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New chapter of 'Minds, Memories, and Misfortune' out. I wrote some of this while marginally sick, so tell me if there's glaring mistakes I missed when I gone back and edited it just then.
Link here: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7049587/6/Minds_Memories_and_Misfortune
!ANGRYSEX! threesome incoming.
blitz1/2
2011-06-30, 21:29
!ANGRYSEX! threesome incoming.
I think he broke again. :heh:
MrTerrorist
2011-06-30, 22:27
Now things get interesting.
faiz blaster
2011-06-30, 22:34
New chapter of 'Minds, Memories, and Misfortune' out. I wrote some of this while marginally sick, so tell me if there's glaring mistakes I missed when I gone back and edited it just then.
Link here: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7049587/6/Minds_Memories_and_Misfortune
I must say that I agree with Aogami and his hopes for a harem ending...:p
tsunade666
2011-07-01, 01:33
New chapter of 'Minds, Memories, and Misfortune' out. I wrote some of this while marginally sick, so tell me if there's glaring mistakes I missed when I gone back and edited it just then.
Link here: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7049587/6/Minds_Memories_and_Misfortune
I had just read it and leave a comment on it. I made me even log in :heh: which I rarely do. Though seriously speaking I didn't expect the ending of that chapter :heh:
This is the story before daihaseisai right? If your planning on doing the daihaseisai then Touam would probably having a hard time to sneak and hide out while tracking Oriana specially in the game where Tsuchimikado and Touma sneak in a middle school battle against Tokiwadai.
Flere821
2011-07-01, 01:57
Thanks for the comments so far, everyone :)
That was an incredible chapter. I loved the standoff between Misaka and Misaki. Is the Dihasey-thingy (however you spell it) going to start soon? Or will it be more drama before that?
This is the story before daihaseisai right? If your planning on doing the daihaseisai then Touam would probably having a hard time to sneak and hide out while tracking Oriana specially in the game where Tsuchimikado and Touma sneak in a middle school battle against Tokiwadai.
I'm planning to get to the Daihasei Festival eventually, there's quite a few chapters before that however. Then I'll skip the events of Vol9-10 and expand on the rest of the festival. I have a few ideas I want to do then, such as a head on clash between Tokiwadai and Touma's school (which resulted in his side being curbstomped) and other things like more relationship troubles, Misaki meeting Touma's parents, things like that ;)
Vol9-10 will be skipped since it'll still be Oriana's defeat by Touma, the Croce di Pietro failing to activate, even with Misaki taking a active role in the story (among other changes which will be written eventually). No point writing all that out. I'll outline any difference worth noting in a chapter right after that timeframe.
tsunade666
2011-07-01, 02:52
if vol 9 and 10 will be skipped. Well I'm also fine on that idea but I think you should at least mentioned that Touma has yet stopped a magician's attack. It's his works and achievements. Even if it's not written in the fic at least a bit of info like styl was around and a magicians attack then Touma stop the day again in between the lines.
I prefer more time for Misaki but hints of the events that occur in the dark side of the city should still be present. Well that's what I believe.
I think he broke again. :heh:
Writer's Block included I hope ;)
Master Assassin
2011-07-01, 10:54
"In short… You. Know. Nothing."
HAHAHAHAHAHAHA! This line is golden, Mr. Flere.
If I was able to read this at work today I think it'll kill all my insecurities of my first day at the job. Heh.
TkMacintosh
2011-07-02, 11:54
Well...I finished writing out chapter 1 in both notebooks and finished typing it in word...now I'm using a fanfiction forum as a test run and a beta, so...it should be up in a few days to a week at the most.
Name of my TAMnI fic? "A Certain Adult Film"
Drifting Wolf
2011-07-02, 11:58
Well...I finished writing out chapter 1 in both notebooks and finished typing it in word...now I'm using a fanfiction forum as a test run and a beta, so...it should be up in a few days to a week at the most.
Name of my TAMnI fic? "A Certain Adult Film"
OOhhh... Too bad I don'y have an account and they are not accepting any new registrations at the moment... so, will there be lemons? :naughty:
TkMacintosh
2011-07-02, 12:02
OOhhh... Too bad I don'y have an account and they are not accepting any new registrations at the moment... so, will there be lemons? :naughty:
Honestly? I'm not sure...I don't think I could do it justice...I don't have a ton of confidence in my skills, so I'm gonna hold off on it...
Kinda funny though that you knew exactly where I'm talking about despite only mentioning part of the forum name :P
Drifting Wolf
2011-07-02, 12:04
It's too obvious for a drifting wolf not to know. I was just passing by, after all. :D Maybe you could ask an author to help you or something, your idea sounds hilarious and oh, so wrong ^^
TkMacintosh
2011-07-02, 12:09
It's too obvious for a drifting wolf not to know. I was just passing by, after all. :D Maybe you could ask an author to help you or something, your idea sounds hilarious and oh, so wrong ^^
I blame Asha'man for leaking it out :P
Drifting Wolf
2011-07-02, 12:11
Hahaha...
I suppose this means Touma is very good with his hands... his right hand in particular? :naughty:
I blame Asha'man for leaking it out :P
Wait, what? What did I leak out?:confused:
Hahaha...
I suppose this means Touma is very good with his hands... his right hand in particular? :naughty:
I've had a theory going on that Imagine Breaker can "break" a "certain feeling", so his left hand would be the trained one.
Drifting Wolf
2011-07-02, 12:19
But isn't that 'certain feeling' a 'break' of sorts? :D
TkMacintosh
2011-07-02, 12:34
Wait, what? What did I leak out?:confused:
You! Go read the snippets I posted. NOW.
Drifting Wolf
2011-07-02, 15:04
Finally decided to read Mind, Memories and Misfortune chapter 6. That was quite a roller-coaster of emotions, if I might say so myself. Awesome work by Flere821, as always. Hopefully, the next chapter comes out soon.
You know, TkMacintosh is a very familiar username, now that I think about it. Where else have I seen it? Looking forward to your fic, by the way. I hear stormwolfex is looking forward to it too. ^^
TkMacintosh
2011-07-02, 15:25
Finally decided to read Mind, Memories and Misfortune chapter 6. That was quite a roller-coaster of emotions, if I might say so myself. Awesome work by Flere821, as always. Hopefully, the next chapter comes out soon.
You know, TkMacintosh is a very familiar username, now that I think about it. Where else have I seen it? Looking forward to your fic, by the way. I hear stormwolfex is looking forward to it too. ^^
....Wait...were you the one that influenced Stormwolfex with the dream fighting scene in chapter 6 of "Of Science and Magics" where dream!Touma asks Mikoto "Do you have the courage...to ride with the devil?" which I had written BEFORE the chapter came out.... The small scene I wrote on Animesuki (http://forums.animesuki.com/showthread.php?p=3580517#post3580517)
Drifting Wolf
2011-07-02, 15:29
Nope. I joined this forum only much later. And I only got to know stormwolfex recently too. I PM him once in a while to ask him about updates and such. Hahaha.
*Ducks away from TkMacintosh's laser sight*
Nope. I joined this forum only much later. And I only got to know stormwolfex recently too. I PM him once in a while to ask him about updates and such. Hahaha.
*Ducks away from TkMacintosh's laser sight*
Is there any word on when his next update will be? From his last author's note I gathered he had some personal things going on so I was wondering.
You! Go read the snippets I posted. NOW.
Hmph, I was going to do that anyway ~Tsun Tsun
Drifting Wolf
2011-07-02, 15:35
I sent him a mail and he said something about going overseas to help him get over some stuffs and his mother dragging him out of his room or something like that. He's back in Singapore and will have an update sometime next week.
TkMacintosh
2011-07-02, 15:39
Nope. I joined this forum only much later. And I only got to know stormwolfex recently too. I PM him once in a while to ask him about updates and such. Hahaha.
*Ducks away from TkMacintosh's laser sight*
Hrmm....right. I'll believe you...for now, but anyway...like I said, I'm working on fixing it up and making it better before I go and post it on ff.net
Hrmm....right. I'll believe you...for now, but anyway...like I said, I'm working on fixing it up and making it better before I go and post it on ff.net
And then the Emperor shall determine the Crack rating.
Drifting Wolf
2011-07-02, 15:53
All hail the Emperor of crack! :D
TkMacintosh
2011-07-02, 15:53
And then the Emperor shall determine the Crack rating.
Can't promise that it'll be great, but I'm working on it.
ellifeedn
2011-07-02, 21:10
How long will it be before he becomes the God of crack?
TkMacintosh
2011-07-02, 22:36
All right...let me get this out of the way now...
I won't be writing the lemon for my story...at least not yet because I don't have a ton of confidence in my skill to do the lemon any justice. Eventually I'll probably write it, but who knows.
Hrmm....why not? I'll give you a quick spoiler from chapter 1 real quick then...
As Touma walked down the street, he stopped when he heard a shriek of fright. Looking to his right down an alleyway, he noticed a large man wrestling a blonde haired woman to the wall, his hands groping anywhere and everywhere they could get to. Without thinking twice, Touma rushed down the alleyway.
“Le-let me go! Please let me go.” The woman begged her attacker. “Please don’t-“
“Shut it woman. You’re going to take it and like it. Or else.” The man said as he held up his hand, a palm sized fireball appearing.
“NOOOOOO!!!” the woman screamed loudly, struggling valiantly against her attacker, trying to escape his tight grip.
“I said shut-“The man began, but never got to finish before a punch struck him in the jaw. Hard.
The attacker staggered back groaning in pain, his jaw throbbing. Turning to look at his attacker, he noticed Touma standing there, his right fist clenched tightly.
“Hey, the lady said no. No means no.” Touma said as he stepped forward, ready to fight if it came down to it.
The attackers’ eyes flashed at Touma before giving a smirk. “That’s a pretty mean right hook you got kid, but you won’t be able to stop me! I’m Hotei Genta, The Fire King!”
Genta held out his hand once more, another fireball appearing, only several times larger than the one that was used to threaten the woman. Throwing it at Touma, Genta just laughed as he watched Touma thrust his hand at the fireball as if trying to stop it in its tracks. The sounds of a mirror shattering filled the air as the fireball was quickly snuffed out of existence revealing Touma standing there completely unharmed.
“If you think that you’re invincible just because of that, then I’ll have to shatter that illusion of yours!” Touma said as he charged Genta once more.
Gentas’ eyes flashed in hear as he tried to back up. “O-oi, what’re you doin-“ Genta began, but never got to finish as Toumas’ fist smashed into his face, breaking his nose and sending the man to the ground unconscious, blood flowing from his nose.
Touma exhaled deeply, after making sure Genta was down for the count before turning to the blond woman. “Are you alri-“Touma said before a fist slammed into the top of his head.
“What the hell did you do that for, idiot?” The woman screamed at him. “You were supposed to take the hit!”
Drifting Wolf
2011-07-03, 09:56
And so misfortune begins :D
And he must lose his virginity for this too. At least his partner is happy. :naughty:
TkMacintosh
2011-07-03, 13:11
New idea that hit me involving a pic...
http://i221.photobucket.com/albums/dd91/TkMacintosh/IndexLagoon.jpg
The sisters decide to go Black Lagoon on some poor sap that threaten their savior...
Breidaluk
2011-07-05, 17:57
so: when "A certain Adult Film" Chapter 1 will be ready? Beverly Seethrough will be the director?
If so then the possibility of mikoto seeing the movie will rise a lot.
Gathered together in one of their old hideouts, this was first time the 4 members GROUP had seen each other since they had investigated DRAGON.
However, there was one additional presense...
"Who the fuck is that bitch?!" Awaki spat. "She looks like that spoilt Railgun brat."
"I'm WORST. And you must be the pervert who likes to molest little boys. I've heard so much about," the youngest but most physically mature Misaka clone grinned mockingly.
Across from her, Awaki snarled.
The five people present were sat in a rough circle, with Misaka WORST clingling to the scowling form of Accelerator.
To the Misaka and Accelerator's left sat a brown haired boy with a pleasant smile on his face. His (fake) name was Unbara, and behind that smile was a dangerous thought.
'She's definately a looker, but there's something not quite the same. She's no Mikoto,' Umbara thought to himself with a sigh, finally realizing that maybe he does like middle school girls.
Finally, to Accelerators right was Tsuchimikado.
"Well, thw Worst bitch, why are you here?" Awaki continued to question.
"Tou-san invited me. Isn't that right, Tou-san?" Worst asked.
"I said you should come, but that you'd better keep your mouth shut, didn't I?" Accelerator growled.
"Tou-san?" Awaki parroted with a deep laugh.
"yes, got a problm with that, paedaphile?"
"No prolem at all, papa sucker."
"Now, now, nya, we have business to attend to," Tsuchimikado
"Fine. What did you call us for anyway?" Accelerator asked. "The Dark side is done with, we have no reason to meet like this."
"That is unexpectedly naive of you, Accelerator," Unabara lightly chastized. "Just because the Scientific Darkside has appeared to cease opporations, doesn't mean that the other side has remained quiet, after all."
"And why should we get involoved at all?" Awaki asked.
"Because, the person banging on the walls has close ties with us, or people who are important to us." Tsuchimikado stated grimly.
"Who?" Unabara asked, leaning forwared slightly in interest.
"Kamijou Touma."
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"T-Touma?" Misaka Mikoto questioned her own eyes. In front of her stood a man who she had thought dead.
However, she could neither feel happy or sad at his appearence, because he stood there not as her friend, or even an aquentence.
He was her enemy.
Tears stung the teenage girls eyes, but still she looked straight on, her gaze never leaving his eyes, which glared back at her.
His fist, the fist that had countlessly blocked all her attacks, but never struck back with, was clenched as tight as it could be.
Was he truly her enemy? Why was he clenching his fist at her? Was she in the wrong somehow? Even if she wasn't, how could she fight against this exisence that not even the number 1 could stand up against?
Full of fear and uncertainty, Mikoto faltered, taking a small step back.
That when enough, the the spiky haired boy turned and walked away.
He didn't run. He didn't look back. He simply walked away, and there was nothing Misaka could do except watch as his back got smaller and smaller in the distance.
-----
"Touma!" the white haired nun cried out in happiness, jumoing through the air.
Weather she was going to hug him or bite him, even she didn't know.
All she could feel was relief and happiness - he was alive, and he'd returned to her.
However, Index was forcibly pulled off of him. This wasn't the result of a third party, but a result of Touma's actions.
Instead, he wrapped his arms around her, tightly.
"Sorry Index, but I'm never coming back here again. Goodbye."
What followed in Index's conciousness was a sharp pain in her head, and then darkness.
-----
In this wide open sapce, there were almost 10,00 people.
The majority of them were girls, and they all shared the exact same face, height, and outfit.
They were the Sisters, and for the first time ever, they had all gathered together.
All faced the same direction, a raised platform. On that area that stood out from the rest stood one boy.
He neither raised his voice nor used a microphone; he merely asked normally, his voice carrying over the absoulte silence of the Sisters, who hung upo his every word.
"Will you fight for me?" he asked.
"YES, Misaka shouts in a show of her absolute belief in the Saviour."
"Alright then, we have work to do," Touma grinned darkly.-----
Well, they are merely snippets. I might expand on the idea at some point
Tsukino Kage Spectre
2011-07-05, 18:53
Too little to tell WTF is going on. It looks like the start of a dark fic.
mark1246
2011-07-05, 20:59
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Well, they are merely snippets. I might expand on the idea at some point
I’ll really want to read a fic like that now! :) , but if you do make this fic can u explain some details to it, it was kinda of confusing at first
Breidaluk
2011-07-05, 22:23
a interesting fanfic. You are discussing the possibility of touma discovering a way to bring aiwass to their world using the misaka network so he can kill her and end everything?
Chaos2Frozen
2011-07-05, 22:58
What a stroke of coincidence; I accidentally found out that To Aru Super SS chap 13 (http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6822682/13/To_Aru_Super_SS) has been updated!
I thought it was weird rubix-san was lurking around here :heh:
sorry about the lurking...
I was wondering whether or not I should promote my own fic...
Since I only come here only once in awhile...
I thought it might be weird to press people into it...
And then...
Well, nevermind...
Please read the chapter. I think it's funny and sweet.
sorry about the lurking...
I was wondering whether or not I should promote my own fic...
Since I only come here only once in awhile...
I thought it might be weird to press people into it...
And then...
Well, nevermind...
Please read the chapter. I think it's funny and sweet.
Indeed it is. Hamazura is such a misfortunate guy ;_;
Breidaluk
2011-07-05, 23:32
WHOA!!!!! Endless Erotic Hell 2!!!
Now, I have to start a spinoff series.
Enter: Endless Erotic Hell: Yaoi Edition.
[Yurikosuzuka dies]
I've promised ToumaxStiyl crack if Teh_Ping translated the Vol 2 Epilogue. I have a ToumaxAccelerator idea brewing in my pot too. Of course, I'll have to do KakinexAccelerator and many other.
KomabaxHamazuraxHanzou anyone? AcquaxHamazura?
If I get the permission from hubby to borrow the namesake >:3
Chaos2Frozen
2011-07-05, 23:48
@rubix
Don't mind don't mind :heh:
WHOA!!!!! Endless Erotic Hell 2!!!
Yes, I feel that I should do something like that once in awhile...
Chaos2Frozen
2011-07-06, 09:24
So... Yeah... For those who don't frequently check FF.net...
Endless Erotic Hell 1 (http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7150432/1/Endless_Erotic_Hell) & 2 (http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7150447/1/Endless_Erotic_Hell_2) are out :)
Index Librorum Prohibitorumis a healthy adolescent girl, she's also a nun-in-training and may some times succumb to certain Cardinal desires... Suggestive Theme Oneshot
Misaka Mikoto is a healthy adolescent girl; she's also a maiden-in-love and may some times succumb to certain rampaging delusions… Suggestive Theme Oneshot
blitz1/2
2011-07-06, 12:03
So... Yeah... For those who don't frequently check FF.net...
Endless Erotic Hell 1 (http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7150432/1/Endless_Erotic_Hell) & 2 (http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7150447/1/Endless_Erotic_Hell_2) are out :)
I think Flere should make something like this as an omake in his fic but with Misaki instead. xD
TkMacintosh
2011-07-06, 20:12
Ahhh....Yare yare....After several weeks of working hard for it...I bring you....
A Certain Adult Film chapter 1 (http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7153462/1/)
I hope you all enjoy it. I got chapter 2 pretty much written out, now I just need to transfer it and tighten it up a little more before I post that...and that'll be at least 2 weeks before that date.
Ahhh....Yare yare....After several weeks of working hard for it...I bring you....
A Certain Adult Film chapter 1 (http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7153462/1/)
I hope you all enjoy it. I got chapter 2 pretty much written out, now I just need to transfer it and tighten it up a little more before I post that...and that'll be at least 2 weeks before that date.
SUCH MISFORTUNE, TOUMA?! :twitch:
Drifting Wolf
2011-07-06, 20:44
Ahhh....Yare yare....After several weeks of working hard for it...I bring you....
A Certain Adult Film chapter 1 (http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7153462/1/)
I hope you all enjoy it. I got chapter 2 pretty much written out, now I just need to transfer it and tighten it up a little more before I post that...and that'll be at least 2 weeks before that date.
This might be dangerous... :naughty:
Shouldn't it be rated M? There is PORN... :heh:
Flere821
2011-07-06, 20:46
I think Flere should make something like this as an omake in his fic but with Misaki instead. xD
hmm... I've got something MUCH better/worse planned for Touma actually; during Daihaseisai I'm thinking of getting him into a punishment game with BOTH Mikoto and Misaki. Much of Mr.Kyon's brand of crack between Awaki and Accelerator will be 'borrowed' here.
Ahhh....Yare yare....After several weeks of working hard for it...I bring you....
A Certain Adult Film chapter 1 (http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7153462/1/)
I hope you all enjoy it. I got chapter 2 pretty much written out, now I just need to transfer it and tighten it up a little more before I post that...and that'll be at least 2 weeks before that date.
