2007-09-14, 18:21 | Link #9881 | |
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"Hello...brother!" Who knows? I may work further on that Numbers FOXHOUND I constructed...or a Letter-based one...alright, I'll stop now. |
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2007-09-14, 19:03 | Link #9884 | |
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Let me see... I should be posting the grand finale of Magical Cinderella today. After that, I see if I can resume my works on my Erio/Cinque/Nove scenario & Diary of a Wind Talker's onsen (hot spring) episode. Then I'll review any works I have to continue, including the prologue for the Gale Sisters Saga. |
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2007-09-14, 19:54 | Link #9885 | |||
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Character: Basically it's fine but the name of the dragon, is kinda too similar but since she's a clone of Caro, I'm ok with it. As for the doctor suiciding part, it kinda feels cliche that he was killed to get out of the picture, since he's a scientist, maybe you could make it that he died while searching for something e.g. lost logia, at least it sounds more logical and is the dragon an artifical dragon? Cause for something like dragon summoner, it's a tribe heritage(ep 3 or 4) if i remember where something was mentioned about how Caro's tribe treated her like an exile or something but still, it's your character, you don't have to shape it the way we want it to be but taking a few suggestions from us will be good ^^ Last but not least, since it's after StrikerS, it's safe to assume that it's an AU right? Cause if you're in StrikerS, you'd better prepare an Anti-Harem shield *looks at Kha*
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2007-09-14, 20:23 | Link #9886 | ||||||||||
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*snaps finger* Magical Girl Lyrical Nanoha AlternateS Timelines >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Aaron & Tk *runs* - reviewing OC integration btw. Quote:
First of all the Requiem Cannon then the Antispiral modded moon, then the Cathedral Terra - now known as Chou Ginga Dai-Gurren And then this?!! Arika... keel him! Spoiler for HAXX:
- In my side of FileS III, That move can demolish in one blow a colony ship of the "Sons of Abel"- each the size of Chou Ginga Dai-Gurren - And just add a spiral wave from the tip and you have... *Runs from Chou Ginga Dai-Gurren-Lagann* Quote:
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Arika: They get all the fun... Creator-Kun: what are you thinking Arika?!! You're an Otome for cry- Unlimited Hyper Blue Comets >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Creator-Kun + ShizNat fans THAT >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> OC THREAD AGAIN [Lord Genome]She has inherited the power of THE SPIRAL[/Lord Genome] *runs* Wait... speaking of SPIRALS... does that mean that U****** N***** is an Antispiral target? *Runs from Sasuke fangirls + Akatsuki + more Antispirals* Quote:
BUT!!! *hand in "stop" pose* I have something in mind... Spoiler for Haxx?:
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No wonder these guys are so unhappy with work... *remembers one scene in FileS III* Spoiler for They have been watching too much TV:
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2007-09-14, 21:11 | Link #9887 | |||||
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Location: In the XV-8A Spartan "00"
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But something about Break Liner triggered a buried memory... @WH40K Pros: Do Landraider machine spirits have IS? Quote:
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2007-09-14, 22:51 | Link #9889 | |
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Reposted from fanfic thread, because some of us just don't have time to visit it. ============= Finally, the grand finale. Yes, everyone, this marks the end of our very own stage presentation that is Magical Girl Lyrical Cinderella. I am not sure if I should write another humor/parody Nanoha fanfic, because right now I have other stories to take care of (A's Combat being one of them). Anyway, thanks for reading and following this story. Every piece of comments and feedback is very appreciated. Until then. *cue music of Trombe!* |
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2007-09-14, 22:55 | Link #9890 | |||||||||||||||
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[Kamina] Can't a man even rest in peace? [/Kamina]
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(Basically one of the patrons at my net cafe, who happens to be my cousin, said that "killing is fun", in front of my older brother, who was to be deployed to counterinsurgency (COIN) operations soon. The discussion basically went along the same vein, on how it's much easier to think and talk about killing in the frontlines than actually doing it.) Anyways, seems we're gonna have another mock battle, this time between two experienced squads, NAISU Quote:
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NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!! Still though, this chapter was made out of HOTBLOOD, WIN, AND MANLINESS *cries manly tears* And Chrono Unlimited Ecchi Works FTW!!!!!!!!
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2007-09-14, 23:22 | Link #9891 | |||||
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2:*points skywards* "OMAE NO DORIRU DE TEN O TSUKE!" 3: too bad the girls killed him before we get to see how UEW would look like. Last edited by USB500; 2007-09-14 at 23:47. |
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2007-09-14, 23:27 | Link #9892 | |||||
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Join Date: Apr 2007
Location: The Girl who Lost her Tears
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Tackling heavier posts later... or tomorrow...
