2008-12-08, 10:58 | Link #6081 | |
#1 Akashiya Moka Fan
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And the situations themselves can't just be anything... there has to be a valid reason (note- for all you guys going, then what the heck is with Water Bride, well... there's a real purpose behind it outside of another member to the harem, but you won't get to this purpose until ch. 5), and it can't be one we know is going to be resolved within the next two or three chapters. It's far more preferable if you create an OC for non-canon situation, because that way it gives you plenty of room to do character development, and keep people from going "But that's not how this was/is going to be resolved!" Another problem with OC's- you have to make sure the story doesn't entirely revolve around them. They can have plenty of screentime in the fic, as long as you remember to give just as much screentime to the canon characters, because that's what people are reading for- your take on the canon characters (there are exceptions to this, but I'm not going to go into details on those right now) And now to elevate Kyero- one of the ideas involving your OC and Mizore was actually a pretty good idea. (I'll let you know via PM if you don't want the others to know right now). So what I would suggest is taking this idea, developing it further, and then going and asking people like Tempest or even myself to help you out on it (we may be Inner Moka fans, but we like to write anyways). Remember, as I've stated before, OC's can be good, but you need to develop them and make sure they're not DeMs, Mary/Gary Stu's, etc. phew... that's enough of a rant from me
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2008-12-08, 12:05 | Link #6082 |
Tastes Cloudy
Join Date: Jul 2006
Location: Snake Way
Age: 35
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I said I was workin on a new Fan Fic from Scratch, it takes place after either the Mizore Arc or after Season1 what do you think? anyways, Kyero along with 2 others become students in the school. Kyero,a girl and another male. The other male goes after Moka and Kurumu while the little girl tries to steal Tsukune while Kyero is there just to keep a Eye on the News paper club and seems to know Gin a bit.
I won't go into big details but this time I'm making it where it revolves around them while Kyero's a little moon that revolves around them like how the Moon revolves around the earth at the same time the earth revolves around the sun. if it's after the Mizore arc Kyero turns out to be a Spy from the Organization to keep watch on Tsukune and the others.
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2008-12-08, 16:51 | Link #6085 | |
Mizore-chan
Join Date: Jun 2006
Location: Moe Land
Age: 43
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I would also like to hear from the rest of the guys if they did...
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2008-12-08, 21:58 | Link #6092 | |
Anime Fanatic
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Join Date: Aug 2008
Location: texas
Age: 32
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yeah that'd be cool, like if gin were to come out of no where and defeat that fiance dude, and kaula....
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2008-12-09, 06:46 | Link #6097 |
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Join Date: Mar 2008
Location: Fort Worth, Texas
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Finally stopped being lazy and scanned the last of volume 2.
I love this picture. Spoiler for Loli:
I'm personally of the opinion, he should draw Moka with glasses permanently from now on. Spoiler for Moka:
For the Mizore clut. Spoiler for Mizore:
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action, comedy, ecchi, harem, monogamy, romance, shounen, supernatural, tsumoka romance, vampire |
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