Evil Rick's Dark Vault

[Hooves]

Sounds interesting I always do love to read fan-made comics. December is not that far atleast, so I can wait

[Evil Rick]

Okay, here's a preview of Nanoha Revolution.

[Hooves]

That preview just sent me adaze to the storyline Its set in the end of the world! All hope is lost But just leave it to Nanoha, once she figures out what is going on

[Evil Rick]

Just dropping a Nanoha Revolution page lineart preview from Chapter 1, this is the 2nd page after the scene with the little boy.

[Hooves]

Is that a dragon? With Horns? Also what seems to be a fin on the other side?

[Evil Rick]

Colored version (and last preview)



Final comic will be 10 full-color pages, wiat for it this December!

[Evil Rick]

More from Nanoha Revolution



Promo art by me and my friend Champe.

[KiNA]

Originally Posted by Evil Rick

Colored version (and last preview)



Final comic will be 10 full-color pages, wiat for it this December!

You might want to consider the shading for the monster .. the fire came from its back so the shadow should be in front.

[Evil Rick]

Originally Posted by KiNA

You might want to consider the shading for the monster .. the fire came from its back so the shadow should be in front.

I'll try to fix it, but saddly, I may have no time since I'm running against the clock to finish this (Release date is next week and I have 3 pages left to go D: )

[Hooves]

Originally Posted by Evil Rick

I'll try to fix it, but saddly, I may have no time since I'm running against the clock to finish this (Release date is next week and I have 3 pages left to go D: )

next week... 3 pages left to finish, and some changes to make.. I send my condolences Evil Rick.

[Evil Rick]

Originally Posted by Hooves

next week... 3 pages left to finish, and some changes to make.. I send my condolences Evil Rick.

Oh well, thanks for the moral support

[Evil Rick]

Currenty finishing the last page!

Nanoha Revolution is out this Friday 24th!

[Hooves]

The 24!? I have to plan that on my schedule

[Evil Rick]

My comic Nanoha Revolution is ready and up!

10 full color pages of this new take on the Nanoha Universe, art and story by myself.

Cover: http://evil-rick.deviantart.com/gallery/#/d35kijj
Rights: http://evil-rick.deviantart.com/gallery/#/d35kinp
Intro: http://evil-rick.deviantart.com/gallery/#/d35kirl
Page 1: http://evil-rick.deviantart.com/gallery/#/d35kjhc
Page 2: http://evil-rick.deviantart.com/gallery/#/d35kjwa
Page 3: http://evil-rick.deviantart.com/gallery/#/d35kk01
Page 4: http://evil-rick.deviantart.com/gallery/#/d35kk4c
Page 5: http://evil-rick.deviantart.com/gallery/#/d35kk88
Page 6: http://evil-rick.deviantart.com/gallery/#/d35kkcx
Page 7: http://evil-rick.deviantart.com/gallery/#/d35kkgt
Page 8: http://evil-rick.deviantart.com/gallery/#/d35kklq
Page 9: http://evil-rick.deviantart.com/gallery/#/d35kkow
Page 10: http://evil-rick.deviantart.com/gallery/#/d35kktf

Enjoy and please share any opinion.

[Hooves]

Intro: Made a few typos there "tough - thought" "executer - execute?" "phew - few?" the question marks at the end are me thinking I mistook it.

A wonderful start, but leaves many things to be considered I especially like the character Carlitos Very carefree guy that I think speaks Spanish since I heard "senorita". What makes me curious ever since you started coloring the pictures, is what was the pink glow around Nanoha's hand? Well, I guess that is going to be revealed later? If you are going to make more of course

[Evil Rick]

Originally Posted by Hooves

Intro: Made a few typos there "tough - thought" "executer - execute?" "phew - few?" the question marks at the end are me thinking I mistook it.

A wonderful start, but leaves many things to be considered I especially like the character Carlitos Very carefree guy that I think speaks Spanish since I heard "senorita". What makes me curious ever since you started coloring the pictures, is what was the pink glow around Nanoha's hand? Well, I guess that is going to be revealed later? If you are going to make more of course

Thanks for the suport and I'm glad you liked it, well, I'll continue this, the speed depends a lot on how my readers react to it since Nanoha Revolution is not my only project going.

In other words, If people ask for it, I'll present updates a lot faster but have in mind that I have lot of people alos asking for more Master Light and more Condemned Souls.

Yeah, the guy is spanish, more exactly, Carlitos is Mexican and has his eye set on Nanoha XD However, the danger are only starting for these two. There are worst enemies than Astaroth.

[Evil Rick]

Okay, tomorrow I'm leaving for vacations and won't be back 'till January, I'd like to wich you all a very Merry Christmas and a wonderful New Year, my bets wishes to all of you in this upcoming 2011, may God bless you and take care of you all, hope to see you guys around for much more time to come!

With love, Rick.

[The Chaos]

Happy Holidays to you too Rick and have fun

[Kaix]

Great start, especially since we seem to have been thrown right in the middle of the conflict. It does raise a lot of questions on what happened before the present time in the comic, but I assume those will be answered in due time? xD It's good to see Nanoha has some reason for wanting to work alone in this, too.

Nanoha's interaction with Carlitos is fun not only through their dialogue, but also the numerous facial expressions that appear. Carlitos is also really likable. His Sword Device also speaks Spanish?

The only one that's more difficult to read is that pink block of text on the intro page because it takes up half of the page and there are no additional paragraphs or any free spaces.

Have a nice vacation and a Happy New Year!

[Evil Rick]

Hi! I'm bakc

So how was everyone's holidays? I hope they were great, I'm back and full charged for bring more works to all of you, sty tooned!