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Theroryu

2014-10-11, 08:55

True...How about a...
GINTAMA crossover?

Screw the plot, 4th wall, characteristics, lores and facts!

Make all the characters take turns with the role of Tsukkomi and Boke. No matter how serious their original characters are! Accelerator, Aqua, Othinus, Ollerus etc.. They will each get their turn in both roles!

tsunade666

2014-10-11, 10:47

Aleister tsukkomi Touma about his hospital bill.

SugarBrain

2014-10-14, 19:20

I just saw! Those who love Twist of Fate, it has been updated. Yay!

https://www.fanfiction.net/s/9539513/30/Twist-of-Fate

Itherael

2014-10-16, 23:19

The One Above God

2014-10-17, 04:10

To those who like this certain blonde. This is what happens in the new chapter of A New ROAD of Misfortune. http://i.imgur.com/9RM3Snf.jpg?2 How this happened? Read to find out, folks. Just click on my signature.

Been wondering when this is gonna be updated :heh: Didn't expect it to be today

RPG_Fanatic

2014-10-17, 08:55

To those who like this certain blonde. This is what happens in the new chapter of A New ROAD of Misfortune. http://i.imgur.com/9RM3Snf.jpg?2 How this happened? Read to find out, folks. Just click on my signature.

I've been looking froward to the next chapter. I know what I'm doing when get home today. :D

FlyingCow65

2014-10-17, 09:49

To those who like this certain blonde. This is what happens in the new chapter of A New ROAD of Misfortune. http://i.imgur.com/9RM3Snf.jpg?2 How this happened? Read to find out, folks. Just click on my signature.

Do you have an idea of how much it hurt to read the Fukiyose part? I hope those two make up soon. =(

FInally some blonde Frenda and Misaka... Needs more Fukiyose (Goes on a rampage)

SmokinFerret88

2014-10-17, 13:33

Sooo....Kumokawa Seria just turned awesome in my eyes. Personality wise, I'm just now starting to see the appeal with her.

...

I suddenly feel compelled to give her more screen-time in Darkness now.

FlyingCow65

2014-10-17, 14:02

SmokinFerret88

2014-10-17, 14:08

Shoot, Seria might make an 'appearance' in this chapter. I use the term 'appearance' lightly since she's not actually gonna be there in person.

But I can see her trolling Mugino hard and the mental picture alone is hilarious.

As for Frenda...come on, that's just too easy. Like the same level of easy as wowing a 6 year old with the coin-behind-the-ear trick.

FlyingCow65

2014-10-17, 14:11

I would ask for the hypnotic diary but that already happend XD making Frenda the target. Booms everywhere.

SmokinFerret88

2014-10-17, 14:18

Don't worry, I'll think of something that should get things like that happening.

Not sure what yet or at who, but I'll figure it out.

Welsh_Dragon

2014-10-17, 15:01

To those who like this certain blonde. This is what happens in the new chapter of A New ROAD of Misfortune. http://i.imgur.com/9RM3Snf.jpg?2 How this happened? Read to find out, folks. Just click on my signature.

I happened to like that part in the FF. And damn, I forgot Frenda had a cute little ass. Such a shame she was killed off in the novels. At least we have ferret's ff with her.

Inept Forum User

2014-10-17, 16:51

Apologies if this shouldn't be asked here. Have there been any stories where Mikoto learns the truth behind that little Thor-related incident (perhaps through observation and connecting the dots) and if not, how do people imagine such a scene would work/play out?

Itherael

2014-10-17, 20:04

Do you have an idea of how much it hurt to read the Fukiyose part? I hope those two make up soon. =(

FInally some blonde Frenda and Misaka... Needs more Fukiyose (Goes on a rampage)

Do not worry, my friend. Touma will settle things with her, though the situation will be quite ridiculous. However, that's not going to happen yet, at least not in the next two chapters, but rest assured, when you read it, you will be pleased.

SmokinFerret88

2014-10-19, 23:07

Okay, so now that I've finished reading NT11, I think I can safely say that I am still working in cannon territory. That had to have been my biggest fear of this volume, mainly because I didn't know when the flashback took place.

Now I know for certain that: A. It took place a year ago. B. Touma's personality wasn't as far-off as I thought it would be. And C. *SPOILER!!*

All in all, my Darkness project still falls well into cannon territory without deviating from the actual events that took place prior to the start of the series.

Therefore, I think this (http://www.anime-contemplation.com/wp-content/uploads/2010/06/EP10-Yui-Safe.png) conveys my relief on this matter quite nicely.

Draco Spirit

2014-10-20, 06:48

Fellen

2014-10-20, 07:05

Bet were going to see more Seria fanfiction in the light of NT11 for sure. Also on NT 11..

Am I right in understanding that Touma can't remember Shokuhou? I'm planning to use her in my fanfics Seven Days, so I need to figure how to write her chapter with this is mind :D
Maybe have Tsuchimikado troll Seria by originally having Seria planning to go on the date but Tsuchi prevents her from going and he instead contacts Misaki and somehow convinces her to go to the date instead (since Misaki wouldn't feel like it without a little push).

Draco Spirit

2014-10-20, 09:18

Maybe Seria and Misaki doing a bit of tug of war with subtle multiplication... The rivalry is certainly too much of opportunity to pass up however I write it anyway >.<

On a different topic, are there any classic gods that Index fits reasonably well in nature?

allfictions

2014-10-20, 15:11

cannon
http://static.tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pub/images/TsarCannon350_2182.jpg
Eh. :heh:

FlyingCow65

2014-10-20, 17:37

http://static.tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pub/images/TsarCannon350_2182.jpg
Eh. :heh:

lol

Help here, let´s go with the facts we already know what happend with the memories of Misaki, ok so, Imagine Breaker helped return the world to his original phase, so what would happen if IB were used on Kamijou Touma´s head, especially on his destroyed HD of Misaki?

tsunade666

2014-10-20, 17:48

lol

Help here, let´s go with the facts we already know what happend with the memories of Misaki, ok so, Imagine Breaker helped return the world to his original phase, so what would happen if IB were used on Kamijou Touma´s head, especially on his destroyed HD of Misaki?

Its physical damage. It won't do anything. Its different from magic attack that Izzard do that can be dispel and this thread is also not the place to discuss the possibilities of such thing.

Anything that has gone in natural way can't be restored by IB.

jrdragon2006

2014-10-20, 17:51

Halloween is coming up is anyone plaing on making a Halloween fanfic here?

silverexorcist

2014-10-20, 18:12

*raises hand* I plan to make a lot of one-shots this holiday season. There are enough witch characters that we saw during the British Halloween and working for Styl that I can't resist making a Samhain reference. I'll probably drag Alfar into it as well. the fanfic universe really needs some enjoyable holiday themed stories for people to enjoy at home.

Welsh_Dragon

2014-10-20, 19:19

FlyingCow65

2014-10-20, 20:42

Its physical damage. It won't do anything. Its different from magic attack that Izzard do that can be dispel and this thread is also not the place to discuss the possibilities of such thing.

Anything that has gone in natural way can't be restored by IB.

Yea but let´s take it to the fanfiction way, let´s think that there´s a way to get back the HD with a lot of work but it would need the IB.

The One Above God

2014-10-20, 21:47

Yea but let´s take it to the fanfiction way, let´s think that there´s a way to get back the HD with a lot of work but it would need the IB.

how about use IB's trait as the restoration point of the world?

FlyingCow65

2014-10-20, 21:58

how about use IB's trait as the restoration point of the world?

http://img.pandawhale.com/85473-south-park-NICE-meme-fi0v.png

I´m on word now working with an exposition for school so yea.

Using IB as a restoration point for the damage area would work. But for that they would need someone who is capable of using it, Othinus and Ollerus are part of that, well more Othinus, but I don´t want to make it so easy. Maybe put a neutral god? and some science here and there.

Draco Spirit

2014-10-21, 03:34

Halloween is coming up is anyone plaing on making a Halloween fanfic here?

Doubt I have time with Civilization Beyond Earth coming up between now and then >.<

I'm tempted to do a Kuroko centric Christmas one, based on Kuroko and the Railgun girls going to her home for the holiday, mostly because its a great excuse to speculate on what kind of family Kuroko has got, plus you know all the feels you can do with a Christmas tale. ;)

LevelSeven

2014-10-21, 13:45

I´m on word now working with an exposition for school so yea.

Using IB as a restoration point for the damage area would work. But for that they would need someone who is capable of using it, Othinus and Ollerus are part of that, well more Othinus, but I don´t want to make it so easy. Maybe put a neutral god? and some science here and there.

using beetle and creating cells which will be inserted into toumas right shoulder...

othinus will use her godly knowledge and write hundreds of magical systems on his body, than he will be placed on a good place for using the earths mana....

than, the dark matter will spread to IB and do a similar trick like rensa did in NT7, it recreates IB,

before that, several electrical cables will be attached in and on toumas body, the eletricity togther with the drugs and chemical control (mikoto and misaki) will force dark matter and give it the orders it needs,

than, dark matter takes partially properties of IB and goes through his body, for surviving that, he needs a power which will close his wounds afer dark matter went through his body, (motoharus auto rebirth)

than, the magical symbols will change the flow of time around touma, but they will also need a controller, someone who can think fatser than tree diagram and control forces of unbelievable power, (well, his inexplicable power could surely be used as deus ex machina but it wouldnt be interesting), but i think you know who i mean, accel

than, after, dark matter reaches toumas brain it will take the surroundings which are now "in the past" and try to rcreate the world to its "original look",

than, they will need toumas past body which needs to be brought close to them, which is awakis job,

than, dark matter will recreate toumas brain to 100%,

is this difficult enough? :heh:

btw, after that, you can make two good aftereffects to make the story more entertaining, first: kakine finally recreates himself which was a side effect of the "operation", and he comes back as a unbelievable super strong and 100% evil, without being cocky, only evil, super villian,

second: touma loses his mind because he remembers ALL the things he experienced in NT9 which will now affect him since plot armor is gone :p, he sees thinks which arent there and becomes paranoid :eyespin:

hope i could give you a few ideas :cool:

FlyingCow65

2014-10-21, 22:25

using beetle and creating cells which will be inserted into toumas right shoulder...

othinus will use her godly knowledge and write hundreds of magical systems on his body, than he will be placed on a good place for using the earths mana....

than, the dark matter will spread to IB and do a similar trick like rensa did in NT7, it recreates IB,

before that, several electrical cables will be attached in and on toumas body, the eletricity togther with the drugs and chemical control (mikoto and misaki) will force dark matter and give it the orders it needs,

than, dark matter takes partially properties of IB and goes through his body, for surviving that, he needs a power which will close his wounds afer dark matter went through his body, (motoharus auto rebirth)

than, the magical symbols will change the flow of time around touma, but they will also need a controller, someone who can think fatser than tree diagram and control forces of unbelievable power, (well, his inexplicable power could surely be used as deus ex machina but it wouldnt be interesting), but i think you know who i mean, accel

than, after, dark matter reaches toumas brain it will take the surroundings which are now "in the past" and try to rcreate the world to its "original look",

than, they will need toumas past body which needs to be brought close to them, which is awakis job,

than, dark matter will recreate toumas brain to 100%,

is this difficult enough? :heh:

btw, after that, you can make two good aftereffects to make the story more entertaining, first: kakine finally recreates himself which was a side effect of the "operation", and he comes back as a unbelievable super strong and 100% evil, without being cocky, only evil, super villian,

second: touma loses his mind because he remembers ALL the things he experienced in NT9 which will now affect him since plot armor is gone :p, he sees thinks which arent there and becomes paranoid :eyespin:

hope i could give you a few ideas :cool:

It´s actually good, but it uses many things, I can work with some of them since my knowledge of science isn´t that good, still using Dark Matter to recreate that part of his brain is good,

But for that you would need the original part, wich means they could go to the past. Copy the unbroken part of Misaki, copy that and replace it on his head, a lo of things could go there.

Kakine getting a Phonix Down seems good, using a part of himself to travel trough time and absorbing something little of the Original in the past to recover himself.

But the time part is hard, AC doesn´t have time machines, maybe Thor pulling a running backwards or Awaki using Level Upper on herself to use move point on a Level 5 status. Misaka could use her electricity and the clones could help accelerator with the calculations.

Misaki could keep the mind intact during the operation but I guess she would need a lot of stamina for that.

As for the aftereffects of NT 9 I have an idea.

rubix22

2014-10-30, 14:29

If I wrote something called "Academy City Horror Story", how many people would want to pitch in a drabble to make it a collective work? Just curious.

SmokinFerret88

2014-10-30, 14:46

I'll pitch in, provided I fully understand what precisely your asking for.

allfictions

2014-10-30, 14:52

Hm, it's been a while since I wrote anything, so I might be interested in contributing, if you think I'm good enough of course.

rubix22

2014-10-30, 15:21

I'll pitch in, provided I fully understand what precisely your asking for.

Ghost stories with an Academy City angle is what I'm imagining. Really, there aren't many restrictions other than it being a Halloween-ish title. Honestly, I feel like I can write something creepy right now, so a collection of thematically "creepy" ideas would be nice.

LevelSeven

2014-10-31, 07:27

Hm, it's been a while since I wrote anything, so I might be interested in contributing, if you think I'm good enough of course.

how is it with the overused aspect of "living the same day everytime again" :heh:

im sure you know what i mean, something happens and Touma is struck in a time loop where he wakes up at 3 a clock (he is falling form his bed (everytime)) and the same day, 15.12.XXXX is repeating itself...

now, try to find a way to stop that mess :)

spoiler: this is the way how i would end it :cool:
he is searching, well, what else should he do...
each time he feels a force which is giving him a headache, and the next moment the day is repeated again...

others wont belief him (of course, who would? well, NT9 had some crazy stuff, but they are forgetting it by each "again" :cool:)

so, he tries to find it, the strange thing is that the "force" is happening on different times, it can even happen a few days later, but he is everytime thrown back to 15.12.XXXX 3AM

after some time he comes closer and finally finds out that it is accel who is repeating the day, a accident, a random accident killed LO, a car accident, and in that moment he lost his mind (or something like that), he repeated the day BUT he forgets the stuff too (because he dont want to remember it), and the same accident happens again and again...

first part would be touma "trying to find the reason for the repeated days"
seocnd part would be touma "tying to stop the reasen for the repeated days" because, even by touching accel with his right hand he cant stop the "inexplicable power" :eyespin: :eyespin: :eyespin: :heh:

i hope you like it, i would want a large story about this but feel free to change it...

you can also do a "harem-story" where touma gains a visit of each girl in toaru again and again :uhoh: or a disaster-day where each and everyone around touma dies (maybe because of accidents, planned attacks OR simple misfortune (because he is giving everyone misfortune again))

and his "job" is to stop it :D

hope it helped ;) :cool:

The One Above God

2014-10-31, 07:42

how is it with the overused aspect of "living the same day everytime again" :heh:

im sure you know what i mean, something happens and Touma is struck in a time loop where he wakes up at 3 a clock (he is falling form his bed (everytime)) and the same day, 15.12.XXXX is repeating itself...

now, try to find a way to stop that mess :)

spoiler: this is the way how i would end it :cool:
he is searching, well, what else should he do...
each time he feels a force which is giving him a headache, and the next moment the day is repeated again...

others wont belief him (of course, who would? well, NT9 had some crazy stuff, but they are forgetting it by each "again" :cool:)

so, he tries to find it, the strange thing is that the "force" is happening on different times, it can even happen a few days later, but he is everytime thrown back to 15.12.XXXX 3AM

after some time he comes closer and finally finds out that it is accel who is repeating the day, a accident, a random accident killed LO, a car accident, and in that moment he lost his mind (or something like that), he repeated the day BUT he forgets the stuff too (because he dont want to remember it), and the same accident happens again and again...

first part would be touma "trying to find the reason for the repeated days"
seocnd part would be touma "tying to stop the reasen for the repeated days" because, even by touching accel with his right hand he cant stop the "inexplicable power" :eyespin: :eyespin: :eyespin: :heh:

i hope you like it, i would want a large story about this but feel free to change it...

you can also do a "harem-story" where touma gains a visit of each girl in toaru again and again :uhoh: or a disaster-day where each and everyone around touma dies (maybe because of accidents, planned attacks OR simple misfortune (because he is giving everyone misfortune again))

and his "job" is to stop it :D

hope it helped ;) :cool:

It could just be Touma having a nightmare loop due to having a trauma from dying so many times in a game :heh:

allfictions

2014-10-31, 09:13

how is it with the overused aspect of "living the same day everytime again" :heh:

im sure you know what i mean, something happens and Touma is struck in a time loop where he wakes up at 3 a clock (he is falling form his bed (everytime)) and the same day, 15.12.XXXX is repeating itself...

now, try to find a way to stop that mess :)

spoiler: this is the way how i would end it :cool:
he is searching, well, what else should he do...
each time he feels a force which is giving him a headache, and the next moment the day is repeated again...

others wont belief him (of course, who would? well, NT9 had some crazy stuff, but they are forgetting it by each "again" :cool:)

so, he tries to find it, the strange thing is that the "force" is happening on different times, it can even happen a few days later, but he is everytime thrown back to 15.12.XXXX 3AM

after some time he comes closer and finally finds out that it is accel who is repeating the day, a accident, a random accident killed LO, a car accident, and in that moment he lost his mind (or something like that), he repeated the day BUT he forgets the stuff too (because he dont want to remember it), and the same accident happens again and again...

first part would be touma "trying to find the reason for the repeated days"
seocnd part would be touma "tying to stop the reasen for the repeated days" because, even by touching accel with his right hand he cant stop the "inexplicable power" :eyespin: :eyespin: :eyespin: :heh:

i hope you like it, i would want a large story about this but feel free to change it...

you can also do a "harem-story" where touma gains a visit of each girl in toaru again and again :uhoh: or a disaster-day where each and everyone around touma dies (maybe because of accidents, planned attacks OR simple misfortune (because he is giving everyone misfortune again))

and his "job" is to stop it :D

hope it helped ;) :cool:
Well thanks, I did think about using the Groundhound day loop concept (That Feeling, You Can Only Say What It Is in French is one of my favorite Stephen King's story) before changing my mind since it's kinda cliché and technically already happened in the ToAru verse with NT9. Rather, I'm thinking of using one of the more disturbing urban legends of Academy City.

Thank you all the same though.

LevelSeven

2014-10-31, 11:36

Well thanks, I did think about using the Groundhound day loop concept (That Feeling, You Can Only Say What It Is in French is one of my favorite Stephen King's story) before changing my mind since it's kinda cliché and technically already happened in the ToAru verse with NT9. Rather, I'm thinking of using one of the more disturbing urban legends of Academy City.

Thank you all the same though.

no problem :D

@the one abov god
It could just be Touma having a nightmare loop due to having a trauma from dying so many times in a game

does he play games? i never saw him as that kind of char, he doesnt seem like someone who would willingly spend hours on a game :)
the nightmare loop sounds good, maybe he is repeating the NT9-worlds in his dreams (slowly falling apart and having illusions which are 100% real for him)...

in reality he developed brain cancer which lets him see illusions, would be great to have a story about a paranaoid touma who isnt trusting anybody :eyespin:

silverexorcist

2014-10-31, 13:30

Guess what day it is! [Insert various Hump Day memes here]

But in all seriousness...

Blonde witches.

A Certain Collection of Events (https://www.fanfiction.net/s/9692264/8/A-Certain-Collection-of-Events) new Halloween special chapter is up for your viewing pleasure.

SmokinFerret88

2014-10-31, 22:39

..::ATTENTION!!!::..

A Certain World of Darkness (https://www.fanfiction.net/s/9255717/30/A-Certain-World-of-Darkness) has been updated.

..::THAT IS ALL!!!::..

Atrum023

2014-11-01, 19:05

Nice! I've been looking forward to this~

And Touma is actually getting paid? I somehow get the feeling that despite that, his financial situation wouldn't improve too much...

On another note, it looks like he wouldn't receive any form of training? So does that mean he'd be developing (as a combatant) much like in canon?

FlyingCow65

2014-11-01, 19:06

..::ATTENTION!!!::..

A Certain World of Darkness (https://www.fanfiction.net/s/9255717/30/A-Certain-World-of-Darkness) has been updated.

..::THAT IS ALL!!!::..

Holy F*cking Yes!

Amazing chap Ferret, as always, and did a felt some tsu tsun vibes coming from the Number 4?

SmokinFerret88

2014-11-01, 19:29

On another note, it looks like he wouldn't receive any form of training? So does that mean he'd be developing (as a combatant) much like in canon?

Yes, he's gonna develop as a combatant very much like how he did in canon. He'll learn a few things as times goes on, things he pretty much gets strong-armed into learning. But, outside of those things, he'll develop the same as he did in Old Testament.

Amazing chap Ferret, as always, and did a felt some tsun tsun vibes coming from the Number 4?

Where did you feel that vibe? No, seriously, where does that vibe feel strongest. I'm curious now.

FlyingCow65

2014-11-01, 19:45

Yes, he's gonna develop as a combatant very much like how he did in canon. He'll learn a few things as times goes on, things he pretty much gets strong-armed into learning. But, outside of those things, he'll develop the same as he did in Old Testament.

Where did you feel that vibe? No, seriously, where does that vibe feel strongest. I'm curious now.

When she tells Frenda to keep quiet about the money, she felt that Touma had to be rewarded for his interruption in the batle. BUt I guess that´s my POV, still wonderful job.

Inept Forum User

2014-11-02, 08:22

Just been wondering about two things:

Are there any Toaru FFs involving Hyakumonogatari Kaidankai (http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Hyakumonogatari_Kaidankai)?
Just wondering, how do people reckon a zombie epidemic would play out in Toaru (in AC?)? Do you reckon it would be any different from the usual, or not?

If I wrote something called "Academy City Horror Story", how many people would want to pitch in a drabble to make it a collective work? Just curious.
Ghost stories with an Academy City angle is what I'm imagining. Really, there aren't many restrictions other than it being a Halloween-ish title. Honestly, I feel like I can write something creepy right now, so a collection of thematically "creepy" ideas would be nice.

Sounds interesting. (though I probably wouldn't be able to help at all)
Well thanks, I did think about using the Groundhound day loop concept (That Feeling, You Can Only Say What It Is in French is one of my favorite Stephen King's story) before changing my mind since it's kinda cliché and technically already happened in the ToAru verse with NT9. Rather, I'm thinking of using one of the more disturbing urban legends of Academy City.

Just out of curiosity, did you have a specific one in mind?

LevelSeven

2014-11-02, 11:54

Just been wondering about two things:

Just wondering, how do people reckon a zombie epidemic would play out in Toaru (in AC?)? Do you reckon it would be any different from the usual, or not?

it would be interesting to see/read how the normal students are panicking and trying to survive :heh: people like accel would only be annoyed, the zombies would be easier killed than normal humans ;)

well, but it could be dangerous for him if on of the 9982 sisters turned into a zombie :eyespin:

my question:
regrading the "brain into animal and having a new body" thing from NT11:

Is it possible to do this by humans too? because it sounds really cool to have some ruthless kiharas taking over the body of accel, touma, shiage and than messing around with aleisters plan :heh:

allfictions

2014-11-02, 18:41

Just out of curiosity, did you have a specific one in mind?

Three, in fact:

Specimen #502
Forbidden Name
The one about not crossing between the school district boundaries (Imaginary Number District)

And probably try and see what could be done about "that" which is under direct control of Tokiwadai Middle School's Student Council .

R.LocK

2014-11-04, 04:37

I've fallen behind. I need to catch up with Darkness...

Yes, you did use that phrase with Frenda flipping out about actually being a high school student! :)

demino_hellsin

2014-11-08, 18:18

Didn't somebody already write a ToumaXKonori pairing?

I can't find any on ff.net

FlyingCow65

2014-11-09, 01:15

Didn't somebody already write a ToumaXKonori pairing?

I can't find any on ff.net

Twist of Fate, has Misaki and Seria as childhood friends with Touma, there´s a harem there, consisting of MIsaki, Seria, Himegami, Musujime, Othinus(small), Konori, I think Kongou fell for him.

It´s revealed by a gut from the future that Gunha is the son of Touma and Misaki.

demino_hellsin

2014-11-09, 04:01

I'm looking for Konori as the main. There was a judgement Touma though right? Who's his harem there?

Welsh_Dragon

2014-11-10, 01:30

This is who is in the harem of Twist of Fate: Misaki, Seria, Konori, Himegami, Musujime, Itsuwa(needs a last name already), Shutaura Sequenzia, Nunotaba Shinobu, Ureapaddy Exica, Cendrillon, Othi-chan, Misaka(of course), Kongou Mitsuko fell for him, Oriana Thomson(unkown), Kanzaki Kaori(implied).

It´s revealed by a gut from the future that Gunha is the son of Touma and Misaki.

I don't take that as real. I think Mr. time traveler just said that to use Gunha to anchor down TouMAN during that ghost incident so he doesn't do anything stupid.

@demino I seem to remember one with that theme a while back. I think it was abandoned since there hasn't been an update for a really long time.

demino_hellsin

2014-11-10, 06:23

I imagined Touma and Konori having this duality in their view of justice. Touma wants to right the wrong in front of him to assure a happy ending. Konori rights the situation as seen from the bigger picture so her viewpoint is slightly more distant

silverexorcist

2014-11-10, 19:25

Finally got around to this...Yay me.

If anyone wants to read a fanfic on the Dark May Project, then I direct you to this: Aura Eclipse Æ (https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10816957/1/Aura-Eclipse-%C3%86). Input is appreciated. Thanks to the very little information we have on the Dark May Project, I'm curious about what other people imagined--I want to account for all perspectives reasonably if I continue this. I already know I need to add 'marks' into it and find a way to interpret those vague comments Kuroyoru made in NT1 Chapter 5...

LevelSeven

2014-11-22, 18:25

does anyone know the US-series "Haven"?

i really like it and the concept with the troubles and forcing the people to finally become one with their true emotions/feelings isnt actually new but quie interesting :)

so...

i have a request to anyone who knows the series: (and the ones who dont know it, Watch It, it is worth the time :] )
which kind of problem would be most interesting for which char of toaru?
-touma could have the "speak no evil" trouble which closes (it stichtes them up) the mouth, eyes and ears of anyone who tries to say him anything that he dont want to accept...
-accel could have the one which duke showed in the last episode, where everything around the user starts to heat themselfes until the user finally dies, it always happens if the user feels lonely etc. (the series explains it better)
-shiage would have the "earhquake" trouble :)

im not sure what the others should have....
maybe gunha with the trouble to "control others with his voice" :D

Draco Spirit

2014-12-11, 13:47

Here's a idea for a festive fanfic.

Have Mikoto teamed up with Uiharu, doing Christmas Judgement peace keeping, with Mikoto dressed up as snowman or something similar to hide her identity.

Then have them meet Accelerator and Last Order, with Mikoto seeing the better side of Accelerator for the first time and then fill it full of feels. :D

rubix22

2014-12-22, 00:35

LevelSeven

2014-12-22, 05:26

Time traveling shenanigans where LO and Fremea meet child versions of the three heroes.

shota-Touma is depressive and brooding with a violent streak. ( Based on comments from Komoe that Touma was a troublemaker )

shota-Accel is a normalfag who just wants to fit in and comes across as optimistic about making friends in the future.

shota-Hamazura is a full blown chuunibyou who's desperately preparing for an awakening of his dormant powers.
sounds cool :cool: would be awesome if they actually have a big impact on the three heroes, btw, you should add index into it since we need the 3 lolis of the heroes :heh:
and after coming back to the future they suddenly have 180° changed MC's :heh:

i give my thumbs up even if it becomes a crack!Fic, the amount of storys with LO/fremea as MC's are actually so small :D it would be awesome to see some changes :cool: :heh:

rubix22

2014-12-22, 10:57

^Fraulein might be a better fit since they're all friends.

I like the idea of dealing with the childhood personalities of certain characters. I'm pretty sure Accel used to look forward making friends and Hamazura used to dream of being an crazy powerful esper. Along with a darker, bullied Touma, there's something special about humor with a dash of soul-crushing irony.

But rather than 180, I'd think it would be funny if time traveling shenanigans contributed to their current personalities. Like Fremea introducing the naive easily queasy shota-Accel to violent videogames which in turn made him apathetic to gore in the future.

http://www.chuing.net/zboard/revol_getimg.php?id=mgum&no=17717&num=4&fc=0bf3d90d44a7d8645fe06576412e0378

Draco Spirit

2014-12-22, 11:29

For added fun why don't throw in future versions too? Imagine a Accelerator or Touma with family commitments? ;)

LevelSeven

2014-12-23, 07:12

@rubix
the picture is great :D +fräulein could make it interesting, afterall there are even less fanfis with her, not ven as side char :/

while i would like to see them (LO etc) finding their "guardians" changed and like completly different personalities, i would be happy enough to only see LO/fremea etc. shining XD

Draco Spirit

2014-12-31, 09:23

So I finished a festive fanfic in time for New Year, that based on Christmas Eve >.<

https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10933973/1/Winters-Embrace

Featuring everyone's favorite albino, "aww moments" and my first go at writing Mugino! :D

Itherael

2015-01-01, 01:15

MONSTER HUNT

The New chapter of A New Road of Misfortune is here.

This is what happens in it:

http://i.imgur.com/ENejRUI.jpg

Also, this!

http://i.imgur.com/F9SJzrz.jpg

RPG_Fanatic

2015-01-01, 13:15

MONSTER HUNT

The New chapter of A New Road of Misfortune is here.

Wow. I was not expecting an update like this during the year end holidays. Thanks, I look forward to reading what happens next.

JaDe In NighT

2015-01-02, 05:46

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jrdragon2006

2015-01-08, 21:48

Next month is Valentine's is anyone go make a Valentine's Fanfic
Here?

LevelSeven

2015-01-09, 04:49

Next month is Valentine's is anyone go make a Valentine's Fanfic
Here?
:heh: sometimes i think the fandom in the fanfic-section is on standby :heh:, while NT9 came out we got a few updates each day (and more), now it is 1-2 updates for 4-5 days :upset: :heh:
maybe after NT12 the fandom of the fanfic-section will revive again :D

EDIT: i think i will try to make a story where accel wakes up in his 18 years old body (without choker, and trained to some extend) and finds a girl on his side... either mikoto or misaki... im not sure... i think i will use mikoto but misaki would be something new :/

Chaos2Frozen

2015-01-09, 05:07

Next month is Valentine's is anyone go make a Valentine's Fanfic
Here?

I kinda lost touch on some pairings.

Not necessarily romantic pairings, just interesting idea pairings. Like that Kakine x Girl in Dress oneshot.

EDIT: .... I'll need to make a list again.

Draco Spirit

2015-01-09, 05:27

Next month is Valentine's is anyone go make a Valentine's Fanfic
Here?

Name some lessor used pairings with great potential and I might do a fluffy one shot. ;)

Chaos2Frozen

2015-01-09, 09:51

Disclaimer: These aren't all romance pairing, just ones that might be fun to play with. On that note since I never read the Accelerator manga, I don't know how viable the new girl is. Saten might also be interesting, I recall she wing-girl a bit for Mikoto in the Railgun manga?

Kamijou
Index, Othinus, Birdway, Cinderella
Mikoto, Misaki, Seria, Maria, Seiri, Aisa, Shutaura

Accelerator
Last Order, Worst, Awaki

Kakine
Girl in Dress, Uiharu, Mugino (?)

Etzali
Xochitl, Tochtli

Ollerus
Slivia

Aleister
Laura

Draco Spirit

2015-01-09, 09:54

Maybe I could do a Aleister / Laura one shot, it could be funny if dealt with in a clearly crack manner. ;)

jrdragon2006

2015-01-09, 22:40

I like to see Touma X Worst, only reason she would go ever Touma is to troll Mikoto and the other Sister's :)

Chaos2Frozen

2015-01-10, 02:10

I'm personally not a fan of any of the clone pairings, at bare minimum I'm okay with Worst x Accelerator but it's not something I would strive for.

DLH VII

2015-01-14, 12:18

My English is weird, but I want to share this crack of mine.

"Hey, hey, hey. This playboy is coming this way. Ryuha, BUT WHAT YOU DOING?"

With the approach of the playboy, a woman with jacket and the other wearing a dress follows him. Ryuha kicks his friend to the bush and appears in front of the playboy. He was copying that dress woman, by some chance.

"..."

"Ryuha!!!!!!"

"..."

"Hamazura ..."

