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Old 2008-05-03, 11:40   Link #3961
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Undercover, Chapter Seven, "Because a battle rages inside of me"

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great chapter
I'm relieved to read, that Fate comes over her doubts about the relationship between her and Nanoha

poor Nanoha, killed for the first time
It was nice to see, that Fate comfort Nanoha

the fight was really good epic and good to read

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hum... -gets out As manga- ARRRRUUUUG. WHY YOU MAKE MY CUTE MOMENTS DIFFICULT SEVEN ARCS!?

Well, I guess that one could say that because Fate wasn't using Impulse Form that the cape wouldn't be there ... at the moment.

-goes off to facepalm in the corner.-
nothing to be ashamed
your reason was a lot better, than the simple, changing barrier jacket *thumbs up*

claiming this page: in the name of my inability to get .hack//G.U. ....
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Old 2008-05-03, 12:27   Link #3962
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Well, I guess that one could say that because Fate wasn't using Impulse Form that the cape wouldn't be there ... at the moment.
Not in your case. You already mentioned she cast aside her black cape beforehand.
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Old 2008-05-03, 12:45   Link #3963
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Not in your case. You already mentioned she cast aside her black cape beforehand.
Hum: How's this for a fix:
"Fate sheepishly shrugged and pulled on the jacket, allowing it to extend and blend into the rest of her barrier jacket. The sleeves vanished and the long tails of the cloak trailed down around Fate’s ankles. Fate’s eyes widened as the outer layer of Nanoha’s barrier jacket morphed into something that was far more suited to her own fighting style. It was similar to her own cloak in Impulse Form, but the accents were still blue - instead of black. Fate wondered if, perhaps, Nanoha would let her keep this cloak to use with Impulse form on a more regular basis. She rather liked being bathed in her best friend's protection and warmth."
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Old 2008-05-03, 12:57   Link #3964
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I guess she couldn't keep it, because Fate's cape still has black accents in Strikers.
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Old 2008-05-03, 12:58   Link #3965
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Hum: How's this for a fix:
"Fate sheepishly shrugged and pulled on the jacket, allowing it to extend and blend into the rest of her barrier jacket. The sleeves vanished and the long tails of the cloak trailed down around Fate’s ankles. Fate’s eyes widened as the outer layer of Nanoha’s barrier jacket morphed into something that was far more suited to her own fighting style. It was similar to her own cloak in Impulse Form, but the accents were still blue - instead of black. Fate wondered if, perhaps, Nanoha would let her keep this cloak to use with Impulse form on a more regular basis. She rather liked being bathed in her best friend's protection and warmth."
this is really cute
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Old 2008-05-03, 13:12   Link #3966
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I guess she couldn't keep it, because Fate's cape still has black accents in Strikers.
One could argue that when Fate actually thought about it, she realized that it would be bad to use Nanoha's magic in her own defense - and therefore just went back to her old cloak. Fate seems to me the sort who would be touched by something like Nanoha's gesture and accept it for the moment, only to later reject the gift as not being worth the magical drain that it placed on Nanoha's own linker core.

I mean, at this point in the story, Nanoha doesn't have the blaster system yet. She's still working with her barrier Jacket from the first two seasons for the most part, as Aggressor Mode still has a lot of kinks in it.

gah. I have to stop doing meta on my own fic. D:

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this is really cute
Thanks.
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Old 2008-05-03, 13:22   Link #3967
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She's still working with her barrier Jacket from the first two seasons for the most part, as Aggressor Mode still has a lot of kinks in it.
She's not. She's been using Aggressive Mode since the A's to S manga's first chapter. It's the same page where you can see Fate wears a white cape.
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Old 2008-05-03, 13:25   Link #3968
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this is a fic, naturally there are some differences between the original and the fic
so let it be and we all worship the cuteness

thank you for your hard work, Thesinwithin
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Old 2008-05-03, 13:28   Link #3969
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So I was looking at this
And I started getting inspiration for some super selfaware crack that got off topic but it's crack so who cares.
Spoiler for SUPER CRACK!... but not quite KHAAAAAAARCK:

I was glad to see that the papa Yuuno I put in Bodyguard!Nanoha wasn't so farfetched
XD XD XD
This is bloody BRILLIANT!!! Good job here!

