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Ryuu · 2008-08-28, 05:49

nice drawing Dan i really like it!

Dan the Man · 2008-09-01, 23:49

Thanks. I like it too.

yaluckyboy · 2008-09-02, 19:20

Fuuton: Rasen HouTama - Wind Style: Spiraling CannonBall
A-Rank
Mid-Long Range

Naruto places his left hand over his right hand, with his palms facing towards the target. And with two Shadow Clones, he creates a Fuuton: Rasengan and then creates a push of Wind Chakra behind the Rasengan to create a powerful cannonball of Wind Chakra that explodes on impact, creating millions of minuscule needles of Chakra that destroys the targets cellular structure.

yaluckyboy · 2008-09-02, 19:43

Fuuton: Rasen FuuYaiba - Wind Style: Spiraling Wind Blade
A-Rank
Short Range

Naruto creates two Shadow Clones, the real Naruto takes out a kunai and supplies Chakra into the kunai while the two Clones form the Chakra into the form of a blade made of Wind Chakra. In the end, the kunai becomes a Wind Chakra Sword.

yaluckyboy · 2008-09-02, 20:39

Fuuton: Rasen KyojinTama - Wind Style: Spiraling Giant Ball
A-Rank
Short-Mid Range

Naruto creates two Shadow Clones, the three place themselves in a triangular position, each facing the centre. They then swing their arms in the form of giant circles, forming a giant Rasengan. When the Jutsu is finished, the two Clones disperse and the real Naruto is holding a giant Rasengan just like Goku's Spirit Bomb. Naruto then litterally throws himself at the enemy and causes a giant explosion.

Zaku Hyuga · 2008-09-03, 22:08

Come on people! It's September already and we don't know who the last month's winner is! http://forums.animesuki.com/showthread.php?t=70178 vote vote vote!

yaluckyboy · 2008-09-09, 19:15

Ryu Ken - Dragon Fist
Taijutsu
A Rank
Mid-Long Range

Rock Lee enters the Hidden Lotus and focuses Chakra into his palms. He then moves his hands in a open palm thrust which releases the Chakra from his hands into a high presure blast. This Jutsu is extremely tiring due to the effort it requires.

Kaze Akillion · 2008-09-13, 13:27

Name: Kaizoku (Meaning pirate) Bikou (Meaning shadow, from the main branch of his clan.)
Gender: Male
Age: 14
Elemental affinity: Earth / Fire (Metal) & Wind
Height: 5"3
Weight: Unknown
IQ: 213
Home Village: Village hidden in the Night
Rank: Jounin

Appearance:
Short-Medium length hair spiked up at an angle much like Kakashi's and a thin-muscular figure. He wear's a face mask covering his mouth and nose and black tinted goggles coveing his eyes. He wear's a baggy black and dark blue hooded shirt, baggy black and dark blue 3/4 length shorts and black high top trainers.

History:
Kaizoku became leader of his village when he was just 11 due to the sudden death of his father. He was hated by his village because he was the 7 tailed Jinchuriki and so abandoned his village and is now a bounty hunter searching for The village hidden in the leaves so he may become a true shinobi. Although being having fire chakra in his body he cannot use any fire Jutsu.

Personality:
He is a 'Man of few words', Kaizoku does not like to show his emotions and doesn't really care for anything or anyone. He is extremely lazy and only does things he has to. Even though almost every single girl who see's him falls in love with him he has never cared for a single one. Kaizoku is VERY smart and has a speciality of solving problems and anylizing things/people.

Jutsu:

Name: 'Shadow smoke'
Element: Unknown
Type: Kekkai Genkai
Rank: S
Effect: surrounds the user in a black chakra serging around the body that gives the user extreme speed and agility and also allows the use of a Justsu that makes the user teleport through a vortex of distances up to 25m.

Name: 'Metal forging'
Element: Earth
Type: Nin-Jutsu
Rank: S
Effect: Allows the creation/manipulation of metal. The user must have earth Jutsu of up to rank S to be able to perform this technique. In the use of manipulation the user manipulates the earth particles in the metal. In the use of Creation the user binds eath particles together with his own chakra to create metal.

Name: 'Extreme sharpness'
Element: Air / Earth
Type: Tai-Jutsu
Rank: A
Effect: This Jutsu can only be done with a 'Long Sword'. The user charges at the target dragging the swords across the ground held in 2-hands, the user then swings the sword up in to the air while jumping thus creating a sharp gust of wind travelling the speed of the user + the speed he/she swung the sword at up to a distance of 5m. Then while in mid air the user must lean back and once at 1m - 0.5m from the ground swing the sword down at the ground making an earthquake in the direction of the target up to a distance of 20m

Name: 'Constant Night'
Type: Gen-Jutsu
Rank: B
Effect: Once cast all the area within a 50m radius will be surrounded in darkness shortening the distance of all in the area to 2m or lower. The darkness is so thick that even a flare wont be seen 5m away. Although only being a Rank B Jutsu is takes a Dispeling Justu of Rank A to be dispelled.

Special equipment:

Name: Escaping Long sword
Type: Weapon (Long sword)
Dimentions: Handle: 9'
' Blade: 5"1 long, 11' wide
Appearance: Same appearance as Zabuza's head cleaving sword
Special perc's: Only 3 of this blade have ever been made 1 was given to Zabuza 1 has dissapeared and 1 was given to Kaizoku. The blade is one of the sharpest ever crafted and using Metal forging Kaizuko infused it with chakra increasing the sharpness 10 fold the sword is so sharp if the blade was laid down against a rock it would cut straight through it. When using air manipulation aswell the sword becomes so deadly it can kill without even making the slightest contact to the target.

This took me awhile, lolz i hope you find it "Original enough for you"

The_Dark_One · 2008-09-13, 22:04

]Name: Trias "Fangthorn" Gaiki
Gender: Male
Age: 15
Elemental affinity: Earth / Water
Height: 5"4
Weight: Always changing
Home / Origin: Village hidden in the Rocks, currently a traveler and mercenary
Favorite Food: "Trias Special" (Cooked Seagull)
'Theme Song':http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YsfrZ...eature=related

Personality:
Trias uses a multitude of 'faces', to allow him to get close to people. He can be charming, witty, shy, curious, sweet, kind, and defensive- so long as he wants you to see him that way. With this as an overview, one can assume Trias is a very sly and deceiving person- although noone can be really sure the person their facing is the real deal. However, Trias motives are not really evil, nor commemerable. He fights because thats "all there is to do", and just lives life to its fullest- even if he breaks a few laws in the process.

Appearance:
Long brown hair that just passes shoulder-length, with a thin figured body. His eyes are emerald green, and he always seems to smile with an added sense of mocking. He's usually wearing very simple clothing- a white shirt with wide, large open sleeves, and black rope tied around his waist, and a matching pair of simplistic, wide-tunnelled white trousers.

Weapons:
"Ricochet" - A two-hand longsword, made of hardened black steel. The blade is wide and strong, and can cut through even the toughest bone. The metal is tampered to accomidate and resist Trias' poisons, and Trias has booby-trapped it so anyone who tries to weild it but him is injected with a toxin that tempoarly makes them lose control of their arms & hands.
"Garrote" - A sharpened dagger made with a wooden handle wrapped in leather, and the blade made of a spider fang. Although kept mainly for sentimental reasons, this is indeed a dangerous weapon that Trias has if used right.

"Unusual" traits, and brief History:
Trias is a unique shinobi, unable to use his own elements. He tried for years to use his Earth jutsu- but always failed. He tried specialising in Taijutsu, but because of his natural body type, he was doomed from the start. However, when Trias abandoned his earth element, and tried Water instead- he found he couldnt use this element either.
Infuriated by his own fealty, Trias exploded in rage, taking it out on Target dummies and even other students in "Practice bouts". However, when taking a time out because of breaking his opponents limbs for a third time, he watched the fights of the more superior Jounin. He saw that when earth and water collided- or any two elements for that matter, they bought about a new half-element- this idea inspired Trias, and he immediately ran out to test his theory.