"What the fuck ..."

"Super what ..."

Ryuha looks around before starting something completely bizarre. He begins to sing, as he begins a bizarre dance where he gives some grips on the nipples and begins to give some swings to the sides in a row.

"Chichi, chichi oppai. Boing Boin-"

Before completing the music, four ion beams go toward Ryuha and force him to touch the face, thus ceasing transformation. The reaction of all were equal: flabbergasted with the perverted action of Ryuha with the body of Mugino.

JaDe In NighT

2015-01-17, 10:33

dafuq did i read

DLH VII

2015-01-17, 11:19

dafuq did i read
You're reading a crack. Cracks don't have sense, reason or logic.

Mr.Kyon

2015-01-17, 15:59

You're reading a crack. Cracks don't have sense, reason or logic.
hahaha snort blow ez fic ez life xd

Nevereth

2015-01-17, 16:11

It is really my first try to write something
Sorry for bad writing, :P

Tanaka was rasping for air, lying on the floor.
His foe... It was the first time he was experiencing such feeling. It took only one stike in his temple to make his ideal control over his own body cells crumble. He could feel how his body was spasming over reversing his replicated heart to the pile of flesh. Right now, he lived only because he had already regenerated his "first" heart even if it had a metal spike inside. Of course, he still had internal bleeding due to this piece of metal.

It was a major flaw of his Cellularr Evolution. Although he could regenerate his body and produce adrenaline through fastening natural internal processes like metabolism, his "evolution" like making an additional heart was possible only by creating cancer cells and turning them into the tissues and organs. And now he could naturally feel his power turning against him. He could not destroy these cells like usual, not when he lost his control. He weakly looked at spiky headed boy who made this fatal blow. Was it... Fear? Regret? Well, Tanaka did not care.

He could not do anything now and he knew that. He merely chuckled.
"So... Is it how I'm going to die, eh?"
The pain in his chest was becoming more and more intense. He coughed some blood. It was obivious that would not be able to survive.
"At least I've done what I wanted. She is as good as dead too".

He smiled slightly at sight of the unconscious teleporter.

"Say, your arm is negating esper powers, right? Well, I had already broke up her implant. And you are not getting the new one anywhere soon, not when that these researchers are wiped out.". And then he laughed again.

That did it.
"Why?! Why have you gone to such length to harm her?!". Imagine Breaker was really livid now. Touma knew about sandy haired girl's condition. He knew that this beaten man tried to kill her. But he was not intended to bring him to verge of death, let alone kill him.

"You know... Both of us had the potential to become level 5. Both of us got a cancer during the Currilium and both of us had got these pesky implants in our brains to stop the illness from spreading. But we just ended as Kihara's playthings. I was lucky because of my ability, but she could not be free again. And then she became the Guide in hope to be free and reunite with her sweet older brother who lost his self long ago. Futile hope, I dare to say. I only freed her from her misery".

Then Tanaka remembered Touma's words during their fight:
"You told me you will break my illusion. Well, you have done that perfectly. As I have done with Matsuri's..."

Then brown haired teen closed his eyes, sliding into the darkness.
I really wonder sometimes, what if Touma would fight someone, whose very own life depends on his power and kill him occasionally

LevelSeven

2015-01-17, 16:18

DLH VII

2015-01-24, 14:12

Draco Spirit

2015-01-24, 18:10

Random topic, but anyone got tips on how to write screams of fear that's interesting? :p

DLH VII

2015-01-24, 18:14

Random topic, but anyone got tips on how to write screams of fear that's interesting? :pYou can repeat? I did not understand your question.

LevelSeven

2015-01-25, 05:04

I thought of creating an alternate universe where Kamijou Touma does not exist. They would have three cities with equivalent technologies such as present in the academic city and four churches (Russian, Roman and Anglican. The latter would be a Spanish). It would be good to write this?
mmmhhhh :/
it sounds intresting but also like much work :/
i always wanted to use the "world-changing" as basis too :) but dropped touma into a world where everyone was born as gemstone and the rare cases existed who had not a single ability... (50 or so people who are able to use magic), and touma finds himself without parents/friends/othinus in that world XD
I even had the idea to create the synopsis. Would be interesting?
In one of the creations of Othinus, there is a universe where the host of Imagine Breaker is not Kamijou Touma. Three big cities, four churches. How could be a world where Kamijou does not exist and another host is responsible for one of the main cities of the scientific world?
i would give it a chance :D

Draco Spirit

2015-01-25, 06:06

You can repeat? I did not understand your question.

You know something better than '"Ahh!" Touma screamed in terror.'

SmokinFerret88

2015-01-25, 07:26

Random topic, but anyone got tips on how to write screams of fear that's interesting? :p

Huh?

You know something better than '"Ahh!" Touma screamed in terror.'

Oh, okay, how's this then?

"GAAAAAAH!!!" The abrupt outburst which had erupted from the confines of Kamijou's vocal folds perfectly conveyed the amount of terror in that moment.

Even without taking his visage, any and all who heard it would be right to assume that it went beyond being simply startled; that had been a scream of someone who was legitimately terrified.

Hopefully this example will suffice....though I'm wordy so...yeah. >.>

LevelSeven

2015-01-25, 08:16

"GAAAAAAH!!!" The abrupt outburst which had erupted from the confines of Kamijou's vocal folds perfectly conveyed the amount of terror in that moment.

Even without taking his visage, any and all who heard it would be right to assume that it went beyond being simply startled; that had been a scream of someone who was legitimately terrified.

:heh: and now i will copy it and use it everytime i need it, with the exact same words in each situation :heh: :heh:

Draco Spirit

2015-01-25, 11:27

Huh?

Oh, okay, how's this then?

"GAAAAAAH!!!" The abrupt outburst which had erupted from the confines of Kamijou's vocal folds perfectly conveyed the amount of terror in that moment.

Even without taking his visage, any and all who heard it would be right to assume that it went beyond being simply startled; that had been a scream of someone who was legitimately terrified.

Hopefully this example will suffice....though I'm wordy so...yeah. >.>

Ok, that works >.<

DLH VII

2015-01-25, 21:08

ATTENTION PEASANTS!!!
Prologue.
No_Imagine_Breaker.

[???]

"Aleister Crowley. Long time no see."

That robotic voice came from a light hall, where windows focused all the lights on the ground. It was a medieval hall, with pillars and brightening candles. At the end of the hall, there was a coffin representing a seated man. Inside the coffin, there was a certain man.

Two holographic screens appear in front of that coffin. People shown by the holograms are Aleister Crowley and an unknown girl, the only one of two that were not maintained by machines. You could see a white blur in front of this girl.

"Reige, I believe that its meeting is unnecessary."

"Aleister's right. But before you decide something, say the reason for this meeting."

The two voices were authoritarian, but nothing that would make the man in the coffin tense. He keeps talking to them, even when completely covered by a coffin. Reige went straight, trying to explain in a simple and not complex form for the two directors.

"We are the only humans who had contact with Awaiss, right? He once told us about the existence of a magical god, is not it?"

Reige sighs, before summarizing all in a serious tone.

"Awaiss told me that our world is not the original."

The two directors look with some tension to the man in the coffin. They were at strategic points, designed to cause the three mages to survive. Aleister gives a smile as the girl gives a chuckle. Reige decides to give a hint to the directors.

"How about we use our influence to create a large project? If our world is not original, we can use this 'draft' to our plans."

Aleister gives another smile, and the girl starts laughing. Reige continues by suggesting, so that the other directors could understand. They somehow had influence on the countries where they were. Kirie had influence in Europe, Reige had influences in the Caribs. Aleister already established in Japan and somehow have contact with many influential politicians.

"We will betray the magic, we will use the science, we will become the new gods of this incomplete world. Artificial Earth, ASC Metropole and Academy City. The martyr of the Unova Project!"

With the end of the speech, the holograms are turned off. Reige looked through the coffin dark circles, there existed a glass that allowed him to see the outside world. The man's left eye was watering, but the expression was not sad. It was with joy.NEW CHAPTER!!!

Aaaaaaaaand, explanations.
DLH here!

I did a chapter trying to explain the beginning. I based myself in several works. I will not quote here for security measures.

My best idea was to create another type of Aleister Crowley, placed in a coffin full of modern wiring, electronic gear and accessories. I relied on two characters with the same name. Cain from Xenogears and Strike the Blood.

As you can see, Awaiss warned that this world was not original. It would be a reference to a certain magical god? I wanted to create an explanation from behind the creation of three cities based entirely on creating Espers / Gemstones.

In the near future, I dream about extending the Unova Project.

That's all!

*Eating Biscuits*

Draco Spirit

2015-01-26, 03:35

Nice start. :)

DLH VII

2015-01-28, 12:06

Explanations about the scientific side.

Science Side
The most prevalent side of the world, with more than 5 billion believers. The decreasing number of Abrahamic religions have led to the belief in science to become one of the most popular beliefs of the time. With the effort of the three cities, almost 80% of the Abrahamic religions are at risk of extinction. Even with 80% of complete extinction, there are still religious powers with equivalent strength the Roman Catholic Church.

- ASC Metropole -
One of the three main scientific cities. ASC Metropole works in the natural development of Gemstones, using technologies based on meditation and brain stimulation. 80% of the students of this city are considered Gemstones, while a small portion of 20% of the students are Espers. The city was built in the European metropolitan area (between spain, france and italy), having the same base of Academic City. The presidential director of the city is Kirie Karleruski, a German-Irish magician.

- Academic City -
The main town of the scientific side. Academic City works in the forced development of Espers, with different technologies to work in several areas of development. 60% of the inhabitants of this city are students, while 40% are scientists or even common people, such as teachers or parents. Academy City is at the heart of the economic region of Tokyo, covering some 80% of this region. The superintendent of the city is Aleister Crowley, the biggest magician of all time.

- Artificial Earth -
The most advanced city of three. Artificial Earth works in the immediate development of Espers skills, using an artificial alternative reality to force the immediate creation of these skills. Unlike the other two cities, this is the one where only 20% of its inhabitants are students, while 80% are civilians or even scientists and teachers. It is in the Amazon region, covering 40% of the area. The superintendent of the city is Reige Cruserfarl, an unknown magician.

tsunade666

2015-01-29, 07:14

Interesting. If possible I would want the story of index be explored more. Specially the adult because I doubt that the graduate experts would be allowed to leave the city with their ability.

I'm thinking of a fic but I just can't solve or think of a good way to crossover champions or dxd to tamni verse. The way the people view the world is just vastly different. The people in Tammi verse won't despair in front of supernatural beings. They would create a spell to kill them but in campione and dxd. The humans are weak. If I can solve or get a good reason to mix it. I'll probably try myself in fan fiction.

demino_hellsin

2015-01-30, 20:52

Since we have an idea of what IT is with the railgun manga. I'm wondering if it works for double IB on one arm to be one version of IT is inside the right arm and another version of IT is being restrained/wrapped around the right arm.

rubix22

2015-02-02, 23:09

http://i2.pixiv.net/img-original/img/2015/02/03/00/02/26/48524785_p0.jpg

I knew this would happen sooner or later.

(For reference, see the last chapter of To Aru Super SS II)

tsunade666

2015-02-03, 01:16

^image not showing up.

Rising Dragon

2015-02-03, 04:51

http://i2.pixiv.net/img-original/img/2015/02/03/00/02/26/48524785_p0.jpg

I knew this would happen sooner or later.

(For reference, see the last chapter of To Aru Super SS II)

You can't hotlink from Pixiv.

rubix22

2015-02-03, 22:42

Aw phooey.

http://i.imgur.com/lC8jKDr.jpg

LevelSeven

2015-02-04, 03:47

Aw phooey.

http://i.imgur.com/lC8jKDr.jpg

:twitch: what is that for a thing in umidoris mouth :confused: :twitch:
a dildo? no no no, dont think such stuff, worst isnt such a bad girl *shudder*

TkMacintosh

2015-02-04, 08:33

I'm guessing it's a Sushi Roll

Loremaster

2015-02-07, 03:14

Finally completed the A Certain series about my version of the Sixth ranked level five.

In order of timeline.

A Certain hidden past (Side story collection of past events)
A Certain Sixth Incident (Prequel)
A Certain Hidden Level Five (Book 1)
A Certain Hotspring Adventure (Side Story)
A Certain British Intervention (Book 2)
A Certain Story so far (Series Catch up)
A Certain Project Imperator (Book 3)

You can find them all on here.
https://www.fanfiction.net/u/4860627/LoremasterEolas

The series' main story is over, but I always intend to write an aftermath of the main series events. So you can consider apart of this series or not. But my upcoming story, The Legacy of Number Six. Will be started soon.

Spent over a year on this series and finally to see the main story completed is surreal. Honestly didn't think I'll ever finish it.

RPG_Fanatic

2015-02-07, 21:30

Draco Spirit

2015-02-08, 07:24

So I got the seed of a idea for a fanfic in my head that involves the Return of the Winged One members taking central stage, anyone got any thoughts on what kind of Aztec mythology could work well as new spells and plot devises?

Yu Ominae

2015-02-14, 23:25

Got some lingering fic ideas in mind... But I think it may involve changing parts of the Index/Railgun story.

RPG_Fanatic

2015-02-15, 13:11

Got some lingering fic ideas in mind... But I think it may involve changing parts of the Index/Railgun story.

Nothing wrong with that. Isn't one of the fun parts of fan fiction is putting your own spin on the story.

LevelSeven

2015-02-15, 17:19

Idea:

-plays while accel is 13 years old
-killed 20 sisters that day and went home
-was sleeping
-something maanged to disturb his sleep
-he hears noises from his front door
-opens it and find a newborn child
------> accel became a parent
the reason why he didnt give her away?
he witnessed how she used her abilitys and succeeded in the creation of a incomplete/unstable super-small sun...
after his own childhood experience he decides he would not give her (the baby is female) away only so that she gets a horrible life...
-----------> accels life changes :heh:

i think it is a really interesting idea, what think the others?
PS: the plot doesnt sound like much but their are stuff that would need to be "discovered", like:
"why can the kid use a Lvl5-like ability as a nebown baby?", "who is the kid?", "who gave the kid to him and why?"

Yu Ominae

2015-02-15, 23:08

Nothing wrong with that. Isn't one of the fun parts of fan fiction is putting your own spin on the story.

I know. :p

Basic idea (aside from taking inspiration partly from To Aruverse Rewrite Project) is to rewrite some stuff from canon in order to bring in the bigger picture from Assassin's Creed. ACverse mentions that Crowley is from the Hermeticists.

Which ought to make interesting since I want to write the invasion of Academy City with other bad guys that want to take out Crowley. And plus the true "reveal" of Pierce.

Yu Ominae

2015-02-18, 09:02

I may be tempted to write an excerpt when I'm suppose to finish my other stories.

:(

Chaos2Frozen

2015-02-18, 12:51

Which ought to make interesting since I want to write the invasion of Academy City with other bad guys that want to take out Crowley. And plus the true "reveal" of Pierce.

I know this is fanfiction and all, but imo, if you really want to invade credibly, you got to REALLY bring in the big guns. Either some insanely overpowered magic, or you get a few world superpower involved.

...Or Aliens.

Alternatively make it not a full occupation. Cause imagine the rest of the world is in the 70s technologically and Academy City is modern day US.

Yu Ominae

2015-02-18, 22:15

Part of the idea is for the bad guys (in and out of the city) to take advantage of the invasion and do what they need to do courtesy of Vento herself.

LevelSeven

2015-02-19, 04:40

...Or Aliens.

ohh, this actually sounds good...
a alien-species which is faster,stronger and more durable than humans... they also have a large ship with scify-like shields of energy :eyespin:

the strange thing:
magic dont work on them since they go out of the idol theory itself, they arent from earth, which means that the idol theory which is based on legends/religions/whatever cant harm them (but aftereffects can, similar to IB)...
epser abilitys work like always...
and one touch of IB means instant death for the aliens :p

i think it could be a really good story :D

Loremaster

2015-02-19, 12:55

What does it mean to be an Esper? That question is asked seven months after the events of book three. With Imperator defeated and Lucifer once again sealed away, life continues on with many things changing as time passes.

Not only has various people grown closer together, but people like Mikoto and Misaki had become highschoolers. With the devastation of most of the 7th district months ago, there also has been a heavy relocation to new abodes across the city.

And elsewhere in the world, Princess Villian was officially crowned Queen of the United Kingdom, with her elder sister remaining as her military adviser. And even though Laura's younger brother won the rights of head of family from defeating their father. She was given the defacto lead while Eolas remained in Academy city.

For the first time in years, the Stuart family weren't rulling the country but helping building a new one with the royal family.

But the biggest change throughout the world remains once again in Academy city.

Many level fives have started to emerge as the truest sign of the changing times. They have been called the new generation of level fives and many more keep emerging as time past. And as this goes on the original level five, continues to struggle to regain his lost powers in the shadow of this developing world.

Ever since the world was restored seven months ago, Eolas' powers had overloaded stripping him of his powers for many months. And despite the similar effects on his body that occurs when using magic, now starting when he uses his esper powers. He has worked his way to level four but still so far from his goal.

And his goal will remain the sole priority on his mind. As the original seven level fives, the likes of Kakine, Mugino, Misaka, Gunha and Mikoto work with various others to stop a growing threat.

Esper Fanatics, who see the original level five as a God.

It didn't happen straight away, but as time past people started to remember what actually happened when they was uncreated as a collective. The population of the world who were uncreated back than, suddenly woke up remembering what actually occured and who brought them back.

The one who restored the world.

These memories sparked a movement of fanatics during the various months, hoping to help restore the original level fives powers to how he was seven months ago when he also became the first Level Six.

But a dangerous game of cat and mouse occurs as more level fives continue to emerge and worse yet have joined the increasing ranks of the Fanatics' whos motives seems to be more twisted by the day. Trying to protect the future that Eolas and the others fought so hard to gain seven months ago, the city falls quickly into chaos.

And a question will be ask which will shake the very foundation of what it means to be an esper.

Witness the Legacy of Number Six.
...

This was my draft attempt at description than realized it was too long for fanfiction.net XD But I thought it would be perfect on here. Legacy of Number six is the aftermath story, of the my first completed series.

I hope you guys enjoy it.
But I suggest you read the original series first.
https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11036154/1/Legacy-of-Number-Six

DLH VII

2015-02-23, 13:46

LevelSeven

2015-02-24, 02:35

I created a new main character to my new projet, Index DOT. How's about it?

Death of the Necromancy is a powerful existence, capable of killing any existence with his sickle, however, he is unable to kill blessed people with the ultimate power of heaven's angels (eg, God's Right Seat, Aiwass, Aleister Crowley and Othinus). It depends on God's orders to kill, as well as the will of his angels. In addition, he is an immune existence to Imagine Breaker powers to be much beyond the supernatural entity. Death of the Necromancy has a young look, it's a black-haired young man wearing a sports jacket and headphones, contrary to numerous suppositions that he is a skeleton or an old and feeble person. That's because he absorbs the vitality of the people he kills. He is one of the only people who know about the origins of the Imagine Breaker, but he is unable to say about it.
isnt he to OP?
i mean, if not even the heroes IB can stop him than only the boss-chars couldd do it...
btw, i would understand why acqua and fiamma are protected but why vento and terra? they are only normal humans with something changed (similar to cendrillon)...

+ what is with the other majins? ar they immune too? ollerus? saints? (since they are practically 5% copys of jesus :/ )
btw, what would be with kakine and accel?
PS: could IT survive this "deaths" abilitys?

tsunade666

2015-02-24, 08:15

I created a new main character to my new projet, Index DOT. How's about it?

Death of the Necromancy is a powerful existence, capable of killing any existence with his sickle, however, he is unable to kill blessed people with the ultimate power of heaven's angels (eg, God's Right Seat, Aiwass, Aleister Crowley and Othinus). It depends on God's orders to kill, as well as the will of his angels. In addition, he is an immune existence to Imagine Breaker powers to be much beyond the supernatural entity. Death of the Necromancy has a young look, it's a black-haired young man wearing a sports jacket and headphones, contrary to numerous suppositions that he is a skeleton or an old and feeble person. That's because he absorbs the vitality of the people he kills. He is one of the only people who know about the origins of the Imagine Breaker, but he is unable to say about it.

Beyond supernatural entity? I bet IB can even work against Aiwass. It can reach there because it was modeled to go against supernatural.

I might pass it as natural because there is end to all but saying beyond supernatural? then its screwed against IB.

Is that character higher than universe breaker?

even with data collected. IB still manage to withstand the Gungnir that lay waste on the universe/current phase of world. And it even destroyed it.

No matter what you say about hero touma being "normal highschool boy"

IB is plain OP.

DLH VII

2015-02-24, 16:52

isnt he to OP?
i mean, if not even the heroes IB can stop him than only the boss-chars couldd do it...
btw, i would understand why acqua and fiamma are protected but why vento and terra? they are only normal humans with something changed (similar to cendrillon)...

+ what is with the other majins? ar they immune too? ollerus? saints? (since they are practically 5% copys of jesus :/ )
btw, what would be with kakine and accel?
PS: could IT survive this "deaths" abilitys?

First Question. I think I'll edit so he can kill any existence, with some limits on magical gods, angels and saints. I think he would need the permission of God to accomplish this. That's the same answer to your second question.

Second Question. It will be a secret.

No, and Yes. Death's scythe can kill Touma, but it is a diplomatic process involving more than one god. Aiwass, somehow, is also involved in this diplomatic process. However, IT is a supernatural power, and death can not kill a power/special ability.

Beyond supernatural entity? I bet IB can even work against Aiwass. It can reach there because it was modeled to go against supernatural.

I might pass it as natural because there is end to all but saying beyond supernatural? then its screwed against IB.

Is that character higher than universe breaker?

even with data collected. IB still manage to withstand the Gungnir that lay waste on the universe/current phase of world. And it even destroyed it.

No matter what you say about hero touma being "normal highschool boy"

IB is plain OP.In my honest opinion, not all hosts of Imagine Breaker can defeat Death, not even die for it. The hosts of this ability are a high priority protocols to the divine or universal existences. Then he could defeat Touma physically, but he would be unable to defeat Touma using supernatural powers (excluding his scythe) because he would be judged for these acts. And a judgment of these is difficult to repair. Imagine super-powerful existences, ten or twenty times more powerful than Othinus, running a judgment with Death. Surely he could not risk killing Touma and be judged by such super-powerful people.

Itherael

2015-03-08, 00:25

For those who love Yomikawa Aiho, here is the next chapter. Also, there is a little gift for the Fukiyose lovers!

http://i.imgur.com/ugQIhje.png

The One Above God

2015-03-08, 00:52

For those who love Yomikawa Aiho, here is the next chapter. Also, there is a little gift for the Fukiyose lovers!

http://i.imgur.com/ugQIhje.png

Oh, an update! Been a while :heh:

Edit:
That's a nice chapter :D. I really liked the Yomikawa moments. Also, that Fukiyose part by the end was great. It pretty much makes up about 50% of this chapter's greatness despite being so short :heh:.

Loremaster

2015-03-09, 11:13

Hey guys, started a new fanfiction not based of my other works. This is completely independent and is based of the concept of what if Tree diagram wasn't destroyed by Index that night? That the blast missed the satellite and survived only to be destroyed later on when The Railgun reaches the command facility on August 21st to originally put out fake predictions.

A Certain Descensional Railgun is that fanfiction and I hope you guys will enjoy this independent story away from my main series.
https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11100318/1/A-Certain-Descensional-Railgun

FlyingCow65

2015-03-09, 20:51

For those who love Yomikawa Aiho, here is the next chapter. Also, there is a little gift for the Fukiyose lovers!

http://i.imgur.com/ugQIhje.png

Yes, The fukiyose part almost made my heart to explode of all the fluffynes, also was that Mayuri? The failed Misaki? Mmm interesting. Incredible work as always.

Damn I messed up the name, it was Mitsuari.

MrTerrorist

2015-03-10, 02:53

For those who love Yomikawa Aiho, here is the next chapter. Also, there is a little gift for the Fukiyose lovers!

http://i.imgur.com/ugQIhje.png

Oh. For what fanfic is it?

omega253

2015-03-10, 10:02

Oh. For what fanfic is it?

It's this one.

https://m.fanfiction.net/s/10237976/1/A-New-ROAD-of-Misfortune

Loremaster

2015-03-14, 03:19

Chapter 2 of a Certain Descensional Railgun is out.
https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11100318/2/A-Certain-Descensional-Railgun

Yu Ominae

2015-03-19, 08:53

An attempt to do a small snippet based on the Academy City invasion arc done by God's Right Seat IIRC.

The streets of Academy City were heavily deserted at 7 PM, which is unusual since the streets would be packed full of people until either curfews for those studying in schools or the adults decided that it's time to go back to their residences and sleep.

In the downtown part of the city, all available Anti-Skill officers were seen incapacitated by some form of attack. Otherwise, no one else was out on the streets due to a curfew in place due to information of a terrorist attack.

In the midst of this, a person wearing a white hoodie, brown tac pants and sneakers began to run from rooftop to rooftop, jumping whenever there's a gap.

Is this the work of Templars? Or perhaps someone else? The hoodie-wearing man then stood on the edge of a roof as he surveyed an empty street. The only thing he saw were a couple of Toyota Alphard vans that had men and women equipped with IWI Tavor TAR-21 assault rifles as they drove off from an alley in order to respond to some other situation.

Hound Dogs. I need to work fast. Must be the work of Crowley.

The hoodie-wearing man made a run and jumped towards another rooftop, intending to follow the vans.

Loremaster

2015-03-20, 17:08

Chapter 3 of a Certain Descensional Railgun is out.
https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11100318/3/A-Certain-Descensional-Railgun

Welsh_Dragon

2015-03-25, 22:54

Wonder what happened to Ferret? Haven't seen or heard from him in a while.

Draco Spirit

2015-03-26, 05:26

Got the seed of idea for Evangelion/A Certain Magical crossover fanfic.

Spin it of the Evangelion manga end and have the three children end up in a world where "Rei and Shinji can hold hands", which turns out to be the Certain Magical Index Universe.

Start with a intro full of confusion for the pilots and accidental massive property damage before going into a Guided Cage plot based around Asuka becoming a Level 5 and used by a Academy City as a PR tool (Who are using the other two as hostages, especially Rei with her medical complications).

Toy with her insecurities and need for approval, plus her loyalty to the other two pilots in a world where there identities can't be based around being Eva pilots anymore.

It's far from a fully formed plot yet, but I though I throw it out there. :p

Yu Ominae

2015-03-27, 00:56

I guess I'll type this up as a test to see if I can write some parts of the Academy City Invasion story arc as a technothriller.

I will definitely take notes from "In Memoriam" in terms of changing things such as Anti-Skill being a SWAT unit instead of being the whole police force for Academy City, which doesn't make sense IMO. But for now, it's a preview of what I want to do if I get the chance to do so.

For now, I hope people will like this snippet. Apologies for the length.

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A Certain Hardline Situation (とある鷹派の状況):

The night of September 30 was getting worse and worse by the minute after the Academy City Police Force declared a Code Yellow alert. They recalled all officers who were given time off either because of being allowed to visit family living in the city of because of a day-off granted by their superiors.

All officers working for the ACPF's Special Tactical Group, known colloquially as Anti-Skill, were being mobilized to District 1 after receiving intelligence from the Force's Intelligence Bureau, under the Investigations Division, that the intruder or intruders have successfully made a breach from the city's 19th District.

Three Anti-Skill LencoBearCat G2 trucks, painted in blue with the Anti-Skill emblem, were parked nearby with the blue and red siren lights on. The rear doors opened up and Anti-Skill operators leaped out of the trucks.

They were decked out in standard blue BDUs, tac vests, drop leg holsters and Ulbrichts AM95 ballistic helmets with the ballistic visor raised up with black balaclavas to cover their faces and necks. All AS operators were armed with the Heckler & Koch G36K assault rifle and the Springfield Armory XD(M) 4.5" pistol.

"All right! Take your positions!" An Anti-Skill officer ordered his subordinates to take up positions on the sidewalks of the 7th District, which was now cleared of civilians and non-essential government personnel since the alert broadcast issued a warning for civilians to stay at home unless they need to be somewhere with approval from the ACPF. "We need to hold here at the shopping area until MAR has its team deployed."

"Sir!" An AS operator inside one of the G2 trucks received a transmission from ACPF Headquarters. "We got an update on the intruder!"

"What about it?" The officer approached the G2 truck.

"We got a surveillance camera photo of one of the supposed intruders."

The officer received the photo and got a good look at it. It appeared to be a bit blurry, but it was a woman with yellow clothing. Her back was facing the camera.

Later on, AS teams in the area received a radio update from the Force's Operations Division about the possible presence of the intruder in their area.

But before the officer manning the area could reply for a further update, already wondering about the intruder's presence, he suddenly collapsed out of nowhere.

When the other AS operators saw their CO faint, they also followed suit afterwards. Even the AS operator manning the G2 truck fainted on the driver's seat.

"Hey! Hey! Are you alright?" A black-haired teenager by the name of Touma Kamijou came to check on the unconscious AS operator nearby.

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Two figures wearing white hoodie-type jackets, jeans, black tac gloves and black and white Nike sneakers, made jumps and runs all across the roofs of various buildings in the 7th District, receiving information from their sources that the city is under attack or due to be attacked by unknown forces. They managed to stop on the roof of a building that overlooked the district's shopping area.

"Over here." One of the figures, who had a drop leg holster strapped on his right leg, motioned to his partner in English. "Got something."

"What is it?" The other hooded figure was curious to see what had happened, also speaking in English. He had a combat knife sheath strapped on his belt.

"Looks like Anti-Skill operators in the area are down." The figure with the drop leg holster pointed out to Touma trying to get the downed AS operator's attention.

"Must be due to magic. Anyway, we can't give them a hand. We got urgent matters in hand in the district."

"You're right. The Mentor wants us to finish up our mission for the night. Let's hurry before the Templars show up here..."

"I just hope we can get some support from our fellow Assassins on this one."

Sorry about this Touma. But today, I can't let you see me. The Assassin with the drop leg holster strapped on a white resin mask over his face. He then readjusted his hood so that his head is completely covered.

The other Assassin made some adjustments to his white balaclava before he signaled to his partner that they need to move again.

"Let's go! I don't know if we can make it time!"

The two Assassins ran off towards the roof of another building. Due to said building's height being lower than the one they were on, they were forced to immediately jump once they stepped onto the roof's edge to make the jump successful.

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Six officers from the ACPF's Close Protection Unit escorted a young woman with black hair with eyeglasses out of an apartment building somewhere in the 7th District. She wore a brown windbreaker, jeans and sneakers with her black purse on her left shoulder.

All of the CPU officers wore various windbreakers, jeans and rubber shoes/sneakers with earpieces on either their left or right ears. Parked on the sidewalk were a couple of black Toyota Crown Royal Saloon sedans and a black Land Rover Discovery Sport SUV parked in between the two sedans. Their automobile plates were registered to the ACPF.

"This is Garda 1 to Phoenix." A CPU officer with a gray toque hat radioed the Force's Operations Division, being the first to step out from the building's lobby. "We have secured her and are en route to safehouse as instructed."

"Understood, Garda 1. Proceed immediately at once. Radio silence is implemented from now until you arrive at safehouse. Over."

"Understood, Phoenix. Over and out."

"This way, Ms. Oyafume." A CPU officer with a black ballcap escorted the woman out of the lobby.

"I don't understand, officer." The glasses-wearing woman asked one of the CPU officers escorting her towards the Discovery. "What's happening?"

"The Force has received information that the Board of Directors may be targeted for assassination." The CPU officer told Suama Oyafume, who was the only child of Director Monaka Oyafume. The woman was a member of the city's Board of Directors and as such, she's well-known by the public.

"But what about my mother, officer?" Suama asked the officer when the door was opened for her.

"We got officers moving her to a safe place as we speak..."

Suddenly, the sound of an anti-tank rocket was heard from nearby when the warhead made contact with one of the parked Crown Royal Saloon sedans. It exploded before the sedan was flipped over due to the force of the explosion onto the sidewalk.

The toque hat-wearing CPU officer was knocked down on the ground by the sheer force, being luck that he was standing near the building when it happened. He was able to get up again and this time, he drew out his Glock 19.

"Move it! Move it!" The CPU officer instructed his colleagues to move the VIP towards the SUV. But before he can figure out what was going on, invisible figures opened fire and began to gun down the two CPU officers attempting to move Suama to the vehicle.

