Well, this might be interesting. You are free to use them however you want. If you want additionl information just ask.
Also, *pats Tempest*
TerranReaper
2008-10-16 02:24
Thx 4 your views and suggestions. I'll improve further. Choppy as it may seem, there is something coming their way and its the negotiator himself. You'll see what I mean. I'm open to further suggestions on how the story should go so please help out. Thx a million.
Kha
2008-10-16 03:09
Quote:
Originally Posted by Evil Rick
(Post 1991149)
Nice logo AtomicoX, my 2 favourite characters of the MSLN series, Vita and Vivio :D
@Thread:
I have something planed, is not a fic, but is something big, the thing is that I need some of your creations guys, if you want of course
I need from:
AtomicoX: Silence Johansen and a Reaper
TSS: Hou, Nyu and Mr. Long
Satashi: Vampire Fate
Kha: Kha
Keroko: Deathwing Keroko and Syn
Kai the Reaper: Medieval Nanoha
I have your aprobation?
Thanks Rick; as it is OC policy, I approve of your request to deploy Kha in your operation. :nod:
RadiantBeam
2008-10-16 05:36
Quote:
Originally Posted by Vivio Testarossa
(Post 1991050)
Any particular reason for choosing a gun, as the weapon type as... Staff -> Gun is quite a major shift...
The main reason for the shift is because at this point, Nanoha isn't capable of handling the magnitude of magic that she used to back in A's because her her injury. Her body is very fragile (just making one set of magic bullets drains her), and I figured a gun was the best choice since, in general, guns are a long-distance kind of weapon that don't require much hand-to-hand combat. I realize there are exceptions to this, but that's what I was going for when I was figuring out what Nanoha could do without any magic or with only a limited amount.
Vie
2008-10-16 06:17
Quote:
Originally Posted by Vivio Testarossa
(Post 1991050)
Any particular reason for choosing a gun, as the weapon type as... Staff -> Gun is quite a major shift...
Originally Posted by Knight of L-sama
(Post 1989560)
Let's try this again...
Spoiler for Pt. 7- Fate's Revolution:
"You promise to be good?"
Fate withheld her sigh. "Yes, Nanoha."
"You promise to break that promise?"
"Yes, Nanoha."
"You promise to be a good lying demon and lie to me?"
"Yes, Nanoha."
Nanoha hugged Fate one last time. "Good Fate-chan. I'll see you when I get home. Don't do anything I wouldn't do, all right? They're all yours for the weekend."
"Yes, Nanoha." This time, Fate put feeling into it, smiling as she indulged in Nanoha's hugging. She whispered, "Don't come back hurt."
Nanoha snorted at the idea, but her eyes showed her acknowledgment of Fate's concern. "I won't. Let's move!" With that she turned away from Fate and walked away with her entourage of lower-level demons.
Fate watched as they all flew off, watched until the flight hatch closed, and then let out a loud whoop of unrestrained joy. She danced around in a little circle with Arf before running off.
"Come on, let's hurry! We have to go call Hayate and tell her Nanoha's gone out of town!"
Minutes later, Fate had flopped onto the bed with the M2D screen up. Puppy-form Arf was at the foot of the bed, stretching out for a good long nap on the comfy bed Nanoha always kicked her out of when she was there.
Hayate answered instantly, as if she had been expecting the call. "Well, hello there, Fate-chan. What can I do for you? Nanoha's not home?"
Fate smiled, a little calmer having made contact. "Nope. She went to go kill some rebellious demons on the border. She said she'll be gone the whole weekend."
Hayate smiled back. "She'll probably be back early you know."
Fate hesitated, and then decided to plow through. "I know that, but... well... Oh, Hayate, just come over anyway, won't you? It's my first time being left in control without the old ninny Vita watching my every step. Come on, it'll be fun."
Hayate laughed. "Devilish fun?"
Fate flushed as she unconsciously looked down at her more than adequate chest, which had grown well with all the love it had received. "Um, well, something like that. But come on, you gotta help me! You know I don't have much time left."
Hayate's smile softened and she moved to get up from wherever she was sitting. "Be ready to open the doors in about an hour, all right? I'll be there."
Fate grinned wildly, the adrenaline pumping into her usually languid blood stream. "Thanks, Hayate! You won't regret it."
Hayate chuckled. "A devil never regrets-"
"-only forgets." They shared a smile. "I'll get them ready on this side too."
"See you in a bit then."
"Mm. Bai-bai!" With a giggle, Fate disconnected and hopped off the bed. "Come on Ar-" She paused as she saw Arf happily sleeping like she had never slept before. Creeping quietly over, Fate leaned down and kissed Arf's forehead. "Sleep the good sleep, Arf."
Arf murmured something, but did not appear to awaken. Fate changed her clothes to something between comfortable and commanding, pilfered tapes from her secret stash in the back of her sock drawer, and slipped out of the mistress bedroom.
She hadn't even walked down one hallway before she came across a subordinate.
The subordinate stopped and saluted. "Fate-sama!"
Fate stopped as well and leaned her weight on the heels of her feet with her arms folded. "At ease. Griffith, I want you to gather everyone in the mess hall in ten minutes. I want to... address them all at once."
"Yes, Fate-sama!"
"Dismissed."
After he scampered off, Fate let out a low sigh and pretended to gag. She hated telling people what to do, but she had to admit, it got things down faster here and didn't confuse those with small minds.
