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Kha · 2007-06-21, 05:45

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Originally Posted by Nightengale

The quick-4 round shooting of midcheesium is pretty brutal. Backlogs!!!

Loli x Bunny? Nice ring to it...though I am strangely reminded of this and this...*shudders*

Spoiler:

You mean Wira turning into a mindless poodle of crystallized blood =/= death? And well, it's more of a draw, really. The first half emphasised that had Signum stayed to Storm Falcons, Isdera couldn't even scratch her.

And deaths will be soon, dun worry. Especially the Wolkies. Besides, I like torturing my characters, but not neccesarily kill them. :3

RAF were pretty eager to get off the ground flying.

And something told me that Wira'd be back despite that...

Actually I think I missed something... >_<

And my Tomino-loving side agrees too.

FlameSparkZ · 2007-06-21, 06:09

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Originally Posted by USB500

Hey, I want to know what exactly happened to Koji's parents

They're still living in Uminari City

Koji visits them in his vacations, and his father uses his visit as an excuse to take him out and pick up chicks

LoweGear · 2007-06-21, 07:19

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Originally Posted by FlameSparkZ

They're still living in Uminari City

Koji visits them in his vacations, and his father uses his visit as an excuse to take him out and pick up chicks

... So THAT's how it is huh...

Already thinking up the cliche where dad asks if his son has a girl yet, someone squeals, and the rest go downhill from there

Liingo · 2007-06-21, 08:58

Jeez I come back after a day and it's grown 3 pages

Especially with my settings at 30 posts/page

Backlog Buster Ready to Fire!!! Although the forums cut me down on the epic size.... 50k character only... It was up to 77k at one time

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Originally Posted by Nightengale

Vita/Wira NAO! Next should be Astra/Shamal + Isdera/Signum a little.

Spoiler for Part 12.5:

I shortened a lot of parts, trimmed it down, etc, but it gets the main point over. This is Saga's profile, after all...these are more or less extensions to the other knights, but hardly the most important ones.

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Originally Posted by Nightengale

Okay, I lied...again. It's only really Isdera/Signum, since it turned out longer than what I'd thought...AGAIN. And I even cut out it's original "one-man-stand" ending and decided it's better off when they fight again in the current timeline. BOO!

Spoiler for Part 12.75 : The :

The ending wasn't very good, imo, but I've cut out like 1000 words worth of an ending since it originally tied in with Tiara meeting Saga at the same time at the end of their battle. I will still include that ending scene, but it won't be in this timeline. I'll save it for when the Revive Reinforce arc starts its gear with the players joining in.

Next time, will either be the end or the 2nd to the end of Part 12. Saga/Tiara and Astra/Shamal SOON! :3

After that, we'll have Part 13 : Dreams, Part 14 : End of Dreams, and Part 15 : Painful Aftermath which will close this part of the story officially.

@KBT... The thing about Mabiko being the dimensional traveler...I actually already have Saga doing that with extra motives and reasons for doing so for the last 10 years from A's to StrikerS so I'm not so sure......

More excellence to add the the tale. Vita leaving Wira's final action/form intact was a nice touch. Just shows that she respected her oppenent

And

Signum was defeated....

WHAT BLASPHEMY!!.....

I approve of the end of the battle

. Good Job!

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Originally Posted by LoweGear

Part V of Mai's Profile up, which is more of an interlude than anything, since I decided to cut it shorter than I wanted.
*snip*

NIce continuation. 'I may no longer be there when you need me...' Awwww, Maxim's rating just increased 100 points!

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Originally Posted by Meophist

Spoiler for Ennis Jesca:

Spoiler for Ennis Jesca Part 2:

Hrmm… was thinking about posting more, but I think this is enough for now. Sorry about that.

I'm not sure what else to say..don't really know how to put it into words but good job on what you've done so far.

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Originally Posted by FlameSparkZ

And another part of the date...

Spoiler for A day off and a date with Maren - Part 3:

I honestly wanted to pull back on this part until episode 10 came out subbed, but oh well...

And try not to ask too many questions about Koji's father...

MOAR PLZ!!

Although now that I think about it, how did Koji survive Signum's training.....

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Originally Posted by Reiji Tabibito

Okay, everybody, here's the first member of the 82nd RAF.

Spoiler for She who fights the people's war...:

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Originally Posted by Reiji Tabibito

Okay... two of four!

Spoiler for the One with the Arm of God...:

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Originally Posted by Reiji Tabibito

Number three! HOO-AH!

Spoiler for the One with Unerring Aim:

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Originally Posted by Reiji Tabibito

It is...but a bow's a bow. Anywho...here he is, the last of the 82nd, in record time (I think...).

Spoiler for He who slays Dragons...:

*snip*

HOLY CRAP 4 characters in a day. And not just short profiles as well....
Ne, where do you keep your time machine, I could use it to make my life a bit easier..

"WE are the aliens.” Akilae agrees with this statement....
*casts unknown spell on Liingo. Liingo drops to the floor seconds later, twitching*
Akilae: Aliens, hardly. We actually acknowledge aliens, unlike the filthy mon-keigh.

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Originally Posted by haiz123321

[SPOILER="History of Koumyou"]
Background:
Koumyou lost his parents at a very young age of 4, having to survive in the world by himself at this age has made him seen the positive and negative side of life. Being someone who always looked at the positive side of things he developed a very easy going characteristic but treasuring friendship and comradeship so much that if any one of them gets hurt badly rage will overflow in him, unlocking his latent abilities.
*snip*

Well I like the attacks but just a few comments..
A 60kg 8 year old?? Is that normal?
He should be 18 in StrikerS, 10 years went by, however, it's 6 years from the end of A's.
I can live with the SS ranking but Berserk Drive is OP. It means that he can basically keep attacking and attacking as long as his stamina is there.

Can we expect to see a profile to the extra opponent that he faces in A's.. Although it's going to screw up alot of stories if we now have a 6th knight as well:uhoh

Reiji Tabibito · 2007-06-21, 10:41

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Originally Posted by Kha

Young padawan, you have learned well. Your speedy midcheesium posts show that you shall do well and survive here.

Tough as nails. Interestingly, characters like Sev are rather common in these parts.

I like his quote. I can even picture his seiyuu speaking it.

All noted, now for one more!!!

Firstly, I'd like to thank you for reminding me that Aurion's family name is Sophia's Device name when both halves are connected together!

Boxers and nothing else. (chuckle) Sure brings back my days in the army...

A happy family serviceman too, and the "Kid" of the team to boot.

Immune to Oni-Chan Breaker and yet gets dragged around? Something doesn't quite fit here, unless he's the dead clueless to love type like Kha who doesn't get all the subtle naunces of language (until Keroko blasted some of it in

).