Combining an "Earth Shock" and "Water Surge" jutsu, Trias managed to create a green goo. Trias didnt realise what this blob was, until he touched it. His hand burnt as if it had been touched by the hottest flame, and the goo began searing away all the nearby ground, before the earth around it absorbed the puddle.
Trias took years mastering his own arsenal of combined Elemental techniques, calling his jutsu "Poison Style". However, he got too big for his boots, and after burning away another students face in the chunin exams, he decided that the life on a restricted shinobi was not for him.
To the present, he roams about as a mercenary- living of the thrill of a mission, and of course its financial rewards.

Jutsu:

Name: "Snake Spit"
Element: "Poison" (Earth & Water)
Effect: Trias accumulates an amount of acid inside his own mouth, and shoots a carefully aimed shot at opponents. This is usually aimed for the face to disorient the enemy, and because of the varying strength of the acid (The more chakra used to concentrate it, the stronger it becomes) it has the potential to burn off facial features, or even the entire face itself.
Because of the rapid deploy of the technique, it is best used for surprise attacks- and is mostly used when Trias gets really annoyed at somebody in an arguement.

Name: "Scorpio' Slash"
Element: "Poison" (Earth & Water)
Effect: Trias concentrates his chakra to his blade, giving it a faint green glow. If struck by the blade, the chakra that enters the opponents wound acts as a fast-effecting toxin. This special toxin lowers the amount of oxygen flowing to the opponents muscles, slowing their speed- the more toxin the slower they get, and the more slow they get, the more toxin Trias can put into their body by hitting them.
Prolonged effects of the toxin include breathing problems, problems with hand-eye coordination, and a feeling of being 'strangled'.

Name: "Grim, Green, Gash"
Element: "Poison" (Earth & Water)
Effect: A cocentrated lunge with Trias' blade, with an extra Toxin included. If hit, the opponent will have two toxins forced into their bloodstream (As well as the "Scorpio'" Toxin), this new toxin is designed to kill or confuse nerves in the opponents brain. This can lead to the opponent seeing double, attacking allies, memory loss, tempoary or permenant disablement, blindness, and loss of hearing.
Drawbacks: This technique takes a while to charge, Trias needing to focus his chakra to create an extra toxin- not to mention the specific aiming for optimum effect.

Name: "Cobraan Corruption"
Element: "Poison" (Earth & Water)
Effect: Trias forces a specialised Acid from the pores in his palm. This acid will burn any plant material it touches, and melt away at stone, gravel, and soil.
Drawbacks: The acid requires some of the red blood cells in Trias to work, thus it is not wise to use this technique twice.

Name: "Swamp Sludge Technqiue"
Element: "Poison" (Earth & Water)
Effect: Trias breaks up his cells, and reverts into a living blob of acid. He can fully control himself, and without the drawbacks of bones can seep under doors and others cracks easily. However, in this form he cannot take his blade with him, and anything his touches he burns with his acidity.

Name: Swamp Sludge Technique: "Inner Venom"
Element: "Poison" (Earth & Water)
Effect: Trias forces himself inside the enemy by any means- usually by forcing himself down their gullet. After around 30 seconds, the opponent is 'burning inside' due to Trias' acidic touch. However, after they pass out from the pain, Trias can 'possess' their body, using their image and voice as if they were a puppet. After doing what need to be done- such as making his opponent forfeit the match, get the vital documents, or kill themselves, Trias can ooze out the opponent, and change back from his sludge form to his regular shape. However, the opponent suffers major internal injuries, and prolonged possesion usually ends up with death.

Name: "Trias' Terror Venom!"
Element: "Poison" (Earth & Water)
Effect: As the name suggests, this is Trias' favorite technique, and usually his signature move. Trias starts off by focusing a large amount of chakra and posion on one of his canines. then afterward, he grabs the sharp tooth, and rips it out. Throwing the tooth like a shuriken of knife, and with astounding accuracy, Trias subjects his victim to his favorite poison.
The toxin triggers the Panic receptors in the brain, casuing the opponent to go into a never-ending state of upmost fear. this toxin is more effective than near all genjutsu, as it initiates 100% of the nerve, and cannot be improved any further. Trias watches cruelly as his opponent goes into a state of terror, running about in desperation, trying to escape everything & anything. Most opponents will go into a state of tempoary madness, and lose all their dignity by blubbering, begging for mercy to "that frightening twig" and quite literally wetting themselves.
Eventually, Trias' show is cut short by the cruel fact that overdosing in fear makes the heart beat faster and faster until an enevitable heart attack kills the opponent, who is powerless to do anything about it.

Name: "Summoning Technique : Trantula"
Element: Summon
Effect: Trias sacrifices a drop of his blood and puts it onto the runic markings on his blade. This summons three differant spiders, depending on how much chakra Trias wants to use;

Stage one - "Baki Spiders"
These creepy crawlies are small, but deadly quick. Good for spying, and keeping an eye on things. They also spin webs extremely quick, and puting them on peoples backs is always a good fun prank. As well as that, they keep Trias good conversational company on the long roads, but tend to make very bad jokes & puns..
Step two - "Makita Spiders"
Bigger foes, Trias summoning up to 4. Each one is about half the size of the average man, and can jump from tree to tree or pole to pole with deceptively good speed. They can be very vicious, and can defeat even good chunin individually. Before attacking however, they tend to spin a web in the surrounding area- as an instinctive strategy to ensnare their opponents. The strength of the web is like nin-wire, with the the silk lines being nearly invisible to the naked eye, and exceptionally resistance and tough wearing- as if made of hardened steel. However, the web is also naturally sticky, and can keep a shinobi in place, no matter how much they struggle. the drawbacks of these spiders is that they're maneaters, and even though they don't dare touch their master Trias, they usually devour the enemy so fast Trias doesnt get any fun out of the battle, which is natturally dissapointing.
Step three - "Motherspider Maexxena"
This is the siege weapon of Trias' artillery. Maexxena is a gigantic Spider, big enough to rival gamabunta or any Bijuu in size alone. Trias uses her to smash buildings, or to clear rocky paths. She can spit a corrosive acid that burns almost any alloy or mineral to dust. As well as this, she can launch bullets of hardened silk at areas, those balls of "cloth" acting identically to cannon balls. Although having a fierce appearance, Maexxena is very protective and caring- and because Trias gets so tired during battles, and using up alot of his chakra summoning her to his aid, she allows his to sleep on her back- her body heat comforting him and the fur on her back acting as a sort of 'motherly blanket'.

mace58 · 2008-09-14, 14:15

hey if u guys think your up to it enter zakus contest submissions are taken until the 20th of september!!!! so get in it now!!!!

sunchips18 · 2008-09-18, 06:19

Quote:

Originally Posted by The_Dark_One

]Name: Trias "Fangthorn" Gaiki
Gender: Male
Age: 15
Elemental affinity: Earth / Water
Height: 5"4
Weight: Always changing
Home / Origin: Village hidden in the Rocks, currently a traveler and mercenary
Favorite Food: "Trias Special" (Cooked Seagull)
'Theme Song':http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YsfrZ...eature=related

Personality:
Trias uses a multitude of 'faces', to allow him to get close to people. He can be charming, witty, shy, curious, sweet, kind, and defensive- so long as he wants you to see him that way. With this as an overview, one can assume Trias is a very sly and deceiving person- although noone can be really sure the person their facing is the real deal. However, Trias motives are not really evil, nor commemerable. He fights because thats "all there is to do", and just lives life to its fullest- even if he breaks a few laws in the process.

