Close Combat Mage

[vinicius741]

This is the worst web novel i've ever read, don't waste your time, in the beggining it was kinda okay, with the merchant, beauty parlor, money making, training and all the preparation he was doing to search for his father, but later on....DON'T READ THE SPOILERS IF YOU DON'T WANT TO KNOW SOME BULL***

Spoiler for .:

The author literally made his own "grand line" and "devil fruits" until them was still ok, just a litte bit of plagiarism, but he still continued further

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and even made a Sanctuary Saga with the main characters going up the 12 temples and even facing 3 god saints (seiya, ikki and shiryu if i remember right), it was kinda funny because they were like "lol, those guys shout the techniques, what a retard", and in the end everyone got gold clothes, the mc got the gold clothes from Aquarius and even copied his Aurora Execution.ps: one of his "nakama" is a cook who fights using his legs, also know as RED FOOT ROGER, this and several other plagiarism and lack of plot made this web novel what it is, till the end there is no plot, nothing, unless find his father and later on nothing, just power up and skip times for some 2-3 lines battles and everyone just give up fighting because they don't want to lose and the mc & his wives continue roaming

Spoiler for harem:

yes, there is one, with threesome and foursomes later on

[bludvein]

Thankfully I got fed up with it long before I got that far in the raw. If the beauty parlor and the nonsense money schemes were the actual good part of the story then I don't even want to know.

By nonsense I mean Suo Jia's entire business runs off everyone else having less sense and skill than an 8 year old. Whether it's trained retailers somehow missing obvious cues to sell the protagonist legendary magic items or rare books for dirt cheap or a bunch of vain women jumping at whatever ridiculous price he sets to satisfy their vanity(obviously there's no such thing as competition to our child protagonist). I could buy a little luck coming the protagonist's way, but it was ridiculous how many things were dumped in his lap with little to no effort. Rare ice dragon egg, lost spells, one of a kind artifacts, ect.

This series is a joke on reddit for good reason.

[Narberal]

damn and here i thought he will be like Negi Springfield... what a disappointment

[Milamberw]

Well for now i rather like this story so i will continue to read and see for myself

[LevelSeven]

Originally Posted by vinicius741

This is the worst web novel i've ever read, don't waste your time, in the beggining it was kinda okay, with the merchant, beauty parlor, money making, training and all the preparation he was doing to search for his father, but later on....DON'T READ THE SPOILERS IF YOU DON'T WANT TO KNOW SOME BULL***

Spoiler for .:

The author literally made his own "grand line" and "devil fruits" until them was still ok, just a litte bit of plagiarism, but he still continued further

Spoiler for .:

and even made a Sanctuary Saga with the main characters going up the 12 temples and even facing 3 god saints (seiya, ikki and shiryu if i remember right), it was kinda funny because they were like "lol, those guys shout the techniques, what a retard", and in the end everyone got gold clothes, the mc got the gold clothes from Aquarius and even copied his Aurora Execution.ps: one of his "nakama" is a cook who fights using his legs, also know as RED FOOT ROGER, this and several other plagiarism and lack of plot made this web novel what it is, till the end there is no plot, nothing, unless find his father and later on nothing, just power up and skip times for some 2-3 lines battles and everyone just give up fighting because they don't want to lose and the mc & his wives continue roaming

Spoiler for harem:

yes, there is one, with threesome and foursomes later on

i dont like copied chrs but i dont see them as really bad...

unfortunatly i think that i will drop it too, i read until chatper 108, but the MC wents up way to high and somehow it feels strange, in the tournament he heavily injures people like nothihng and he is still 8 years old? -_-

what made the biggest annoyance for me was that the MC obivously was stronger than them buut the constant "you are a ant in my eyes" didnt sound badass in the slightest :/

another one was that NOBODY questioned his obvious blood control powers, i mean, this power is obviously OP, you dont even need to injure your enemy, you only need to control his blood and throw him into the air and slam them on the ground until they die... neither earht/fire/light/wind//wateretc. warrior/mage had a chance against this

[Saberstriker]

I read up till the betrayal in chapter 248? Does he ever meet the 36 phoenix's again? What happen to them? Does any or who regret the betrayal? If they met again what ch?