Minor thing, Touma is 1st year high school student, not 2nd year.
and 'such misfortune'? What? I'd have thought he'd jump at the chance, considering what his reactions were when Oriana offered him a kiss.
Drifting Wolf
2011-07-06, 20:52
I thought he was more traditional... like 'No sex before marriage?' kinda guy :heh:
TkMacintosh
2011-07-06, 20:55
hmm... I've got something MUCH better/worse planned for Touma actually; during Daihaseisai I'm thinking of getting him into a punishment game with BOTH Mikoto and Misaki. Much of Mr.Kyon's brand of crack between Awaki and Accelerator will be 'borrowed' here.
Minor thing, Touma is 1st year high school student, not 2nd year.
and 'such misfortune'? What? I'd have thought he'd jump at the chance, considering what his reactions were when Oriana offered him a kiss.
It actually says he's a 2nd year student. I said that Saten is a first year.
I thought he was more traditional... like 'No sex before marriage?' kinda guy :heh:
That's kinda what I went for >.>
To all: I apologize if it isn't to your liking, but I'm still trying to work on my fanfiction technique. I took a few years break in between my last couple of stories.
Drifting Wolf
2011-07-06, 21:00
Wait, I just thought of something. The fact that the PI was able to get information on Touma was because Aleister allowed him to. Which means...
ALEISTER CROWLEY WATCHES PORN, I CALLED IT FIRST! :hyper-^v^:
TkMacintosh
2011-07-06, 21:07
Wait, I just thought of something. The fact that the PI was able to get information on Touma was because Aleister allowed him to. Which means...
ALEISTER CROWLEY WATCHES PORN, I CALLED IT FIRST! :hyper-^v^:
....Huh....That'll work as a point for why the PI was allowed to gain the info.
Wait, I just thought of something. The fact that the PI was able to get information on Touma was because Aleister allowed him to. Which means...
ALEISTER CROWLEY WATCHES PORN, I CALLED IT FIRST! :hyper-^v^:
Understatement of the year. Seriously, that's kind to be expected from a depraved bisexual and druggie like Aleister Crowley.
Also, preview from my latest crack. A one-shot.
“Ah~ It sure is cold, isn’t it.” Misaka Worst said those words while stroking her shoulders. She trembled a little, but not too much.
It looked like she was perhaps trying a little too hard.
It the start of Winter in Academy City. Although Last Order had seen much snow in Russia, she had never seen a real snowfall like she saw yesterday. She knew about them from the Network, but it still mesmerized her.
For the two monsters who had dug themselves out of the Darkness, it was all pitifully insignificant. Really, it was just a bother. Even if Yomikawa’s apartment was subsided by a university and its had above-average insulation, that didn’t mean the cold wave couldn’t reach them. Sure, they could crank up the heater, but that would be a waste when they have a perfectly good kotatsu. Plus, money was hard to come in this post-war economy. Little savings are savings nonetheless.
“What the fuck are you doing?” Accelerator frowned under the radiating heat of the kotatsu.
“‘There’s enough place for the three of us.’ says Misaka as Misaka analyses the available room.”
“Ewww, gross.” Worst’s scorn was mainly directed at Accelerator. “Who knows what this closet pervert might do with a fully grown Misaka! Perhaps he has a foot fetish? Hey, Tou-san, are you barefooted right now?”
“Like hell I’d tell you,” Accelerator sneered, head tucked into a pillow laid on the floor.
The non-coy Third Season clone faked a dramatic reveal, striking a mortified pose.
“Y-You’re doing it, aren’t you? You’re playing footsies with the Commander!”
Accelerator’s forehead creased into a million folds. He wasn’t laughing.
“…You're just looking for a fight, aren’t you?” he asked plainly.
Worst grinned widely. “If ‘fight’ is a euphemism for something you want to do with this Misaka?”
“‘Um, what is footsies?’ asks Misaka asks Misaka as she is puzzled by this new term.”
Last Order interrupted, shifting between the two espers.
Worst took it upon herself to explain. In the fashion of a Cool Big Sister character, she went and sat down besides her real Onee-chan.
…Quite ironic.
“Y’see Commander, when a man and a woman love each other very much—”
The albino, sitting opposite of the sisters, clenched his fist.
“—they give each other ‘footjobs’ and—“
CHOP!
In a fatal strike to the head by the almighty Tou-san, Worst’s head kissed the kotatsu’s top and deflated. Her eyes shook and some drools sprayed from her lips.
The winner was decided.
“‘Waaaah! It’s a huge bump! We need ice!’ exclaims Misaka as Misaka runs to the refrigerator!”
“So bothersome…” Accelerator retracted his fist, having prevented a terrible event.
Last Order got up and rushed for the refridgerator in the other room while Worst continued to bathe in her defeat.
Then…
“Ha~!” She jerked her head upward, a glitter in her eyes. “It’s time for my ultimate technique~ Hyaahhhh~!”
At that moment, under the table, Worst’s foot connected with a certain part of him, rather forcefully too.
“…”
“…”
“…Are you done yet?” His faced twitched slightly from pain.
But it wasn’t agony he was feeling. Mild annoyance. That left her completely baffled. Her technique should have thrown him into a torment of pain. The nut-cracker. Bustin’ the ghoulies. Whatever you call it.
It didn’t make any sense.
She gave another push of her feet into his crotch to try to understand.
“…Do you want to get decked?” The albino hissed.
“…What the…”
Misaka Worst, at that moment, understood what was going on.
Under the most deadpan tone her slack jaw allowed her to formulate, she said,
“So, should Misaka call you Kaa-san from now on?”
“Great…” Accelerator rolled her eyes.
And the pussycat was out of the bag.
Worst’s face was a mix of amusement and sheer disbelief. She didn’t really know what to say.
She grinned in a foreboding fashion, leaning in like a cop interrogating a murder suspect.
“Great…” Accelerator parroted.
The real lulz begins afterwards. WorstxYuriko anyone?
Also, started working on that Volume 2 ToumaxStiyl lemon. Oh, even if I'm not gay, this is kinda hot :D
Drifting Wolf
2011-07-06, 21:15
Understatement of the year. Seriously, that's kind to be expected from a depraved bisexual and druggie like Aleister Crowley.
Also, preview from my latest crack. A one-shot.
“Ah~ It sure is cold, isn’t it.” Misaka Worst said those words while stroking her shoulders. She trembled a little, but not too much.
It looked like she was perhaps trying a little too hard.
It the start of Winter in Academy City. Although Last Order had seen much snow in Russia, she had never seen a real snowfall like she saw yesterday. She knew about them from the Network, but it still mesmerized her.
For the two monsters who had dug themselves out of the Darkness, it was all pitifully insignificant. Really, it was just a bother. Even if Yomikawa’s apartment was subsided by a university and its had above-average insulation, that didn’t mean the cold wave couldn’t reach them. Sure, they could crank up the heater, but that would be a waste when they have a perfectly good kotatsu. Plus, money was hard to come in this post-war economy. Little savings are savings nonetheless.
“What the fuck are you doing?” Accelerator frowned under the radiating heat of the kotatsu.
“‘There’s enough place for the three of us.’ says Misaka as Misaka analyses the available room.”
“Ewww, gross.” Worst’s scorn was mainly directed at Accelerator. “Who knows what this closet pervert might do with a fully grown Misaka! Perhaps he has a foot fetish? Hey, Tou-san, are you barefooted right now?”
“Like hell I’d tell you,” Accelerator sneered, head tucked into a pillow laid on the floor.
The non-coy Third Season clone faked a dramatic reveal, striking a mortified pose.
“Y-You’re doing it, aren’t you? You’re playing footsies with the Commander!”
Accelerator’s forehead creased into a million folds. He wasn’t laughing.
“…You're just looking for a fight, aren’t you?” he asked plainly.
Worst grinned widely. “If ‘fight’ is a euphemism for something you want to do with this Misaka?”
“‘Um, what is footsies?’ asks Misaka asks Misaka as she is puzzled by this new term.”
Last Order interrupted, shifting between the two espers.
Worst took it upon herself to explain. In the fashion of a Cool Big Sister character, she went and sat down besides her real Onee-chan.
…Quite ironic.
“Y’see Commander, when a man and a woman love each other very much—”
The albino, sitting opposite of the sisters, clenched his fist.
“—they give each other ‘footjobs’ and—“
CHOP!
In a fatal strike to the head by the almighty Tou-san, Worst’s head kissed the kotatsu’s top and deflated. Her eyes shook and some drools sprayed from her lips.
The winner was decided.
“‘Waaaah! It’s a huge bump! We need ice!’ exclaims Misaka as Misaka runs to the refrigerator!”
“So bothersome…” Accelerator retracted his fist, having prevented a terrible event.
Last Order got up and rushed for the refridgerator in the other room while Worst continued to bathe in her defeat.
Then…
“Ha~!” She jerked her head upward, a glitter in her eyes. “It’s time for my ultimate technique~ Hyaahhhh~!”
At that moment, under the table, Worst’s foot connected with a certain part of him, rather forcefully too.
“…”
“…”
“…Are you done yet?” His faced twitched slightly from pain.
But it wasn’t agony he was feeling. Mild annoyance. That left her completely baffled. Her technique should have thrown him into a torment of pain. The nut-cracker. Bustin’ the ghoulies. Whatever you call it.
It didn’t make any sense.
She gave another push of her feet into his crotch to try to understand.
“…Do you want to get decked?” The albino hissed.
“…What the…”
Misaka Worst, at that moment, understood what was going on.
Under the most deadpan tone her slack jaw allowed her to formulate, she said,
“So, should Misaka call you Kaa-san from now on?”
“Great…” Accelerator rolled her eyes.
And the pussycat was out of the bag.
Worst’s face was a mix of amusement and sheer disbelief. She didn’t really know what to say.
She grinned in a foreboding fashion, leaning in like a cop interrogating a murder suspect.
“Great…” Accelerator parotted.
The real lulz begins afterwards. WorstxYuriko anyone?
Also, started working on that Volume 2 ToumaxStiyl lemon. Oh, even if I'm not gay, this is kinda hot :D
Ah, this would explain why Kakine Teitoku is so enraged about Accelerator winning him. He failed to get into her pants thanks to her vector redirection! :eyespin:
TkMacintosh
2011-07-06, 21:23
Understatement of the year. Seriously, that's kind to be expected from a depraved bisexual and druggie like Aleister Crowley.
Also, preview from my latest crack. A one-shot.
“Ah~ It sure is cold, isn’t it.” Misaka Worst said those words while stroking her shoulders. She trembled a little, but not too much.
It looked like she was perhaps trying a little too hard.
It the start of Winter in Academy City. Although Last Order had seen much snow in Russia, she had never seen a real snowfall like she saw yesterday. She knew about them from the Network, but it still mesmerized her.
For the two monsters who had dug themselves out of the Darkness, it was all pitifully insignificant. Really, it was just a bother. Even if Yomikawa’s apartment was subsided by a university and its had above-average insulation, that didn’t mean the cold wave couldn’t reach them. Sure, they could crank up the heater, but that would be a waste when they have a perfectly good kotatsu. Plus, money was hard to come in this post-war economy. Little savings are savings nonetheless.
“What the fuck are you doing?” Accelerator frowned under the radiating heat of the kotatsu.
“‘There’s enough place for the three of us.’ says Misaka as Misaka analyses the available room.”
“Ewww, gross.” Worst’s scorn was mainly directed at Accelerator. “Who knows what this closet pervert might do with a fully grown Misaka! Perhaps he has a foot fetish? Hey, Tou-san, are you barefooted right now?”
“Like hell I’d tell you,” Accelerator sneered, head tucked into a pillow laid on the floor.
The non-coy Third Season clone faked a dramatic reveal, striking a mortified pose.
“Y-You’re doing it, aren’t you? You’re playing footsies with the Commander!”
Accelerator’s forehead creased into a million folds. He wasn’t laughing.
“…You're just looking for a fight, aren’t you?” he asked plainly.
Worst grinned widely. “If ‘fight’ is a euphemism for something you want to do with this Misaka?”
“‘Um, what is footsies?’ asks Misaka asks Misaka as she is puzzled by this new term.”
Last Order interrupted, shifting between the two espers.
Worst took it upon herself to explain. In the fashion of a Cool Big Sister character, she went and sat down besides her real Onee-chan.
…Quite ironic.
“Y’see Commander, when a man and a woman love each other very much—”
The albino, sitting opposite of the sisters, clenched his fist.
“—they give each other ‘footjobs’ and—“
CHOP!
In a fatal strike to the head by the almighty Tou-san, Worst’s head kissed the kotatsu’s top and deflated. Her eyes shook and some drools sprayed from her lips.
The winner was decided.
“‘Waaaah! It’s a huge bump! We need ice!’ exclaims Misaka as Misaka runs to the refrigerator!”
“So bothersome…” Accelerator retracted his fist, having prevented a terrible event.
Last Order got up and rushed for the refridgerator in the other room while Worst continued to bathe in her defeat.
Then…
“Ha~!” She jerked her head upward, a glitter in her eyes. “It’s time for my ultimate technique~ Hyaahhhh~!”
At that moment, under the table, Worst’s foot connected with a certain part of him, rather forcefully too.
“…”
“…”
“…Are you done yet?” His faced twitched slightly from pain.
But it wasn’t agony he was feeling. Mild annoyance. That left her completely baffled. Her technique should have thrown him into a torment of pain. The nut-cracker. Bustin’ the ghoulies. Whatever you call it.
It didn’t make any sense.
She gave another push of her feet into his crotch to try to understand.
“…Do you want to get decked?” The albino hissed.
“…What the…”
Misaka Worst, at that moment, understood what was going on.
Under the most deadpan tone her slack jaw allowed her to formulate, she said,
“So, should Misaka call you Kaa-san from now on?”
“Great…” Accelerator rolled her eyes.
And the pussycat was out of the bag.
Worst’s face was a mix of amusement and sheer disbelief. She didn’t really know what to say.
She grinned in a foreboding fashion, leaning in like a cop interrogating a murder suspect.
“Great…” Accelerator parroted.
The real lulz begins afterwards. WorstxYuriko anyone?
Also, started working on that Volume 2 ToumaxStiyl lemon. Oh, even if I'm not gay, this is kinda hot :D
...I enjoyed that, but now I want to see a WorstxToumaxYuriko fic from you...Damn your crack!
Also, preview from my latest crack. A one-shot.
“Ah~ It sure is cold, isn’t it.” Misaka Worst said those words while stroking her shoulders. She trembled a little, but not too much.
It looked like she was perhaps trying a little too hard.
It the start of Winter in Academy City. Although Last Order had seen much snow in Russia, she had never seen a real snowfall like she saw yesterday. She knew about them from the Network, but it still mesmerized her.
For the two monsters who had dug themselves out of the Darkness, it was all pitifully insignificant. Really, it was just a bother. Even if Yomikawa’s apartment was subsided by a university and its had above-average insulation, that didn’t mean the cold wave couldn’t reach them. Sure, they could crank up the heater, but that would be a waste when they have a perfectly good kotatsu. Plus, money was hard to come in this post-war economy. Little savings are savings nonetheless.
“What the fuck are you doing?” Accelerator frowned under the radiating heat of the kotatsu.
“‘There’s enough place for the three of us.’ says Misaka as Misaka analyses the available room.”
“Ewww, gross.” Worst’s scorn was mainly directed at Accelerator. “Who knows what this closet pervert might do with a fully grown Misaka! Perhaps he has a foot fetish? Hey, Tou-san, are you barefooted right now?”
“Like hell I’d tell you,” Accelerator sneered, head tucked into a pillow laid on the floor.
The non-coy Third Season clone faked a dramatic reveal, striking a mortified pose.
“Y-You’re doing it, aren’t you? You’re playing footsies with the Commander!”
Accelerator’s forehead creased into a million folds. He wasn’t laughing.
“…You're just looking for a fight, aren’t you?” he asked plainly.
Worst grinned widely. “If ‘fight’ is a euphemism for something you want to do with this Misaka?”
“‘Um, what is footsies?’ asks Misaka asks Misaka as she is puzzled by this new term.”
Last Order interrupted, shifting between the two espers.
Worst took it upon herself to explain. In the fashion of a Cool Big Sister character, she went and sat down besides her real Onee-chan.
…Quite ironic.
“Y’see Commander, when a man and a woman love each other very much—”
The albino, sitting opposite of the sisters, clenched his fist.
“—they give each other ‘footjobs’ and—“
CHOP!
In a fatal strike to the head by the almighty Tou-san, Worst’s head kissed the kotatsu’s top and deflated. Her eyes shook and some drools sprayed from her lips.
The winner was decided.
“‘Waaaah! It’s a huge bump! We need ice!’ exclaims Misaka as Misaka runs to the refrigerator!”
“So bothersome…” Accelerator retracted his fist, having prevented a terrible event.
Last Order got up and rushed for the refridgerator in the other room while Worst continued to bathe in her defeat.
Then…
“Ha~!” She jerked her head upward, a glitter in her eyes. “It’s time for my ultimate technique~ Hyaahhhh~!”
At that moment, under the table, Worst’s foot connected with a certain part of him, rather forcefully too.
“…”
“…”
“…Are you done yet?” His faced twitched slightly from pain.
But it wasn’t agony he was feeling. Mild annoyance. That left her completely baffled. Her technique should have thrown him into a torment of pain. The nut-cracker. Bustin’ the ghoulies. Whatever you call it.
It didn’t make any sense.
She gave another push of her feet into his crotch to try to understand.
“…Do you want to get decked?” The albino hissed.
“…What the…”
Misaka Worst, at that moment, understood what was going on.
Under the most deadpan tone her slack jaw allowed her to formulate, she said,
“So, should Misaka call you Kaa-san from now on?”
“Great…” Accelerator rolled her eyes.
And the pussycat was out of the bag.
Worst’s face was a mix of amusement and sheer disbelief. She didn’t really know what to say.
She grinned in a foreboding fashion, leaning in like a cop interrogating a murder suspect.
“Great…” Accelerator parroted.
The real lulz begins afterwards. WorstxYuriko anyone?
Also, started working on that Volume 2 ToumaxStiyl lemon. Oh, even if I'm not gay, this is kinda hot :D
I'm not going to be able to sleep tonight because I'm going to be looking forward to this so much. Thanks a lot jerk.
And so my fic is sandwiched between two layers of 'endless erotic hell' and a 'certain adult film...
maybe I should've written something risque too...:heh:
I'm not going to be able to sleep tonight because I'm going to be looking forward to this so much. Thanks a lot jerk.
Tsundere. Kyahaha.
Chaos2Frozen
2011-07-06, 22:11
And so my fic is sandwiched between two layers of 'endless erotic hell' and a 'certain adult film...
maybe I should've written something risque too...:heh:
I know it doesn't sound convincing right now- but this wasn't my intended outcome :heh:
“W-wait!! Don’t strip!! Keep your clothes on!! Using seductive techniques with no goal is nothing more than an endless erotic hell :frustrated:!!”
Do one with Bro Shiage. He's perfect for it.
Chaos2Frozen
2011-07-06, 22:30
Do one with Bro Shiage. He's perfect for it.
I don't know... I'm doing this from the girls' perspective, and Hamazura is anything but oblivious to girls.
Well...
You could have Hamazura in bed covering his face in embarrassment with Mugino beside him smoking a cigarette...
...
wait, no... nevermind...
Well...
You could have Hamazura in bed covering his face in embarrassment with Mugino beside him smoking a cigarette...
...
wait, no... nevermind...
...
[Writes the idea down.]
To quote SuperSS Hamazura:
"I've made a huge mistake."
Chaos2Frozen
2011-07-06, 23:40
You know the music video of the song "Misunderstood" by Bon Jovi? Yeah I'm thinking about he could explain that one as a "I know what you're thinking, but it's not what it looks like" scenario.
ellifeedn
2011-07-07, 00:05
Did anyone write any stories about the gemstones?
Marcus H.