She arrived in the mess hall early and went to the cafeteria lines, where everyone immediately stepped back to let her cut in. She growled in her best I'm-in-a-bad-mood snarl and ordered, "Give me my usual."
Fate amused herself on the glowing eyes of respect that watched her drink dark red liquid from a tin can typically reserved for whiskey. It took a real devil among devils to drink that concoction at this early hour.
Of course, Fate would never tell that, unlike Nanoha, her concoction was only Hawaiian Punch with extra red dye, not alcoholic blood.
With her teeth stained red, dripping with fake blood, she snapped, "Meeting in 10 in the hall. Be there or die."
She walked away to their simultaneous salutes. Fate already felt a headache coming on and she gulped down more of her punch. She could never understand how Nanoha was willing to do all that and more. Upon reaching the podium upon the dais, Fate sat down in Nanoha's usual seat and collected her thoughts.
When she saw Griffith amongst the other gathered minions down below, she stood up, ready to make her announcement.
They waited with baited (and nauseatingly bad) breath as Fate took advantage of the silence to add tension. Then, she started talked, soft, even, using her powers to echo her words into the cores of their undead souls.
"I've been with you lot for a while, and you know who I am probably better than I know any of you personally. You know that should anything happen to the White Devil, I will take her place. I haven't said anything concrete until now, but I'm sure you've all heard your share of rumors over the years on how I intend to change things.
"As I suspect days like this where I am in temporary control will become more and more frequent, I expect you to treat my word as if I am the ruling devil here in such times. Today is only the first day of many. I will lay down my ground rules here and any who oppose it, or any who ignore it, will meet a fate worse than death."
Fate went on to discuss punishments under her regiment, how dungeon prisoners would be dealt with, how they were expected to treat each other, yada yada, etc etc.
By the time she finished 20 minutes later, a few weaker souls had passed out from the very idea of some things she had suggested, while the rest merely quaked in their non-bootish boots.
Fate scanned the crowd with well-concealed emotion and growled, "Is that clear?"
There was a mass salute. "Yes, Fate-sama!"
"Good. Devil Mistress Hayate will be visiting us today, to help with preparations, so I expect you all to obey the new protocol. Return to your normal stations and implement my changes immediately. Dismissed!"
"Yes, Fate-sama!"
By the time the doors were opened for Hayate, the place had been transformed from the inside out.
Hayate whistled, openly impressed, as she looked around. She pointed to the newly appointed janitors in rainbow colored outfits with mops. "Are those prisoners or employees?"
"Prisoners serving actively passive punishment."
"Oh really? How so? Are those... ear plugs?"
Fate smiled as they walked past. Strains of the tune, "It's a small world," escaped the earplugs in a way that made Hayate cringe. "They listen to music agreed to be undesirable by demons but even less desirable for other folk, while doing jobs that no self righteous demon would be caught doing. Like making a place cleaner."
Hayate laughed. "Did you empty out the dungeons?"
"Mostly. The bigger creatures were released into the moat with trackers and are being trained into sentries."
"What happens to them if they escape?"
"They get shot by the goodie-goods practicing archery on the other side of the forest."
"Well there's a happy thought."
Fate sighed, smiling a little as she took Hayate's hand. "But enough of that. Come on, let's go to the bedroom. I've collected just about everything we'll need."
"Do you think... do you think Nanoha will... mind? I know she doesn't exactly like me..."
Fate smiled a secret smile. "It's fine, I promise. My word is rule for today and I say it's fine."
Hayate laughed. "All right, if you say so, Fate."
The day passed as Fate and Hayate locked themselves in the room. Any paserbyer may have been concerned at the noises that came from within, but after the speech that morning, they were hardly willing to risk Fate's wrath.
It was in this way that Nanoha came home (early) to prisoners cleaning her halls and Hayate asleep in her bed with Fate.
Before she even had a chance to be livid though, Fate opened her eyes, as if sensing her presence. Fate smiled languidly, and then poked Hayate awake.
Hayate caught on quickly to the new presence and also smiled. She put a finger to her lips as she stepped out of bed and walked towards Nanoha.
Her eyes pinned Nanoha to the back of the door. Hayate closed the door with a gentle click. "Welcome back, Nanoha."
"Happy death-versary, you mean. The day we became devils to protect each other."
No more was said, no more needed to be said. They kissed.
Fate slowly rolled off the bed, replacing her presence with all the things that she had helped prepare with Hayate.
As things gravitated toward the bed, Fate slipped away, until she was able to close the door behind her. After a pause, she made sure that she had gone largely unnoticed, Fate sighed happily and walked off.
If Nanoha was happy... if she could only let her guard down and be truly happily one day in the whole year... If Fate's precious person could be aided in that way... then Fate would not, did not, hesitate to help.
That was her devilish charm after all.
Spoiler for After you read:
Twist much?
Unexpected. Why couldn't the two of them just get together and take over the world though?
Quote:
Originally Posted by RadiantBeam
(Post 1990248)
Now then! I need a vote.
I was discussing some aspects of my AU over with Satashi, and an old idea of mine was brought up again. Major thanks to Satashi, BTW, for going over it with me and helping out. ^__^
Now, then...
The idea is that Nanoha, while still frail and only able to handle a gun, is still capable of using some form of magic, just to keep a connection between her canon persona and her AU persona. This can be done one of two ways:
Option 1: My original idea, in which Raising Heart is somehow attached to the gun/reconfigured into a gun. Nanoha is capable of channeling magic through her body and into the gun, thus firing bullets loaded with magic; a kind of mini version of Divine Buster or Starlight Breaker without the major kick. The downside is doing this leaves her weak and shaky, so she can't do it too often.
