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Old 2007-02-24, 05:34   Link #1
Jordus
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a few poems

"Love Letter from a Serial Killer"

by Michael Scott

From The beating of your heart so close to mine
Creates a scene of depravity something I’ve been missing forever
Something I love to think about
Something that occupies my mind as we speak
Something I can not hide any longer
My love for you is never dying
I can’t stop thinking about you
Something isn’t clear
My mind fogged by you
I can’t comprehend anything else
I love you
You love me
That is love
Can’t you see?
What is wrong with this picture?
Stalker you call me stalker
I may be but love is in the air don’t you think?
Disturbing pictures in my mind haunt your dreams every night.
This is love don’t you think.
Something ain’t right.
Is it you or me?
Is it something I said?
Why are the cops at my door?
They found your head in my fridge.
They just don’t understand what you think.
I have to tell them for you.
You are in love with me.
I love you.
Nothing will ever keep us apart.
In death I will forever be with you.
Forever you will be with me.
Let’s meet in heaven though you told me to go to hell.
Who can know what is wrong with y mind.
As I feel the pull of time as the bullet flies through my head.
Brain matter on the floor its mine here I come dear.
The police have sealed our fate.
They will never know about our child buried in the front yard.
Though we only adopted it, its something that only we share
A secret that I dared to give to you.
A secret I found in the park near by.
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Old 2007-02-24, 05:35   Link #2
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"Forever or Not"

By Michael Scott

Listening to the crackling fire

Staring into the heated light

Something seems to be beckoning me

Inspiration flows into my heart

I find that my life

Means little in this big world

Forever it will be spinning

A lifetime is meaningless

Or so it seems

As people drag on their daily lives

Every little decision they make

Is what gives this world its power

The more decisions

The stronger the spin

Forever turning

On each humans whim

But one day everything will end

A higher power will begin

Sleeping throughout a decadent past

Like the wind that seeps through the grass

It will blow past us

Leaving us insignificant once again

But even a piece of grass can stop some of the wind
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Old 2007-02-24, 05:36   Link #3
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"Society and Time the Enemies"

By Michael Scott

As I stare into the starry sky

Forever living in your shoes

Not knowing the reason for this

Something against nothing

Everything against something

Nothing is something

So what am I doing?

Riddles of life escaping my mind

Magazines showing me

Filling my eyes with lies

Nothing is everything

Everything is nothing

Something is wrong with me

Sitting on my couch watching tv

Living every image shown to me

Never knowing why I cheat and lie

Living the way that TV programmed me

The government is responsible

Nothing I do anymore is plausible

What is wrong with me?

The future looks bleak

Ina city of people like me

Forever wandering the thin line of reality

My mind can only hold so much

Alone, with out reason

Forever living out each change in season

Time passing by

Like thin lines of decadent gold

Futures living out their useless souls

Screaming for mercy at the hands of those who hold their future

Their future stolen by time
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Old 2007-02-24, 05:44   Link #4
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was just thinking that what was posted here should probably be moved to the general section. Sorry. I wasn't thinking when I posted it here.
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Old 2007-03-18, 02:12   Link #5
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Originally Posted by kayos View Post
Have you tried entering your poems into poetry.com. You know they're giving out prizes and awards for the whatnots contests right. Never know maybe you'll end up wining 25 thousand.
Poetry.com is apparently a scam. I submitted one to a contest, and just got a letter saying I was going to be published in their anthology "Immortal Verses" and was a semifinalist for their contest.

Reading through the letter, it seemed suspicious and that they were trying just a bit too hard to reassure me and flatter me. Not to mention already trying to get me to preorder the book (preferably multiple copies).

Looking online I saw that a lot of people have gotten the same letter (some for multiple poems) and as much as over a year ago, for an anthology with the same name. One guy said that for the grand prize he was supposed to pay his way to go to some convention in order to read his poem in front of finalist judges (and when he received his copy of the anthology it was filled with grammatical errors)
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Old 2007-03-18, 02:19   Link #6
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I agree. I got a letter from poetry.com for a poem I wrote up in like 2 seconds. I just don't think they are real.
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Old 2007-03-19, 05:42   Link #7
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soooo nice
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