2011-09-09, 23:54 | Link #1141 | |
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Make Ichika stay with Houki all the time so she didn't as fierce as canon version is.
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2011-09-10, 00:08 | Link #1143 | |
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2011-09-10, 00:14 | Link #1145 | |
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2011-09-10, 00:32 | Link #1146 | ||
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Canon character Sarashiki Tatenashi SKITS in the line and awesomely escaped, simply because she is not Harem material (meanwhile, her inferior sister is), which is an Epic Fail level of achievement in a harem series. She also popular amongst the fans. Doing an interesting character is easy, doing a interesting character with Sue/Stu-material is a gamble of the highest order for a fanfic author.
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2011-09-10, 01:48 | Link #1150 |
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Need input for Chapter 5, my head is blank AAAAAAGHHHH!!!!
My current idea is pitting Madoka against Cecilia in a demonstration match (both are gunfighters), the reason is Chifuyu too lazy to smackdab Cecilia with lecture, instead demonstrating it with Madoka. Of course both of them are fired up, as in chapter 4 Ichika interrupted them with his authority In the novel version, Chifuyu scold her the hell out because Cecilia always do flashy, useless things like carrying her rifle sideways etc. Despite has almost equal skill (Madoka is slightly inferior actually, but she has decent experience in Kenjutsu while Cecilia has none), 'By the book' Madoka is able to corner Cecil using KuroGane+ (Hi-performance Melee IS, but armed with various guns aside from Improved Katana) Chifuyu commented that Cecilia is smart enough to find the answer, and Cecilia being proud to admit her mistakes.
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2011-09-10, 02:59 | Link #1153 |
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Balance each character's cool achievement with reason and flaws, a character with too much unexplainable achievement and little to no flaws = Gary Stu, a character with too much flaw = annoying & useless.
For example: 1. Shinji in the original Evangelion is whiny and emo, and always running away from his problem, and too submissive to be true, culminating in the apocalypse in "The end of Evangelion". Fans hate him despite he's the main character. 2. Shinji in the "Rebuild of Evangelion" is less whiny and less emo, and while he thought about running away, he ended up facing his problem, less submissive to the people around him, thus deservedly treated as excellent protagonist by the fans. 3. Shinji in "SRW Alpha 3" is a badass, because other super robot hero in the game sorta slapped him some hotblood virus and always encourage him to held his justice every-time he's being whiny and emo. 4. Shinji in "Shinji & Warhammer 40K" is GODLIKE BADASS, SMART, AND MANIPULATIVE. His name mentioned as if he's a God. But this Shinji ALSO being whiny an emo BECAUSE people did not accept him as normal teenage, and he carries too much burden than he actually could handle, forcing him to constantly improve. 5. SINO (Shinji-in-Name-only) is a gary stu with various achievement and being praised for solving each and every single mistake canon shinji has with little to no reasoning or flaw whatsoever. (plenty of them can be found in fanfiction) Comparing the five examples, number 2, 3, and 4 is excellent examples because while Shinji is upgraded, it works with the story in context. Yes, even Godlike Shinji is still makes sense. Because Shinji is whiny and emo but doesn't make him annoying because it doesn't interrupt the flow of story, but going with them. Your OC has good potential NOT to be Gary Stues, just balance it out means you can gave them some realistic flaws and realistic achievement, because a war story is asking for realistic situation.
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2011-09-10, 03:54 | Link #1155 | |
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Remember, End of Evangelion is Anno's middle finger to Japanese Otaku (at that time, during his breakdown). So, making Shinji annoying is deliberate.
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2011-09-10, 04:05 | Link #1156 |
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Can anybody please help me?
I need to see if my OC's a marty stu but I don't think the litmus test is accurate. If i post my OC's bio would any of you please read and comment on it to see if i went overboard. Please post a reply if you are, thank you to anyone in advance |
2011-09-10, 04:54 | Link #1158 | |
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Try the one I find, simple, but works for me 85% of the time. But as Box (Detective-san) said, posting your bios first, using SPOILER tags if you can. How to use it? well [ SPOILER ] Blahblahblah [ /SPOILER ] just erase the spaces inside the box (pun unintended).
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