And somebody... please remind me again why Subaru and Teana gave me TONS more yuri-vibes in one season versus all seasons combined with Nanoha and Fate?

Anyway, Mahou Shoujo-wise... hitting 20 is not a very compatible age progression ... Which makes me hate 7arcs even more for shafting Hayate's character development and appearances to hell and back...T_T

Though having a season with age 20+ magical girls sounds interestingly unique.

20's is NOT old. That's what you call young adults! It's 30's when you would be adult-adults and 40's are older adults!

......................................

*crickets chirping*

What?! >.>

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For Angel, who's taking exams.

Spoiler for Disney World Pt.5 I think:


Like Keroko said? This soooo reminded me of Keroko-chan!

And Vivio tripped once again...><

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Adorable

And this chapter was funny for two reasons. One because Nanoha's reaction to rolercoasters is funny, two because Keroko-chan suffers from the very same problem.

Heh, this reminds me of that OC scenario during the very early days of the OC-thread in which Keroko got a ride in Kha's aircraft, and he decided to 'stunt around'
She was squealing all the way...

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Spoiler for Lyrical Days:


(that was last one. Let's get a new vote count. BOLD AND RED please. If you want the rest of Lyrical Days, I will post it later probably. For now, everyone feel free to vote.
Haha...
Hyperactive and teasing Nanoha is really cute.

I'm really impressed on how you gave the Aces different personalities and pull it off convincingly.

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Hmm, Lyrical Days got a bit buried, didn't it? I vote A. Nanoha deserves a bit of apreciation.

Which reminds me, I really should finish that part of Raising Heart. Bleh, writing Nanoha in 'that' mood is hard. >_<
Oh yes. You do NOT give a girl a spec of appreciation just once and instantly jump to the next girl so easily with a drop of the hat! That's leaving things half-assed!

A. for me.=3



EDIT:

BTW, I'm not sure if this was answered... But the eyepatch girl is Ragna(?) Gransenic. Vice's sister...:3
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Old 2008-05-03, 13:49   Link #3970
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XD XD XD
This is bloody BRILLIANT!!! Good job here!

And somebody... please remind me again why Subaru and Teana gave me TONS more yuri-vibes in one season versus all seasons combined with Nanoha and Fate?
Gotta love Subaru for deciding the best way to wake up Tia was major gropage. XD

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EDIT:

BTW, I'm not sure if this was answered... But the eyepatch girl is Ragna(?) Gransenic. Vice's sister...:3
Thanks very much . *thinks of all the possibilities now that she has an actual name* Mau ha ha ha a new pretty much personalityless character for me to mess with
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Old 2008-05-03, 15:38   Link #3971
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EDIT:

BTW, I'm not sure if this was answered... But the eyepatch girl is Ragna(?) Gransenic. Vice's sister...:3
I'd spell it Laguna.... It's a french car ^^; (wiki)
...Ooh, not the only one it seems. I didn't really looked at this before because I'm not really into cars
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Old 2008-05-03, 16:27   Link #3972
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It appears I've written a new Tale from Hayate's house

Magical Babysitter lyrical... Vita?!

And yes it is based on that picture Evil Rick posted like six pages back.
O.o

O.o

O.o

O.o

*Keels over laughing*

Oh god...oh god! LOL XD *Dies laughing*

That was BRILLIANT! XD
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Old 2008-05-03, 17:19   Link #3973
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Spoiler for It's right below the title, so I don't mind revealing this:

...a duck?


...isn't the term...what IS the term?

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Stuff like that happens:

Spoiler for and then some:
BWAHAHA!

Evil Overlord Teacher!