Appearance:
Long brown hair that just passes shoulder-length, with a thin figured body. His eyes are emerald green, and he always seems to smile with an added sense of mocking. He's usually wearing very simple clothing- a white shirt with wide, large open sleeves, and black rope tied around his waist, and a matching pair of simplistic, wide-tunnelled white trousers.

Weapons:
"Ricochet" - A two-hand longsword, made of hardened black steel. The blade is wide and strong, and can cut through even the toughest bone. The metal is tampered to accomidate and resist Trias' poisons, and Trias has booby-trapped it so anyone who tries to weild it but him is injected with a toxin that tempoarly makes them lose control of their arms & hands.
"Garrote" - A sharpened dagger made with a wooden handle wrapped in leather, and the blade made of a spider fang. Although kept mainly for sentimental reasons, this is indeed a dangerous weapon that Trias has if used right.

"Unusual" traits, and brief History:
Trias is a unique shinobi, unable to use his own elements. He tried for years to use his Earth jutsu- but always failed. He tried specialising in Taijutsu, but because of his natural body type, he was doomed from the start. However, when Trias abandoned his earth element, and tried Water instead- he found he couldnt use this element either.
Infuriated by his own fealty, Trias exploded in rage, taking it out on Target dummies and even other students in "Practice bouts". However, when taking a time out because of breaking his opponents limbs for a third time, he watched the fights of the more superior Jounin. He saw that when earth and water collided- or any two elements for that matter, they bought about a new half-element- this idea inspired Trias, and he immediately ran out to test his theory.

Combining an "Earth Shock" and "Water Surge" jutsu, Trias managed to create a green goo. Trias didnt realise what this blob was, until he touched it. His hand burnt as if it had been touched by the hottest flame, and the goo began searing away all the nearby ground, before the earth around it absorbed the puddle.
Trias took years mastering his own arsenal of combined Elemental techniques, calling his jutsu "Poison Style". However, he got too big for his boots, and after burning away another students face in the chunin exams, he decided that the life on a restricted shinobi was not for him.
To the present, he roams about as a mercenary- living of the thrill of a mission, and of course its financial rewards.

Jutsu:

Name: "Snake Spit"
Element: "Poison" (Earth & Water)
Effect: Trias accumulates an amount of acid inside his own mouth, and shoots a carefully aimed shot at opponents. This is usually aimed for the face to disorient the enemy, and because of the varying strength of the acid (The more chakra used to concentrate it, the stronger it becomes) it has the potential to burn off facial features, or even the entire face itself.
Because of the rapid deploy of the technique, it is best used for surprise attacks- and is mostly used when Trias gets really annoyed at somebody in an arguement.

Name: "Scorpio' Slash"
Element: "Poison" (Earth & Water)
Effect: Trias concentrates his chakra to his blade, giving it a faint green glow. If struck by the blade, the chakra that enters the opponents wound acts as a fast-effecting toxin. This special toxin lowers the amount of oxygen flowing to the opponents muscles, slowing their speed- the more toxin the slower they get, and the more slow they get, the more toxin Trias can put into their body by hitting them.
Prolonged effects of the toxin include breathing problems, problems with hand-eye coordination, and a feeling of being 'strangled'.

Name: "Grim, Green, Gash"
Element: "Poison" (Earth & Water)
Effect: A cocentrated lunge with Trias' blade, with an extra Toxin included. If hit, the opponent will have two toxins forced into their bloodstream (As well as the "Scorpio'" Toxin), this new toxin is designed to kill or confuse nerves in the opponents brain. This can lead to the opponent seeing double, attacking allies, memory loss, tempoary or permenant disablement, blindness, and loss of hearing.
Drawbacks: This technique takes a while to charge, Trias needing to focus his chakra to create an extra toxin- not to mention the specific aiming for optimum effect.

Name: "Cobraan Corruption"
Element: "Poison" (Earth & Water)
Effect: Trias forces a specialised Acid from the pores in his palm. This acid will burn any plant material it touches, and melt away at stone, gravel, and soil.
Drawbacks: The acid requires some of the red blood cells in Trias to work, thus it is not wise to use this technique twice.

Name: "Swamp Sludge Technqiue"
Element: "Poison" (Earth & Water)
Effect: Trias breaks up his cells, and reverts into a living blob of acid. He can fully control himself, and without the drawbacks of bones can seep under doors and others cracks easily. However, in this form he cannot take his blade with him, and anything his touches he burns with his acidity.

Name: Swamp Sludge Technique: "Inner Venom"
Element: "Poison" (Earth & Water)
Effect: Trias forces himself inside the enemy by any means- usually by forcing himself down their gullet. After around 30 seconds, the opponent is 'burning inside' due to Trias' acidic touch. However, after they pass out from the pain, Trias can 'possess' their body, using their image and voice as if they were a puppet. After doing what need to be done- such as making his opponent forfeit the match, get the vital documents, or kill themselves, Trias can ooze out the opponent, and change back from his sludge form to his regular shape. However, the opponent suffers major internal injuries, and prolonged possesion usually ends up with death.

Name: "Trias' Terror Venom!"
Element: "Poison" (Earth & Water)
Effect: As the name suggests, this is Trias' favorite technique, and usually his signature move. Trias starts off by focusing a large amount of chakra and posion on one of his canines. then afterward, he grabs the sharp tooth, and rips it out. Throwing the tooth like a shuriken of knife, and with astounding accuracy, Trias subjects his victim to his favorite poison.
The toxin triggers the Panic receptors in the brain, casuing the opponent to go into a never-ending state of upmost fear. this toxin is more effective than near all genjutsu, as it initiates 100% of the nerve, and cannot be improved any further. Trias watches cruelly as his opponent goes into a state of terror, running about in desperation, trying to escape everything & anything. Most opponents will go into a state of tempoary madness, and lose all their dignity by blubbering, begging for mercy to "that frightening twig" and quite literally wetting themselves.
Eventually, Trias' show is cut short by the cruel fact that overdosing in fear makes the heart beat faster and faster until an enevitable heart attack kills the opponent, who is powerless to do anything about it.

Name: "Summoning Technique : Trantula"
Element: Summon
Effect: Trias sacrifices a drop of his blood and puts it onto the runic markings on his blade. This summons three differant spiders, depending on how much chakra Trias wants to use;

Stage one - "Baki Spiders"
These creepy crawlies are small, but deadly quick. Good for spying, and keeping an eye on things. They also spin webs extremely quick, and puting them on peoples backs is always a good fun prank. As well as that, they keep Trias good conversational company on the long roads, but tend to make very bad jokes & puns..
Step two - "Makita Spiders"
Bigger foes, Trias summoning up to 4. Each one is about half the size of the average man, and can jump from tree to tree or pole to pole with deceptively good speed. They can be very vicious, and can defeat even good chunin individually. Before attacking however, they tend to spin a web in the surrounding area- as an instinctive strategy to ensnare their opponents. The strength of the web is like nin-wire, with the the silk lines being nearly invisible to the naked eye, and exceptionally resistance and tough wearing- as if made of hardened steel. However, the web is also naturally sticky, and can keep a shinobi in place, no matter how much they struggle. the drawbacks of these spiders is that they're maneaters, and even though they don't dare touch their master Trias, they usually devour the enemy so fast Trias doesnt get any fun out of the battle, which is natturally dissapointing.
Step three - "Motherspider Maexxena"
This is the siege weapon of Trias' artillery. Maexxena is a gigantic Spider, big enough to rival gamabunta or any Bijuu in size alone. Trias uses her to smash buildings, or to clear rocky paths. She can spit a corrosive acid that burns almost any alloy or mineral to dust. As well as this, she can launch bullets of hardened silk at areas, those balls of "cloth" acting identically to cannon balls. Although having a fierce appearance, Maexxena is very protective and caring- and because Trias gets so tired during battles, and using up alot of his chakra summoning her to his aid, she allows his to sleep on her back- her body heat comforting him and the fur on her back acting as a sort of 'motherly blanket'.

that is cool. however ther is one problem. wehn nartuo was training with kakashi and yamato came he showed that you make wood by vombining th eeart element and the water element. however that was really creative and cool.