2011-07-07, 01:51
Crafting a story about a Gemstone is hard, especially making Original Characters, because very little is known about the extent of powers a Gemstone possesses.
MrTerrorist
2011-07-07, 05:12
Ahhh....Yare yare....After several weeks of working hard for it...I bring you....
A Certain Adult Film chapter 1 (http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7153462/1/)
I hope you all enjoy it. I got chapter 2 pretty much written out, now I just need to transfer it and tighten it up a little more before I post that...and that'll be at least 2 weeks before that date.
Oh my God, what did i just read?http://www.laymark.com/i/o/15.gif
Chaos2Frozen
2011-07-07, 07:55
Crafting a story about a Gemstone is hard, especially making Original Characters, because very little is known about the extent of powers a Gemstone possesses.
Plus they're more than likely to come up with a broken as hell haxx ability that doesn't follow the Laws set by the Toaruverse.
Master Assassin
2011-07-07, 08:08
Hey guys I'm checking out what's here since I'm on my off-day for my first job this we-- Wha?
*picks some titles, rushes through everything, not caring whether they're fun to read or not*
Well damn, now I really wish I had a certain phone so that I can type my ideas on the fly.
... Or possibly draw it instead...
julioalqae
2011-07-07, 15:27
excuse me guys i want to ask you something..... it's about the crossover fan fiction.....did all of you know the crossover fanfiction to aru X shana??:confused: if you know....can you give me a link?? thank you...:D
Flere821
2011-07-07, 16:27
New chapter of Minds, Memories, and Misfortune is up:
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7049587/7/Minds_Memories_and_Misfortune
Enjoy, and give any feedback if you have any.
I'm not quite happy about Touma's conversation with Mikoto. The goal here is to have him soothe Mikoto's turmoil, fixing whatever damage Misaki did to her last chapter. Something just feel lacking in how he did it, so if anyone has any suggestions to make it better I'm willing to listen
New chapter of Minds, Memories, and Misfortune is up:
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7049587/7/Minds_Memories_and_Misfortune
Enjoy, and give any feedback if you have any.
I'm not quite happy about Touma's conversation with Mikoto. The goal here is to have him soothe Mikoto's turmoil, fixing whatever damage Misaki did to her last chapter. Something just feel lacking in how he did it, so if anyone has any suggestions to make it better I'm willing to listen
I thought the scene worked well enough.
Also once again that was an incredible chapter. Although I hate you for the cliff hanger of who is attacking Touma (although I'm pretty sure they are part of Misaki's faction who are angry at him). And the Kuroko part made me laugh.
Master Assassin
2011-07-07, 18:35
... Cliff hangers...
Aw, that was no fun. But at least the whole chapter made up for it.
BUT STILL! Update quick.
tsunade666
2011-07-08, 06:24
New chapter of Minds, Memories, and Misfortune is up:
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7049587/7/Minds_Memories_and_Misfortune
Enjoy, and give any feedback if you have any.
I'm not quite happy about Touma's conversation with Mikoto. The goal here is to have him soothe Mikoto's turmoil, fixing whatever damage Misaki did to her last chapter. Something just feel lacking in how he did it, so if anyone has any suggestions to make it better I'm willing to listen
Maybe when you mean lacking because it's too bland or out of place because Touma calling a girl in his cellphone seems out of character for me. Specially if he didn't need help. The only time I remember him calling a girl is in the volume of England coup de ta. It seems really out of place when the problem isn't really that big on Touma's pov plus he didn't know about the fight unless he check the site which make it another out of character for him. He didn't strike me as that kind of character that is interested in such stuff. But when I get to the part when Misaki ask him to call Mikoto then I understand. It's not really out of character at all. Touma would help Mikoto if she needs help or in trouble that mostly mean "trouble" and not this kind of trouble of love triangle thing or love gossip thing. Touma would just ignore it just like what he did in his class in your last chapter.
Pretty decent chapter if not for a cliffhanger but I just get the feeling that the girl that attack Touma and the one Misaki is looking are the same girls. Well I will just wait to see what happens next but I'm eager to see what will happen and expecting a change of heart maybe :heh: :uhoh: :uhoh: :uhoh: naaaaaah :heh:
MrTerrorist
2011-07-08, 08:37
New chapter of Minds, Memories, and Misfortune is up:
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7049587/7/Minds_Memories_and_Misfortune
Enjoy, and give any feedback if you have any.
I'm not quite happy about Touma's conversation with Mikoto. The goal here is to have him soothe Mikoto's turmoil, fixing whatever damage Misaki did to her last chapter. Something just feel lacking in how he did it, so if anyone has any suggestions to make it better I'm willing to listen
I love it. I went ROTFL about that part with Kuroko. As for the scene with Touma and Mikoto, it was very good.
I still dying to know who were those girls at the end of the chapter but i can guess what group they are.
Here's hoping for another chapter.
TkMacintosh
2011-07-08, 17:55
Hrmmm....Not sure if I mentioned this in my previous postings about my chapters, but...
Chapter 3 will have Fukiyose confiscate a copy of the movie from a student and put it in her bag with the intent to give it to the teacher after class, but some disturbance happens and it completely slips her mind... (maybe Komoe just rushing out of the room at the end of the school day after trying her best to keep from looking at and calling on Touma the entire day). So when she gets home, she notices the case and wondering what's got the boys so hyped up, she watches the movie...
After the movie, she becomes a HUGE fan of Kamiko Touka, wanting him, having fantasies about him...all without realizing that it's actually Touma with a stage name.
What do you guys think?
After the movie, she becomes a HUGE fan of Kamiko Touka, wanting him, having fantasies about him...all without realizing that it's actually Touma with a stage name.
What do you guys think?
You had me until this.
You need a reason why Komoe can recognise Touma but Fukiyose can't, though the idea of Fukiyose lusting after Touma unknowinglyamuses me.
BTW, Kamiko Touka? Sounds way too feminine.
TkMacintosh
2011-07-08, 18:19
You had me until this.
You need a reason why Komoe can recognise Touma but Fukiyose can't, though the idea of Fukiyose lusting after Touma unknowinglyamuses me.
BTW, Kamiko Touka? Sounds way too feminine.
I'm working on that reasoning....Don't know what, but I'll think of something.
Maybe...Komoe helped patch up Touma more when he was younger, so she's seen more of his chest and back....That's a somewhat decent one.
Could be an old scar Touma had that Komoe helped to try and patch up in which she notices on the male actor and soon makes the connection to Touma.
Fukiyose more then likely has never seen that old scar on Touma, so she probably wouldn't know that its Touma.
Eh...like I said when I previously mentioned the name the first time around, the director comes up with it quickly on the spot, and its so cheesy, that even Touma wants to face palm at it.
Breidaluk
2011-07-09, 07:15
In Vol 3 Komoe already said that kamijou-kun was a "naughty" boy since a long time and that a lot of things happened so i think she would see its him just by looking at his body, and lets not forget that it was her who took care of his wounds after his fight with kanzaki.
But "Kamiko Touka", thats sounds like a feminine name. And the most important is that he will need a disguise(problably change his hairstyle will be enough).
It was a normal day in Yomikawa Aiho’s household. The children had begun their little routine, which mainly consisted of Last Order clinging to Accelerator, him complaining while not even trying to get her off him, then Misaka Worst would butt in to make a delicious Misaka sandwich (which would certainly irritate a certain Stalker-kun).
While ranting stemming from the albino’s foul mouth raged in the living room, Yomikawa was flipping through her mail. Plain white paper envelopes. Nothing much, just bills mostly, with the exception of occasional letters from Yomikawa’s delusional aunt, who thinks Ronald Reagan is still President, and who also happens to think she’s Nancy Reagan. Makes for really awkward family reunions.
Reaching the last letter, Yomikawa’s cocked an eyebrow. This one wasn’t for her. She threw the rest into the trash bin and went to the rightful receiver.
“How dare you…!”
“Want Misaka to say it again, Number One?”
“…Don’t try it.”
Defiantly standing her ground, the sinister beauty Misaka Worst had her hands on her hips, proud and confident. Her pink-white aodai was probably a size too small as it clung a bit too much to her well-rounded body, making certain aspects stick out (to Last Order’s despair).
Speaking in a tone that implied she wasn’t taking any of this seriously, she said an unforgivable thing—something even Accelerator couldn’t forgive. It was second only to hurting Last Order.
“…The Phantom Menace is better than Empire Strikes Back!”
“…!”
Accelerator visibly wanted to throw up. Not Jar-Jar again, not again… Never again… He had perhaps ruined his childhood more than Kihara Amata.
By himself, that lonesome cunt.
“‘Wahhh! What’s is it this strange confrontation of good versus evil?-!’ exclaims Misaka exclaims Misaka as she tries to cool the situation down!”
Yomikawa had only seen the original trilogy, and her favorite was Revenge of the Jedi—or was it Return?—because of those cute furry things on the forest moon. It was also because Harrison Ford looked the sexiest in that one. Princess Leia in the slave girl suit also looked lovely…
Leaving her wild teenage years behind her, Yomikawa stepped in before Accelerator could murder Misaka Worst for such an insult.
“Oi, Accelerator!” Yomikawa said, waving the envelope in the albino’s face.
“What?” he snarled a little while Worst grimaced under Yomikawa’s protection. “I was going to throw this brat out by the balcony.”
“That’ll have to wait I’m afraid. You’ve got mail,” she announced, handing him the letter.
“From who?” he asked while glaring at the envelope.
“Unmarked.” Yomikawa shrugged.
Shrugging himself, Accelerator scratched it open, revealing a delicately hand-written note.
He read.
And read.
His jaw twitched as he re-read it about three times.
“…T-That impossible,” muttered Accelerator, sinking into the couch chair.
“What is?” Yoshikawa asked, sipping her coffee at the dinner table.
“This letter,” he lifelessly let the letter get whiffed by the air, ”is from…my father.”
The dark lavender-haired researcher ruined her laptop with the amount she spewed out after that statement.
“YOUR DAD!-?” was the generalized response amongst the girls.
The cripple hung his head low while nodding.
An epic quest will begin. Oh, the crack will be epic.
Flere821
2011-07-11, 00:44
*snip*
An epic quest will begin. Oh, the crack will be epic.
... I hereby bow to your superiorty in crack-fics. I shudder to think that I even considered challenging you, seeing as I was planning to write a (omake) scene in my fic about
A possible yaoi relationship between Gunha and Touma
next week, and setting it up this week.
I even had a challenge line ready :heh:
'Do you have enough Inspiration, oh King of Crack?'
Needless to say... you obviously do.
Ha! Indeed I can accept that challenge! Those two have similar styles and can be quite dense. This will be interesting.
...Still, I have to write that ToumaxStyil thingy as Teh_Ping's gift for finishing Volume 2. That will have to wait until I'm feeling...well, really gay, which only happens if many things are in the right order.
Like Chaos2Frozen trying to entice me with a- *Gets shot in the wang*
GRRRRRRRAWWWWWW! DEEEEEEP WAAAANNNNGGG!
outerelf
2011-07-11, 10:55
Ha! Indeed I can accept that challenge! Those two have similar styles and can be quite dense. This will be interesting.
...Still, I have to write that ToumaxStyil thingy as Teh_Ping's gift for finishing Volume 2. That will have to wait until I'm feeling...well, really gay, which only happens if many things are in the right order.
Like Chaos2Frozen trying to entice me with a- *Gets shot in the wang*
GRRRRRRRAWWWWWW! DEEEEEEP WAAAANNNNGGG!
*cough* I still have in store the fic about you, Chaos2Frozen and Crack-tan getting it on. Want me to send it to you? :cool: You might get your Gay on then.
Master Assassin
2011-07-11, 11:51
... I hereby bow to your superiorty in crack-fics. I shudder to think that I even considered challenging you, seeing as I was planning to write a (omake) scene in my fic about
A possible yaoi relationship between Gunha and Touma
next week, and setting it up this week.
I even had a challenge line ready :heh:
'Do you have enough Inspiration, oh King of Crack?'
Needless to say... you obviously do.
BL of those two? Strangely, I approve.
Which reminds me, while remembering Touma's relation to dragon-ish themes, I feel like I can make him stand next to Gunha and say the two are the Tiger and Dragon of the Toaru series. Their personalities seem to fit these. .... Just... without the "Tiger and Dragon fighting each other" part.
Familiar Troubles, Chapter 1. (http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7169867/)
Next chapter is The Affably Evil Kihara Junior vs. Accelerator the Tsundere... in a battle of words. Literally.
Miraluka
2011-07-11, 17:33
BardwayxIndex iz troof
What!? :twitch:
:heh:
Ohh you... it can't be helped... right, M-Kun o_ó?
Hope it won't become canon, if you know what I mean... something like Bardway getting too much friendly with Index and... ok, I stop here, that kind of ideas are yours :heh:.
Flere821
2011-07-11, 20:38
Familiar Troubles, Chapter 1. (http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7169867/)
Next chapter is The Affably Evil Kihara Junior vs. Accelerator the Tsundere... in a battle of words. Literally.
Speaking of which, fanfiction.net still list Shokuhou Misaki as 'The Queen'... meh, I can live with that I guess.
TkMacintosh
2011-07-11, 22:32
http://i221.photobucket.com/albums/dd91/TkMacintosh/RuikoValentine1.jpg
Ruiko blushed deeply as she stood in front of her mirror, a smile on her face as she held her hands in a heart shape in front of her, her imagination filling the hole her fingers made with a small heart shaped box. Valentines Day was coming up quickly and Ruiko knew that she needed to prepare her heart for that day. She had already planned to give valentines out to some of her closer friends, like Uiharu, Misaka-san, and Kuroko-san, but there was one person that stood out from the others that she knew she had to practice for.
"Here...here you go Touma...I...I hope you enjoy them." Ruiko said to the imaginary Touma in front of her, a deep red blush across her face.
http://i221.photobucket.com/albums/dd91/TkMacintosh/RuikoValentine2.jpg
Ruiko blushed deeply as she walked down the street along side Touma. She had randomly met him when she was heading home, not expecting him to be there.
"So uh...What...what were doing doing there Touma?" Ruiko asked as she looked over at Touma who was staring off into space, but quickly snapped back once Ruiko started talking to him.
"I was heading home. Misaka had called and said she wanted meet me at the park." Touma said as he looked to the sky, recalling the conversation with Misaka from earlier.
"Oh...right. Misaka-san's been kind of excited about this day for the last while...even though she's been denying it at just about every turn." Ruiko said as she tighted her grip on her school bag as the two fell quiet walking down the street together. Telling herself over and over that now was the time to do it, she quickly rushed ahead, pulling out the small square box from her bag and turned around facing Touma holding the box out for him, a blush going redder then previously. "He-here you go Touma. I...I really hope you like them."
http://i221.photobucket.com/albums/dd91/TkMacintosh/RuikoDate.jpg
Ruiko smiled happily as she ran a through her hair as she waited by the entrance to Joeys. It had been a month since Ruiko had worked up the courage to give Touma those chocolates. She had been really happy when he had accepted them with a smile on his face. Just last week she had gotten an email from him, asking her to meet him outside Joeys at 2 PM on Sunday. She happily accepted and was now waiting for him. It wasn't long before she noticed Touma approaching. She waved at him happily.
"Hey Touma." Ruiko said happily as she waved her hand at him. He smiled as he waved back at her.
"Hey Ruiko...did I make you wait long?" Touma asked as he stood next to her now. Ruiko shook her head with a smile.
"No, I just got here myself actually." Ruiko said as a feeling of joy and happiness running through her at the thought of spending time with Touma.
"That's good...well shall we go get some food then?" Touma asked as he motioned towards the restaurant they were in front of. Ruiko nodded her head in agreement. Ruiko hoped that nothing would go wrong today.
Bahh...ToumaxRuiko is a guilty pleasure of mine...Still trying to work on my writing...
blitz1/2
2011-07-11, 23:06
http://i221.photobucket.com/albums/dd91/TkMacintosh/RuikoValentine1.jpg
[QUOTE]Ruiko blushed deeply as she stood in front of her mirror, a smile on her face as she held her hands in a heart shape in front of her, her imagination filling the hole her fingers made with a small heart shaped box. Valentines Day was coming up quickly and Ruiko knew that she needed to prepare her heart for that day. She had already planned to give valentines out to some of her closer friends, like Uiharu, Misaka-san, and Kuroko-san, but there was one person that stood out from the others that she knew she had to practice for.
"Here...here you go Touma...I...I hope you enjoy them." Ruiko said to the imaginary Touma in front of her, a deep red blush across her face.
http://i221.photobucket.com/albums/dd91/TkMacintosh/RuikoValentine2.jpg
http://i221.photobucket.com/albums/dd91/TkMacintosh/RuikoDate.jpg
Bahh...ToumaxRuiko is a guilty pleasure of mine...Still trying to work on my writing...
Not bad, pretty good for a series of oneshots. Only complaint is the text length (not your fault I guess) as I need to scroll left and right to read a line.
Familiar Troubles, Chapter 1. (http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7169867/)
Next chapter is The Affably Evil Kihara Junior vs. Accelerator the Tsundere... in a battle of words. Literally.
Good to see you back Bro :cool:
Tsukino Kage Spectre
2011-07-14, 04:28
Stormwolfex has updated: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6873009/11/Of_Science_and_Magics
Now that I think about it, his interpretation of Gunha's powers seemed similar to a concept from Star Trek: subspace. Moving a ship to subspace allows for speeds above light, getting to the highest levels may in fact move almost as fast as teleportation. In Star Trek, they 'bend' subspace to create their deflector shields, while are maintained in shape by energy and when it takes hits, some of that energy is dissipated thus weakening the shield. It can be used to stop energy and blunt objects, just like how Gunha uses Attack Crash.
Anybody know anything in canon to support this theory?
Stormwolfex has updated: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6873009/11/Of_Science_and_Magics
Now that I think about it, his interpretation of Gunha's powers seemed similar to a concept from Star Trek: subspace. Moving a ship to subspace allows for speeds above light, getting to the highest levels may in fact move almost as fast as teleportation. In Star Trek, they 'bend' subspace to create their deflector shields, while are maintained in shape by energy and when it takes hits, some of that energy is dissipated thus weakening the shield. It can be used to stop energy and blunt objects, just like how Gunha uses Attack Crash.
Anybody know anything in canon to support this theory?
In canon, Gunha bends the AIM around him if the Vending Machine SS is right. Best way to put it is that he is the Science Side's Ollerus, albeit underdeveloped. Ollerus bends the Laws of Nature to create attacks ("illusions") that cannot be explained or understood. The explanations Gunha gives are always lampshaded to be impossible within the Power Curriculum. I think Gunha believes his mumbo jumbo to be true, which is why Ollerus told him the difference between himself and Gunha is that:
"One of us is aware that he wields an unexplainable power, and the other isn’t: that is the only real difference between us. You are the delicate yet complex Number Seven that not even Academy City's researchers could do anything about. In fact, you’re a special esper that they aren’t even sure should really be classified as a Level 5. If you yourself understood that, you may have been able to defeat me."
I seem to have made something that resembles a story with an actual plot...
Now I need a name.
...
Can't think of one. Any suggestions?
I seem to have made something that resembles a story with an actual plot...
Now I need a name.
...
Can't think of one. Any suggestions?
...What's the story about? Spoiler tag is your friend.
...
...
Actually, fuck it. I'm calling it "Accelerator Goes Grocery Shopping"
Sorry about that.
Flere821
2011-07-14, 16:54
Chapter 7 of Minds, Memories and Misfortune is out:
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7049587/8/Minds_Memories_and_Misfortune
Should I use Kihara Amata as the tester for Touma and Gunha, or use a generic one-use-only Kihara character? I had a idea forcing Amata to act civilised and not as much of a sadist jerk like in Vol12-3 fighting Accelerator, and inwardly cursing Aleister for pushing grunt work onto him (researching Touma this one time) as he on the surface tries to chat Yomikawa up to alleviate her suspicions about his ulterior motives.
