Nanoha FanFiction Discussion

[yuiseppe]

Originally Posted by Nanya01

BTW, Yui, I love the pic. ^_^

Even better on DA.

Thanks! Yeah, usually I do tidy up pics before posting on dA, though I did get trigger happy with this one :P

[Filraen]

Originally Posted by Nanya01

Just a reminder, I did go back and edit the last part, so if you're confused about things in this part, that's why.

Peek's Mini-Arcs:

Yagami Mid Four Dwell Takamachi Scrya Fatherhood Harlaown Dreams Dance Healing Twins Advice History Onwards Cycle

BTF Omakes:

Old Iron Omakes 1, 2, 3 Mr Snuggles Omake

Playdate Start

Spoiler for Blood That Flows - Peek - Playdate 2:

...

I can imagine Lina's thoughts: "You know, it'd be nice if there isn't something threatening to destroy my homeworld this time"

Please think in the poor, innocent bandit gangs.

And ultimately it wasn't Miyuki or Nanoha who gave Lina grandchildren, of was Fate. (How old is Lina anyway? late 30's?)

I don't know if it was just me but by the end of the chapter I forgot Sukuza was with Lina (while Arf didn't talk either you mentioned her using the barrier).

[Nanya01]

Originally Posted by Filraen

I can imagine Lina's thoughts: "You know, it'd be nice if there isn't something threatening to destroy my homeworld this time"

Please think in the poor, innocent bandit gangs.

And ultimately it wasn't Miyuki or Nanoha who gave Lina grandchildren, of was Fate. (How old is Lina anyway? late 30's?)

I don't know if it was just me but by the end of the chapter I forgot Sukuza was with Lina (while Arf didn't talk either you mentioned her using the barrier).

Yeah, Lina's in her late 30s.

Suggestions on how to fix that with Suzuka?

[mega1987]

Originally Posted by Nanya01

Suggestions on how to fix that with Suzuka?

The most devastating "Bright Slap" to some fool who tick her of VERY badly for an ojou like herself?

A bonding time with Amelia and *shudders* Naga?

Meeting Xellox and Ragnort with the twins Lena and Carona and befriending the said twins normally?

[Filraen]

Originally Posted by Nanya01

Suggestions on how to fix that with Suzuka?

A comment on Lina beating the bandits or the Dragon Slave. Probably comparing it with the stories Lina must have told them some time before.

[nemo1986]

Out of curiosity when is the next update for material days or kaiser mom?

[bhl88]

I missed the captured Erio, Caro, Garu and the mistakenly assumed brainwashed Yuuno.

By the way.... what does Yuuno look like in Material Days... is it this one?

And yeah... more Material Days, Jikan and Kaiser Mom.

[blitz1/2]

Originally Posted by bhl88

I missed the captured Erio, Caro, Garu and the mistakenly assumed brainwashed Yuuno.

By the way.... what does Yuuno look like in Material Days... is it this one?

And yeah... more Material Days, Jikan and Kaiser Mom.

your link doesn't work.

[bhl88]

[nemo1986]

Originally Posted by bhl88

Am i the only one here who finds that...odd to say the least.

[mega1987]

Originally Posted by nemo1986

Am i the only one here who finds that...odd to say the least.

Brain BLEACH! on all of us!!!

OH GOD SAVE US FROM THAT!!!!

The IMAGE... THE IMAGE... IT BURNS! IT BURNS!!!!!

*gone to Reia and Iris to have that memory be purge out of my mind*

Odin: Yaoi.... *shudders* Even I get cold chills from it.

Mariemeia: Is Chrono gonna be his Partner?

Elane: I don't think That's a good Idea right now sis.

Mariemeia: Why?

Elane: Because Fate, Arisa, Riksfalto and Caro is right behind you.

*Mariemeia looks behind to see the said girls ready to rip her a new one.*

Mariemeia: Oh fuck it.

Val: She got that coming. *looks at the dust cloud where Mariemeia's beatdown was.*

Elane: Just watch out for kaze-bushin she'll make to have a quick getaway.

[Yasanagi]

Spoiler for First MD in a while from me...:

‘Let’s see… the soup’s staying warm on the stove, the salad’s been tossed and the roast potatoes are ready…’ Megane paused for a moment and took a quick peek inside the oven which showed her that the chicken meat was turning a nice golden brown. ‘Chicken’s baking nicely. And the dessert is on standby to be served later at the end of the meal.’

