2012-06-22, 06:02 | Link #32682 | |
Titans Test Team Pilot
Join Date: Feb 2008
Location: The Elysium
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2012-06-22, 06:06 | Link #32684 |
That one guy
Join Date: Nov 2011
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Cecilia was losing due to negligence. She assumed Ichika couldn't get close. When he did, she basically blew a hole into his armoring with the missiles. His shield was restored due to first shift occurring. Truth be told, he was only in winning form due to the first shift occurring. Too bad he didn't properly control Yukihira so after taking the up close missile attack, Yukihira bled out the last remains of energy.
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2012-06-22, 06:10 | Link #32685 | |
Titans Test Team Pilot
Join Date: Feb 2008
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And yeah, in the IS/Athena-verse, the [Pearl Admiralty] will be piloted by a female pilot instead.
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2012-06-22, 06:16 | Link #32687 |
I am no one
Join Date: Apr 2010
Location: Inside your head
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@ Eras
It's just an introduction, it could be turn out good like Rain's story for all we knew. The actual cover will include more character, but for now, this is what it should like. @ Demi & Eras Yeah I can do that, it'll be a nasty surprise for this version of her fight with Laura....
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2012-06-22, 06:16 | Link #32688 |
That one guy
Join Date: Nov 2011
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Again, negligence. She never took her melee lessons seriously ever since no one could come close to her due to the bits.
Cecilia is by all means a very competent pilot. But that's purely in regards to ranged combat. When it comes to CQC, the only ones she can beat up are civs and thugs. |
2012-06-22, 06:25 | Link #32690 |
That one guy
Join Date: Nov 2011
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I'll give Ichika credit when Yumizuru starts making Ichika's victories seem like real victories instead of fortunate coincidences. Basically, the fact he's forcing anti-stu vibes into Ichika's character for every fight is what makes me discredit him.
The best good fight from Ichika I've encountered is from golem. And that was the easy mode golem fight. I have yet to see version 2 :| |
2012-06-22, 06:27 | Link #32691 |
I am no one
Join Date: Apr 2010
Location: Inside your head
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@ Eras
Nah, Mangatron is 100 times better, hell, Koomi is 100 times better. It's just that I work fast, never pay attention to detail and prone to mistake. Well I don't see any reason not to, sooner or later Karon will show up in your story @ Demi I chalk it up more to BITs complex control scheme, someone with decent leet skill will probably help with alternate program. And yes, Ichika win or lose when the plot calls for it, the fight with Cecilia just a glaring example. I'll have it fixed in fanon, assuming I didn't add another mistake instead.
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2012-06-22, 06:34 | Link #32692 |
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@ Senpai - When are ypu giving me the chapter to proofread?
Side note - She's one of Kanzashi's two closest friends solely based on the fact that she doesn't like Ichika. @ Demi - Once again, your choice. Don't want another argument here since it'll devolve to insulting the person instead of their argument.
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2012-06-22, 06:35 | Link #32693 |
I am no one
Join Date: Apr 2010
Location: Inside your head
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Nah, I'll try to make alternate prologue first. This one is finished, but I feel it's too dark and WILL be a great mood whiplash when we get itno first chapter.
OTOH, I can just jump to Rito vs Cecilia with Ichika watching instead.
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2012-06-22, 06:45 | Link #32694 |
Some say I'm the Reverse
Join Date: Jul 2006
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Okay, throwing in a plot bunny for you guys who want to do a Charlotte story.
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Peter_Abelard ...there may be certain advantages to being book-dumb and completely dense around women.
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2012-06-22, 07:13 | Link #32696 | |
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Join Date: Apr 2011
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