Your profiles have a very unique way of fleshing out characters, by highlighting what they think of others. It actually works both ways; not only do we have a better idea of how your characters view things, we see how they are related, and how are they as a person at once. Saves a ton of space and still have the productivity of full bluecheesium post. Kudos!

Ascalon is Britannian! That means there's a chance for Arcas to learn a Reality Marble and other Britainnian Noble Illusions!

I'd like to see what Excalibur and Ascalon have to say to each other.

I must say, Arcas is one lucky kid, having met pretty much everyone who has appeared in Space magazine at least once. And the way he describes der Kleriker is certainly going to embarass him (a point where he and Fate are very similar), like how he was very uneasy during the interview with Space about him being the Messiah of New Velka, something that the Church's spin doctors came up with. It took Carim's and Acous' presence for him to present a more professional image.

This doesn't happen when he's preaching to the masses, so Keroko and Hayate, the ones who put names on pretty much everything of the girls, figured it to be the "Fate-humility Complex".

Speaking of which, now I'm wondering if its the OC who invited the 82nd to his part of the base. ^^ There's a little problem though; the Trinity is seldom in one spot other than Monarch Church long enough to meet, so when the RAF get here they might find no one's home in Hangar 7.

Now that everyone's accounted for, I'll soon change that. (ideas spinning) ^^

RE: Tom's timeline. No it actually can fit. It'll just means that Tom joined the Silvana the moment Kyla, fighter pilots, and Enforcers was assigned to it, which is feasible. And from the date he left, Kha was still heavily involved with tweaking the Zakum Troopers, and both of them would leave the ship at the same time. And that they would've known each other for 3 years at least, as well as Nanoha, Yuuno, Keroko, Hayate, Fate, Carim and Acous. Nothing wrong with that, it's just whether you want him to or not.

@Lowe: My Zankantou ref was out of fun, and only because of Fate's Zamber really.

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Originally Posted by Aaron008R

HOLY COW!!!! You're churning out OC's faster than Erio's Sonic Move!

Anyways, they are all very well-rounded characters. Such detail on the first go! BRAVO!!!

The relationship parts are excellent. And it's very impressive to see how you've integrated youre charcters into the OC thread with just the first entry.

I salute you!

BTW, just what exactly did Aurion do for Ascalon?

And I started likeng your Saber even more after hearing what the others think about her.

Dense and ditzy female characters are quite charming

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Originally Posted by Liingo

HOLY CRAP 4 characters in a day. And not just short profiles as well....
Ne, where do you keep your time machine, I could use it to make my life a bit easier..

"WE are the aliens.” Akilae agrees with this statement....
*casts unknown spell on Liingo. Liingo drops to the floor seconds later, twitching*
Akilae: Aliens, hardly. We actually acknowledge aliens, unlike the filthy mon-keigh.

Sorry for missing out on so much - life's just not fair sometimes.

@ Kha:

Re: Onii-chan Breaker Immunity - Arcas hasn't has the exposure to Earth culture that many of the other OCs have, due to his time out on the frontier - he doesn't understand the moe subtext of "Onii-chan!" That's why he's relatively immune - now if Hayate and the other Aces were to tie him up and force him to watch a marathon of moe imouto series, he'd be as vulnerable as the rest of them...

Re: Boomer's timeline - OK, at long as it fits, feel free to go ahead and use him - but be warned - Embarrassing OOCness is prohibited!

Re: Ascalon - well, Crusade is pretty much on the level of a Noble Illusion, but it never hurts to have two huge spells. "I am the bone of my sword..."

Re: Arcas' Luck - well, it's part luck, part Device fame, and part boredom. If Arcas had been happy w/his job as an Instructor or an Investigator, he'd never have met all the people that he did.

@ Aaron008R:

<shrugs> It's no biggie. Like I said, I've got plenty of time on my hands.

Re: Aurion & Ascalon - He modified Ascalon so that more cartridges could be loaded @ one time - it was 5 before, now Ascalon has a cartridge cap of 8 per tube.

Re: Saber - Isn't she just the CUTEST THING?

@Liingo:

Re: Speed - Time Machine? What time machine? <throws blanket over DeLorean car> I don't see any time machine.

Re: Aliens - I actually got the concept from a Stargate Atlantis fic I was reading.

Nightengale · 2007-06-21, 11:06

Part 12.9 here. And lazy ol' me skipped another battle. It was originally supposed to mildly involve Zafira...then I thought...whatever and scrapped it off.

Spoiler for Part 12.9 : Penultimate :

Part 12 Final will be next that covers the end of this penultimate battle. Part 13 will be a return to fluff... the kind that revolves around fate..and also power-up.

LoweGear · 2007-06-21, 11:13

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Originally Posted by Nightengale

Part 12.9 here. And lazy ol' me skipped another battle. It was originally supposed to mildly involve Zafira...then I thought...whatever and scrapped it off.

Spoiler for Part 12.9 : Penultimate :

Part 12 Final will be next that covers the end of this penultimate battle. Part 13 will be a return to fluff... the kind that revolves around fate..and also power-up.

And it just HAD to be the penultimate chapter.. you know the goods are right around the corner, so near yet so far

I'm feeling diiiiizy... just from imagining how high up that place you described is

, and also at the gut-wrenching thought of Saga and Tiara's inevitably tragic meeting finally arriving.

Next chapter can't come soon enough

Keroko · 2007-06-21, 11:37

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Originally Posted by Nightengale

Part 12.9 here. And lazy ol' me skipped another battle. It was originally supposed to mildly involve Zafira...then I thought...whatever and scrapped it off.

Spoiler for Part 12.9 : Penultimate :

Part 12 Final will be next that covers the end of this penultimate battle. Part 13 will be a return to fluff... the kind that revolves around fate..and also power-up.

The drama is getting more and more, and Shamal took an inventive strategy to be able to do battle. Too bad the focus wasn't meant to be on her.

Kha · 2007-06-21, 11:47

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Originally Posted by Nightengale

Part 12.9 here. And lazy ol' me skipped another battle. It was originally supposed to mildly involve Zafira...then I thought...whatever and scrapped it off.

Spoiler for Part 12.9 : Penultimate :

Part 12 Final will be next that covers the end of this penultimate battle. Part 13 will be a return to fluff... the kind that revolves around fate..and also power-up.

Talk about altitude sickness. Though I believe its all due to excitement.

One more before we get dragged around again.

MOAR!!!

@Reiji: DW, Tom is in good hands. Right X?

Reiji Tabibito · 2007-06-21, 11:51

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Originally Posted by Kha

@Reiji: DW, Tom is in good hands. Right X?

