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yvj · 2009-05-14, 20:34

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Originally Posted by Kid Ying

Wow, i did read that fic with emperor Lelouch... And i think it's one of the most embarassing things i've ever read in my life.

I mean... Damn...

I didn't get around to reading it yet. Shall I take your reaction to it as confirmation of it being than seller?

Kid Ying · 2009-05-14, 20:38

Honestly, if you get to read the chapter when Kallen and Milly discover the pleasures of adult life together and NOT get embarassed, then stick with it... Or not, cause the whole thing is really baaad, okay, sounds nice at first, but then it's like a big porn movie... Without the movie! Just with the bad acting and GREAT storyline(?).

Also, sometimes it's veeeery cluclu, but that was expected.

snowdevil_crow · 2009-05-14, 21:26

Lol, is it that bad? I haven't read it in awhile, I don't quite remember. I found it kind of amusing... I remember being disappointed when it didn't turn out to be all just a dream or something, I prefer Lelouch when he's Zero.

Uh, might wanna look out for the Lulu/Tianzi, actually, just remembered that... um.

Nobodyman9 · 2009-05-14, 22:38

LOL, well I've been reading it, and all I can say is...well, it's kind of a guilty pleasure goofball fic. I mean, there's no way any of it would occur canonically (is that a word?) but it is good for some laughs and cute moments. Also, it is very well written.

snowdevil_crow · 2009-05-14, 22:45

Yeah, that's what I remember of reading it. It's a harem-fantasy with an interesting plot.

Anyway, I have some of my own stuff to post... I'll just post it directly, they're short enough. 100-word drabbles of various pairings...

Spoiler for Suzaku/Kallen - hopefully it's not too explicit?:

Spoiler for Lelouch/Kallen - angst galore:

Spoiler for Milly/Shirley - This one's actually 118 words...:

Spoiler for Suzaku/Euphie - lawl, I suck at SuzaEuphie:

Kid Ying · 2009-05-14, 23:42

Well, it's good for the lol, i give you that.

Maybe i exaggerated about how bad it is, it's just... Well, i can't get in the right mood reading this.

I don't know, i have to read without the biased eyes of "That's fucking impossible AND NO HUMAN BEING WOULD ACT LIKE THIS!" maybe it'll get better then.

Nobodyman9 · 2009-05-15, 00:04

Speaking of lol, here's my completed Luluko song. Remember it's set to the beat of the Beach Boys' Kokomo.

Spoiler for size:

I tried to make a connection between Luluko and the mainstream ships, but then again, since it's lol, I guess it doesn't have to make a whole lot of sense

snowdevil_crow · 2009-05-15, 20:59

Spoiler for LuluCC - interrupted showers:

Spoiler for SuzaLulu - angggst, Turn 17:

Lord_Bear · 2009-05-16, 21:14

Update: Phase 12. =D

Title: Code Geass: The Game of Kings
Rating: T
Pairing: Lelouch/Kallen
Genre: Suspense/Thriller
Summary: The lines between player and piece have become blurred with the scars of sacrifice; the world destined to descend into even greater chaos as two enemies return to the board to rearrange their pieces. Sometimes, nobody knows who the enemy King truly is.
Progress: 12 chapters complete at ~100,000 words total.

Lunara · 2009-05-17, 11:39

I read and reviewed your chapter. A pure win chapter.

Lord_Bear · 2009-05-18, 00:49

Thanks!

Nobodyman9 · 2009-05-18, 01:04

Yep, I read and reviewed your chapter as well Lord Bear. Good job.

One thing I did forget to mention in my review is that you did make a canonical error. Shirley wasn't orphaned after the Narita incident. Only her dad died. Her mother was still alive and she was actually survived by her mother.

Sad.

Lord_Bear · 2009-05-18, 01:06

Cheers!

I actually had Shirley's mother die in the FLEIJA blasts, though.

Betteroffer · 2009-05-18, 01:30

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Originally Posted by Lord_Bear

Cheers!

I actually had Shirley's mother die in the FLEIJA blasts, though.

I KNEW I forgot to mention something in my review! I honestly wanted to thank you for that. I know it seems gruesome, but most people have commented that Shirley's mother was one of the least considered, yet most screwed over characters by eyerything that happened in the series, and I think that killing her off in the FLEIJA blast was one of the more humane things to do to her given everything that she had to deal with.