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According to cosplay...



Hayate = Racoon
Fate = Cat
Nanoha = Dog

It kinda fits since she's as friendly as you get...

:3 :3 :3

*runs*

...why is it that Fate = Kitty? I never understood the reason behind it...

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Spoiler for Lyrical Days:


(that was last one. Let's get a new vote count. BOLD AND RED please. If you want the rest of Lyrical Days, I will post it later probably. For now, everyone feel free to vote.

Lyrical Days...?


LYRICAL DAYS!!!!!

SATASHI-SAMA!!!!

<glomps Satashi, then whacks>

[Tsundere]You know how LONG I've been waiting for this?![/Tsundere]


And I vote:


A


Because I am not ashamed to show my Yuunohaness!



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For Angel, who's taking exams.

Spoiler for Disney World Pt.5 I think:

Uguu~!
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Old 2008-05-03, 18:10   Link #3974
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.....Yuunoha is winning? @_@

*twilight zone music* Wha....WHERE AM I!?
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Old 2008-05-03, 18:18   Link #3975
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.....Yuunoha is winning? @_@

*twilight zone music* Wha....WHERE AM I!?
You... don't want to know. This is the internet, a scary, scary place.
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Old 2008-05-03, 18:19   Link #3976
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.....Yuunoha is winning? @_@

*twilight zone music* Wha....WHERE AM I!?
Only because the ultimate choice isn't a choice *shakes head sadly*

YUURO FOREVER!


...
..
.

Yes Yuuro is Yuuno and Chrono :3


Yuuno: Oh Chrono~ *moves in for a kiss*
Chrono: *Yuuno is REJECTED* No my love we must not
Yuuno: Why ever not?
Chrono: Because we have a bunch fangirls stalking us
Nanoha/Fate/Hayate: *hide cameras*
Hayate: Oh no no please continue
Nanoha: Just pretend we're not here
Fate: *blushing too heavily to speak*
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Old 2008-05-03, 18:21   Link #3977
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.....Yuunoha is winning? @_@

*twilight zone music* Wha....WHERE AM I!?
This is my vote.

Let it be known.

A
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Old 2008-05-03, 18:33   Link #3978
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Only because the ultimate choice isn't a choice *shakes head sadly*

YUURO FOREVER!


...
..
.

Yes Yuuro is Yuuno and Chrono :3


Yuuno: Oh Chrono~ *moves in for a kiss*
Chrono: *Yuuno is REJECTED* No my love we must not
Yuuno: Why ever not?
Chrono: Because we have a bunch fangirls stalking us
Nanoha/Fate/Hayate: *hide cameras*
Hayate: Oh no no please continue
Nanoha: Just pretend we're not here
Fate: *blushing too heavily to speak*
... ... ....

This... this is too much I... I can't...

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Old 2008-05-03, 19:01   Link #3979
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Only because the ultimate choice isn't a choice *shakes head sadly*

YUURO FOREVER!


...
..
.

Yes Yuuro is Yuuno and Chrono :3


Yuuno: Oh Chrono~ *moves in for a kiss*
Chrono: *Yuuno is REJECTED* No my love we must not
Yuuno: Why ever not?
Chrono: Because we have a bunch fangirls stalking us
Nanoha/Fate/Hayate: *hide cameras*
Hayate: Oh no no please continue
Nanoha: Just pretend we're not here
Fate: *blushing too heavily to speak*
Brilliant! How sad I haven't been able to read something like that before...
/Interesting. How can yuri fan fall so easily for yaoi?/ *hides again*
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Old 2008-05-03, 19:08   Link #3980
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Brilliant! How sad I haven't been able to read something like that before...
/Interesting. How can yuri fan fall so easily for yaoi?/ *hides again*
YuunoxChrono is my OTP now :3
Why?









Because if Yuuno's with Chrono, Nanoha's free for the taking.

Nanoha: Don't I get a say in this?
Fate: *Dragging Nanoha off* No not really.
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