Good. BTW, I'm busy writing the introduction of the 82nd...it'll be a 1-2k word short at least...I'll post in the Fanfiction thread when it's done.

Keroko · 2007-06-21, 11:55

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Originally Posted by Reiji Tabibito

Good. BTW, I'm busy writing the introduction of the 82nd...it'll be a 1-2k word short at least...I'll post in the Fanfiction thread when it's done.

Why there? Everyone posts his stuff here, introductions, developments, omake's. There's no need to rush it to the fanfiction thread.

Of course, there is the fact that I hardly ever check the fanfiction thread too.

tshouryuu · 2007-06-21, 13:39

Holy S***!! The amount of backlogs is huge!! This is going to take a while to wade thru...

@Nightengale:

You are the master indeed, I can't wait to read the final parts. What a great tale.

@LoweGear: Mai sure is one interesting character. So when are you going to write stories involving her?

@Reiji Tabibito: 4 OCs in one day?! You sure work fast.

@haiz123321: Interesting, but like others have said, quite a bit of many plot holes due to lack of information. Don't blame you though, With so many OCs, its rather easy to step onto other people's toes. Maybe I'll make a character relationship map when i got the time.

@everyone else: sorry if I did not leave comments. Just too much to wade thru.

PS. I got bored today and decided to craft a bad guy. I think this one needs to be balanced as I feel that its slightly overpowered. Hopefully it'll get me into the groove of writing "My name is Tais" stories again.

Spoiler for Vidalia:

Meophist · 2007-06-21, 13:44

Spoiler for Ennis:

Spoiler for Kase:

Spoiler for Kase part 2:

Spoiler for Ennis again:

Spoiler for Kase part 3:

I feel like my writing is horrible…

Kha · 2007-06-21, 14:04

I've spent the last two hours on an inspired writing spree when I should be sleeping... Pardon me if it's a little weird, I'm just so tired now...

Here it is, the definitive history of Kluize, told using an event during AlternateS. I think I might have referenced a few places out of my foggy head, but it doesn't look like it's going to cause a continuum void or a dimensional dislocation, so I think it's safe to be read.

Spoiler for Paradox:

Reiji Tabibito · 2007-06-21, 15:11

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Originally Posted by Keroko

Why there? Everyone posts his stuff here, introductions, developments, omake's. There's no need to rush it to the fanfiction thread.

Of course, there is the fact that I hardly ever check the fanfiction thread too.

Well, to appease the masses, I'll post here, and in the FF thread when I've got more material.

Spoiler for Introducing the Noble Phantasms:

Okay, so it's only about 750, but I think it's good for an intro.

Satty · 2007-06-21, 15:45

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Originally Posted by Reiji Tabibito

Well, to appease the masses, I'll post here, and in the FF thread when I've got more material.

Spoiler for Introducing the Noble Phantasms:

Okay, so it's only about 750, but I think it's good for an intro.

Wow...it's interesting...

Mow Yun · 2007-06-21, 16:26

Spoiler for short length!:

Metal bars...darkened, brick walls, a rocky floor... and a mysterious figure in the hallway. I ran torwards him, as though I knew perfectly well who this stranger was. As I came within several arms' reach of the man, he turned torwards me and my body froze. I couldn't move as he reached towards me and grabbed me with his right arm, lifting me up. His other hand came into view holding a needle filled with mysterious fluid. He drew back his hand, then stabbed me in the arm...
I awoke with a start. I expected to see the dark, dirty ceiling of that dungeon again, but only the clean metal and bright white lights of the Time Space Administration Bureau's medical ward greeted me. I remembered being dispatched to a rocky wasteland world to protect some Enforcers, but...the last thing I remembered was transferring myself back to Mid-Childa. Yet... I don't know of any magic, mistake or not, that could change someone's...clothing to... this...frilly outfit...? I looked over myself, and apparently somebody had taken the liberty of replacing my outfit with something that was absolutely ridiculous. A very happy and somewhat familiar female voice to my left side alerted me to the sole other presence in the medical ward.
"So you're awake, huh? You've been out for most of today, Krystal. When the staff brought you in, you didn't look so good. You probably exerted yourself too much again, didn't you."
Knight Shamal, one of the Wolkenritter. Programs, like myself, and they too have a rather dark past behind them. The similarities pretty much end there, though. The Wolkenritter were much stronger than someone like me, and were pretty much the personal guard of the current Mistress of the Night Sky, Hayate Yagami. I had heard about them on many occasions, even once tried to protect a small town from their assault, as Dracatouguze reminded me several years back, during my first recent encounter with them. I had forgotten all of that, and my device had to refresh me on this information. They were a fearsome force, both in looks and in combat. Apparently they were far more than simple programs that zealously guarded their master, the master of the Book of Darkness What intrigued me was, why would a Velka Knight force such...frilly clothing on their patients? I didn't quite know what to say.
"Erm...I guess so...umm, Knight Shamal...what's up with this...outfit...?"
She looked pleasantly surprised, perhaps at the mention of her title, or with my mention of her choice of medical clothing. Maybe both, I couldn't tell.
"Oh... Hayate told me that she needed someone to try those on!" I couldn't make heads or tails of this new information, but before I could ask why she had already whisked me out of the room. I attracted an array of suprised and mildly amused glances and the occasional burst of laughter as Shamal dragged me across the entire building to Hayate Yagami's quarters. As we dashed through empty hallways and crowded rooms, I thought I heard the Velka Knight mutter something to herself about "maids and Vita resisting their advances." An agonizing chunk of time later, the two of us had reached a bland looking door at the end of a hallway. As Shamal pressed the buzzer with her giddy expression on her face, I somehow knew I would be dreading the next several hours. Inwardly, I promised myself that I would never overexert myself to that extent again, as well to judge people not by their past or their associations, but by their current actions.

The door opened, and my heart sank.

I think I butchered Shamal's personality, but it took me about 3-4 hours to write that short post up. : /
I now need to think of something devious for Hayate :P

Keroko · 2007-06-21, 16:48

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Originally Posted by tshouryuu

PS. I got bored today and decided to craft a bad guy. I think this one needs to be balanced as I feel that its slightly overpowered. Hopefully it'll get me into the groove of writing "My name is Tais" stories again.

Spoiler for Vidalia:

And thus chaos takes root in yet another member.

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Originally Posted by Reiji Tabibito

Well, to appease the masses, I'll post here, and in the FF thread when I've got more material.

Spoiler for Introducing the Noble Phantasms:

Okay, so it's only about 750, but I think it's good for an intro.