She felt proud of herself for putting together a sizable, nutritious and delicious meal to feed seven people on such short notice. Since things were coming along nicely, she figured that it would be time to call her daughter and have her escort any guests in the compound to the dining room table. As for Sette and Yuuno, Megane figured that they would be aware of the time and would make their way back accordingly.

“Lutecia, can you get everyone together for dinner?”

There was no immediate response to the telepathic call. At the same time, she felt a slight magical surge coming from the other end of the household which prompted her to start worrying. She wanted to go check but that would mean leaving dinner unguarded and considering how Material-L had been lurking around the kitchen earlier…

No, she shouldn’t have to worry herself about that blue haired woman. After all, that Hayate lookalike was still around to keep the Fate replica from ruining dinner for everyone. With that in mind, Megane set aside the cooking utensils and moved towards where she sensed that surge of magical energy. ‘Could it have come from the training arena?’

Before she could think about it further, she felt another magical energy surge. And this time, she was able to identify that it was coming from the interior of the library. Moving quickly, she got to the doors and just as she opened them, a huge gust of wind forced her to shield her eyes. A moment later, the scene was calm again with the only traces of activity being the window that had been forced open, a few black feathers floating down towards the table and a purple light moving further away from the compound.

She wondered what had happened but that was put on hold as she spotted her daughter’s body sprawled out on the floor. “Lutecia? Answer me!”

“M-mom?”

Hearing her daughter’s voice helped Megane calm down a little. “Are you alright? What happened? Did she hurt you?”

“No, she was… asking me questions and…” Lutecia gasped once. “Erio and Caro! They’re in trouble!”

“What do you mean?”

“They’re here on the planet! And apparently they rescued Yuuno but now those crazy women are going to kill them! We have to help them!” The insect summoner tried to get up but her legs weren’t being responsive. “Dammit!”

A quick examination by Megane revealed what was behind her daughter’s condition. “A paralysis spell?”

“As if something like that’s gonna stop me…!” growled the younger girl as she forced mana to her legs and slowly got up with her own power. However, it only lasted for a brief moment and her lower body locked up again, forcing Megane to catch her. “This spell is so annoying! It’s disrupting the nerves that connect to my Linker Core!”

“Lutecia, you need to take it easy. I know that you want to go out and help but you’re not in any condition to do anything of that sort,” said the older Alpine gently.

“Then who’s going to save…?” Lutecia trailed off as she noticed her mother’s facial expression and put it together. “Wait a second… you’re going to…?”

“I know a thing or two about dealing with rogues so just leave it to me, dear. I’ll need to borrow Asclepius though since I don’t have any other device that I can use.” Megane paused upon noticing the way her daughter was staring at her. “Oh, don’t give me that look. I know I’m a few years out of practice but once I start working with Asclepius, it’ll probably come back to me!”

“Mom… if you didn’t want me to worry, you should have left out the word ‘probably’.”

********

When Erio came to, he found himself restricted in a binding spell of sorts. A quick glance showed that Caro, Garyu and Fried were also in the same predicament and placed right next to him so that meant at the moment; they were at the mercy of these Materials. His device along with Caro’s had been taken away but the good news was that they hadn’t been destroyed yet.

As for what their captors were doing right now, he saw that the Nanoha replica was simply standing by, as if waiting for something. The dog summon was nowhere to be seen. He had probably been dismissed so that he could recover energy. And as for the Fate replica, she sat there only a few metres away and stared at them with those red eyes. The way she stared at them with those psychotic and hungry red eyes reminded him of a predator eyeing their prey. He could feel the pressure of the atmosphere smothering him, all thanks to her presence.

“So… is there any particular way you want me to carve you up once Yami-chan’s done with you?”

He couldn’t tell which was creepier: the fact that she asked him something like that so casually or the fact that if she just changed her voice by a few octaves, she would sound exactly like Fate.

“Cuz I was thinking of starting with the right arm. Then the right leg would be next. It would be like what Zombie Giant Man did to Black Panther except the meat will be fed to Kero-chan!”

Material-S stayed quiet, ready to act in case Material-L did actually attempt to cut their prisoners into sardine bits before they were interrogated. The Fate replica had been in a rather foul mood when she had been told about Yuuno’s disappearance and the pair’s involvement in it. Seikou did make it clear that throwing a temper tantrum to wreck the planet would be unproductive and that they needed those mages alive so Yami could extract the information from them.