Option 2: Satashi's suggestion, in which Nanoha creates sets of magic bullets for her gun. However, she can only create one set at a time and can only fire at least two of them before she starts to get worn out. Kind of like what Shamal does with the catridges for A's, actually.
...
Anyway, I can't decide which to go with. >__>
What do you guys think?
Actually, I think creating magical items, even cartridges or just bullets puts a lot of stress on the body magically and physically. It might be better if you went with Option 1, but kept it as a trump card when normal guns can't suffice. Devices can be modified, anyway.
TheShinySword
2008-10-16 06:24
Quote:
Originally Posted by Evil Rick
(Post 1991149)
Nice logo AtomicoX, my 2 favourite characters of the MSLN series, Vita and Vivio :D
@Thread:
I have something planed, is not a fic, but is something big, the thing is that I need some of your creations guys, if you want of course
I need from:
AtomicoX: Silence Johansen and a Reaper
TSS: Hou, Nyu and Mr. Long
Satashi: Vampire Fate
Kha: Kha
Keroko: Deathwing Keroko and Syn
Kai the Reaper: Medieval Nanoha
I have your aprobation?
Sure but it's Niu no Nyu
Quote:
Originally Posted by Tempest Dynasty
(Post 1991164)
Spoiler for From 400 to 500 there are too many worlds:
“Anyway,” Fate said as she stood in the frame of the door. “What are you doing?”
“Preparing for a party, cant you see?” Hayate responded as she was floating near the door, to place the start of a banner that read something like “Con-tul-fo-eac-500-es” which meant nothing to her.
“And what are we celebrating?” she asked curious at what was the special occasion that kept Nanoha and Vivio for welcoming her after months of not seeing each other.
“You don’t know?” Fate shook her head. “But it’s so simple that even Vivio knows,” then Hayate stopped. “Have you really gone that long?”
“It was only two, three months away.” she answered, trying to defend herself.
“So that´s why. Well that´s no big deal, I can make a quick tour with you so you can understand.” Taking Fate´s hand she quickly ran into a table. Sitting her down, she started to say.
“So your little vampirism continued, with you knowing more about the new girl of Britain. There was a try on a crossover between us and the most gainax series ever. Vita got a new adventure, Vivio eventually showed up. Your mother and Nanoha-chan´s mother started a romance. I and Carim started a romance too, with politics and Vivio and Zafira on the background. Your Landscaper work got a nice welcome. Your artist side came to be known as you wooed Nanoha once again. Shamal was a secret agent, can you believe that? The guys started to tell bedtime stories to Vivio. She liked them all. Teana and Nanoha fell in love and escaped from the police. Nanoha, Signum, Tomoyo, Erio and I went to a mission in outer space. Yuuno got bionic implants can you believe it? Childhoods were cracked but that tends to happen. Syn and Vivio told us their story… you will know Syn soon enough. We started a really nice romance or continued I am not so sure. Yuuno got a protagonist role and he is in a dating sim or something, I am not sure about the details. Vivio was going to star in another adventure and you are going to appear with your vampirism. The reapers attacken once again and we were overpowered again. Arisa and Suzuka got their time to shine, Nanoha went medieval on us and started a campaign to save your sister. People started to appear and fight and we got involved. You got so cute and innocent while Nanoha made honor to her white devil nickname. Zest got killed after finding about who was his son. Yuuno, Vita and Vivio were sold to the Testarossa manor.You and Nanoha were separated by space, literally. A virus attacked and made zombie people. Zafira saved Nanoha from dying. There some short but awesome adventures too” She stopped the long list and returned to Fate. “Now you remember?”
The expression on her face couldn’t be described as she said three words. “WHAT THE HELL?”
---
The banner just said something simple.
“Congratulations for reaching 500 pages fanfiction thread” Keep going guys.
Do YOU remember?
I remember! I remember! ^_^ I even remember the stories I didn't read! Ah... but this really does go to show how many AUs we had... And there were more in the ff.net section too... >.< Kyaaaaa I loved this last century of fics <3
Quote:
Originally Posted by DigiGatou
(Post 1991416)
Unexpected. Why couldn't the two of them just get together and take over the world though?
Cuz then I would have nothing remotely serious to write about :naughty:
Vie
2008-10-16 08:05
Quote:
Originally Posted by Knight of L-sama
(Post 1991513)
I remember! I remember! ^_^ I even remember the stories I didn't read! Ah... but this really does go to show how many AUs we had... And there were more in the ff.net section too... >.< Kyaaaaa I loved this last century of fics <3
Cuz then I would have nothing remotely serious to write about :naughty:
But I liked the cracky "innocent" Quack!Fate that was full of innuendoes! :p
But as long as you write I'm fine lol.;)
Satashi
2008-10-16 10:06
@EvilRick: Sure you can use her ^_^
@Thread no ficcy right now, maybe one at lunch time :3
Evangelion Xgouki
2008-10-16 12:58
Current standings for Divided Destiny:
A)
B) I
C) IIII
RadiantBeam
2008-10-16 14:15
Quote:
Originally Posted by DigiGatou
(Post 1991416)
Actually, I think creating magical items, even cartridges or just bullets puts a lot of stress on the body magically and physically. It might be better if you went with Option 1, but kept it as a trump card when normal guns can't suffice. Devices can be modified, anyway.
