SOTM 2008 - October (Music Related Objects!) - Entry Phase

[ganbaru]

Originally Posted by Ice Climbers

My failers attempts continues:

NO TEXT WOOT


and





C&C plz =]

I think the text is too hard to read, but give a second focus to the sig;
Maybe remplacing the text by something else?

[xxmimixx]

Wow, everyones entries are really sweet! Unfortunately, I might not participate in this one because of school, and the lack of stuff in my graphics ><. But I will still support my favorites as usual =). I have a cool idea, but I don't really know if it fits the theme because it pertains to the Kirarin Revolution PV Tan Tan Taan! >_>.

[Arceon]

Originally Posted by Ice Climbers

My failers attempts continues:

*SNIP*

C&C plz =]

Personally with that one, I would have the text go vertical in that black space behind Miku.

Originally Posted by konstargirl

Red is my favorite colr. <3 How pretty. but the girl looks faded away in the picture though.

I blame the JPEG Compression >>

The original PSD had her a lot more defined than it is now, and I suck at optimizing (That, and JPEGs are generally unfriendly to my abstract signatures anyway. . .)

[Frailty]

which ver. is better?

v.1


v.2


v.3


or should I make another draft???
C&C would be very much appreciated
oh and comments about the text will be much more be appreciated XD

[crazyhorse]

I like the first one. If it seems too plain, take number 2 and lower the opacity even more.

[Miko Miko]

Final Entry

[ren_db]

Originally Posted by Frailty

which ver. is better?

v.1


v.2


v.3


or should I make another draft???
C&C would be very much appreciated
oh and comments about the text will be much more be appreciated XD

i like the burning effect on v1 but i also prefer the brightness of the render + the right border of v3 as well. if possible, erase some of the brushed parts esp. the ones overlapping the keys of the piano. try randomizing the light/dark spots to give it more depth. some more contrast + sharpness will bring out the black a bit more. also, try experimenting with the text; 'Frailty' is ok, but im not feeling the 'Soul Eater'. id like to see the text blend in, like its originally a part of the picture, but still easy to read. burning effect on the left is appealing, luv it.

[zSolaris]

Originally Posted by Miko Miko

Final Entry

Might want to do something 'bout the right side of the render. Looks likes its chopped off.

[Ice Climbers]

Originally Posted by zSolaris

Might want to do something 'bout the right side of the render. Looks likes its chopped off.

Really? Looks fine to me tho

[LustfulEnvy]

updaTe
Old

New


3 slices. I officially hate the slice tool T_T
I added animation bars and edited coloring a bit. Should I stick to the previous? C&C always welcome.

[ren_db]

its funny how so many people have already used the word 'melody'. its as if a new anime girl's been born, and its been named melody.

edit: where do u guys get those awesome stocks and renders?

[White Manju Bun]

Ok completely scrapped my first idea, here is my new one


C&C?

[escimo]

Oh well...

Final Entry!

[Evil Rick]

Originally Posted by Frailty

which ver. is better?

v.1


v.2


v.3


or should I make another draft???
C&C would be very much appreciated
oh and comments about the text will be much more be appreciated XD

V.1

Originally Posted by Miko Miko

Final Entry

You should fix the little slice at the right

Originally Posted by LustfulEnvy

updaTe
Old

New


3 slices. I officially hate the slice tool T_T
I added animation bars and edited coloring a bit. Should I stick to the previous? C&C always welcome.

I honestly feel more atractive the one without the animation

Originally Posted by White Manju Bun

Ok completely scrapped my first idea, here is my new one


C&C?

That's a cute Miku, nice job

Originally Posted by escimo

Oh well...

Final Entry!

It's a good animation, but the render don't convice me at all

[Ice Climbers]

Originally Posted by White Manju Bun

Ok completely scrapped my first idea, here is my new one


C&C?

Indeed that is really cute ^^ miku ftw

[White Manju Bun]

Originally Posted by Evil Rick

That's a cute Miku, nice job

Originally Posted by Ice Climbers

Indeed that is really cute ^^ miku ftw

Thanks Should I add text? Im probably gonna I just havent thought of anything clever to write on it yet.

[LustfulEnvy]

Originally Posted by Evil Rick

V.1



You should fix the little slice at the right



I honestly feel more atractive the one without the animation



That's a cute Miku, nice job



It's a good animation, but the render don't convice me at all

I thought so the animation didnt really fiT. It didnt go the way I planned. No animation it its =P

[Kaix]

First draft. Wanted to try something different than usual (nothing to animate yet ).



It's still a little rough around the edges - I know (planning to take care of that). C&C please?

[ren_db]

started another draft. but i highly doubt this is gonna get any better. oh wells, imma start a new one just in case. at least i have a back-up sig now ne?

colored:

[Ice Climbers]

Originally Posted by White Manju Bun

Thanks Should I add text? Im probably gonna I just havent thought of anything clever to write on it yet.

I am currently struggling with that too Text is so hard @@