The_Dark_One · 2008-09-18, 08:28

Quote:

Originally Posted by sunchips18

that is cool. however ther is one problem. wehn nartuo was training with kakashi and yamato came he showed that you make wood by vombining th eeart element and the water element. however that was really creative and cool.

Yes, but as oroachimaru says; "Jutsu is an infinate combination".
Roughly speaking and indeed pretty much guessing- the percentages of elements can effect the outcome of the jutsu. For example, I suppose 50% earth element and 50% Water element would make wood jutsu- like you and yamato said.
However, tip the scales a little, and a whole new element is formed- so, lets say Posion is 75% water, and 25% Earth.
this may all be theory- but you have to realise Naruto in itself is indeed fiction- and I dont believe I'm too "out there" with my idea's.. at least I hope not anyway.

AuroraFlash · 2008-09-18, 14:20

Spoiler for Technique:

sunchips18 · 2008-09-18, 16:30

Quote:

Originally Posted by The_Dark_One

Yes, but as oroachimaru says; "Jutsu is an infinate combination".
Roughly speaking and indeed pretty much guessing- the percentages of elements can effect the outcome of the jutsu. For example, I suppose 50% earth element and 50% Water element would make wood jutsu- like you and yamato said.
However, tip the scales a little, and a whole new element is formed- so, lets say Posion is 75% water, and 25% Earth.
this may all be theory- but you have to realise Naruto in itself is indeed fiction- and I dont believe I'm too "out there" with my idea's.. at least I hope not anyway.

oh ok. i get it.

Spectacular_Insanity · 2008-09-26, 00:55

Wow, i haven't posted anything of substance since page 120. Geez. Anyway, I'm here to dust the cobwebs off of this thread. I'm currently working on yet another Kurotsuchi missing-nin character. I've got a few good ideas for jutsus or even a kekkei genkai, but I haven't gotten anything like a solid name or anything.

And by the way, I believe I stated somewhere that Kurotsuchi only has 12 members (I think I have 3 or 4 made by now)... if anyone notices that I am going over that number, please tell me.

Because I am starting to get their character designs down, I might even create some kind of Raiu like Tohei (formerly known as KurayamiLeader) did back in the day.

Zaku Hyuga · 2008-09-28, 08:01

Sounds nice SpecI, I haven't been doing much around here besides running the Naruto Contests. Can't wait to read your fanfics, which your mentioning makes me feel the need to hurry up and get the new chapters I've been writing for mine finished.

yaluckyboy · 2008-10-04, 19:14

Hagane Clan
Tetsuton : Metal Style
Land of Fire

The Hagane Clan is a small clan that is not very well known in the Shinobi World; most people do not even know of their existence. Ever since the Second Great Ninja War, the Hagane Clan has lost a good majority of their members. The Hagane Clan is one of the only Clans in the Fire Country that does not directly obey the Hokage.
The Hagane Clan has the Kekkei Genkai of Tetsuton, also known as Metal Style. This ability allows the members to manipulate any metallic object, but they cannot increase the amount of metal used unless they use a special 25-pound Orb of Hagane Kane. (Hagane Metal) This special metal is able to expand up to 1,000 times it’s original mass. (Up to 25,000-pounds)
The Hagane Kane is made out of pure iron that was exposed to special Tetsu Chakra (Fire and Earth) over the course of 3 days.

Tetsuton Jutsu

Tetsu Ryu no Jutsu
The user takes out a Hagane Kane Ord and does the proper Hand Signs (Horse, Dragon, Rat, Snake, Ram) The Hagane Kane Orb turns into a serpentine dragon that flies towards the enemy. The Metal Dragon is very solid and is very hard to break.

Tetsu Toku no Jutsu
The user takes out a Hagane Kane Orb and does the proper Hand Signs (Horse, Rat, Dog, Ram) The Hagane Kane Orb will expand to cover anything that the user wishes. The wider the shield stretches, the more Chakra it requires.

Tetsu Danmaku no Jutsu
The user takes out a Hagane Kane Orb and does the proper Hand Signs (Horse, Tiger, Dragon, Ram) The Hagane Kane Orb will separate into multiple smaller orbs and blast towards the enemy or enemies in the form of barrage of bullet-like projectiles.

Tetsu Yoroi no Jutsu
The user takes out a Hagane Kane Orb and does the proper Hand Signs (Horse, Rat, Tiger, Ram) The Hagane Kane Orb will spread around the users body. This armor will move and bend more and more fluently depending on the skill of the user. The armor also grants the user 10 times greater strength The armor cost a large amount of Chakra to keep working.

Bubun Tetsu Yoroi no Jutsu
The user takes out a Hagane Kane Orb and does the proper Hand Signs (Horse, Tiger, Dog, Rat, Ram) The Hagane Kane Orb will spread around one of the user’s arm. This armored arm is granted 10 times greater strength. This jutsu cost a large amount of Chakra, yet considerably less then Tetsu Yoroi no Jutsu.

Tetsu Kangoku no Jutsu
The user takes out a Hagane Kane Orb and does the proper Hand Signs (Horse, Dog, Tiger, Ram) The Hagane Kane Ord will form into various types of restraint devices.

Xemn · 2008-10-04, 20:18

Spoiler for Long:

Thats it. Im already making a plot with him. I also have 6 more characters, but... that willl take too long to write down, lol.

ChidoriKnight · 2008-10-05, 08:29

Here's my jutsu's

Name- Secret Art: Shadow Mirror Jutsu
Rank- B
Description- after the needed handseals are formed the user will create a stream of shadows that will rise from the ground. Any ranged attacks will be deflected but Physical attacks will become easier to land
Hand Seals- Rat, Ox, Dragon

Name- Summoning: Masters of Heaven and Earth
Rank- S
Description- after the needed hand seals are formed and a contract has been signed the user can summon two dragons. One is pure white with coal dark eyes and black teeth and the other is all black with white eyes and a white tounge. The two can transform into the javelin Senju and the shield Menju.

Name- Secret Art: Dual Weapon Handleing
Rank- S
Description- this jutsu can only be used if the user is in possession of Senju and Menju the legendary weapons there speed, strength, etc will raise up to that of a sage.

Keikan · 2008-10-06, 00:20

This character was for the September comp. so I thought I would post it here now.

General:
Name: Sen Akihiro (Surname, First Name)
Gender: Male
Age: 24
Height: 186cm
Weight: 85kg
Village: Missing-nin (Iwagakure)
Clan: -
Surviving Clan/Family Members: -

Kekkei Genkai: -
Kekkei Genkai ability: N/A

Appearance:
Hair: Short black hair. At the back it is tied into a small ponytail.
Eyes: His eye’s are affected by a genetic mutation, they have no pupils and are blood red (think Hyuuga cross Kyuubi).
Clothes: Wears black, orange or red battle kimonos, usually with blood splatter on them (not a pattern, real blood). Wears a pair of dark sunglasses over his eyes.

Personality:
Ahikiro is serious and has some serious anger issues due to his childhood. Doesn’t talk much, prefers to slice and dice.

