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KiNA · 2009-02-12, 03:08

The full text flashing should sync with his hand going upward then the scrolling matched with his movement =/

Ehko · 2009-02-12, 04:40

Hm, now that you pointed it out it seems more apparent, but I still think you can pass that off and fool someone if you just don't tell them :P

**Solace** · 2009-02-12, 05:27

A new banner for a new year! Simple, but it works.

Katocchi · 2009-02-12, 07:14

Which better .. C&C please ..

Vibeke · 2009-02-12, 08:28

Is it better now?

Katocchi · 2009-02-12, 10:25

Or these ?? Huah .. I'm Confuse to Choose ..

Ehko · 2009-02-12, 11:29

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Originally Posted by Vibeke

Is it better now?

it's more visible now, yes

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Originally Posted by Katocchi

Or these ?? Huah .. I'm Confuse to Choose ..

so many options ._.
Okay well for starters, I noticed each one has some sort of grid pattern. My direct suggesiton would be to get rid of it because its very diruptive of flow. Any pattern can (doesn't have to) disrupt flow, especially one that is large and easily attention gained.

this one imo has the most flow so far (the color gradient overlay helped define the flow as well as half of the grid lines which helped the flow while the other half held it back) .... however the render doesn't match the entire global color spectrum :/ The render looks like it needs a dark background and surrounding and not one thats primarily made of whites and light color arrays.

This one has a background that closer matches the render than any of your other entries because it does not contain so much light.

This next one might actually be a better example of appropriate colors for your render

however it has that white stuff all around it and that is disruptive :/

Vibeke · 2009-02-12, 11:54

@ Katocchi
In my opinion you should change the colours of the background from those colourful ones to more toned etc. It will give the siq a more serene (?) felling, right now those colours reminds me of disco lights, which isn't good considering the render you're using.

Btw. I made another changes, so please c&c

And a typical boring question: with or without text?

(but I think that I still prefer my ver. 2, which I made earlier...

)

Arceon · 2009-02-12, 22:04

Well. . .got more of the render in it. . .and touched a few things up.

C&C?

Katocchi · 2009-02-13, 01:29

Thanks for the C&C .. Ehko-san and Vibeke-san ..

And for Vibeke-san .. I think I prefer the new one with text but the color of the right image still little imo ..

Well, Because I'm so Confused

.. this one is my Final Entry

Larthak · 2009-02-13, 05:22

Can't believe I actually managed to find a dancing pic. >=D

Three versions, I'm yet again undecisive. Any C&C+color pick highly appreciated and noted.

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Originally Posted by Arceon

Well. . .got more of the render in it. . .and touched a few things up.

C&C?

Nicely blended. Especially her hair, I like the used effects.

The only slightly disturbing element seems to be the "wave" in front of her. Looks kinda odd in front of her hair. A subtle blur (0,5-2 px) in that area may enhance the look. Just a thought, not necessarily an improvement.

Still, much better than the first version, suits the theme a little more.

konstargirl · 2009-02-13, 08:56

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Originally Posted by Arceon

Well. . .got more of the render in it. . .and touched a few things up.

C&C?

It looks better than the first version. And I like the way reimu( If I'm correct is in that postion like that and I stil don't see the dancing to it, but I guess you can call it dancing.

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Originally Posted by Katocchi

Well, Because I'm so Confused

.. this one is my Final Entry

Nice entry except that the colors don't look right to me. :3

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Originally Posted by Vibeke

Is it better now?

Its very nice. Like the aniamtion andi t looks a little better.

Heres my entry its not my final but oh well. XD Any C.C

Edit:

Crap the border isn't on there. ><

Ehko · 2009-02-13, 10:15

@Vibeke
without text looks better

@Arceon
That's better. The movement is still pretty faded but it looks slightly more like dancing now.

@Larthak
:/ i cant decide...
Maybe something between

(right here)

The abstract light strokes in the back disrupt flow but I guess that's okay :|
Nicely balanced light based signature

@konstargirl

and now we dropped anime in general (lol)

Without border looks pretty good imo + likes the font, its blends well, though comparing it with her shirt, shouldn't it have an orange tint to match it too?

Evil Rick · 2009-02-13, 10:53

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Originally Posted by KiNA

Good?, bad?, Dont do sig anymore?

OH SHI-.. it wont sync =.=.. I stopped making sig then ._.

A mask trick, right?

Looks really good and I must say, very original

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Originally Posted by Katocchi

Or these ?? Huah .. I'm Confuse to Choose ..

