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Join Date: Jun 2009
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2009-10-18, 22:34 | Link #17262 |
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Location: Alberta, Canada
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@Raiser: I see nothing wrong with the fic so far. Nanoha's initial stance and Yuuno's reaction shows, me anyway, that if Yuuno goes out of line, he will enter a world of pain. And just because Nanoha and Fate give Yuuno and Vivio the OK to start a courtship doesn't mean the Aces won't be watching like hawks.
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2009-10-19, 10:06 | Link #17265 |
Worshipper of Nanoha...
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Location: In my imagination...
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Part 1 of 6 from Animal Instincts: Chapter 2
Previous: Animal Instincts: Preface Animal Instincts: Chapter 1: The Girl from the City Spoiler for Part one of six (1/6) from Animal Instincts: Ch. 2:
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2009-10-19, 12:33 | Link #17266 | |
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My only real nitpick: I can understand that breaking into a close town community is a difficult thing to do, and I know that Fate being an outsider and not accepted is important for her to bond with Nanoha, but I find it incredibly difficult to believe that Fate didn't at least befriend one person in the town or make a good, favorable impression on someone without her even knowing about it. The story is a NanoFate, but it wouldn't hurt for Fate to have some other companions that can at least somewhat accept her for who she is. That's the only thing that really bugs me. Otherwise, I like it.
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2009-10-19, 12:50 | Link #17267 | |
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2009-10-19, 13:20 | Link #17269 | |
does whatever he wants.
Join Date: Feb 2008
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...As will I. Till later... *Wild laughter is heard in the distance, driven on by the screaming storm* |
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2009-10-19, 17:53 | Link #17273 | |
Vividly Vivio
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Plus, rambling Nanoha-Mama is always welcome
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2009-10-19, 18:48 | Link #17275 | |
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Vita: Heh, at least I know my role as the token eternal loli will never be taken over. I'll always have the pedophiles in my fanbase. Rein: Hey Vita~~~~ Check out Rein's big form! Agito: Oi! I have one too! *kick to the head* Rein: TAT that hurt you meanie! Fans: awwwwww (HNNNNNNNG) Vita:... Cinque: Don't worry about your big sister, *Longcoat, knives out cool pose* Younger Numbers: *-* so cool Fans: \awesomebadass/ Vita: ........ Ix: zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz Subaru + Vivio: IXYYYYYYYYY *Nosebleed* Fans: IXY!!!!!!! ;-; Vita: god damnit ... no one is safe from replacement |
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2009-10-19, 18:52 | Link #17276 | |
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2009-10-19, 19:19 | Link #17277 | |
Beta by Accident
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2009-10-19, 19:39 | Link #17278 | |
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Ixy:....... *smiling in sleep* Vivio: And we'll be friends forever. Ixy:...... *smiles* Vivio:*dead serious* but if you steal my fanbase, you'll be sleeping with the fishes. Ixy:.....*suddenly shivers in her sleep*
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2009-10-19, 19:43 | Link #17279 | |
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Don't wake up, Ixy! For your own good, don't wake up!
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authorshipping, befriending, fanfiction, interactive fanfiction, nanoha |
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