Chapter 7 of Minds, Memories and Misfortune is out:
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7049587/8/Minds_Memories_and_Misfortune
Should I use Kihara Amata as the tester for Touma and Gunha, or use a generic one-use-only Kihara character? I had a idea forcing Amata to act civilised and not as much of a sadist jerk like in Vol12-3 fighting Accelerator, and inwardly cursing Aleister for pushing grunt work onto him (researching Touma this one time) as he on the surface tries to chat Yomikawa up to alleviate her suspicions about his ulterior motives.
You could use Amata, definitely. Forced to be civilized and having to hold back his anger and swears, acting extremely polite around Touma and Gunha - to the point where it makes it scary compared to the Amata we know.
If you go that way, I have an idea.
During the tests, you could have Nayuta walk in to give her uncle a bento. She's being accompanied by Kihara-kun Junior - who internally is wishing that Nayuta would give him that bento and call him Onii-chan. Although when the two see Amata being respectful, they freeze in place. The two start shaking in terror - the implication being that Amata being nice is a prelude to bad, bad things.
Then, you could have Nayuta become seriously obsessed with Touma's right hand while watching Gunha vs Touma. She goes and talks with him, acting all cutesy around him, not even looking malicious (she's trying to be sneaky and learn more about IB before attempting anything). Junior fears the worse and mutters "Lolicon" and grumbles with crossed arms, picturing the many ways this could go terribly wrong.
Another loli is added to the Kamijou harem, with Junior keeping a close eye on Nayuta so she doesn't go near him again. Perhaps have Amata mention to Junior this test was Aleister's doing, thus strengthening his resolve to keep his loli cousin away from Touma. He definitely knows she'll attempt something - case in point: pitting Gunha against Mikoto that one time.
Gunha vs Touma? So awesome, Gunha is mach 2 though, so I don't see how Touma could react to him.....well I guess Touma's "Minds Eye" could help.
TkMacintosh
2011-07-14, 18:53
http://i221.photobucket.com/albums/dd91/TkMacintosh/FukiyoseToumalap.png
"Uhh...Fukiyose....Why...Why are you sitting on my lap?" Touma asked, a bite of rice in between his chopsticks when Fukiyose suddenly just sat on Toumas' lap.
"There's no other seats available, Kamijou." Fukiyose said as she munched on her bread, a faint blush on her face.
"But there's a seat right the-"
"I SAID there's no other seats available, UNDERSTAND?" Fukiyose said calmly, a dark aura filling the air.
"Yes..I-I understand." Touma said knowing that it was the end of the conversation.
http://i221.photobucket.com/albums/dd91/TkMacintosh/FukiyoseBunnygirl.png
Fukiyose had no clue when she finally came to terms that she was in love with Kamijou Touma, but even now...Fukiyose had NO friggen clue on why she EVER took advice from BOTH Tsuchimikado and Aoigami.
"Come on Fukiyose...If you wear this, you'll have Kami-yan all over you." Tsuchimikado said with his ever persistent grin.
"Yeah, yeah, come on Fukiyose. This'll be perfect." Aoigami said smiling happily as he held up a purple bunny girls for her to see. "All you need to do is put this on and wait for Touma at his place."
Fukiyose fidgeted in place as she tried to fix her tight outfit. Upon hearing the front door opening, Fukiyose jumped up quickly, her hand across chest, a red blush across her face.
"Fu-Fukiyose...Why are yo-you here...?" Touma asked when he saw her standing in his living room. "And why are you dressed like that?"
"Uhh...Do...Do you like it Touma?" Fukiyose said as she let her arm down from her chest and wrapping around her back.
Touma just stared at her in shock before his body could no longer take the sight before him as it propelled Touma back blood splurting from his nose.
The final thought that ran through Touma's head as he passed out was 'I...love bunny girls!'
Familiar Troubles, Chapter 2. (http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7169867/2)
As you can see, this is going into crazyness really fast.
And cyborg pandas aren't even that insane compared to what's coming next!
Now to work on the ToumaxStiyl lemon crack I've been putting off.
To sum up what will happen to your mind if you read it:
I'm like Sinead O'Connor, and you're a picture of the Pope. Prepare to get torn up.
Flere821
2011-07-14, 20:29
You could use Amata, definitely. Forced to be civilized and having to hold back his anger and swears, acting extremely polite around Touma and Gunha - to the point where it makes it scary compared to the Amata we know.
If you go that way, I have an idea.
During the tests, you could have Nayuta walk in to give her uncle a bento. She's being accompanied by Kihara-kun Junior - who internally is wishing that Nayuta would give him that bento and call him Onii-chan. Although when the two see Amata being respectful, they freeze in place. The two start shaking in terror - the implication being that Amata being nice is a prelude to bad, bad things.
Then, you could have Nayuta become seriously obsessed with Touma's right hand while watching Gunha vs Touma. She goes and talks with him, acting all cutesy around him, not even looking malicious (she's trying to be sneaky and learn more about IB before attempting anything). Junior fears the worse and mutters "Lolicon" and grumbles with crossed arms, picturing the many ways this could go terribly wrong.
Another loli is added to the Kamijou harem, with Junior keeping a close eye on Nayuta so she doesn't go near him again. Perhaps have Amata mention to Junior this test was Aleister's doing, thus strengthening his resolve to keep his loli cousin away from Touma. He definitely knows she'll attempt something - case in point: pitting Gunha against Mikoto that one time.
I'd only do this if I want to make my fic go into crack territory...
Though rest assured, I am planning on a including a OMAKE next chapter. It may or may not be crackish.
faiz blaster
2011-07-14, 22:57
Chapter 7 of Minds, Memories and Misfortune is out:
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7049587/8/Minds_Memories_and_Misfortune
Should I use Kihara Amata as the tester for Touma and Gunha, or use a generic one-use-only Kihara character? I had a idea forcing Amata to act civilised and not as much of a sadist jerk like in Vol12-3 fighting Accelerator, and inwardly cursing Aleister for pushing grunt work onto him (researching Touma this one time) as he on the surface tries to chat Yomikawa up to alleviate her suspicions about his ulterior motives.
Great work as usual. There is one thing that bothers me though.
I don't remember ever seeing that Gunha has a connection to the Kiharas in anyway. Is this something you came up for your fic, or is it canon and I just don't know about it?
Great work as usual. There is one thing that bothers me though.
I don't remember ever seeing that Gunha has a connection to the Kiharas in anyway. Is this something you came up for your fic, or is it canon and I just don't know about it?
In the soon-to-be-translated Vending Machine SS, it is stated that Gunha's abilities were developed by the Kihara Research Institute.
tsunade666
2011-07-15, 08:55
Chapter 7 of Minds, Memories and Misfortune is out:
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7049587/8/Minds_Memories_and_Misfortune
Should I use Kihara Amata as the tester for Touma and Gunha, or use a generic one-use-only Kihara character? I had a idea forcing Amata to act civilised and not as much of a sadist jerk like in Vol12-3 fighting Accelerator, and inwardly cursing Aleister for pushing grunt work onto him (researching Touma this one time) as he on the surface tries to chat Yomikawa up to alleviate her suspicions about his ulterior motives.
Flere you can't call Misaki yet a mary sue because we don't know much about the original character. Few info's about her that makes it left to the fans to think of more about her personality which turn into the writers own version of Misaki. And I like your version of misaki so no problem there. Maybe I'm no good at explaining but she is still not Mary sue plus she is aiming to become perfect in her image or status so it's already to be a bit mary sue.
And story wise.... well yap the fight is lacking but it's alright. I don't expect much fighting here to begin with because when you said you will be writing a fic about Misaki, Touma and Misaka I expect plot driven story and not action wise. But here's a problem. Your setting an experiment for Touma to Fight Gunha. It means it will be an awesome fight so I'll be expecting here :heh:
MrTerrorist
2011-07-15, 12:25
Chapter 7 of Minds, Memories and Misfortune is out:
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7049587/8/Minds_Memories_and_Misfortune
Should I use Kihara Amata as the tester for Touma and Gunha, or use a generic one-use-only Kihara character? I had a idea forcing Amata to act civilised and not as much of a sadist jerk like in Vol12-3 fighting Accelerator, and inwardly cursing Aleister for pushing grunt work onto him (researching Touma this one time) as he on the surface tries to chat Yomikawa up to alleviate her suspicions about his ulterior motives.
Touma vs Gunha? Hell Yeah! :D
I think you should use Amata since it will be very funny to see him being forced to be nice. :heh: And i hope Nayuta makes an appearance as well. (But not Kihara Junior since that's Mr. Kyon's creation and is an OC).
PS. I don't think the way you wrote about Misaki is a Mary Sue since she has both good and bad traits and is not really that perfect. Plus i love how you portray her.
Keep up the good work!
Touma vs Gunha? Hell Yeah! :D
I think you should use Amata since it will be very funny to see him being forced to be nice. :heh: And i hope Nayuta makes an appearance as well. (But not Kihara Junior since that's Mr. Kyon's creation and is an OC).
PS. I don't think the way you wrote about Misaki is a Mary Sue since she has both good and bad traits and is not really that perfect. Plus i love how you portray her.
Keep up the good work!
Actually, the SS in question makes a mention of Kihara-kun having a son involved in the Dark Side. He's not my property alone.
MrTerrorist
2011-07-15, 12:59
Actually, the SS in question makes a mention of Kihara-kun having a son involved in the Dark Side. He's not my property alone.
Wait, i thought i remember reading somewhere that Gensei had another son.
Also, even if he wasn't your property, your version of him being an over protective lolicon over his cousin who defies his own family is just..
*puts on sunglasses*
Crack.
6YMPAH67f4o
Also, even if he wasn't your property, your version of him being an over protective lolicon over his cousin who defies his own family is just..
*puts on sunglasses*
Crack.
Have you read Familiar Troubles? That's the real crack right there.
chrono9472
2011-07-15, 22:57
Have you read Familiar Troubles? That's the real crack right there.
...how about this story "the three heroes are stuck in the middle of 50-100 girls(of course some of the girls from the main series are there too) all lusting over them because of a experiment and they have to escape before they fall victim to them and accel can't use his abilities" can this beat familiar troubles?(i doubt it but w/e:p)
EDIT: i forgot to say but if they get caught,then they can be infected:uhoh:
^So... L4D minus the girl in the group and the zombies are horny girls?
chrono9472
2011-07-15, 23:11
^So... L4D minus the girl in the group and the zombies are horny girls?
i didn't notice it was so similar to l4d but yeah although i added the infected part later, also in l4d they kill the zombies but in this one the girls are still alive so....no killing either.
i only added girls because i thought it would be funny....but i guess having males in the infected would be hilarious too:p(Infected fiamma: *while restraining touma*: k-kamijou-sama....i'm sorry i can't hold it any longer.......ITADAKIMASU!!*does unspeakable things to kamijou touma*):uhoh:
Breidaluk
2011-07-16, 18:36
Arghh! It hurts! This is too much even for a crack fic!! I like the zombie idea but Fiamma!!Blergh!
Master Assassin
2011-07-16, 20:56
Flere you can't call Misaki yet a mary sue because we don't know much about the original character. Few info's about her that makes it left to the fans to think of more about her personality which turn into the writers own version of Misaki. And I like your version of misaki so no problem there. Maybe I'm no good at explaining but she is still not Mary sue plus she is aiming to become perfect in her image or status so it's already to be a bit mary sue.
If you read the reviews you'll know that it's what someone said, and Flere821 is just taking note of it.
Anyways,
@Flere821:
Great work as usual. Loved how he settled the fight with the two girls. I was thinking you're gonna pull a <insert what happened between Touma and Aurreolus(?) here>, but it'll be too implausible and besides, they're just girls :heh:
chrono9472
2011-07-17, 01:05
Arghh! It hurts! This is too much even for a crack fic!! I like the zombie idea but Fiamma!!Blergh!
don't worry, just replace fiamma with someone else thats not as bad and you should be fine....maybe
Hyakimaru
2011-07-17, 07:41
Well after nearly two months I finally finished a new chapter of my crack fic :D.
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6825798/3/
Now with even more crack! :p
With that said I'm also working in another chapter to my oldest Laura/Aleister crack fic, I'll post it here when it's done. :)
Well after nearly two months I finally finished a new chapter of my crack fic :D.
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6825798/3/
Now with even more crack! :p
With that said I'm also working in another chapter to my oldest Laura/Aleister crack fic, I'll post it here when it's done. :)
Terra...bad move...
Oh Fiamma, you magnificent bastard.
Damn it Accel and Vento, you're getting out of hand :heh:
ellifeedn
2011-07-18, 13:33
Is there a fanfic that features Awaki interacting with Misaki?
Is there a fanfic that features Awaki interacting with Misaki?
Not in English fandom.
Breidaluk
2011-07-18, 14:28
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vQqm8DrMpjU
A good idea to the battle ToumaXGunha. The fistfight is very cool
charles88
2011-07-19, 12:23
You know,i have some crossover idea.
Story goes that one day,Touma has to order food from phone as refrigerator spoil and Itsuwa has minor mission with Index and Touma has to finish his home work.Then suddenly he get call from Goddess Helpline and end up summon Belldandy.When she ask for wish from Touma,Touma thought this some sort of magic joke,so he test it by he wish that Belldandy become his lover which end up come true and hiliraty start.
One of the funny scene that after the wish Touma was panic and decieded to go get something just when Index,Itsuwa and Misaka came Touma home to have surprised lunch where they meet Belldandy and i love to see their reaction when Belldandy claim she Touma lover and just happen Touma just came back.
So what do you guys think of my idea?
Miraluka
2011-07-19, 12:33
I think Keiichi will be jealous and Skuld will get annoyed :heh:.
Drifting Wolf
2011-07-19, 12:56
Wouldn't Imagine Breaker send her back to heaven or... !?
Master Assassin
2011-07-19, 13:03
Wouldn't Imagine Breaker send her back to heaven or... !?
Problem is, yes it'll send her back to Heaven.
Unfortunately, the constitution of Belldandy and her power is too great for Imagine Breaker to do that, so it'll take a long time.
... I guess.
... this is a great chance for some seiyuu joke don't you think?
tsunade666
2011-07-19, 14:08
I don't think so. I'm not sure on what rank is higher if it's a goddess vs archangel but gabriel was sent packing back to heaven thanks to imagine breaker.
Chaos2Frozen
2011-07-19, 16:53
Nvm what ranks higher, the question is what exactly is a Goddess in Toaruverse? Or at least whether you can apply the same concept in her original series to this series.
MeisterBabylon
2011-07-19, 20:44
Sup my homies. I've been dabbling with representing science-CHRISTIAN cults in Toaru lately, and I feel that I'm on the verge of a breakthrough. However, something always eludes me when I try to make them Magick.
Leaving Templar conspiracies aside, I'm looking at Church of Christian Science primarily. There's also revelations from Religious Science which have given me too much thought.
I'm left with too many ideas and no direction. So I was hoping to pick your brains a little. Given the wikis of these cults, what would you turn them into when you port them? What characters would you staff them with?
Chaos2Frozen
2011-07-19, 21:00
Sup my homies. I've been dabbling with representing science-CHRISTIAN cults in Toaru lately, and I feel that I'm on the verge of a breakthrough. However, something always eludes me when I try to make them Magick.
Leaving Templar conspiracies aside, I'm looking at Church of Christian Science primarily. There's also revelations from Religious Science which have given me too much thought.
I'm left with too many ideas and no direction. So I was hoping to pick your brains a little. Given the wikis of these cults, what would you turn them into when you port them? What characters would you staff them with?
Let me guess; you've tried to make them as closely related to the original as possible :p ?
First off- I don't know if you're attempting to hybrid Magic and Science again, but don't think so much, we'll keep things simple- Academy City is the only place that is wielding unnatural powers in the name of science. Which means if you want to actually do something with this Church of Christian Science, it's going to be magic no matter how you spin it-
*After actually reading the wiki*
Lol okay, scratch what I've said above; I remember these kinds of people from that episode of Numb3rs- the bunch of jokers that refused medical aid right?
Unless you plan on having them commit terrorism by blowing up a drug facility, these guys aren't going to be anything worthwhile.
charles88
2011-07-19, 22:02
I think Keiichi will be jealous and Skuld will get annoyed .
They will be no Kenichi as its a AU fic where Touma replace him.
I don't think so. I'm not sure on what rank is higher if it's a goddess vs archangel but gabriel was sent packing back to heaven thanks to imagine breaker
I think those 3 Goddess were higher being than archangel as they were child of GOD ALMIGHTY HIMself.That very reason she not effected by Angel Fall.
In fact it was God and Hild responsible for Touma having Imagine Breaker on his right arm and his hidden power
chrono9472
2011-07-19, 22:56
I think those 3 Goddess were higher being than archangel as they were child of GOD ALMIGHTY HIMself.That very reason she not effected by Angel Fall.
In fact it was God and Hild responsible for Touma having Imagine Breaker on his right arm and his hidden power
where did you hear that?:confused:i'm pretty sure imagine breaker's origins are still a mystery....
Chaos2Frozen
2011-07-19, 22:57
where did you hear that?:confused:i'm pretty sure imagine breaker's origins are still a mystery....
That's the answer he's using for his fic...
chrono9472
2011-07-19, 23:03
oh...i missed that hild part.sorry about that.
also is there a valkyrie profile:tcop x toaru fanfic?i'm pretty sure there isn't but i still want to make sure
Chaos2Frozen
2011-07-19, 23:43
oh...i missed that hild part.sorry about that.
also is there a valkyrie profile:tcop x toaru fanfic?i'm pretty sure there isn't but i still want to make sure
On fanfiction.net, these are all the Toaru crossover labelled.
Bleach (1)
Code Geass (1)
D.Gray-Man (1)
Darker than BLACK (2)
Detective Conan/Case Closed (1)
Digimon (1)
Disgaea (1)
Evangelion (1)
Familiar of Zero (1)
Fate/stay night (1)
Generator Rex (1)
Gurren Lagann (1)
Haruhi Suzumiya series (2)
Hayate the Combat Butler (1)
Hetalia - Axis Powers (1)
Kamen Rider (3)
Katekyo Hitman Reborn! (2)
Mass Effect (1)
Negima! Magister Negi Magi/魔法先生ネギま！ (3)
Puella Magi Madoka Magica/魔法少女まどか★マギカ (1)
Ranma (1)
Touhou Project (3)
This is not an absolute list, because some stories have multiple crossovers but they don't have them all under label. And then there are people like me who doesn't label their Fatal Frame/Index and Fear/Index crossovers.
Speaking of crossovers, I've officially crossed the beyond bored line when I started reading the Negima/Index crossover fic... It wasn't bad so far, but I would imagine a cluster-F happening when the Fate/Stay Night characters suddenly became involved... >.>
Drifting Wolf
2011-07-19, 23:59
You think? It's already a nightmare when Shirou fanboys go 'Oh, Shirou can win any fight as long as he's prepared and *traces a weapon to match situation*' much less when you converge multiple series with their own dedicated fanbases.
chrono9472
2011-07-20, 00:06
On fanfiction.net, these are all the Toaru crossover labelled.
Bleach (1)
Code Geass (1)
D.Gray-Man (1)
Darker than BLACK (2)
Detective Conan/Case Closed (1)
Digimon (1)
Disgaea (1)
Evangelion (1)
Familiar of Zero (1)
Fate/stay night (1)
Generator Rex (1)
Gurren Lagann (1)
Haruhi Suzumiya series (2)
Hayate the Combat Butler (1)
Hetalia - Axis Powers (1)
Kamen Rider (3)
Katekyo Hitman Reborn! (2)
Mass Effect (1)
Negima! Magister Negi Magi/魔法先生ネギま! (3)
Puella Magi Madoka Magica/魔法少女まどか★マギカ (1)
Ranma (1)
Touhou Project (3)
This is not an absolute list, because some stories have multiple crossovers but they don't have them all under label. And then there are people like me who doesn't label their Fatal Frame/Index and Fear/Index crossovers.
