2013-04-14, 10:57 | Link #37941 | |
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Also from what I know about Yagami/TSAB situation Hayate kinda took the blame. She didn't know about her knights' actions but after she learnt of them she assumed the responsibility because she Was their Master. That chick from the Army in StrikerS suggested that Hayate used Wolkies to save herself back in A's. That might be the explanation Hayate gave. TSAB had enough evidence that this Book of Darkness Incident was different from what they were used to AND the Main Threat, that is Book itself was terminated. Wolkenritter being Artifical Programs didn't exactly have a will of their own at least not until A's so they couldn't exactly be held fully responsible for their actions. Of course this is all just my theorizing. |
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2013-04-14, 11:21 | Link #37943 |
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While you posted that response, I went back and editted that post to ask better questions. You might want to read it again, if this interests you. Still, Hayate definitely took responsibility for the Wolkenritter. She rather had to, as the Wolkenritter would refuse to work for the TSAB above and before Hayate. They'd only work for the TSAB if Hayate worked for the TSAB. So Hayate needed to face the criminal charges and accept the sentence of probationary service. Perhaps later, the Wolkenritter would relax enough to work for the TSAB directly, but not for a while. |
2013-04-14, 12:01 | Link #37944 | |
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Frankly I can see Wolkenritter confessing to all the stuff they have done, including their actions during A's. They would try to protect Hayate from the responsibility since it was their actions that led to such a situation. Hayate on her end would try to assume the full responsibility for their actions and from Interrogator's point of view the responsibility would be kinda sorta in the middle. I think that seeing how both Wolkies and Hayate tried to protect each other and take the blame would make the TSAB realize that they are not really bad people. [chuckles] I can see Vita snapping at an Interrogator if he/she tried to suggest that Hayate ordered the Wolkies to attack people. "Hayate would never do something like that! Take those words back or I'll...!" "Vita" Came the calm, composed voice of their Leader. Vita glared at the interrogator for a moment but finally deflated and sat down. |
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2013-04-14, 15:10 | Link #37946 | |
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I'm interested in writing a Chrono-vs-Yuuno story, but don't quite know where in the timeline to place it, and no one convinced me of one time or another. I'm interested in writing a "Yuuno says his goodbyes to Nanoha before joining Fate's legal team" story, where Yuuno officially gives up Raising Heart to Nanoha as the "reward" he promised her in Episode 1. But this should probably involve a discussion about where he got it. "I found it in a ruin somewhere" is just insufficient, and anything else would have to be my own choice. If I wanted to make stuff up wholeclothe, I'd write original fiction. For fanfiction, I prefer to work with as few personal decisions as possible; just taking canon and extrapolating from it. |
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2013-04-14, 17:42 | Link #37947 |
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Okay got a bit more of this stuff. I'd enjoy some advice. Did I get Levi and Dearche's personality more or less right (not to get your hopes up, Dearche doesn't make an appearance)
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2013-04-14, 19:21 | Link #37950 | |
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I'm not sure if Stern should be working for the TSAB if she's trying to negotiate with them for help to Elteria.
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Also, why is Levi and Dearche living with Stern right now? Just like you metioned Stern's skills with negotiation are currently more important than her fighting skills in Elteria, the opposite can be said about Levi. Also the quote suggested Stern was the only Material around. And of course this is going to be misunderstood for a ransom request Last edited by Filraen; 2013-04-14 at 19:45. |
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2013-04-14, 20:04 | Link #37952 |
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http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/FanNickname/Anime
According to this, the Japanese fandom has apparently dubbed Yuuno "Inju" (Sex Beast) because of his unfortunately-shaped ferret form and his status as one of the few males in an Improbably Female Cast. |
2013-04-14, 21:28 | Link #37953 |
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Stern really should know better than think that Levi wouldn't do something weird. Though, it's much funnier this way.
I think, if Stern want to keep her sanity she'd better to move into her new family home. Fast! |
2013-04-14, 23:23 | Link #37954 | |
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next time.... don't let Levi do the negotiating...
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Dearche isn't on Mid-Childa at the moment... mhm when I'll finish this I should drop a mention that Levi is here on vacation or something. Quote:
Yasanagi Right, forgot about that! vic-vic She trusted Levi with a very simple task, she didn't expect that Levi was watching History's Strongest Disciple Kenichi and was very taken with Apachai "We have your kid" Hopachai XD |
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2013-04-15, 02:56 | Link #37956 |
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Then, could we expect something like this:
Genya: My little baby daughter were kidnapped! I must save her!! Charge into spaciouc warehouse where stood many different futuristic-looking tanks. Genya: Let's go my friend, Maximillian! *Pat one of tanks foundly with blaze in his eyes* |
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I'd suggest trying to compile these into a single, larger chapter. Since the second one seems to start off as if the first never ended or was cut off in mid-paragraph. And yes, spoiler tags are your friend. And you seem to have given Stern the role of mother in their adorably dysfunctional little family with Levi as the nutty youngest daughter and Dearche as the not-so-rebellious teenager. I am okay with this. =3
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2013-04-15, 08:22 | Link #37959 | |
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Well that's the plan I just have this bad habit of posting as I write T_T For now I'll focus on completing the story and only after I have it all compiled and checked I'll post a full big chapter. Well as I said, Stern is the Only Sane Woman with Levi being the hyper-active genki kid and Dearche being a haughty, egomaniacal, jerk (only a bit) with a heart of gold (BIG ONE) |
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