It is, and the way you made the link to several other characters and the TSAB was nicely done too.

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Originally Posted by Kha

I've spent the last two hours on an inspired writing spree when I should be sleeping... Pardon me if it's a little weird, I'm just so tired now...

Here it is, the definitive history of Kluize, told using an event during AlternateS. I think I might have referenced a few places out of my foggy head, but it doesn't look like it's going to cause a continuum void or a dimensional dislocation, so I think it's safe to be read.

Spoiler for Paradox:

.... I am not sure what to think of this. It's confusing the hell outa me, but for now it looks like some sort of alternate reallity thingy.

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Originally Posted by Meophist

Spoiler for Ennis:

Spoiler for Kase:

Spoiler for Kase part 2:

Spoiler for Ennis again:

Spoiler for Kase part 3:

I feel like my writing is horrible…

A full unision character? Awesomness in progress there.

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Originally Posted by Mow Yun

Spoiler for short length!:

Metal bars...darkened, brick walls, a rocky floor... and a mysterious figure in the hallway. I ran torwards him, as though I knew perfectly well who this stranger was. As I came within several arms' reach of the man, he turned torwards me and my body froze. I couldn't move as he reached towards me and grabbed me with his right arm, lifting me up. His other hand came into view holding a needle filled with mysterious fluid. He drew back his hand, then stabbed me in the arm...
I awoke with a start. I expected to see the dark, dirty ceiling of that dungeon again, but only the clean metal and bright white lights of the Time Space Administration Bureau's medical ward greeted me. I remembered being dispatched to a rocky wasteland world to protect some Enforcers, but...the last thing I remembered was transferring myself back to Mid-Childa. Yet... I don't know of any magic, mistake or not, that could change someone's...clothing to... this...frilly outfit...? I looked over myself, and apparently somebody had taken the liberty of replacing my outfit with something that was absolutely ridiculous. A very happy and somewhat familiar female voice to my left side alerted me to the sole other presence in the medical ward.
"So you're awake, huh? You've been out for most of today, Krystal. When the staff brought you in, you didn't look so good. You probably exerted yourself too much again, didn't you."
Knight Shamal, one of the Wolkenritter. Programs, like myself, and they too have a rather dark past behind them. The similarities pretty much end there, though. The Wolkenritter were much stronger than someone like me, and were pretty much the personal guard of the current Mistress of the Night Sky, Hayate Yagami. I had heard about them on many occasions, even once tried to protect a small town from their assault, as Dracatouguze reminded me several years back, during my first recent encounter with them. I had forgotten all of that, and my device had to refresh me on this information. They were a fearsome force, both in looks and in combat. Apparently they were far more than simple programs that zealously guarded their master, the master of the Book of Darkness What intrigued me was, why would a Velka Knight force such...frilly clothing on their patients? I didn't quite know what to say.
"Erm...I guess so...umm, Knight Shamal...what's up with this...outfit...?"
She looked pleasantly surprised, perhaps at the mention of her title, or with my mention of her choice of medical clothing. Maybe both, I couldn't tell.
"Oh... Hayate told me that she needed someone to try those on!" I couldn't make heads or tails of this new information, but before I could ask why she had already whisked me out of the room. I attracted an array of suprised and mildly amused glances and the occasional burst of laughter as Shamal dragged me across the entire building to Hayate Yagami's quarters. As we dashed through empty hallways and crowded rooms, I thought I heard the Velka Knight mutter something to herself about "maids and Vita resisting their advances." An agonizing chunk of time later, the two of us had reached a bland looking door at the end of a hallway. As Shamal pressed the buzzer with her giddy expression on her face, I somehow knew I would be dreading the next several hours. Inwardly, I promised myself that I would never overexert myself to that extent again, as well to judge people not by their past or their associations, but by their current actions.

The door opened, and my heart sank.

I think I butchered Shamal's personality, but it took me about 3-4 hours to write that short post up. : /
I now need to think of something devious for Hayate :P

Cosplay mistress Yagami Hayate strikes again.

Now what is beyond that door that seems to terrify her so?

Mow Yun · 2007-06-21, 17:02

Well, I was thinking that she thinks that "if Shamal was like this, what would her master be like?" n____n

Reiji Tabibito · 2007-06-21, 17:09

Okay, now that the 82nd's been introduced, the next step is to write the reunion bit for when they land on Mid-Childia. Which brings me to the point of this post.

@ Kha, Aaron008R, Keroko, Fuyu no Sora, Saint X, USB500, and Ratler:

Someone in the 82nd knows characters you've created - would they be available for a surprise party for the 82nd (minus Sevasti - he'd be reporting to superiors in Secretariat) on the Mid-Childian equivalent of 7:00 Friday night @ Satashi's infamous bar run by Haseo?

Let me clarify

Kha's characters: Kha & the 21st, and Gard and the Zakums

Aaron008R: Aurion & the Phantoms

Fuyu no Sora: Cass Ivanov & the Blue Flames

Saint X: Kyla Scrya & anyone who's serving on the Silvana @ the time of CrosyS

Keroko: Keroko & the Rogues

Ratler: Alexander Ivanov

USB 500: Annabelle & Leonidas, Alexandra, Hikki, and Shinnosuke

If not, then I understand. But the more, the merrier.

Thanks.