Speaking of crossovers, I've officially crossed the beyond bored line when I started reading the Negima/Index crossover fic... It wasn't bad so far, but I would imagine a cluster-F happening when the Fate/Stay Night characters suddenly became involved... >.>
i've seen that list, i was wondering if there were fanfics outside of ff.net:p.
don't worry, you just need to hang in there for a few more weeks.....its just like turning into an undead for a limited time
You think? It's already a nightmare when Shirou fanboys go 'Oh, Shirou can win any fight as long as he's prepared and *traces a weapon to match situation*' much less when you converge multiple series with their own dedicated fanbases.
its even more annoying when they treat avalon and gaebolg as some kind of ultimate defense and offense...then again every show has them(probably)
Chaos2Frozen
2011-07-20, 00:16
You think? It's already a nightmare when Shirou fanboys go 'Oh, Shirou can win any fight as long as he's prepared and *traces a weapon to match situation*' much less when you converge multiple series with their own dedicated fanbases.
What I meant was that Negima and Index are two series with laws that don't go too well with each other- Negima is shounen-ish while Index is Index. For whatever reason the Author feels confident enough to throw FSN into the fray... There's too many clash of ideas... Actually, FSN seem to be shounen-ish as well, so it wouldn't be a problem to merge that with Negima... It's Index that would lose out because Espers are extremely restricted, even more so for their magicians.
Drifting Wolf
2011-07-20, 00:18
True enough. Well, we'll just have to see how the author handles it without throwing things outta whack. :heh:
chrono9472
2011-07-20, 00:26
......so...i had this......idea in which aqua.....WEARS A FUCKING WEDDING DRESS!!:upset:
is that supposed to be normal or has my mind been destroyed?:twitch:
Drifting Wolf
2011-07-20, 00:36
Mr.Kyon must have hacked into this forum's coding and embedded subliminal messages into the page, I swear. It must be his sig or something.
Or is it his words?
Or is it?
chrono9472
2011-07-20, 00:43
Mr.Kyon must have hacked into this forum's coding and embedded subliminal messages into the page, I swear. It must be his sig or something.
Or is it his words?
Or is it?
....i think i might have a clue but i'll keep quiet, so i don't get locked in a hermit house in the middle of a jungle filled with hungry human eating animals:uhoh:
so...anyone wanna write a fic about that aqua idea?:innocent:
Chaos2Frozen
2011-07-20, 00:46
...See, randomly putting together the most F-ed up image you can think of is not really how writers work.
It's a cheap thrill like a hairjob, but eventually you'll want some more substantial, cumming together.
That's why Kyon has so many one-shot-quickies while I get the Endless Erotic Hell.
Drifting Wolf
2011-07-20, 00:47
^ What Chaos2Frozen said. It's the same why certain pictures can inspire stories... but fall flat once that thrill subsides.
chrono9472
2011-07-20, 00:50
...See, randomly putting together the most F-ed up image you can think of is not really how writers work.
It's a cheap thrill like a hairjob, but eventually you'll want some more substantial.
i know...but i still wouldn't mind reading about the hilarious turn of events which led to that scene:p, plus once that scene's over we could always make up other images like that...i even have some more of them,though i guess these ideas would be more one shot oriented....
of course that last part of the previous post was a joke, i can't see anyone actually writing a fic about that
MeisterBabylon
2011-07-20, 18:27
Lay off the inneudoes you deprived twats. :p
Meanwhile, I'll leave this here:There comes a day...
A day like no other
When the world's detectives find themselves united against a common threat...
To fight the foes no single detective can withstand.
On that day...
...the Round Table is reborn.
Now that I resurrected my Tainaka Tarou remake, this multiple dimension cross is next. :uhoh:
Chaos2Frozen
2011-07-20, 20:07
While not exactly about Index, for the frequent FF.net users can I ask if I want to replace a chapter of an existing story with a new chapter, would it somehow affect the reviews I had for that chapter?
Secondly, what's the difference between 'hit' and 'visitor'?
Lay off the inneudoes you deprived twats. :p
I'm not a machine, I can't get turn it off!
Meanwhile, I'll leave this here:There comes a day...
A day like no other
When the world's detectives find themselves united against a common threat...
To fight the foes no single detective can withstand.
On that day...
...the Round Table is reborn.
Now that I resurrected my Tainaka Tarou remake, this multiple dimension cross is next. :uhoh:
That reminds me, do you think you can conjure up some good old movie trailer snippets like you used to do in Canaan :p ?
Flere821
2011-07-20, 21:10
While not exactly about Index, for the frequent FF.net users can I ask if I want to replace a chapter of an existing story with a new chapter, would it somehow affect the reviews I had for that chapter?
Secondly, what's the difference between 'hit' and 'visitor'?
If you replace a chapter, the review stays there.
Each IP address visiting on that day is a 'visitor', while everytime someone accesses the story is a 'hit'. You can have the same person looking at your story 20 times to get 20 hits, but there would still be one visitor.
Chaos2Frozen
2011-07-20, 21:23
Ahhh that makes sense thanks... One more thing, what are the C2s and why do I have those :heh: ?
TkMacintosh
2011-07-20, 21:37
Ahhh that makes sense thanks... One more thing, what are the C2s and why do I have those :heh: ?
C2's are a collection of various stories gathered together by the group/person that holds authority in that C2. The reason why your stories have C2's is because the person/persons in charge of that C2 put your story there.
MeisterBabylon
2011-07-20, 23:48
That reminds me, do you think you can conjure up some good old movie trailer snippets like you used to do in Canaan :p ?
Find me good enough music (or 2) for the mood, and I'll conjure you one. :p
Master Assassin
2011-07-21, 04:19
......so...i had this......idea in which aqua.....WEARS A FUCKING WEDDING DRESS!!:upset:
is that supposed to be normal or has my mind been destroyed?:twitch:
Someone needs to curb all the crack else everything will look normal to me, and make normal writers look like the ones writing crack. :|
You know what makes crack good? When you have it in moderation.
Seriously, go back to normal hamburgers instead of ingesting crack :rolleyes:
MeisterBabylon
2011-07-21, 05:11
This is HERESY! You must be one with shiny crack!
Master Assassin
2011-07-21, 05:25
This is HERESY! You must be one with shiny crack!
Oh please. It's not so funny anymore...
MeisterBabylon
2011-07-21, 06:19
:heh:
True, I was just going with the flow. Btw, now that I can no longer keep track of whatever's going on in this thread, anyone want me to turn my post into an Index? If so, post the links to the post/FFnet publications you like and I'll add it to the Index.
Flere821
2011-07-22, 03:38
New chapter of Minds, Memories and Misfortune out here:
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7049587/9/Minds_Memories_and_Misfortune
I tried to write a omake, but after trying and failing a few times I gave up. Give me some more ideas and I might add this onto the chapter later.
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OMAKE (contains crack)
A conversation set some time later…
“So, how did you meet Sogiita here, Misaka?” Touma asked.
In the mobile hospital and sitting on a stool, Touma have just finished being patched up by Heaven Canceller. Gunha sat next to him, also going through a check up.
“Um, well…” Mikoto tried to find a way to explain. ‘I used him as practise for when I caught you I can beat you up’ doesn’t sound like a good thing to say right now.
“We met once before, and I took a few attacks from her. Nothing too serious.” Gunha waved it off. “She had guts, that for sure. Even the trees in the entire park were blown away with that last attack too, that was impressive.”
“Wow. And I thought I had it bad.” Touma sympathized. “I’m pretty sure she never did that much to me-”
“Are you really that forgetful! I once used my full power at you and you got angry at me as my thunder from the sky fried your fridge all the way on the other side of the district! Am I really that much of a non-entity that you can’t even to make the effort to remember what I did?” Mikoto interjected. Immediately afterwards she realised she just admitted in front of everyone she was the culprit behind the occasional blackouts of District 7, and blushed in embarrassment.
“That was Misaka-san?” Saten asked. “Guess it wasn’t something like a haunted worker at the power plant then…”
“…” Touma didn’t remember that time, so it must have been before his memory loss.
... [no linking parts here]
“I thought what we had was special…” Touma sighed. “So in the end you’d go after anyone that fits your criteria? I’m disappointed.”
“No, that’s not it…!” Mikoto said frantically. “He was just someone that annoyed me once. It wasn’t like I ever saw him again!”
“Oh?” Misaki said, a hint of mischievous intent entering her tone. “Is there a reason you’re denying this so extremely? One might almost take it the wrong way…”
(...)
“Forget about relationships with women!” Gunha declared. “For those are but mere shadows of the bond between men! A connection built upon guts and manly tears is the only way to go! We would need no other sustenance for our souls that burn brightly under the sun!”
“I hear ya, brother.” Touma bumped fists with Gunha. “I have seen the errors of my way, and I’m abandoning the problems that the members of the opposite sex give me. Misfortune? Screw that.
“With my own hands I will carve out a life that defies Misfortune! No more being bitten on the head by a angry nun, being shocked by lightning, or being attacked by the iron fist of the impregnable wall!”
“To the Future!” The two young men embraced each other roughly.
Uiharu fell unconscious from a massive and impressive nosebleed fountain at the scene in front of her, and Saten started to hyperventilate in trembling excitement.
Misaki didn’t know whether to stare in shock at the ridiculousness of what she is seeing in front of her, or to just laugh at how things have turned out.
Mikoto on the other hand went for the first option; she didn’t even want to think about the things Tsuchimikado Maika has shown in her manga, let alone applying it to the two in front of her.
Soon, a new (urban) legend was born in Academy City.
^What could've been the best sex scene in a medical van in fanfic history.
tsunade666
2011-07-22, 07:33
nice stuff been waiting for this. Weekend wouldn't be much fun without a new chapter of "Minds, Memories and Misfortune" though I find it hard to swallow the idea of an experiment event where Imagine breaker was made into public. It felt like it's the same as magic being known to the world. But I would probably take it as the people of England do when they participate in the war -_- Nice bro fight.
outerelf
2011-07-22, 08:07
*straps on BL and Yaoi Headband* Might I make a suggestion?
New chapter of Minds, Memories and Misfortune out here:
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7049587/9/Minds_Memories_and_Misfortune
I tried to write a omake, but after trying and failing a few times I gave up. Give me some more ideas and I might add this onto the chapter later.
---
OMAKE (contains crack)
A conversation set some time later…
“So, how did you meet Sogiita here, Misaka?” Touma asked.
In the mobile hospital and sitting on a stool, Touma have just finished being patched up by Heaven Canceller. Gunha sat next to him, also going through a check up.
“Um, well…” Mikoto tried to find a way to explain. ‘I used him as practise for when I caught you I can beat you up’ doesn’t sound like a good thing to say right now.
“We met once before, and I took a few attacks from her. Nothing too serious.” Gunha waved it off. “She had guts, that for sure. Even the trees in the entire park were blown away with that last attack too, that was impressive.”
“Wow. And I thought I had it bad.” Touma sympathized. “I’m pretty sure she never did that much to me-”
“Are you really that forgetful! I once used my full power at you and you got angry at me as my thunder from the sky fried your fridge all the way on the other side of the district! Am I really that much of a non-entity that you can’t even to make the effort to remember what I did?” Mikoto interjected. Immediately afterwards she realised she just admitted in front of everyone she was the culprit behind the occasional blackouts of District 7, and blushed in embarrassment.
“That was Misaka-san?” Saten asked. “Guess it wasn’t something like a haunted worker at the power plant then…”
“…” Touma didn’t remember that time, so it must have been before his memory loss.
... [no linking parts here]
This is the part where actually it may be easy to have Touma just simply start grumbling. He's not like most heroes where he attempts to make certain not to say the first thing, so anything complainy might be fine. Like, "I'm trying to forget that you were the one who destroyed my fridge!" Or something that makes Mikoto mad, and then have him go on tot he next part.
“I thought what we had was special…” Touma sighed. “So in the end you’d go after anyone that fits your criteria? I’m disappointed.”
“No, that’s not it…!” Mikoto said frantically. “He was just someone that annoyed me once. It wasn’t like I ever saw him again!”
“Oh?” Misaki said, a hint of mischievous intent entering her tone. “Is there a reason you’re denying this so extremely? One might almost take it the wrong way…”
(...)
“Forget about relationships with women!” Gunha declared. “For those are but mere shadows of the bond between men! A connection built upon guts and manly tears is the only way to go! We would need no other sustenance for our souls that burn brightly under the sun!”
This second pause in the action could take place where Misaki and Mikoto are talking and ignoring the boys pretty much, Gunha and Touma are watching them, before Touma starts muttering his catch phrase over and over about how he's gonna get killed- at which point Gunha, not needing to be quiet, loludly proclaims to forget relations with women :D
There you go, my probably not needed advice. I suggest you wait until the crack king comes on over to give it that special spice.
Master Assassin
2011-07-22, 10:01
Oi oi, you guys are REALLY making normal fic writers look like they're the ones writing crack, and you guys are all the NORMAL writers in comparison.
Really now... but thanks for another update, Mr Flere.
I know! Have Kakine casually walk in and join in on the action! He likes manhugs too :heh: Seriously, his entire one-sided rivalry with Accelolita would've been solved if the poor guy had gotten a manhug.
Flere821
2011-07-22, 18:17
Thanks for the tips. I was planning on throwing a shirtless Motoharu into the scene and show off his muscles, but that's probably overkill :heh:
Seriously, Touma+Gunha+Motoharu. The world is not ready.
Thanks for the tips. I was planning on throwing a shirtless Motoharu into the scene and show off his muscles, but that's probably overkill :heh:
Seriously, Touma+Gunha+Motoharu. The world is not ready.
Even Pierce would freak da fuck out from dat.
outerelf
2011-07-22, 19:18
Oi oi, you guys are REALLY making normal fic writers look like they're the ones writing crack, and you guys are all the NORMAL writers in comparison.
I'm pretty certain we are the normal writers -is shot-
I'm pretty certain we are the normal writers -is shot-
-Swirls is revolver- How dare you insult the Crack Emperor in such a manner.
Tsukino Kage Spectre
2011-07-22, 23:31
That fight started slow and built up to a good finish. I really don't mind that Touma lost, he always loses... unless it counts. Misaka on the other hand, might not see it that way...
Gunha pissing Touma off is giving me a wish to see Bros Brothers continued. That's the one with Accel, Saten, Pierce and Tsuchimikado flying on a couch with Touma tied to it screaming his head off. That one had Touma and Gunha too...
This did raise the thought to me though, how will Accelerator and Kakine react to this?
And on a completely unrelated tangent, anyone here see Puella Magi? For those who have, good. Why do I think that even Vector Change at full Power is useless against Time Stop? Because Physics says a vector is magnitude given direction, and how is there going to be any vectors when time is stopped? Imagine Breaker might still work though, given that Homura's power is supernatural.
Chaos2Frozen
2011-07-23, 00:30
And on a completely unrelated tangent, anyone here see Puella Magi? For those who have, good. Why do I think that even Vector Change at full Power is useless against Time Stop? Because Physics says a vector is magnitude given direction, and how is there going to be any vectors when time is stopped? Imagine Breaker might still work though, given that Homura's power is supernatural.
You're thinking about the vectors from only 4 dimensions. Accelerator has been able to affect vectors going through and up to the 11th dimension.
But this is all tricky business, I don't want to say one thing over the other- In the first place, how is it that she can still move despite stopping time? Is there a set of conditions like an IFF system that allows her to be unaffected to her own magic? How does that work? Brainwave signals? DNA? Chemical Composition? Voice recognition? Biological Mass? If so can you copy that condition, or to take advantage of those loopholes by replicating her signature? Or is there magic itself that is counteracting the time stopping energy? Can you replicate those energy onto yourself? Since it's glowing, that means it has to be something on the electromagnetic spectrum-
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But no, this isn't what I'm here for :eyespin: ! Once again a question for frequent FF.net users, is there certain symbols that you can't seem to use when posting your stories? For example, I can't get the system to save my '>', and for whatever reason, it doesn't allow me to keep my double spacing... Any ideas?
But no, this isn't what I'm here for :eyespin: ! Once again a question for frequent FF.net users, is there certain symbols that you can't seem to use when posting your stories? For example, I can't get the system to save my '>', and for whatever reason, it doesn't allow me to keep my double spacing... Any ideas?
FF.net being shitty. Same reason we can't have "!?" or "?!" without hyphens.
Also, I've decided to return to Promise (albeit, revised - the culture festival part being taken out, it'll be a seperate sequel fic) and let go of my batshit "Accelerator-has-a-father-that-blackmails" story.
Seriously... It was too crazy to begin with... My Holy Crack couldn't handle it.
My Aeon is too inferior for this. I need to take courses from 30rock's Tracy Jordan to handle this crack.
It was going to involve time travel, paradoxes and Fridge-kun returning from the grave as a Gay Cyborg Ninja with karate moves.
This would ultimately culminate in the conclusion that revealed that, in fact, the blackmail letter was a hoax and was a conspiracy set up by none other than Accelerator's and Worst's lovechild to ensure her parents got together and that she was born - and to ensure that Accelerator did not take the Fridge-kun route.
Kihara-kun Junior from the future accidentally opened a timerift while trying to make a sandwich that began the entire troubles that threatened Lovechild-chan's existence in the space-time continuum.
It was supposed to end in a WTF ending when Accelerator's dad - who was decidedly revealed to be dead at this point and more than once referred to in flashbacks, where he was a complete moron to the point Accelerator-tan was already facepalming - appears and reveals himself as LORD FUCKING DRACULA.
And Accelerator never mentioned this and casually acknowledges his father is Dracula.
All seems hopeless, but Himegami just happens to be nearby and melts Dracula into a Pizza the Hut type of thing.
chrono9472
2011-07-23, 01:27
New chapter of Minds, Memories and Misfortune out here:
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7049587/9/Minds_Memories_and_Misfortune
I tried to write a omake, but after trying and failing a few times I gave up. Give me some more ideas and I might add this onto the chapter later.
---
OMAKE (contains crack)
A conversation set some time later…
“So, how did you meet Sogiita here, Misaka?” Touma asked.
In the mobile hospital and sitting on a stool, Touma have just finished being patched up by Heaven Canceller. Gunha sat next to him, also going through a check up.
“Um, well…” Mikoto tried to find a way to explain. ‘I used him as practise for when I caught you I can beat you up’ doesn’t sound like a good thing to say right now.
“We met once before, and I took a few attacks from her. Nothing too serious.” Gunha waved it off. “She had guts, that for sure. Even the trees in the entire park were blown away with that last attack too, that was impressive.”
“Wow. And I thought I had it bad.” Touma sympathized. “I’m pretty sure she never did that much to me-”
“Are you really that forgetful! I once used my full power at you and you got angry at me as my thunder from the sky fried your fridge all the way on the other side of the district! Am I really that much of a non-entity that you can’t even to make the effort to remember what I did?” Mikoto interjected. Immediately afterwards she realised she just admitted in front of everyone she was the culprit behind the occasional blackouts of District 7, and blushed in embarrassment.
“That was Misaka-san?” Saten asked. “Guess it wasn’t something like a haunted worker at the power plant then…”
“…” Touma didn’t remember that time, so it must have been before his memory loss.
... [no linking parts here]
“I thought what we had was special…” Touma sighed. “So in the end you’d go after anyone that fits your criteria? I’m disappointed.”
“No, that’s not it…!” Mikoto said frantically. “He was just someone that annoyed me once. It wasn’t like I ever saw him again!”
“Oh?” Misaki said, a hint of mischievous intent entering her tone. “Is there a reason you’re denying this so extremely? One might almost take it the wrong way…”
(...)
“Forget about relationships with women!” Gunha declared. “For those are but mere shadows of the bond between men! A connection built upon guts and manly tears is the only way to go! We would need no other sustenance for our souls that burn brightly under the sun!”
“I hear ya, brother.” Touma bumped fists with Gunha. “I have seen the errors of my way, and I’m abandoning the problems that the members of the opposite sex give me. Misfortune? Screw that.
“With my own hands I will carve out a life that defies Misfortune! No more being bitten on the head by a angry nun, being shocked by lightning, or being attacked by the iron fist of the impregnable wall!”