So Rai had to stay her hand for now and think of other things such as what she could do to these prisoners once Material-D had gotten what she needed from them. “Maybe I should go an original route. Cut off a little piggy? Or maybe I should slowly grind off the part that Pinky likes the most?”

“What are you talking about?” asked Erio in a weary tone.

The Lightning Assailant rolled her eyes. “Don’t play dumb! I’m talking about down there!” In a flash, the axe head of Vulnificus was pointing right to the area between the young man’s legs which got a rather strong reaction from the device.

“Don’t point me there!”

She brought back her weapon to speak to it directly. “What’s wrong?”

“I have no interest in making extended contact with the male reproductive organ!”

“Are you worried that it’ll be a gay thing? That’s a little silly but if you’re that worried, I bet that the Golden Rule would apply here!” chirped Material-L.

“… … Golden Rule?”

And once again, those vocals of hers came to life with a song. “It’s OK when it’s in a three-way! It’s not gay when it’s in a three-way! With a honey in the middle, there’s some leeway! The area’s grey in a one-two-three way!”

“… I don’t think I want to know why you’re singing about threesomes.”

Before the wielder of Vulnificus had a chance to reply, the air shifted to signal the arrival of the third replica, Material-D. She landed gracefully on the ground, right next to Material-L. “Ah, there you are, Yami-chan! If you had taken any longer, I probably would have flown back and brought you here!”

“Thanks but no thanks,” retorted Yami before focusing in on the prisoners. “Now then…”

She didn’t get much further as Erio stood up to his full height and put himself between the Materials and his companions. “Are you the leader?”

“Your head is too high,” growled the Hayate replica as Yersinia Kreuz prepared a spell. “On your knees, mongrel!”

“Seelenfeuer.”

It only took a second for the effect to kick in and for Erio to go down on his knees as his strength left him. At the same time, he could feel a burning sensation from his Linker Core which caused him to let out a painful cry. “Graaaaahhh!”

And that was enough to wake Caro from the unconscious state she had been in since Cerberus overpowered her and Fried. “… Erio-kun!”

Yami snapped her fingers to release the spell’s effect and let the young man catch his breath. “So the both of you are now awake? That’s perfect. Now we can have a proper conversation about where you have hidden our companion.”

[ZeroXSEED]

Originally Posted by Yasanagi

Spoiler for First MD in a while from me...:

‘Let’s see… the soup’s staying warm on the stove, the salad’s been tossed and the roast potatoes are ready…’ Megane paused for a moment and took a quick peek inside the oven which showed her that the chicken meat was turning a nice golden brown. ‘Chicken’s baking nicely. And the dessert is on standby to be served later at the end of the meal.’

She felt proud of herself for putting together a sizable, nutritious and delicious meal to feed seven people on such short notice. Since things were coming along nicely, she figured that it would be time to call her daughter and have her escort any guests in the compound to the dining room table. As for Sette and Yuuno, Megane figured that they would be aware of the time and would make their way back accordingly.

“Lutecia, can you get everyone together for dinner?”

There was no immediate response to the telepathic call. At the same time, she felt a slight magical surge coming from the other end of the household which prompted her to start worrying. She wanted to go check but that would mean leaving dinner unguarded and considering how Material-L had been lurking around the kitchen earlier…

No, she shouldn’t have to worry herself about that blue haired woman. After all, that Hayate lookalike was still around to keep the Fate replica from ruining dinner for everyone. With that in mind, Megane set aside the cooking utensils and moved towards where she sensed that surge of magical energy. ‘Could it have come from the training arena?’

Before she could think about it further, she felt another magical energy surge. And this time, she was able to identify that it was coming from the interior of the library. Moving quickly, she got to the doors and just as she opened them, a huge gust of wind forced her to shield her eyes. A moment later, the scene was calm again with the only traces of activity being the window that had been forced open, a few black feathers floating down towards the table and a purple light moving further away from the compound.

She wondered what had happened but that was put on hold as she spotted her daughter’s body sprawled out on the floor. “Lutecia? Answer me!”

“M-mom?”

Hearing her daughter’s voice helped Megane calm down a little. “Are you alright? What happened? Did she hurt you?”

“No, she was… asking me questions and…” Lutecia gasped once. “Erio and Caro! They’re in trouble!”

“What do you mean?”