Ninja Info:
Strengths: Sword play, ninjutsu, his eyes (can see like it is day at night and can see through genjutsu)
Weaknesses: Taijutsu (useless without his swords), his eyes (can’t see at daylight or in bright light)
Affinity: Metal (Kinton) and Heat (Kaonton)
Summoning Pact: -
Weapons: Kunai, shuriken, senbon, demon-windmill shuriken, long sword (to scale) and short knife (to scale).
Ninja Rank: Missing-nin (was Jounin)
Team: -
Missions Completed Successfully:
D-Rank: 231
C-Rank: 103
B-Rank: 25
A-Rank: 7
S-Rank: 2

Commonly Used Jutsus:
Name: Kaonton: Kinzoku Kaon no jutsu (Heat Release: Metal Heating jutsu)
Type: Heat
Rank: C-Rank
Effect: Heats metal almost to melting point in a second with a touch.
Advantages/Disadvantages: Using too much chakra can melt the metal.
Hand Seals:

Name: Kaonton: Kaon Settou no jutsu (Heat Release: Heat Stealing jutsu)
Type: Heat
Rank: C-Rank
Effect: Takes the heat from objects around Akihiro.
Advantages/Disadvantages: Hurts friends.
Hand Seals:

Name: Kinton: Hagane Suji no jutsu (Metal Release: Steel Muscle jutsu)
Type: Metal
Rank: B-Rank
Effect: Hardens and strengths muscles, makes them really hard to cut.
Advantages/Disadvantages: Too much chakra and they can turn to steel permanently.
Hand Seals:

Name: Kinton: Katana Henshu no jutsu (Metal Release: Sword Mutation jutsu)
Type: Metal
Rank: B-Rank
Effect: Changes the shape, size and style of a any blade that Akihiro is touching at his will.
Advantages/Disadvantages: Uses lots of chakra otherwise the blade turns back to normal.
Hand Seals:

Name: Kaonton: Kaon Tama no jutsu (Heat Release: Heat Ball jutsu)
Type: Heat
Rank: B-Rank
Effect: Compresses lots of heat into a ball that Akihiro can thrust or throw at enemies.
Advantages/Disadvantages: Could burn Akihiro.
Hand Seals:

Name: Kinton: Kinzoku Sesshoku no jutsu (Metal Release: Metal Touch jutsu)
Type: Metal
Rank: A-Rank
Effect: Turns anything or anyone to metal as long as Akihiro is touching it.
Advantages/Disadvantages: With not enough chakra could only partially turn an object to metal.
Hand Seals:

As well as the usual jutsu.

Brief Life Story:
Usual story of someone with a genetic deformity; parents abandoned him, picked on, dismissed as worthless, forced his way back, showed them all. You know the usual.

2008-09-01, 23:49	Link #2442
Dan the Man Defeater of Robot Masters Artist Join Date: Jan 2007 Location: Wherever YOU aren't. Thanks for not visiting... Sniff Age: 36	Thanks. I like it too. __________________ -----Chicks dig giant robots------

2008-09-02, 19:20	Link #2443
yaluckyboy NaruHina Maniac Join Date: Nov 2007 Location: Konoha Age: 34	Fuuton: Rasen HouTama - Wind Style: Spiraling CannonBall A-Rank Mid-Long Range Naruto places his left hand over his right hand, with his palms facing towards the target. And with two Shadow Clones, he creates a Fuuton: Rasengan and then creates a push of Wind Chakra behind the Rasengan to create a powerful cannonball of Wind Chakra that explodes on impact, creating millions of minuscule needles of Chakra that destroys the targets cellular structure. __________________ --------------------------------------------------------------------- (\_/) Copy this bunny to your sigature (Oo) to help him acheive world domination! ( W) ---------------------------------------------------------------------

2008-09-02, 19:43	Link #2444
yaluckyboy NaruHina Maniac Join Date: Nov 2007 Location: Konoha Age: 34	Fuuton: Rasen FuuYaiba - Wind Style: Spiraling Wind Blade A-Rank Short Range Naruto creates two Shadow Clones, the real Naruto takes out a kunai and supplies Chakra into the kunai while the two Clones form the Chakra into the form of a blade made of Wind Chakra. In the end, the kunai becomes a Wind Chakra Sword. __________________ --------------------------------------------------------------------- (\_/) Copy this bunny to your sigature (Oo) to help him acheive world domination! ( W) ---------------------------------------------------------------------

2008-09-02, 20:39	Link #2445
yaluckyboy NaruHina Maniac Join Date: Nov 2007 Location: Konoha Age: 34	Fuuton: Rasen KyojinTama - Wind Style: Spiraling Giant Ball A-Rank Short-Mid Range Naruto creates two Shadow Clones, the three place themselves in a triangular position, each facing the centre. They then swing their arms in the form of giant circles, forming a giant Rasengan. When the Jutsu is finished, the two Clones disperse and the real Naruto is holding a giant Rasengan just like Goku's Spirit Bomb. Naruto then litterally throws himself at the enemy and causes a giant explosion. __________________ --------------------------------------------------------------------- (\_/) Copy this bunny to your sigature (Oo) to help him acheive world domination! ( W) ---------------------------------------------------------------------

2008-09-03, 22:08	Link #2446
Zaku Hyuga Domo Ori Gato Mr. Roboto Author Join Date: Jan 2008 Location: Village Hidden in the Leaves Age: 31	Come on people! It's September already and we don't know who the last month's winner is! http://forums.animesuki.com/showthread.php?t=70178 vote vote vote! __________________ Come Visit The New Breathe Of Fire Central Forums(BOFC)!!!!

2008-08-28, 05:49	Link #2441
Ryuu numberoneknuckleheadninja Join Date: Aug 2008 Location: the village hidden in the leaves Age: 29	nice drawing Dan i really like it!

2008-09-09, 19:15	Link #2447
yaluckyboy NaruHina Maniac Join Date: Nov 2007 Location: Konoha Age: 34	Ryu Ken - Dragon Fist Taijutsu A Rank Mid-Long Range Rock Lee enters the Hidden Lotus and focuses Chakra into his palms. He then moves his hands in a open palm thrust which releases the Chakra from his hands into a high presure blast. This Jutsu is extremely tiring due to the effort it requires. __________________ --------------------------------------------------------------------- (\_/) Copy this bunny to your sigature (Oo) to help him acheive world domination! ( W) ---------------------------------------------------------------------

