chuck Norris give a mind-blowingly painful kick to my nuts, then clamp my nipples to a car battery while listening to an Al Gore speech and then sell my soul to Dick Cheney and top it all off by watching every episode of Naruto, then have any form of a sexual relationship with this shemale.” To this Okouchi and Taniguchi replied, “Oh.” And so they created the first female and they called her “C.C.”


So there you go. I'm sure I could do more with it, but I'm not sure if I will. As I said, this was sort of a spur of the moment idea and I'm not even sure where I'd go from here.

Lord_Bear
2009-01-21, 05:12
Title: Code Geass: The Game of Kings (http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4678033/1/)
Rating: T
Pairing: Lelouch/Kallen
Genre: Suspense/Thriller
Summary: The lines between player and piece have become blurred with the scars of sacrifice; the world destined to descend into even greater chaos as two enemies return to the board to rearrange their pieces. Sometimes, nobody knows who the enemy King truly is.
Progress: 7 chapters complete at ~50,000 words total.

Hi! This is the first time I've posted on animesuki, so...hopefully I've put this in the right place lol :)

Anyway, I'd appreciate it if anyone who reads this could refrain from posting spoilers. Thanks! :D

blottyparchment
2009-01-21, 08:09
@Lord Bear
Hi Fuzz-tan! Welcome! I still have to find time to read your fic, but I'm hearing good stuff about it.

Lunara
2009-01-21, 17:24
Title: Code Geass: The Game of Kings (http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4678033/1/)
Rating: T
Pairing: Lelouch/Kallen
Genre: Suspense/Thriller
Summary: The lines between player and piece have become blurred with the scars of sacrifice; the world destined to descend into even greater chaos as two enemies return to the board to rearrange their pieces. Sometimes, nobody knows who the enemy King truly is.
Progress: 7 chapters complete at ~50,000 words total.

Hi! This is the first time I've posted on animesuki, so...hopefully I've put this in the right place lol :)

Anyway, I'd appreciate it if anyone who reads this could refrain from posting spoilers. Thanks! :D

I've read your story and I love it! I subscribed so I can catch up with any new chapters. Please continue on your with story!

stardrago
2009-01-22, 18:23
Here is a possible sequel, for me at least; 4 years after R2, archaeology has become a bit more frequent and the idea of the Olympics is heading way. Archaelogists stumble upon ancient ruins that may belong to Atlantis/Mu.

A more detail summary later but a bit of comments if you like

Lord_Bear
2009-01-23, 04:17
@Lord Bear
Hi Fuzz-tan! Welcome! I still have to find time to read your fic, but I'm hearing good stuff about it.

Heya blotty, not posting at BKBQ lately? :(

I've read your story and I love it! I subscribed so I can catch up with any new chapters. Please continue on your with story!

:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D

Phase 8 is almost done. Only a couple more scenes and I'll have it up. Crossing my fingers that I'll get it done tonight! ;)

EDIT: Also, is it bad form to post updates in this thread (along the lines of "Fic update: (name) (chapter)")? Some places encourage it but others view it as spamming, so I figure I should check first (considering I don't post here normally). :)

Pink-chan
2009-01-23, 10:28
Title: Code Geass: The Game of Kings (http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4678033/1/)
Rating: T
Pairing: Lelouch/Kallen
Genre: Suspense/Thriller
Summary: The lines between player and piece have become blurred with the scars of sacrifice; the world destined to descend into even greater chaos as two enemies return to the board to rearrange their pieces. Sometimes, nobody knows who the enemy King truly is.
Progress: 7 chapters complete at ~50,000 words total.

Hi! This is the first time I've posted on animesuki, so...hopefully I've put this in the right place lol :)

Anyway, I'd appreciate it if anyone who reads this could refrain from posting spoilers. Thanks! :D

I read it. It is the best fic around so far :D. Keep it up!