“They’re here on the planet! And apparently they rescued Yuuno but now those crazy women are going to kill them! We have to help them!” The insect summoner tried to get up but her legs weren’t being responsive. “Dammit!”

A quick examination by Megane revealed what was behind her daughter’s condition. “A paralysis spell?”

“As if something like that’s gonna stop me…!” growled the younger girl as she forced mana to her legs and slowly got up with her own power. However, it only lasted for a brief moment and her lower body locked up again, forcing Megane to catch her. “This spell is so annoying! It’s disrupting the nerves that connect to my Linker Core!”

“Lutecia, you need to take it easy. I know that you want to go out and help but you’re not in any condition to do anything of that sort,” said the older Alpine gently.

“Then who’s going to save…?” Lutecia trailed off as she noticed her mother’s facial expression and put it together. “Wait a second… you’re going to…?”

“I know a thing or two about dealing with rogues so just leave it to me, dear. I’ll need to borrow Asclepius though since I don’t have any other device that I can use.” Megane paused upon noticing the way her daughter was staring at her. “Oh, don’t give me that look. I know I’m a few years out of practice but once I start working with Asclepius, it’ll probably come back to me!”

“Mom… if you didn’t want me to worry, you should have left out the word ‘probably’.”

********

When Erio came to, he found himself restricted in a binding spell of sorts. A quick glance showed that Caro, Garyu and Fried were also in the same predicament and placed right next to him so that meant at the moment; they were at the mercy of these Materials. His device along with Caro’s had been taken away but the good news was that they hadn’t been destroyed yet.

As for what their captors were doing right now, he saw that the Nanoha replica was simply standing by, as if waiting for something. The dog summon was nowhere to be seen. He had probably been dismissed so that he could recover energy. And as for the Fate replica, she sat there only a few metres away and stared at them with those red eyes. The way she stared at them with those psychotic and hungry red eyes reminded him of a predator eyeing their prey. He could feel the pressure of the atmosphere smothering him, all thanks to her presence.

“So… is there any particular way you want me to carve you up once Yami-chan’s done with you?”

He couldn’t tell which was creepier: the fact that she asked him something like that so casually or the fact that if she just changed her voice by a few octaves, she would sound exactly like Fate.

“Cuz I was thinking of starting with the right arm. Then the right leg would be next. It would be like what Zombie Giant Man did to Black Panther except the meat will be fed to Kero-chan!”

Material-S stayed quiet, ready to act in case Material-L did actually attempt to cut their prisoners into sardine bits before they were interrogated. The Fate replica had been in a rather foul mood when she had been told about Yuuno’s disappearance and the pair’s involvement in it. Seikou did make it clear that throwing a temper tantrum to wreck the planet would be unproductive and that they needed those mages alive so Yami could extract the information from them.

So Rai had to stay her hand for now and think of other things such as what she could do to these prisoners once Material-D had gotten what she needed from them. “Maybe I should go an original route. Cut off a little piggy? Or maybe I should slowly grind off the part that Pinky likes the most?”

“What are you talking about?” asked Erio in a weary tone.

The Lightning Assailant rolled her eyes. “Don’t play dumb! I’m talking about down there!” In a flash, the axe head of Vulnificus was pointing right to the area between the young man’s legs which got a rather strong reaction from the device.

“Don’t point me there!”

She brought back her weapon to speak to it directly. “What’s wrong?”

“I have no interest in making extended contact with the male reproductive organ!”

“Are you worried that it’ll be a gay thing? That’s a little silly but if you’re that worried, I bet that the Golden Rule would apply here!” chirped Material-L.

“… … Golden Rule?”

And once again, those vocals of hers came to life with a song. “It’s OK when it’s in a three-way! It’s not gay when it’s in a three-way! With a honey in the middle, there’s some leeway! The area’s grey in a one-two-three way!”

“… I don’t think I want to know why you’re singing about threesomes.”

Before the wielder of Vulnificus had a chance to reply, the air shifted to signal the arrival of the third replica, Material-D. She landed gracefully on the ground, right next to Material-L. “Ah, there you are, Yami-chan! If you had taken any longer, I probably would have flown back and brought you here!”

“Thanks but no thanks,” retorted Yami before focusing in on the prisoners. “Now then…”

She didn’t get much further as Erio stood up to his full height and put himself between the Materials and his companions. “Are you the leader?”