The idea strikes me because it's a very Nanoha-ish thing to do, pour her all (magic included) into something if she has no other choice.
Plus, the idea of Raising Heart modified as a gun is awesome.
...
Why do more plotbunnies attack me while I'm trying to focus on just one? D:
NorthernFallout
2008-10-16 14:20
Quote:
Originally Posted by RadiantBeam
(Post 1992085)
Why do more plotbunnies attack me while I'm trying to focus on just one? D:
Plotbunnies are such evil creatures. They always strike when you are unprepared, don't have time or just don't want to...I'm starting to think they are divine, summoned by the Great Plotbunnie living in an alternate dimension.
On a more serious note, no development on the DR and FotR front. My ideas are lacking again so it might take some time to get going again. I don't know why, might be a combination of assignments, exams and lazyness...
Vivio Testarossa
2008-10-16 14:37
Quote:
Originally Posted by RadiantBeam
(Post 1991377)
The main reason for the shift is because at this point, Nanoha isn't capable of handling the magnitude of magic that she used to back in A's because her her injury. Her body is very fragile (just making one set of magic bullets drains her), and I figured a gun was the best choice since, in general, guns are a long-distance kind of weapon that don't require much hand-to-hand combat. I realize there are exceptions to this, but that's what I was going for when I was figuring out what Nanoha could do without any magic or with only a limited amount.
Ok next question... what type of gun? Shotgun? Sniper rifle? Uzi? etc...
RadiantBeam
2008-10-16 14:38
Quote:
Originally Posted by Vivio Testarossa
(Post 1992126)
Ok next question... what type of gun? Shotgun? Sniper rifle? Uzi? etc...
Unfortunately I'm not familiar with the different kinds of guns that exist today, but it's a handgun. You know, the kind of thing a police officer would carry that can be strapped to the waist or on the shoulder with a belt or sling. I'm even thinking of having Elise give Nanoha one of her guns, since in the Triangle Heart OVA she has two of her own.
Nanoha gave Subaru a sour look after she said she quit. It was unlike her to do that but then again, Nanoha did push her to the brink during training that Subaru almost attempted to hit her. Unacceptable.
“Okay, Subaru, go get some rest. Perhaps you can think it over clearly after that.” said Nanoha.
“Yeah yeah, I know.” Subaru said while she gave Nanoha a sarcastic salute. Nanoha wanted to rebuke her for insubordinance when Subaru turned around and walked away. Maybe she was too harsh on her. Maybe she’ll go talk to Subaru about it later.
Later that evening, Nanoha sat down at the cafeteria to watch the news. Lately, there were reports of TSAB ships being destroyed near the Solar System. Nanoha wondered if Chrono Harlaown had the right mind to explore there because besides Earth and Mars, there were no other hospitable places suitable for colonization. Speaking of Earth-
“Nanoha, can you turn around for a moment?” Nanoha turned around to find Fate standing behind her with a few pictures. “I want you to look at this” said Fate. There was a tone of confusion in her voice. Nanoha took the pictures and looked at it. It showed a blurry outline of a large object, most likely man-made. It was kind of blockish yet intimidating to look at. “What are these suppose to be, Fate? Boxes?” she asked. “That is what I want to know too. One of the ships sent to scout the Solar System took this before being destroyed.”
“That is certainly wrong. Our ships could survive firefights but this is an exception. Could it be that humans have mastered space superiority?”
“I doubt it, Nanoha. No race could just advance like that without going through decades of trial and error.Then again, only one race lives in the Solar System and that is your race.”
Nanoha winced. Humans mastering space superiority in just years, not decades? She has been absent too long from Earth so she was not updated. It’s impossible, astronomical in fact, which this could happen. “So what is Chrono’s next course of action?” Nanoha asked? “He decided to stop scouting Solar System for now. I’m still wondering though. If Chrono knew there were inhabitants there, why did he bother going there in the first place?”
“Perhaps he thinks he could bully the humans because they are weak.” Nanoha joked. The two gave false laughs and stopped. Chrono came in and stared at them.
“What was this bully thing I heard?” he said with a sarcastic tone. Nanoha laughed nervously and said “Well, we were just…uhh…joking! Yeah, we were just joking that you love to bully the uh…new mages!” Fate noded her head and grinned. “New mages? But I don’t train them. You do.” said Chrono. “Anyway, I’m just pondering over a few things I want answering as soon as possible. How did the inhabitants on Non-goverened Planet 97 get so advanced and what kind of weapon are they using? Do you girls know?” Fate scratched her head and sighed “Your guess is just as good as ours, sir.”
Chrono shook his head and left. That night, Subaru took a stroll near the water edge. Cool night wind blew in her face and it felt soothing. She took a stone and threw it into the sea when Nanoha came behind her.
“Subaru, can we have a talk?” “Leave me alone” muttered Subaru but Nanoha came up to her anyway. “Listen, have you ever felt my pain before?” asked Nanoha. “I’ve seen it through the vids months ago before Jail Scaglietti’s attack. I know it is invading your privacy but I’ve seen it anyway. I know my pain does not match yours but that does not mean you can push me around, Captain Nanoha.” said Subaru bitterly. “Yes I know but it is my duty. If I just let you go on willy nilly, what can you succeed? Think about it, Subaru, if it were not for the vigorous trainings I’ve put myself through when I was younger, I would not be so succeesful. I am who I am now because of that and I intend to teach my trainees the value of hardwork. Get what I mean? I have taught Teana that lesson before so I’m teaching you now.” Subaru wiped a tear away from her eyes. Nanoha patted her shoulder and smiled.