I know that with Shirley alive in your story it does mean she's an orphan now, and that her mother wouldn't be trully reunited with her family yet, but I doubt Shirley could have been allowed to contact her and say she's fine at any point after her 'death,' so the poor woman would have essentially been left to rot.

In any case keep up the awesome work!

Nobodyman9 · 2009-05-18, 01:55

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Originally Posted by Lord_Bear

Cheers!

I actually had Shirley's mother die in the FLEIJA blasts, though.

Ah, I see. Was that specifically mentioned in any chapter? Just curious.

And I agree with everything you said Betteroffer.

Lord_Bear · 2009-05-18, 02:38

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Originally Posted by Betteroffer

I KNEW I forgot to mention something in my review! I honestly wanted to thank you for that. I know it seems gruesome, but most people have commented that Shirley's mother was one of the least considered, yet most screwed over characters by eyerything that happened in the series, and I think that killing her off in the FLEIJA blast was one of the more humane things to do to her given everything that she had to deal with.

I know that with Shirley alive in your story it does mean she's an orphan now, and that her mother wouldn't be trully reunited with her family yet, but I doubt Shirley could have been allowed to contact her and say she's fine at any point after her 'death,' so the poor woman would have essentially been left to rot.

In any case keep up the awesome work!

Yeah, Shirley's mother would have been left in a horrible position.

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Originally Posted by Nobodyman9

Ah, I see. Was that specifically mentioned in any chapter? Just curious.

And I agree with everything you said Betteroffer.

Only in Phase 12; there wasn't really much of an opportunity to at any other point.

Nobodyman9 · 2009-05-18, 02:57

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Originally Posted by Lord_Bear

Only in Phase 12; there wasn't really much of an opportunity to at any other point.

Ah, yes. I did reread and I see that you did mention the FLEIJA blast. Okay, it's all good.

ATP · 2009-05-19, 00:57

Hi,

I've been working on this for some time now, but the lack of responses (as in FF.net) was quite disheartening.

The fact is, I've been writing a crossover between Code Geass and... and TWILIGHT.

Yes I am a crossoverer. No I am not a fangirl/boy. I am an anti.

So far, I've gotten quite a few mild insults, though not necessarily flames, by this endeavor. Do you here think that this is a lost cause?

Nobodyman9 · 2009-05-19, 01:16

Quote:

Originally Posted by ATP

Hi,

I've been working on this for some time now, but the lack of responses (as in FF.net) was quite disheartening.

The fact is, I've been writing a crossover between Code Geass and... and TWILIGHT.

Yes I am a crossoverer. No I am not a fangirl/boy. I am an anti.

So far, I've gotten quite a few mild insults, though not necessarily flames, by this endeavor. Do you here think that this is a lost cause?

Code Geass.............and Twilight? No. I'm sorry buddy, but just no. I hate to burst your bubble, but quite frankly I'm not surprised at the negative responses you've been getting.

Code Geass and Twilight. I mean the two are just so fundamentally different and the very idea is so flimsy that I highly doubt that there's any possible way that it could work. Not to mention the two have very different fanbases. Besides, a lot of people hate Twilight.

But what do you mean exactly when you say you're an "anti"? Are saying that this is a comedy that makes fun of Twilight and/or Code Geass. If so, I guess that could possibly work. But still, it's gonna be hard to win people over.

ATP · 2009-05-19, 01:44

^^ I am an anti-Twilighter.

Actually I've written out seven to eight chapters of this xover. On FF.net there are only two CG/Twilight xovers. The longer one is mine. As far as it goes, the idea is fleshing out all right.

Here it is.