“To the Future!” The two young men embraced each other roughly.
Uiharu fell unconscious from a massive and impressive nosebleed fountain at the scene in front of her, and Saten started to hyperventilate in trembling excitement.
Misaki didn’t know whether to stare in shock at the ridiculousness of what she is seeing in front of her, or to just laugh at how things have turned out.
Mikoto on the other hand went for the first option; she didn’t even want to think about the things Tsuchimikado Maika has shown in her manga, let alone applying it to the two in front of her.
Soon, a new (urban) legend was born in Academy City.
....i love it!,the way you were able to characterize gunha from the little information we have on him is amazing.the fight and watching kihara acting like a good little boy were just as good if not better. Also...you just love bringing up the baseball bat don't you?
and a question, did you make up the meteor smash attack or was it already used in the novels?
Thanks for the tips. I was planning on throwing a shirtless Motoharu into the scene and show off his muscles, but that's probably overkill :heh:
Seriously, Touma+Gunha+Motoharu. The world is not ready.
......damn you world!:frustrated:
It was going to involve time travel, paradoxes and Fridge-kun returning from the grave as a Gay Cyborg Ninja with karate moves.
This would ultimately culminate in the conclusion that revealed that, in fact, the blackmail letter was a hoax and was a conspiracy set up by none other than Accelerator's and Worst's lovechild to ensure her parents got together and that she was born - and to ensure that Accelerator did not take the Fridge-kun route.
Kihara-kun Junior from the future accidentally opened a timerift while trying to make a sandwich that began the entire troubles that threatened Lovechild-chan's existence in the space-time continuum.
It was supposed to end in a WTF ending when Accelerator's dad - who was decidedly revealed to be dead at this point and more than once referred to in flashbacks, where he was a complete moron to the point Accelerator-tan was already facepalming - appears and reveals himself as LORD FUCKING DRACULA.
And Accelerator never mentioned this and casually acknowledges his father is Dracula.
All seems hopeless, but Himegami just happens to be nearby and melts Dracula into a Pizza the Hut type of thing.
this is more dangerous than a grimoire:twitch:....mostly because of how random it is....
though accel's father returning sounds pretty good.....mostly because of what accel might do to him(emphasize on 'might').
outerelf
2011-07-23, 09:39
But no, this isn't what I'm here for :eyespin: ! Once again a question for frequent FF.net users, is there certain symbols that you can't seem to use when posting your stories? For example, I can't get the system to save my '>', and for whatever reason, it doesn't allow me to keep my double spacing... Any ideas?
Yes. Do you know what html tags are? And short cuts? You can't use them. FF.net doesn't like any symbols at all, the '>' are no-no's, as are '*'. If it's anything then a letter, then it generally doesn't get saved.
Also, double-spacing is considered a mistake. But- if you go into 'edit story' and go into html mode, I think if you enter <p> or even <break> it should work. Hope that helps.
Chaos2Frozen
2011-07-23, 09:46
Yes. Do you know what html tags are? And short cuts? You can't use them. FF.net doesn't like any symbols at all, the '>' are no-no's, as are '*'. If it's anything then a letter, then it generally doesn't get saved.
Also, double-spacing is considered a mistake. But- if you go into 'edit story' and go into html mode, I think if you enter <p> or even <break> it should work. Hope that helps.
I generally produce 6-9k words per chapter using the Light Novel writting style meaning short paragraphs but alot of them, if I do <p> or <break> for every paragraph, I'll die... I'll REALLY die!!
I just hope... the readers understand... It's not that I want my wall of texts pack so tightly :eyespin: !
Oh yeah, I've manage to find the symbols that is accepted-
~.~.~.~.~.~.~.~.~.~.~.~.~.~.~.~.~.~.~.~.~.~
If you don't want to use their break line, or if it's not appropriate, the above would work :)
Master Assassin
2011-07-23, 09:46
And on a completely unrelated tangent, anyone here see Puella Magi? For those who have, good. Why do I think that even Vector Change at full Power is useless against Time Stop? Because Physics says a vector is magnitude given direction, and how is there going to be any vectors when time is stopped? Imagine Breaker might still work though, given that Homura's power is supernatural.
A movement of a vector follows velocity and time. Like you said, once time is stopped, so does the velocity for that vector, and thus the rule of the vector cease to be (along with the existence of it). Unless if the Indexverse states that time is also a vector and Accelerator can stop it (albeit applying rules that is workable with it) then there's no way he can prevent Homura from stopping time.
.... But that doesn't stop our resident "powers don't work on this guy" dude from ignoring and cancelling Homura's time stop like it was nothing...
... At any rate, I am not thinking of making a versus between these two. Well, in my writings, they're already working together to stop the bigger evil (Kyuubey and hoardes of him).
I think I should write the Madoka girls and our Three Heroes starting a war against the Incubators. Just because I think the idea seems cool.
MrTerrorist
2011-07-23, 10:52
Poor Touma, everytime he tries to escape form one of Gunha's attacks, the latter goes "Nonsense! I know you can block this if you have guts!" lol
Anyway, great chapter again Flere821.
Master Assassin
2011-07-23, 11:04
Poor Touma, everytime he tries to escape form one of Gunha's attacks, the latter goes "Nonsense! I know you can block this if you have guts!" lol
Anyway, great chapter again Flere821.
Strangely, I can actually see Touma and Gunha going for the "bros forever" route...
...happening. I guess this is one ending we're all secretly are GAR for.
Of Science and Magics, just updated.
Misaka awakened!
Sumeragi
2011-07-23, 16:57
Of Science and Magics, just updated.
Misaka awakened!
I would find that next-to-impossible, considering how "sane" and "rooted to reality" the person is.
Flere821
2011-07-23, 21:01
Thanks for all your comments on my fic, everyone: they're very much appreciated :D
Oh, and 'Meteor Smash' was not from the novels.
Gunha + Touma, I might throw some more scenes in: I do have one tentatively planned...
Kakine would know Touma's off limits, and frankly a goody-good hero that knows jack all about the Darkness wouldn't be worth his time when he has bigger fish to fry (ie Accelerator and getting out of his 'Spare Plan' label).
Accel on the other hand... while I won't say it's 'impossible' to fit him in, I don't think I can manage that. Gunha is enough of a handful to write as it is, so I'll stick with Gunha + Touma 'crack' instead of trying to fit Accel in.
(on a side note, I'm amazed even Mr.Kyon would think something is going too far (Gunha+Touma+Motoharu) - his insanity from the spoilers way surpassed what I suggested >.>)
And yes, I also read Of Science and Magic's latest chapter. I've also gave a review on that outlining why that won't work, if anyone's interested.
Though apart from the break of canon mechanics, it wasn't that bad.
charles88
2011-07-24, 12:39
Actually Flere821 and Windraider,Of Science and Magic fic is not the first featuring Misaka awaken.The first fic feature that is The Angel of Thunder!
MrTerrorist
2011-07-24, 14:03
Of Science and Magics Ch12 (http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6873009/12/Of_Science_and_Magics)
Oh. My God.
Mikoto awakens. The Railgun awkens!
That was the best chapter ever! I love it! I really love it!
So what if Accelerator and Kakine are the only ones that can awaken? Who cares!?
This is an AU fic and it was one of the bests fics i ever read!
Excellent work Stormwolfex! I hope to see more chapters from your fic.
Drifting Wolf
2011-07-24, 14:18
Not anymore, it seems. Stormwolfex has just rewritten the Chapter, stating that he prefers to use canon mechanics rather than deviating from it ( I can understand why, it'd be awkward for Mikoto to awaken when we have so little data to work from) BUT!
Touma's Right Arm gets cut off and Teitoku damn near pisses his pants
Frankly, I didn't mind Mikoto awakening, since the concept of 'awakening' was very vague in the first place but the thing about the 'Divine' has apparently bugged stormwolfex as well, since he felt 'uncomfortable' putting her 'awakening' like this. Still, I like it when the author works with what he's got, is willing to admit he made a mistake and attempts to adhere to canon mechanics as much as he can.
MrTerrorist
2011-07-24, 20:50
What? http://www.laymark.com/i/m/m071.gif NOOOOOOOO!!!!!
Why didn't i save that page before it was rewritten?!http://www.laymark.com/i/m/m040.gif
Flere821
2011-07-24, 21:18
Hey everyone, I have a question:
On a off-chance, I've got the next chapter largely written. Now I'm wondering should I wait for my usual schedule of updating every 7 days or to just post it within the next 1-2 days after I make some changes. If I do upload it, there might be a longer wait for the one after that (ie, possibly more than the usual 7 days) as it might need a bit more time than usual to finish.
So, thoughts?
Chaos2Frozen
2011-07-24, 21:22
Hey everyone, I have a question:
On a off-chance, I've got the next chapter largely written. Now I'm wondering should I wait for my usual schedule of updating every 7 days or to just post it within the next 1-2 days after I make some changes. If I do upload it, there might be a longer wait for the one after that (ie, possibly more than the usual 7 days) as it might need a bit more time than usual to finish.
So, thoughts?
I've sort of experimented on this before; you should wait, give it a decent sized interval. For no other reason than to reel in as many reviews as you can squeeze out of your readers :cool: If you post them too quickly, they'll skimp out on the offerings.
Flere821
2011-07-24, 21:27
I've sort of experimented on this before; you should wait, give it a decent sized interval. For no other reason than to reel in as many reviews as you can squeeze out of your readers :cool:
That would normally be the case... except I have some reviewers raging about Gunha is overpowered, Touma shouldn't be that weak, and overall my writing just sucks. :heh:
If it was 'constructive' reviews, then I would wait a few more days.
There was one even accusing me making a OC (Gunha) beat up Touma, and both Gunha & Misaki are Mary Sues. I had quite a laugh on that, guess people don't all read LNs even when it's available.
Really, I sort of felt like give them something else to flame about. The usual 'no touma should not have lost against gunha you *censored*' is getting old :heh:
Chaos2Frozen
2011-07-24, 21:38
Well, that sucks. The most complaint I've ever gotten was my horrendous grammar skills- There's a reason I barely passed my 'O' levels people :frustrated: !
Well if you really want to, by all means- You can also use that update to set some records straight.
...Wait, they thought Gunha was an OC?
Flere821
2011-07-24, 21:49
Well, that sucks. The most complaint I've ever gotten was my horrendous grammar skills- There's a reason I barely passed my 'O' levels people :frustrated: !
Well if you really want to, by all means- You can also use that update to set some records straight.
...Wait, they thought Gunha was an OC?
Go to my profile on FFN (link here: http://www.fanfiction.net/~flere821), scroll to my stories and click on the 'reviews' word next to the title of my fic.
One guy named 'Jordan' with no account on FFN happened to be particularly foul-mouthed, haven't read the LNs and was the one saying Gunha was a OC. I laughed at how idiotic some people can be at times.
Chaos2Frozen
2011-07-24, 22:00
It's a weird feeling... To have someone 'defending' the combat capability of Touma, I'm really surprised there aren't more people creating OCs to beat him up.... But it's too bad he's an idiot- we can't have people like that in our faction; he needs to die...
...On a similar topic, I've noticed a number of people use Mikoto as the... Hmm, I can't remember the term, but basically a number of people like to beat up either Mikoto or Kuroko to show off their new strong character. While in fact in canon, this role is given to Kaori :heh:
Well, that sucks. The most complaint I've ever gotten was my horrendous grammar skills- There's a reason I barely passed my 'O' levels people :frustrated: !
u mad bro?
:3
Chaos2Frozen
2011-07-24, 23:35
Oh yeahhh~ Absolutely Furious...
>.>
Do I hate him...? Do I love him...? Choices, choices, choices...
Tsundere Chaos~ <3 <3 <3~
Chaos2Frozen
2011-07-25, 00:15
“Haahh?! B-Bakka jyanai no!?! Hontou wa jibun de dekirun dakedo! H-Hmph!”
http://www.darkmirage.com/blog/wp-content/uploads/2011/02/06_tsundere07.jpg
chrono9472
2011-07-25, 01:28
“Haahh?! B-Bakka jyanai no!?! Hontou wa jibun de dekirun dakedo! H-Hmph!”
http://www.darkmirage.com/blog/wp-content/uploads/2011/02/06_tsundere07.jpg
:twitch:.....i'll never look at jesus the same way again.....:dots:
MrTerrorist
2011-07-25, 02:13
That would normally be the case... except I have some reviewers raging about Gunha is overpowered, Touma shouldn't be that weak, and overall my writing just sucks. :heh:
If it was 'constructive' reviews, then I would wait a few more days.
There was one even accusing me making a OC (Gunha) beat up Touma, and both Gunha & Misaki are Mary Sues. I had quite a laugh on that, guess people don't all read LNs even when it's available.
Really, I sort of felt like give them something else to flame about. The usual 'no touma should not have lost against gunha you *censored*' is getting old :heh:
Don't listen to those readers who accuse you of making Gunha & Misaki into Mary Sues. I don't see anything that imply that they are are Mary Sues. All i see is a boy who is honorable yet is an idiotic hero who is just crazy awesome and a sane rich girl who is very nice yet disturbingly powerful enough to screw anyone.
I enjoy your characterization of these two in Minds, Memories, and Misfortune so keep up the good work.
It's a weird feeling... To have someone 'defending' the combat capability of Touma, I'm really surprised there aren't more people creating OCs to beat him up.... But it's too bad he's an idiot- we can't have people like that in our faction; he needs to die...
...On a similar topic, I've noticed a number of people use Mikoto as the... Hmm, I can't remember the term, but basically a number of people like to beat up either Mikoto or Kuroko to show off their new strong character. While in fact in canon, this role is given to Kaori :heh:
I find these fics hard to believe since the only people who can beat those two are powerful Level 4s like Awaki, the Level 5s like Mugino and powerful magicians like Kaori. Except for Angel of Thunder, i don't like the idea of a fic of some no good Skill-Out can beat Mikoto and Kuroko.
“Haahh?! B-Bakka jyanai no!?! Hontou wa jibun de dekirun dakedo! H-Hmph!”
http://www.darkmirage.com/blog/wp-content/uploads/2011/02/06_tsundere07.jpg
http://i.huffpost.com/gen/290426/thumbs/r-CHRISTOPHER-HITCHENS-large570.jpg
Anyways, back in topic.
God, how long will my semi-rewritte of Promise still take me?
My standards are way higher than when I first wrote that ero-ero world-premiere Accelerator X Worst scene -- which, by the way, was Chaos' idea in the first place.
Well, while my eyes and finger burn for the Angriest Couple, here's something...cryptic!
...Hopefully I don't end up scrapping this project too.
...It's already doomed, isn't it...
“Boss; Kuroyoru and her team are down. She got way too cocky with what you gave her.”
…
“I hear ya, but you’ve got to give her credit—she did accomplish the goal of uniting Hamazura and Accelerator. However, the Directors won’t be breaking their negotiations despite that.”
…
“What I mean is that Aleister’s Right-Handed Goody Two-Shoes got involved. You know what that means.”
…
“How should I know why Kamijou is so special? All I know is what you know: He’s a Level 0 with a negating ability that pounded Accelerator into a fuckin’ sissy little bitch.”
“Anyways… shouldn’t we get rid of Kuroyoru? That Kamijou bastard seems to want to bring her to a hospital—oh would you like to see how frowny Number One is right now. Guilty pleasure, and what a fine one indeed.”
…
“I can get a clean shot from up here—hell, maybe I should off Hamazura while I’m at it.”
“On second thought, I’d rather not get ITEM on my ass.”
…
“…Boss, I don’t put my personal feelings into our line of work. Do you want her dead or not?”
…
“…Fine, don’t come regretting your decision later on. So then what? Because of Kamijou, your plan just crumbled like the Twin Towers. Got any fixes, white hair?”
…
“Ha, just like you! Punched in the nuts, and what d’you do? Act like it was all part of ‘The Plan’. Never a dull moment, eh, Boss?”
“ You sleep tight while I take good care of those idiots who couldn’t even handle that unique clone that hangs around Accelerator…”
The phone call ended there.
Having spoken to the “Boss”, the Freshmen operative whispered a few words before leaving his vantage point.
“The Ichihanaransai, huh… That crazy bastard.”
Chaos2Frozen
2011-07-25, 02:36
I find these fics hard to believe since the only people who can beat those two are powerful Level 4s like Awaki, the Level 5s like Mugino and powerful magicians like Kaori. Except for Angel of Thunder, i don't like the idea of a fic of some no good Skill-Out can beat Mikoto and Kuroko.
Ah I found it- The Worf Effect (http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/TheWorfEffect). You know the whole mysterious shadowy dark figure?
In this case, the guilty party use Mikoto to show off their brand new character that is super strong. Actually it's not only that, I've noticed when there's a new threat of any kind, Mikoto would usually be used as a victim of some sort.
Don't listen to those readers who accuse you of making Gunha & Misaki into Mary Sues. I don't see anything that imply that they are are Mary Sues. All i see is a boy who is honorable yet is an idiotic hero who is just crazy awesome and a sane rich girl who is very nice yet disturbingly powerful enough to screw anyone.
I enjoy your characterization of these two in Minds, Memories, and Misfortune so keep up the good work.
Well since I'm here I might as well dig up the definition of a Sues, because I swear that term has been misused and abused far too often- WHAT THE FUDGE :twitch: ?! WHY ARE THERE SO MANY SUES DEFINITIONS :eyespin: ?!?!
Ah I found it- The Worf Effect (http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/TheWorfEffect). You know the whole mysterious shadowy dark figure?
In this case, the guilty party use Mikoto to show off their brand new character that is super strong. Actually it's not only that, I've noticed when there's a new threat of any kind, Mikoto would usually be used as a victim of some sort.
Yep, which is why someone might need to put Touma in that role to even things out.
Seriously, why don't you just shoot him (http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/WhyDontYouJustShootHim)?
Here are my plans for any serious and competent Villain who wants to incap/kill Kamijou Touma:
General rule: Don't use Magic or ESP Science stuff. Kamijou is like Uwe Boll -- the more shit you throw at him, the more powerful he becomes.
Plan A-
1. Train in martial arts in a monk sanctuary in Tibet or something.
2. Train your own mooks in martial arts.
3. Team up together and murder him!
Plan B-
1. Two words: Carbon. Monoxyde.
2. CARBON MONOXYDE!
3. Seriously, pump it in while he's sleeping. He won't even know what hit him.
Plan C-
1. Get a belt-fed gun.
2. Get ammo belts.
3. Watch the Rambo movies back-to-back.
4. Aim in his general direction until he drops to the ground.
5. Shoot an entire clip in his head.
6. TEABAG HIM!
Drifting Wolf
2011-07-25, 03:31
Frankly speaking, if there's a character they don't like or if the author even makes a slight deviation from canon mechanics, you have people calling them sues and god mode sues and what not just to satisfy themselves.
I mean, what gives, it's a fanfiction. People should take some liberties unless they have a strict code they adhere to or something. It makes the story more interesting rather than the same old rehash and battles.
Like, for 'Of Science and Magics", stormwolfex said that he prefers to adhere to the canon mechanics and since he violated it, he actually rewrote the last part since that's the way he does things. I'm cool with that.
And in 'Minds of Memories', Flere821 took some liberties with what Gunha could do with his 'AIM Warping' or something like that. It still fits the scope of his power, though I thought he would have preferred keeping it up close and personal like MEN.
But it was cool. ^^
People should learn to take things with a pinch of salt, in my opinion.
But, as a reader to all you readers... how many of you would prefer the story to be more 'Original Flavour' rather than taking 'Broad Strokes' from canon?
Chaos2Frozen
2011-07-25, 03:47
Yep, which is why someone might need to put Touma in that role to even things out.
There's no point in doing that because it won't establish how cool and awesome your new character is since Touma is a weak hero.
Frankly speaking, if there's a character they don't like or if the author even makes a slight deviation from canon mechanics, you have people calling them sues and god mode sues and what not just to satisfy themselves.