2007-06-21, 11:06	Link #2486
Nightengale ~Night of Gales~ Author Join Date: Dec 2005	Part 12.9 here. And lazy ol' me skipped another battle. It was originally supposed to mildly involve Zafira...then I thought...whatever and scrapped it off. Spoiler for Part 12.9 : Penultimate : ~Part XII Verse 16 ~ Truth x Pain ~ ~Astra~ We continued on…as we reached the center courtyard of the palace, a large open anti-gravitational air space... The hollow sky-paths… the corridors that range miles and miles up towards the skies, the further we went beyond the seemingly complicated starways of the castle… the more extravagant it felt… Above that, the further we went, the more we could see the end of the line… Isdera’s life-force too is now vaguely noticeable…but its presence is clear unlike Wira’s, so at least we know he’s still alive. We continued on…as we reached the center courtyard of the palace, a large open anti-gravitational air space... It felt different… a serene open-space, with statues lined up the circle epicenter of the main hall as the ceiling seems almost unreachable… No, rather…it is that far way. We’re reaching now...only several hundred more miles upwards, and we’ll reach the throne of the sky that belongs to the Princess… My chains were rattling…a sensation I recognized. This feeling… there’s no mistake. “General, I’m sorry, but you go on ahead. I have something to take care of.” “All right then. I’ll entrust my back to you.” The general flew off vertically at full speed… but as expected…things were not that simple as a continuous flow of wires and threads released from the surrounding walls, like a putrid mix of a smoothly trimmed spider web, attempted to chase and block off Saga’s path… “Chain Heaven.” [Kettenhimmel!] As a myriad of magical chains form itself to block the strings also within the shapes of a spider web as my chains clanked itself against the wirings, I sharpened my senses as I cut away the magical strings with its properties. “I know you’re there… I won’t forget your particular Linker Core reaction even till the day I die…woman.” Someone then came out from where she is… as she flew herself in front of me… “…” I sense something…Doubt? Worry? And it wasn’t directed at me…no, rather it’s more like… my presence isn’t that important. She feels more occupied with someone else…the General… “So…Saga’s broken through…” !!!! “How the hell did you know the ge-“ “Klarwind.” Before I could even complete my sentence, all of a sudden, my body was slammed with a heavy force from the side…this sensation, the statues? She’s controlling the statues of this room… This entire room… “I may not be an offensive knight, but in this room…I control the flow of the anti-gravitational field of this sacred place… Don’t think it’ll be easy for you to win.” So… a playing field that favors her? That’s fine… All I need to do is bind her up so bad she can’t even think about anything else…and then I can force out the truth from her…How did she know the general’s real name? “I cannot allow Saga to meet with the princess...” “And I need you to tell me how the hell you knew about that…” Looks like…there can be no compromise between us… ~Saga~ An endless tunnel… that’s what it feels like… but I can sense it. The abnormally strong magical pressure at the end of the spiraling tower that conquers the sky… “Hresvelgr…” From within the walls…it felt as if a voice resonated…a strangely familiar voice, as in front of me, like a judgments of the gods, a heavy blast of pure magical energy rained down from the sky, threatening to consume and destroy every bit of me… [Panzer Schild!] I placed both hands forward as I shielded myself…continuing upwards, breaking through the heavy blast… and slowly…it subsided… “So…that long-range battle had began, even so many miles away…Princess of the Night Sky.” My hands were still mildly shaking from the heavy, sudden blast…It was primarily concentrated on magical damage, but still…the physical effects were strong… So, this is the power of the Princess of the Night Sky…the most powerful knight in the entire empire. I’ll accept your challenge. I changed my knight armor into a different form…something that combined both the effects of Drei and Zwei… It’s not something I can fight long with, but against the Princess… if I don’t end it quickly, I don’t stand a chance either. Fleeting off, I continued on towards the sky, flying as fast as I could… at this rate, I’ll reach the top in 5 minutes… “Moonlight Extinction…” This time…there wasn’t even any need to listen…even covered with the ceiling wall, the magical triangle’s composition was so powerful and heavy that its presence can actually be seen with the naked eye…as a fleeting light illuminates the pathways…and again, a powerful attack that rains down in a ray of light, like the moonlight… Shit…this level of attack, shields won’t suffice. “Null, Load Cartridges!” 5 cartridges were loaded instantly, as from underneath my silhouette came its Belkan triangle formation, I forcefully creates another 5 in front of me, charging out my originally low-attack spell into something powerful… “Arkwind…Genocider!” The 5 magical triangles shot out what was each worth’s a single Arkwind’s spell, converging into a single shot at the very moment of the magical clash…canceling the spell’s effects… “Huh…huh…” The closer I went up…the more the spells take out of me… to be able to cast so many high level spells… To think that even attempting to reach the throne of the Princess would diminish me this much… There’s only a few more miles left…. I’ll have to bet it all on one strike… My most powerful Breaker spell…Tri-Heart Breaker… It’s a do-or-die condition. The princess too would most definitely be conditioned to defeat me… Yet… Something’s bothering me… That hollow voice that echoed… ~Tiara~ So…Saladin has indeed made it this far even after that many attacks …Is it something that is to be expected of the man who’s defeated my knights? No matter… Ragnarok is completed. Even if its him, he will not be able to escape its effects… Everything should be going accordingly… Yet…why…do I feel…so uneasy… ~Astra~ Strong… However, in the end… she’s just not orientated to offensive spells…and that technique that ripped out my eyes… it’s no longer effective… Even so… she could’ve defeated me… There were instances where I was open that would’ve allowed her to kill me…had she really wanted to. “Kill me if you wish.” My chains tightening up on every part of her body, making sure she couldn’t escape… If I just pulled harder… her skins would tear apart, and she would slowly die… Hmph. It’s just not like me to torture women, even if it’s the bitch who stole away my visual excitement of such things. Besides, there was something I need to ask her… “Why did you not kill me? I was open several times… And…how did you know the General’s real name?” Part 12 Final will be next that covers the end of this penultimate battle. Part 13 will be a return to fluff... the kind that revolves around fate..and also power-up. __________________ *Night~and~Gale: ~ The Final Mythology of the Man who Defied Destiny.* The sleeping lion shall awaken beyond the depths of time, crossing ten billion lights, come to Terra.