Lunara
2009-01-23, 17:34
Heya blotty, not posting at BKBQ lately? :(



:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D

Phase 8 is almost done. Only a couple more scenes and I'll have it up. Crossing my fingers that I'll get it done tonight! ;)

EDIT: Also, is it bad form to post updates in this thread (along the lines of "Fic update: (name) (chapter)")? Some places encourage it but others view it as spamming, so I figure I should check first (considering I don't post here normally). :)

No not at all!:)

Lord_Bear
2009-01-23, 22:50
I read it. It is the best fic around so far :D. Keep it up!

*Blush*

No not at all!:)

Awesome :)

Nobodyman9
2009-01-24, 01:10
At the request of Levy, I have expanded on my Book of Geass fanfic. This will cover how some of the other characters came to be.

Some time later, Lelouch came before Okouchi and Taniguchi and asked of them, “Oh creators, I am grateful for the woman you have given me, but I find her to be quite apathetic and distant. She shows little sign of emotion, she often speaks in a rude and cynical manner, and she does not console me when I am having my period.” To this they replied, “You have a period, Lelouch?” He answered “Yes…or maybe it’s just the bloody spot where you ripped my dick off. Either way, I request another woman is more compassionate and respectful towards me.” And Okouchi and Taniguchi answered “So it shall be done!” “Oh, and give her some melons too, cause C.C. uh…kinda weak,” Lelouch added. And so Okouchi and Taniguchi took the two tallest mountains in Japan (that’s Mt. Fuji and Mt. Kita, FYI) and planted them on the woman’s chest and thus Kallen was born.

Once again Lelouch came before Okouchi and Taniguchi and said unto them, “Oh creators, I have another request.” “What is it?” they asked. And he answered “I am still grateful for the world you have given me, but it now seems that people are catching on to the fact that I am a complete dickhead.” They answered, “But you are a dickhead Lelouch. In fact, it is the only part of you that is masculine.” Lelouch replied, “Yes, but I do not like the negative attention I am receiving. So please, I ask of you creators, create something that will make me not look like a dickhead. Make something that will create the illusion that, underneath my cold, calculating, callous, murderous, apathetic, insane, narcissistic, Machiavellian, and manipulative exterior, I am a kind and caring person.” And they said unto him, “So be it.” And thus Nunnally was born.

More time passed and again Okouchi and Taniguchi were confronted. This time, however, it was Suzaku and requested of them, “Oh creators, I have sat idly by while you have given in to all of Lelouch’s demands, but I can sit idle no more. He is barely a male, and yet you have given Lelouch so many bitches, while I have no bitches of my own. Please give me at least one.” It should be noted that, during this time, Okouchi and Taniguchi were stoned out of their minds. They spoke unto him, “Suzlaku (that’s not a typo) we shall give you a bitch of your own, a fair and beautiful maiden, one that you will love and treasure dearly. However she will be killed 3 episodes before the end of the first season.” And Suzaku replied, “That doesn’t sound so good.” And they said, “Well the giraffe told us we either had to do that or beat our loved ones with a folding chair.” “The giraffe?” Suzaku asked. “Yeah, the one with the glowing red eyes and the bowler hat,” they said. “Of course,” Suzaku replied. And thus Euphemia was born.

Again Lelouch came before Okouchi and Taniguchi. He said unto them, “Oh creators, I have another favor to ask. The bitches you have given me, C.C. and Kallen, are very nice, but they’re not exactly what you would call ‘easy’. I need a girl who worships the ground I walk on and will do whatever I tell her. You know, someone I can hump and dump.” Again, it should be noted that Okouchi and Taniguchi were still extremely high. They replied to him, “Lelouch, we do not understand your incessant need for more bitches. Not only do you not have a penis, but you do not have the slightest bit of romantic interest in women.” “Exactly,” Lelouch said. “I just want to prove that if I did have any interest in women, and if I did have a penis to fuck them with, I could.” So they said unto him, “Very well Lelouch, we shall create this ‘easy’ girl for you. But in return she will be a tortured and miserable character. You will be inadvertently responsible for all the suffering in her life and it will all end with her life being cut tragically short. Now, do you still wish for this girl to be made?” Lelouch contemplated the offer for a moment. “How soon can you have her ready?” he asked. And thus Shirley was born.