“Your head is too high,” growled the Hayate replica as Yersinia Kreuz prepared a spell. “On your knees, mongrel!”

“Seelenfeuer.”

It only took a second for the effect to kick in and for Erio to go down on his knees as his strength left him. At the same time, he could feel a burning sensation from his Linker Core which caused him to let out a painful cry. “Graaaaahhh!”

And that was enough to wake Caro from the unconscious state she had been in since Cerberus overpowered her and Fried. “… Erio-kun!”

Yami snapped her fingers to release the spell’s effect and let the young man catch his breath. “So the both of you are now awake? That’s perfect. Now we can have a proper conversation about where you have hidden our companion.”

YES! YES! Wait, WTF?

(Rai-chan no ecchi )

[Filraen]

Originally Posted by Yasanagi

Spoiler for First MD in a while from me...:

‘Let’s see… the soup’s staying warm on the stove, the salad’s been tossed and the roast potatoes are ready…’ Megane paused for a moment and took a quick peek inside the oven which showed her that the chicken meat was turning a nice golden brown. ‘Chicken’s baking nicely. And the dessert is on standby to be served later at the end of the meal.’

She felt proud of herself for putting together a sizable, nutritious and delicious meal to feed seven people on such short notice. Since things were coming along nicely, she figured that it would be time to call her daughter and have her escort any guests in the compound to the dining room table. As for Sette and Yuuno, Megane figured that they would be aware of the time and would make their way back accordingly.

“Lutecia, can you get everyone together for dinner?”

There was no immediate response to the telepathic call. At the same time, she felt a slight magical surge coming from the other end of the household which prompted her to start worrying. She wanted to go check but that would mean leaving dinner unguarded and considering how Material-L had been lurking around the kitchen earlier…

No, she shouldn’t have to worry herself about that blue haired woman. After all, that Hayate lookalike was still around to keep the Fate replica from ruining dinner for everyone. With that in mind, Megane set aside the cooking utensils and moved towards where she sensed that surge of magical energy. ‘Could it have come from the training arena?’

Before she could think about it further, she felt another magical energy surge. And this time, she was able to identify that it was coming from the interior of the library. Moving quickly, she got to the doors and just as she opened them, a huge gust of wind forced her to shield her eyes. A moment later, the scene was calm again with the only traces of activity being the window that had been forced open, a few black feathers floating down towards the table and a purple light moving further away from the compound.

She wondered what had happened but that was put on hold as she spotted her daughter’s body sprawled out on the floor. “Lutecia? Answer me!”

“M-mom?”

Hearing her daughter’s voice helped Megane calm down a little. “Are you alright? What happened? Did she hurt you?”

“No, she was… asking me questions and…” Lutecia gasped once. “Erio and Caro! They’re in trouble!”

“What do you mean?”

“They’re here on the planet! And apparently they rescued Yuuno but now those crazy women are going to kill them! We have to help them!” The insect summoner tried to get up but her legs weren’t being responsive. “Dammit!”

A quick examination by Megane revealed what was behind her daughter’s condition. “A paralysis spell?”

“As if something like that’s gonna stop me…!” growled the younger girl as she forced mana to her legs and slowly got up with her own power. However, it only lasted for a brief moment and her lower body locked up again, forcing Megane to catch her. “This spell is so annoying! It’s disrupting the nerves that connect to my Linker Core!”

“Lutecia, you need to take it easy. I know that you want to go out and help but you’re not in any condition to do anything of that sort,” said the older Alpine gently.

“Then who’s going to save…?” Lutecia trailed off as she noticed her mother’s facial expression and put it together. “Wait a second… you’re going to…?”

“I know a thing or two about dealing with rogues so just leave it to me, dear. I’ll need to borrow Asclepius though since I don’t have any other device that I can use.” Megane paused upon noticing the way her daughter was staring at her. “Oh, don’t give me that look. I know I’m a few years out of practice but once I start working with Asclepius, it’ll probably come back to me!”

“Mom… if you didn’t want me to worry, you should have left out the word ‘probably’.”

********

When Erio came to, he found himself restricted in a binding spell of sorts. A quick glance showed that Caro, Garyu and Fried were also in the same predicament and placed right next to him so that meant at the moment; they were at the mercy of these Materials. His device along with Caro’s had been taken away but the good news was that they hadn’t been destroyed yet.

