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is not amused
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Join Date: Jul 2007
Location: Naval Base
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The idea is quite random actually. Yeah, Bad Apple rocks! Too bad CNN didn't do justice showing it. I sense a bad end.
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Black Dragon
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Join Date: Dec 2007
Location: In the Netherrealm, thinking who to betray next...
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I sense happy end.
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2010-03-05, 17:30 | Link #26 |
books-eater youkai
Join Date: Dec 2007
Location: Betweem wisdom and insanity
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@ Endrance: Could it be better if the moving guy would pass in front of the other insted ?
1. Father/older brother came in. 2. Father/older brother take the baseball bat 3. Nameless/ random male lead try to run ( he can't because of his jeans around his ankles 4. Father/older brother catch Nameless/ random male lead. 5 Game over. ( but a fun end )
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2010-03-05, 17:51 | Link #27 | |
Anxious bookseller
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Join Date: Aug 2006
Location: Shibuya Psychic Research
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Oh I like but then again Im biased.
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2010-03-05, 18:25 | Link #29 | |
"Show it to me"
Join Date: Dec 2005
Location: In solitude, where we are least alone
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Like blood bath maybe
I'm for it Thanx, it took me a while to come up with an idea. Cliff hanger? To be continued on the next chapter Quote:
Somebody already pointed it out but yeah, it would be cool if she doesn't pass through to Stein though A little empty no? And I can see some white stuff from the pop out portion of the sig at the top
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2010-03-05, 19:04 | Link #30 |
books-eater youkai
Join Date: Dec 2007
Location: Betweem wisdom and insanity
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Third version: I reworked the text C&C would be welcome
I might add some brush or effect i the futur... @JRendell. Beside the white stuff pointed out by Cyz there's a line at the right of the render than go over the arrows. Sorry for the mistake but for my defence I have to say than I have no knowledge about her ( beside her name and even so... ) and the few frame of Endrance's sig don't show much.
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2010-03-05, 22:00 | Link #31 | |
Black Dragon
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Join Date: Dec 2007
Location: In the Netherrealm, thinking who to betray next...
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The animation of the guy running should be around the guy standing, but at one point, he goes over the standing guy.
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If you ask me I would say that the text is to big, I would make it smalla nd leav it at a corner, but this is just me of course. XP
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2010-03-06, 08:52 | Link #35 |
Chrome.o23
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@ Malin - a little bit chaotic in the sides for me ..
@ Moonie - nice .. Just a little blurry (or is it just me?) @ Endrance - animation's a bit fast it gets me dizzy :@_@: @ JR - liked it .. don't see anything to change .. except for the white parts at the second and third arrow ..
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