"No, no, no!" Suama screamed, keeping her head down while the four remaining CPU officers used the Discovery Sport and the Royal Saloon for cover as they tried to figure out where the shots came from since they were suppressed.

Minutes later, gunfire erupted again. This time, they got their targets after a few rounds were fired at the vehicles in order to lure them out when they tried to get her to safety. Suama was lucky to be alive since they were bulletproof.

The reveal came when ten armed men deactivated their optic camouflage units, already surrounded the bullet-riddled vehicles. They appear to be wearing the same clothing and equipment that Anti-Skill has, except their color was black and that they had Philippine-made Scout Ranger Distinctive Uniform BDUs, ESS Asian-Fit Turboban ballistic goggles, Inbraland SENASP-type Capacete de Combate Balístico ballistic helmets with SRDU helmet covering on. They were also equipped with Heckler & Koch G36Cs with red dot scopes and suppressors. They had Glock 17s in their drop leg holsters.

"Suama Oyafume!" One of the armed man called for her name, his suppressed subcarbine aimed at her.

"Who are you?!" Suama angrily called them out.

"We're from Disciplinary Action! And we are here tonight to carry out justice!"

"Justice?! You guys just killed six police officers in the ACPF! How's that justice?!"

"The needs of the many outweigh the few! Your mother is getting in our way to show the city true justice from all evil! As such, we're here to exact punishment for her interference!"

As the order was given to shoot at Suama, the Assassins appeared behind them with the same optic camouflage units deactivated. The two stabbed the four DA operators with dual Hidden Blades at their necks, which only left six standing to oppose them.

"Who the hell?!" Two DA operators drew out their Gerber LMF II Infantry combat knives and charged at the Assassins.

"Take them!" The mask-clad Assassin told his partner. They went to split up after they disarmed the operators of their knives by catching their arms and twisting them before they each received a Hidden Blade thrust to their necks.

Suama decided to go for the corpse of the nearest CPU officer, grabbing his Glock 19 pistol from his shoulder holster.

The Six DA operators divided themselves into three in order to take on the Assassins.

"Hah!" A DA operator facing off the mask-wearing assassin got his trouble when he was kicked in the balls to make himself vulnerable. He then grabbed his neck and slammed him onto the ground. This followed with a blade thrust to the back of his neck.

"Why you?!" The second DA operator attempted to do knife thrusts on the Assassin. His efforts failed because the Assassin dodged by moving left and right.

While he used the Hidden Blade in his left arm to parry the combat knife's blade, he pushed the operator back and dashed in to execute slashes on the back of his legs.

"ACK!" The second DA operator's legs sustained major slashes, forcing him to go down on his knees. This gave the Assassin the opportunity to use the Hidden Blade in his right arm to slash his neck. He died in a few minutes, choking in his own blood.

The third DA operator came up to the Assassin and tried to fire his suppressed G36C at him. He moved immediately when this happened, tossing in a smoke grenade to obscure his vision.

"Shit!" The third DA operator was blinded and he stopped firing since he can't see. This gave the Assassin the opportunity to come in close and surprise him before he can counter his attacks.

"Fuc-!" The Assassin stabbed the third DA operator in the chest with dual Hidden Blades. He later twisted the blades to inflict more pain.

He later turned on his optical camouflage unit to make himself invisible.

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The balaclava-clad Assassin used a smoke grenade to blind the three DA operators facing him. Once it was done, he used the smoke as cover to get close and stab the two DA operators with the Hidden Blades.

The third DA operator panicked and opened fire at the direction of his colleague's screams.

When the smoke cleared, he found the corpses of his colleagues shot by his subcarbine. The Assassin dashed in for a few seconds before he activated his optical camouflage unit.

"Wh... where are you?!" The last DA operator began to panic when he aimed his weapon at a 180 degrees arc.

"Here...." The voice said, albeit digitally modified with a voice changer. It appeared that the voice was from behind him.

In response, he turned around and opened fire at one of the building's glass panels, hitting one of the sofas inside.

"You missed..." The invisible Assassin tackled at him from the back and slashed his throat. Within seconds, he dropped dead.

Suama just aimed the Glock 19 at the Assassins once they deactivated their optic camouflage units.

"W-who are you?!" She challenged them in English.

"We are not here to harm you." The balaclava-clad Assassin spoke to her in English with his voice digitally altered after he retracted his Hidden Blades. "In fact, we are here to help you."

"We're here to ensure your safety, Ms. Oyafume." The mask-clad Assassin replied also in English with a digitally altered voice also. He also did the same and retracted his Hidden Blades to show that he was a friendly.

"Does... does my mother know about this?" Suama asked when she lowered the pistol.

"Yes. She's being targeted by associates backed by a faction in the Board of Directors. We don't know who though."

The balaclava-clad Assassin informed his partner that they need to move, since they heard police sirens coming their way.

"We'll explain the details, Ms. Oyafume. You need to come with us. DA or some other faction working in the underworld may try to kill you again."

"A-alright."

The three started to run down the streets, towards a nearby alley as ACPF squad cars converged on the spot where the shootout occurred.

"We'll need to dispose of anything that can used to track you down." The balaclava-clad assassin spoke to Suama. "Turn off your mobile phone for starters."

Suama didn't say anything, but agreed to turn off her smartphone for starters.

What kind of trouble is oka-san into that some group from the underworld was sent out here to kill me?

Loremaster

2015-03-30, 16:01

Chapter 4 of Descensional Railgun is out.
https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11100318/4/A-Certain-Descensional-Railgun

DLH VII

2015-03-31, 17:16

I guess I'll type this up as a test to see if I can write some parts of the Academy City Invasion story arc as a technothriller.

I will definitely take notes from "In Memoriam" in terms of changing things such as Anti-Skill being a SWAT unit instead of being the whole police force for Academy City, which doesn't make sense IMO. But for now, it's a preview of what I want to do if I get the chance to do so.

For now, I hope people will like this snippet. Apologies for the length.

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A Certain Hardline Situation (とある鷹派の状況):

The night of September 30 was getting worse and worse by the minute after the Academy City Police Force declared a Code Yellow alert. They recalled all officers who were given time off either because of being allowed to visit family living in the city of because of a day-off granted by their superiors.

All officers working for the ACPF's Special Tactical Group, known colloquially as Anti-Skill, were being mobilized to District 1 after receiving intelligence from the Force's Intelligence Bureau, under the Investigations Division, that the intruder or intruders have successfully made a breach from the city's 19th District.

Three Anti-Skill LencoBearCat G2 trucks, painted in blue with the Anti-Skill emblem, were parked nearby with the blue and red siren lights on. The rear doors opened up and Anti-Skill operators leaped out of the trucks.

They were decked out in standard blue BDUs, tac vests, drop leg holsters and Ulbrichts AM95 ballistic helmets with the ballistic visor raised up with black balaclavas to cover their faces and necks. All AS operators were armed with the Heckler & Koch G36K assault rifle and the Springfield Armory XD(M) 4.5" pistol.

"All right! Take your positions!" An Anti-Skill officer ordered his subordinates to take up positions on the sidewalks of the 7th District, which was now cleared of civilians and non-essential government personnel since the alert broadcast issued a warning for civilians to stay at home unless they need to be somewhere with approval from the ACPF. "We need to hold here at the shopping area until MAR has its team deployed."

"Sir!" An AS operator inside one of the G2 trucks received a transmission from ACPF Headquarters. "We got an update on the intruder!"

"What about it?" The officer approached the G2 truck.

"We got a surveillance camera photo of one of the supposed intruders."

The officer received the photo and got a good look at it. It appeared to be a bit blurry, but it was a woman with yellow clothing. Her back was facing the camera.
Later on, AS teams in the area received a radio update from the Force's Operations Division about the possible presence of the intruder in their area.

But before the officer manning the area could reply for a further update, already wondering about the intruder's presence, he suddenly collapsed out of nowhere.

When the other AS operators saw their CO faint, they also followed suit afterwards. Even the AS operator manning the G2 truck fainted on the driver's seat.

"Hey! Hey! Are you alright?" A black-haired teenager by the name of Touma Kamijou came to check on the unconscious AS operator nearby.

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Two figures wearing white hoodie-type jackets, jeans, black tac gloves and black and white Nike sneakers, made jumps and runs all across the roofs of various buildings in the 7th District, receiving information from their sources that the city is under attack or due to be attacked by unknown forces. They managed to stop on the roof of a building that overlooked the district's shopping area.

"Over here." One of the figures, who had a drop leg holster strapped on his right leg, motioned to his partner in English. "Got something."

"What is it?" The other hooded figure was curious to see what had happened, also speaking in English. He had a combat knife sheath strapped on his belt.

"Looks like Anti-Skill operators in the area are down." The figure with the drop leg holster pointed out to Touma trying to get the downed AS operator's attention.

"Must be due to magic. Anyway, we can't give them a hand. We got urgent matters in hand in the district."

"You're right. The Mentor wants us to finish up our mission for the night. Let's hurry before the Templars show up here..."

"I just hope we can get some support from our fellow Assassins on this one."

Sorry about this Touma. But today, I can't let you see me. The Assassin with the drop leg holster strapped on a white resin mask over his face. He then readjusted his hood so that his head is completely covered.

The other Assassin made some adjustments to his white balaclava before he signaled to his partner that they need to move again.

"Let's go! I don't know if we can make it time!"

The two Assassins ran off towards the roof of another building. Due to said building's height being lower than the one they were on, they were forced to immediately jump once they stepped onto the roof's edge to make the jump successful.

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Six officers from the ACPF's Close Protection Unit escorted a young woman with black hair with eyeglasses out of an apartment building somewhere in the 7th District. She wore a brown windbreaker, jeans and sneakers with her black purse on her left shoulder.

All of the CPU officers wore various windbreakers, jeans and rubber shoes/sneakers with earpieces on either their left or right ears. Parked on the sidewalk were a couple of black Toyota Crown Royal Saloon sedans and a black Land Rover Discovery Sport SUV parked in between the two sedans. Their automobile plates were registered to the ACPF.

"This is Garda 1 to Phoenix." A CPU officer with a gray toque hat radioed the Force's Operations Division, being the first to step out from the building's lobby. "We have secured her and are en route to safehouse as instructed."

"Understood, Garda 1. Proceed immediately at once. Radio silence is implemented from now until you arrive at safehouse. Over."

"Understood, Phoenix. Over and out."

"This way, Ms. Oyafume." A CPU officer with a black ballcap escorted the woman out of the lobby.

"I don't understand, officer." The glasses-wearing woman asked one of the CPU officers escorting her towards the Discovery. "What's happening?"

"The Force has received information that the Board of Directors may be targeted for assassination." The CPU officer told Suama Oyafume, who was the only child of Director Monaka Oyafume. The woman was a member of the city's Board of Directors and as such, she's well-known by the public.

"But what about my mother, officer?" Suama asked the officer when the door was opened for her.

"We got officers moving her to a safe place as we speak..."

Suddenly, the sound of an anti-tank rocket was heard from nearby when the warhead made contact with one of the parked Crown Royal Saloon sedans. It exploded before the sedan was flipped over due to the force of the explosion onto the sidewalk. He was able to get up again and this time, he drew out his Glock 19.

The toque hat-wearing CPU officer was knocked down on the ground by the sheer force, being luck that he was standing near the building when it happened.

"Move it! Move it!" The CPU officer instructed his colleagues to move the VIP towards the SUV. But before he can figure out what was going on, invisible figures opened fire and began to gun down the two CPU officers attempting to move Suama to the vehicle.

"No, no, no!" Suama screamed, keeping her head down while the four remaining CPU officers used the Discovery Sport and the Royal Saloon for cover as they tried to figure out where the shots came from since they were suppressed.

Minutes later, gunfire erupted again. This time, they got their targets after a few rounds were fired at the vehicles in order to lure them out when they tried to get her to safety. Suama was lucky to be alive since they were bulletproof.

The reveal came when ten armed men deactivated their optic camouflage units, already surrounded the bullet-riddled vehicles. They appear to be wearing the same clothing and equipment that Anti-Skill has, except their color was black and that they had Philippine-made Scout Ranger Distinctive Uniform BDUs, ESS Asian-Fit Turboban ballistic goggles, Inbraland SENASP-type Capacete de Combate Balístico ballistic helmets with SRDU helmet covering on. They were also equipped with Heckler & Koch G36Cs with red dot scopes and suppressors. They had Glock 17s in their drop leg holsters.

"Suama Oyafume!" One of the armed man called for her name, his suppressed subcarbine aimed at her.

"Who are you?!" Suama angrily called them out.

"We're from Disciplinary Action! And we are here tonight to carry out justice!"

"Justice?! You guys just killed six police officers in the ACPF! How's that justice?!"

"The needs of the many outweigh the few! Your mother is getting in our way to show the city true justice from all evil! As such, we're here to exact punishment for her interference!"

As the order was given to shoot at Suama, the Assassins appeared behind them with the same optic camouflage units deactivated. The two stabbed the four DA operators with dual Hidden Blades at their necks, which only left six standing to oppose them.

"Who the hell?!" Two DA operators drew out their Gerber LMF II Infantry combat knives and charged at the Assassins.

"Take them!" The mask-clad Assassin told his partner. They went to split up after they disarmed the operators of their knives by catching their arms and twisting them before they each received a Hidden Blade thrust to their necks.

Suama decided to go for the corpse of the nearest CPU officer, grabbing his Glock 19 pistol from his shoulder holster.

The Six DA operators divided themselves into three in order to take on the Assassins.

"Hah!" A DA operator facing off the mask-wearing assassin got his trouble when he was kicked in the balls to make himself vulnerable. He then grabbed his neck and slammed him onto the ground. This followed with a blade thrust to the back of his neck.

"Why you?!" The second DA operator attempted to do knife thrusts on the Assassin. His efforts failed because the Assassin dodged by moving left and right.

While he used the Hidden Blade in his left arm to parry the combat knife's blade, he pushed the operator back and dashed in to execute slashes on the back of his legs.

"ACK!" The second DA operator's legs sustained major slashes, forcing him to go down on his knees. This gave the Assassin the opportunity to use the Hidden Blade in his right arm to slash his neck. He died in a few minutes, choking in his own blood.

The third DA operator came up to the Assassin and tried to fire his suppressed G36C at him. He moved immediately when this happened, tossing in a smoke grenade to obscure his vision.

"Shit!" The third DA operator was blinded and he stopped firing since he can't see. This gave the Assassin the opportunity to come in close and surprise him before he can counter his attacks.

"Fuc-!" The Assassin stabbed the third DA operator in the chest with dual Hidden Blades. He later twisted the blades to inflict more pain.

He later turned on his optical camouflage unit to make himself invisible.

----
The balaclava-clad Assassin used a smoke grenade to blind the three DA operators facing him. Once it was done, he used the smoke as cover to get close and stab the two DA operators with the Hidden Blades.

The third DA operator panicked and opened fire at the direction of his colleague's screams.

When the smoke cleared, he found the corpses of his colleagues shot by his subcarbine. The Assassin dashed in for a few seconds before he activated his optical camouflage unit.

"Wh... where are you?!" The last DA operator began to panic when he aimed his weapon at a 180 degrees arc.

"Here...." The voice said, albeit digitally modified with a voice changer. It appeared that the voice was from behind him.

In response, he turned around and opened fire at one of the building's glass panels, hitting one of the sofas inside.

"You missed..." The invisible Assassin tackled at him from the back and slashed his throat. Within seconds, he dropped dead.

Suama just aimed the Glock 19 at the Assassins once they deactivated their optic camouflage units.

"W-who are you?!" She challenged them in English.

"We are not here to harm you." The balaclava-clad Assassin spoke to her in English with his voice digitally altered after he retracted his Hidden Blades. "In fact, we are here to help you."

"We're here to ensure your safety, Ms. Oyafume." The mask-clad Assassin replied also in English with a digitally altered voice also. He also did the same and retracted his Hidden Blades to show that he was a friendly.

"Does... does my mother know about this?" Suama asked when she lowered the pistol.

"Yes. She's being targeted by associates backed by a faction in the Board of Directors. We don't know who though."

The balaclava-clad Assassin informed his partner that they need to move, since they heard police sirens coming their way.

"We'll explain the details, Ms. Oyafume. You need to come with us. DA or some other faction working in the underworld may try to kill you again."

"A-alright."

The three started to run down the streets, towards a nearby alley as ACPF squad cars converged on the spot where the shootout occurred.

"We'll need to dispose of anything that can used to track you down." The balaclava-clad assassin spoke to Suama. "Turn off your mobile phone for starters."

Suama didn't say anything, but agreed to turn off her smartphone for starters.

What kind of trouble is oka-san into that some group from the underworld was sent out here to kill me?I would read it. Interesting point.

Yu Ominae

2015-03-31, 18:21

Thanks for that confidence. :D

RPG_Fanatic

2015-04-04, 06:44

Loremaster

2015-04-04, 14:27

A random question. When you post a review on fanfiction.net without logging in, are you able to see your review in the list of reviews afterwards.

I decided to start posting some reviews and the site says it is posted, but I don't see my review.

Guest reviews automatically require approval before being seen by public. Because alot of people have used guest reviews to basically bully others.

RPG_Fanatic

2015-04-04, 14:39

Guest reviews automatically require approval before being seen by public. Because alot of people have used guest reviews to basically bully others.

Ah, that makes sense. Thanks for the answer.

DLH VII

2015-04-04, 15:06

https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11161775/1/A-Certain-Natural-Existence-English

Prologue posted.

Sorry about my bad english. I just translated using some (suspect) translators.

Yu Ominae

2015-04-16, 23:06

A continuation of my previous post:

The two hooded men were now caught up in an ambush as they were almost near the outskirts of the hospital where Heaven Canceller works as one of the doctors. The two men, with Suama in tow, were caught in an abandoned intersection near the place when a LencoBearCat G2 truck with Anti-Skill markings blocked their path. Two squads of six DA operators emerged from the truck and ambushed them by using flashbang and smoke grenades to hinder their path. This forced them to seek refuge in a deserted Softbank store with the glass door smashed open when the mask-clad Assassin kicked it hard twice to shatter it.

"Get inside!" The balaclava-clad assassin motioned to Suama. "We need to sneak around and take out those DA bastards!"

"But how?!" Suama objected to the idea. "Those guys got guns and you two don't!"

The mask-clad assassin patted his drop leg holster. "I got a piece here, but it's not good enough to hold them in."

Automatic gunfire was now targeting the store.

"Get down!" The balaclava-clad assassin pushed Suama down onto the floor. The three of them began to crawl as bullets began to tear the store's walls and merchandise apart like paper.

"Let's sneak out from the back..." The mask-clad assassin whispered to his colleague. He agreed and they snuck out by using the back door silently without making any noise.

It took a few minutes before DA realized that no one was coming out of the store, which made them cease fire and check the interior.

----

"We're here." The mask-clad assassin guided Suama and his colleague at the entrance of the hospital, using the distraction of the DA squads surrounding the store. Once they were inside, the balaclava-clad assassin drew out his karambit knife and motioned to Suama to wait in the lobby.

"All clear?" The knife-armed assassin murmured.

"It looks like Ms. Oyafume is safe and sound." A bald-headed man wearing a white lab coat came out of the lobby to greet the assassins.

"We know that you can take her in, doctor." The mask-clad assassin stated to the man. His companion sheathed his karambit away.

Is that... the Heaven Canceller? Suama was stunned to meet with the well-renowned doctor of Academy City.

"Pleased to see that you're okay, Suama-san." Heaven Canceller greeted the math teacher. "These men had brought your mother here after the mysterious attacks started an hour ago or so in the city."

"Ohh..." Suama nodded and bowed before the assassins. "Thank you so much."

"It's not a big deal." The mask-clad assassin nodded. "We were suppose to ensure her safety after all."

The assassins dashed out of the entrance, leaving them alone.

"So where is my mother?" Suama asked Heaven Canceller.

"She's in a good place in the hospital." The doctor assured Suama. "I'll lead you to her. I'll just warn you that we have a guest inside..."

"A guest?" Suam asked, confused.

"Well, I'll tell you that she's a nun to begin with..."

----

Touma was seen in a deserted Julian's Restaurant somewhere in the 7th District, hiding with a young girl who looked like Misaka when she was in elementary school with a white dress shirt worn over a blue dress with a military-grade googles over her head. Currently, they were being attacked by armed men who appear to be more armed than Anti-Skill and DA alike. While they wore black BDUs and boots like DA, they had different gear and weapons. For starters, they had American Enhanced Combat Helmets with black covers and Spring Armor Carrier Vests loaded with NIJ Level IV Hard Armor Plates. The ESS Asian-Fit Turboban ballistic goggles were worn on top of their ECH helmets. They were seen carrying IWI Tavor TAR-21 assault rifles with drop leg holsters on either their left or right leg.

"Who are these guys?" Touma murmured as the armed men continued to open fire at him as he and the girl hid behind the restaurant's cashier counter.

"You got nowhere to go! The Hound Dogs are here for that girl!" The Hound Dog commando taunted Touma after they ceased firing. "Too bad that we need to kill you right here, right now!"

Hound Dogs? Who are they? Touma had some questions regarding them. But before he could ponder on it, he can hear footsteps coming closer and closer. Dammit! I need to do something!

He took a peek around the corner, putting his hand on the young girl's mouth and motioned her to keep quiet. She had no choice, but to agree.

Touma looked and saw that around six Hound Dog commandos were approaching the counter. Since there was no working lights, they weren't able to see him.

Suddenly, there was some sounds of automatic gunfire from the outside. The six commandos turned around and saw one of them get stabbed by someone invisible. The Hound Dog commando waiting outside was apparently stabbed in the chest several times.

"Shit! Pop the tear gas! Whoever killed Terry's invisible!" One of the Hound Dogs ordered his colleagues.

At once, they donned their SanCheong K3 respirators before they hurled tear gas grenades onto the floor.

Not good! Touma and the girl were shocked to see smoke coming from the grenades. As the tear gas smoke began to slowly engulf the room, Touma and the girl began to cough since their eyes and nose were getting irritated by the tear gas.

"Got 'em now! They can't get far with the tear gas deployed..."

Before the Hound Dog squad can secure the two as prisoners, they were some loud scuffling going out. Touma and the girl covered their nose and mouth while waving the smoke away so that they can see properly.

When the two looked to see what was going on, they saw the hooded men wearing the same respirators to avoid being irritated by the tear gas. They used the Hidden Blades on their arms to dispatch the Hound Dogs even though they drew out their Eickhorn KM 4000 combat knives to fight them since they were fighting very close.

Who are those hooded guys?

Despite the numbers being with the Hound Dogs, the two assassins used their speed and movement to dodge the incoming attacks. This gave them the opportunity to either parry the blades, push them back or knock them to the ground.

The first assassin decided to take a leap of faith when he ran towards two Hound Dog commandos and leaped towards them. He tackled them in mid-air and stabbed them in the neck by surprise.

"Why you?!" The third Hound Dog came in with a stabbing attack for the second assassin's chest. He grabbed the arm that held the knife, twisted it hard to make the commando release the weapon and then slashed his neck after getting him into a chokehold.

"Bastard!" The two remaining Hound Dogs moved in to attack the other assassin from the left and the right.

The other assassin was calm, waiting for them to make their move. When they did so, he kicked the Hound Dog commando coming in from the left on his leg. This forced him to kneel before he was kicked in the face. The commando on the right decided to go for a slash attack on the head.

"You never saw this coming." The assassin punched him in the chest, stabbing him with the Hidden Blade. He later got behind him when the commando staggered a bit from his wound, snapping his neck.

The last Hound Dog, seeing his colleagues, made the decision to attack the first assassin with nothing to lose.

"You're getting very erratic there." The first assassin taunted him, being able to block every knife attack meant for him with his arms.

"Damn you! Don't get in our way!" The Hound Dog shouted in anger. But before he could execute another knife attack, the assassin used his right arm to intercept the arm that held the knife. He used the Hidden Blade on his left arm to stab him on his forehead.

"Come on you two... We need to move!" The other assassin motioned to Touma and the girl to leave the restaurant at once.

The first assassin nodded and followed his colleague out once the last Hound Dog commando was dispatched.

As they left the restaurant, they didn't know that a woman in bright yellow clothes was watching them.

"I see that Touma Kamijou has help." The woman murmured, smirking. "This should be interesting to see."

----

"Thank you guys." Touma thanked the assassins before one of them opened the door to a Volkswagen Toureg with a Deep Black Pearl finish. The four got far enough from the restaurant that it was safe for them to breath.

"Think nothing of it." The first assassin nodded at Touma. "We were just passing by." He then looked at the girl with him.

"My name is Last Order, says Misaka, who was in awe of how you took down those bad men. But you can me Misaka if you wish, says Misaka when she explains what name she wants to be addressed by." Last Order introduced herself, smiling at the hooded assassins who saved her and Touma.

"Okay..."

"It's a long story." Touma tried to explain. "She's a clone of a friend of mine, you see..."

"I see. That explains things."

"I got the car running!" The other assassin yelled to his partner in English. "We need to hurry before either Hound Dogs or Disciplinary Action show up!"

"Okay!" The first assassin replied back in English before he spoke to Touma in Japanese. "I suggest you and Last Order get inside the SUV. We need to leave."

"Sure." Touma helped Last Order in the SUV. The first assassin sat in the front passenger seat since the other assassin was at the driver's seat. Both men discarded their respirators and wore their masks to cover up their faces. They buckled up their seat belts before they drove off.

"By the way," Touma leaned in to the front passenger seat to ask a question. "I heard a while ago that the armed men were from Hound Dogs and your friend mentioned something about..." He tried to grasp what the other assassin said in English as best as he could. Knowing his luck, he could only speak a bit of English so that he can be understood.

"What about it?" The assassin said, knowing that Touma was curious. So far, he used his hood to conceal his face from him. "You mean Disciplinary Action?"

"Who are they?"

The assassin ensured his resin mask was snug and secure before he eyed Touma and said. "They're black ops groups working in the underbelly of Academy City. Trust me, you don't want to get involved with them."

Touma decided to press the question. "Why not? I mean, I've experienced meeting with them before..."

"With the city being invaded right now, who knows that other group in the underbelly's going to take advantage of the chaos. Heck, I won't be surprised if those Skill-Out gangs are going to go all out as well."

Just my luck. Touma groaned as he sat back in the SUV. If what the assassin said is correct, they could expect more trouble from other factions that are affiliated with the city's underworld. Can we make it out of this night alive?

Hiss13

2015-04-20, 21:53

MShukyDeneuve

2015-04-21, 02:09

I wanna read the othinus one
:-D.

Draco Spirit

2015-04-21, 09:57

So, I started writing the Birdy fanfic I left unfinished and on hold for a bit due to real life. However, going back, I realize that all of the stuff I wrote regarding Tsuchimikado's 'death' is now meaningless in the face of NT12...oh well, gotta stick with it, I guess.

I finally finished my last section of Othinus's whimsical behavior in the fic, though. :p

I got thrown a wild ball when NT 11 came out with my fanfic Seven Days, since originally I was going to do Touma and Misaki tragic past as a chapter focus for Thursday.... :heh:

Hiss13

2015-04-21, 11:56

I wanna read the othinus one
:-D.

Might I direct you to previous parts. I think it was Part 5 and Part 11 which had the Othinus bits, though, I would instruct you to read all of the fic that has been posted so far. :P
*Shameless Self-promo*

Ugh...I finally got off that writers block, got some work done irl, and got to write more of my Birdy Fic.
Here are the previous parts.
Birdy Fic Part 1 (http://forums.animesuki.com/showpost.php?p=4822977&postcount=4671)
Birdy Fic Part 2 (http://forums.animesuki.com/showpost.php?p=4823024&postcount=4673)
Birdy Fic Part 3 (http://forums.animesuki.com/showpost.php?p=4828865&postcount=4858)
Birdy Fic Part 4-5 (http://forums.animesuki.com/showpost.php?p=4854094&postcount=5381)
Birdy Fic Parts 6-7 (http://forums.animesuki.com/showthread.php?p=4938002#post4938002)
Birdy Fic Parts 8-11 (http://forums.animesuki.com/showthread.php?p=5004659#post5004659)

A Certain Classroom of A Certain High School

Tsukuyomi Komoe was a girl with a passion for teaching and she loved her class. No matter how much she may have tried to protest it, she loved their rowdy antics and how upbeat the class was in general. So, it should come as no surprise that she was on edge after the class had gone somewhat somber after the passing of one of their own. Even the bell for lunch was enough at that point to startle the little teacher and that was what ended up happening.

“Hiyeeeh!” Komoe looked up to the speaker in a moment of surprise and followed up with a sigh. “That’s it for today. You guys will be having PE after lunch so eat well.” Komoe sighed before turning to the door.

“Komoe-sensei seems to be taking this really hard.”

“What would you expect? Tsuchimikado-kun just passed away without warning.”

“It really just does not feel the same at all without him.”

“Even the Delta Force is too somber.”

“They just feel so unbalanced with only two people.”

The seemingly young teacher placed her hand on the sliding door of the classroom before looking back at the two students sitting and staring out of the window. It hurt her as a teacher to see her students who she treated like her own children looking like that. It hurt her even more that she has been and still was unable to do anything to help alleviate it. Feeling helpless, she slid open the door.

*THUD*

In less than a second, three girls of similar sizes were lying on top of each other in front of that open door. On top was a young blonde. In the middle was…

“SISTER-CHAN!?’ Komoe shouted from her position on the bottom of the dogpile.

“Myaah…” The cat who seemed to have jumped out of the nun’s arms onto her head at the last moment let out a cry while everyone in the class looked towards the scene in front of them.

“Index!? Patricia!? What the hell are you guys doi—bfuu!” Kamijou jolted out of seat after realizing what was going on only to be met with a punch to the stomach from his blue-haired friend.

“Kamijou, again?”

“That bastard.”

“Are we REALLY that surprised?”

“Dammit, Kami-yan!” Aogami shouted for everyone to hear. “Why? First it’s that silver-haired nun and now it’s a cute little blonde loli character! What’s next? Some blonde goddess with skimpy clothes and an eyepatch? A high-priestess of a hidden religious sect? A young Cinderella in a form-fitting outfit? Or maybe it will be a star-eyed girl w—geh!!”

The spiky-haired boy who recovered finally retaliated with an identical move. “What the hell was that for!? Moreover, what’s with those super specific examples?!” He stamped before moving in for another punch while Aogami moved in for a cross-counter. Within seconds, a brawl erupted between the two of them.

“Two-hundred yen on Kamijou!”

“Five-hundred on Aogami!”

While the bets were erupting from the population of students in the class, a girl with hime hair approached while slowly reaching her hand out to the spiky-black-haired boy. “Um...please don’t get hurt...” Despite that, she could not muster up the courage to say or do anything more.

Suddenly another bet was announced. “One thousand on Fukiyose!”

The students who already made their bets faced the spiky-haired girl with glasses in the back who had just made her bet. More accurately, they were staring at the Iron Wall Girl who was dashing past her into the fray with an expression of obvious irritation.

“KAMIJOOOOOOOOOU!” With a single low roar, Fukiyose jumped into the fray. “You just had to get Himegami and the rest of the class involved in your damn stupidity!” Within that minute, the brawl escalated with Kamijou and Aogami fighting to stay conscious.

In the meantime, Patricia could only watch as she was unable to stop the loud brawl.

After doing a quick count, it seems the parts I have written and have yet to post are 13 and 14. I'll put those up when Part 15 is finished.

I got thrown a wild ball when NT 11 came out with my fanfic Seven Days, since originally I was going to do Touma and Misaki tragic past as a chapter focus for Thursday.... :heh:

Well, that definitely sounds awkward. :heh:
I did just figure out a way to fix everything, though, without having to rewrite previous parts. :heh:

Draco Spirit

2015-04-21, 15:54

You bet!

It's the curse of writing fanfiction for ongoing stories tho, sometimes you have to draw a line and say it's a alternative timeline that ignores anything after Book X or whatever.

Through with Misaki I decided to roll with it. Used the NT 11 stuff as a base for the chapter and dropped the 'childhood friend who know your secret past' plot I was originally going for. Then I found alternative ways to keep the overarching story on course! ;)

allfictions

2015-04-22, 01:38

That's what happens when you stick too close to the stations of canon. Personally, I never understood why so many TAMNI fics choose to adhere to the verse's plotline. Why would you restrain yourself? There is litterally no place for new events for your fic if you choose for it to take place in the story's current year, and authors*who skip forward tend to make assumptions that are mostly uninteresting.