As for what their captors were doing right now, he saw that the Nanoha replica was simply standing by, as if waiting for something. The dog summon was nowhere to be seen. He had probably been dismissed so that he could recover energy. And as for the Fate replica, she sat there only a few metres away and stared at them with those red eyes. The way she stared at them with those psychotic and hungry red eyes reminded him of a predator eyeing their prey. He could feel the pressure of the atmosphere smothering him, all thanks to her presence.

“So… is there any particular way you want me to carve you up once Yami-chan’s done with you?”

He couldn’t tell which was creepier: the fact that she asked him something like that so casually or the fact that if she just changed her voice by a few octaves, she would sound exactly like Fate.

“Cuz I was thinking of starting with the right arm. Then the right leg would be next. It would be like what Zombie Giant Man did to Black Panther except the meat will be fed to Kero-chan!”

Material-S stayed quiet, ready to act in case Material-L did actually attempt to cut their prisoners into sardine bits before they were interrogated. The Fate replica had been in a rather foul mood when she had been told about Yuuno’s disappearance and the pair’s involvement in it. Seikou did make it clear that throwing a temper tantrum to wreck the planet would be unproductive and that they needed those mages alive so Yami could extract the information from them.

So Rai had to stay her hand for now and think of other things such as what she could do to these prisoners once Material-D had gotten what she needed from them. “Maybe I should go an original route. Cut off a little piggy? Or maybe I should slowly grind off the part that Pinky likes the most?”

“What are you talking about?” asked Erio in a weary tone.

The Lightning Assailant rolled her eyes. “Don’t play dumb! I’m talking about down there!” In a flash, the axe head of Vulnificus was pointing right to the area between the young man’s legs which got a rather strong reaction from the device.

“Don’t point me there!”

She brought back her weapon to speak to it directly. “What’s wrong?”

“I have no interest in making extended contact with the male reproductive organ!”

“Are you worried that it’ll be a gay thing? That’s a little silly but if you’re that worried, I bet that the Golden Rule would apply here!” chirped Material-L.

“… … Golden Rule?”

And once again, those vocals of hers came to life with a song. “It’s OK when it’s in a three-way! It’s not gay when it’s in a three-way! With a honey in the middle, there’s some leeway! The area’s grey in a one-two-three way!”

“… I don’t think I want to know why you’re singing about threesomes.”

Before the wielder of Vulnificus had a chance to reply, the air shifted to signal the arrival of the third replica, Material-D. She landed gracefully on the ground, right next to Material-L. “Ah, there you are, Yami-chan! If you had taken any longer, I probably would have flown back and brought you here!”

“Thanks but no thanks,” retorted Yami before focusing in on the prisoners. “Now then…”

She didn’t get much further as Erio stood up to his full height and put himself between the Materials and his companions. “Are you the leader?”

“Your head is too high,” growled the Hayate replica as Yersinia Kreuz prepared a spell. “On your knees, mongrel!”

“Seelenfeuer.”

It only took a second for the effect to kick in and for Erio to go down on his knees as his strength left him. At the same time, he could feel a burning sensation from his Linker Core which caused him to let out a painful cry. “Graaaaahhh!”

And that was enough to wake Caro from the unconscious state she had been in since Cerberus overpowered her and Fried. “… Erio-kun!”

Yami snapped her fingers to release the spell’s effect and let the young man catch his breath. “So the both of you are now awake? That’s perfect. Now we can have a proper conversation about where you have hidden our companion.”

New MD

A pity for Megane, because as far as things are going I believe she, the only person who knew about their threat to the TSAB and yet still tried to give the materials a real chance, will get mixed into the confusion Sure, she can solve things but as things have been in general through the fic I don't see it very plausible.

A few days ago I remembered Erio calling Seikou a replica while being himself a produce of Project F... I don't know what to think about that.

[TheCuriousFan]

A few days ago I remembered Erio calling Seikou a replica while being himself a produce of Project F... I don't know what to think about that.

Think "look who's talking...".

[Shigan]

Originally Posted by yuiseppe

HAHAHA trust that to be your first reaction

Psst you might be doing the dating thing wrong - it's only meant to kill you dead half the time XD

You mean there's another reaction to have for Ash-haired Hayate?

Also, no, this current date is dead set on making a full time job of killing me. In a good way granted, but still.