I like netter the first one, the colors and contrast are good, the text doesn't feets very well on the other sigs

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Originally Posted by Vibeke

@ Katocchi
In my opinion you should change the colours of the background from those colourful ones to more toned etc. It will give the siq a more serene (?) felling, right now those colours reminds me of disco lights, which isn't good considering the render you're using.

Btw. I made another changes, so please c&c

And a typical boring question: with or without text?

(but I think that I still prefer my ver. 2, which I made earlier...

)

My advice would be without text, the animation looks good but the colors on the right image (the static dancing girl) look a bit weird

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Originally Posted by Arceon

Well. . .got more of the render in it. . .and touched a few things up.

C&C?

Looks better, a lot, very good efects and render, like it a lot

Quote:

Originally Posted by Larthak

Can't believe I actually managed to find a dancing pic. >=D

Three versions, I'm yet again undecisive. Any C&C+color pick highly appreciated and noted.

The 3 versions are good, but I like better the colors on the first one

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Originally Posted by konstargirl

Heres my entry its not my final but oh well. XD Any C.C

Edit:

Crap the border isn't on there. ><

It looks a bit simple, not much impact, trry to focus the image a bit more and mybe add some effects with brushes and/or lights (or anything that hits your mind

)

I agree with Ehko, the sig looks goos without border

escimo · 2009-02-13, 20:46

Final Entry

White Manju Bun · 2009-02-13, 21:01

ergh....

I dont know...Im really not loving it right now. I need to work on the stock color...

Evil Rick · 2009-02-13, 22:08

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Originally Posted by escimo

Final Entry

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Originally Posted by White Manju Bun

ergh....

I dont know...Im really not loving it right now. I need to work on the stock color...

Looks really simple, doesn't impact a lot.

What about some ligh efects? (filter/ render/ lighting efects) This way you could focus the dancers and give the impression that they're in some kind of dancing contest, it's just a suggestion though

KiNA · 2009-02-13, 22:16

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Originally Posted by escimo

Final Entry

Cheater! How the fark you get her to dance so smooth @.@

The text animation could do with a bit more smooth out tho

Endrance · 2009-02-13, 22:42

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Originally Posted by White Manju Bun

ergh....

I dont know...Im really not loving it right now. I need to work on the stock color...

I like it not just because i love blood+ but because it works

KiNA · 2009-02-13, 22:48

Erm.. I thought BunBun's sig is from Ouran Host club?

2009-02-12, 05:27	Link #63
Solace (ノಠ益ಠ)ノ彡┻━┻ Moderator Join Date: Mar 2006	A new banner for a new year! Simple, but it works. __________________

2009-02-12, 08:28	Link #65
Vibeke ❤ Fabulous MAX~! ❤ Graphic Designer Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: Poland -.- Age: 35	Is it better now? __________________ Currently busy studying Japaneese language and culture on Warsaw University//my animelist

2009-02-12, 11:54	Link #68
Vibeke ❤ Fabulous MAX~! ❤ Graphic Designer Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: Poland -.- Age: 35	@ Katocchi In my opinion you should change the colours of the background from those colourful ones to more toned etc. It will give the siq a more serene (?) felling, right now those colours reminds me of disco lights, which isn't good considering the render you're using. Btw. I made another changes, so please c&c And a typical boring question: with or without text? (but I think that I still prefer my ver. 2, which I made earlier...) __________________ Currently busy studying Japaneese language and culture on Warsaw University//my animelist

2009-02-12, 22:04	Link #69
Arceon Rediscovered Graphic Designer Join Date: Jul 2008 Location: Requiem Age: 30	Well. . .got more of the render in it. . .and touched a few things up. C&C? __________________ --Gallery of the Arceon--

2009-02-12, 04:40	Link #62
Ehko its a boy :o Join Date: Jan 2009 Age: 32	Hm, now that you pointed it out it seems more apparent, but I still think you can pass that off and fool someone if you just don't tell them :P

2009-02-13, 10:15	Link #73
Ehko its a boy :o Join Date: Jan 2009 Age: 32	@Vibeke without text looks better @Arceon That's better. The movement is still pretty faded but it looks slightly more like dancing now. @Larthak :/ i cant decide... Maybe something between (right here) The abstract light strokes in the back disrupt flow but I guess that's okay :\| Nicely balanced light based signature @konstargirl and now we dropped anime in general (lol) Without border looks pretty good imo + likes the font, its blends well, though comparing it with her shirt, shouldn't it have an orange tint to match it too?

2009-02-13, 20:46	Link #75
escimo Paparazzi Join Date: Mar 2008 Age: 41	Final Entry