Making your plot branch off in a new alternate timeline after a specific canonical arc or simply keeping the time of the fic vague enough (like some SS in the SP volume did) seem like the better options.

(Hence why I dropped A Certain Unknown Level 0: at first taking place after NT7 when it was published, it constantly retconned the events to fit with each new releases. It became too tiresome for me to take it seriously)

Draco Spirit

2015-04-22, 04:40

Time moves really slow in the TAMNI universe tbh. Personally I find Time skips are mostly useful for setting up new dynamics that wouldn't ring true after a short time.

On cannon it's a double edged sword really, get to far from it and people might getting confused on whats going of, keep too close to it and you might end up strangling your plot with it.

Vagueness of when is certainly a useful option. After X and before Y likely all you need from a narrative point of view, unless you mention event Z in chapter 4.

Oh just putting pre NT 5 or whatever is fine. I did a 10032/ Touma romance fanfic, that completely ignored everything none animated (So no Worse or Birdway), but it worked out fairly well as a story, even if it completely ignore WW3 in its timeline! ;)

On a different note I love to do a story set way way in the future of the setting, with the cast being fully grown adults with day jobs and everything... just need a plot to properly explore it. :heh:

Hiss13

2015-04-23, 00:18

That's it. I really need to finish this Birdy fic so I can finally move onto writing that FiammaXMirror oneshot I promised eons ago.

SmokinFerret88

2015-04-23, 01:23

That's it. I really need to finish this Birdy fic so I can finally move onto writing that FiammaXMirror oneshot I promised eons ago.

Huh, wah, FiammaXMirror One-shot? Are the planet's aligning? Is the sun about to implode and wipe out the universe? Am I on drugs!? Or is that one-shot really going to become a reality in my lifetime?

If so....sweet.

If not....well, nobody can say I wasn't patient.

Also, minor note here, hi everybody; been awhile hasn't it?

Draco Spirit

2015-04-23, 05:13

Yus, I was stating to wonder if you joined the navy or something >.<

RPG_Fanatic

2015-04-23, 07:39

Huh, wah, FiammaXMirror One-shot? Are the planet's aligning? Is the sun about to implode and wipe out the universe? Am I on drugs!? Or is that one-shot really going to become a reality in my lifetime?

If so....sweet.

If not....well, nobody can say I wasn't patient.

Also, minor note here, hi everybody; been awhile hasn't it?

Hey SmokinFerret88, glad to see you back. I hope since you are posting again means that you are doing well.

Hiss13

2015-04-23, 08:46

Huh, wah, FiammaXMirror One-shot? Are the planet's aligning? Is the sun about to implode and wipe out the universe? Am I on drugs!? Or is that one-shot really going to become a reality in my lifetime?

If so....sweet.

If not....well, nobody can say I wasn't patient.

Also, minor note here, hi everybody; been awhile hasn't it?

Yes, soon. No. Possibly. I would consider that. Definitely.

Once this Birdy fanfic is finished, the first thing I will be doing is writing the glorious FiammaXMirror. I can only hope it will live up to your expectations, dear Ferret. :eyespin:

SmokinFerret88

2015-04-23, 10:15

Yus, I was stating to wonder if you joined the navy or something >.<

No navy, just took an extended break from a lot of things; the Struggle Is Real after-all.

Hey SmokinFerret88, glad to see you back. I hope since you are posting again means that you are doing well.

For the most part yeah, I'm poor as hell but otherwise doing alright.

Yes, soon. No. Possibly. I would consider that. Definitely.

Once this Birdy fanfic is finished, the first thing I will be doing is writing the glorious FiammaXMirror. I can only hope it will live up to your expectations, dear Ferret. :eyespin:

I'm pretty confident that you will, I have a little something called faith in me....somewhere.

Anyways, please, continue to take your time; I'm in no rush. So long as I'm informed when the epic-ness of that one-shot comes out, I'll be content.

Itherael

2015-04-25, 19:41

OH&S

2015-04-25, 19:55

I'd put my money on Accelerator winning. Remember what Ollerus said to Gunha about his ability. Something along the lines of "...if you use it like a gun, it can be blocked like a gun. ...if you use it like a sword, it can be blocked like a sword..."

Gunha's power is a treasure chest of possibilities but seeing how he uses it right now (given what was seen in the Railgun manga or the LNs) Accelerator would definitely win.

It could change if Gunha reaches a deeper understanding of his power like Ollerus did.

Wandering Soul

2015-04-25, 20:15

Greetings People! I have some doubts about this so please share you opinion with me:

What would happen in a fight between Accelerator and Sogiita Guhna? What would occur? Does the Number Seven have any possibility of winning? What would be the outcome?
I would say Accelerator would win. While Gunha could possibly win if he understood his power like Ollerus said, right now he has a limited understanding of it. Considering how he currently uses his ability then Accelerator should by all means win.

Rising Dragon

2015-04-25, 20:15

It'd probably end like how most attempts at sheer brute force ends when it comes to Accelerator.

With them a bloody smear at Accelerator's feet.

SmokinFerret88

2015-04-26, 01:04

RPG_Fanatic

2015-04-26, 06:36

Okay, so, looking for input here. Among the members of dark-side in Academy City, hell even in the light-side of it, which Canon Character(s) should make an appearance soon in ACWOD?

Excluding Mikoto for....reasons....

This is a tough question, especially since I can only guess where your story is going from here.

Lets see. It would be interesting to see how Kumokawa Seria and Shokuhou Misaki react to Touma join ITEM.

In terms of dark side, since this is before the main series, there is no GROUP. BLOCK wouldn't be that interesting. Seeing SCHOOL or MEMBER might be interesting though. I suppose it is also possible to throw in a random Kihara if you want.

Oh I know, Hamazura Shiage and the skill out group he is with could appear. That could be very interesting.

That's all I have for now.

Greetings People! I have some doubts about this so please share you opinion with me:

What would happen in a fight between Accelerator and Sogiita Guhna? What would occur? Does the Number Seven have any possibility of winning? What would be the outcome?

This would be an interesting match-up. I'm assuming that the Accelerator you are referring to is the one that appeared in your fic, while he was still undefeated.

The problem being we still don't understanding how Guhna's power works, just that the scientists don't understand it. If Accelerator has trouble grasping the effects of Guhna's power, he might not be able to properly reflect it. Otherwise, I see a stalemate. In railgun it has been show that Guhna can stop his bleeding and put his bones back together. In the novel he took a bullet to the heart and got right back up. I think he would be able to handle the auto-reflect feedback, and any attacks Accelerator throws his way. Unlike Ollerus , I don't think past Accelerator would have a decisive blow that would incapacitate Guhna.

Yu Ominae

2015-04-26, 07:43

Moving on now... I guess after this, I'll try to write my interpretation of the Daihasei University attack with some changes. Unless peeps want me to write more scenes that would extend the Academy City Invasion Arc. My problem is how to make Vent/Vento's Divine Punishment not that powerful then hostile intent towards her is a KO for you.

Let me know if I need to improve on this snippet.

The Touareg the Assassins were able to hijack was now under attack by something.

Something or rather, someone who has the ability to shoot green beams from the air and from a distance. So far, the balaclava-wearing assassin was doing a good job in defensive driving when the mask-wearing assassin shouted to his partner to turn left, right or go straight, ignoring the working traffic lights since there's no one on the streets.

Touma was told to cover Last Order in case some broken glass would get inside and hurt her from the beam attack.

"This isn't my day!" The balalclava-wearing assassin grunted when he executed a sharp right turn on the steering wheel after he turned left on the empty four-way intersection, nearly avoiding a hit from the green beam. It instead wrecked havoc on the empty street.

"Keep going!" The mask-wearing assassin motioned his partner to keep going. "We can hold them off while these two find a safe place to hide! Then we'll take on Kihara himself!"

"Right!"

After the Toureg finished its turn, the SUV was about to go straight. Except for a beam attack that somehow struck the SUV's left front and rear wheels at the last minute. It was like whoever was doing the attacks waited for them to make the turn.

"You two!" The mask-wearing assassin barked his instructions to Touma and Last Order. "Buckle up! We're about to lose control of the SUV!"

"Okay!" Touma was the first to put on his seat belt before he helped Last Order use a child seat belt. She nodded at him as a way of saying thank you.

"Brace for impact!"

The last thing the four saw was the SUV crashing into a parked Isuzu Como van.

A few minutes after the crash occurred, a couple of Ford Kuga SUVs in Panther Black finishes with Academy City license plates arrived and parked a few meters in front of the wrecked SUV. Ten men in civilian clothes came out and drew out their pistols from their shoulder holsters hidden underneath their windbreakers with hoods covering their heads.

Four men carefully converged onto the Touareg and the Como, their pistols aimed at the two unconscious assassins.

"No one's at the back. Must've taken off..." One of the pistol-armed man checked the rear doors to see that they were partially wrecked to the point of having from the hinges, but it had signs that showed someone had opened it from the right side of the SUV.

"Check those two! We can't take any chances if they're alive!" Another pistol-armed man gave his instruction. In response, the two men went to check the pulse of the seemingly unconscious assassins.

All of a sudden, they were stabbed in the neck by the Hidden Blades. They didn't have time to react appropriately since they were taken by surprise.

"Shit! Get Mugino and the others! We're under...!" The third man shouted to the others as he was about to fire his sidearm. He was instead, smacked on the ground when the driver's door was opened hard, sending him to the ground.

"I can't let anyone else have the fun!" The mask-wearing assassin jumped at the downed man and stabbed him at the neck.

The fourth man was about to bring out his balisong from the pocket of his windbreaker when he was stabbed in the stomach by the balaclava-wearing assassin after he got out of the SUV. He was then stabbed again and again at the chest several times with the Hidden Blade until he lost consciousness.

The mask-wearing assassin picked up the dropped pistol and fired it at the other armed men taking cover behind the Kugas.

"We gotta go!" He said as he fired at the Kugas to break the headlights and the tires. "These guys are from ITEM!"

"Shit! If that's the case, then they're calling in the Meltdown!" The balaclava-wearing assassin shouted, cursing their bad luck.

As if his prediction was right, a green beam struck the pavement near the van.

"I guess we were right that some assassins are here to do some dirty business!"

The assassins noted that the threatening voice was from the brown-haired woman named Shizuri Mugino, who wore a light brown jacket, white shirt and light brown pants with dark brown boots. She gave an evil smirk at them as she fired two more green beams over their heads.

"Those girls." The mask-wearing assassin whispered to his colleague, who came to his side. "It's them."

"You're right." The other assassin nodded in agreement. "Looks like intel got it right." He then observed the other ITEM agents. "Saiai Kinuhata, Rikou Takitsubo and Frenda Seivelun."

Saiai had her orange hoodie, white shirt, blue shorts and red rubber shoes. Rikou had a pink and white jogging pants, jacket and white sneakers while Frenda had her dark blue beret and jacket over her white shirt with a red ribbon and pleated skirt with a pair of black pump shoes and a dark pantyhose.

"You guys! Chase after the target!" Shizuri shouted at the armed ITEM agents. "We'll take care of the assassins!"

"Yes, ma'am!"

Touma was now rushing in down the street while holding onto Last Order's hand. If he recalled correctly, the street should lead down to the nearest Judgement office. Altthough he wondered if, with his luck and wisdom, can get any help from any Judgement officers since the terror alert was raised a few hours ago.

"Just a bit longer." Touma guaranteed to Last Order before shots rang out.

"What was that, Misaka asks as she was getting into a panic over those loud noises." Last Order asked Touma, gripping his hand and feeling a bit scared.

"Someone's firing at us!" Touma answered, still trying to run. "Just keep moving!"

The two kept on running despite the sounds of gunfire getting louder and louder.

"Someone intercept them from the side or something!"

"Dammit! If I only brought a taser with me today!"

They just keep getting closer and closer. Touma gritted his teeth. He was only a a bit closer to the Judgement office that he passed by before.

Some of the gunshots rang out again, this time scratching his right cheek.

"Ahh...!" Touma gritted his teeth again in pain.

"Are you okay, asks Misaka after seeing you nearly getting shot?!" Last Order inquired about Touma's condition.

"I-I'm fine!" Touma insisted that he was fine. "We need to get moving before they get lucky with their next shot..."

All of a sudden, automatic gunfire came from the rear. Touma instinctively took cover with Last Order behind a parked Nissan Crew sedan. The bullets, however, did not hit the car. Instead, the two heard groans of men going down after being shot.

"It appears that you're safe, Touma Kamijou!"

That voice. It's a woman. And has that commanding aura. Wait a second, isn't that...

"Shutaura Sequenzia?!" Touma saw the woman who he met a few weeks ago. Not only she was there to save him, but she appears to only wear a black windbreaker with a hood, jeans, tac boots and gloves with a tac vest of the same color worn over her chest. She was also armed with a Heckler & Koch HK416 A5 with a 14.5 inch barrel with a combat sling attached.

Shutaura grinned at him. "Good thing we made it in time, too."

"We?" Touma raised an eyebrow at the ex-Black Crow commander when Last Order tugged at his arm. "Not now... I'll explain everything later."

"Sorry I'm late, ma'am." Shautaura turned around and see a man in his early 30s with the same clothes as Shutaura, except that he had white and red sneakers on instead of boots with a brown toque worn over his head. He was also armed with the same weapon like her.

"Good timing." The black-haired woman greeted him before she introduced him to Touma and Last Order. "Touma, I want you to meet Josh Shimazaki. He used to be my second-in-command."

Josh shook hands with Touma. "Nice to meet you, Mr. Kamijou."

"Call me Touma."

Touma looked at Last Order and introduced her. "I need to introduce you guys to her..."

"We've been told." Shutaura said, when she raised her hand. "Last Order, right?"

"That's right, say Misaka as she was stunned to know how the lady knows me." Last Order was stunned to know that she knows about her without introducing herself.

"What happened to your unit?" Touma helped Last Order stand up straight.

"We were wiped out." Josh told Touma. "After the incident in Endymion, we were hounded and chased by armed men. Most of us were wiped out after being pursued for a few weeks due to Ms. Tangleroad's involvement with it."

"Are they from Hound Dogs and Disciplinary Action?"

Shutaura mused about Touma's question as she did a brass check on her assault rifle. She then replied. "Most likely. If I recall, the initial assault on our HQ in District 23 came when the Orbit Portal Company building was surrounded by armed men when they claimed that they were from the Force's Anti-Skill."

If I recall... Those masked guys mention about Disciplinary Action using Anti-Skill-like uniforms, gear and markings as a means of hiding their identity from the public.

"So are you guys here to help us out, ask Misaka since she's now worried if more armed men are coming for her and Touma." Last Order asked Shutaura and Josh after they checked their assault rifles.

"Don't worry, little lady." Josh reassured Last Order. "Our pals should keep whoever's after you busy. So... where are you guys going?"

"Well..."

We're heading to the nearest place to hide and rest for now. Maybe the nearest Judgement station...

"Takitsubo." Shizuri called for Rikou's attention as she used her skill known in ITEM as AIM Stalker or Ability Stalker when she stared hard at the assassins when they got their Hidden Blades ready.

"One of them's an ESPer." Rikou reported her findings very calm. "I can't tell which one."

"That's good enough." Shizuri grinned again before she stared at the assassins. She began to fire her green beams, known as Meltdown or Atom Breaker/Destruction, at the Touareg and the Como.

"Scatter!" The mask-wearing assassin grunted when he got a smoke grenade and threw it at her feet. This gave them the needed advantage to slip in and cause some chaos.

"Not so fast, assassin!" Frenda yelled at the top of her voice when several handheld anti-tank missiles flew in straight for them. They never redirected their aim. Instead, they made impact at the vehicles behind them.

"Stand back!" Saiai used Offense Armor or Nitrogen Armor to lift one of the abandoned Kugas, using the compressed nitrogen in the air to help her toss it at the assassins.

"Hah!" The balaclava-wearing assassin taunted the ITEM team in English as he jumped on the shoulders of his partner before he leaped onto the hurled SUV as soon as it was the reach of his next jump. "You girls may be able to give us a better fight than what the Templars can do!"

He was about to stake his first kill in the invasion if it was not for Shizuri's intervention when she fired a beam at him.

"Crap!" The assassin failed to make a successful jump since he came down fast and hard, forcing him to execute a roll to minimize the impact. The hurled SUV made impact when it smashed the front door of a deserted Italian restaurant.

"Whoops!" Shizuri smirked at the assassin. "Looks like I missed. Guess I need to aim a bit more to the left."

"I'll get him, Mugino!" Frenda shouted as she went for the balaclava-clad assassin. The blonde girl jumped to execute a Flying Double Side Kick, complete with Hidden Blade out of her pump shoes.

The assassin dodged by rolling to the side. He brought his arms up at the ready, the blade pointed upwards.

Meanwhile, Rikou was told by Saiai to double back at the other Kuga SUV to hide since the other ITEM agents were pursuing Touma and Last Order.

"Now, assassin..." Shizuri began to prepare for another attack with Saiai supporting her. "I believe that this is the point where you cough up some answers as to why you're in the city, interfering with the Hound Dogs."

"Nothing much really. We were just strolling about." The mask-wearing assassin said before he charged at Shizuri, opting to forego Saiai for the time being.

"Strolling, huh?" The ITEM leader expected a kick from the chest, so she guarded against it. Instead, the assassin moved in close and swift and punched her in the face before she received another punch to the chest, forcing her to step back away from him.

"You're going to be in super trouble, assassin!" Saiai concentrated to use Offense Armor in order to blow him away. Frenda, on the other hand, was able to keep the other assassin on the defensive by using her kicks to keep him back.

"Erah!" The assassin waited for Frenda to slow down with her kicks. When there was a five second gap between the reverse kick she did before the next one, he took the opportunity to use a backfist on her. That worked since she didn't have time to block it, which resulted in getting hit on her face.

"Aaaghhh!" The girl yelled when she was knocked down.

"Trouble's not in my damn vocabulary!" The assassin charged in towards Shizuri, but was knocked off his feet when compressed nitrogen blew him away.

Didn't see that one coming.

"I hope you don't mind if I cut in, do you!"

A booming voice, female with a bit of threatening malice in it, came in when the ground behind Shizuri and Saiai shook violently due to something that pounded on it. When the smoke cleared, a woman in yellow and slightly brown kirtle with brown hosiery and yellow shoes. She had a yellow headpiece worn over her head.

"What the?" Saiai noted that the woman has piercings on her face and heavy makeup on her face.

"Allow me to introduce myself." The woman smirked when she gripped her large hammer, known as the Wind Hammer. "My name is Vento of the Front and I am a member of God's Right Seat!"

SibylEnd

2015-04-26, 12:30

not enough "Supers" from kinuhata

SmokinFerret88

2015-04-26, 19:29

This is a tough question, especially since I can only guess where your story is going from here.

Lets see. It would be interesting to see how Kumokawa Seria and Shokuhou Misaki react to Touma join ITEM.

In terms of dark side, since this is before the main series, there is no GROUP. BLOCK wouldn't be that interesting. Seeing SCHOOL or MEMBER might be interesting though. I suppose it is also possible to throw in a random Kihara if you want.

Oh I know, Hamazura Shiage and the skill out group he is with could appear. That could be very interesting.

That's all I have for now.

Hamazura would be a good appearance, but it's too soon for him to show up considering how the Queen of Blades mini-arc. was centered around another large Skill-Out Gang. Later on, certainly, but not quite yet.

Funny thing about Kumokawa, I actually did have something planned for her, Misaki might not be far behind her, but they definitely have an opinion on the matter.

SCHOOL have their own arc. which will further showcase them and ITEM's feud in the city. As for MEMBER, oddly enough, I believe that the Professor would kinda be acting as an ally to Touma honestly; though I'm not sure.

Going by what was said in the Battle Royal arc of OT 16, he's pretty much Aleistar's lap-dog. In which case if he's informed of Kamijou's importance to Aleistar's big plan then I foresee him and MEMBER as a whole working to ensure Touma's survival; though again that's all just speculation.

Regards to a Kihara...I kinda sorta have something planned for that as well. It's own arc actually and probably one that I'm most looking forward to writing for...reasons. But it honestly makes me sad that I can't feasibly get Kihara Kagun to fit into this story in any way. I would've seriously loved to have put him and Touma on a team together.

Yu Ominae

2015-04-26, 19:39

@Sibyl

- Thanks for that. I kinda noticed that I made Kinuhata say one "Super". My bad. :heh:

RPG_Fanatic

2015-04-26, 21:02

Hamazura would be a good appearance, but it's too soon for him to show up considering how the Queen of Blades mini-arc. was centered around another large Skill-Out Gang. Later on, certainly, but not quite yet.

Funny thing about Kumokawa, I actually did have something planned for her, Misaki might not be far behind her, but they definitely have an opinion on the matter.

SCHOOL have their own arc. which will further showcase them and ITEM's feud in the city. As for MEMBER, oddly enough, I believe that the Professor would kinda be acting as an ally to Touma honestly; though I'm not sure.

Going by what was said in the Battle Royal arc of OT 16, he's pretty much Aleistar's lap-dog. In which case if he's informed of Kamijou's importance to Aleistar's big plan then I foresee him and MEMBER as a whole working to ensure Touma's survival; though again that's all just speculation.

Regards to a Kihara...I kinda sorta have something planned for that as well. It's own arc actually and probably one that I'm most looking forward to writing for...reasons. But it honestly makes me sad that I can't feasibly get Kihara Kagun to fit into this story in any way. I would've seriously loved to have put him and Touma on a team together.

Sounds Interesting. I'll look forward to seeing how your story unfolds.

DragonXX

2015-04-27, 00:07

You know something I want to see is something like a crossover with umineko in NT9 I want to see something like the witch from Umineko talking about the fight between the Human Tomua and The Magic God Othunis, mostly how Bernkastel will act seeing someone go throught a Hell like her when she was Rika(Ryukishi07 himself said in a interview that Bernkastel was once Rika) or will Tomua get her more angry because he is going throught a Hell like her and suffer no negative side effort or ever give up till the perfect world happen and we know that Rika in Higurashi give up at some point untill Keiichi broke fate.

Yu Ominae

2015-04-27, 04:25

I sure would like to write a way for my planned story that would culminate in defeating Aleister and his plans with the city though... :confused:

SmokinFerret88

2015-04-27, 09:10

The One Above God

2015-04-27, 09:24

allfictions

2015-04-27, 18:08

Can someone remind me what age a student in Academy City has to be before they can take part in the Power Development Curriculum? I remember it being mentioned somewhere that the student had to be a certain age before they could take part in it, but I forgot what that age-range was.
Was it actually ever mentionned? Because I sure don't recall any such thing. The closest is Misaka's mom saying that she can't enter the program because of her age. Though whether that's because it's impossible or just because AC doesn't accept applicants as old as her wasn't said.

Welsh_Dragon

2015-04-28, 21:05

Itherael

2015-04-29, 14:46

Well, I appreciate the input, guys. You rock.

Okay, so, looking for input here. Among the members of dark-side in Academy City, hell even in the light-side of it, which Canon Character(s) should make an appearance soon in ACWOD?

Excluding Mikoto for....reasons....

Well, well, my food friend, Captain Ferret. Why not make Sogiita Guhna appear? Seeing Kamijou's current position as a member of ITEM, I think you could arrange some unwanted interference from him in one of his jobs, by thus creating a possible funny scene with him and I would suggest, with Frenda or Kinuhata as well.

Another interesting possibility would be Musujime Awaki meeting the boy-

allfictions

2015-04-29, 18:55

I think it's because she is an adult. When one reaches adulthood the brain stops growing/is fully developed and it can become harder to take in new and more complex information. As a child the brain hasn't/isn't fully developed so it is possible to implant more knowledge. This is why it is easier to learn a second language as a kid than as an adult.
True, and I just realized there was something to that effect in NT11:
While this is an extremely unique situation, the two of them will end up plateauing at around Level 3 if they are given the standard Curriculum.

We must prune one of them and focus on the other.

We must make the decision before they enter the harsh hormone fluctuations of adolescence to ensure their talent is not crushed.

Welsh_Dragon

2015-04-30, 21:02

^I am just happy I finally got to use what I learned in the developmental psychology class I took in college. lol

rubix22

2015-05-02, 21:47

How do I create an original character without wanting to punch myself in the face?

Chaos2Frozen

2015-05-03, 00:35

How do I create an original character without wanting to punch myself in the face?

Base him/her off of someone you know... Ideally someone you wouldn't want to punch yourself in the face with.

tsunade666

2015-05-03, 05:57

Based it on your own ideal person? Ideal hero, ideal heroine and ideal villain.

agetreme

2015-05-03, 08:50

Based it on your own ideal person? Ideal hero, ideal heroine and ideal villain.

Wouldn't it be bad? I mean there is a potential that one might end up with a Mary Sue character if mishandled.

=

After a long hiatus from here, I am back in the mood to work on my To Aru project....which was like a year or months ago?

I am an insanely procrastinating procrastinator.....

Edit:

I got lazy with coming up with crazy and weird ability so I am going with: the Protagonist OC's power is basically...Save-Scumming. It fit into my criteria of:
1. could be mistaken as a low level (level 2) Esper with Precognition as ability.
2. Personality-wise, I can simplify it to: A really hardcore Gamer.... Resetting Game over and over again.
3. Technically not over-powered. (Unless you consider Knowledge is power...)
4. Fit into the idea of multi-verse (which the story has few elements of).

Question: How do you stop an Esper who can manipulate time? Manipulate as in Slow down time to a point where time appear to stop moving. None of the fancy time-traveling stuff except for that guy I mentioned above.

rubix22

2015-05-03, 15:27

Facepunching aside, I find it hard to create a character that feels like it "belongs" in a said universe. I've got a few OCs in my sleeve, but they all feel weirdly unreal. But I guess that's the nature of fanfiction. Maybe some feedback would help?

How do you stop an Esper who can manipulate time? Manipulate as in Slow down time to a point where time appear to stop moving. None of the fancy time-traveling stuff except for that guy I mentioned above.

This sounds like something that boils down to: Can Accelerator beat the Flash?

Draco Spirit

2015-05-03, 18:58

How do I create an original character without wanting to punch myself in the face?

Is a question I asked myself recently! :D

I've been working on a original fantasy fiction lately.. so everyone is OC by defaults. The worry in the back of my mind of course is 'please don't let this character by a Mary or Gary Sue' >.<

The way I'm handling it is by making sure every character personality got the obvious double edges and starting with archetypes... but not finishing there.

So to give a simple breakdown of one of the major characters.

Proud warrior Lady - Is a trained killer and a werelion. So fast, strong and clever when it comes to violence. Between her werelion nature and training, she's basically Cpt America with fangs and regeneration.

So I made sure her lycanthropy a proper curse. The more emotional she gets, the closer she becomes to becoming a out of control lion/human hybrid monster that will try to tear apart anyone she can find.

Result, she deeply disciplined and regimented, emotional stunted and has a deep insecurity complex at trusting herself (which I'm so abusing for plot pushing).

So for any OCs I start with a archetype and then flesh them out. Make sure they can be loved and hated in different lights.

SmokinFerret88

2015-05-03, 20:53

The tricky thing about an OC depends on their role. If its a protagonist, antagonist, or just a supportive character also plays a role into how they will function in the long run.

Personally, Yoshihiro Togashi is my role model when I make my characters for any of the three criteria I previously mentioned. Can't help it, he throws in some insight to not just one side, but all sides, and it create's perspectives that allow everyone to see that, while the hero's are good and the villains are evil, you at least get some depth to them. You see their reasons, their perspective, and as a result you can by some degree understand why either side is doing it for besides the whole 'world's in jeopardy, need to save it' or 'hate/don't care about the world, gonna destroy it' motives.

Admittedly though, I wouldn't worry too much about the whole mary sue / gary sue thing. No matter how good the OC is, the fact that is an Original Character automatically is gonna have someone claiming them to be either or. It's a stigma, you'll at least get one, but as long as you provide some proper balancing and they are well written, then I imagine nobody would have any serious complaints. I mean, I made 9 OC already, more in the works too, and I didn't see many people complaining about them at all during their run time.

So, as I said, as long as their role in the story is established, they're pros and cons are balanced and the writings good, nobody should really care or complain too much.

agetreme

2015-05-04, 09:50

So long as you balance out the Pro and Con, I think it would be okay.

I mention "mishandle" because a Mary Sue can be well-written in the hand of a really skilled writer. So.... it's not impossible just really difficult to do.

This sounds like something that boils down to: Can Accelerator beat the Flash?

My current solution is: You just need to stick something(a bomb or that Robotic Insect thing) on the Time Manipulator.

Reason: AIM field prevented the Time Manipulator from killing him/herself.... by normalizing time around the Ability User, creating some sort of barrier where time flow normally around him/her.

However, this is also a double edge sword: Time flow normally for the User which means the User is aging faster than normal person.

=

I am also trying to find a way to incorporated Esper with fun abilities: Trying to justify it as the School which is involved with my plot is interested in developing Esper with weird/interesting abilities.

Headmaster: "Even Turds can be shiny if you polished them hard enough!"

=
Mujin Sekai
Level 0 Probability Zero (Critical Failure):
An Esper whose power is just bad luck. This Ability ignore all probability and go for the worst and most illogical outcome. (Esper will always rolling Critical Fumble on the dice).

Fail at Luck so badly that everybody would end up rolling a Critical Fumble on their dice roll. The kind of bad luck that will result in getting 100 red balls from a box with only green balls (red paint fall into the box prior).

However this also make the Esper effectively anti-Majin Esper.

Level 0 because it is difficult to quantify/measure...also impossible to control and it activate at random....which make it ironic. A power that ignore probability can only be activated based on random probability.

Personality-wise: Lack in self-confidence (everything that the character do is doomed to fail...so badly that it defy logic) but have strong desire to help others however any project undertaken are doomed to catastrophe failure. Whenever the character proposed to help, probably an omen that one should stop.

Joke Character mostly.

=
Yomihara
Level 4 Flawless Estimation (Perfect Ruler):
The Ability-User is also insanely good with tracking Time.

Perfect Ruler (as in the tool used to measure things). The User is cable of estimate anything with Pin-point accuracy almost instantly so long as the User have some point of reference.

Also capable of preventing any Esper (including Accelerator) from using their power....by messing up with their calculation (so long as the Esper know what they are calculating) forcing them to constantly recalculate.

Esper's level is not Level Four because of ability to mess with Espers but Level 4 due to ability has military uses such as a Artillery observer or a super-long range Sniper. However this is also the Esper's limit, the furthest the Esper could go on the Parameter List.

Personality-wise: Suffer from Obsessive–compulsive disorder. At certain time, the Character need to perform a ritual of counting personal belonging otherwise the Character would suffer from a panic attack. This would prevented the Character from being useful in situation where the character's ability would come in handy...

=

Tokiomi
Level 4 Teleporter /(at least level 5) Time Control (Chrono-hand/Time Manipulator).
Esper is Level 4 is due to ability to teleport one self to a certain distance but the range and the weight leave much to desire.

Tokiomi always assumed that time-freezing is how teleporter get around.....:heh:

Time Control:
It may take a while to "warm up" (lots of calculation are involved) but once the calculation is done, within one hour, the Esper is capable of turning the power on and off as if pressing the stop button on a stopwatch.

Time Manipulator need to reset the calculation once every 1 hour...the Esper's 1 hour, not the world.

The maximum duration that the Esper's "freeze Time" could last is 24 hours.(This including the hourly recalibration requirement which can be done while time is "stopped").

Mentioned earlier: The character's AIM field function like some sort of Time-barrier in which time flow normally while the time beyond the Esper flow slowly. The character is capable of extending AIM field slightly beyond body but that is not a good thing because the character could use this to kill people.

(Think of it this way: the Brain is functioning normally but the heart is not pumping blood into the brain fast enough. Say, how long will a brain last without oxygen from blood.)

Personality-wise: Unmotivated like the Protagonist OC but even more apathetic than the Protagonist OC (who at least is passionate about games).

The Time Manipulator's ultimate/ end-goal is to be as lazy as possible and somehow still manage to get away with it (while still getting paid).

LevelSeven

2015-05-04, 14:15

So long as you balance out the Pro and Con, I think it would be okay.
it depends on the story,
making a OP char is nowhere close to "making a mary sue",
accel as example is OP and most of his fights in the LN are curpstomb battles, but the story focuses on his mind and his emotional/mental problems instead of "how easy can he beat them"...

actually, making a char with to much cons is like "anti-mary sue" where the char cant be used except in a highly favorable way for the said char,
every other way would simply look like bad writing or "plot wanted it" :/

to your power ideas :D :
My current solution is: You just need to stick something(a bomb or that Robotic Insect thing) on the Time Manipulator.