2007-06-21, 13:39	Link #2492
tshouryuu Residential Nutcase Join Date: Jun 2007 Location: Outer Cadia	Holy S*!! The amount of backlogs is huge!! This is going to take a while to wade thru... @Nightengale: You are the master indeed, I can't wait to read the final parts. What a great tale. @LoweGear: Mai sure is one interesting character. So when are you going to write stories involving her? @Reiji Tabibito: 4 OCs in one day?! You sure work fast. @haiz123321: Interesting, but like others have said, quite a bit of many plot holes due to lack of information. Don't blame you though, With so many OCs, its rather easy to step onto other people's toes. Maybe I'll make a character relationship map when i got the time. @everyone else: sorry if I did not leave comments. Just too much to wade thru. PS. I got bored today and decided to craft a bad guy. I think this one needs to be balanced as I feel that its slightly overpowered. Hopefully it'll get me into the groove of writing "My name is Tais" stories again. Spoiler** for Vidalia: Name: Vidalia Alias: "The Blasphemer" Gender: Female Age: Unknown. Looks 24 but estimated to be more than 158. Birthday: Unknown Birthplace: 79th Administered Word - Visalia Seiyuu: Yuka Takana Height: 162cm Weight: 57Kg Eyes: Brown Hair: Neck length, Lime green Clothing: Similar to the clothing of the priests of the God Empress but inversed with a large billowing cloak Threat Level: S+ Magic Type: Runic Magic Colour: Not applicable Favored Element: Darkness Specialty: Offensive spells Device: Lost Logia Status: Familiar Beast Type: Canine Master: Deceased (Dia Absical) Profile: Vidalia, the Blasphemer. Familiar of a deceased mage, Dia Absical, who due to Lost Logia, managed to stay alive despite losing her master to death. So loyal was she that even when her master died, she chose to unseal a pair of Lost Logia that her master owns but never used, in order to keep herself alive to spread the heresy of her master. She gain the name of "Blasphemer" because of this heresy. Spoiler for The Vidalia heresy: Claiming that the God Empress S***** H* is nothing but a lie and that the true God is actually one of the false one's lieutenants also known as K. She preaches that the false empress is nothing more than a manifestation of the true God K's divine power. Her late master, through ancient texts, have found that only When Ky starts to really believe there is nothing supernatural in the world, that is when the false one along with the formation of "SOS Brigade" appears and involve him, a supposingly normal human, into a world of the fantastic and supernatural. There was no point in his involvement but why is it that he and not the supposed "God" gets to experience these strange events? Why was it the Esper, the Alien, the Time Traveler have revealed themselves to him and not the "God"? Why was it that when a new world was about to be created, that the false "God" would choose to bring him, and him alone along with her? The answer to these questions Vidalia claims, is that Ky** is the True God and the rest simply lied to him in order to contain and control His true powers which are manifested in the form of the false one. And that that was the only way that His powers would be restricted and that He Himself would actively contain them and prevent them from going wild. Vidalia has been found preaching her heresy among various in worlds that worship The God Empress, usually just outside the churches. This has led to many tragic events where believers of the God Empress would become enraged due to the heresy she preaches and attempt to punish her. In all cases, this ended in a bloodbath where none were spared with the exception of children "who are innocent and still have the ability of shaking off the lies spread by the false one's believers". This however does not stop her from inflicting painful but non permanent injuries on the children who attacked her as well. Another interesting point is that even when confronted with paladins or enforcers, she would preach her master's findings until she got attacked. In all cases, she never attack first and she kills all that attacked her without any remorse but sparing all those that did not make any offensive moves. Also there are occasional sightings of her at various ancient sites that are built at the time of the God Empress's era. Up till today, it is unknown why she has appeared at these sites. Devices: As mention above, Vidalia does not use devices but Lost Logia instead. The Lost Logia that Vidalia has been seen using is part of a set, collectively known as the 27 True Runes, giving her access to runic magic. After extensive research, it was determined that she has 2 of the True Runes affixed to her, namely the True Blinking Rune and the Rune of Beginning. Although this was said to be impossible as no one can have 2 True Runes on them at one time, Vidalia seems to have found a way around this restriction. Current analysis and evidence seems to indicate that she has split the Rune of Beginning into its 2 child runes, the bright shield and black sword runes, thereby getting around the restriction of one true rune per bearer. Also current speculation is that Vidalia is draining the energy produced by the 2 child runes trying to recombine in order to stay alive so that the True Blinking Rune can grant her immortality. Abilities: Offensive: Flash Judgment - Vidalia summons a single dark blade and releases its energies in a single burst at the target Twinkling Blade - Calling upon the dark powers of the black sword rune from inside herself, Vidalia radiates the killing energies directly at her foes, damaging them all and has a slight chance of instantly killing anyone too weak to resist the killing energies. Shining Light - Similar to Twinkling Blade, Vidalia radiates light energies instead to damage her foes. This attack is weaker and does not have the instant killing abilities of Twinkling Blade. Piercing One - Temporary binding the opponent, Vidalia summons 3 blades to pierce the opponent and denotes them in a burst of damaging dark energies. Hungry Fiend - Summoning large amounts of dark shadowy blades covered with malignant red energy, Vidalia attacks her enemies with a rain of blades, each capable of dealing extreme damage to anything it hits. A mass attack, upgraded version of Flash Judgment. Defensive: Currently, no spells defensive in nature have been casted by Vidalia, who mostly dodges or counters the attack with a spell. Healing: Great Blessing - A light based healing spell that instantly heals some amount of damage. Battle Oath - A much stronger version of Great Blessing but has a chance of sending Vidalia into a berserker fury, increasing her physical abilities but reducing her magical ones. Forgiver Sign - Despite being a light base spell, this spell drains the life force of an opponent and feeding the energy drained to Vidalia, healing her of almost all injuries. Support: Teleport - A teleportation spell used by Vidalia to either teleport herself or non-combatants away. She also uses this spell to travel between worlds. Other notes: It is unconfirmed but it seems that whenever Vidalia uses her spells, it seems to highly upset the balance of her internal energies, causing her to take damage even when healing herself. This may indicate a possible weakness that could be exploited in order to capture her.

2007-06-21, 13:44	Link #2493
Meophist Member Join Date: Oct 2006	[] is for magic-speak. Spoiler for Ennis: Maple: Hey Ennis! Ennis: … Maple: Err… people are worried about you. Are you doing ok? Ennis: … Maple: I… heard you tried taking the enforcer exam. Don't worry too much about failing, not many people pass on their first try. It took me a couple of tries myself. Ennis: … Maple: If you like, I could give you some tips or advice for the enforcer exam… Ennis: … Maple: Hey, where are you going? Look, say something! If you're always going to be like that, nobody will ever understand what you want. Ennis: [Sorry.] Maple: At least that's something… I'm just trying to help. Ennis: … Maple: I'm sorry about what happened back then, it… Ennis: [Kase.] Maple: What? Ennis: [You asked where I was going.] Maple: Hey, what's Kase? Hey! Spoiler for Kase: Maple: Let's see, Kase… Looks like it's a person. Profile — Kase Malidora Name: Kase Malidora (カセ・マリドラ) D.O.B.: 20/08/0060 Hair Colour: Blond Eye Colour: Brown History: Kase lived alone with her mother in Altseima during her life. She has been diagnosed early with the magic disease Malfora, which typically ends the life of those afflicted early. Regardless, she lived a happy life and attended school normally. Although her father has died before she was born, he has left her with a special Unison Device, which she keeps with her at all times, even though she never uses it. The Unison Device is unique in the non-inclusion of an AI or personality module. Although she does have a device and magic ability, her magical ability is untrained. One day, Kase simply went missing. After a large search, she was found one week later, however, she seemed to have lost all of her previous memory. Miraculously, she no longer was afflicted with the disease when she was found. The causes for both are still under investigation. After she was found, Kase acted very strangly even considering her loss of memory but nobody could figure out the cause. Kase soon disappeared again. She was found again by the 34th Lost Logia Forces but attacked so the 34th captured her. Maple: The 34th Lost Logia Forces? I wonder if Ennis was still a part of it when she got captured. It seems like a recent even though, since it doesn't say anything about after the event. It's a strange case, but why is Ennis interested? Spoiler for Kase part 2: ???: So, you think you can get some answers from her? Ennis: nods ???: Alright, well it's worth a try. I'm opening the door now. Ennis: … Kase: Who are you? What do you want? Ennis: … Kase: I've been telling you guys, I'm sorry, I didn't mean to attack you guys like that. Just let me out of here. Ennis: … Kase: Hey, what spell are you casting now? Listen to me! Ennis: … Kase: I'm sorry I ran away, I didn't know what to do. No, I don't know how I ended up on that planet. Let me go! Ennis: … Kase: Are you listening to a word I… Ennis: [Why did you kill her?] Kase: Why did I what? I didn't kill anybody. It wasn't my fault she got hit. Hey, where are you going? Come back! Ennis: … ???: Is that it? Alright, I'm closing the door now. Did you learn anything? Ennis: [I don't like her.] ???: Huh? Hey, where are you going now? …He's already gone. Spoiler for Ennis again: Maple: It looks like I have mail. From Ennis? To: Maple Stense From: Ennis Jesca Hello. Thank you for taking the time to talk to me. I'm sorry to have been worrying you and Quos. After that incident in the 34th, I realised how much my weakness was affecting those around me. My own influence on the situation was negative and there was little I could do to change that. I wish to be able to change this so I'm going to work hard to change myself. I appreciate your offers of help but I'm sure you're very busy. Please inform Quos that I do not hate him, and… good luck in finding your sister. Thank you again, Ennis Maple: …That kid. I didn't quite expect this. Spoiler for Kase part 3: From: Ennis Jesca Subject: Kase Malidora My scans of Kase have confirmed my suspicions: the one who was called "Kase Malidora" has died a while ago. The person we have in captivity is another consciousness in Kase's body. During Kase's first disappearence, it seems that she may have died while fused with her Unison Device. As Malfora does not destroy or kill the body, this makes it possible that her UDs consciousness, despite the lack of AI or personality module, took over her body, which puts her in a constant fusion mode. Since the Malfora killed her, it disappeared, and without an AI, the UD would be without memory. Since taking over the body, the UD seems to have gotten confused by the signals the body has been sending it. This confusion seems to have been built up over time. This is the reason why she is so unstable at the moment. Therapy is recommended. I feel like my writing is horrible…