[blitz1/2]

Originally Posted by Yasanagi

Spoiler for First MD in a while from me...:

‘Let’s see… the soup’s staying warm on the stove, the salad’s been tossed and the roast potatoes are ready…’ Megane paused for a moment and took a quick peek inside the oven which showed her that the chicken meat was turning a nice golden brown. ‘Chicken’s baking nicely. And the dessert is on standby to be served later at the end of the meal.’

She felt proud of herself for putting together a sizable, nutritious and delicious meal to feed seven people on such short notice. Since things were coming along nicely, she figured that it would be time to call her daughter and have her escort any guests in the compound to the dining room table. As for Sette and Yuuno, Megane figured that they would be aware of the time and would make their way back accordingly.

“Lutecia, can you get everyone together for dinner?”

There was no immediate response to the telepathic call. At the same time, she felt a slight magical surge coming from the other end of the household which prompted her to start worrying. She wanted to go check but that would mean leaving dinner unguarded and considering how Material-L had been lurking around the kitchen earlier…

No, she shouldn’t have to worry herself about that blue haired woman. After all, that Hayate lookalike was still around to keep the Fate replica from ruining dinner for everyone. With that in mind, Megane set aside the cooking utensils and moved towards where she sensed that surge of magical energy. ‘Could it have come from the training arena?’

Before she could think about it further, she felt another magical energy surge. And this time, she was able to identify that it was coming from the interior of the library. Moving quickly, she got to the doors and just as she opened them, a huge gust of wind forced her to shield her eyes. A moment later, the scene was calm again with the only traces of activity being the window that had been forced open, a few black feathers floating down towards the table and a purple light moving further away from the compound.

She wondered what had happened but that was put on hold as she spotted her daughter’s body sprawled out on the floor. “Lutecia? Answer me!”

“M-mom?”

Hearing her daughter’s voice helped Megane calm down a little. “Are you alright? What happened? Did she hurt you?”

“No, she was… asking me questions and…” Lutecia gasped once. “Erio and Caro! They’re in trouble!”

“What do you mean?”

“They’re here on the planet! And apparently they rescued Yuuno but now those crazy women are going to kill them! We have to help them!” The insect summoner tried to get up but her legs weren’t being responsive. “Dammit!”

A quick examination by Megane revealed what was behind her daughter’s condition. “A paralysis spell?”

“As if something like that’s gonna stop me…!” growled the younger girl as she forced mana to her legs and slowly got up with her own power. However, it only lasted for a brief moment and her lower body locked up again, forcing Megane to catch her. “This spell is so annoying! It’s disrupting the nerves that connect to my Linker Core!”

“Lutecia, you need to take it easy. I know that you want to go out and help but you’re not in any condition to do anything of that sort,” said the older Alpine gently.

“Then who’s going to save…?” Lutecia trailed off as she noticed her mother’s facial expression and put it together. “Wait a second… you’re going to…?”

“I know a thing or two about dealing with rogues so just leave it to me, dear. I’ll need to borrow Asclepius though since I don’t have any other device that I can use.” Megane paused upon noticing the way her daughter was staring at her. “Oh, don’t give me that look. I know I’m a few years out of practice but once I start working with Asclepius, it’ll probably come back to me!”

“Mom… if you didn’t want me to worry, you should have left out the word ‘probably’.”

********

When Erio came to, he found himself restricted in a binding spell of sorts. A quick glance showed that Caro, Garyu and Fried were also in the same predicament and placed right next to him so that meant at the moment; they were at the mercy of these Materials. His device along with Caro’s had been taken away but the good news was that they hadn’t been destroyed yet.

As for what their captors were doing right now, he saw that the Nanoha replica was simply standing by, as if waiting for something. The dog summon was nowhere to be seen. He had probably been dismissed so that he could recover energy. And as for the Fate replica, she sat there only a few metres away and stared at them with those red eyes. The way she stared at them with those psychotic and hungry red eyes reminded him of a predator eyeing their prey. He could feel the pressure of the atmosphere smothering him, all thanks to her presence.

“So… is there any particular way you want me to carve you up once Yami-chan’s done with you?”

He couldn’t tell which was creepier: the fact that she asked him something like that so casually or the fact that if she just changed her voice by a few octaves, she would sound exactly like Fate.

“Cuz I was thinking of starting with the right arm. Then the right leg would be next. It would be like what Zombie Giant Man did to Black Panther except the meat will be fed to Kero-chan!”