2008-09-13, 13:27	Link #2448
Kaze Akillion Junior Member Join Date: Sep 2008	Name: Kaizoku (Meaning pirate) Bikou (Meaning shadow, from the main branch of his clan.) Gender: Male Age: 14 Elemental affinity: Earth / Fire (Metal) & Wind Height: 5"3 Weight: Unknown IQ: 213 Home Village: Village hidden in the Night Rank: Jounin Appearance: Short-Medium length hair spiked up at an angle much like Kakashi's and a thin-muscular figure. He wear's a face mask covering his mouth and nose and black tinted goggles coveing his eyes. He wear's a baggy black and dark blue hooded shirt, baggy black and dark blue 3/4 length shorts and black high top trainers. History: Kaizoku became leader of his village when he was just 11 due to the sudden death of his father. He was hated by his village because he was the 7 tailed Jinchuriki and so abandoned his village and is now a bounty hunter searching for The village hidden in the leaves so he may become a true shinobi. Although being having fire chakra in his body he cannot use any fire Jutsu. Personality: He is a 'Man of few words', Kaizoku does not like to show his emotions and doesn't really care for anything or anyone. He is extremely lazy and only does things he has to. Even though almost every single girl who see's him falls in love with him he has never cared for a single one. Kaizoku is VERY smart and has a speciality of solving problems and anylizing things/people. Jutsu: Name: 'Shadow smoke' Element: Unknown Type: Kekkai Genkai Rank: S Effect: surrounds the user in a black chakra serging around the body that gives the user extreme speed and agility and also allows the use of a Justsu that makes the user teleport through a vortex of distances up to 25m. Name: 'Metal forging' Element: Earth Type: Nin-Jutsu Rank: S Effect: Allows the creation/manipulation of metal. The user must have earth Jutsu of up to rank S to be able to perform this technique. In the use of manipulation the user manipulates the earth particles in the metal. In the use of Creation the user binds eath particles together with his own chakra to create metal. Name: 'Extreme sharpness' Element: Air / Earth Type: Tai-Jutsu Rank: A Effect: This Jutsu can only be done with a 'Long Sword'. The user charges at the target dragging the swords across the ground held in 2-hands, the user then swings the sword up in to the air while jumping thus creating a sharp gust of wind travelling the speed of the user + the speed he/she swung the sword at up to a distance of 5m. Then while in mid air the user must lean back and once at 1m - 0.5m from the ground swing the sword down at the ground making an earthquake in the direction of the target up to a distance of 20m Name: 'Constant Night' Type: Gen-Jutsu Rank: B Effect: Once cast all the area within a 50m radius will be surrounded in darkness shortening the distance of all in the area to 2m or lower. The darkness is so thick that even a flare wont be seen 5m away. Although only being a Rank B Jutsu is takes a Dispeling Justu of Rank A to be dispelled. Special equipment: Name: Escaping Long sword Type: Weapon (Long sword) Dimentions: Handle: 9' ' Blade: 5"1 long, 11' wide Appearance: Same appearance as Zabuza's head cleaving sword Special perc's: Only 3 of this blade have ever been made 1 was given to Zabuza 1 has dissapeared and 1 was given to Kaizoku. The blade is one of the sharpest ever crafted and using Metal forging Kaizuko infused it with chakra increasing the sharpness 10 fold the sword is so sharp if the blade was laid down against a rock it would cut straight through it. When using air manipulation aswell the sword becomes so deadly it can kill without even making the slightest contact to the target. This took me awhile, lolz i hope you find it "Original enough for you" Last edited by Kaze Akillion; 2008-10-01 at 19:00.

2008-09-13, 22:04	Link #2449
The_Dark_One Homless Shadow Join Date: Dec 2007 Location: England Age: 31	]Name: Trias "Fangthorn" Gaiki Gender: Male Age: 15 Elemental affinity: Earth / Water Height: 5"4 Weight: Always changing Home / Origin: Village hidden in the Rocks, currently a traveler and mercenary Favorite Food: "Trias Special" (Cooked Seagull) 'Theme Song':http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YsfrZ...eature=related Personality: Trias uses a multitude of 'faces', to allow him to get close to people. He can be charming, witty, shy, curious, sweet, kind, and defensive- so long as he wants you to see him that way. With this as an overview, one can assume Trias is a very sly and deceiving person- although noone can be really sure the person their facing is the real deal. However, Trias motives are not really evil, nor commemerable. He fights because thats "all there is to do", and just lives life to its fullest- even if he breaks a few laws in the process. Appearance: Long brown hair that just passes shoulder-length, with a thin figured body. His eyes are emerald green, and he always seems to smile with an added sense of mocking. He's usually wearing very simple clothing- a white shirt with wide, large open sleeves, and black rope tied around his waist, and a matching pair of simplistic, wide-tunnelled white trousers. Weapons: "Ricochet" - A two-hand longsword, made of hardened black steel. The blade is wide and strong, and can cut through even the toughest bone. The metal is tampered to accomidate and resist Trias' poisons, and Trias has booby-trapped it so anyone who tries to weild it but him is injected with a toxin that tempoarly makes them lose control of their arms & hands. "Garrote" - A sharpened dagger made with a wooden handle wrapped in leather, and the blade made of a spider fang. Although kept mainly for sentimental reasons, this is indeed a dangerous weapon that Trias has if used right. "Unusual" traits, and brief History: Trias is a unique shinobi, unable to use his own elements. He tried for years to use his Earth jutsu- but always failed. He tried specialising in Taijutsu, but because of his natural body type, he was doomed from the start. However, when Trias abandoned his earth element, and tried Water instead- he found he couldnt use this element either. Infuriated by his own fealty, Trias exploded in rage, taking it out on Target dummies and even other students in "Practice bouts". However, when taking a time out because of breaking his opponents limbs for a third time, he watched the fights of the more superior Jounin. He saw that when earth and water collided- or any two elements for that matter, they bought about a new half-element- this idea inspired Trias, and he immediately ran out to test his theory. Combining an "Earth Shock" and "Water Surge" jutsu, Trias managed to create a green goo. Trias didnt realise what this blob was, until he touched it. His hand burnt as if it had been touched by the hottest flame, and the goo began searing away all the nearby ground, before the earth around it absorbed the puddle. Trias took years mastering his own arsenal of combined Elemental techniques, calling his jutsu "Poison Style". However, he got too big for his boots, and after burning away another students face in the chunin exams, he decided that the life on a restricted shinobi was not for him. To the present, he roams about as a mercenary- living of the thrill of a mission, and of course its financial rewards. Jutsu: Name: "Snake Spit" Element: "Poison" (Earth & Water) Effect: Trias accumulates an amount of acid inside his own mouth, and shoots a carefully aimed shot at opponents. This is usually aimed for the face to disorient the enemy, and because of the varying strength of the acid (The more chakra used to concentrate it, the stronger it becomes) it has the potential to burn off facial features, or even the entire face itself. Because of the rapid deploy of the technique, it is best used for surprise attacks- and is mostly used when Trias gets really annoyed at somebody in an arguement. Name: "Scorpio' Slash" Element: "Poison" (Earth & Water) Effect: Trias concentrates his chakra to his blade, giving it a faint green glow. If struck by the blade, the chakra that enters the opponents wound acts as a fast-effecting toxin. This special toxin lowers the amount of oxygen flowing to the opponents muscles, slowing their speed- the more toxin the slower they get, and the more slow they get, the more toxin Trias can put into their body by hitting them. Prolonged effects of the toxin include breathing problems, problems with hand-eye coordination, and a feeling of being 'strangled'. Name: "Grim, Green, Gash" Element: "Poison" (Earth & Water) Effect: A cocentrated lunge with Trias' blade, with an extra Toxin included. If hit, the opponent will have two toxins forced into their bloodstream (As well as the "Scorpio'" Toxin), this new toxin is designed to kill or confuse nerves in the opponents brain. This can lead to the opponent seeing double, attacking allies, memory loss, tempoary or permenant disablement, blindness, and loss of hearing. Drawbacks: This technique takes a while to charge, Trias needing to focus his chakra to create an extra toxin- not to mention the specific aiming for optimum effect. Name: "Cobraan Corruption" Element: "Poison" (Earth & Water) Effect: Trias forces a specialised Acid from the pores in his palm. This acid will burn any plant material it touches, and melt away at stone, gravel, and soil. Drawbacks: The acid requires some of the red blood cells in Trias to work, thus it is not wise to use this technique twice. Name: "Swamp Sludge Technqiue" Element: "Poison" (Earth & Water) Effect: Trias breaks up his cells, and reverts into a living blob of acid. He can fully control himself, and without the drawbacks of bones can seep under doors and others cracks easily. However, in this form he cannot take his blade with him, and anything his touches he burns with his acidity. Name: Swamp Sludge Technique: "Inner Venom" Element: "Poison" (Earth & Water) Effect: Trias forces himself inside the enemy by any means- usually by forcing himself down their gullet. After around 30 seconds, the opponent is 'burning inside' due to Trias' acidic touch. However, after they pass out from the pain, Trias can 'possess' their body, using their image and voice as if they were a puppet. After doing what need to be done- such as making his opponent forfeit the match, get the vital documents, or kill themselves, Trias can ooze out the opponent, and change back from his sludge form to his regular shape. However, the opponent suffers major internal injuries, and prolonged possesion usually ends up with death. Name: "Trias' Terror Venom!" Element: "Poison" (Earth & Water) Effect: As the name suggests, this is Trias' favorite technique, and usually his signature move. Trias starts off by focusing a large amount of chakra and posion on one of his canines. then afterward, he grabs the sharp tooth, and rips it out. Throwing the tooth like a shuriken of knife, and with astounding accuracy, Trias subjects his victim to his favorite poison. The toxin triggers the Panic receptors in the brain, casuing the opponent to go into a never-ending state of upmost fear. this toxin is more effective than near all genjutsu, as it initiates 100% of the nerve, and cannot be improved any further. Trias watches cruelly as his opponent goes into a state of terror, running about in desperation, trying to escape everything & anything. Most opponents will go into a state of tempoary madness, and lose all their dignity by blubbering, begging for mercy to "that frightening twig" and quite literally wetting themselves. Eventually, Trias' show is cut short by the cruel fact that overdosing in fear makes the heart beat faster and faster until an enevitable heart attack kills the opponent, who is powerless to do anything about it. Name: "Summoning Technique : Trantula" Element: Summon Effect: Trias sacrifices a drop of his blood and puts it onto the runic markings on his blade. This summons three differant spiders, depending on how much chakra Trias wants to use; Stage one - "Baki Spiders" These creepy crawlies are small, but deadly quick. Good for spying, and keeping an eye on things. They also spin webs extremely quick, and puting them on peoples backs is always a good fun prank. As well as that, they keep Trias good conversational company on the long roads, but tend to make very bad jokes & puns.. Step two - "Makita Spiders" Bigger foes, Trias summoning up to 4. Each one is about half the size of the average man, and can jump from tree to tree or pole to pole with deceptively good speed. They can be very vicious, and can defeat even good chunin individually. Before attacking however, they tend to spin a web in the surrounding area- as an instinctive strategy to ensnare their opponents. The strength of the web is like nin-wire, with the the silk lines being nearly invisible to the naked eye, and exceptionally resistance and tough wearing- as if made of hardened steel. However, the web is also naturally sticky, and can keep a shinobi in place, no matter how much they struggle. the drawbacks of these spiders is that they're maneaters, and even though they don't dare touch their master Trias, they usually devour the enemy so fast Trias doesnt get any fun out of the battle, which is natturally dissapointing. Step three - "Motherspider Maexxena" This is the siege weapon of Trias' artillery. Maexxena is a gigantic Spider, big enough to rival gamabunta or any Bijuu in size alone. Trias uses her to smash buildings, or to clear rocky paths. She can spit a corrosive acid that burns almost any alloy or mineral to dust. As well as this, she can launch bullets of hardened silk at areas, those balls of "cloth" acting identically to cannon balls. Although having a fierce appearance, Maexxena is very protective and caring- and because Trias gets so tired during battles, and using up alot of his chakra summoning her to his aid, she allows his to sleep on her back- her body heat comforting him and the fur on her back acting as a sort of 'motherly blanket'.