Lord_Bear
2009-01-24, 01:15
At the request of Levy, I have expanded on my Book of Geass fanfic. This will cover how some of the other characters came to be.

Some time later, Lelouch came before Okouchi and Taniguchi and asked of them, “Oh creators, I am grateful for the woman you have given me, but I find her to be quite apathetic and distant. She shows little sign of emotion, she often speaks in a rude and cynical manner, and she does not console me when I am having my period.” To this they replied, “You have a period, Lelouch?” He answered “Yes…or maybe it’s just the bloody spot where you ripped my dick off. Either way, I request another woman is more compassionate and respectful towards me.” And Okouchi and Taniguchi answered “So it shall be done!” “Oh, and give her some melons too, cause C.C. uh…kinda weak,” Lelouch added. And so Okouchi and Taniguchi took the two tallest mountains in Japan (that’s Mt. Fuji and Mt. Kita, FYI) and planted them on the woman’s chest and thus Kallen was born.

Once again Lelouch came before Okouchi and Taniguchi and said unto them, “Oh creators, I have another request.” “What is it?” they asked. And he answered “I am still grateful for the world you have given me, but it now seems that people are catching on to the fact that I am a complete dickhead.” They answered, “But you are a dickhead Lelouch. In fact, it is the only part of you that is masculine.” Lelouch replied, “Yes, but I do not like the negative attention I am receiving. So please, I ask of you creators, create something that will make me not look like a dickhead. Make something that will create the illusion that, underneath my cold, calculating, callous, murderous, apathetic, insane, narcissistic, Machiavellian, and manipulative exterior, I am a kind and caring person.” And they said unto him, “So be it.” And thus Nunnally was born.

More time passed and again Okouchi and Taniguchi were confronted. This time, however, it was Suzaku and requested of them, “Oh creators, I have sat idly by while you have given in to all of Lelouch’s demands, but I can sit idle no more. He is barely a male, and yet you have given Lelouch so many bitches, while I have no bitches of my own. Please give me at least one.” It should be noted that, during this time, Okouchi and Taniguchi were stoned out of their minds. They spoke unto him, “Suzlaku (that’s not a typo) we shall give you a bitch of your own, a fair and beautiful maiden, one that you will love and treasure dearly. However she will be killed 3 episodes before the end of the first season.” And Suzaku replied, “That doesn’t sound so good.” And they said, “Well the giraffe told us we either had to do that or beat our loved ones with a folding chair.” “The giraffe?” Suzaku asked. “Yeah, the one with the glowing red eyes and the bowler hat,” they said. “Of course,” Suzaku replied. And thus Euphemia was born.

Again Lelouch came before Okouchi and Taniguchi. He said unto them, “Oh creators, I have another favor to ask. The bitches you have given me, C.C. and Kallen, are very nice, but they’re not exactly what you would call ‘easy’. I need a girl who worships the ground I walk on and will do whatever I tell her. You know, someone I can hump and dump.” Again, it should be noted that Okouchi and Taniguchi were still extremely high. They replied to him, “Lelouch, we do not understand your incessant need for more bitches. Not only do you not have a penis, but you do not have the slightest bit of romantic interest in women.” “Exactly,” Lelouch said. “I just want to prove that if I did have any interest in women, and if I did have a penis to fuck them with, I could.” So they said unto him, “Very well Lelouch, we shall create this ‘easy’ girl for you. But in return she will be a tortured and miserable character. You will be inadvertently responsible for all the suffering in her life and it will all end with her life being cut tragically short. Now, do you still wish for this girl to be made?” Lelouch contemplated the offer for a moment. “How soon can you have her ready?” he asked. And thus Shirley was born.


Rofl! I was so sure that last one was Kaguya until right at the end lol.

Nobodyman9
2009-01-24, 01:22
Rofl! I was so sure that last one was Kaguya until right at the end lol.
I admit the whole "worship the ground I walk on" line does sound more like Kaguya. Probably should have used different choice of words. Well, I think it still came out okay.

