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Naruto Fan-Fiction Thread
Welcome to Naruto Fan-Fiction thread.
This thread is meant for Naruto fanfiction and its discussion. Fanfiction works can be either posted in this thread or in the Fan Creations Forum and linked to in this thread. You may also link to Fanfiction works posted on other sites and discuss it here. General rules of our forum still apply:
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2008-01-27, 12:36 | Link #2 |
Domo Ori Gato Mr. Roboto
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Here's my current story
Leaf's Squad 15 http://www.narutofic.org/viewstory.p...7377&chapter=2 Please let me know what you think.
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2008-01-27, 12:40 | Link #3 |
It's the year 3030...
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Chapter 5 (entitled Betrayal) of my fanfic will be released Tuesday afternoon. Has anyone besides me had difficulty coming up with a really good story for a betrayal? For some reason, I've had some trouble not making it cliche, which it is going to be anyway (fair warning). Just curious, write on!
For anyone who hasn't read them, you can catch the first four chapters here: http://narutofic.org/viewstory.php?sid=7342 Lemme know what you think...enjoy!
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2008-01-27, 16:33 | Link #5 |
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I just wanna say w00t! and thanks for the thread
Okay to boost the birth of this wonderful new thread, here are the re-uploaded (and some revised) chapters of Raiu 1-34 Note: You can select any chapter to read so if you've already read one and didn't feel like back-tracking through the "Create your own thread..." you can select said chapter here and click on "Next" at the foot of the page to continue to the following chapter. You can continue proceeding all the way to the last chapter simply by clicking "Next"
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2008-01-28, 22:05 | Link #6 |
Domo Ori Gato Mr. Roboto
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Well here it is, finally.
Leaf's Squad 15 "Chapter 3 The Wakai Kouyou" http://www.narutofic.org/viewstory.p...7377&chapter=3 Sorry it took so long to get written. As you will see from the length it took a long time to type. And with little to no time on the weekend to get it done and school during the week took even longer. Thought I was going to go nuts if it didn't end. I couldn't decide whether or not to make it one chapter or two because of its length, so I just put it in one chapter. Warning it may take a while to get through its longer than chapters one and two combined. Please let me know what you think. KurayamiLeader: Spoiler for Hakumei characters:
Now I'm not trying to say your stealing characters or anything like that. I was just amused by the similarities.
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2008-01-28, 23:03 | Link #7 | |
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2008-01-29, 02:25 | Link #8 |
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Hey.
Heres a re-post of my Fanfiction, "Naruto Enru. Prologue: Entering! Katoso Shunin! http://www.narutofic.org/viewstory.p...ze=0&chapter=1 Chapter 1: Surprise! A New Comrade! http://www.narutofic.org/viewstory.p...ze=0&chapter=2 Chapter 2:"Breaking an Entry!" http://www.narutofic.org/viewstory.p...ze=0&chapter=3 Also, heres some previous pic's I drew of squad 4; Spoiler for Squad 4:
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Okay I'm back, and with some better rebuttals.
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Don't get me wrong I value criticism and even more so, constructive criticism. However, when there's nothing being made but comparisions on the appearances of said individuals its not really criticism. You probably didn't mention any of their skills or kekkai-genkai's in your critique because alot of them haven't been revealed yet, and I simply don't wish to spoil the future I merely want to give a snippit of things to come and do be warned that these all may change within time (i.e. names - everything).
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2008-01-29, 11:41 | Link #10 |
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Well, it's here. Chapter 5 of my fanfic has come to fruition:
http://narutofic.org/viewstory.php?sid=7342&chapter=5 Feel free to read at your leisure, and don't be afraid to rate it there () or give some feedback here. I'd be interested to know what you all think up to this point. On another note, the next chapter of this story will probably be the last chapter, after which I will most likely take some time off before beginning a new story, which I believe will be the story of my lovable drunk, Tsuzashi Mitsuki.
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2008-01-29, 13:22 | Link #13 | |
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2008-01-29, 15:34 | Link #14 |
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Well, I finally got something for you guys to read. I hope it's alright. It's not much, but at least it's SOMETHING.
Team Iwagakure Chapter 1: New Beginnings
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2008-01-29, 19:53 | Link #15 |
Domo Ori Gato Mr. Roboto
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Jeesh dude, I can't believe you got all defensive on me. I wasn't trying to be a critic in the least. I just saw some similarities in facial features other aspects of the drawings, I wasn't even comparing the details about the character's history, skills, and all of that other stuff. I didn't meen for it to seem like I was saying that you were trying to cover up that the characters were similar. I'm sorry you took it that way, I was just pointing out some similarities. I also can't believe you spent all that time coming up with those rebukes. lol , they were very good though, even if I was saying that you were copying characters, you would have blown me out of the water, good job By the way, since we're talking about your creations at the moment. I've read up to chapter 4 of Raiu, It's awesome. I love the detail you put into the story, and the one fight I've read so far was great. Quzor: Just finished chapter 5. I think that may be your best chapter yet, with all of the detail put into the way you told the history and how everything went down. Anyways great chapter can't wait for the finale. Spectacular_Insanity: Awesome story so far, I felt like I was reading from a published book, because of how well it is written. Keep on writing.
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2008-01-29, 21:05 | Link #16 |
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Hey to my friends from the CYOJOC thread, Insanity, Zaku, Kurayami, Quzor and my future reviewers. I'm posting my fanfics here so you don't have to back to the other thread.
The Continued Legacy http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4017567/...ntinued_Legacy All I Want is Sakura, http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3876218/...want_is_Sakura The Leaf Village Life, http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3868104/...f_Village_Life Plz review, and put the reviews on the thread. (4 sum people who may not know) |
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2008-01-29, 22:29 | Link #19 |
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Well guys here's my new story. It's going to be a collection of silly stories that happen to the characters of Naruto.
Naruto Bloopers "Chapter 1 The Super Sexy Jutsu" http://www.narutofic.org/viewstory.p...7443&chapter=1 Let me know what you think of it.
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