“So I assume you’re alright with it?” asked Nanoha smilingly. Subaru gave a slight nod and smiled back. She saluted. “Good, go get some rest then. Our next training will begin tomorrow. Remember, even if we were disbanded, that does not mean we don’t look out for each other anymore.” Nanoha said. The next morning, Nanoha trained a group of new trainees when Fate contacted her. “Nanoha, come to Saint Church now. Chrono says that it is urgent.”
“How urgent?”
“Code Red urgent. It might, I repeat, just might lead to an open war.”
Nanoha shuddered. Cold sweat ran down her head and felt tingles in her spine. Open war was the worst thing the Mid-Childans were ill-prepared for since the tight military budget was discouraging anyone from joining the military, coupled with the number of mages KIAed during the attack Jail Scaglietti launched. Military power wasn’t sufficient.
“I’m on my way.” said Nanoha as she closed the holocom. “Okay, trainees, you are dismissed for now. I have an urgent meeting to attend.”
At Saint Church, Chrono paced in his office while watching a video transmission sent by one Fleet Admiral Kiethon Marshall. It originated from Non-governed Planet 97. He was older than Chrono by 5 years but he looked like he had 20 years of battle experience. The dangerous look on his face suggested that.
“This is Fleet Admiral Kiethon Marshall of Terran Space Force Command located in Okinawa, Japan. To whoever intruded our territory, we have traced a signal to your homeworld and we have our sights on you. You have violated Terran Space Protocol by intruding without official permission. We have the authority to use force against you for your intentions are unknown. However, we will send a negotiator to hear your explanation for your intrusion as we try not to risk war. But if I find my negotiator killed or your explanation is unable to convince us, you better prepare yourself. Kiethon signing out.”
Chrono tapped his foot and scratched his head. “What say you, Fate?”
Fate looked down and replyed “Lets wait for Nanoha, then we decide whether to discuss this with the top brass or take things into our hands.”
[B]What is your verdict? Should they choose
a) Let the military top brass do the talking
b) Meet the negotiator themselves, or
c) Kill him
Can't wait for more :D B on this one.
Quote:
Originally Posted by Laith
(Post 1990909)
Spoiler for From 400 to 500 there are too many worlds:
“Anyway,” Fate said as she stood in the frame of the door. “What are you doing?”
“Preparing for a party, cant you see?” Hayate responded as she was floating near the door, to place the start of a banner that read something like “Con-tul-fo-eac-500-es” which meant nothing to her.
“And what are we celebrating?” she asked curious at what was the special occasion that kept Nanoha and Vivio for welcoming her after months of not seeing each other.
“You don’t know?” Fate shook her head. “But it’s so simple that even Vivio knows,” then Hayate stopped. “Have you really gone that long?”
“It was only two, three months away.” she answered, trying to defend herself.
“So that´s why. Well that´s no big deal, I can make a quick tour with you so you can understand.” Taking Fate´s hand she quickly ran into a table. Sitting her down, she started to say.
“So your little vampirism continued, with you knowing more about the new girl of Britain. There was a try on a crossover between us and the most gainax series ever. Vita got a new adventure, Vivio eventually showed up. Your mother and Nanoha-chan´s mother started a romance. I and Carim started a romance too, with politics and Vivio and Zafira on the background. Your Landscaper work got a nice welcome. Your artist side came to be known as you wooed Nanoha once again. Shamal was a secret agent, can you believe that? The guys started to tell bedtime stories to Vivio. She liked them all. Teana and Nanoha fell in love and escaped from the police. Nanoha, Signum, Tomoyo, Erio and I went to a mission in outer space. Yuuno got bionic implants can you believe it? Childhoods were cracked but that tends to happen. Syn and Vivio told us their story… you will know Syn soon enough. We started a really nice romance or continued I am not so sure. Yuuno got a protagonist role and he is in a dating sim or something, I am not sure about the details. Vivio was going to star in another adventure and you are going to appear with your vampirism. The reapers attacken once again and we were overpowered again. Arisa and Suzuka got their time to shine, Nanoha went medieval on us and started a campaign to save your sister. People started to appear and fight and we got involved. You got so cute and innocent while Nanoha made honor to her white devil nickname. Zest got killed after finding about who was his son. Yuuno, Vita and Vivio were sold to the Testarossa manor.You and Nanoha were separated by space, literally. A virus attacked and made zombie people. Zafira saved Nanoha from dying. There some short but awesome adventures too” She stopped the long list and returned to Fate. “Now you remember?”
The expression on her face couldn’t be described as she said three words. “WHAT THE HELL?”
---
The banner just said something simple.
“Congratulations for reaching 500 pages fanfiction thread” Keep going guys.
Do YOU remember?
Yes actually I do :p
Quote:
Originally Posted by Evangelion Xgouki
(Post 1989175)
DIVIDED DESTINY Two People, Two Paths
Spoiler for Divided Destiny, pt. 13:
Mother and daughter parted ways back at the entrance to the lab. The metal doors closed, leaving Fate alone with her thoughts. Her original plan to head back to work just didn't seem like a good idea at the moment, not with the information her mother divulged to her fresh in her mind. With no room to retreat to, she opted to take a walk instead. It would be better than standing around and letting her new knowledge eat away at her.