Material-S stayed quiet, ready to act in case Material-L did actually attempt to cut their prisoners into sardine bits before they were interrogated. The Fate replica had been in a rather foul mood when she had been told about Yuuno’s disappearance and the pair’s involvement in it. Seikou did make it clear that throwing a temper tantrum to wreck the planet would be unproductive and that they needed those mages alive so Yami could extract the information from them.

So Rai had to stay her hand for now and think of other things such as what she could do to these prisoners once Material-D had gotten what she needed from them. “Maybe I should go an original route. Cut off a little piggy? Or maybe I should slowly grind off the part that Pinky likes the most?”

“What are you talking about?” asked Erio in a weary tone.

The Lightning Assailant rolled her eyes. “Don’t play dumb! I’m talking about down there!” In a flash, the axe head of Vulnificus was pointing right to the area between the young man’s legs which got a rather strong reaction from the device.

“Don’t point me there!”

She brought back her weapon to speak to it directly. “What’s wrong?”

“I have no interest in making extended contact with the male reproductive organ!”

“Are you worried that it’ll be a gay thing? That’s a little silly but if you’re that worried, I bet that the Golden Rule would apply here!” chirped Material-L.

“… … Golden Rule?”

And once again, those vocals of hers came to life with a song. “It’s OK when it’s in a three-way! It’s not gay when it’s in a three-way! With a honey in the middle, there’s some leeway! The area’s grey in a one-two-three way!”

“… I don’t think I want to know why you’re singing about threesomes.”

Before the wielder of Vulnificus had a chance to reply, the air shifted to signal the arrival of the third replica, Material-D. She landed gracefully on the ground, right next to Material-L. “Ah, there you are, Yami-chan! If you had taken any longer, I probably would have flown back and brought you here!”

“Thanks but no thanks,” retorted Yami before focusing in on the prisoners. “Now then…”

She didn’t get much further as Erio stood up to his full height and put himself between the Materials and his companions. “Are you the leader?”

“Your head is too high,” growled the Hayate replica as Yersinia Kreuz prepared a spell. “On your knees, mongrel!”

“Seelenfeuer.”

It only took a second for the effect to kick in and for Erio to go down on his knees as his strength left him. At the same time, he could feel a burning sensation from his Linker Core which caused him to let out a painful cry. “Graaaaahhh!”

And that was enough to wake Caro from the unconscious state she had been in since Cerberus overpowered her and Fried. “… Erio-kun!”

Yami snapped her fingers to release the spell’s effect and let the young man catch his breath. “So the both of you are now awake? That’s perfect. Now we can have a proper conversation about where you have hidden our companion.”

Ah, it's been awhile.

Lol, at Material L's device's reaction. xD.

Yami: If I say you should kneel, then KNEEL!

[Tiresias]

Originally Posted by blitz1/2

Yami: If I say you should kneel, then KNEEL!

Balalaika, much?

[Nanya01]

Got a challenge for people.

We all know what Gil did isn't something that most (I say most because we have people like DC and RB around here. ) of use like the thought of...

So...

If you were in his shoes, and knew what he knew, but not knowing Hayate like we do...

What would you have done? Knowing that the Book of Darkness was in Hayate's hands. Knowing her as a sick girl who would eventually be consumed by the book.

[Filraen]

Originally Posted by Nanya01

Got a challenge for people.

We all know what Gil did isn't something that most (I say most because we have people like DC and RB around here. ) of use like the thought of...

So...

If you were in his shoes, and knew what he knew, but not knowing Hayate like we do...

What would you have done? Knowing that the Book of Darkness was in Hayate's hands. Knowing her as a sick girl who would eventually be consumed by the book.

I would try to have the book fixed. All previous masters wanted to have the BoD's power thus trying to collect pages as soon as it awoke so the TSAB had never hold the book long enough to try to study it comprehensively, let alone fix it. In Hayate's case he would have started someone working on the book even before awakening. Note it wouldn't be too hard to have Hayate moving to Mid-Childa, as she doesn't have any other relatives and Hayate has her "uncle" in high regard.

By the way I don't know what you are talking about "knowing Hayate like we do". Gil knew Hayate quite a bit as, if my memory is accurate, she wrote letters to Gil from time to time; also Gil was seen holding a photo of the Yagami family, photo presumably sent by Hayate. It was just the guilt over Clyde's death was too much for him (and by the time of the Wolkenritter's awakening I believe it was already too late for Hayate)