2007-06-21, 14:04	Link #2494
Kha ~ I Do ~ Author Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: In the XV-8A Spartan "00" Age: 38	I've spent the last two hours on an inspired writing spree when I should be sleeping... Pardon me if it's a little weird, I'm just so tired now... Here it is, the definitive history of Kluize, told using an event during AlternateS. I think I might have referenced a few places out of my foggy head, but it doesn't look like it's going to cause a continuum void or a dimensional dislocation, so I think it's safe to be read. Spoiler for Paradox: *~Kluize~* “Wind: 14 degrees, 17 knots, bearings 050.” A battle had begun at earnest in the streets of Deutchtown, a small skirmish in a war that would decide the fate of all Velka. “Time: 1931 hrs. Date: 4th July MC 0068.” Kluize let his watch down and glanced at a office block going down in the glorious Technicolor of spellfire. “Right on time.” He had gotten his bearings right. Now all that was left was to await the arrival of the guest of honor. “You’re not going to just stand on the edge, are you?” Si Fong queried suddenly as he put down his bottled brew. “You might get hit.” Kluize mutely looked back for a moment, then turned to face the pavement twenty stories below. His panda friend shrugged and took another swig. “You just don’t know when to take a break, Cap’n.” He smirked. Break? He was taking a break. In fact, he wasn’t even supposed to be here; or rather, the Naaru insisted that he’d be somewhere more useful to them, but he wasn’t going to miss this chance for the world, or the multiverse for that matter. Therefore, he was technically skiving off. His hand floated to his belt and unclipped the energy blade. The beamsabre wasn’t Kluize’s favorite weapon, but it was what his father was the most proficient with, so he had learned it. His personal favorite was the spear – it’s reach gave him a lot of options for combat, and it was in a way a memory of his mother, who taught him all that he knew of the weapon. And so his weapon, which the locals called a “device”, was both, expanding and shrinking at his command. How many times had it been beaten down and rebuilt? He did not know, for many a time he had been unconscious while the changes took place. A valiant Ancient Velka knight jumped out from his alleyway hiding place and cleaved through a pair of dark clergymen only to be slammed in the face with several hundred strings of magical projectiles. His body kicked and convulsed, and began to free-fall. His comrades remained safely hidden in their hole, alive and well, waiting for the breakthrough. “Tsk, cowards,” he hissed. But he couldn’t blame them; because they were weak, they would never have made a difference other than being gloriously dead… A bloodied brown topped girl painfully grinning at him as she lay fading in his arms, telling him that she was alright suddenly overwrote his vision, forcing him to blink it away before his emotions gripped him again. The image that lingered in his mind, the last breath of his beautiful Sophia. One of the many girls he had been unable to save. It had been hard on him – he had finally made a new friend, and then in the chaos forgot to watch his back and because she shielded him, lost her almost immediately. It was a kind of survivor’s guilt, but the cut went deeper than that. He had something to say to her, but he never had the chance… That was not, however, the end of the sordid string of deaths that he had been unable to prevent. He once worked for a church, serving a cardinal who was as much a visionary as she was a preacher. He swore to protect her like he did for countless times before, so that she could lead the flock to redemption and eternal peace. All that was short lived; Kluize remembered an assassin who managed to sneak pass him and cut her down. The hitman was no match for the alerted and enraged Kluize, and the Cleric would never forget his face or his name: Artei. And then, there was Allison. Her birth was cursed, and her position coveted. So many dark forces were working against someone with the purest of hearts. Kluize never understood how back then, and like a drone did his best to get the girl to safety. He made only one slip: he spared the life of one of the ninjas because the loser begged for it. And the murderer went back on it. “To save a life was to not save another,” that was what his father had taught him. And he disregarded it, believing that as long as he was true to the Light, he’d have the power to protect everyone. But as time past, not matter how much he tried, nothing would change… At first, he thought he had Fate to see him through this meaningless mess, but little did he know, her eyes were somewhere else. Nevertheless, he remained closed by and shielded her, believing that just loving her was enough. All went well; Riot 6 was formed, the rookies were trained, and the unit was scoring success after success. But just as suddenly, Riot 6 was no more, condemned and executed for high treason. Kluize knew it was politics at play, but with all legal channels blocked by a corrupt admiral, there was no way he could turn it around. He gave up; he wanted out. There was nothing worth saving in the mortal worlds; there was nothing he could do. On that thought, he broke his device in two. That was the last thing he remembered of those times. ------ Even more happened afterwards, but they are on little concern to him now. Kluize watched the street below as three spheres exploded with blue force, scattering the hastily erected barricades that stopped the TSAB Predator tanks from rolling through. He nodded to himself as he began preparing his mana. Down below, before the smoke cleared, he saw a young mage dart out, his cross spear in a blur as he worked his way through the horde of dei clones trying in vain to stop his slicing advance. This was the chance Kluize had been waiting for. The chance to prevent all that he had experienced from to this poor fool. The chance to kill himself, when he was still known as Kha der Kleriker. But he quickly stopped, and blinked. Someone else tore out of the fog on mechanical Pegasus-back, shooting blades and devices, screaming like an Amazon. Kluize almost dropped Thousand Cross from shock as a result. For that was none other than Sophia Alexei, the girl he once loved, the girl who died for him, and the girl he later took into his care when he found her wandering in the streets until he brought her to the convent. And who was that man with the familiar sword? His eyes widened further at the recognition, and his arm fell to his side. How could this be…? Now someone else joined the party. Kluize could see Kha arguing with the blonde newcomer whose hair was tied into two pigtails by black ribbons. They looked like they were about to come to blows over something, but Kluize knew otherwise. He saw a twinkle in both their eyes… Kluize heard Si Fong snicker, breaking his concentration. “I told you didn’t I? Nothing is fixed in the Eternal Dream…” Thomas clipped his blade onto his belt again as Fate smiled, then took Kha’s hand and dragged him along to the new forward lines where Sophia, Artei, Carim and Acous have set up. If this was his fate, if this was his outcome, then maybe this Kha would not go through the same misery as he had. Maybe, even killing him would have no effect on Kluize himself. Kluize turned sharply and strided to his comrade. “It’s over. Time to go.” The panda grinned and sealed his gourd. “Aye, Cap’n.” As they teleported away, Kluize played the spectacle in his mind once more. He wasn’t going to take any chances with that boy. He was going to keep watching him. There was no one, other than himself, to have escaped destiny… “Kha der Kleriker… Show me… if this really is your destiny!” __________________