After a glance at the list of Sues, I'm almost certain anybody that does anything good and meaningful is liable to be labeled a Sue.
Everyone must have a dark side! Everyone must do one bad thing!
But, as a reader to all you readers... how many of you would prefer the story to be more 'Original Flavour' rather than taking 'Broad Strokes' from canon?
Simply put, if I wanted an AU with the cast of the series completely westernized and in high school (I'm look at you Digimon, Teen Titans, Naruto, Shaman King, Fatal Frame, Eva, DOA, Ranma, Inuyasha, Guilty Gear etc), I wouldn't be in this business. To me, the fanfictions are suppose to tell the stories that the author can't tell by exploring concepts that he can't use so freely. My single most important thing is to keep the character's personalities.
With that, you can throw them into your own brand of crazy; whether it's being trapped in a haunted village, fighting an army of replica soldiers, planning a Christmas party, or just an endless erotic hell.
And yes of course, following the mechanics of the Universe, but I can understand for a complex world like Index, not everybody can get it right or even get the full details.
Tsukino Kage Spectre
2011-07-25, 06:59
Let me just assure everyone that the files described in the following are for my own use only, I have not sold it to make money or used it except to read. I have a copy of both the rewritten file and the original chp 12 in my hdd. If the author doesn't object, I can mail it to you.
That would normally be the case... except I have some reviewers raging about Gunha is overpowered, Touma shouldn't be that weak.
I'm not going to lie. I think they have a small point about Gunha being OverPowered, but not to the extent that they seem to think.
I think you had the right idea with the negation taking a few extra seconds, but I think you went too far with the Meteor Smash. I think it would have been more believable if Touma had been driven to his knees under the pressure before MS was finally negated.
The way you wrote it puts it on the same class as Angelic attacks.... and I don't think Gunha is that strong.
Well, to each their own, I guess.
Master Assassin
2011-07-25, 09:37
... Looks like some people need a pointing out job be done for them.
We all know Gunha is a canonically existing character in the Index universe.
I also don't see how Gunha is overpowered, because if that's so then those people have yet to know how Ollerus is. And I wonder how many of them know that this is yet another canonically existing character we're talking about here, if they can't even recognize Gunha...
tsunade666
2011-07-25, 10:19
I just come back after reading the reviews on flere's work which I rarely do. I rarely review or read reviews -_-
the main problem for them is gunha's over powering imagine breaker. It's too much oc for them to swallow. Considering divine existence or in nature are the only one's yet that can overpower imagine breaker and that's really rare to see. And even if the divine beings can overpower imagine breaker in attacks. It still can be erased or beaten by Imagine breaker though it takes time but still can be erased. So it's hard for them to swallow the meteor something attack. I forget the name used ... -_-
To them it sounds like in the level of angels.
then to point it out that Gunha can possibly in the same level as Ollerus if only Guhna can understand how to use his unexplainable power. Ollerus did say that. It just potentially meant that the weakest of the level 5 can become the strongest in the instant. Minus rank 1 and 2 they are special. But still Gunha is a pandora's box. You don't know how dangerous he can be if he can understand his own power.
Though here's the problem.... he still can't use it right but still it manage to overpower Imagine breaker.... now that's the problem.
Miraluka
2011-07-25, 13:16
Plan D:
- Make him watch a marathon of K-on!
- Pay a girl to seduce him in front of Index, thus he will get biten to death.
Oh hey! I like those plans :heh:.
I find these fics hard to believe since the only people who can beat those two are powerful Level 4s like Awaki, the Level 5s like Mugino and powerful magicians like Kaori. Except for Angel of Thunder, i don't like the idea of a fic of some no good Skill-Out can beat Mikoto and Kuroko.
If the writers comes with tactis/plans just like Frenda, then I don't find it hard to believe.
In this case, the guilty party use Mikoto to show off their brand new character that is super strong. Actually it's not only that, I've noticed when there's a new threat of any kind, Mikoto would usually be used as a victim of some sort.
Hoohh, well thats easy, mainly because electric related powers is the one of the most common powers out there so there are a lot of ideas to overcome that kind of foes (mind the hated Uchiha Sasuke, Pikachu, etc, etc...), she is more known character and in the series despite being showed as the #3 at the tops of 2.3 billions of students when it came to face real enemies her attacks where rendered useless be it with tricks (Awaki and Frenda) or just raw power (Touma and Accelerator).
Though here's the problem.... he still can't use it right but still it manage to overpower Imagine breaker.... now that's the problem.
I think that in order to overpower IB they need first to get at least at the pair of angels, so not one shot attacks but pure energy attacks like Dragon Breath, Light Sword, EELS, Black Wings; that kind of attacks.
Even with that, once they surpass IB, the 'invisible something' and the ubber-hax-greatest-power-that-will-make-you-go-omgwtf! are the next on that list.
chrono9472
2011-07-25, 13:33
Here are my plans for any serious and competent Villain who wants to incap/kill Kamijou Touma:
General rule: Don't use Magic or ESP Science stuff. Kamijou is like Uwe Boll -- the more shit you throw at him, the more powerful he becomes.
Plan A-
1. Train in martial arts in a monk sanctuary in Tibet or something.
2. Train your own mooks in martial arts.
3. Team up together and murder him!
Plan B-
1. Two words: Carbon. Monoxyde.
2. CARBON MONOXYDE!
3. Seriously, pump it in while he's sleeping. He won't even know what hit him.
Plan C-
1. Get a belt-fed gun.
2. Get ammo belts.
3. Watch the Rambo movies back-to-back.
4. Aim in his general direction until he drops to the ground.
5. Shoot an entire clip in his head.
6. TEABAG HIM!
you forgot to give one vital piece of advice: never try to kill him while he's surrounded by some of his strong friends....especially if that friend is a yandere or has anger issues.....
Go to my profile on FFN (link here: http://www.fanfiction.net/~flere821), scroll to my stories and click on the 'reviews' word next to the title of my fic.
One guy named 'Jordan' with no account on FFN happened to be particularly foul-mouthed, haven't read the LNs and was the one saying Gunha was a OC. I laughed at how idiotic some people can be at times.
Lol, what an idiot.
Also, I vote for an early release:cool:.
Chaos2Frozen
2011-07-25, 20:30
then to point it out that Gunha can possibly in the same level as Ollerus if only Guhna can understand how to use his unexplainable power. Ollerus did say that. It just potentially meant that the weakest of the level 5 can become the strongest in the instant. Minus rank 1 and 2 they are special. But still Gunha is a pandora's box. You don't know how dangerous he can be if he can understand his own power.
One point, is Ollerus even on the same level as Angels?
Hoohh, well thats easy, mainly because electric related powers is the one of the most common powers out there so there are a lot of ideas to overcome that kind of foes (mind the hated Uchiha Sasuke, Pikachu, etc, etc...), she is more known character and in the series despite being showed as the #3 at the tops of 2.3 billions of students when it came to face real enemies her attacks where rendered useless be it with tricks (Awaki and Frenda) or just raw power (Touma and Accelerator).
Isn't that the same with any other character? Either you overpower them in sheer force or you trick them- warfare hasn't changed in 5000 years. Overwhelming force is one thing, are you saying that no other characters is susceptible to tricks?
In any case, it's a cheap way to try to elevate the OC status by giving them an easy win over a strong character. There was one fic where in the first chapter, we have someone taking out Level 5s like nothing. I mean, there's got to be a better way to deloy a shock and awe technique.
Miraluka
2011-07-25, 20:53
One point, is Ollerus even on the same level as Angels?
Its implied that a maijin is good enough to stop Curtana Original on vol. 18.
Isn't that the same with any other character? Either you overpower them in sheer force or you trick them- warfare hasn't changed in 5000 years. Overwhelming force is one thing, are you saying that no other characters is susceptible to tricks?
No, I think. I am not reading much fanfics so I wonder, but it seems that electric powers is currently the most common on those few fics I read.
Chaos2Frozen
2011-07-25, 21:02
No, I think. I am not reading much fanfics so I wonder, but it seems that electric powers is currently the most common on those few fics I read.
Wait, which part are you replying to :confused: ??
Miraluka
2011-07-25, 21:21
Wait, which part are you replying to :confused: ??
The first.
I forgot the other part:
In any case, it's a cheap way to try to elevate the OC status by giving them an easy win over a strong character. There was one fic where in the first chapter, we have someone taking out Level 5s like nothing. I mean, there's got to be a better way to deloy a shock and awe technique.
Its cheap but, isn't more fast for them instead thinking ideas?
Chaos2Frozen
2011-07-25, 21:39
The first.
Basically, to say that Mikoto is weak against tricks or a stronger power is like saying...
"The strongest attack is useless if it doesn't hit", or "The trick to winning a fight is to stay alive".
Everybody can be tricked, and there is always someone stronger.
Its cheap but, isn't more fast for them instead thinking ideas?
Which makes it a bad move literature-wise doesn't it?
Nobody likes their favorite characters beat up by a nobody out of the blues. You'll see this alot in the bigger fanfic series like Digimon/Inuyasha/Ranman etc.
The strongest character I wanted to create is the Fallen Archangel Samael and the Horseman of Death (plus the other three, but they aren't so overpowered); which means I have to be extremely careful how I want to play this card. But fortunately, these aren't completely unknown characters- Everybody has at least some idea who they are from pop culture. But to appear all of a sudden and start beating up people is cheap and demeaning.
Miraluka
2011-07-25, 21:51
Thats why they're not some famous writers, right? :p
Chaos2Frozen
2011-07-25, 21:57
Thats why they're not some famous writers, right? :p
True and I've accepted that, but it doesn't mean they can't put in effort.
...Unless it's about grammar... Then you know... It just can't be helped... >.>
I don't think anybody realistically expects a blockbuster, therefore what I'm looking for is just a really good idea... And sometimes that's all you need.
...Unless it's about grammar... Then you know... It just can't be helped... >.>
So moe moe kyun~
Anyways, (Revamped) Promise Prologue (http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6849665/) and Chapter 1 (http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6849665/2) are up. Rest soon to follow, then I can get to the new Chapter 6: Imouto and Worst's escapades.
"Well, have fun with those nice memories. Want Misaka to bring you some KY as to rub one out for the night?"
"Just get out of here before anyone figures out what you've been doing."
"You mean what we've been doing." Worst stared down with Accelerator at his bedroom's door. She was still madly grinning from everything that had happened. "You better take responsibility if Misaka gets pregnant."
"…Please don't fuel my nightmares with such high-octane material. [...]"
Flere821
2011-07-25, 23:50
I'm not going to lie. I think they have a small point about Gunha being OverPowered, but not to the extent that they seem to think.
I think you had the right idea with the negation taking a few extra seconds, but I think you went too far with the Meteor Smash. I think it would have been more believable if Touma had been driven to his knees under the pressure before MS was finally negated.
The way you wrote it puts it on the same class as Angelic attacks.... and I don't think Gunha is that strong.
Well, to each their own, I guess.
I had considered on driving Touma to kneeling... but then he can't roll away fast enough before getting crushed. Less distance before the ball drops onto him and all, so less time to dodge.
And as for Angel class... well it was more like the 'high end' of Level 5 class, somewhere around Mikoto's level. I'm guessing if Mikoto used her ultimate thunder attack from the sky from Vol1 Ch1 Touma would be in the same situation, except lightning don't have as much 'mass' like Gunha's power is weighing down on him.
Would be right to say "Imagine Breaker laughs in the face of fatal supernatural attacks; the rest of Touma's body gibber in terror and tries to run away if given the chance"?
So far, one vote (Chaos2frozen) against and one vote (~Greed~) for releasing early? I'll check again in about 24 hours to see if the tie is broken by then.
And just in case it isn't clear by this point, thank you everyone for your support :D
If anyone here want me to add something in, say so and I'll at least consider it. I'm more than willing to throw things in to fill up the plot, I've got next to nothing planned after Daihaseisai (ie, past the next 3-4 chapters), just some minor character developments until (MAJOR SPOILER INCOMING)
I end the fic before Touma goes to UK (post Vol16), going stable with one girl and his memory loss revealed.
It may or may not end with a 'sequel hook' that includes how the girl would wait for him until he returns from UK/WW3 and she has faith he will come back to her.
I'm current just planning a AU end where Touma gets his girl, and she becomes his emotional support even if she cannot be on the front lines with him. 'Sickeningly sweet romance scenes every time they meet face to face' kind of good end.
For the Daihaseisai... Well, I have some ideas.
1. Girl in a Dress hears about Touma from Kakine -- who is impressed by 'the guy who punched out Number One' and gloats that Accelerator might be an easier target that he first thought. Naturally she gets curious and SCHOOL has nothing to do for the day, so she might as well want to see Imagine Breaker in action, perhaps even test Measure Heart on him and see how it affects him.
Cue Misaki telling her annoying sister to gtfo. (Joking about that last part. Or am I? (http://danbooru.donmai.us/post/show/934799/blonde_hair-bracelet-dress-gloves-jewelry-long_hai) )
2. Gunha/Touma back-to-back badassery versus some extremist Skill-Outs not under Komaba's group planning a bombing -- in the days after Walking Porn gets pwnt.
3. Aogami trying to be subtle and flirt with Misaki and her mooks, which he fails horribly at. Bonus point if Touma drags him away and apologizes to Misaki, promising to make it up to her. Cue Mikoto seeing that and wanting Touma to 'make it up to her' as well. Saten might help her out so such a situation would occur, and Touma would go on a double-date with the Tokiwadai Level 5's with much crack. Could be a trigger for an event scene.
4. Loli Kihara getting a peek at the test results from Gunha vs. Touma, and she definitely wants to see Touma in action herself. Could probably be intertwined with Girl in a Dress' own little time-killing interest -- maybe a chapter dedicated to people stalking Touma, wanting to see his power. In the end, she goes back into her Accelerator fixation (and getting chased by Kihara-kun Junior...).
5. Touma ends up being misfortunate and stumbles into Pre-BroShiage ITEM. Frennndaaaa~
6. Kakine goes shopping for a refrigerator for SCHOOL's main hideout. Just when he finds the perfect low-budget one, Mikoto lets out a city-wide spark (Misaki-induced, from the double-date), killing the fridge. He is not pleased.
(Doit do it doit doit doit doit doit doit doi doit doit doit doit doit)
7. Accelerator and Last Order cameo since they were wandering around.
And please, even as a ToumaxMikoto shipper, don't waste this story by going with that pairing. It would be far too predictable and that pairing is over-the-fuck-done. I'm not rooting for Misaki, Saten or any other contenders (Kumokawa?) for Touma's heart in particular. As long as the love is believable and doesn't seemed forced. It could be nice if we see Mikoto's development over accepting that she's not for Touma, and ultimately maturing as a character.
chrono9472
2011-07-26, 01:13
For the Daihaseisai... Well, I have some ideas.
1. Girl in a Dress hears about Touma from Kakine -- who is impressed by 'the guy who punched out Number One' and gloats that Accelerator might be an easier target that he first thought. Naturally she gets curious and SCHOOL has nothing to do for the day, so she might as well want to see Imagine Breaker in action, perhaps even test Measure Heart on him and see how it affects him.
Cue Misaki telling her annoying sister to gtfo. (Joking about that last part. Or am I? (http://danbooru.donmai.us/post/show/934799/blonde_hair-bracelet-dress-gloves-jewelry-long_hai) )
2. Gunha/Touma back-to-back badassery versus some extremist Skill-Outs not under Komaba's group planning a bombing -- in the days after Walking Porn gets pwnt.
3. Aogami trying to be subtle and flirt with Misaki and her mooks, which he fails horribly at. Bonus point if Touma drags him away and apologizes to Misaki, promising to make it up to her. Cue Mikoto seeing that and wanting Touma to 'make it up to her' as well. Saten might help her out so such a situation would occur, and Touma would go on a double-date with the Tokiwadai Level 5's with much crack. Could be a trigger for an event scene.
4. Loli Kihara getting a peek at the test results from Gunha vs. Touma, and she definitely wants to see Touma in action herself. Could probably be intertwined with Girl in a Dress' own little time-killing interest -- maybe a chapter dedicated to people stalking Touma, wanting to see his power. In the end, she goes back into her Accelerator fixation (and getting chased by Kihara-kun Junior...).
5. Touma ends up being misfortunate and stumbles into Pre-BroShiage ITEM. Frennndaaaa~
6. Kakine goes shopping for a refrigerator for SCHOOL's main hideout. Just when he finds the perfect low-budget one, Mikoto lets out a city-wide spark (Misaki-induced, from the double-date), killing the fridge. He is not pleased.
(Doit do it doit doit doit doit doit doit doi doit doit doit doit doit)
7. Accelerator and Last Order cameo since they were wandering around.
And please, even as a ToumaxMikoto shipper, don't waste this story by going with that pairing. It would be far too predictable and that pairing is over-the-fuck-done. I'm not rooting for Misaki, Saten or any other contenders (Kumokawa?) for Touma's heart in particular. As long as the love is believable and doesn't seemed forced. It could be nice if we see Mikoto's development over accepting that she's not for Touma, and ultimately maturing as a character.
2.gunha's in judgement right? then how about gunha investigating the case while touma unluckily runs into him and gets involved in dangerous situations? this looks like its already been done a lot though....
2.gunha's in judgement right? then how about gunha investigating the case while touma unluckily runs into him and gets involved in dangerous situations? this looks like its already been done a lot though....
No, he's not in Judgement.
chrono9472
2011-07-26, 01:50
oh....i was certain he was a member but maybe i mistook speculation/fan ideas for truth.
Chaos2Frozen
2011-07-26, 01:53
No, he's not in Judgement.
Wasn't he revealed to be in Judgment in the vending machine SS :confused:?
Wasn't he revealed to be in Judgment in the vending machine SS :confused:?
Apparently not.
tsunade666
2011-07-26, 06:36
@flere.... please address first how to solve Touma being popular.... and his battle records being leaked. I know that the last fight blows the machines away but still someone might have record it. I'm only thinking Kihara to do some clean ups if some crazy scientist shows up to dig more than he needs to or Aleister just letting Touma to deal with it. But if Touma is getting popular and well known. He will probably having hard time dealing with magic side or when his in academy city because he will be easily identified which doesn't suit me. Well it's your fic. Your choice but the whole secrecy point of Touma's power was being trampled with. In the chapter before this one. I'm already having problems on that and specially now that I read this one. I just can't think up of Touma having a normal high school life anymore. If more people ended up knowing him, it will be harder to move in secrecy. Plus with Mikoto stalking that guy more and more and Misaki adding up. I don't see him running away from academy city to London in vol 11 ever happening without those 2 knowing about it.
Or are you making Mikoto or Misaki know about magic -_-
haiz.......................
So far, one vote (Chaos2frozen) against and one vote (~Greed~) for releasing early? I'll check again in about 24 hours to see if the tie is broken by then.
And just in case it isn't clear by this point, thank you everyone for your support :D
If anyone here want me to add something in, say so and I'll at least consider it. I'm more than willing to throw things in to fill up the plot, I've got next to nothing planned after Daihaseisai (ie, past the next 3-4 chapters), just some minor character developments until (MAJOR SPOILER INCOMING)
I end the fic before Touma goes to UK (post Vol16), going stable with one girl and his memory loss revealed.
It may or may not end with a 'sequel hook' that includes how the girl would wait for him until he returns from UK/WW3 and she has faith he will come back to her.
I'm current just planning a AU end where Touma gets his girl, and she becomes his emotional support even if she cannot be on the front lines with him. 'Sickeningly sweet romance scenes every time they meet face to face' kind of good end.
I'm voting for the early release. Also I approve of that spoiler as the ending, as long as the romance is believable and developed a while before he goes off to war, it would be weird for a girl he just started dating to be cool waiting for him to go off to fight in a war. Especially since he basically gets kidnapped into going with no prior warning.
Flere821
2011-07-26, 22:50
For the Daihaseisai... Well, I have some ideas.