Walking away from the lab, she was alone. Even given the current circumstances, the rules about keeping the tubes in front of structures was strictly enforced. Not only was it a safety hazard, but allowed for people to enter and leave easier. The lack of distractions let her mind wander the most recent thoughts: The Blight. Just what had they been thinking when they developed such a microbe? Surely the scientists on the project would have realized that they needed a counter-measure in case it would get out of hand. Historical documents from Earth had many lessons of engineered bio-organisms which had gotten lose. It was also taught and emphasized at the University. Unless...the council. The council was the only group powerful enough to override procedures. But why? Were they really that determined to terraform the planet?
Coming upon the intersection in the tubes, her thoughts are abruptly broken. The sections before her were filled with people. Since the evacuation of the main colony, there hasn't been enough time or materials to construct Residencies to accommodate all the colonists. As a result, most are forced to spend their nights in the tubes between structures with that little belongings they had if any at all. A path was kept clear for foot traffic, but it still felt cramped. Fate carefully made her way through the wall of people. She couldn't help but notice the expression on their faces. That look of worry and fear of the unknown. Besides the council and a few scientists which now included herself, no one knew about the cause of the evacuation. If word got out about the microbe, who knows what would happen. What was sure was that it would definitely not help the current morale, as low as it already was.
A glance at her watch showed that she had better start getting back to the lab.
A) Try not to dwell too much more on the situation with The Blight
B) See if she can uncover some more information regarding the microbe
C) Change to Nanoha's PoV
Originally Posted by Knight of L-sama
(Post 1989560)
Let's try this again...
Spoiler for Pt. 7- Fate's Revolution:
"You promise to be good?"
Fate withheld her sigh. "Yes, Nanoha."
"You promise to break that promise?"
"Yes, Nanoha."
"You promise to be a good lying demon and lie to me?"
"Yes, Nanoha."
Nanoha hugged Fate one last time. "Good Fate-chan. I'll see you when I get home. Don't do anything I wouldn't do, all right? They're all yours for the weekend."
"Yes, Nanoha." This time, Fate put feeling into it, smiling as she indulged in Nanoha's hugging. She whispered, "Don't come back hurt."
Nanoha snorted at the idea, but her eyes showed her acknowledgment of Fate's concern. "I won't. Let's move!" With that she turned away from Fate and walked away with her entourage of lower-level demons.
Fate watched as they all flew off, watched until the flight hatch closed, and then let out a loud whoop of unrestrained joy. She danced around in a little circle with Arf before running off.
"Come on, let's hurry! We have to go call Hayate and tell her Nanoha's gone out of town!"
Minutes later, Fate had flopped onto the bed with the M2D screen up. Puppy-form Arf was at the foot of the bed, stretching out for a good long nap on the comfy bed Nanoha always kicked her out of when she was there.
Hayate answered instantly, as if she had been expecting the call. "Well, hello there, Fate-chan. What can I do for you? Nanoha's not home?"
Fate smiled, a little calmer having made contact. "Nope. She went to go kill some rebellious demons on the border. She said she'll be gone the whole weekend."
Hayate smiled back. "She'll probably be back early you know."
Fate hesitated, and then decided to plow through. "I know that, but... well... Oh, Hayate, just come over anyway, won't you? It's my first time being left in control without the old ninny Vita watching my every step. Come on, it'll be fun."
Hayate laughed. "Devilish fun?"
Fate flushed as she unconsciously looked down at her more than adequate chest, which had grown well with all the love it had received. "Um, well, something like that. But come on, you gotta help me! You know I don't have much time left."
Hayate's smile softened and she moved to get up from wherever she was sitting. "Be ready to open the doors in about an hour, all right? I'll be there."
Fate grinned wildly, the adrenaline pumping into her usually languid blood stream. "Thanks, Hayate! You won't regret it."
Hayate chuckled. "A devil never regrets-"
"-only forgets." They shared a smile. "I'll get them ready on this side too."
"See you in a bit then."
"Mm. Bai-bai!" With a giggle, Fate disconnected and hopped off the bed. "Come on Ar-" She paused as she saw Arf happily sleeping like she had never slept before. Creeping quietly over, Fate leaned down and kissed Arf's forehead. "Sleep the good sleep, Arf."
Arf murmured something, but did not appear to awaken. Fate changed her clothes to something between comfortable and commanding, pilfered tapes from her secret stash in the back of her sock drawer, and slipped out of the mistress bedroom.
She hadn't even walked down one hallway before she came across a subordinate.
The subordinate stopped and saluted. "Fate-sama!"
Fate stopped as well and leaned her weight on the heels of her feet with her arms folded. "At ease. Griffith, I want you to gather everyone in the mess hall in ten minutes. I want to... address them all at once."
"Yes, Fate-sama!"
"Dismissed."
After he scampered off, Fate let out a low sigh and pretended to gag. She hated telling people what to do, but she had to admit, it got things down faster here and didn't confuse those with small minds.
She arrived in the mess hall early and went to the cafeteria lines, where everyone immediately stepped back to let her cut in. She growled in her best I'm-in-a-bad-mood snarl and ordered, "Give me my usual."
Fate amused herself on the glowing eyes of respect that watched her drink dark red liquid from a tin can typically reserved for whiskey. It took a real devil among devils to drink that concoction at this early hour.