Reason: AIM field prevented the Time Manipulator from killing him/herself.... by normalizing time around the Ability User, creating some sort of barrier where time flow normally around him/her.

However, this is also a double edge sword: Time flow normally for the User which means the User is aging faster than normal person.
or let him "overload" his body while stopping time,
afterall, the manipulation of one of the most essential things in the universe and existence itself is bound to have a heavy drawback,

letting him caugh blood, organs failings and many kinds of cancer who advance but not kill him + having a "benjamin button"-body would be simple as side effect but also not really exaggarated :)
Mujin Sekai
Level 0 Probability Zero (Critical Failure):
cool name :)
but this char would die,
without "luck" and with the way you descirbed it, he would die before he even lived 2 days with that power,
having this kind of misfortune would surely let him get a heart attack or deadly wound by simply walking to a store for coffee :heh:
Yomihara
Level 4 Flawless Estimation (Perfect Ruler):
The Ability-User is also insanely good with tracking Time.
yeah, this sounds like a char from the dark side :)
Personality-wise: Suffer from Obsessive–compulsive disorder. At certain time, the Character need to perform a ritual of counting personal belonging otherwise the Character would suffer from a panic attack. This would prevented the Character from being useful in situation where the character's ability would come in handy...
having personality problems because of their powers reminds me on "Alphas" :D and i like it :heh:

Time Control:
It may take a while to "warm up" (lots of calculation are involved) but once the calculation is done, within one hour, the Esper is capable of turning the power on and off as if pressing the stop button on a stopwatch.

Time Manipulator need to reset the calculation once every 1 hour...the Esper's 1 hour, not the world.

The maximum duration that the Esper's "freeze Time" could last is 24 hours.(This including the hourly recalibration requirement which can be done while time is "stopped").
sounds like some good limiations :)
if this OC become a damsel in distress and needs to be saved than i see a good plot with a kihara who researched time travel and finally found a way to go back in time, via boosting of her esper ability into a "place" where she was by lvl5.9999, after that she dies but it is not like it cares the villian :heh:

(Think of it this way: the Brain is functioning normally but the heart is not pumping blood into the brain fast enough. Say, how long will a brain last without oxygen from blood.)
if im not wrong than i think it was around 2 minutes :/

if you need more joke powers:

-Absolute Luck
-> has luck beyond the logical "limits": char doesnt care about anything and views life and death like a boring game, he gets everything and doesnt need the slightest bit of effort

-Uncontrolled Dummy Check on Lvl5
-> char cant be recignized by ANYONE no matter what he does, not even machines recognize him, if he wants to take something he can take it, he is basically like a physical ghost only that he cant go through walls :heh: : char is walking around nude and does whatever he wants, has a view on others the same way as a human to a animal, like somethhing inferior in every possible way

-Stardust Platinum
-> char has a Stand similar to the ones from jojos bihzarre adventures, by changing the massive amounts of calculation he can create another stand but can only use one of them at a time + he still gets injured if the stand is injred the same way as the ones from jojo-verse, and the stands are invisible except for people who can see ultraviolet-rays :): his power makes him believe that he is invincible and thanks to his versalite power he thinks he is omnipotent :D

agetreme

2015-05-04, 21:15

About Mujin Sekai:

The joke is: The Esper's Luck is so bad that even the Bad Luck failed to kill the Esper.

Bad Luck tried to kill Mujin!
Roll a 1 on D20.

Alternative explanation: The character is so jinxed that the character only live so as to suffer another bout of bad luck in the future.

=

Yomihara is not part of Dark Side. The Esper's use in the story is..... Time-keeping.

=

Will modify some of your suggestion but I got to go.

More weird power:
Level 3 Love Control (Charming Point):
A Narcissist who power allow him to mind-control Female (and Female only). Power doesn't work on Esper such as Mikoto and Misaki...because the power is actually similar in nature to Misaki's Mental Out...only more limited.

TkMacintosh

2015-05-05, 01:05

So, I found a good to decent Touma/Saten fanfic, but the only problem is that the flow of it starts out a little hard to get comfortable with, but you may eventually get past it and enjoy it as a whole.

Never the Twain shall meet (https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11055427/1/Never-the-Twain-Shall-Meet)

It's a rather fun story all things considering. I do like how much the author is attempting to insert Saten into Touma's life without completely and utterly screwing up the current time line as well as trying to keep the characters in character as much as possible.

agetreme

2015-05-06, 09:45

My last post from my note to get myself into the mood to write....

[ANOTHER] Academy City:
An alternate version of Academy City where Magic don't exist.... In this version, the Academy City is run by a being called [A.C.].
Doesn't stand for Aleister Crowley but Abstract Computer....
Also known as Data Erudite Machine (D.E.M.). It is a powerful Super Computer that is capable of manipulate Events to certain extend......An Anti-magician Super Weapon which is the reason why Magician don't exist in [ANOTHER].

[PSIONICS]:
[ANOTHER]'s version of magicans. Instead of using religion, they use some sort of Network (similar to Multi-Skill) to use their "magic".

The base concept is still the same: People without talent trying to do things that people with talent are capable of.

Through the use of an Impersonal Reality generator together with a powerful network Server. (Imitating Idol Theory....Deriving "magic" from a Source). a normal human being is able to use Esper's ability through Programs known as Psionics.

This allow Psions to have a large variety of powers without the same limitation as Esper (one person one power). However, Psions not only have to prepare their Psionics before hand (every Psionics have an access code), they also have limited number of use (The said access code expire with certain number of uses). In a sense, they are similar to DnD wizard.

The one major limiting factor that prevent Normal normal people from becoming a Psion is: It is difficult to get into. Unless you have the know how, programming a "Psionic" is not as easy as one think.... The Programming code are insanely complex and are getting more complicated with every updates. But if you are rich enough, there are Programmers who sell those programs at exorbitant price.

As of the start of the story, the Code manual which contain all the Codes for programming Psionic is at a whooping 103,000 volumes. There are no soft-copy due to some idiot deleting the whole things 15 years ago so one have to search it from a reference library in Academy City which only certain people with high level of security clearance can access.

Fortunately there is a "Search Index" (guess) who can allow one to find the code they need instantly. Not to mention....there is a special volume within the 103,000 volumes, refer joking as the Book of Law. Solving the puzzle within the "Book of Law" would allow Psions to gain the "Master Key Code" which allow unlimited access to all Server.

Finally
Sendou Hiromichi (Michi)
Level 2 Premonition (Precognition)
Able to predict events that would happen minutes before it occur with good enough accuracy(between 80 to 99%).

Due to his AIM, he technically experience it before... however since he could not remember everything....the accuracy is not very good unless he keep reloading (the rest is just unconsciously doing Statistical Probability).

The reason why Blind Poker System Test work for him because it flare up his gamer spirit.

[ANOTHER] Hiromichi (Hiro) actually DO have Precognition as his power rather than Save Point.

True ability: Save Point
Ability to "Save" and "Load". Active use of his power is basically Quick Save and Quick Load (which due to being unaware the true nature of his power, he could not use it consciously).

Secondary effect of that is the Esper is also capable of resetting possibility...by basically re-rolling dice by reloading from Save Point (AKA save-scumming). While this secondary effect is useless against Critical Failure's Possibility Ignore effect fortunately this ability actually help mitigate some damages that Critical Failure would have caused.

His AIM is an involuntary auto-save and load. This grant him immunity to mental attack and telepathy because his mind always auto-recalibrate itself (with information from the future) after a reset which happen often (due to his AIM).

LevelSeven

2015-05-06, 10:58

Doesn't stand for Aleister Crowley but Abstract Computer....
Also known as Data Erudite Machine (D.E.M.). It is a powerful Super Computer that is capable of manipulate Events to certain extend......An Anti-magician Super Weapon which is the reason why Magician don't exist in [ANOTHER].
i like the DEM name, can also be rea as one of my favorite words: deus ex machina XD
[ANOTHER]'s version of magicans. Instead of using religion, they use some sort of Network (similar to Multi-Skill) to use their "magic".

The base concept is still the same: People without talent trying to do things that people with talent are capable of.

Through the use of an Impersonal Reality generator together with a powerful network Server. (Imitating Idol Theory....Deriving "magic" from a Source). a normal human being is able to use Esper's ability through Programs known as Psionics.
this "pogram" stuff reminds me of mahouka-magic, i always thought it would be cool to have a story of toaru but with mahouka-magic-rules :)
This allow Psions to have a large variety of powers without the same limitation as Esper (one person one power). However, Psions not only have to prepare their Psionics before hand (every Psionics have an access code), they also have limited number of use (The said access code expire with certain number of uses). In a sense, they are similar to DnD wizard.
mmmhh, i will only give my opinion:
the concept with pograms is cool and the whole "other magic"-version is cool too but i dont like the "limited amount of use for each pogram", it sounds a bit forced,

i think it would be better if you limit the powerlvl of each spell which greatly reduces the normal magicians lvl, at most they should be lvl4, and after making stuff like "star of bethlehem" or "gungnir" they gain some high-lvl powers on par with accels or kakines powers,
it would balance the story more and force your char to use strategy to defeat the enemys who are comparable in powerlvl but not in preparation and spell-specialisation :D
only my two cents :)
The one major limiting factor that prevent Normal normal people from becoming a Psion is: It is difficult to get into. Unless you have the know how, programming a "Psionic" is not as easy as one think.... The Programming code are insanely complex and are getting more complicated with every updates. But if you are rich enough, there are Programmers who sell those programs at exorbitant price.
BIB: i can feel with the ones who dont want to do this :D
i think the best way would be that you say that by each use the pogram has a self-check-up because it needs to be ready for the next use, like the "compile"-thing by java,
but by each self-check-up it gets unnecassary complex and after a certain amount of numbers the pogram becomes useless, and forcefully trying to use it has heavy sideeffects like destryoed blood-vessels and cooked brains :)
Fortunately there is a "Search Index" (guess) who can allow one to find the code they need instantly. Not to mention....there is a special volume within the 103,000 volumes, refer joking as the Book of Law. Solving the puzzle within the "Book of Law" would allow Psions to gain the "Master Key Code" which allow unlimited access to all Server.
becoming a majin?

rubix22

2015-05-06, 12:23

LevelSeven

2015-05-06, 15:25

While revisiting one of my old ideas, it just occurred to me. How much of Hamazura's backstory do we know? When did he drop out of the curriculum? Who were his contacts before joining Skill-Out? I'm wanting to expand on these topics, but I'm not sure if it's already been covered.

Nope, at least as far as i can remember he is unknown and i doubt that he will get a detailed flashback, afterall he should be completly ordinary until after-vol.13...

rubix22

2015-05-06, 20:13

So here's an idea I've been chewing on for a long while...

As a sort-of sequel to my other fic "Zero", this fic would focus on Hamazura's first year in middle school (which would later lead up to his departure from AC's curriculum). I'm imagining that Hamazura had classmates he grew up with since elementary but eventually grew apart from as the differences in powerlevels started showing. Basically, this fic would highlight his feelings of jealousy, inferiority, and paranoia as his "friends" start slowly ostracizing him for staying a level 0.

And all this would occur under a backdrop briefly mentioned in the novels:

Level 0 hunting. Or the sport of hunting down level 0's for the fun of it.

Going over it in my head, there's something interesting with the system of the methodical hunt of another human being. Say, going to a restricted website to find a target, actually finding the target in person, and making trophy pictures of bloodied bodies. And the people who do this are arguably of sane mind

If there's an inconsistency somewhere, please tell me. But other than that, how's the idea?

allfictions

2015-05-06, 20:40

Level 0 hunting. Or the sport of hunting down level 0's for the fun of it.
The most dangerous game of all.

Seems really interesting, and the fact that Hamazura, who is usually discarded in fics, is the protagonist certainly make it even more appealing IMO.

rubix22

2015-05-06, 21:01

I tried brainstorming a few low-level abilities that could show up. I may need some help there.

What's a good name for the ability of: producing light. Or basically becoming a flashlight.

Human Torch?
Flash?

Pretty sure those are taken.

agetreme

2015-05-06, 21:19

i like the DEM name, can also be rea as one of my favorite words: deus ex machina XD

That was the intention.... :D
That's why it sounded a little random....

mmmhh, i will only give my opinion:
the concept with pograms is cool and the whole "other magic"-version is cool too but i dont like the "limited amount of use for each pogram", it sounds a bit forced,

i think it would be better if you limit the powerlvl of each spell which greatly reduces the normal magicians lvl, at most they should be lvl4, and after making stuff like "star of bethlehem" or "gungnir" they gain some high-lvl powers on par with accels or kakines powers,
it would balance the story more and force your char to use strategy to defeat the enemys who are comparable in powerlvl but not in preparation and spell-specialisation :D
only my two cents :)

Ahh...good idea. That's why I post my note for all to see.

High Tier Psionic need better equipment than your average equipments. It's like trying to play a Graphic Intensive game on full setting on an outdated Computer with low spec.

(I think the analogy work because Esper Ability need lots of calculation and Psionic is basically an Emulation).

You are lucky if it even work at all.

BIB: i can feel with the ones who dont want to do this :D
i think the best way would be that you say that by each use the pogram has a self-check-up because it needs to be ready for the next use, like the "compile"-thing by java,
but by each self-check-up it gets unnecassary complex and after a certain amount of numbers the pogram becomes useless, and forcefully trying to use it has heavy sideeffects like destryoed blood-vessels and cooked brains :)

I don't want it to be too dangerous to use. This is ANOTHER universe where AC wanted to limit the number of death so as to do obtain more samples to achieve its goal.

However with that said. Death could only be resulted when you do something crazy like trying to run over 50 programs at once...(the minimum needed if you wanted to be a "Majin")

becoming a majin?
"Don't be silly, Gods don't exist..."

Psion version of Majin, Transcendent have the ability to alter universe due to having access to all Abilities at the same time. There is still a 50-50 chance of success and failure because.... of above.

To become a Transcendent, the Psionic equipment need to run with its Safety Feature off.

Brain Overload is just one of the nasty side-effect...

SmokinFerret88

2015-05-07, 00:36

I tried brainstorming a few low-level abilities that could show up. I may need some help there.

Psss, Rubix, this Ferret may be of assistance~

Just give me an idea as to what level these Espers are and I should be able to lend a hand.

What's a good name for the ability of: producing light. Or basically becoming a flashlight.

Here's something: Limelight.

rubix22

2015-05-07, 06:00

Psss, Rubix, this Ferret may be of assistance~

Please do. Thinking of low level abilities and how they might work is a lot harder than I thought.

Here's something: Limelight.

It took a moment, but name's really growing on me. I like it. I also like the idea of how one might keep the light effect going is by drinking a lot of milk (http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Limelight).

Including Limelight, I've got three abilities in mind:

Limelight - character can emit light from any point of his/her body
Level ??? (don't know which level this can be classified as)

Lost Time Memory - character can induce another character into a state of dreaming (http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/N,N-Dimethyltryptamine) for a minute or so.
Level ??? (same as above)

??? (needs name) - character can keep track one's own hair/nails/saliva up to a certain radius.
Level ??? (same as above)

I tried to think a little outside the box since low level abilities can't be "too useful", though they may be a bit... off. I'm open to suggestions of other low-level abilities if anyone wants to share something cool up their sleeve, but so far this is what I've got.

SmokinFerret88

2015-05-07, 07:24

Please do. Thinking of low level abilities and how they might work is a lot harder than I thought.

A problem most of us folk who write in the Toaru universe suffer from. Doing that for the Dark-side of Academy City?

God have mercy on my poor soul, cause I've got a lot of OC's I need to start makin'.

It took a moment, but name's really growing on me. I like it. I also like the idea of how one might keep the light effect going is by drinking a lot of milk (http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Limelight).

Including Limelight, I've got three abilities in mind:

I tried to think a little outside the box since low level abilities can't be "too useful", though they may be a bit... off. I'm open to suggestions of other low-level abilities if anyone wants to share something cool up their sleeve, but so far this is what I've got.

Bring it.

Limelight - character can emit light from any point of his/her body
Level ??? (don't know which level this can be classified as)

I'd say...maybe Lvl 2 if we're being generous. I'd say that when producing this effect it primarily is done where the entire body lights up and it only lasts for say eight seconds at most. Think of it more like a longer-lasting flash grenade than an actual strobe-light. Nevertheless, still useful, though not useful enough to warrant higher levels.

Lost Time Memory - character can induce another character into a state of dreaming (http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/N,N-Dimethyltryptamine) for a minute or so.
Level ??? (same as above)

Is this like a trance? As in, like, putting someone in the state of 'lights are on, nobody's home' kinda deal? If so, not too shabby, and I'd put it as maybe...Lvl 3. I say that because I can see this person going the same route as Measure Heart from SCHOOL; the closer she was to someone, the stronger her ability was.

Seriously, I can totally see that person being one of the bigger fish in this whole '0 Hunting' thing you mentioned earlier.

??? (needs name) - character can keep track one's own hair/nails/saliva up to a certain radius.
Level ??? (same as above)

And there's the really obscure one that I never would have thought of. This one's a definitely Lvl 2, mainly due to its inconvenience and the fact that Academy City has already created nano-machines that can do a tracking job much easier and more discreetly than this person could. It helps that range doesn't apply to the nano-devices either, provided the person doesn't know about them and dispatches them appropriately.

As for name, I'm having a hard time coming up with anything myself. About the closest thing I can think of for a name for it is Bio-Tagger and even that makes me cringe. I'll get back to you if I come up with something better, but for now that's all I've got.

Hope this stuff helps you in some way or another.

LevelSeven

2015-05-07, 07:31

Please do. Thinking of low level abilities and how they might work is a lot harder than I thought.
i have a rather unusual but strong ability:

Forced REM (FREM): user can force the brain to create melanin to a hugh extend until the victim falls asleep, but not more, the victim needs to be in sight of the user (and at most 30 meters away) and the victim needs to be seen for a whole amount of 3 seconds,
but if it is correctly used it can cause the victim to fall asleep for at least 6 hours and at most for 8 hours :)

the esper is a lvl2 :D
Limelight - character can emit light from any point of his/her body
Level ??? (don't know which level this can be classified as)

it depends on the amount of birghtness:
as much as a torch: lvl 1
as much as a flashlight: lvl2
as much as headlights: lvl3
as much as the sun(at max): lvl4
as much as a gamma ray (at max): lvl5
Lost Time Memory - character can induce another character into a state of dreaming (http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/N,N-Dimethyltryptamine) for a minute or so.
Level ??? (same as above)
letting them sleep or makign them see dream-like illusions?
either way, how far can he go away before being unable to use it and how many victims can eh affect at a time?
??? (needs name) - character can keep track one's own hair/nails/saliva up to a certain radius.
Level ??? (same as above)
the same quesitom: how far the range?
either way, i dont see him higher than lvl3, afterall he needs a medium for his powers and the range is limtied :/
I tried to think a little outside the box since low level abilities can't be "too useful", though they may be a bit... off. I'm open to suggestions of other low-level abilities if anyone wants to share something cool up their sleeve, but so far this is what I've got.
another one:

platform-emission: it is pretty much like ichigos first stage of fullbring where he has a shield out of energy and he was able to throw it:
the esper has a diameter of 1 meter for his shield, the shield in itself is like vibranium, it can absorb kinetic energy :D
and he can throw it for 9 meters, the speed depends on the users lvl, by a normal throw he is by lvl2, with increased speed of 100km/h he is lvl3 and etc etc :D

rubix22

2015-05-07, 11:27

@levelseven There a problem with limitations here. That is... I haven't decided what these people are going to do with these powers in the story yet, so I have no idea how what limits I should go after. I'm honestly thinking of leaving those vague for now... but I wonder if it's too much of a Deus ex machina to arbitraryly suddenly say a character can't do something...

@Smokinferrot If not "Biotagger" how does "Bioseeker" sound?

SmokinFerret88

2015-05-07, 11:46

@Smokinferret: If not "Biotagger" how does "Bioseeker" sound?

That sounds much better than half-assed name I could conjure up at the time.

allfictions

2015-05-07, 11:58

So I finally got off my ass (and the finals being almost over kinda helped), so I tried to write a little something for a planned crossover. It is pretty obvious what Toaru is crossed over with, but anyway, I need a little help: what I have written (a letter to be exact) is more like an introduction than a proper snippet, but I would really appreciate some feedback on how it sounds, if it sounds official at all, if it isn't too awkward, if it isn't too long, etc.

Don't hold back.
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9 July, 20XX

Dear Reverend Mother Stridberg,

Academy City would like to formally invite you and your school to participate in Academy City’s annual Worldwide Exchange Student Program. It is my pleasure to inform you that your academy has been randomly selected from a pool of thousands of applicants from all over the world, inside and outside our usual international network, which consists of over 120 partner cooperatives worldwide. As such, Academy City usually welcomes and accepts exchange students from its partner schools only, but seeing the outstanding reputation of Reien Girl's Academy and its academic ranking among the top five schools in Japan, abrogate that rule in this particular case was the logical solution.

Both in terms of vision and breadth of available scientific and technological assets (frequently said to be 30 years more advanced than anything else in the world), there is no other science center quite like Academy City. Ever since the implementation of our renowned psychic Power Curriculum Program, we've experienced a high level of interest from many parties. Given that we are a ‘City of Schools’ that is world-renowned for its educational mission, we are pleased by the response, as the attention drives the world even more towards the pursuit of scientific and academic knowledge, our utmost goal.

To that end, we have launched five years ago the City’s Worldwide Exchange Student Program: a randomly selected group of students from Academy City goes to places all over the world in groups of about twenty people in various cities while an equivalent number of children from all over the world are invited to Academy City. The goal of the program is to directly and positively inform students from all over the world and to teach them about the different emerging technologies, cutting-edge developments, and innovative researches there are in our city. Through this outreach program, and in other ways, we are actively seeking collaboration and support to maximize substantive interactions with external business, educational, and government organizations.

This year’s Program will last for one week from 3 September to 10 September. As observers, your students will have the opportunity to meet espers and learn more about the Power Curriculum Program, to learn how PPC-complementary education courses are organized in Academy City, to get to visit a city where cutting-edge science is applied to daily life and to have fun. All local expenses (accommodation, collective transportation, meal, etc.) will be covered by the City. The City being aware of the exclusive all-girls institution Reien’s view of men-women interactions, the twenty students will be lodged at Academy City’s School Garden, in School District 7, an area males are not allowed in, for the lenght of their stay to put your mind at ease.

(You will find attached to this letter a flyer introducing and describing in details School Garden that we hope you will disseminate to your students and/or parents.)

I hope that you will please consider letting your students participate in this program, as a field trip to Academy City can complement and reinforce your school curriculum beneficially while also providing an ideal way to encourage students to have fun while learning. Such an agreement will, hopefully, provide pathways in the future for collaboration between our city and students from Reien Girl's Academy that continue from year to year.

For the exchange students, the mandatory Introduction Day is on September 3, in order to help make the transition to School Garden as easy as possible. The Introduction Day starts at School District 23 Terminal Station in the morning at 10.00 am.

Our website (www. academy-city.com/international/exchange-students) can inform you of the services and accommodations we offer. If you have any questions, please do not hesitate to contact us.

We wish you all the best for a productive and rewarding WESP experience.

Kind regards
Kaizumi Tsugutoshi, Academy City Board of Directors
Academy City of Science and Technology

agetreme

2015-05-07, 13:13

I tried to think a little outside the box since low level abilities can't be "too useful", though they may be a bit... off. I'm open to suggestions of other low-level abilities if anyone wants to share something cool up their sleeve, but so far this is what I've got.

I prefer to go with the theme of [useless] (which is technically what Level 2 and 1 ability) are.

Level 1: Bug Puppeteer
Manipulate one insect.

Level 1: Empathy
Able to feel the same emotion as the Esper's target...

Level 1: Color Perception
Change colors on things... by altering the light wave that would have bounce off certain object. In a sense: low level version of that Esper who can control light.

Sticky Hand
Generate adhesive force that enable Esper to...
Level 1: Make things stuck onto him/herself
Level 2: Stick one thing on to another....similar to a magnet, the moment Esper move away, things fall apart.

Level 2: Dream Ranker :heh:
Ability to read dream (brainwave during REM stage) and record it on special devices....Could have been level 3 if the Esper could at least read normal brainwave.

Level 3: Force Multiplier
Double Kinetic force of object (that Esper apply power on).

rubix22

2015-05-07, 14:24

^Oh god. Those Level 1 powers. Those poor, poor people. http://i.imgur.com/2fjv1JG.jpg

@afflictions Sounds official. Plenty of fluff from what I'd expect from an invitational letter (e-mail?). Don't see anything too wrong with it except that the hyperlink doesn't work. Directs me to a japanese 404 site.

LevelSeven

2015-05-07, 14:35

^Oh god. Those Level 1 powers. Those poor, poor people. http://i.imgur.com/2fjv1JG.jpg
still better than being a Lvl0 :heh: at least with the excpetion of shiage and komaba XD

agetreme

2015-05-07, 20:20

Actually under the right hand....

Level 1 Empathy can be a very useful skill for the Manipulative.

Edit: Oh yeah, I forgot...level 1 Adhesive force is based on stories about people who can stick things on their body without it falling through their "power"...

Second Edit: Bug Puppeteer can manipulate one insect....as in controlling the Insect like RC car (as in literally, controlling them via Radio wave). Something along the line of Electromagnetic pest control. Power don't work when Electromaster are around (their AIM field affect the Esper's power)

still better than being a Lvl0 :heh: at least with the excpetion of shiage and komaba XD

Actually not much better (if you add up all the Pro and Con) because they are sandwiched between Level 0 (trash) and Level 3 (elite). Especially the Level 1.... their power is close to useless after all.

Skill-out(Level 0) bully them because they are Esper and easy targets (useless power).

Elitist Level 3 look down upon them because they are not part of the Elite. (Especially people from school like Tokiwadai)

Everybody laugh at them (if their power is really goddamn useless). Well, you already had seen how people would react.:heh:

Also due to parameter list: Some of them are not even going to get their power develop which means they are going to be stuck in that level.

So it was something like:

"yay! I am a Esper who can change color of objects....."

*pause upon realization how useless the power actually is*

orz

"Better than level 0..."

*Skill-out appear*

"Crap...."

rubix22

2015-05-07, 21:07

*puts thinking cap on*

Actually, those abilities aren't totally useless. There's no reason why color perception can't work on one's own body. So that person can become a human chameleon if you will. Bug puppeteer-ing can be useful if you're controlling the "right" bug. Say attacking someone with queen bee and her posse.

As for sticky hand, god help him.

EDIT: Anyone have any "name suggestions"? I think I've got the main cast down, but just need a few names for extras that appear. Also suggestions for what the title of this fic would be nice if anyone has something in mind... In any case, I hope this project goes well. The framework is simple and probably not as epic as they topic should be, but this is more of my style. I won't be working on this until after I finish that oneshot of a AU highschool deliquent Academy City I might have mentioned before on this site, but I'll definitely return to it.

What does it mean…?

A dry sound emitted. It was the sound of something being dragged.

What does it mean… to be labeled “zero”…?

A long steel pipe. Half covered in rust. A trail followed as it scraped against dirt and rock.

Is it “weakness”? “Inferiority”?

A girl in a sailor uniform sat on her knees. She was breathing slowly. Drinking air as if it were molasses.

Or is it… something else… something a “zero” couldn’t understand…

The pipe drew nearer. The sound grew louder.

What could a “zero” understand… Afterall, a “zero” is a “zero”…

Her eyes were blank. Glazed over with horror. She did not even blink at the person standing before her.

And in the end… it means “nothing”.

Raised to the air. The pipe came down.

Thud.

agetreme

2015-05-08, 10:23

Actually, those abilities aren't totally useless. There's no reason why color perception can't work on one's own body. So that person can become a human chameleon if you will. Bug puppeteer-ing can be useful if you're controlling the "right" bug. Say attacking someone with queen bee and her posse.

As for sticky hand, god help him.

He could be a Spiderman.....climbing buildings. Just pray that Esper's stamina last long enough.

With Great Power Come Great Responsibility....

I am planning to make this a joke in my story. Low Level Esper trying to be a hero because of it. Hiro was inspired because his ability is similar to Spider Sense.

[RESISTANCE]
A group fighting against AC and Darkside of Academy City. Consist of different people and group. At the very worst, they are terrorist with access to same level technology and equipment as Dark-Side.

This organization only existed in [ANOTHER] because AC allowed them to. Manipulating their devotion for Justice to take down Organization from Dark-Side that pose threat to AC.

[DAWN]
A Esper group consist of Three members. Existed only in [ANOTHER]. Part of the [RESISTANCE].

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Name: Hiroji Naru
Behind-name: Hiro Ni(alternate reading of Ji in her name) Naru (To be Hero)

Her defining trait: Heroic and hot-blooded like Gunha...only without guts and prefer....less honorable method of taking down her enemies (through tricky and bluff).

Also I am trying to make her opposite of Touma.... Her ability require her to Create an Illusion (that her power actually did something) and she wanted to be hero and actively jumping into dangerous situation to help others.

Level 1 Supernatural Phenomena [Paranoia]:
As a gag, the Esper give her ability many names.
Her ability does nothing..... other than generating AIM field, this AIM field make people feel uneasy. If you don't know about this fact about her power...the uneasy can turn into full blown paranoia (hence her title).

It felt like something is there but you don't know what is there. The sensation worse than what Mikoto experienced.

When combined with another Esper`(preferbly one who can create an illusion) the overall effect is powerful enough to trigger some form of nocebo effect where people actually get hurt by imaginary being because it felt too real.

The nocebo effect is how the Esper is able to take most people san Accelerator(once he activate his auto-reflect....the AIM sensation stop affecting him) and machines(no fear).

Her true level is actually 0 but her examiners got paranoid delusion from her power and placed her at level 1. In their defense, she does registered as having very faint AIM field :heh:

Due to Parameter list of the original world, her ability never get developed so she is really level 0 in that world.

Name: Tokiomi Ayumi
Behind-name: Toki(Y)omi...literally, Time Reading. Ayumi (step). The whole idea: She is basically executing/reading the code called time line by line (Stepping)
Level 4 Teleporter
Level 5 Time Control (Chrono-hand)

One defining trait of Ayumi is lack of motivation which seemed to translated to laziness. She attending school when she feels like it.... do her system scan halfheartedly.

She speak slowly....because of her AIM slow down her time but you don't really want to hear her speaking in normal speed (that means her power has just warmed up/finished calculation for activating her "Time-freeze")

She may appear to be an air-head at times, get distracted by minor things(in her defense: It's Academy City, you get Electromaster versus Vending machine, a guy getting bitten by a girl....Hard not to miss those considering that your time move slower than normal people).

But in reality, she is a honor student....Straight Aces. (Expected, considering that even though nobody knew about her power, she is still a Level 5 and trying to do the same calculation for her power would drive a mathematician insane).

Ironically, for an Esper who can control time, due to her AIM, she is never on time and is always late for school.

Despite of having overwhelming ability..... she is not much of a fighter (also because it would mostly be one-sided anyway). Without her ability, she can just forget about fighting and start running which she is surprisingly good at.

In term of Physical ability, her punch is weak but her stamina is really good and she is actually fitter than Misaki despite of skipping PE (because she chase after her bus every morning).

The reason for her lack of motivation is due to the death of her friend (by a Kihara trying to "awake" her power through the traumatic event...the said Kihara succeeded but is pretty much dead. Unable to move from the death...(Her time is frozen). Forever feeling a sense of guilt for unable to save her friend. The desire to protect her friend is what make her dangerous...

She only get into action because of her friends. If it wasn't for them, she would be gladly rotting away in her own dorm and became a Hikikomori.....which is exactly her fate in the original world.

Because her belief that time traveling is impossible...it became her mental block that prevented her from trying to do so.

In term of combat based purely on power/ability, in theory, she is actually more powerful when going full power than Accelerator at full power....but this is only based on the assumption that she can get the upper hand(managed to finish her calculation faster than Accelerator can kill her).

In practice, Accelerator will always strike first because his calculation is easier than hers(hence, faster). Unless she strike first, there is absolutely no chance for her to win against Number 1 if he is out for her blood

When place in the list of level 5, she is actually 7th place....because unlike Gunha:
Time-Traveling is theoretically possible though it may be impossible at the moment but that never stop people from trying.

