2009-04-01, 15:05 | Link #21 |
Paparazzi
Join Date: Mar 2008
Age: 41
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Actually it was KiNA...
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2009-04-01, 15:20 | Link #23 | |
Pieces Of Me
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I'm sorry bout that. Just make sure it's an Oreo chizukaeki!
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2009-04-01, 16:41 | Link #27 |
Star Designer
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Join Date: Aug 2008
Location: Europe
Age: 39
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2. Highlighted the right portion of the wall so that Miku does not blend with the background that much. Thank you for the feedback. I see if I can do something about the text as well
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2009-04-01, 16:46 | Link #28 | |
time waits for no one <3
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Join Date: Aug 2008
Location: Portugal, Lisbon
Age: 32
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I like the red from and the font itself although... vocals doesn't seem vocals... I though it was 'vocally' at first *no idea if that's even a word* so maybe you should change something there
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2009-04-01, 17:51 | Link #29 |
books-eater youkai
Join Date: Dec 2007
Location: Betweem wisdom and insanity
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@Urei , 2 is better, but like you said the text could have moore work.
As my ''book eater youkai' idea didn't pass in the food theme, hope this one fit the tough guy/girl or the stuffed toy theme.
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2009-04-01, 18:13 | Link #30 | |
time waits for no one <3
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Join Date: Aug 2008
Location: Portugal, Lisbon
Age: 32
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eeto, I really don't know what to say about it hmmm.. well, the gun shouldn't have been cut off up there if there was going to be transparency... the font looks like it lacks quality - I dunno if you understand what I mean... and as it's been said before - the use of more than 2 renders makes the sig lose focus.. and I think the right side is kind of stretched.. I'm sorry T_T it looks like I'm criticizing everything but I'm just trying to be helpful really T_T please don't be mad at me
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2009-04-01, 18:31 | Link #33 | |
books-eater youkai
Join Date: Dec 2007
Location: Betweem wisdom and insanity
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@vandakiara, I am not mad at you, why should I ? it was honest C&C, no.
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2009-04-01, 21:20 | Link #38 |
Black Dragon
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Join Date: Dec 2007
Location: In the Netherrealm, thinking who to betray next...
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This looks better, although I would change the text's font, the actual one is a bit hard to read
Text is still bad, the problem is that it looks like crispy, also, I sugest you to change the bg, the actual one looks kinda... cheap >.o
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2009-04-01, 21:32 | Link #39 |
Mr. Broshido
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Join Date: Jun 2008
Location: Chile
Age: 31
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Good idea, bad execution D: Couldn't even get it to be AS safe!
This theme is getting a lot harder than I think it would be... Edit: Well, this picture fits the theme...somehow...I....guess? Last edited by Usami Haru; 2009-04-01 at 21:57. |
2009-04-01, 21:59 | Link #40 |
books-eater youkai
Join Date: Dec 2007
Location: Betweem wisdom and insanity
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Usami Haru it'S really a good idea, the color one,. After getting AS safe I would get rid of the part at the left, it's fit bad with the 2 color frames.
3th version, I get rid of one background, modified the other, displaced the render and changed the quote. I am not sure I will keep that font for the quote. C&C would be appreciated. ( Thank Evil Rick )
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