Of course, Fate would never tell that, unlike Nanoha, her concoction was only Hawaiian Punch with extra red dye, not alcoholic blood.
With her teeth stained red, dripping with fake blood, she snapped, "Meeting in 10 in the hall. Be there or die."
She walked away to their simultaneous salutes. Fate already felt a headache coming on and she gulped down more of her punch. She could never understand how Nanoha was willing to do all that and more. Upon reaching the podium upon the dais, Fate sat down in Nanoha's usual seat and collected her thoughts.
When she saw Griffith amongst the other gathered minions down below, she stood up, ready to make her announcement.
They waited with baited (and nauseatingly bad) breath as Fate took advantage of the silence to add tension. Then, she started talked, soft, even, using her powers to echo her words into the cores of their undead souls.
"I've been with you lot for a while, and you know who I am probably better than I know any of you personally. You know that should anything happen to the White Devil, I will take her place. I haven't said anything concrete until now, but I'm sure you've all heard your share of rumors over the years on how I intend to change things.
"As I suspect days like this where I am in temporary control will become more and more frequent, I expect you to treat my word as if I am the ruling devil here in such times. Today is only the first day of many. I will lay down my ground rules here and any who oppose it, or any who ignore it, will meet a fate worse than death."
Fate went on to discuss punishments under her regiment, how dungeon prisoners would be dealt with, how they were expected to treat each other, yada yada, etc etc.
By the time she finished 20 minutes later, a few weaker souls had passed out from the very idea of some things she had suggested, while the rest merely quaked in their non-bootish boots.
Fate scanned the crowd with well-concealed emotion and growled, "Is that clear?"
There was a mass salute. "Yes, Fate-sama!"
"Good. Devil Mistress Hayate will be visiting us today, to help with preparations, so I expect you all to obey the new protocol. Return to your normal stations and implement my changes immediately. Dismissed!"
"Yes, Fate-sama!"
By the time the doors were opened for Hayate, the place had been transformed from the inside out.
Hayate whistled, openly impressed, as she looked around. She pointed to the newly appointed janitors in rainbow colored outfits with mops. "Are those prisoners or employees?"
"Prisoners serving actively passive punishment."
"Oh really? How so? Are those... ear plugs?"
Fate smiled as they walked past. Strains of the tune, "It's a small world," escaped the earplugs in a way that made Hayate cringe. "They listen to music agreed to be undesirable by demons but even less desirable for other folk, while doing jobs that no self righteous demon would be caught doing. Like making a place cleaner."
Hayate laughed. "Did you empty out the dungeons?"
"Mostly. The bigger creatures were released into the moat with trackers and are being trained into sentries."
"What happens to them if they escape?"
"They get shot by the goodie-goods practicing archery on the other side of the forest."
"Well there's a happy thought."
Fate sighed, smiling a little as she took Hayate's hand. "But enough of that. Come on, let's go to the bedroom. I've collected just about everything we'll need."
"Do you think... do you think Nanoha will... mind? I know she doesn't exactly like me..."
Fate smiled a secret smile. "It's fine, I promise. My word is rule for today and I say it's fine."
Hayate laughed. "All right, if you say so, Fate."
The day passed as Fate and Hayate locked themselves in the room. Any paserbyer may have been concerned at the noises that came from within, but after the speech that morning, they were hardly willing to risk Fate's wrath.
It was in this way that Nanoha came home (early) to prisoners cleaning her halls and Hayate asleep in her bed with Fate.
Before she even had a chance to be livid though, Fate opened her eyes, as if sensing her presence. Fate smiled languidly, and then poked Hayate awake.
Hayate caught on quickly to the new presence and also smiled. She put a finger to her lips as she stepped out of bed and walked towards Nanoha.
Her eyes pinned Nanoha to the back of the door. Hayate closed the door with a gentle click. "Welcome back, Nanoha."
"Happy death-versary, you mean. The day we became devils to protect each other."
No more was said, no more needed to be said. They kissed.
Fate slowly rolled off the bed, replacing her presence with all the things that she had helped prepare with Hayate.
As things gravitated toward the bed, Fate slipped away, until she was able to close the door behind her. After a pause, she made sure that she had gone largely unnoticed, Fate sighed happily and walked off.
If Nanoha was happy... if she could only let her guard down and be truly happily one day in the whole year... If Fate's precious person could be aided in that way... then Fate would not, did not, hesitate to help.
"Are you sure about this?" Fate's uneasy voice faltered when she looked around the corner to where Nanoha was sitting. The girl was eating lunch on the weekend by herself while happily reading a book on magical techniques.
"Sure I'm sure," Hayate confirmed, looking over Fate one last time. A very tight black mini skirt hugged the girl's hips before revealing black stocking clad legs that went into heels. A fashionable matching top covered the girl's upper half while still showing off a mass of cleavage for the world to see. The hair was left flowing completely and dark sunglasses covered her eyes. To top it off, a gold bracelet was on her slender wrist and a purse was carried as well. "You look like a buisness woman, she'll fawn all over you!"
Fate took a deep breath and nodded, getting one last thumbs-up before she rounded the corner and began to strut her way over to the girl. Her hips wagged with each step, breasts bouncing just enough to get the attention of the males around her. One man choked on his coffee as she passed and another walked into a lamp post while looking at her butt. When she got over to Nanoha, she noticed that the girl was now on her cell phone so she bent over lightly, her breasts begging for attention. "Nanoha," Her voice was slightly husky and she pulled down her sunglasses just lightly to look at her.