Lord_Bear
2009-01-24, 01:25
Yep, definitely. :)

Levy
2009-01-24, 09:50
Lol, thanks Nobody XD
I particulary appreciate Nunnaly's genesis! XD

Lord_Bear
2009-01-24, 10:57
Phase 8 of Code Geass: The Game of Kings is up! :D

P.S. Sorry if the underlining looks pretentious; it's a habit from literature class and not doing it makes me squirm :P

mostrandomgirl92
2009-01-24, 13:47
[Fic] Lady of Zero: lelouch of the Rebellion
Title: Lady of Zero: Lelouch of the Rebellion
Genre: Adventure/Romance
Pairings: Lelouch/OC
Summary:When Lelouch made his promise to crush Britannia, someone close to him made the same promise. What if someone from Lelouch's past returns to fight with Zero as his right hand, not even knowing he survived? Will she find out who Zero really is? Lelouch/OC.

hey, this is my first time on this, so i hope i did it right! anyway, this is my story of fanfiction.net. hope u read it, here's the link

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4522718/1/The_Lady_of_Zero_Lelouch_of_the_Rebellion

note: please don't judgeit cus it's oc! lol!
hope u like it!

Lord_Bear
2009-01-25, 00:37
[Fic] Lady of Zero: lelouch of the Rebellion
Title: Lady of Zero: Lelouch of the Rebellion
Genre: Adventure/Romance
Pairings: Lelouch/OC
Summary:When Lelouch made his promise to crush Britannia, someone close to him made the same promise. What if someone from Lelouch's past returns to fight with Zero as his right hand, not even knowing he survived? Will she find out who Zero really is? Lelouch/OC.

hey, this is my first time on this, so i hope i did it right! anyway, this is my story of fanfiction.net. hope u read it, here's the link

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4522718/1/The_Lady_of_Zero_Lelouch_of_the_Rebellion

note: please don't judgeit cus it's oc! lol!
hope u like it!

I'll vouch for this one. The OC is definitely not a sue and actually fits in very well with the plot. I actually might read the latest couple of chapters at some point today, but that really depends on whether or not I can bring myself to focus on reading for more than five minutes; lately I haven't been able to concentrate on any reading at all. :(

Lolipopo
2009-01-27, 07:07
Taken from Romance thread

I'm not a stalker; that alias just stuck in my head coz it took me about 5 reads to pronounce it properly (I kept missing letters :P)

When did I say anything about making everyone review? I thought my 'generic paragraph' idea was a much better replacement for whining :P

I can't tell if you're joking or not about me knowing the story was awesome...

*Cries hysterically*

Oh and on the subject of Kallen....
Nope, I have nothing to say; you'll have to find out for yourself!



And here I thought my nick was the simpliest nick possible :'P

You are forcing us to review ! because you want 45 review/chapter and if you don't reach them, we know you are going to wait to give us the next chapter ! :D
On a more serious note though, I don't think any logic person would read your story without review. Well there is always something to say (like damn you ! what did you do to Kallen ! Things like that ;p)

No seriously I think you get what I mean :D

Lol It can't be a joke...seriously <_< I think it's certainly the most elaborate story I read in the CG section (and I read a lot. And I love a lot of stories. So that's a true compliment :'P)

...you know I just started to read your chapter. And I think I already have some murder needs towards you

DAMMNIT ! Why Shirley ! I wanted it to be Lelouch and I wanted to see him kneel and beg her forgiveness for what happened to her because of him ! xD

I'm going to finish the read before to send you some curse though.

