2009-03-04, 15:48 | Link #63 | |
sleepyhead
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It may require a little zoom, to get in range of a confortable half.
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2009-03-04, 22:38 | Link #68 | |
Kira_Naruto, the ecchi
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Join Date: Dec 2005
Location: http://www.exciting-tits.com/
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If you can drop a bit more so at least her nose is partly hidden, it would be much more preferable but as it is, its as far as I'm willing to be lenient with. @ BunBun, Marina is right. Even very very dark shadow counts .. pitch black shadows where the face melt into the BG. Also, so far, Riker time and again spammed me with a lot of his old works, which fits this theme to a T, you might want to hunt his thread for inspiration
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Minimalistic, but has a sharp look to it. KiNA says it's fine so no problem there, perhaps cut a little off the top and bottom for more emphasis on the eyes (not huge chunks removed, just a trimming. The text is a little confusing, since her look suggests anything but crying (unless you mean crying in another sense). Quote:
It feels a bit washed out and the border could use some work (the black corners are distracting). Those petals beg for animation.
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2009-03-05, 12:14 | Link #76 | |||
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1. 2. Trimmed version. Well, I don't think I'll reduce it further. Tried and didn't look good at all.
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2009-03-05, 12:50 | Link #78 |
Star Designer
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Considering the character you chose I think it would be more suitable to present a black fog over lighter background or something that represents his abilities, though colored black as well. Black Getsuga would be great here. White colored fog lessens the impact of the character in my opinion
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Urei has the right idea here, the fog feels a little off. I like the choice though, I had pondered using it at one point too. ^^
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