2007-06-21, 16:26	Link #2497
Mow Yun Senior Member Join Date: Apr 2007 Age: 34	Spoiler for short length!: Metal bars...darkened, brick walls, a rocky floor... and a mysterious figure in the hallway. I ran torwards him, as though I knew perfectly well who this stranger was. As I came within several arms' reach of the man, he turned torwards me and my body froze. I couldn't move as he reached towards me and grabbed me with his right arm, lifting me up. His other hand came into view holding a needle filled with mysterious fluid. He drew back his hand, then stabbed me in the arm... I awoke with a start. I expected to see the dark, dirty ceiling of that dungeon again, but only the clean metal and bright white lights of the Time Space Administration Bureau's medical ward greeted me. I remembered being dispatched to a rocky wasteland world to protect some Enforcers, but...the last thing I remembered was transferring myself back to Mid-Childa. Yet... I don't know of any magic, mistake or not, that could change someone's...clothing to... this...frilly outfit...? I looked over myself, and apparently somebody had taken the liberty of replacing my outfit with something that was absolutely ridiculous. A very happy and somewhat familiar female voice to my left side alerted me to the sole other presence in the medical ward. "So you're awake, huh? You've been out for most of today, Krystal. When the staff brought you in, you didn't look so good. You probably exerted yourself too much again, didn't you." Knight Shamal, one of the Wolkenritter. Programs, like myself, and they too have a rather dark past behind them. The similarities pretty much end there, though. The Wolkenritter were much stronger than someone like me, and were pretty much the personal guard of the current Mistress of the Night Sky, Hayate Yagami. I had heard about them on many occasions, even once tried to protect a small town from their assault, as Dracatouguze reminded me several years back, during my first recent encounter with them. I had forgotten all of that, and my device had to refresh me on this information. They were a fearsome force, both in looks and in combat. Apparently they were far more than simple programs that zealously guarded their master, the master of the Book of Darkness What intrigued me was, why would a Velka Knight force such...frilly clothing on their patients? I didn't quite know what to say. "Erm...I guess so...umm, Knight Shamal...what's up with this...outfit...?" She looked pleasantly surprised, perhaps at the mention of her title, or with my mention of her choice of medical clothing. Maybe both, I couldn't tell. "Oh... Hayate told me that she needed someone to try those on!" I couldn't make heads or tails of this new information, but before I could ask why she had already whisked me out of the room. I attracted an array of suprised and mildly amused glances and the occasional burst of laughter as Shamal dragged me across the entire building to Hayate Yagami's quarters. As we dashed through empty hallways and crowded rooms, I thought I heard the Velka Knight mutter something to herself about "maids and Vita resisting their advances." An agonizing chunk of time later, the two of us had reached a bland looking door at the end of a hallway. As Shamal pressed the buzzer with her giddy expression on her face, I somehow knew I would be dreading the next several hours. Inwardly, I promised myself that I would never overexert myself to that extent again, as well to judge people not by their past or their associations, but by their current actions. The door opened, and my heart sank. I think I butchered Shamal's personality, but it took me about 3-4 hours to write that short post up. : / I now need to think of something devious for Hayate :P Last edited by Mow Yun; 2007-06-21 at 16:36. Reason: lengthened, or tried to lengthen the post a bit :X

2007-06-21, 17:02	Link #2499
Mow Yun Senior Member Join Date: Apr 2007 Age: 34	Well, I was thinking that she thinks that "if Shamal was like this, what would her master be like?" n____n Last edited by Mow Yun; 2007-06-21 at 17:03. Reason: typo D:

2007-06-21, 17:09	Link #2500
Reiji Tabibito The OTHER Time Lord Join Date: Jun 2007 Location: The "Other" TARDIS	Okay, now that the 82nd's been introduced, the next step is to write the reunion bit for when they land on Mid-Childia. Which brings me to the point of this post. @ Kha, Aaron008R, Keroko, Fuyu no Sora, Saint X, USB500, and Ratler: Someone in the 82nd knows characters you've created - would they be available for a surprise party for the 82nd (minus Sevasti - he'd be reporting to superiors in Secretariat) on the Mid-Childian equivalent of 7:00 Friday night @ Satashi's infamous bar run by Haseo? Let me clarify Kha's characters: Kha & the 21st, and Gard and the Zakums Aaron008R: Aurion & the Phantoms Fuyu no Sora: Cass Ivanov & the Blue Flames Saint X: Kyla Scrya & anyone who's serving on the Silvana @ the time of CrosyS Keroko: Keroko & the Rogues Ratler: Alexander Ivanov USB 500: Annabelle & Leonidas, Alexandra, Hikki, and Shinnosuke If not, then I understand. But the more, the merrier. Thanks.