Lord_Bear
2009-01-27, 07:11
Taken from Romance thread



And here I thought my nick was the simpliest nick possible :'P

You are forcing us to review ! because you want 45 review/chapter and if you don't reach them, we know you are going to wait to give us the next chapter ! :D

:confused: I have no idea where you got that idea from; I update the moment I finish proofreading a chapter without exceptions. The 40/chapter thing is just my goal, lol. I set the bar high to push myself; I don't want to say 500 at the start, get there after 12 chapters and go "Well, I reached my goal. Now what?" :p

On a more serious note though, I don't think any logic person would read your story without review. Well there is always something to say (like damn you ! what did you do to Kallen ! Things like that ;p)

No seriously I think you get what I mean :D

Lol It can't be a joke...seriously <_< I think it's certainly the most elaborate story I read in the CG section (and I read a lot. And I love a lot of stories. So that's a true compliment :'P)

...you know I just started to read your chapter. And I think I already have some murder needs towards you

DAMMNIT ! Why Shirley ! I wanted it to be Lelouch and I wanted to see him kneel and beg her forgiveness for what happened to her because of him ! xD

I'm going to finish the read before to send you some curse though.

Oh I have much better things for Lelouch to be doing. *Evil grin*

EDIT: To be honest, the main reason I always update straight away is because I just can't wait to get it out. :p

Lolipopo
2009-01-27, 19:36
:confused: I have no idea where you got that idea from; I update the moment I finish proofreading a chapter without exceptions. The 40/chapter thing is just my goal, lol. I set the bar high to push myself; I don't want to say 500 at the start, get there after 12 chapters and go "Well, I reached my goal. Now what?" :p



Oh I have much better things for Lelouch to be doing. *Evil grin*

EDIT: To be honest, the main reason I always update straight away is because I just can't wait to get it out. :p

Ohh that's nice of you then; I saw many writers to do so, not updating until they reached a certain ammount of reviews, though I figured it wasn't your case since even though you still didn't reach your 50 per chapter, you continue to update :p

Now as I said before I don't care about this, when the story is good and there is something to say, the review is like a given :'p

So about...

Lelouch, can't we have any hints ? Something like a preview or anything xD
Cause seriously the end of this chapter was cruel, like the previous one. Okouchi's way to end up every turn with a cliff contaminated you. :'(

Lord_Bear
2009-01-27, 21:09
It's 50 reviews now? Lol

Fishfood1
2009-01-27, 22:49
that game of kings fanfic is really good
especially that:
shirley is alive, and actually have cool purpose is really awesome :D

i can't wait to see new updates to that fanfic Lord Bear!

Lord_Bear
2009-01-27, 22:52
Cheers!

I think I've lost a couple of hundred readers because of Phase 7 (lol), but my review ratio is still like 1:16 which is like woah to me. XD

I'm actually going to spend my free time today going over the first 6 Phases for editing; I'm not entirely happy with the standard of grammar and style there. Sheesh, what a fun day. *Rolls eyes* :p

Yu Ominae
2009-02-05, 23:20
Been a while now, but I've updated my story in FF.net, Lost Soldiers with chapter 6.

So far, 10 people have placed it in Favorite Stories and Story Alerts alike. :)

Cal-Reflector
2009-02-07, 03:33
Code Geass: Lelouch of Brittania
Chapter 20: The Marriage Meeting
Characters: Milly
Songs listened to while writing this: Chobits OP

Aaaaaaaaaaaaand one-hundred-and-eleven revisions later an update! That was ridiculous, but perhaps not unexpected; it's Lelouch in a romantic situation after all.

URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3816236/20/

Lord_Bear
2009-02-07, 03:42
That reminds me; I really need to re-read your fic. I read it months ago, but I never really used my ff.net account then, so sorry for never leaving any reviews. :(

Lord_Bear
2009-02-07, 11:33
Update: Phase 9. =D

Title: Code Geass: The Game of Kings (http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4678033/1/)
Rating: T
Pairing: Lelouch/Kallen
Genre: Suspense/Thriller
Summary: The lines between player and piece have become blurred with the scars of sacrifice; the world destined to descend into even greater chaos as two enemies return to the board to rearrange their pieces. Sometimes, nobody knows who the enemy King truly is.
Progress: 9 chapters complete at ~72,000 words total.

EDIT: Oops, double-post! *Ducks head in shame* =(

Cal-Reflector
2009-02-07, 13:27
That reminds me; I really need to re-read your fic. I read it months ago, but I never really used my ff.net account then, so sorry for never leaving any reviews. :(

That's okay. You're busy writing after all.