1. Girl in a Dress hears about Touma from Kakine -- who is impressed by 'the guy who punched out Number One' and gloats that Accelerator might be an easier target that he first thought. Naturally she gets curious and SCHOOL has nothing to do for the day, so she might as well want to see Imagine Breaker in action, perhaps even test Measure Heart on him and see how it affects him.
Cue Misaki telling her annoying sister to gtfo. (Joking about that last part. Or am I? (http://danbooru.donmai.us/post/show/934799/blonde_hair-bracelet-dress-gloves-jewelry-long_hai) )
2. Gunha/Touma back-to-back badassery versus some extremist Skill-Outs not under Komaba's group planning a bombing -- in the days after Walking Porn gets pwnt.
3. Aogami trying to be subtle and flirt with Misaki and her mooks, which he fails horribly at. Bonus point if Touma drags him away and apologizes to Misaki, promising to make it up to her. Cue Mikoto seeing that and wanting Touma to 'make it up to her' as well. Saten might help her out so such a situation would occur, and Touma would go on a double-date with the Tokiwadai Level 5's with much crack. Could be a trigger for an event scene.
4. Loli Kihara getting a peek at the test results from Gunha vs. Touma, and she definitely wants to see Touma in action herself. Could probably be intertwined with Girl in a Dress' own little time-killing interest -- maybe a chapter dedicated to people stalking Touma, wanting to see his power. In the end, she goes back into her Accelerator fixation (and getting chased by Kihara-kun Junior...).
5. Touma ends up being misfortunate and stumbles into Pre-BroShiage ITEM. Frennndaaaa~
6. Kakine goes shopping for a refrigerator for SCHOOL's main hideout. Just when he finds the perfect low-budget one, Mikoto lets out a city-wide spark (Misaki-induced, from the double-date), killing the fridge. He is not pleased.
(Doit do it doit doit doit doit doit doit doi doit doit doit doit doit)
7. Accelerator and Last Order cameo since they were wandering around.
And please, even as a ToumaxMikoto shipper, don't waste this story by going with that pairing. It would be far too predictable and that pairing is over-the-fuck-done. I'm not rooting for Misaki, Saten or any other contenders (Kumokawa?) for Touma's heart in particular. As long as the love is believable and doesn't seemed forced. It could be nice if we see Mikoto's development over accepting that she's not for Touma, and ultimately maturing as a character.
... I promised to take a look and consider it. And I did.
I've came to the conclusion most of the ideas are tainted with crack (seriously? Measure Heart and Misaki? :twitch: ) and the majority of them will kill my brain if I try to write something like that :heh:
Having said that, I'll be borrowing your 3rd suggestion. I think I can adapt it into later chapters... Just don't expect it to show up until the 'Punishment Game' arc, and that might take a few months.
As for the final pairing... well, let's just see what other character development I've got planned right now. My opinion was out of all the girls in canon going for Touma, Mikoto had the highest chance of success since she lives in the same city as him, see him more often and have more 'romance flags' with him compared to Index who's also in the same city (Index only have 'just friends flags' with Touma IMO).
With other contenders/options like Misaki and Saten, I'd say Mikoto's chances here have dropped a lot. Not impossible, but no longer ahead.
PS: While I say Mikoto was the most likely to get Touma, that does NOT mean I prefer her to be the one that ends up with Touma. I support Kaori+Touma, Hyouka+Touma (not EVER going to happen, but if she's not IB instant-killable I'd be behind that all the way), or Itsuwa+Touma.
Mikoto+Touma just gives me a [*shrug* that works, but I don't like/hate it] response.
A) @flere.... please address first how to solve Touma being popular.... and his battle records being leaked. I know that the last fight blows the machines away but still someone might have record it. I'm only thinking Kihara to do some clean ups if some crazy scientist shows up to dig more than he needs to or Aleister just letting Touma to deal with it. But if Touma is getting popular and well known.
B) He will probably having hard time dealing with magic side or when his in academy city because he will be easily identified which doesn't suit me. Well it's your fic. Your choice but the whole secrecy point of Touma's power was being trampled with. In the chapter before this one. I'm already having problems on that and specially now that I read this one. I just can't think up of Touma having a normal high school life anymore. If more people ended up knowing him, it will be harder to move in secrecy. Plus with Mikoto stalking that guy more and more and Misaki adding up. I don't see him running away from academy city to London in vol 11 ever happening without those 2 knowing about it.
Part A will be addressed in the next 2-3 chapters. Tell me how well I do after they're up.
Part B, however, might take a while longer. The issues you've addressed will play a part in Aleister's plans, and why he allows Kumokawa's plan to go ahead. Eventually it will be revealed in the fic, but with what I have right now that won't be any time soon.
---
With Ilidsor's vote, that's 2 to 1 in release early. I'll be posting it then in maybe 2-3 hours time, time for some last moment fix-ups.
Chaos2Frozen
2011-07-26, 23:41
As for the final pairing... well, let's just see what other character development I've got planned right now. My opinion was out of all the girls in canon going for Touma, Mikoto had the highest chance of success since she lives in the same city as him, see him more often and have more 'romance flags' with him compared to Index who's also in the same city (Index only have 'just friends flags' with Touma IMO).
With other contenders/options like Misaki and Saten, I'd say Mikoto's chances here have dropped a lot. Not impossible, but no longer ahead.
PS: While I say Mikoto was the most likely to get Touma, that does NOT mean I prefer her to be the one that ends up with Touma. I support Kaori+Touma, Hyouka+Touma (not EVER going to happen, but if she's not IB instant-killable I'd be behind that all the way), or Itsuwa+Touma.
Mikoto+Touma just gives me a [*shrug* that works, but I don't like/hate it] response.
Since we're on this topic, have there ever been a situation where the 2nd girl gets the guy? As far as my knowledge of Animes is concern, either it's the First Girl or Bust. And since Index is quite unlikely to 'win', I say it's a bust.
(And yes you can technically argue that Mikoto came first before Index, but you know what I mean...)
There are very little exceptions, like shuffle! but lets not go there since I don't like how it turned out >.>. Another one is True Tears, but it's debatable who's the main girl in that story. And of course- the recent case with OrenoImo with Kuroneko but we all know how that turned out.
tsunade666
2011-07-27, 02:24
shuffle anime is a vn adaptation so it's up to the studio on how they will end it (even though it's super unexpected <.< Primula)
As for the first girl to win isn't that getting tiring. It's a super used up idea that it might still be fun if it's been played well but new ideas for an ideas for an ending is much better. Specially that we are talking about Touma. To him it's Index above then the other girls are all the same. That kind of guy he is.
Flere821
2011-07-27, 02:45
New chapter's out:
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7049587/10/Minds_Memories_and_Misfortune
Enjoy :)
Chaos2Frozen
2011-07-27, 02:47
shuffle anime is a vn adaptation so it's up to the studio on how they will end it (even though it's super unexpected <.< Primula)
Yeah they've got guts, I'll give them that... But I still don't like the ending >.>
The only things I took away from watching Shuffle! is my first experience with a Yandere (Changed my whole world view :uhoh:) and that the Opening song is great.
As for the first girl to win isn't that getting tiring. It's a super used up idea that it might still be fun if it's been played well but new ideas for an ideas for an ending is much better. Specially that we are talking about Touma. To him it's Index above then the other girls are all the same. That kind of guy he is.
Yeah, but like Flere I don't think Index would be a romance interest. It's sort of like how Last Order is a daughter to Accelerator, Index feels like family. This belief of mine is further reinforced when I watched the Mikoto Route on the PSP game (yeah yeah it's not the most solid of argument >.>). So with Index out, I predict the ending would be a bust.
But suddenly, there's a paradigm shift! And we have Kuroneko... This would only work if Index is confirm to be not a romance interest.
Flere821
2011-07-27, 02:54
This belief of mine is further reinforced when I watched the Mikoto Route on the PSP game (yeah yeah it's not the most solid of argument >.>). So with Index out, I predict the ending would be a bust.
Mind if I ask if there's a way of watching the PSP routes without having to buy a PSP (I'm interested in game route stories)? Can you PM a link to me or something? Thanks.
New chapter's out:
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7049587/10/Minds_Memories_and_Misfortune
Enjoy :)
"I'm going to force you into dressing up as a maid, call you Touka, and sneak you into the School Gardens." Misaki whispered into Touma's ear. "Once inside, you will be forced to serve me and my clique on hands and knees, and ojou-samas who have little contact with members of the opposite sex will use you as they want for a entire day. You will pay for your insolence in challenging us with your body, and you will not be released until every last one of the fifty members I have under me had their fill of making you scream like the 'little girl' you call us in penance."
WHO STOLE MY GOODIES.
http://upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/commons/thumb/0/0b/Crack_street_dosage.jpg/220px-Crack_street_dosage.jpg
STOP STEALING MY--
Wait a minute...
...
MISAKI'S MY LOVECHILD WITH FROZEN2CHAOS.
Wait, what.
FROZEN2CHAOS? What the fuck is that?
Where's my shampoo?
Who stole my rooster?
TELL ME FRIDGE! WHY ARE YOU IGNORING ME?!
What...uh... THAT MAKE NO SENSEEEEEEEEEEE--!
Fission Mailed.
But seriously, Misaki had successively endured, survived and mastered the overwhelming powers of the Holy Crack. Fiamma beware.
I can...
...finally pass on the torch...
...and die.
I regret...nothing...!
I can see it, in the end...
...AleisterxHeavenCanceller.
Chaos2Frozen
2011-07-27, 03:34
...We're gonna need a clean-up on Aisle 3.
It's good. I found my medicine now.
Drifting Wolf
2011-07-27, 03:39
I want Misaki to get jealous. It will be EPIC.
Just so people know, "Their Little Love Stories" by Stormwolfex has been updated and the rating has been bumped for more... explicit content? Link is down here:
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6982246/1/Their_Little_Love_Stories
Come on people, Itsuwa needs moar lurve :D
Chaos2Frozen
2011-07-27, 03:56
Come on people, Itsuwa needs moar lurve :D
Awww I don't know... I'm just all out of love...
*Empty Bottle*
chrono9472
2011-07-27, 04:24
New chapter's out:
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7049587/10/Minds_Memories_and_Misfortune
Enjoy :)
......how could you leave us with a cliffhanger like that..now i won't be able to sleep until i see what happens at the end of the match...
the chapter was much better then the last one though,mostly because i get to see touma being serious without preaching:p.
but how did touma find out about the excuse aleister gave to the science side for having touma work with them?or did i just misunderstand the meaning of the sentence?
Come on people, Itsuwa needs moar lurve
yes she does...touma's love that is...
Drifting Wolf
2011-07-27, 04:26
Lies! Your kawaii picture of Alice iz PROOF! :heh:
Chaos2Frozen
2011-07-27, 04:29
Lies! Your kawaii picture of Alice iz PROOF! :heh:
Hence the empty bottle, I've dump all my love juice onto her... NO WAIT I MEA-!! I've used them on other girls as well!
*Crickets*
It just... So happens... To run out... Before Itsuwa...
Drifting Wolf
2011-07-27, 04:32
Wait. That means you and Mr. Kyon? Wait.
*Does not compute*
Could this mean!?
Mr. Kyon is actually... Miss Kyon!?
WHAT? WHAT?
chrono9472
2011-07-27, 04:33
Hence the empty bottle, I've dump all my love juice onto her... NO WAIT I MEA-!! I've used them on other girls as well!
*Crickets*
It just... So happens... To run out... Before Itsuwa...
Riiight...you can always buy a new bottle...actually i'll just give you one as a present*takes out one of his spare bottles and sends it to chaos*now you have no more excuses!...probably
Wait. That means you and Mr. Kyon? Wait.
*Does not compute*
Could this mean!?
Mr. Kyon is actually... Miss Kyon!?
WHAT? WHAT?
.........................thats just your imagination!....yep...just your....imagination.....
Chaos2Frozen
2011-07-27, 04:38
Riiight...you can always buy a new bottle...actually i'll just give you one as a present*takes out one of his spare bottles and sends it to chaos*
Ohh erm... Wow... I erm... Thanks! But you see... Well this is so awkward eheheh... I've just realized that I've promised to spread some loving on this other girl from... erm... this... other series... Erm yeah... So thanks for the bottle- I'll just be... You know... Heading out now...Ehahaha... >.>
chrono9472
2011-07-27, 05:07
whatever you say....
and flere, i forgot to ask this before but will you do more chapters based on the sports in Daihasei festival?
tsunade666
2011-07-27, 05:20
New chapter's out:
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7049587/10/Minds_Memories_and_Misfortune
Enjoy :)
copy paste from FF:
So you picked Misaka route and turn Misaki into cupid of love? -_-
Still I'm not sure yet if it will end with Mikoto but honestly I'm tired of her and her over popularity with lots of fic about MikotoxTouma.
Though the story is not yet finished I will wait on how things will workout.
As for a problem.... Touma become popular thanks to his test and his troubles with the tokiwadai level 5. How can he sneak up in the battle of middle schools in the time when his stopping Oriana? You skipped that part and onto the day before he goes to Italy. Well that part wasn't really important but I can't imagine him sneaking there and going out alive with Mikoto and Misaki participating plus Seiri getting injured. I imagined that Misaki might discover something but its been skipped.
With more details on such part about that I want to read the next part :heh: specially I want to know will Sieiri and Aogami do. I bet the others will also do something and I can't see Aogami not doing something in front of an all girls middle school fight.
To little index :uhoh: even though she supposedly around him almost all the time. To be honest I just realized that Index isn't with Touma at all in your fic even though she usually is with him. Or maybe because she is not important to the plot that she is not around even though in the book they are always together. Just like Accelerator and Last Order.
And I will agree that Index isn't the type for romance with Touma. Maybe the before memory erase status of Touma but after that one. She stays with a family type of person for Touma. An important girl which he doesn't want to see cry. Just like how Accelerator tread Last Order. To both of them the loli's is their life line. In Touma's case. His only connection from the past and the first person to appear in front of him and also the first person to say she loves him and the first person that cried when he doesn't remember anything about her. Thus Kamijou Touma LIED for her sake. So she won't cry anymore.
New chapter's out:
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7049587/10/Minds_Memories_and_Misfortune
Enjoy :)
Eh? When did Touma's class transform into epic cockblockers that remind me of Class F's Exection Squad!?
Marcus H.
2011-07-27, 07:43
WHO STOLE MY GOODIES.
http://upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/commons/thumb/0/0b/Crack_street_dosage.jpg/220px-Crack_street_dosage.jpg
STOP STEALING MY--
Wait a minute...
...
MISAKI'S MY LOVECHILD WITH FROZEN2CHAOS.
Wait, what.
FROZEN2CHAOS? What the fuck is that?
Where's my shampoo?
Who stole my rooster?
TELL ME FRIDGE! WHY ARE YOU IGNORING ME?!
What...uh... THAT MAKE NO SENSEEEEEEEEEEE--!
Fission Mailed.
But seriously, Misaki had successively endured, survived and mastered the overwhelming powers of the Holy Crack. Fiamma beware.
I can...
...finally pass on the torch...
...and die.
I regret...nothing...!
I can see it, in the end...
...AleisterxHeavenCanceller.
This post.
It's like the most potent Telesma in existence.
I can't take it all.
:twitch:
Chaos2Frozen
2011-07-27, 08:34
Still I'm not sure yet if it will end with Mikoto but honestly I'm tired of her and her over popularity with lots of fic about MikotoxTouma.
You can't fight hype; as it stands Mikoto/Touma, KuroNeko/Kyousuke, Victorique /Kazuya and Charlotte/Ichika are the most popular straight pairings right now.
You want to fight the power? Well revolutions don't come easy. I fought in the Nanoha civil war 4 years ago and I can tell you, if you want something done you'll have to do it yourself because nobody else is going to write a Yuuno fic, or a Chrono/Carim oneshot, or a Erio/Luteica revamp >.>.
*cough*
It also doesn't help that there are very few people in the toaru fanfic world... We need more fangirls... Female writers are somehow more creative...
...But when all's said and done, my [Majutsu no Kurisumasu II] story this year would still end on a Touma x Mikoto note :p
Master Assassin
2011-07-27, 09:27
Fangirls? Nuh, if that happens it's either:
1. Touma/Mikoto everywhere.
2. Mary Sues Galore! (I dread.)
3. Hetero pairings thrown out of the window, they be damned. From now on, Accelerator/Touma will be one of the hottest topics around, and it'll be as if there are no girls in the Index universe at all.
... I'm just exaggerating, but I guess I'm also out of my minds on speculating what kind of fanfics will appear if you wish so that the number of fangirls go up.
Chaos2Frozen
2011-07-27, 09:40
... I'm just exaggerating, but I guess I'm also out of my minds on speculating what kind of fanfics will appear if you wish so that the number of fangirls go up.
Well, back in my youthful spirited days, I find that it's the females that come up with creative stories... Or at least better structured stories. I don't know if this was because I'm new to the concept at that time that I still can't properly identify good from bad, but that's the impression I got.
Yes, you would have to waddle through the BL crap but the grass is usually greener on the other side... And there are ALOT of them, tens of thousands of them unlike the tiny hundred that we have.
Then again, the series I used to go to were Digimon/Eva/Shaman King/Naruto/Inuyasha/Ranma so maybe it has to do with the type of series than the demography of the writers :heh: ?
In my experience its always been more of a numbers game.
if you have 1000 female writers compared to 100 male ones, you're more likely to find more good stories written by the girls. After all, if 1 in 10 writers are good, you'll get 10 good male written fics and 100 good fics wriitne by girls.
And well, fanfiction is dominated by female writers in most places. The ones you mentioned at least have a female dominated fanfic fandom. I think.
ToAru is one of the few successful series that aren't flooded with fangirls, something that can prob be attributed to the general lack of bishies, a main character that is well ajusted and nice, and a lack of ho yay.
There is a reason Accelerator is such fangirl bait - bishieness, dark and troubled past and, cold dickish behaviour and the reverence he puts Touma.
Sumeragi
2011-07-27, 10:09
I'm a member of the Kamikoto Faction, but perfectly willing to support a Mikoto-Ruiko pairing ;)
Chaos2Frozen
2011-07-27, 10:10
In my experience its always been more of a numbers game.
if you have 1000 female writers compared to 100 male ones, you're more likely to find more good stories written by the girls. After all, if 1 in 10 writers are good, you'll get 10 good male written fics and 100 good fics wriitne by girls.
And well, fanfiction is dominated by female writers in most places. The ones you mentioned at least have a female dominated fanfic fandom. I think.
That's why somehow I feel that if we get more fangirls, we'll drastically increase the number of fanworks for this series, therefore increasing the probability of good works.
Because we men are lazy and unimaginative creatures right :cool: ?
ToAru is one of the few successful series that aren't flooded with fangirls, something that can prob be attributed to the general lack of bishies, a main character that is well ajusted and nice, and a lack of ho yay.
At the same time we aren't exactly flooded by fanboys either.
So what are we made up of?! REASONABLE PEOPLE :twitch:?! Reasonable people aren't profitable! We need more crazy people!
There is a reason Accelerator is such fangirl bait - bishieness, dark and troubled past and, cold dickish behaviour and the reverence he puts Touma.
Plus he's 'good' with kids.
So what are we made up of?! REASONABLE PEOPLE :twitch:?! Reasonable people aren't profitable! We need more crazy people!
...So you would like get my family involved in the Toaru fandom? That'd turn things pretty crazy.
Just as to give you a appetiser at the craziness held within, my father back in his old days played a rather...unconvential musical instrument.
You might have heard about it.
It's called a chainsaw.
That's right, he substituted guitar for a chainsaw and waved it at the audience while laughing maniacally. People always asked him to whip it out and give them a solo.
(And no, he's not a murderer if that's what you're wondering...)
I wish I was kidding...but I'm not. And I'm the sane one in the family... This is proof that the Crackiness of a writer is genetic. I can't escape it. The less I say about my dear mother, the better.
Sumeragi
2011-07-27, 10:22
Do you people seriously want to unleash me? I'm starting to talk all the fangirl discussions as challenges to be overcome :eyebrow:
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