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Damn, and I was going to use Maria, Nel, and Fayt later... Quote:
This story is pretty similar to Gwendolyn's, then... sweet! (not sweet for what happened to Erio, though, of course ) Quote:
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I see you're back on track with your inspiration... didnt even need my help, eh? @Saint X What's a Saint X post without some Arika? Nice pic. Quote:
Erio's harem is REAL!!! *runs from his Meister* EPIC quote! |
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2007-09-15, 00:48 | Link #9893 | ||||||||
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Join Date: May 2007
Location: Kangaroos live in my backyard =P
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And that officer was supposed to be Signum Athough I can change their identity to random officer A... Quote:
Awesome Yeah, power isn't all that matters. It doesn't matter how powerful you are if you can't handle the course to attain Agent qualification (focusing more on endurance/survival skills than just power) Quote:
Go ahead with the rankings... they're meant to tide us over until canon gives us more info (if they ever). Just as long as I know of any major happenings before hand (deaths/injuries/ love interests/etc), you're free to do what you want with them. Oh and the approximate time as well so we don't run into any nasty surprises. Quote:
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The next bit is going to good... although going to be tough to write again *sigh* SLB is most likely not going to appear though... sadly.. I think they want the training pad to still be in one piece Quote:
That was my intention... also to remind everyone that although we've seen the 'good' side of Nanoha, death in combat would be if not a common occurence, something that is likely to happen eventually, given the part of the TSAB that they're in. (active duty special forces) @ Aaron. Thanks for the feedback @ Thread The campaign to open the OC thread part 2 is more or less over... Thanks for the support. We''l just have to break this thread before they give us a new one I guess........ Last edited by Liingo; 2007-09-15 at 01:16. |
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2007-09-15, 00:57 | Link #9894 | |||||||||||||||||||||
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2007-09-15, 01:01 | Link #9895 | ||||||||
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Join Date: May 2007
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Backlog...and what's this? Almost to the 10k Barrier?
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2007-09-15, 01:29 | Link #9896 | ||||
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But yeah it's going to take a bit more then that to pin down and take out Ol' Felix. Quote:
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P*onders who’d win a fight between Negi and 10 year old Nanoha…* Oh who the fuck am I kidding they’d befriend each other so fast everyone in the area would get whiplash. (I mean the kid refused to kill a demon that murder most of his village!!! He’s like Belldandy in the body of a 10 year old boy or something!) Last edited by Tk3997; 2007-09-15 at 01:45. |
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2007-09-15, 01:42 | Link #9897 |
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Before I comb through the backlog, let me present you all with Part 4 of Interpretation. As I'm not quite sure where the story is headed after this introduction (villains, other possible OCs) this may be my last chapter for a while. Perhaps some collaboration would help get the creative juices flowing. Anyway, here it is. I hope you like it, and as always, comments and critique appreciated!
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2007-09-15, 02:02 | Link #9898 | ||
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This is part of why I’ve always preferred third person, you can just use the names in descriptions without worrying about if the characters acutally know them or not, among other things. Still I did like and the different writing style isn’t bad either, just not my personal preference. As for Hostage taking… O’Neil: I also whole heartedly endorse this, might I also suggest taking objects important to the enemy hostage as well? Spoiler for Jack O"Neil guide to escaping certain death...:
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2007-09-15, 02:02 | Link #9899 | |
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Let's hope I won't have to torture Chrono in my next Nanoha fanfics.... ===================== Quote:
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2007-09-15, 02:31 | Link #9900 | ||
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Join Date: May 2007
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Possible avenues to explore: How the lost Logia got there in the first place. Someone back at HQ noticing his efforts and snatching him for some operation elsewhere. Or just plain character development... while he's recovering from his injuries. Ie expanding upon what you started at the end with the "this guy doesn't like other people" thought. Quote:
Yeah, given that it's been 2 months since that part was posted, I didn't really think anyone would make the connection.... Could you point me to a place where you found it hard to figure out who was speaking. I'm always trying to improve my writing... plus I'm not like the other's who colour code their conversations, since I feel that you should be able to tell who's speaking from the clues that the writer provides.. However I'm aware of what you're saying, which is why I've tried to keep the number of different point's of view to a minimum, 2 main's thus far (Isamu and Myristic) and Nanoha in one small section. Interesting that you say that on the point of view... Back in the thread somewhere (don't ask me where..) I had commented that I wanted to switch over to the 3rd person style. While my future fics will be done in 3rd person, I started this in 1st person and am going to finish it in 1st person. Although I'd like to try and convert it over later, it'll require quite a bit of re-working what I've already written. I'll have to have a look at that you-tube vid once I get back home. Thanks again! |
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