Edit: I forgot to mention: Her AIM hinted that she don't just have the ability to slow/stop time (speed up her time), she has the ability to accelerate time (slowing down her time...may be time travel to the future?)...but she is unaware of that. AIM is An Involuntary Movement after all.

Name: Enji Nia
Epithet: Over-tech Engineer
Level 0
Although she has no power like the other two, she is good with making high-tech gadgets and tools for other Member of the [Resistance]. Also she drive a Mecha....enough said.

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[ANOTHER] AC's advantage over Alesiter Clowely is: It is just a Machine.... Nobody would suspect a thing. Not to mention... It is a machine that could make jokes (most project under it has ironic name) and mistake (the latter people just assumed that it was deliberate....Machine can't make that kind of mistake after all).

Edit:
How Power Level works in [ANOTHER].
Level 5: AC wanted to learn (To achieve higher power)
Level 4: Directors on the Board interested to learn (To develop the Military)
Level 3: Company are interested to learn (to develop household equipment like those Psychic toys)
Level 2: Academic interest. (Weird ability are interesting to investigate)
Level 1: School interested...as in to advance the power to level 2 (Touma and Motoharu is actually Level 1 in this new Power System)
Level 0: Zero interest. Except for few organization who wanted to find out how to make Esper out of them.

EDIT: Anyone have any "name suggestions"? I think I've got the main cast down, but just need a few names for extras that appear. Also suggestions for what the title of this fic would be nice if anyone has something in mind... In any case, I hope this project goes well. The framework is simple and probably not as epic as they topic should be, but this is more of my style. I won't be working on this until after I finish that oneshot of a AU highschool deliquent Academy City I might have mentioned before on this site, but I'll definitely return to it.

males: (insert a japanese Syllabary)-Taro

Females: (Japanese word)-Ko

Unless the Extra play an important role, I think any random name would do.

As for the title of your story... is there a summary of it?

LevelSeven

2015-05-08, 11:47

I have a question:

Was there ever a fic where the toaru verse had the same magic system as mahouka?

Because i think this could become really interesting, but instead of esper unable to use i want to make it a magic that can ONLY be used after having a PR, doesnt matter if it is lvl0 or 5,

There are specialized magicians (like a expert for a certain field) but no "mahouka-superpowers",

Btw, there is no ancient magic, this "new" system can only be used with CAD's and it isnt a shortcut for the normal Rituals since they are nonsense,

And, there is natural psion which cant be absorbed by the body BUT used by high-lvl magicians in order to increase the effect of their spells, of course the psion regenarates slowly so that only 3-4 spells get a boost (of course if the magician moves to another place there will be psion again, or he waits until the natural-psion came back :)

Twi

2015-05-08, 14:05

Huh... I don't there is. Shame, because that sounds interesting.

Draco Spirit

2015-05-08, 16:59

EDIT: Anyone have any "name suggestions"? I think I've got the main cast down, but just need a few names for extras that appear. Also suggestions for what the title of this fic would be nice if anyone has something in mind... In any case, I hope this project goes well. The framework is simple and probably not as epic as they topic should be, but this is more of my style. I won't be working on this until after I finish that oneshot of a AU highschool deliquent Academy City I might have mentioned before on this site, but I'll definitely return to it.

Baby name generators are your friends. They have origins and meanings too... handy if you want a name that relates to the character somehow.

agetreme

2015-05-09, 13:30

``Critical Failure's personality: Esper overly optimistic for somebody with that level of bad luck....
There is something called Gambler Fallacy which the Esper clearly subscribe to.

"It's like striking a lottery! The more I loses, the higher chance of me winning!"

Also:

"I am not dead yet, therefore I am the luckiest person ever alive!

That is hard to argue against. Though like I mentioned before: He is so unlucky that he survived in one piece only for the sole purpose of suffering.

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Yoshinaga Megumi
Level 0 Absolute Luck (Selector)
A mysterious Esper-like power that can affect phase of the world resulting in Supernatural level of luck.

However there is no such thing as a free lunch, somebody had to paid for it....usually people around her. Winning lottery may appear to be good luck but in reality this also means that somebody had to lose for the Winner to collect their prize.

Her active power may bring good luck but her passive ability(AIM) bring bad luck. The latter bring her much angst in life.....

How would other feel.... when you are the one benefited while everybody around you suffered? The treatment is probably going to be worse than Touma's.

Personality-wise, she appear to be the peerless beauty type who is good at everything that she do. Born from a rich family, she is on the naive side (not having experienced a single hardship in her life), her family only benefited more from her luck. (she is one of the top 1%). She radiate grace and elegance.

By having Critical Failure and her within certain area would result in a maelstrom of disaster (usually happening behind her).

Her family is one of the investors of of Academy City which is why the most of the Academy City factions avoid her. Her power is also proven to be highly unstable (compared to Critical Failure whose result is obvious). Messing with her could end up triggering her power subconsciously, resulting in very bad thing happening.

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Another/Backup Protagonist just in case I could not come up with something good with my original idea.

Kasetsu
In term of personality, he is Mad Scientist type acting similar to Okabe. Overly dramatic.

Half of the things that he invented work as intended but.... he have no idea how it work, making it useless in progressing things in the name of science that he always declared to do.

Like a certain evil machine from a certain game. He love experiment and doing experiment for the sake of experiment.

He tried to made a time-machine but that did not work out well and ended up in [ANOTHER] Academy City.

Also explain how Enji Nia have access to over-technology.

Second edit: (don't want to double post...)
Level 2: Ability Strengthening (Exp Booster)
This ability would slowly improve ESper's ability to a point where they would level up (term of RPG... it give them EXP every few minutes until they level up). Obviously the lower your level, the faster you would level up but for level 5, it can only increase their output....because there is no enough data on level 6 to develop level 5 to 6.

Few drawbacks to this power: It is rather slow process (EXP gain slowly afterall) and the range is very limited (need body contact).

Another reason for this is because it involve modifying Personal Reality which in turn would have an effect on Esper's psychologically....which means that the Esper could easily put the other Espers under her control.

Such convenient ability doesn't exist in Original Universe due to various reason
1. Parameter List which means this ability is never developed in the first place.
2. Even if it exist, experiments done to the Esper would end up killing the Esper.

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Level ?? Presence Erase (Blind-spot/Invisible Stalker):
Jokingly refer as Level 5. This Esper has the ability to complete erase his presence. Nobody would notice him and even if people saw him, people would just ignore him (they saw him but he is not important enough to remember)....as if he doesn't exist at all.

Unlike Dummy Check: He could not erase memory of having seen....if anybody see him, they would remember seeing something but have no detail of what they saw (probably attribute it to visual illusion or ghost).

There is no information on his ability and level because he never done a system test (he attended but the Researchers ignored/skipped him).

The Gag about this Esper is that because the Esper looked so generic and Nondescript, that even Robots can't recognized him because even facial recognition would fail.

In term of personality: The Esper had a crush on Saten Ruiko... he stalk her every day and constantly proclaim that one day he would confess his love for her... (however this usually set event flag for failure). Let just say that he never did manage to confess his love and even if he did.... it is doomed to fail anyway (Saten don't know him).

To twist the knife further: He is actually Ruiko's classmate.

fourth edit:
Psionic = Psi(Esper ability) + Electronic (methods to access those ability)
Magician Name are Psion's username in [OTHER], of course they contain numbers. And it is also the name they used to interact with others.

I just need to iron out the details of Psionics.....

Itherael

2015-05-10, 10:47

The AUTO Arc had begun! Finally, Touma joins a certain organization and realizes that he is way more screwed than he thinks.
http://i.imgur.com/jxowptW.jpg
Don't ya think?

RPG_Fanatic

2015-05-10, 15:31

The AUTO Arc had begun! Finally, Touma joins a certain organization and realizes that he is way more screwed than he thinks.

Don't ya think?

Yes, a new chapter. I could feel the misfortune when Touma walked into the room and saw who was there. Great job as always. I look forward to seeing how the AUTO arc plays out, as well as more amusing interactions with his new teammates.

Yu Ominae

2015-05-11, 04:29

Continuing on from here (https://forums.animesuki.com/showpost.php?p=5514865&postcount=7155'), it'll probably be the last time I try to do some rendition of the invasion arc. Next one will be at best on the Daihasei University attack.

Apologies if this seems a bit short or something... Maybe I can throw these down in some place as notes.

PS - I don't know if Vento's attack can take out Mugino's attacks. I'm just trying to write it out based on the former's abilities with Wind Hammer.

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The last thing Frenda remembered before she went down was feeling drowsy and loosing her footing when she declared her intent to beat up on Vento of the Front.

"Frenda!" Rikuo shouted after she saw Frenda faint.

"Takitsubo! Get her out of here!" Shizuri gave her instructions to the black-haired girl. "We'll take care of this!"

"O-okay!" Rikuo placed Frenda's right arm around her shoulder and slowly began to retreat from the streets in order to get Frenda and herself to safety.

"What do we do?" The mask-wearing assassin whispered to his partner. He was worried that they're getting trouble with ITEM mercenaries, but also someone who claims to be an agent for the Vatican in Rome.

"A very good question." The balaclava-wearing assassin replied. He stared at Shizuri and Saiai, who were also unsure on how to deal with the situation.

"This is super bad." Saiai murmured to Shizuri. "Which one should we take on here?"

Shizuri glared at Vento and at the two assassins. They were obviously a big threat to the city, the latter being unnoticed by the Board of Directors until now due to their covert actions in masking their presence. This time however, ITEM was able to get the drop of them after they got surveillance images of a Hound Dog team taken out at the Julian's Restaurant, being their last deployed area.

Hmmm... That is a good question. Shizuri eyed Vento, who was smirking at her while she got her Wind Hammer ready for action.

But I got these two here who got spotted on surveillance cameras, though the operators didn't report back. Oh well...

"Let's divide ourselves, Saiai." Shizuri told her second-in-command. "I'll take on this gaijin here, you handle the assassins."

"Super okay with that." Saiai replied with enthusiasm as she prepared to take on the assassins.

Shizuri, on the other hand, was already preparing for battle against Vento herself.

Shutaura and Josh led the way for Touma and Last Order to get to the Judgement office, specifically the 177th branch office, as mentioned by the former.

"We'll go ahead and scout the block." Shutaura gave her instructions to the two of them. "Once we secure the area, you two run to the block up ahead."

"Okay." As much as Touma didn't like the idea of letting the ex-Black Crow Unit operatives go ahead, he had to admit that he can't clearly take on enemies who have easy access to small arms.

The black-haired woman went first, immediately running to the other side of the street as the local Judgement office was right in front of her. She took cover behind a parked white Nissan Crew sedan and crouched behind the engine block to give her some cover in case of a firefight. Josh went up next and took cover behind a parked white Toyota Alphard minivan. They both took aim at the street behind Touma and Last Order as they ran down the road together.

But after Last Order got on the sidewalk that led to the 177th branch office, a couple of Touaregs arrived with the blue and red LED grille lights on.

"Hound Dogs!" Josh shouted as he fired his HK416 A5 at one of the Touaregs, putting bullet holes on the SUV's doors, engine blocks and a couple of its tires. He also managed to take down a Hound Dog commando.

"I thought these guys were suppose to have ballistic plates!" Shutaura said out loud when she opened fire at the other Touareg. She did the same thing by disabling the other SUV while taking down a couple of Hound Dog commandos.

"They probably didn't have enough time to get them equipped!"

"Go! Get out of here!" Josh then shouted to Touma and Last Order. "We'll cover you!"

Touma went to make a run for it as he went up the stairs towards the office.

Saiai prepared herself to face off the assassins as they drew out their Hidden Blades.

"You guys must be either super brave or super dumb to even face me with those weapons." Saiai mocked them when she noted that they didn't have any other weapons with them.

The two assassins ran towards the ITEM agent, not doing anything except to charge her head-on.

"As I thought..." The hooded girl murmured. "These guys are super dumb indeed."

She got ready to use Offense Armor again as she went for a boxing pose, having trained to do unarmed combat in close quarters.

Except she got the surprise of her life when she saw them aim their Hidden Guns, seen on their left arms. They appear to have two gun barrels each, with the bore made for a large rifle caliber round.

"Go!" The balaclava-clad assassin shouted to his partner.

The two assassins immediately opened fire when they at arm's length, hitting Saiai's nitrogen barrier from her left and right. Their Hidden Guns reloaded again automatically before they fired again at her in the same spot.

"Dammit!" Saiai felt the brunt of the Hidden Guns hitting her barrier, knocking her down on the ground. She was also dazed by the force of the bullets after she was knocked down.

"Saiai!"

Shizuri noted that despite Saiai's use of Offense Armor, the assassins were able to close in and knock her out for the time being.

This made her do double time with her attacks on Vento.

"Is that the best you can do?!" Vento taunted Shizuri when she used Wind Hammer to intercept her beam attacks.

What the? The Meltdown saw that her beam attacks were taken out when the Vatican agent used the trajectory of the air from her weapon in order to weaken them.

"You're in my way!!" Shizuri continued to fire her beams. But Vento kept moving and used Wind Hammer to disperse the beams away from her.

"Like I said...!" Vento shouted before she swung the hammer towards the ITEM agent's chest. "You're not doing your best!"

"AAAUGH!" Shizuri coughed up blood after she got hit by the hammer, sending her down onto the ground.

The assassins nodded to each other and fled from the area, knowing that they have bigger priorities than to just face her.

Touma and Last Order were now walking up the stairs that took them to the second floor of the building, which held Judgement's 177th branch office. The doors leading to said office were opened up, with a couple of high school students with Judgement armbands confronting the two with kendo shinais.

"Who are you?!" The brown-haired high school girl shouted at Touma, pointing the shinai at her.

"You need to tell her that we're being chased by armed men, says Misaka while getting worried that the girl would attack Touma." Last Order got scared and hid behind Touma.

"Don't hurt that Troglodyte!" A familiar brown-haired girl with ponytails and the uniform of Tokiwadai came from behind the brown-high girl. "He's someone my onee-sama knows."

"You mean, Misaka's friend?" The high school girl lowered her shinai and bowed. "My apologies. We thought that you were some gangster trying to take advantage of what's happening tonight. I'm Aomi Yanagisako."

"I'm Touma Kamijou and this is..." Touma introduced himself first and was about to introduce Last Order when he thought about doing so, since Judgement doesn't know that she's a product of a black ops experiment carried out by the city.

"You must be onee-sama's sister." Kuroko was way too happy to see Last Order, thinking that she was a biological relative of Misaka.

"Kuroko..." Aomi advised her junior. "Get these two inside. We don't know what's happening outside."

Kuroko then got serious. "A-all right." She ushered Touma and Last Order inside when they heard automatic gunfire again after it was quiet for a few seconds.

Inside the office, Touma saw a black-haired girl with glasses tending to a young student wearing the uniform of Sakugawa Middle School with a artificial flower headband. She appears to be out cold and lying down on an empty sofa. Kuroko came beside her and whispered to her about Touma's arrival with Last Order.

"What happened to her?" Touma asked after he got inside the office.

"My friend got unconscious while we watched the emergency broadcast about the presence of some intruder..."

"Hey, Konori." Aomi went to see the glasses-wearing student. "How Uiharu doing?"

"Not good." The student known as Mii Konori shook her head. "I can't seem to tell why Uiharu went unconscious all of a sudden. She seemed fine a while ago."

Konori placed her left index and middle fingers on her neck to check for signs of a pulse, even if it's faint. "She's still okay. It looks like she's still breathing, except that she's not going to respond to anything if what the report mentioned from the Force is correct."

"Is... is the police even still active with all of those armed men around?!" Touma shouted to Konori when Aomi and Kuroko went to give Last Order some food and water.

"I don't think so, Touma-san." Konori said without any sign of fear. "Last report I got before HQ got disconnected was that most of the officers on duty were incapacitated. Even half of Anti-Skill was taken out when news of an intruder came around."

Shutaura and Josh retreated to the steps going to the Judgement office after they wiped out the second wave of Hound Dog commandos. They had already reloaded their assault rifles when they arrived outside.

"Touma!" She pounded on the door. "You need to move with her right away! We overheard some radio transmissions that the Hound Dogs are deployed more reinforcements here!"

The door was opened up by Touma himself when he heard the news.

"Dammit! They're so persistent." This news worried the black-haired student.

"But where do we go then, say Misaka when she heard the lady say that we need to move." Last Order asked the two freelancers.

"Best thing is to move away from this Judgement office. Even though they don't want to make themselves public if they riddled an office like this with their weapons, we still got other groups to worry about." Josh advised to Touma and Last Order. He then eyed the Judgement officers inside. "Ladies, I'm afraid that you need to stay inside. This isn't your fight right now..."

Shutaura led Touma and Last Order towards another area of the floor, where they would use the fire escape to get out of the building via alley.

Inside the Windowless Building in the 7th District, a white-haired person was seen floating upside down in his chambers. The single glass cylinder was the only thing inside the room with various wiring and cables connected to the person's body.

It seems that the reports I got on the Assassins involved aside from God's Right Seat are true then. Aleister Crowley looked at his database, reading up on reports from GROUP, ITEM, MEMBER and from the Hound Dogs with regards to the unknown individuals with white hoods since they were previously seen conducting vigilante actions throughout Academy City.

It just like back in the days when they tried to interrupt the meetings between the Templars and the Hermeticists alike when I wasn't in this room. Aleister could still remember those days when he always survived the raids from the Assassins by always running away when he had the chance to do so.

Their white hoods, hidden weapons and their combat prowess. Those were the things that made Aleister fear them so much back in the early 20th century.

But with him in charge of Academy City, he had the backing of the groups from the city's underworld who report to him and the Board of Directors with some of the most advanced technology the city has produced, it was easy enough for him to observe and assess their capabilities and see what he needs to do next. But not only he needs to be careful from being killed by the Assassins, but also from the Templars since they were getting suspicious of him from the day he created the city-state in regards to his ambiguous plans, which was in contrast to the Templars' plans for a New World Order.

Even if those Assassins have changed their objectives, they can't be hopeful to get away from UNDER_LINE.

Aleister had a smirk on his face.

As long as the Hound Dogs keep putting them in a corner, they'll have no choice but to keep running. He should have things played out in the end when he secures Last Order.

LevelSeven

2015-05-12, 12:27

agetreme

2015-05-12, 12:34

Academy City.... The bastion of Science and technology. People came in with hope and dream but not all of them found what they need....or even be alive by the end of it. There are shadow lurking behind the light of the city, dark secrets hidden away from common folks, dangerous secret that once known would literally kills.

Unless you have a reason to do so, only a fool would engage in the darkness...Nothing good will ever come out of it.

If you plan to live a long life, stay away from them. Such is the advice I would give to those who wanted to play hero.

For those who just wanted to make this place a better place... Good luck, it would never work.

Struggle as much as you want but such Abyss would not magically vanish. The Abyss is mere manifestation of the Darkness that lies within humans' heart. Greed, Anger, hate...etc.

But... at the very least you tried. So long as you tried, the light will never vanish.... actions would inspire others and others would inspire others.

It may be wishful thinking but I believe although the Dark Side will never disappear but at least it would be tad bit brighter.

Trying my hand out at Private Eye Monologue. I wanted to try to make the protagonist to give off a Hardboiled Detective feel (as if he is from Noir genre).

Even though he is kind of in the wrong genre....Too many wacky stuff on the Light-side.

Loremaster

2015-05-14, 05:57

It's been a while due to life issues, but I've finally got the next chapter out for A Certain Descensional Railgun.

Hope you guys enjoy chapter five, Critical.
https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11100318/5/A-Certain-Descensional-Railgun

tsunade666

2015-05-14, 07:40

well, i posted the idea of toaru with mahouka magic, but now i have a question: which fictional magic system from manga/anime/LN would be interesting to see in toaru?
i have already named mahouka:
2. fairy tail
3. devil fruits
4. zanpakuto
5. chakra system
6. nen
7. jojos bizarre adventures: stand

-_- pure shounen sh*ts? aside from nen and jojo's. Other are not interesting for me. Well the concept of devil fruit is also good but really? that shounen magic of fairy tail, zanpakuto and chakra are pure shounen sh*ts.

magic system in demonbane
flame characteristic in hitman reborn is interesting
magic in apocalypse alice (pretty handy with music activation)
magic system in legendary heroes and also
kyokai senjou horizon. these capital sins armaments are awesome.
even if flame of recca is shounen manga. its still good. specially with the death/soul turning into flame
asura crying!!!! sacrifice your love for power!!!!
before I would probably say that using life is one big price but after reading unlimited fafnir. I can say. sacrifice memory is much worse than death. specially if you don't remember the one you love and can only "act" that you remember even though your not the same anymore. You sacrifice your memory for knowledge that can "kill" the enemy.
full metal alchemist alchemy system with mix magic and science.

that's what I can think for the time being

but the most compatible probably is still in typemoon.

I also like campione settings where one goes god hunting to become stronger.

EDIT:

Tokyo ravens. Awesome omyouji
strike the blood. use modern smithing to forge weapons to replicate demon exorcising spells or perform miracle. its combine of science and magic too.
nanoha. combine of magic and science and in here. its probably possible for esper to use magic with the assistance of device because the device would do the calculation and the spells are in it. you just powered it up and control it. There won't be drawback aside from how will an esper get mana because he/she is an esper and can't refine life force to turn into mana. But its possible to use pre-existing mana in the air and absorb it into the device and power it for the spell.

The problem with espers is their mind is modified to use a different system or produce AIM than mana so when the brain performs calculation for a spell or actualizing a spell. It backfires and cost damage.

by passing that problem can make an esper use magic.

LevelSeven

2015-05-14, 13:21

-_- pure shounen sh*ts? aside from nen and jojo's. Other are not interesting for me. Well the concept of devil fruit is also good but really? that shounen magic of fairy tail, zanpakuto and chakra are pure shounen sh*ts.
for my defense, they are the only ones which i can remember better than: stuff can be done with that :/
but, yeah, stands and devil fruits are cool, nen is pure awesome-ness :D
flame characteristic in hitman reborn is interesting
yeah, but all they do is to increase some stuff, weaken, strengthen, illusion etc.
they are like a limited version of the (plothole-infected)chakra-system :eyespin:
magic in apocalypse alice (pretty handy with music activation)
can you give me a summary about their magic system? the wiki doesnt say much(or anything at all) :(
magic system in legendary heroes and also
the ones with the super-eyes?
yeah, it is a cool one, i didnt rad the LN but i watched the anime, from what i understood it is a pretty generic magic system, magic power -> saying stuff/making movements -> magic effect, or is it more complicated?
kyokai senjou horizon.these capital sins armaments are awesome.
but i dont want this "ritual" stuff, the reason why i used this "common" "magic" systems was because they dont have rituals and spells etc.
something magical but not to "common" :/
even if flame of recca is shounen manga. its still good. specially with the death/soul turning into flame
nah, i dont want to mess with this "soul" stuff, it doesnt go well with esper powers (afterall, i think the "real" reason why esper cant use magic in the first palce is because their very soul was transformed/altered and what was once mana turned into AIM),
so, using soul-stuff is a bit....:eyespin:
magic system in demonbane
asura crying!!!! sacrifice your love for power!!!!
arent they using gaint mechas?
i always thought that they dont fit in toaru but since i saw the current accel-plot i will mostlikely think about the possibbility, maybe i will include aquarion(-evol) too :/
full metal alchemist alchemy system with mix magic and science.
i always liked the alchemist-magic, it is cool to have the "sacrifice"-thing,
but on its own it is a pretty meh-system, maybe in combination with more systems :)

but the most compatible probably is still in typemoon.
i need to read myself more into the story before using it, as far as i understood they have something like a PR too right?
I also like campione settings where one goes god hunting to become stronger.
the anime wasnt really good bhut i understood the basics,
being champione -> killing gods -> gaining their powers? (the powers are also pretty messed up),
if i would need to have a "fighting and becoming stronger" type of system i would take the one from doulou dalu :D
Tokyo ravens. Awesome omyouji
while i liked the anime i dont like exorcism in this story,
(but the barrier-spells are good), or exorcism in general, this is why i didnt like bleach at first but got around it after seeing how little exorcism-stuff they actually had :D
strike the blood. use modern smithing to forge weapons to replicate demon exorcising spells or perform miracle. its combine of science and magic too.
i only saw the anime, and i liked it, but the "familiar"-summons of the MC are like the stand power of jojo :( and most of the chars are fighting like that right?
nanoha. combine of magic and science and in here. its probably possible for esper to use magic with the assistance of device because the device would do the calculation and the spells are in it. you just powered it up and control it.
i visited the wiki and i need to say that i really like the magic system they have, but the setting could easily be the same as with mahouka :/ both rely on devices which make their abilitys even possible...

but, thanks, some of the suggestions gave me a idea:
"why complicated if there is a easy way"?
=> bringing not only one but man different magic systems into toaru, would be cool to have a many different kinds of things XD

tsunade666

2015-05-14, 16:25

I like the system in hitman reborn when one of the guardians combine different flame. For offensive to defensive to combining different effects. its rather interesting thing.

the system magic in apocalypse alice is simple. You go to dungeon and go farm magic. Pretty easy right? the thing is while touma goes saves girls and save thousands. Apocalypse alice go kills girls to save thousands. The magic obtain in the dungeon varies in difficulty but I like one magic of the mc which is flash magic. Its like the world world spell or accel spell of kiritsugu. The mc moves fast. faster than light. the moves last in an instant but its a flash within a flash within a flash. You move inside the micro seconds. There is also maximum usage if I'm not mistaken and probably cooldown to not overexert the body.

as for the legendary heroes. I'm not talking about the eyes. I'm talking about rule fragments itself. broken items. The anime shown where the MC is collecting them but the 2nd part of the story shows when those items are being into use. Example of it is one of the king sacrifice a part of his body to slaughter an army of thousands. While the hero sacrifice the soul of his mother to kills probably millions :D :D :D :D: :D that euphoria!!!!

the magic in demonbane is deus ex. robots and magic and darn. That special move of that mech will still rings to my ears.

asura crying. sacrifice love for power. 2 ways. either sacrifice the soul of your love one for battery of the burial doll(robot) or sacrifice the memory of your love one to use magic :D awesome!

The thing that makes me like campione is what the authority you can get from the ones you killed/hunt. I would like to hunt Quetzalcoatl to use the same magic of the eastedge in shakuhan no shana. Darn. I don't like the sky (changing views into starry night) that's better. Then start showering meteors on the enemy.

There is more to strike the blood. The anime just get the central focus and let go of the technical focus. Its better because its easier to understand than more jargon thrown into it.

If your incorporating magic and esper. The only thing I can really think of to by pass the initial law of esper can't use magic is use tools or other weapons to wield magic.

rubix22

2015-05-14, 23:13

ERRRAGH!

I give up.

Comedy is hard.

The delinquent comedy fic I've been working on is canceled.

EDIT: I suppose the good thing about this is that now it's okay for me to share my rough draft. You know, since I'll no longer be doing anything with it.

The late-morning sun casted a heavy glow in large rectangular room. The room itself wasn’t too bright, but the concentrated beams of light flooding through the windows somehow made the walls dark by contrast. On one end of the room was the entrance, a large door fit for a person of exceptional power. And on the other side was a steady desk with a few personal items: metal pens that were scattered about, Newton’s cradle in the center, a divergence meter set to the side, and a custom engraved brass nameplate at the forefront.

‘Aleister Crowley’ was etched in black.

“City Academy...”

A tall effeminate-looking man was doing a handstand by the window. His feet peered out into the glass, gazing over territory like a vulture. His dark shadow stretched beyond the confines of the room.

“I founded this school for my own personal research, the goal of higher learning being my drive... my ‘fuel’ if you will.”

Breaking contact with the window, he began pacing with his hands.

“There were those who were courteous enough to join me in my efforts. They were pioneers. Explorers who sought knowledge beyond current human understanding. And they played a part that was essential to expediting the results I sought.

On the other side of the coin, there were those who weren’t so courteous to me. They were ignored and thrown aside like trash.”

Turning around...

“This place has grown. It’s not to the point where I want, but it’s heading towards a direction of progression. Since the time of its establishment to this time right now, it moves with an unstoppable force.”

With a tone that was cut, cold, and crisp, Aleister Crowley addressed the girl standing opposite of himself.

“Transfer Student, after all this time... don’t you think it’s amazing?”

Standing limply was a new character brimming with originality. She replied with a bead of sweat slowly rolling down her cheek.

“A-Ah... yes, it’s amazing...”

The headmaster’s lips curled into a smile.

“I thought so...”

He made a soft chuckle.

“It’s enough to make your hair stand on its ends, does it not?”

The transfer student choked a little bit. And the bead of sweat continued to roll.

“I’ll… I’ll admit, it’s amazing, but…”

The blank-slate girl bit into something that was forbidden to discuss.

“If I may ask… why are you standing upside down?”

“…”

Aleister Crowley stared blankly.

“I see you have a sense of humor. What was your name again? A-ko? That’s right. It was A-ko, was it not?”

“That’s not my name. And please don’t change the subject.”

“Ah, no. I’m not mistaken. I remember the enrollment process perfectly. It was between you, B-ko, and C-ko.”

“Please learn the names of your students…!”

The headmaster ignored the girl.

“Now that everything is settled, there’s someone I’d like to introduce you to.”

“Nothing was settled…! And you still haven’t told me why you’re standing like that…!”

At this time, a loud click rang dully, signifying that the door fit-for-a-person-of-exceptional-power opened.

A-ko instinctively turned her head behind.

Standing there...

A delinquent-like girl with dark-orange pigtails. She did not wear the school uniform as it was desired. Only the skirt and jacket remained on her being, but the jacket was being misused as some sort of cape. Musujime Awaki posed with her arms crossed under her adequately-sized bosom which was covered and held tight by what looked like athletic tape.

“What impeccable timing. We were just talking about you.”

“Is that so.”

It could be assumed that the headmaster and the girl exchanged glances, but that was impossible as Aleister Crowley’s head was not in line of sight.

“Let me introduce you to Musujime Awaki, the former ace of City Academy’s track team. Unfortunately, she had to resign from that position after a freak accident on an amusement park ride, and now she works here as my helper of sorts. She gets motion sick quite easily, so try not to move around too quickly.”

“I’d appreciate it if you didn’t talk about my psychological traumas to other people. Especially while I’m standing in front of you.”

Again, the two sort of exchanged glances.

Aleister Crowley clicked his tongue.

“Would you please be so kind and show our new student around? I’m sure she has a lot to ask.”

[ “I’m still asking. Why are you standing like that?” ]

A-ko’s irrelevant babbling sank into background noise.

“Sure. Whatever. I’ll take care of it.”

“I see you’re enthralled as always… but it’s no matter as long as the job gets done.”

Aleister Crowley coughed.

“While you’re out showing the Transfer Student around, could you stop by the convenience store? I need something sweet.”

“Letting me off school grounds? That’s sure kind of ya.”

“Let’s see… how about Chinsuko?”

“That’s sexual harassment.”

“Then melonpan. It’s been awhile since J.C.*taff represented Shakugan no *hana.”

“Are you asking to get sued?”

“Melonpan it is. And so the discussion is settled.”

[ ”Nothing is settled, damn it…!” ]

Outside the office, A-ko seemed unnerved. She bugged Musujime Awaki’s shoulder.

“M-Musujime… was it? It’s strange, right? With him standing like that?”

“Standing like what?”

Musujime replied without enthusiasm. The two girls were walking down an empty corridor. On one side, several long panes of glass displayed the outside courtyard. The other side held sliding doors that led to other classrooms. The general design of the area was very standard for a typical school shown in a shonen high school delinquent battle manga. Or maybe even a harem romcom with adult elements. That said, it was an average-looking school.

…

Musujime raised her head up from a dull realization.

“Right. If you haven’t gotten a feel for the setting yet, this is alternate universe where magic doesn’t exist and science isn’t as pronounced. Here, Academy City has pretty much turned into a normal school for normal people.”

“Exactly who’s normal...! Who are you even talking to...! That’s not normal-like at all...!”

The former ace shut her eyes with a lazy expression.

“Annoying...”

Crossing her arms behind her head, the girl looked up into nothing.

“Say, giving a tour seems like a lot of effort. Do you mind if I leave you a map and go watch a movie instead? The new *vengers came out awhile ago and everyone’s talking about it. I’m starting to feel a little left out.”