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4886489/...e_Insurrection

2009-05-14, 22:45	Link #585
snowdevil_crow Wielder of Cucumbers Join Date: Feb 2009 Location: Canada	Yeah, that's what I remember of reading it. It's a harem-fantasy with an interesting plot. Anyway, I have some of my own stuff to post... I'll just post it directly, they're short enough. 100-word drabbles of various pairings... Spoiler for Suzaku/Kallen - hopefully it's not too explicit?: When they fight one another it’s almost as intimate and exciting as having sex, and when they fuck, it’s almost as vicious as battle. His hands on her waist, pushing her against the wall and lapping at her neck – and her hands in his hair, tugging so that he whines, and she pushes back against him, just as demanding and just as strong. There is no need for gentleness between them, they know each other’s strength. Neither will break. And yet after, when they are both panting and spent, he’ll brush the hair from her eyes and she’ll let him. Spoiler for Lelouch/Kallen - angst galore: “I’m sorry,” he murmurs as she glares at him from her cell, smiling that horrible false smile. “But did you honestly think that you, a pilot, a chess piece in my game, could ever earn my regard? You shouldn’t be so careless with your heart.” She looks away so that he won’t see the tears gathering at the corners of her eyes. She doesn't speak, and after a moment he gives up on attempting conversation. It is too precious a thing, he adds silently, walking away. You should give it to someone who deserves it better than me. Spoiler for Milly/Shirley - This one's actually 118 words...: “President!” she complains, “Don’t look at me like that!” Milly jumps, a little surprised at getting caught, but within an instant she’s smiling lecherously. “Well then, don’t take off your clothes in such a se-duc-tive way!” she says, drawing out the ‘seductive’ with an outrageous wiggle of her eyebrows. Shirley shrieks and turns away, blushing, her back to the other girls as they laugh at her embarrassment. “Thinking of Lulu?” teases Milly, prompting another round of laughter. Good. She doesn’t want them to notice her own blush, the look in her eyes as she takes in the sight of the other girl’s body. It’s only alright as long as none of them believe she’s serious. Spoiler for Suzaku/Euphie - lawl, I suck at SuzaEuphie: It’s drizzling, and the air smells fresh and clean like it always does after a thunderstorm. She peeks out from the overhang they’ve sheltered under, eyes wide and curious. “Isn’t it lovely,” she says, turning to him with a smile, “The way everything seems to come alive when it’s raining?” And it’s just like her to find something beautiful on a cold, grey, miserable day like this. He finds himself breaking into a smile, a laugh almost. When she turns to him with a pout, asking what’s so funny, he gives her a quick, chaste kiss that makes her blush.

2009-05-15, 00:04	Link #587
Nobodyman9 Banned Join Date: Jul 2008 Location: U.S.A. Age: 36	Speaking of lol, here's my completed Luluko song. Remember it's set to the beat of the Beach Boys' Kokomo. Spoiler for size: Kalulu, Shirlulu, ooh I wanna do you Eululu and CluClu, maybe I can do you Milulu, Kagulu, do not wanna do you Oh Lulu Off the status of quo There’s a thing called Luluko Not where we wanna go if we can help it at all Lulu is a girl Long locks and flowing curls A frilly skimpy dress And some petite little breasts Down in Luluko Kalulu, Shirlulu, ooh I wanna do you Eululu and CluClu, maybe I can do you Milulu, Kagulu, do not wanna do you Ooh, you do not wanna go to Luluko We’ll get there fast And then your mind will blow That’s where we shouldn’t go Way down in Luluko Nu-nalu a little loli too I give you this plea Don’t let your mind go all crazy I can assure you this ain’t really what you wanna see Lulu’s girly buns Will ruin your shipping fun Gender-bending too Isn’t so good for Lulu Way down in Luluko Kalulu, Shirlulu, ooh I wanna do you Eululu and CluClu, maybe I can do you Milulu, Kagulu, do not wanna do you Ooh, you do not wanna go to Luluko We’ll get there fast And then your mind will blow That’s where we shouldn’t go Way down in Luluko Su-zalu, that yaoi make me “ew” Everybody knows A nasty thing called Luluko Now if you wanna go And smash your brains on the wall Go down to Luluko Kalulu, Shirlulu, ooh I wanna do you Eululu and CluClu, maybe I can do you Milulu, Kagulu, do not wanna do you Ooh, you do not wanna go to Luluko We’ll get there fast And then your mind will blow That’s where we shouldn’t go Way down in Luluko Kalulu, Shirlulu, ooh I wanna do you Eululu and CluClu, maybe I can do you Milulu, Kagulu, do not wanna do you Ooh, you do not wanna go to Luluko I tried to make a connection between Luluko and the mainstream ships, but then again, since it's lol, I guess it doesn't have to make a whole lot of sense