2008-09-14, 14:15	Link #2450
mace58 Ketseuka Hagane Author Join Date: Jun 2008 Location: PA Age: 30	hey guys hey if u guys think your up to it enter zakus contest submissions are taken until the 20th of september!!!! so get in it now!!!!

2008-09-18, 14:20	Link #2453
AuroraFlash good-natured spirit Graphic Designer Join Date: Aug 2008 Location: Dancing with the devil	Spoiler for Technique: Name: Fuuton Rasen Gyorai User: Naruto (adult) How to: Naruto creates Kage Bushin. Due to his advanced chakra control, he is able to make the Kage Bushin chakra spin and form into Rasengan. This was his first step called Rasen Gyorai, when he tried to push his skills to the edge. After a lot of training, he was finally able to compose the Kage Bushin with wind element chakra when turning it into a Rasengan. This is a hard move which required Naruto years of profound experience. Yet, he can only turn one Kage Bushin at the same time into Fuuton Rasen Gyorai, because it requires a lot of concentration. This also makes it a weak moment when he can easily be attacked. It takes full concentration and a calm moment in battle, thus can not be used fighting multiple enemies. In exchange, it's a good surprising long distance move. __________________

2008-09-26, 00:55	Link #2455
Spectacular_Insanity Ha ha ha ha ha... Graphic Designer Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: Right behind you. Age: 35	Wow, i haven't posted anything of substance since page 120. Geez. Anyway, I'm here to dust the cobwebs off of this thread. I'm currently working on yet another Kurotsuchi missing-nin character. I've got a few good ideas for jutsus or even a kekkei genkai, but I haven't gotten anything like a solid name or anything. And by the way, I believe I stated somewhere that Kurotsuchi only has 12 members (I think I have 3 or 4 made by now)... if anyone notices that I am going over that number, please tell me. Because I am starting to get their character designs down, I might even create some kind of Raiu like Tohei (formerly known as KurayamiLeader) did back in the day. __________________

2008-09-28, 08:01	Link #2456
Zaku Hyuga Domo Ori Gato Mr. Roboto Author Join Date: Jan 2008 Location: Village Hidden in the Leaves Age: 31	Sounds nice SpecI, I haven't been doing much around here besides running the Naruto Contests. Can't wait to read your fanfics, which your mentioning makes me feel the need to hurry up and get the new chapters I've been writing for mine finished. __________________ Come Visit The New Breathe Of Fire Central Forums(BOFC)!!!!

2008-10-04, 19:14	Link #2457
yaluckyboy NaruHina Maniac Join Date: Nov 2007 Location: Konoha Age: 34	Hagane Clan Tetsuton : Metal Style Land of Fire The Hagane Clan is a small clan that is not very well known in the Shinobi World; most people do not even know of their existence. Ever since the Second Great Ninja War, the Hagane Clan has lost a good majority of their members. The Hagane Clan is one of the only Clans in the Fire Country that does not directly obey the Hokage. The Hagane Clan has the Kekkei Genkai of Tetsuton, also known as Metal Style. This ability allows the members to manipulate any metallic object, but they cannot increase the amount of metal used unless they use a special 25-pound Orb of Hagane Kane. (Hagane Metal) This special metal is able to expand up to 1,000 times it’s original mass. (Up to 25,000-pounds) The Hagane Kane is made out of pure iron that was exposed to special Tetsu Chakra (Fire and Earth) over the course of 3 days. Tetsuton Jutsu Tetsu Ryu no Jutsu The user takes out a Hagane Kane Ord and does the proper Hand Signs (Horse, Dragon, Rat, Snake, Ram) The Hagane Kane Orb turns into a serpentine dragon that flies towards the enemy. The Metal Dragon is very solid and is very hard to break. Tetsu Toku no Jutsu The user takes out a Hagane Kane Orb and does the proper Hand Signs (Horse, Rat, Dog, Ram) The Hagane Kane Orb will expand to cover anything that the user wishes. The wider the shield stretches, the more Chakra it requires. Tetsu Danmaku no Jutsu The user takes out a Hagane Kane Orb and does the proper Hand Signs (Horse, Tiger, Dragon, Ram) The Hagane Kane Orb will separate into multiple smaller orbs and blast towards the enemy or enemies in the form of barrage of bullet-like projectiles. Tetsu Yoroi no Jutsu The user takes out a Hagane Kane Orb and does the proper Hand Signs (Horse, Rat, Tiger, Ram) The Hagane Kane Orb will spread around the users body. This armor will move and bend more and more fluently depending on the skill of the user. The armor also grants the user 10 times greater strength The armor cost a large amount of Chakra to keep working. Bubun Tetsu Yoroi no Jutsu The user takes out a Hagane Kane Orb and does the proper Hand Signs (Horse, Tiger, Dog, Rat, Ram) The Hagane Kane Orb will spread around one of the user’s arm. This armored arm is granted 10 times greater strength. This jutsu cost a large amount of Chakra, yet considerably less then Tetsu Yoroi no Jutsu. Tetsu Kangoku no Jutsu The user takes out a Hagane Kane Orb and does the proper Hand Signs (Horse, Dog, Tiger, Ram) The Hagane Kane Ord will form into various types of restraint devices. __________________ --------------------------------------------------------------------- (\_/) Copy this bunny to your sigature (Oo) to help him acheive world domination! ( W) ---------------------------------------------------------------------