“H-Hey...! Don’t just abandon your duties...! Don’t you think people would find a girl giving a tour by herself suspicious? No, more like it’d be lonely! Please don’t leave me alone in a place I’ve never been to before!”

“But... It’s the *vengers...”

It seemed like redhead was weighing a scale inside her head.

“You can watch it later...! In fact, I’ll watch it with you...! I’ve heard that it’s pretty good! Mr. Whedon did a spectacular job! It’s a flawed movie, but its fun characterizations make up for its flaws...!”

“...”

“Mmm... Fine...”

A-ko breathed a sigh of relief. Having saved herself from a lonely afternoon by herself, she continued on with Musujime’s tour.

…

But the she hadn’t even taken two steps...

When suddenly...!

“…!”

A swift motion.

Grabbing onto A-ko’s collar, Musujime dragged her down to the floor and ducked beneath the side window.

“Eh?-! Wha-?”

“Shut up and stay down!”

A new sense of liveliness was now embedded in Musujime’s eyes. Her careless attitude had disappeared, and in its place was panic. It appeared that the former-ace had sensed something that was beyond A-ko’s understanding.

“Fuck! I should have known this was gonna happen!”

The former ace was visibly sweating. Her mind was slowly wearing down.

“H-Huh? What are you saying...?”

“...”

Musujime tipped her head towards the window with a stern look.

Slowly peeking out at the courtyard...

Sparsely placed trees and flowerbeds decorated an otherwise plain and uneventful patch of land. But within this, there was a clearing of hard barren dirt. Sure enough, three boys stood in the middle of this abstract garden.

And a serious mood stained the air.

“Kamijou Touma.”

Musujime introduced the spiky-haired boy first.

“Also known as ‘The Plague’. Rumors has it that he was able to stand his ground fighting against an experienced Kendo master with nothing but his bare hands. Not only that, but he went unarmed and waged war against 250 delinquents from a Certain Roman Catholic School... and came out standing on top.”

Sounds like a pretty scary guy...

Her attention turned to the next person.

“Accelerator.”

The boy with the modernistic cane cracked his neck.

“The legendary ‘White Devil’. A merciless demon who also holds the same title as City Academy’s strongest delinquent. On record, he’s a pervert who has harassed over ten thousand defenseless middle school girls.”

Eh...! What...! Ten thousand...!

“And...”

The third boy looked over at the two girls excitedly.

Huh? Did he see us?

“...”

Musujime scratched her head.

“Who is that...? I don’t think he goes to school here.”

He fell over.

Standing back up, he had tears streaming down his face.

“END OF THE CENTURY EMPEROR, HAMAZURA SHIAGE! I USED TO LEAD SKILL-OUT, DAMN IT!”

Uwah! His feelings got hurt!

(“What the hell is wrong with you? Keep your fucking voice down.”)

(“There’s no need to yell here.”)

The Emperor was being chastised by the other two.

(“Err, uh, sorry about that.”)

A-ko scooted herself back and spoke to the former ace.

“I don’t really get the situation, but... those three are delinquents, right? Shouldn’t we call a teacher over and stop them?”

“...”

Musujime Awaki let out a breath.

“A-ko... I don’t think you realize the kind of school you’ve enrolled into.”

“My name isn’t A-ko.”

“City Academy is heavily regulated. There are no coincidences and no accidents. The fact that those three were able to meet in such a place means that this meeting was done by design. You can also say that the two of us also hold some sort of role as well.”

A-ko stared blankly.

“...Is that supposed to make sense?”

“...”

…

“In other words...”

Musujime’s eyes turned lifeless.

“It’s a plot hole. If we called a teacher over, nothing interesting would happen, so please just go with the flow and accept the situation; otherwise the author might cry.”

“...Eh?”

“Oh, look. It’s starting now.”

Quickly changing the subject, Musujime popped her head up to watch the scene. And reluctantly, A-ko followed her example.

Out into the courtyard...

…

Three boys were facing one another is a triangular-like formation. A soft breeze blew over the area and the sound of wavering tree branches vibrated in the distance.

Kamijou Touma was the first to speak up.

“The content in today’s A-Lunch set... is curry, isn’t it?”

The wind died down. And an overwhelming silence filled the air.

“...”

…

Accelerator narrowed his eyes before speaking.

“I actually brought my lunch today, so I wouldn’t know.”

…

Hamazura glanced back and forth from Kamijou to Accelerator.

He swallowed nervously.

“I don’t go to school here, so I wouldn’t know either.”

Oi! What’s with this worthless conversation...!

“To tell you the truth... I also brought my lunch.”

Kamijou stated. He raised a bento box with his right hand.

“In any case...”

Just what was that...! An ice breaker...!

The spiky-haired boy scratched the side of his head.

“Usually, I’d like to solve problems without any violence... but it looks like ‘reasoning’ won’t do me any good here.”

Accelerator bared his teeth.

“It’s nice seeing you being more honest with yourself Hero.”

With a small laugh, Accelerator continued.

“And here I thought that you were going to start preaching. The usual bit about how any ideal that doesn’t match your own is shit.”

“...”

A dangerous spark sizzled between the two. A spark that could easily set off an explosion.

...

“...umm, uh.”

In a desire to not become a third wheel of sorts, Hamazura tried to say something impactful as well.

“Hey. Uh. The best and most beautiful things in the world cannot be seen or even touched. They must be felt… with the heart.”

Touching, but not relavent...!

Holding his cane over his shoulder, the white-haired boy sighed.

“It really is a pity...”

His words dripped with sarcasm.

“To think that we’d end up in an impasse... But... You two retards just don’t get it... “

The white-haired boy opened up his arms.

“It’s obvious that Mich*el Keaton had the best on-screen presence.”

“Well... if we were to include the animated series, I’d say K*vin Conroy did it best.”

Kamijou made a valid point.

“Is that what we were discussing...?”

Hamazura scratched his head.

“Oh, uh, I guess... Sean Conn*ry was a pretty good Bond.”

WHY ARE YOU EVEN HERE…!

Briefly, A-ko took a moment to breathe out a sigh; however-

“...”

“...?”

From the corner of her eye, the blank-slate girl noticed something moving from the rooftops. The sun made it hard to see, but a shadow was running alongside the edge of a building.

And suddenly…! It leapt off!

Fast and approaching the three boys… Hamazura was quickly being covered in darkness!

And with only a split-second to notice the enlarging shadow over himself...!

“...!”

CRRRRAAAAACCKKK!

Earth shattered and dust flew up as a small goggle-wearing middle school girl came crashing down.

“Hah?-!”

Hamazura had fallen over backwards just in time from being turned into a watermark. Landing on one knee, the girl had her fist clenched to the ground. She slowly rose up from her stance. And a trickle of dirt spilled from her fingers.

“‘Misaka would like to say, ‘Dynamic entrances make good impressions’,’ Misaka says while making a memorable first appearance.”

Eh...? Who is… this...

Accelerator made an unpleasant face.

“Oi. I don’t remember calling you over.”

“Misaka apologizes...”

As this new girl spoke in monotone, Hamazura quickly crab-walked backwards to put distance between her and himself.

“‘But Misaka would like to change this high school delinquent comedy into a trendy dark action/drama with hip-hop undertones.’”

Don’t make up your own genres...!

“‘Permission granted?’ Misaka asks candidly.”

The Sister took the white-haired boy’s side, and at this... he clicked his tongue.

“Tch. Don’t ask me. I’m not you fucking parent.”

The dropout pushed himself up from the ground. He appeared to be breaking a sweat from this new development.

“W-What’s this now...? Reinforcements...?”

( Imouto: ‘By the way. There’s something wrong with Misaka’s arm,’ says Misaka as she dangles it around. )

( Accelerator: Stop that. It’s disgusting. )

( Imouto: ‘Oka~y,’ says Misaka as she pops it back in the socket. )

The Emperor addressed the boy behind him with a smile. He decided to make the best of the situation.

“Hey Boss. Don’t these numbers seem unfair? Looks like that asshole is teaming up with that middle school girl. How about we join forces and take em’ out together.”

“…”

As he looked behind, he noticed that Kamijou Touma had made a picnic for himself. He was sitting down with a plate of curry in hand.

“What the hell are you doing...! At a time like this even...!”

The spiky-haired boy tilted his head.

“It’s lunchtime.”

“You can wait until later...! Rather, is that the A-1 lunch set you were talking about...! Did you somehow go to the cafeteria while we weren’t looking...! What happened to the bento box you had earlier...!”

( Kamijou: Curry sounded more appetizing… )

“As expected from the Hero. Always one step ahead of the curve.”

Accelerator started chewing on some yakisoba bread.

“You too...!”

The spiky-haired boy took a moment away from his curry to mention to Hamazura:

“Ah, I should probably say that the bread stands around here sell to non-students as well.”

“R-Really...! Now that I think about it, I’m pretty hungry! Where can I find the closest stand?”

The girl with goggles gave some vague directions.

“If you look over there you should be able to see…”

Turning...

“Huh? See what?”

…

Just as Hamazura finished his sentence...

“‘Able to see… YOUR OPPONENT DRAWING FIRST BLOOD,’ says Misaka performing a dropkick to the face.”

SNAP!

The Emperor was face to face with a pair of feet.

…

Time seemed to slow down.

As the girl’s shoes made contact the Hamazura’s skin, ripples formed all across the area of impact. It was not unlike that of throwing a rock into a pond and then watching the generating waves. A low crunch emitted as she went further, digging into him. His feet sluggishly left the ground, and he started flying backwards is an almost swimming-like motion.

All the while...

Momentum was acting on the Sister’s clothes. The sweater vest and shirt that hugged her torso like a clam shell slowly slid up, revealing the smooth contours of her waist. Skin, a healthy rosy color that was soft as a nectarine, appeared in a gap between the fringes of her skirt and the bottom of her blouse. And her skirt, too, was acting accordingly. The pleated cloth wrapping her stalwart thighs traced itself up her lower body. The outline of her hips was becoming more apparent.

Pulling up. Showing more. More and more.

Hamazura’s eyes bulged.

‘C’mon! C’mon! C’mon! C’mon! C’mon!’

His thoughts were begging. He didn’t even care that he was being attacked.

‘Almost.... Almost... Almost theeeere...!’

And then...

…

And then...

Memories surfaced...

“Takitsubou-chan~! Why don’t you, like, super break up with the guy! I mean, like, he’s super creepy!”

“I’m standing right here you know.”

“Hamazura has his good points... He’s not a bad person.”

“Please stop ignoring me.”

“But he’s totally the type that would take the chance to look up a middle schooler’s skirt while being dropkicked! You can super do better than that!”

“He... He wouldn’t do that... Probably...”

…

Hamazura Shiage.

Highest Level of Education: High School (unfinished)

Relationship Status: Has a girlfriend

…

The Hamazura Shiage inside Hamazura’s mind grinned as he looked down at the situation.

‘As if the End of the Century Emperor could be seduced by such a low level attack.’

The boy shut his eyes.

‘It’s my win.’

…

In real time, the girl with goggles ran at Hamazura, jumped up, and dropkicked him in the face sending him flying back. The time it took to do this was just a few seconds.

On the ground, the Emperor was smiling.

Why does he look so satisfied...! What a creep!

“’It is always unwise to look away from your opponent during a fight,’ says Misaka as she gives advice to her hopeless enemy.”

Hamazura scampered back to his feet.

“H-Hey! I wasn’t prepared for that…! That’s hardly fair…!”
The Sister snapped her fingers

“’All is fair in love and war,’ says Misaka demonstrating another rule of life.”

With that… several smoke bombs went off around Hamazura!

“Wha-!”

Clouds formed right before the boy’s eyes, obscuring his vision in a quick and calculated manner. The boy covered his mouth to prevent himself from breathing in too much, but as he started to gather his senses, wires had suddenly entangled around his entire body.

“…!”

Nearby, the inexpressive girl tightened her grip on the line.

“‘Caught you’, says Misaka claiming victory.”

The Sister pulled the wire, squeezing the boy like a netted ham. But something didn’t give.

“‘Caught you’? You took the words right out of my mouth.”

Grabbing the extended piece of wire with a free hand, Hamazura pulled back.

“I may act like I have no idea what’s going on…! But I know that you just made a mistake...!”

Overpowered, the Sister came lunging towards the boy involuntarily. Having reached a distance where she could see the boy clearly, the girl saw him whip his head back.

And then...

CRRRRAAAAACCKKK!

Hamazura’s forehead made contact with the girl’s goggles in a straight on headbutt. Bits of shattered plastic fell to the ground as she staggered backwards. And she then dropped to her knees.

“Nnnn...”

The world spun slightly from disorientation. But before the Sister could get ahold of herself, the boy had already escaped from his constraints.

“It’s over.”

Hamazura stood over her. Even though the boy was technically more injured with his forehead slightly bleeding... this was a fight the Sister could not possibly win.

“...”

…

The girl held onto the ground.

“Mi... Mi...”

Gripping tightly. She threw her arm up.

“‘Misaka won’t give up that easily!’ says Misaka stubbornly.”

And dirt was scattered.

“Shit!”

Having not expected that maneuver, Hamazura was blinded.

…

From the side, the two girls watching from the window could see the dust and smoke slowly start to settle. As the air cleared up, something else became more apparent.

“You...! One trick right after another...!”

“...!”

A-ko reacted to an impressive sight.

“That’s amazing!”

The Sister was now running in circles around Hamazura at a seemingly absurd speed.

“She’s running so fast that she’s creating after images! It’s like there are three of them running around him!”

“Glugbh~!”

Glancing at Musujime, she noticed her complexion starting to pale.

“Are you alright?”

“I... I’ll be fine...”

“...”

A-ko went back to watching the fight.

“‘Ha ha ha! What will you do now?’ says Misaka as she performs her ultimate technique.”

“...!”

The boy looked left and right, but there was no way he could focus. Simply put, there was too much going on around him, not to mention he still needed to rub the soil out of his eyes. At the moment, Hamazura very much felt like he was in a pinch.

“D-Damn it!”

“‘Fweeeeh? Did you finally give up?’ says Misaka as she taunts her prey.”

“Oi.” Accelerator called out to the Sisters in monotone, “Don’t hurt yourself now.”

“That’s absurd! There’s no way Misaka would-”

…!

And missing her step, the Sister’s foot twisted.

Hamazura watched the train wreck of three middle school girls colliding into one another.

You mean they were all real...!

( Imouto: ‘Get off!’ says Misaka as she kicks her feet in the air.)

…

Despite not knowing what exactly was happening, Hamazura tried to use this situation to his advantage. He turned his attention to the white haired boy and dashed forward.

“Right! If I take out the main pillar, the rest should follow!”

Heavy steps quickened in pace as he went in for the charge. He wound back his right fist. And then...!

THHHHOOOOMM!

End. Feel free to leave your impressions.

Draco Spirit

2015-05-15, 05:40

Not to bad actually, through the style of comady would likely work better as small mostly self contained scenes.

LevelSeven

2015-05-15, 12:11

I like the system in hitman reborn when one of the guardians combine different flame. For offensive to defensive to combining different effects. its rather interesting thing.

the system magic in apocalypse alice is simple. You go to dungeon and go farm magic. Pretty easy right? the thing is while touma goes saves girls and save thousands. Apocalypse alice go kills girls to save thousands. The magic obtain in the dungeon varies in difficulty but I like one magic of the mc which is flash magic. Its like the world world spell or accel spell of kiritsugu. The mc moves fast. faster than light. the moves last in an instant but its a flash within a flash within a flash. You move inside the micro seconds. There is also maximum usage if I'm not mistaken and probably cooldown to not overexert the body.

as for the legendary heroes. I'm not talking about the eyes. I'm talking about rule fragments itself. broken items. The anime shown where the MC is collecting them but the 2nd part of the story shows when those items are being into use. Example of it is one of the king sacrifice a part of his body to slaughter an army of thousands. While the hero sacrifice the soul of his mother to kills probably millions :D :D :D :D: :D that euphoria!!!!

the magic in demonbane is deus ex. robots and magic and darn. That special move of that mech will still rings to my ears.

asura crying. sacrifice love for power. 2 ways. either sacrifice the soul of your love one for battery of the burial doll(robot) or sacrifice the memory of your love one to use magic :D awesome!

The thing that makes me like campione is what the authority you can get from the ones you killed/hunt. I would like to hunt Quetzalcoatl to use the same magic of the eastedge in shakuhan no shana. Darn. I don't like the sky (changing views into starry night) that's better. Then start showering meteors on the enemy.

There is more to strike the blood. The anime just get the central focus and let go of the technical focus. Its better because its easier to understand than more jargon thrown into it.
thanks, than i will look which ones fit :)
If your incorporating magic and esper. The only thing I can really think of to by pass the initial law of esper can't use magic is use tools or other weapons to wield magic.
yeahh, i thought about this too, but than i wouldnt see a reason to change the magic system, i would simply limit the magicians until "angel-lvl" was the highest possible lvl, it is still as strong as a whole country but...at least not some kind of loosely-explained-reality-warper :) :heh:

WiliamZ0

2015-05-23, 01:29

I really hope for someone to do Kantai Collection X TAMnI Crossover, maybe with Touma as Admiral :3

SmokinFerret88

2015-05-24, 03:36

You're just saying that because of an a crossover image you saw on Google or something, aren't ya?

.....and there's nothing wrong with that.

Anyway, I'mma bit rusty here, but I have another snippet I'm working on for the intro to the next chapter that's in the works. I'm curious to see what people think of this so I'm hoping my absence from fanfiction hasn't effected my writing abilitys too much.

"Oh come on, how is it that neither of you two are interested in such a unique series like this!?"

This was a typical day, your average sight to behold in a certain high school student's classroom during the course of the lunch period. Motoharu, Aogami, and Touma all lost in small talk with topics that changed periodically. In this instance, the subject was on a specific type of reading material which seemed to have gartered the attention of their resident blue haired classmate.

Unfortunately, the remaining two members of the Delta Force shared his taste in it.

"Nya, if you seen it once you've seen it thousands of times. Doesn't matter how different it looks, it's still the same tune being played on a different instrument."

"But it's not, I'm telling you it's completely different from all those other ones!"

"Does he even do anything with them or are they doing all the work?"

"...kinda?"

"Then there you go, just as Tsuchimikaido said, same tune different instrument."

"You two are hopeless, traitors, frauds, degenerates; especially you Kami-yan!"

Around here was the time that Kamijou actually looked up from his bento, mildly confused at the last quip the blue haired teen had made. Aogami took this as a sign to explain himself, even though Kamijou clearly wasn't all that interested.

"You of all people should understand the importance of a well-established harem! If everyone of them is the same, then it's to be expected that you'll find it to be boring. Verity is important -no it's essential- for a harem to truly succeed in any form regardless of its in 2D or 3D! That's precisely what this has in it, the two of you are too blind to see it and it pisses me off! The clumsy love-struck type, the air-head, the overly protective foreigner, the seductive opportunist, the polite royalty, the gothic with eighth-grader's syndrome, and so much more! It has so much to offer, so many of my fetishes are in this masterpiece and even some of your own in there as well! So explain to me why, just why, are neither of you are even sparing it a second glance!"

Between the two of them, Motoharu beat Touma to the punch in regards to a retort.

"Does it have any maids or bunny-girls in it?"

"Not yet bu-"

"Sorry then there's your answer nya~"

"Kami-yan! Please, as your friend, please give a better reason than this traitor! Surely you have a better reason than that to-"

"It's about monster girls, fresh idea aside it's just not up my alley."

And then came the sound of shattering glass as Touma single handedly shattered the illusion which Aogami seemed to have had of his fellow companions.

To anyone who knows what Aogami is talking about, we can collectively agree that he would most definitely be all over that manga in a heartbeat.

Draco Spirit

2015-05-24, 04:59

Lol, if it's what I'm thinking about, its getting adapted into a Anime this summer right? ;)

Welsh_Dragon

2015-05-25, 18:28

^yes. And I can't wait. Did you see the PV of it yet? We got to hear some(?) of the girls' voices. Not too sure on them though

Hiss13

2015-06-12, 23:40

I am slowly pushing through this fic. I will finish it~
Somehow...

Anyway, here are the previous parts~
Birdy Fic Part 1 (http://forums.animesuki.com/showpost.php?p=4822977&postcount=4671)
Birdy Fic Part 2 (http://forums.animesuki.com/showpost.php?p=4823024&postcount=4673)
Birdy Fic Part 3 (http://forums.animesuki.com/showpost.php?p=4828865&postcount=4858)
Birdy Fic Part 4-5 (http://forums.animesuki.com/showpost.php?p=4854094&postcount=5381)
Birdy Fic Parts 6-7 (http://forums.animesuki.com/showthread.php?p=4938002#post4938002)
Birdy Fic Parts 8-11 (http://forums.animesuki.com/showthread.php?p=5004659#post5004659)
Birdy Fic Part 12 (http://forums.animesuki.com/showpost.php?p=5177201&postcount=6562)

St. George’s Cathedral

The blonde girl walked out of a door on the side of the cathedral near the entrance and shut the door immediately behind her. She walked to the man at the entrance with the gait of a kid who was suffering from heat exhaustion.

As she walked down the aisle of the hall she found the priest in earlier, she looked up and noticed her ‘trustworthy’ subordinate beckoning her over. Her ears were ringing so she had a hard time realizing the fact that he was calling out to her. Her chic piano-like outfit was singed at the edges and cut at many places on the skirt, her stockings were torn, her hair was disheveled, her face was covered in the soot, and a trickle of blood was trailing from her forehead down the center of her face.

“Are you alright, boss? You don’t look like you are feeling too well. I’m surprised that priest was actually able to do this much damage.”

“I’m fine, Mark. The priest, on his own, was no trouble. However, that Saint from the incident with the guy using that armor intervened and decided to make the attempt to capture me. You have no idea how many times the position of the hunter and the hunted switched in there. I was able to shake them off my tail but they could realize what happened and come here any minute now.”

“Are you sure that you are alright, boss? You are being really vague here.”

“Arrghhh…shut it, Mark. My point is this—I have my doubts that Patricia came here.”

“About that…I sent a message to Miss Patricia a while back. She sent this as a reply.”

Mark flashed the phone in front of the disheveled girl who was his boss.

From: Patricia Birdway
To: Mark Space
Sub: Re: Please come back quickly
Body: I cannot, Mark, as I have something to do here. You worry too much. Besides I’m sure------------

“Mark…” Leivinia spoke in a low and authoritative tone. She seemed to have a very thin and annoyed grin while she started into Mark’s eyes. “Why are you covering the last bit with your thumb?”

“Uhh…” Mark made the attempt to avert his eyes.

“Ma~~rk…”

The invisible pressure emanating from Leivinia eventually forced Mark to acquiesce to her and show the full message.

Body: I cannot, Mark, as I have something to do here. You worry too much. Besides I’m sure sis won’t hurt you. I’m fine and I’ll be home…eventually.

“Mark…why is Patricia saying anything about me hurting you?”

“Well…” Mark struggled to grasp for the proper words. However… “Ngh—Boss! What are you doing!?” The wobbly girl grabbed her subordinate by the ear and dragged him out of the cathedral with her.

“We’re going back to Patricia’s room. We likely missed some sort of clue in a rush.”

“You mean that you missed—OW! OW! OW!!! You’re mad, aren’t you, Boss! Damn!”

Despite the pleas of her subordinate, the girl continued back to the car without answering even once.

Sargasso-Tokyo Bay

After a minor incident involving a Segway (which Othinus planned to revive when she finally created a phase that looked like the one that was once her home) crashing and some scolding by a subordinate/friend, a bored Othinus was sitting in the middle of Sargasso, thinking of ways to pass the time.

In the vicinity was Marian, who, after chewing Othinus out earlier, had to wait with her human furniture for the completion of the parallel processor as her own preparations were complete, Hel, who was just sitting there and playing with a flame on her fingertip while waiting like Marian, and Ollerus, who, disguised as Thor, was trying to figure out a way to get as far away from Othinus while attempting to ascertain the base’s location.

Of course, the past few incidents that took place over the course of the day were definitely a driving factor of Ollerus’s desire to get away from Othinus. That was not the main reason, though. The main reason was that he did not want to be caught doing what he came to Sargasso to do. Surely, it was not because he could not stand the annoyances that Othinus seemed to cause in her whimsy. At least, that is what he continued to tell himself.

In the corner of his eyes he could see Othinus sitting deep in thought. One could only wonder how heavily she must have been anticipating the endgame that she had been striving forward to up till now. Ollerus, however, was well aware that she was likely planning her next little stunt. Of course, keeping as far away from the next stunt was not the main reason for him to distance himself from her. Again, that’s what he kept telling himself.

“I got bored at some point—”Othinus began.

There’s a shocker. Each person around her at that moment seemed to simultaneously think this sarcastically.

“…so I borrowed a computer from Bersi and had him connect it to the internet—”

There’s no point in even trying to stop her anymore. Marian moped while rhythmically poking the deck of the ship she was on and her human furniture with her golden saw.

“…and I found out about this video game with an all-female cast where characters who take too much damage become victims of heavy clothing damage—HEY! Why are you guys sneaking away!?” She called out to all of the magicians in the vicinity who were making the attempt to leave without being noticed. After confirming that they had stayed while staring with a(n oddly cute) pout plastered to her face, she continued. “Anyway. As I was saying, I feel like role playing that…in a…ummm…a tournament format. Losers have to walk with all of the clothing damage that they get.”

The others stared in a manner of disbelief mixed with confusion and annoyance leaving an uncomfortable silence.

Marian, who had practically given up at this point, looked at her boss and asked, “How exactly will this work?”

“There’s a spell that can be used to transfer any damage from a person to their clothes.”

Those in the vicinity continued to be baffled as a result of their boss not using her usual ‘infinite possibilities’ excuse.

“So if there’s no objections, let’s all of us go into a battle royale!”

Ollerus simply replied, “One: Why me? Two: Did you not just say this was a tournament? Three: What will you do if your body falls apart due to your infinite possibilities?”

“I am a god. Bend to my whims.” 

“THAT IS THE WORST POSSIBLE ANSWER YOU COULD HAVE GIVEN!!”

“Besides, don’t you have that spell based on the story of Thor disguising himself as Freyja that allows you to take on the appearance of a woman?”

“THAT KIND OF SPELL SHOULD NOT BE USED FOR YOUR CRAZY WHIMSICAL BOUTS OF BOREDOM!”

It was as he was being dragged away by the Magic God with an eyepatch that Ollerus had an epiphany. He had finally realized exactly why Thor was so eager to leave GREMLIN. It was not simply because he disagreed with their methods. It was her. Anyone sane would want to get away from her, the crazy and whimsical god. Realizing this, he simply did the one thing he could do without blowing his cover.

“DAMMIT ALL TO HELL!!”

“Glad to see you getting into the proper spirit, Thor.”

A Certain High School at Lunch Time

Ever since the little incident at the front door of the classroom with Patricia and Index, it seemed the mood had lightened up. While Tsuchimikado’s supposed death still held a bit of the mood, it started to look more and more like a normal day for the students as time went on. Whether that was actually a result of the antics displayed by the younger girls earlier or was just a testament to the resilience these high school students seemed to have was still hard to determine. However, Tsukuyomi Komoe felt a bit relieved to see that her cute students were at least living their lives inhibited, especially the ones closest to him.

After finally getting out of the dogpile with the other two girls and finally getting the class under control after five minutes of loud and boisterous noise coming from what the students likely saw the most one-sided beatdown of the idiot trio (minus Tsuchimikado) to date leaving the two lying in a pile.

Patricia and Index were kneeling over the spiky-haired boy lying half-conscious on the top of the pile while rhythmically poking his face.

“Toumaaaaaa.”

“Are you alright, Mister Kamijou?”

Despite how much he complained to himself about her arrival, Touma really did find Patricia to be a huge breath of fresh air compared to his regular interactions. Rather than stay down, he decided to push himself up to a shaky standing position. “I’m alright Patricia. Just a little winded.”

He looked back down at the unconscious Aogami. “Hey Patricia, help me out here. Just ask him if he’s alright in that same voice while I poke him in the face.” He crouched down over Aogami and started poking his face repeatedly. “Now.”

“Mr. Blue Hair, are you alright?”

At the sound of Patricia’s concerned voice, Aogami’s upper body shot straight into an upright position with his arms up and waving. “Yes, yes, I’m okay Patricia-chaAAAAAH!” In front of him was Touma’s face, covered in the expression of someone who was not amused. In that second, Aogami scooted back into a nearby desk. “DAMMIT, Kami-yan! You just don't fake a guy out with the sweet voice of young girl!"

"I just did, you damn lolicon."

The blue-haired man did not waver at the accusation leveled at him as he stood up. Instead, he merely chuckled. "How many times have I told you that I am not merely a lolicon? I--"

He was interrupted by Kamijou, who stood up at the same time. "You are also a lolicon. I get it, you far-reaching pervert."

Tensions were obviously rising again and another skirmish seemed almost inevitable. However, that all seemed to go away when back door of the classroom was opened loudly to reveal a certain beauty-senpai standing behind it.

As everyone stared at her, she started to speak. "I'm sorry to intrude but I believe I found a certain truant student who needs to get back to his class." She dragged someone over into the space beside her by the collar. It was a familiar head of blond hair. With a quick motion, she tossed him into the room between the two members of the Delta Force in the room.

The head lifted itself to reveal a familiar face with sunglasses. "I guess I'm back nyaaa~." As he got back up on his feet, he could hear a collective gasp from a majority of the people present in the room.

"Why did you gasp, Patricia?" Index, the only person aside from Seria and Touma who did not gasp, asked.

"I did not want to feel left out."

"Is everyone really that surprised to see me, nya~?" He scratched his head before taking two punches to the face and flying back and landing on his stomach.

"That was for drugging me and leaving me in a locker room in the School Garden before disappearing, you asshole!"

"That was for leaving us all of a sudden without a word!"

A bit of silence ensued as Tsuchimikado groaned for a bit.

"Wait, seriously? Nobody is going to say anything about what Kamijou said?" One of the girls in then background asked to no avail.

"Urrgh, that hurt, nya~." Tsuchimikado spoke as he tried to push himself up. As he looked up, though, he could see his two friends kneeling in front of him each of them holding their hand out with grins that showed both relief and happiness at the fact that their friend was alive and well. Despite his outburst, Kamijou was relieved to finally see his friend alive and well again. After all, the last time Kamijous had seen him, Tsuchimikado was practically broken and laying in Kumokawa Seria's apartment.

"Welcome back, Tsuchimikado."

"Welcome back, siscon sergeant."

As he grabbed both of their hands, Kamijou and Aogami pulled their friend back up. "It's good to be back, nya~."

Woot~3 more parts done. I actually finished another part but I figured it would be best to release the next two simultaneously instead of separately.

Still, I'm nearing the end. I actually see the end in sight.

On another note, Part 14 is the last whimsical Othinus bit I'll write for this fic. :eyespin:
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EDIT:
As it turns out, my writing speed suddenly jumped and seeing as I can't double post, I shall update this via edit. Enjoy three more new parts fresh from the keyboard.

Buckingham Palace

The television was blaring in a guest room in the palace as the newscaster was reporting on some stowaways on a high speed passenger jet that had recently departed from London-Heathrow Airport for Academy City. "Beyond the fact that the stowaways are a blonde child and a man in the suit, we have no more information."

On the couch in the guest room was Princess Villian who was drinking tea and watching the news to pass time. Next to her was one of her maids. "It must be quite a slow news day if the only thing on the news is a stowaway on a jet, milady."

"Still, political tensions between Academy City and Britain could form because of a minor incident like this. Even if we were allies during the war, if a British magician sneaks in and causes a problem…"

"Well, I'm sure that boy would probably be able to deal with it if it becomes a problem related to magic, milady."

"I guess so. Still, I wonder if that boy is doing well right now."

Some Street in District 7

"I AM NOT DOING WELL AT ALL!" Kamijou screamed, running with Index and Patricia in tow. However, that was not the main problem. Behind them was a very annoyed and angry Mikoto. However, even she was not the problem. What was the problem was the horde of delinquents (likely Skill Out fodder) that was chasing them throughout the streets of District 7.

"Hey, you idiot, come back here!"

"Hey! STOP RUNNING FROM US, YOU DAMN RICH GIRL!"

Kamijou was definitely certain that he was now in a chase chain with Skill Out at the back and him at the front. He knew that if things did not let up soon, a fourth group by the name of either Anti-Skill or Judgement would eventually show up.