"Really!?" Nanoha jumped up, shocking Fate into standing properly again. "Just now? I'll be right there!" She hung up the phone and looked at Fate excitedly. "Ah, Fate-chan, Suzuka's cat just had her kittens! I'm going to go see!" With that, she ran off happily. Fate blinked, slowly opening her mouth as if she were about to say something but closed it back shortly after.
"Hey there sexy," A voice made her turn to look up at a group of college students eying her chest. "What say you come to our frat party tonight? We could... ease some of the stress from the work day."
Fate glared hard. "I'm sixteen!" The men jumped back in shock, staring at her fora few more moments before moving off and away from her. "Mou, I knew this wouldn't work!" Turning, she tried to go back to Hayate but she tripped over her heels and crashed to the ground. "Ugh!" As she tried to stand on her heels, she unconsciously wiggled her butt in front of a man who couldn't help but whistle at her. "Animals!" She shrieked loudly, blushing and hurrying off.
To be continued!
Poor Fate, LOL :p:D
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Originally Posted by markesellus
(Post 1989698)
Poor Fate. :p Nanoha's so oblivious to her surroundings sometimes. I want a picture of Fate in that outfit. :heh:
I second this Request :D Mercurianangel we need you :kisskiss:
Quote:
Originally Posted by RadiantBeam
(Post 1992133)
Unfortunately I'm not familiar with the different kinds of guns that exist today, but it's a handgun. You know, the kind of thing a police officer would carry that can be strapped to the waist or on the shoulder with a belt or sling. I'm even thinking of having Elise give Nanoha one of her guns, since in the Triangle Heart OVA she has two of her own.
Duel wielding (:heh:) or just 1 gun?
Satashi
2008-10-16 15:07
Quote:
Originally Posted by RadiantBeam
(Post 1992133)
Unfortunately I'm not familiar with the different kinds of guns that exist today, but it's a handgun. You know, the kind of thing a police officer would carry that can be strapped to the waist or on the shoulder with a belt or sling. I'm even thinking of having Elise give Nanoha one of her guns, since in the Triangle Heart OVA she has two of her own.
Give her two, one black and one white. Name the white one Ivory, and the black one Ebony.
Cookies for reference. :cool:
Ugh....to many shorts. I feel like doing another PS!Vivio, but I need to do some Vampire!Fate and "OMFG PLEASE help me!Fate"......
Laith
2008-10-16 15:14
And a guitar-scythe for the lolz.
DMC of course Sata.
And story´s wall are horrible. They are hard to destroy.
Keroko
2008-10-16 15:15
Quote:
Originally Posted by RadiantBeam
(Post 1992133)
Unfortunately I'm not familiar with the different kinds of guns that exist today, but it's a handgun. You know, the kind of thing a police officer would carry that can be strapped to the waist or on the shoulder with a belt or sling. I'm even thinking of having Elise give Nanoha one of her guns, since in the Triangle Heart OVA she has two of her own.
If you want handguns, take Desert Eagles. I'm no gun-expert, but I know what I like, and I do like Desert Eagles.
Quote:
Originally Posted by Satashi
(Post 1992195)
Give her two, one black and one white. Name the white one Ivory, and the black one Ebony.
Cookies for reference. :cool:
Someone has been hunting crying devils lately. :p
Quote:
Originally Posted by Satashi
(Post 1992195)
Ugh....to many shorts. I feel like doing another PS!Vivio, but I need to do some Vampire!Fate and "OMFG PLEASE help me!Fate"......
Well, my vote goes for more Vivio, obviously.
Tempy
2008-10-16 15:51
Quote:
Originally Posted by RadiantBeam
(Post 1992133)
Unfortunately I'm not familiar with the different kinds of guns that exist today, but it's a handgun. You know, the kind of thing a police officer would carry that can be strapped to the waist or on the shoulder with a belt or sling. I'm even thinking of having Elise give Nanoha one of her guns, since in the Triangle Heart OVA she has two of her own.
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Originally Posted by Keroko
(Post 1992215)
If you want handguns, take Desert Eagles. I'm no gun-expert, but I know what I like, and I do like Desert Eagles.
I, however, am.
A Desert Eagle is nice if you want target shooting or a really scary looking gun, but in most combat situations, you won't want that brick. It's powerful, yes, but it's also very very big. Nanoha wouldn't be able to grip it with one hand. I'm a big guy myself, and even I find gripping it a little daunting.
Very commonly used, by police forces and the US military in general, is the Beretta M92FS, designated M9.
Also popular with police and elite branches of the military are the SIG series of firearms, particularly the P226.
The US Marines, as well as SWAT teams around the US, are very in favor of M1911A1 derivatives, choosing brands such as Springfield, Kimber, and Para-Ordnance. They do not have as high a capacity as other pistols, but M1911A1s are astoundingly reliable -- almost 100 years old and still in use to day.
I could talk about this all day, as the variety of arms is staggering. PM me if you want more detailed information,
Knight of L-sama
2008-10-16 17:09
Quote:
Originally Posted by RadiantBeam
(Post 1992085)
Why do more plotbunnies attack me while I'm trying to focus on just one? D:
Have you never heard that bunnies of all varieties multiply to the nth power? And that certain MSLN bunnies watch each others backs (and fronts)? Fweet.