[Yoburi]

OK can anyone tell me when the treesome and foursome happends in this novel what chapter???

[dniv]

Okay I'll admit. This novel was pretty decent at the beginning and then it got pretty bad/lame... he got what he wanted and became powerful way too easily...

well... the latest translated chapter happened. From spoilers I have consumed, this story actually really starts at this point in time and gets much better/ more interesting.

I mean it is a bit trashy... and gets darker themed... but it sounds pretty fun / decent.

I'm impressed the story went that way... though it sure took its time lol. It could have been way more concise...

[Ruki0089]

Oh, translated chapter already reach betrayal chapter..

[itisjustme]

Originally Posted by dniv

Okay I'll admit. This novel was pretty decent at the beginning and then it got pretty bad/lame... he got what he wanted and became powerful way too easily...

well... the latest translated chapter happened. From spoilers I have consumed, this story actually really starts at this point in time and gets much better/ more interesting.

I mean it is a bit trashy... and gets darker themed... but it sounds pretty fun / decent.

I'm impressed the story went that way... though it sure took its time lol. It could have been way more concise...

Becomes way too "inspired" by One Piece from now on. Yeah it's better but that's not hard to do. >.> author still has no idea about math/economy though sometimes when he throws around concepts or numbers I had to laugh out loud.

[Armando99]

Originally Posted by itisjustme

Becomes way too "inspired" by One Piece from now on. Yeah it's better but that's not hard to do. >.> author still has no idea about math/economy though sometimes when he throws around concepts or numbers I had to laugh out loud.

Isn't it though? In one chapter, he was saying that each soldier slave cost 10 gold coins everyday and yet earlier on in the story, one gold coin was enough to feed a family for a few months. No concept of realism whatsoever. Like 30 billion gold coins to equip 100,000 slaves? Hell in today's economy, you can equip the 10 most powerful countries' armies for that much gold.

[cabman11]

What happens in the betrayal chapter?

[Ruki0089]

All firewind girls and his maid betray him for the fourth prince... His maid actually is a spy for the Duke... After this betrayal chapter it will be quite funny chapter...

[Yoburi]

Originally Posted by Ruki0089

All firewind girls and his maid betray him for the fourth prince... His maid actually is a spy for the Duke... After this betrayal chapter it will be quite funny chapter...

But isn't the fourth prince the lover of that Duchess that was super fat the MC help at the start of the novel? Did she also fuck him up?

And what happend to these girls and why did they do that isn't he there benefactor even more to the firewind ones what did they gain in the end for doing that?

I even feel like reading because i just don't see what possible reason the firewind girls would betray the MC that gave them freedom and restore there disfigure bodys for the man that pretty much took all of that from them in the first place????

Hope the prince enslave them again and use as cannon fodder.

[Ruki0089]

For the firewind girs, they got a reason... The forth prince black mailed the firewind girls about their family...
After this the Duke's daughter, the Duchess and the forth prince will return to their original ugly form ansd even more uglier plus overwhelmed debt... Hahaha

[Breidaluk]

Read all the translated chapters till chapter 249 and I can say that I like the way this little MC does things. And why did Suo Jia prefers the Emperor than the fourth prince is simple: the Emperor understood that he had to be in Suo Jia's side, no matter what.
Well, still want to see what will happen later.

[cabman11]

So did anyone have regrets about it?
How many chapters till they become ugly?

[Ruki0089]

Few more chapter... And if I recall firewind girls rejoined in chapter 400+ later....

[cabman11]

He took them back? Why?

[Yoburi]

Originally Posted by Ruki0089

Few more chapter... And if I recall firewind girls rejoined in chapter 400+ later....

Ruki you are such a cocktease bastard you can't post something like that and leave no info as to why that happend lol.