"DAMMIT! SUCH MISFORTUNE!" He screamed as he ran into an alleyway thin enough for him to run into with Patricia and Index.

A Little Earlier at A Certain High School

School had finally been dismissed on this day. Still, that meant that he still had the rest of the day to escort Patricia around since she was his guest. Due to the fact that they had appeared in the classroom in the middle of the day, Komoe had decided to try and get them to stay in the library until the end of the day since trying to send Index home did not fare well the last time she had tried. Luckily, it seemed Patricia was fairly agreeable.

The more Kamijou looked at her, the more he realized how much of a breath of fresh air she was in her life. She was nice, nonviolent, and relatively normal.

With that, however, the school day went by relatively quickly. The stifled atmosphere had finally disappeared as the class fell back into its normal rhythm. All of this really lightened Touma's mood. He felt happy. After all, his life had returned to normal.

Sadly, for the unlucky boy named Kamijou Touma, this happiness was never meant to last. As he had walked out of the gates of the school with Patricia and Index, he was greeted by an all too familiar face. "So, it was true. You…You…YOU…"

Kamijou Touma instinctively stepped back at the sight of the girl in front of him emitting sparks from her bangs. "Calm down, Misaka. I don't know why you're so angry but you're attracting way too much attention. Look, even those delinquents…" Kamijou trailed off when he saw a group of about twenty delinquents walking up to behind Misaka.

"Hey, are you the Tokiwadai bitch who offed a couple of our buddies a couple of days ago?" The one in front with a tattoo on his bare arm that said something about…crushing elites? Kamijou really didn't pay too much attention to the tattoo due to the fact that his sleeve was ripped off, much like Kanzaki's denim jacket. Part of him wanted to question this. However, the rest of him realized that staying here with such a large crowd and an annoyed Misaka was a danger…to everyone except Misaka, at least.

So, he did the first thing he could to protect everyone involved (barring Misaka). He grabbed Patricia and Index and turned tail.

"AH! DON'T LEAVE ME HERE, YOU IDIOT!" Misaka, predictably, turned around and followed.

"Huh? WAIT! DON'T JUST IGNORE US, RICH GIRL!" Of course, the delinquents followed suit.

Murmurs were spreading all over the place amongst the students. "Is it Kamijou again?"

"What did he do this time?"

"There seems to be a Tokiwadai girl involved. Does this have to do with that outburst about the School Garden from earlier?"

Kamijou ignored the harsh words of the student body around him as he ran.

"Mister Kamijou, why are we trying to leave the angry girl behind? Isn't that kind of mean?"

"Touma did something right. He left the short-hair girl behind…" Kamijou could hear Index murmuring while she ran with him.

"Argh. I didn't leave her behind. Knowing Misaka, it's obvious that she would give more priority to chasing after me. In other words, I have to find some way to draw her away from the delinquents before her focus shifts to them and she fries them like she does with all of her problems!"

"But do you have a plan, Mister Kamijou?"

"Funny enough, I feel like I've done this before so I think I have an idea."

Loremaster

2015-06-16, 15:08

Along with my descesional fanfic, there also a rebooted Original Level Five series. This time I hope I will nail that story. Five chapters are out so far and heres the link to beginning. I hope you all enjoy.
https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11115961/1/A-Certain-Original-Level-Five-Book-1-Number-Six-Series

TkMacintosh

2015-06-17, 06:48

So recently (like in the last 12 hours or so), a fanfic I've been following called "Never the Twain Shall Meet" (https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11055427/1/Never-the-Twain-Shall-Meet) finished up and the ending of it....

It was bittersweet. I FINALLY get a decent to good Touma/Saten fic and the ending just makes me feels sad about how it ended.

Don't get me wrong, it's a good fanfic and should at least be given a read through by people. I was so happy with this fanfic, I still am, but the ending just made me feel sad about everything that happened.

There was a tiny bit of hope at the very end, but even then it's a small tiny bit...

tsunade666

2015-06-19, 08:19

If your to re-write NT 10. What would be your ideal scenarios or what will happen?

plus what would be Touma's character?

LevelSeven

2015-06-19, 11:18

If your to re-write NT 10. What would be your ideal scenarios or what will happen?
i would crate a confusing fanfic where the majins will expose themselfes fatally because they rewrote reality so that touma wins his fights...

basically: vs accel, a different fight -> touma loses, ohtinus is killed
next chapter: the normal start of the canon one but the outcome is a defeat again,
...
...
the chapter with the US-president: he doesnt get TnJed, he lets the soldiers kill othinus and beat touma to a nealry dead -> reality warping happens and everything is "ok"...

and after 10(or so) chapters touma loses othinus like in canon but it doesnt get changed because aleister took all the majins powers away and gets one step closer to his goal...

=> end of the fanfic :D

Draco Spirit

2015-07-05, 15:13

So I'm brainstorming for a little fanfic with lots of new Esper character and was wondering how some of these powers and there levels look.

Level 5 - Thermalbody - 'Thermal Queen'

Rule - General control of temperature within a 10 metre radius.

Powers - Lances of heat, multiplication of temperature within ten metres, complete immunity to personal temperature changes by outside forces (she can be set on fire and walk through a winter blizzard with no ill effects), can slowly tear apart matter at close ranges and finally Ironman style flight.

Uiharu the Level 5 version fundamentally. This character will likely end up in more than a few fights over the story with cannon characters. Does she seems like she's on a relative equal footing with Mikoto btw?

Level 4 - Vectorbreaker - 'Unbreakable Doll'

Rule - Can chose if a vector effects her or not.

Powers - Effective invulnerability and perfect defence to most attacks.

I wanted a less aggressive version of Accelerator power that suits a fairly passive character. Getting round it should create a nice fight scene too.

Level 5 Chronoporter - 'Save and Restart'

Rule - Can return there body to a state and location they have previously saved (max 3 saves at once.)

Powers - Limited teleportation and conditional regeneration.

Not true time travel, but personal state time travel. Don't like your haircut, then return to your bedroom you saved this morning with your hair in the same state it was this morning. It's a potent power with the Achilles Heel of saves... so should be fun to work with.

LevelSeven

2015-07-06, 04:46

Does she seems like she's on a relative equal footing with Mikoto btw?

you would need to increase the range of her ability...
10 meters sound more like lvl3 or low-tier-lvl4...
a lvl5's range shouldnt be that easy, i wouldnt give it a definite range, pretty much like mikotos electricity, afterall it doesnt seem like it has a long range but it is still easily above 10 meters :)

and to answer your question: yes, she seems around (or above) mikotos lvl...

btw, how would you imagine a fight scene of two Lvl5 "equal speed"-users?? the only scene is either a fight like ollerus vs othinus (millions of explosions) via light-control or a scene like neo vs mr. smith (superman like) via body control :eyespin:

tsunade666

2015-07-22, 07:37

I'm currently writing my first fic.

is it a good idea to have Touma to die again and again to beat his enemies?

its the same for Othinus.

The enemies are gods but not the magic gods level in index. Its crossover.

Touma died again and again and learn how to beat it.

Is it a good idea?

I want to picture touma to die a countless times in each gruesome way that kamachi shied away.

But if I make him die again and again, I would have problem in the future because its hard to restrict it.

My current restriction is the reset button happens after 12:00 am hits in midnight.

Everything that happens from 12:00:01 AM to 11:59:59 PM can be reset if Touma got himself killed.

I can used this for Touma to learn and cost friction towards others because if he died and the relationship of Touma that he developed on that day would reset.

But my problem is how will Touma limit himself from not abusing it?

Hiss13

2015-07-26, 10:08

I did a thing.

Previous parts:
Birdy Fic Part 1 (http://forums.animesuki.com/showpost.php?p=4822977&postcount=4671)
Birdy Fic Part 2 (http://forums.animesuki.com/showpost.php?p=4823024&postcount=4673)
Birdy Fic Part 3 (http://forums.animesuki.com/showpost.php?p=4828865&postcount=4858)
Birdy Fic Part 4-5 (http://forums.animesuki.com/showpost.php?p=4854094&postcount=5381)
Birdy Fic Parts 6-7 (http://forums.animesuki.com/showthread.php?p=4938002#post4938002)
Birdy Fic Parts 8-11 (http://forums.animesuki.com/showthread.php?p=5004659#post5004659)
Birdy Fic Part 12 (http://forums.animesuki.com/showpost.php?p=5177201&postcount=6562)
Birdy Fic Parts 13-18 (http://forums.animesuki.com/showpost.php?p=5561343&postcount=7221)

I can't believe I can finally say this but just 2-3 parts left until the end~
Then I can finally get to working on other projects...like FiammaXMirror :eyespin:

A Relatively Thin District 7 Alley

The old carrot and stick idea. With Misaka as the carrot, Kamijou had figured out that he could manipulate her into speeding up and slowing down the way he needed her to. As such, he used a simple tactic to make it so that their (well, Misaka's specifically) pursuers would give up without calling for backup. He simply needed to tire them out. By manipulating Misaka into slowing down at times in order to create the illusion that they could catch up to her, he had kept them focused on a goal that they would eventually tire of and give up on.

After zigzagging through alleys in conjunction with using this strategy, the four had finally lost the crowd of delinquents but ended up dead tired as they all started leaning against walls in the alleyway and panting heavily.

"They…finally gave up…" Kamijou sighed as he sat down on the ground.

"Touma…." Index, who was perhaps even more tired, stared at Touma while panting. "You seem….awfully used…to doing things like this."

"He's the type who would rather save delinquents before they end up getting zapped by me." Mikoto responded while pausing to take short breaths. "At least he's done this before for sure, albeit in a bit more varied fashion."

"Save the delinquents?" Patricia asked.

"That sounds like something Touma would do."

"I would not have to do that if you weren't so quick to go biribiri, Misaka."

"You know what. I don't even care any more." Mikoto sighed. "Who's the blonde girl, by the way? She looks familiar."

"Oh, Patricia?" He looked back at her as she gave a wave and a smile. "Remember Birdway? She's her little sister."

"Birdway…Birdway…" Mikoto pondered for a second trying to jog her memory before her face matched her 'Eureka!' moment. "WAIT! You mean that crazy girl who mani--mbdmrmph!?"

Her sudden burst was interrupted by a the hands of a certain spiky-haired boy working to cover her mouth. "Shhhh!" He broke into a whisper. He definitely did not want Patricia to hear this. "I don't think she knows much about her sister's associations so please keep it silent for now."

Mikoto could only nod her head as she started blush, realizing how close Kamijou was to her. But, he paid no mind to the blushing middle school girl as he snuck a look back behind himself to notice that Patricia seemed be standing there with an expression of mild confusion.

"Is there something wrong, Mister Kamijou?" Patricia asked. "Why did you cover her mouth?"

"I don't want to draw the attention of the guys we just lost." Kamijou explained as he removed his hands from the face of the blushing tsundere maiden. "Hearing us speaking loudly may end up reinvigorating them to chase us and frankly, I don't think any of us are in the condition to start running again."

"Well, I don't think staying here in an alleyway will do us any good." Mikoto spoke up while trying to hide her blush. "The best thing to do is find some crowded indoors area."

"That's probably for the best. I can't say I know this area well enough, though. Do you have any ideas where we can go to stay until we're sure that the delinquents have completely given up? Misaka? Index?"

"Touma, I don't think I've been in this area before," the girl with the perfect memory said.

"I see. What about you, Misaka?"

"Well, there's a family restaurant close by which I usually go to with friends."

"Family restaurant?" Index's eyes lit up like a disco ball. "Touma! Let's go there. I'm starving!"

"Index-san, do you see this?" Kamijou pulled out his wallet. "Kamijou-san's wallet is unable to take much more. We can't just go and order copious amounts of fo--"

"If you're worried about money, don't." Mikoto interrupted. "I'll treat you guys. In retrospect, I was the one who dragged…you guys…into…" Her voice slowly tapered off.

"Wait, you're serious, Misaka? Thanks!" He grabbed her hands with his eyes lighting up much like Index's had moments ago. "I owe you one."

Misaka blushed once again, completely forgetting about her statement that she had owed him. "Of course, I mean…." But even then, she tapered off.

"Touma…I'm getting hungry…"

At the sound of Index's complaint, the boy let go of the hands which he was clasping. "Alright, then. Let's get going."

"U-uuuh, right." Mikoto replied while the blush continued to rest on her face.

"Let's go then." Patricia got up and started following with a minor stagger in her gait.

They were heading to the final checkpoint. Once they would reach that location, they would be free from any possible attack by the delinquents. It would just be a few more minutes. So, they stepped and moved forward.

With their first movements, the sounds of rushed footsteps resounded from behind them and then…

Welsh_Dragon

2015-08-11, 14:20

Anyone else having trouble with fanfiction.net? I went there and it's saying there are no ffs for TAMnI or any other series for that matter.

Rising Dragon

2015-08-11, 15:34

The site's having some troubles. It's down for maintenance.

Mr.Kyon

2015-08-13, 01:00

Classic fanfiction.net https://static-cdn.jtvnw.net/jtv_user_pictures/emoticon-4339-src-07433e94eae8754e-28x28.png

...Yeah I definitely have to sit down and write down some dank for the homies in 'ere, for old time's sake. Y'know that classic Kyon shit mang.

Itherael

2015-08-18, 16:22

People don't talk as they used to in this thread but heck. A new chapter has been published. Grand-Theft_AUTO.

http://i.imgur.com/PfLuxef.jpg

And for the badass part:

http://i.imgur.com/ChySVFS.jpg

The To Aru Kagaku no Railgun canon had begun, but with Kamijou Touma's new ROAD of misfortune. Hope you guys enjoy it.

RPG_Fanatic

2015-08-18, 17:35

People don't talk as they used to in this thread but heck. A new chapter has been published. Grand-Theft_AUTO.

The To Aru Kagaku no Railgun canon had begun, but with Kamijou Touma's new ROAD of misfortune. Hope you guys enjoy it.

Oh boy. Well I have started to use the review option recently, so I be sure to let you know what my thought on this chapter are.

The One Above God

2015-08-19, 00:25

tsunade666

2015-08-22, 06:18

Touma with gamer ability? though its more like the name of the ability is outsider ability.

its like the same as gamer but its more of a combination of different game mechanics.

beginning stats

"Kamijou" Touma
Title: The Outsider

Level 1

Str - 1
Vit - 2
Dex - 1
Agi - 2
Int - 1
Wis - 2
Luck - -n^n

Equipment:
Imagine Breaker: Cannot be remove
Negates and corrects world's error

skill:
Destroyer of Red String of Fate: Removes away from fate's manipulation and from other fate
Observe: Ability to see the HP, Mp, level, name and the status of the enemy
Scan: Ability to see the attributes and weakness of the enemy
Structural Analysis: Ability to see and understand inorganic materials. Can see the history of forging, material used and how it was forge, used and its ability and history of the item.
Precognition: Ability to observe keenly the enemy. As the battle goes on, the brain can adapt fast on the enemies attack pattern and find weakness on said move. It allows to easily see through and predict the enemy as the battle goes on.
Fate's Enemy: The universe is actively trying to hinder and hurt you for being an alien to the world
Outsider Stand: The universe will auto correct the world itself. It will try to make the people you interact with to forget you. The only way to make them remember is by a trigger that will make them remember you. The time needed for the universe to made correction is equal to the time you interact with said person.

rubix22

2015-09-07, 14:12

Returning briefly to offer the bite-sized fanfic Super Seven (https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11493140/1/Super-Seven).

Description: When level 5s gather together for a social experiment, what sort of valuable data can be collected?

Image is appropriate.
http://i.imgur.com/tdafieU.jpg

Hiss13

2015-09-07, 21:28

I finally did it. I finally finished it! Sisterly Bonds is FINALLY COMPLETE!!

Previous parts as usual:
Birdy Fic Part 1 (http://forums.animesuki.com/showpost.php?p=4822977&postcount=4671)
Birdy Fic Part 2 (http://forums.animesuki.com/showpost.php?p=4823024&postcount=4673)
Birdy Fic Part 3 (http://forums.animesuki.com/showpost.php?p=4828865&postcount=4858)
Birdy Fic Part 4-5 (http://forums.animesuki.com/showpost.php?p=4854094&postcount=5381)
Birdy Fic Parts 6-7 (http://forums.animesuki.com/showthread.php?p=4938002#post4938002)
Birdy Fic Parts 8-11 (http://forums.animesuki.com/showthread.php?p=5004659#post5004659)
Birdy Fic Part 12 (http://forums.animesuki.com/showpost.php?p=5177201&postcount=6562)
Birdy Fic Parts 13-18 (http://forums.animesuki.com/showpost.php?p=5561343&postcount=7221)
Birdy Fic Parts 19 (http://forums.animesuki.com/showpost.php?p=5604267&postcount=7229)

A Relatively Thin District 7 Alley

Things never go as planned in the end. One minor misstep or one misplaced assumption is all it could take to completely bring a situation to its worst.

In the end, there was one fatal assumption and one troublesome result.

"Ahhh…" Patricia exhaled deeply. She was definitely not in a position where she could move too freely. After all, she had a knife to her neck. It was not exactly a preferable situation for her at all.

Kamijou, Misaka, and Index stared in disbelief at the girl at knifepoint and the assailant who had run up to them from behind, grabbed Patricia, and retreated in the span of two seconds. It was then that Kamijou realized his fatal assumption.

DAMMIT! He hid and snuck around before waiting for the opportune moment! The plan he had made to escape the delinquent group had fallen apart at its very core.

"Now, hand over the Tokiwadai bitch." One look upon the delinquent's face made it obvious that he was livid. "Do that and I will let the girl go." It was at this moment when Touma and Mikoto realized something. The delinquent standing in front of them was the leader of the group that had fallen apart.

"I don't get this…" Mikoto muttered. "I can't pull the knife away. My magnetism isn't working."

"Hehehe…" The delinquent's shoulders bobbed up and down in rhythm with his laugh. "Of course you can't pull the knife away, you damn bitch. This knife is purely made out of animal bone with not a single bit of metal anywhere on it."

Index frowned at the sound of that. She had very vivid memories of a terrorist holding her hostage with the same kind of knife not even a month before. "Touma…" She muttered before looking at the boy and realizing something.

Kamijou Touma was incensed. It was an expression Index was all too familiar with. It was like that time with the alchemist she vaguely remembered due to her dotting in and out of consciousness. It was like that time on the Sky Bus when that terrorist had threatened her and the other passengers.

The anger Touma was exuding was palpable to the point where even Mikoto was completely scared of the boy in her company. Yet, the delinquent seemed to be caught up too much in his seemingly perfect path to victory. "Just hand her over and I will let little blondie here go without a scratch. I think that's a fair deal."

But the prickling anger emanating from Kamijou could only go up in this situation. "Hey, asshole. What the hell do you think you're doing?"

It was at that time the delinquent noticed the anger coming from one of the boy in front of him. "What am I doing? The answer is actually quite simple." The delinquent chuckled. "I'm offering you this little girl's life for the Tokiwadai girl to be brought to me so that we can teach her a lesson."

"What for?" Touma's anger continued to emanate like Mikoto's sparks normally would.

"That damn bitch attacked my entire group! She picked us all off in an instant! These fucking elites like her keep looking down on us so we need to teach her a lesson by dragging her down to our stage!"

"AND THAT WARRANTS TAKING AN INNOCENT GIRL WHO HAS NOTHING TO DO WITH YOUR OWN DAMN TROUBLES HOSTAGE?!" Touma shouted.

The delinquent put is free hand down on Patricia's shoulder. "OF COURSE THAT DOES! WE NEED TO USE WHATEVER MEANS NECESSARY BRING THE ELITES DOWN FROM THEIR HIGH HORSE!" In his fervency, the delinquent took the knife away from Patricia's neck and pointed it at Touma. "WHY CAN'T YOU UNDERSTAND US? YOU'RE A LEVEL ZERO YOURS--"

However, the delinquent could never finish his sentence. In the middle of his rant, a fist made direct contact with his face. "SCREW THAT!"

Touma's anger may have been pent up, but he never once lost sight of his goal: getting Patricia out of harms way. For that, he had to rile up her captor. He had to rile up her captor enough to get him to lift his knife away from Patricia and he finally saw that opportunity.

In that moment, the delinquent lost his grip on his hostage and flew back a few feet. In that moment, Kamijou had freed Patricia from the delinquent's grasp.

"That was fast…" Mikoto and Index muttered simultaneously before running forwards and pulling Patricia back.

"I'm sorry for being caught." Patricia apologized to the group.

"It's not your fault, Patricia." Touma spoke with his back still turned to the girl. He turned his head at a right angle and looked towards Patricia behind him with a smile. "There is no need for you to apologize Patricia."

"Touma, behind you!" Index shouted in a panic.

Touma turned his head back to the delinquent only to see that he had gotten back up with a stumble and was charging towards Touma with the knife in hand. His posture was crude and unrefined. He was full of openings. At this point, the delinquent was merely doing the equivalent of swinging around a sword with no semblance of tactics.

He would stab each one of these fuckers for screwing with him. That was the only thing on his mind as he charged forward and attempted to jab the knife into Kamijou's face.

Mikoto's hand shot up in instinct as she readied herself to shoot a lightning spear at the delinquent before he could reach Kamijou. But it was impossible. The boy she wanted to protect would take the blow if she did it and there may be some chance he would be unable to negate it.

But it did not matter. The knife never hit its target.

Kamijou Touma had taken a quick side step away from his assailant and used his left hand to lightly knock the arm with the knife away. At that moment, he clenched his fist. "If you really can't stand you and your friends being stomped on..."

Patricia was no longer in danger so Kamijou had no reason to be angry anymore. "…then go gain power so you can protect."

With that, he drove his fist upwards into the delinquent's chin. It was a simple uppercut that knocked the delinquent up. "That way you don't have to ever try and drag anyone else down."

He had seen it before. Whether or not that delinquent would take his advice was debatable. But he could still do it. He could still gain that power to protect. After all, others had done it far before him.

With those final words, the delinquent finally fell back, losing consciousness.

A Certain District Seven Street

The sun was setting. Mikoto had split off from Kamijou after the incident in the alleyway and was sitting on a bench at a bus station as she waited for a bus that would take her to her dormitory.

I couldn't even help him. She was annoyed. No…in the first place, I'm the one who got him into this scuffle. This mess was my fault from the beginning.

"I'm the one who keeps telling him to rely on me for once and here I am bringing trouble to him without even being able to resolve it." She grabbed at the end of her skirt and clenched her fists tightly. "What the hell am I even doing?"

The path in front of her was vast. Yet, she continued to try and chase after that boy. But no matter how far she chased she could never stand by his side. She was always a step behind. For the girl who wanted to simply stand by that boy's side so that he would be willing to rely on her the same way she relied on him, it was a horrible feeling. Yet, all she could do was grit and bear.

A Certain District Seven Park

"I'm sorry you had to deal with that, Patricia!" Kamijou Touma was giving a deep bow to the blonde girl who was sitting on the park bench next to the nun. In the end, she had gotten into a hostage situation due to his negligence despite how nice the girl had been to him the whole time.

Patricia, flustered by the boy's apology spoke out. "N-N-No, it's alright, Mister Kamijou. Really, it's alright." Patricia calmed down as the boy raised his head. "It's not like anybody got really badly hurt."

"Even so…"

"Really, I'm okay."

"Touma…if she insists she's okay, then she's fine." Index pouted.

"Is that so?" Touma scratched his head a bit and looked up. "Well, as long as you feel fine." He said before sitting next to Patricia.

"Besides, I got what I came here for." Patricia smiled as she got up and stood where Kamijou had stood before. In the end, she had seen all that she had needed to see. She understood enough about the boy named Kamijou Touma who her sister had become infatuated with. She understood exactly why her sister had become infatuated with him. In the end, she was satisfied with that.

"Mister Kamijou," she spoke. "I know my sister tends to give off an air of maturity but she's still can be quite the child. She can be immature, bratty, and rash at times."

"That seems oddly negative for a list of qualities." Touma mused aloud.

"I guess…" Patricia smiled while showing a hint of embarrassment. "My sister always said that you need to be able to take care of yourself before you can worry about others." As she started to shift her topic, her embarrassment faded away. At the same time, an air of maturity seemed to come from the girl. It was not the sense of confidence her sister emitted but something else entirely. "But, even so, I still worry about her. I've been working hard so I can get to that position where I can take care of myself and worry about her but I can't help worrying about her. She is my sister after all.

"That's why I want to ask you. I know my sister can be quite mature but she can still need support at times. Do you think you can look after her even when Mark and I can't?"

In the end, it was obvious where her maturity came from. Touma could see the girl with an ingrained sisterly bond. It was a simple, yet warm feeling.

So, he got up and walked to the girl before putting a hand on top of her head. "You can count on me and Index for that." He said with a big smile.

Patricia looked back at him and then to Index who was smiling and nodding in the back. "Thanks, you two."

"Now then, we should probably get back to my dorm. It's getting late so I assume you're going to stay over tonight." Kamijou said as he took his hand off the girl's head.

"Actually, I--" Patricia cut herself off at the sound of a familiar voice in the background.

"Miss Patricia! We finally found you!" As she turned around, she could see Mark running up to her with Leivinia coming a few feet behind. Mark came up and stopped near Patricia. However, Leivinia came up to her sister and began patting her down while asking questions.

"Are you alright, Patricia? You aren't hurt anywhere, are you?" Anyone who knew this girl in her professional setting would find Leivinia's actions oddly out of character.

"Geez, sis. I'm fine. Really. Mister Kamijou took good care of me. Besides, you look like you're more hurt than I am."

"That's good." Leivinia sighed. "Come on, Patricia. I spent a lot of effort trying to find you. Let's head back home to London."

"You have a plane booked for the return trip, sis?"

"No, but I have my ways." Leivinia said as a dark smile appeared on her face.

"Alright. Let's head out, then. I got what I came for." Patricia said before turning around towards Kamijou again. "Thanks again, Mister Kamijou."

"It's no problem, Patricia." Kamijou said.

At that moment, Leivinia also turned around. "You know, Kamijou. I…" Leivinia paused. She was ready to berate him. She was ready to say some harsh words to the boy she viewed as an older brother, but she realized something. Now was not the time. "Thank you for taking care of my sister."

"It was no problem." Kamijou smiled.

Leivinia turned around towards the others. "Now come one, Patricia, Mark. Let's head off."

"Alright, sis." Patricia said, turning around to see Mark nodding before going.

After a minute, Index walked up to Touma. "Hey, Touma. Are you alright with leaving it like this?"

"Yeah. I'm fine with that." Touma crossed his arms as he looked towards the sisters. "There's no point in bothering those two sisters."

"That is just like you, Touma." Index sighed. "But that's not what I meant. Patricia's belongings are still in your dorm, Touma."

"Eh." At that moment, Touma's moment of serenity stopped as he realized that Patricia might have completely forgotten her belongings. At that moment, he broke into a sprint to chase after the sisters. "WAIT! PATRICIA! YOU FORGOT YOUR STUFF!!"

Index just gave a simple smile as she followed suit.

It's finally complete. My long project is finally complete.

Now, I can finally move onto that FiammaXMirror one shot I promised myself I'd write.

rubix22

2015-09-14, 22:57

For those interested, another chapter of Super Seven (https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11493140/1/Super-Seven).

http://i.imgur.com/NPIJO4C.jpg?1

Hiss13

2015-09-15, 20:51

So, I uploaded he Birdy Fic onto FFN so now you don't have to click on those links to see all the previous parts. All of the parts are now in one convenient package:

Sisterly Bonds (https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11499655/1/Sisterly-Bonds)

There are so few fics involving the Birdway sisters. It makes me sad.

rubix22

2015-09-18, 00:41

Super Seven Chapter 3 (https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11493140/1/Super-Seven) is out.

http://i.imgur.com/GDj2DgB.jpg

TkMacintosh

2015-09-18, 09:00

...Really wish you would've kept the "Kamijou Touma Fanclub" name, but ahh well. Things come and go as they please I suppose.

rubix22

2015-09-18, 15:17

^Even though the 'Kamijou Touma Fanclub' name was discarded, you should know well that it lives forever in our hearts. Never forget.

TkMacintosh

2015-09-19, 08:38

^Even though the 'Kamijou Touma Fanclub' name was discarded, you should know well that it lives forever in our hearts. Never forget.
True True...Though the idea that Accelerator going absolutely livid over the idea that he's part of the "Kamijou Touma Fanclub" is hilarious...mostly because he didn't vote for...or against...the idea of calling the club that.

MShukyDeneuve

2015-09-20, 13:16

NOOOOOOO.....My Kamijou Touma Fan Club.--

And when we even know that Accelerator absolutely will join that Fan Club.--

But the purpose of such fan club really a turned off, poor Mikoto.XD

rubix22

2015-09-21, 23:45

Caving in. Another chapter of Super Seven (https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11493140/1/Super-Seven).

http://i.imgur.com/SMIqUxa.jpg

Hiss13

2015-09-26, 10:03

A while back, I had put a small list of some fanfic ideas onto the thread. Now, I'm taking one of them and making it a reality. Sadly, it's not FiammaXMirror, though I do plan to do that after this.

For now, see if you can guess which one this is.

(Despite how zany the idea was, the actual thing is already starting off a bit serious.)

Kamijou Touma could feel the late-November chill that raced across his body as he walked down the street. Unlike normal situations, he did not have the jacket for his school uniform on. He was simply dressed in his normal sweater, pants and sneakers. After all, the one he had used on that day had been thrown around and damaged so many times in one day that it was a wonder why he was still using it.

It was not like he could switch out of that outfit though. He had just been discharged from the hospital after recovering from injuries mostly caused by Silvia and Othinus.

Even though he had been in the hospital, he ended up finding a way to keep Index satisfied at home with a method involving Maika, some leftover soumen, and huge containers. The details were not necessary since such a method would likely not work a second time.

Since his method would not succeed again, Kamijou figured that it was a good idea to head to the supermarket to pick up some ingredients so he could cook for Index and Othinus. He made sure to check that his wallet was in place before heading to the door.

However, fate conspired to keep him from entering the supermarket. "Hey, is that Kamijou Touma I see?"

Kamijou turned his head around to see the face of a familiar girl in a flashy maid outfit a few meters away making her way to him. "Yeah! It is you!"

"You're…Kumokawa Maria, right?" He said while trying to recall her.

"You sound unsure."

"Well, to be fair, we have not talked much." Kamijou said, scratching his head. "In the end, I really don't know much about you beyond the fact that you're a maid-in-training like Maika and that you are that beauty-senpai's younger sister…"

"Being known only for who I'm connected to and not who I am…" Maria muttered. "I right feel my pride taking blows."

"…That and I'm more focused on the fact that Index is going to be clamoring for food now that I got discharged from the hospital." Kamijou said, ignoring the maid's utterance.

"Ah, that's right. You got heavily injured from that incident where you were running around Denmark after we split off." Maria said dropping her gaze a bit.

"Hmm…" Kamijou pondered for a bit before he realized why Maria was averting her gaze. "Are you still hung up about what happened to Kiha--"

Kamijou silenced himself at the sudden sensation of the maid placing her index finger on his lips. "There are certain things I would rather not talk about in public with others." She said.

Kamijou nodded, allowing Maria to take her finger off his lips. He was about to speak up but he was unsure what to say.

"If it's alright with you, do you mind if we go to that restaurant nearby?" She pointed to a family restaurant across the street.

"Are you really sure talking in a family restaurant is fine with you?" Kamijou Touma was a bit suspicious. After all, the girl was not willing to talk outside. What made a family restaurant any different?

"If you're worrying about the privacy, don't." She reassured him. "That chain has a method involving specialized invisible walls behind the seats that are used to prevent sound from escaping outside. It allows for quite a bit of privacy."

"Huh…"

"Oh, and if you're worried about the cost, I'll foot the bill." Maria lifted her hand and placed it on her modest chest with a wave of pride exuding from her. "Contrary to the beliefs of certain people, maids aren't impoverished."

tsunade666

2015-09-27, 07:45

Too long to be posted and not yet complete for fanfiction.

https://toacertainlonelyhero.wordpress.com/2015/09/27/vol-1-the-beginning-and-the-end-incomplete/

rubix22

2015-09-30, 15:44

Super Seven Chapter 5 (https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11493140/1/Super-Seven) is out.

http://i.imgur.com/VwQUo2y.jpg

tsunade666

2015-10-01, 09:05

is it possible for zettai karen children and tamni to be crossover using the same universe where academy city and BABEL exist?