2008-10-04, 20:18	Link #2458
Xemn Hidden Cheese Tracker Join Date: Oct 2008 Location: On the Moon, chiii! Age: 31	Character Spoiler for Long: *Name: Dorian, Also known as Wraith (Grew up as an orphan, resulting in no last name) Sex: Male Chakra Element: Lightning Age: 22 Village: Unknown, but grew up in the Lightning Country Height: 6"1 Weight: Currently 153 Pounds Description* - Hair = Snow white, some tips of his hair are red, goes down to his eyes. - Everyday Outfit = A dark black cloak that has a hood on it, hood covers most of his face. He rarely ever takes off his cloak. - Face = Red Eyes (Half Albino), scar running down his neck. He does not have pale skin, making him only half albino *Occupation: Bounty Hunter Weapons: Twin Chakrams Main Jutsus Used: -Doom Ninjutsu. Creates a large ball of chakra with in ones palm that grows rapidly until used. Has a core of lightning, making it explode on contact. Uses large amount of chakra, but the power it has is considered worth the amount of chakra used. It is just like rasengan, but with a little bit less shape manipulation and some more nature manipulation.* Also, before you say anything about copying rasengan, I already made this ability when I was young and played Kingdom Hearts. -Galactic Rip Ninjutsu. Uses two large chakrams, and combining chakra with great accuracy, the user can almost rip anything. You must throw both chakrams at same time, making sure they just skin each other. They have to be going in the same direction, and don`t forget to use chakra when you throw! Hard to commence though. -Fists of Lightning Taijutsu With great speed and strength, the user commences a 50 combo. Uses little chakra, and is commonly used. All you have to do is repeatedly punch, while adding in some chakra. -500 Pound Fury Taijutsu While increasing user's weight with chakra, the user strikes the enemy on the head, causing them to spin sideways in the air. User, at right time, kicks enemy while they are upside down, jumping into the air with them, and user uses weight to crush them into the ground. -Door Genjutsu While looking into the opponents eyes, user creates illusion of retreat through door. Enemy then goes into the door, and imagines them selves going through a whirlpool of dreaded events in the past. While enemy is screaming on the floor, user does what he/she wants with him. Pain Genjutsu Kekkei Genkai (Only Dorian`s blood line have a special dragon tattoo on left side of chest.) While long tattoo of dragon is visible on chest of user, user can create any amount of pain to victim. Thats it. Im already making a plot with him. I also have 6 more characters, but... that willl take too long to write down, lol. Last edited by Xemn; 2008-10-05 at 10:31.

2008-10-05, 08:29	Link #2459
ChidoriKnight Chidori Knight Join Date: Oct 2008 Location: New York, New York	Create Your Own Jutsu or Naruto Character Here's my jutsu's Name- Secret Art: Shadow Mirror Jutsu Rank- B Description- after the needed handseals are formed the user will create a stream of shadows that will rise from the ground. Any ranged attacks will be deflected but Physical attacks will become easier to land Hand Seals- Rat, Ox, Dragon Name- Summoning: Masters of Heaven and Earth Rank- S Description- after the needed hand seals are formed and a contract has been signed the user can summon two dragons. One is pure white with coal dark eyes and black teeth and the other is all black with white eyes and a white tounge. The two can transform into the javelin Senju and the shield Menju. Name- Secret Art: Dual Weapon Handleing Rank- S Description- this jutsu can only be used if the user is in possession of Senju and Menju the legendary weapons there speed, strength, etc will raise up to that of a sage.

2008-10-06, 00:20	Link #2460
Keikan Kingkiller Join Date: Oct 2007 Location: Where the lava and the waterfall are struck by the shadows Age: 32	This character was for the September comp. so I thought I would post it here now. General: Name: Sen Akihiro (Surname, First Name) Gender: Male Age: 24 Height: 186cm Weight: 85kg Village: Missing-nin (Iwagakure) Clan: - Surviving Clan/Family Members: - Kekkei Genkai: - Kekkei Genkai ability: N/A Appearance: Hair: Short black hair. At the back it is tied into a small ponytail. Eyes: His eye’s are affected by a genetic mutation, they have no pupils and are blood red (think Hyuuga cross Kyuubi). Clothes: Wears black, orange or red battle kimonos, usually with blood splatter on them (not a pattern, real blood). Wears a pair of dark sunglasses over his eyes. Personality: Ahikiro is serious and has some serious anger issues due to his childhood. Doesn’t talk much, prefers to slice and dice. Ninja Info: Strengths: Sword play, ninjutsu, his eyes (can see like it is day at night and can see through genjutsu) Weaknesses: Taijutsu (useless without his swords), his eyes (can’t see at daylight or in bright light) Affinity: Metal (Kinton) and Heat (Kaonton) Summoning Pact: - Weapons: Kunai, shuriken, senbon, demon-windmill shuriken, long sword (to scale) and short knife (to scale). Ninja Rank: Missing-nin (was Jounin) Team: - Missions Completed Successfully: D-Rank: 231 C-Rank: 103 B-Rank: 25 A-Rank: 7 S-Rank: 2 Commonly Used Jutsus: Name: Kaonton: Kinzoku Kaon no jutsu (Heat Release: Metal Heating jutsu) Type: Heat Rank: C-Rank Effect: Heats metal almost to melting point in a second with a touch. Advantages/Disadvantages: Using too much chakra can melt the metal. Hand Seals: Name: Kaonton: Kaon Settou no jutsu (Heat Release: Heat Stealing jutsu) Type: Heat Rank: C-Rank Effect: Takes the heat from objects around Akihiro. Advantages/Disadvantages: Hurts friends. Hand Seals: Name: Kinton: Hagane Suji no jutsu (Metal Release: Steel Muscle jutsu) Type: Metal Rank: B-Rank Effect: Hardens and strengths muscles, makes them really hard to cut. Advantages/Disadvantages: Too much chakra and they can turn to steel permanently. Hand Seals: Name: Kinton: Katana Henshu no jutsu (Metal Release: Sword Mutation jutsu) Type: Metal Rank: B-Rank Effect: Changes the shape, size and style of a any blade that Akihiro is touching at his will. Advantages/Disadvantages: Uses lots of chakra otherwise the blade turns back to normal. Hand Seals: Name: Kaonton: Kaon Tama no jutsu (Heat Release: Heat Ball jutsu) Type: Heat Rank: B-Rank Effect: Compresses lots of heat into a ball that Akihiro can thrust or throw at enemies. Advantages/Disadvantages: Could burn Akihiro. Hand Seals: Name: Kinton: Kinzoku Sesshoku no jutsu (Metal Release: Metal Touch jutsu) Type: Metal Rank: A-Rank Effect: Turns anything or anyone to metal as long as Akihiro is touching it. Advantages/Disadvantages: With not enough chakra could only partially turn an object to metal. Hand Seals: As well as the usual jutsu. Brief Life Story: Usual story of someone with a genetic deformity; parents abandoned him, picked on, dismissed as worthless, forced his way back, showed them all. You know the usual. __________________ I have stolen princesses back from sleeping barrow kings. I burned down the town of Trebon. I have spent the night with Felurian and left with both my sanity and my life. I was expelled from the University at a younger age than most people are allowed in. I tread paths by moonlight that others fear to speak of during day. I have talked to Gods, loved women, and written songs that make the minstrels weep. My name is Kvothe. You may have heard of me.