2009-05-15, 20:59	Link #588
snowdevil_crow Wielder of Cucumbers Join Date: Feb 2009 Location: Canada	Spoiler for LuluCC - interrupted showers: After spending over four hours in a hot, stuffy knightmare, clad in spandex and a suffocating mask, there was nothing Lelouch liked better than to come home to a nice, warm, cleansing shower. He leaned back into the spray, feeling all the grit and grime falling away under the warm water, utterly content. The bathroom door opened without warning, and a hand pulled the shower curtain away. “You’re using up all the hot water,” CC informed him as he squawked indignantly and attempted to cover himself up, blushing furiously. She let the curtain fall back and left without another word. Spoiler for SuzaLulu - angggst, Turn 17: Suzaku’s hands have always been strong. Tanned from the sun, rough and callused from climbing trees and handling weapons, scarred from years of fighting. These hands, touching him. Pulling him up a hill. Patting his hair awkwardly. Tickling his ribs. Caressing his face. Smoothing over his chest and back. Making him gasp and moan in pleasure. These hands, shaking on the gun. These hands, dragging him to his father and holding him down as he screams and begs. These hands, firing on his army. This hand, held out for him to grasp, willing to pull him up again. Lelouch reaches – Last edited by snowdevil_crow; 2009-05-15 at 21:40. Reason: another one

2009-05-17, 11:39	Link #590
Lunara Pure Beauty Join Date: Sep 2008	I read and reviewed your chapter. A pure win chapter. __________________

2009-05-14, 20:38	Link #582
Kid Ying Pon pon pon Join Date: Apr 2009 Location: Rio	Honestly, if you get to read the chapter when Kallen and Milly discover the pleasures of adult life together and NOT get embarassed, then stick with it... Or not, cause the whole thing is really baaad, okay, sounds nice at first, but then it's like a big porn movie... Without the movie! Just with the bad acting and GREAT storyline(?). Also, sometimes it's veeeery cluclu, but that was expected.

2009-05-14, 21:26	Link #583
snowdevil_crow Wielder of Cucumbers Join Date: Feb 2009 Location: Canada	Lol, is it that bad? I haven't read it in awhile, I don't quite remember. I found it kind of amusing... I remember being disappointed when it didn't turn out to be all just a dream or something, I prefer Lelouch when he's Zero. Uh, might wanna look out for the Lulu/Tianzi, actually, just remembered that... um.

2009-05-14, 22:38	Link #584
Nobodyman9 Banned Join Date: Jul 2008 Location: U.S.A. Age: 36	LOL, well I've been reading it, and all I can say is...well, it's kind of a guilty pleasure goofball fic. I mean, there's no way any of it would occur canonically (is that a word?) but it is good for some laughs and cute moments. Also, it is very well written.

2009-05-14, 23:42	Link #586
Kid Ying Pon pon pon Join Date: Apr 2009 Location: Rio	Well, it's good for the lol, i give you that. Maybe i exaggerated about how bad it is, it's just... Well, i can't get in the right mood reading this. I don't know, i have to read without the biased eyes of "That's fucking impossible AND NO HUMAN BEING WOULD ACT LIKE THIS!" maybe it'll get better then.

2009-05-16, 21:14	Link #589
Lord_Bear Senior Member Author Join Date: Jan 2009 Location: Australia	Update: Phase 12. =D Title: Code Geass: The Game of Kings Rating: T Pairing: Lelouch/Kallen Genre: Suspense/Thriller Summary: The lines between player and piece have become blurred with the scars of sacrifice; the world destined to descend into even greater chaos as two enemies return to the board to rearrange their pieces. Sometimes, nobody knows who the enemy King truly is. Progress: 12 chapters complete at ~100,000 words total.

2009-05-18, 00:49	Link #591
Lord_Bear Senior Member Author Join Date: Jan 2009 Location: Australia	Thanks!

2009-05-18, 01:04	Link #592
Nobodyman9 Banned Join Date: Jul 2008 Location: U.S.A. Age: 36	Yep, I read and reviewed your chapter as well Lord Bear. Good job. One thing I did forget to mention in my review is that you did make a canonical error. Shirley wasn't orphaned after the Narita incident. Only her dad died. Her mother was still alive and she was actually survived by her mother. Sad.

2009-05-18, 01:06	Link #593
Lord_Bear Senior Member Author Join Date: Jan 2009 Location: Australia	Cheers! I actually had Shirley's mother die in the FLEIJA blasts, though.

2009-05-19, 00:57	Link #598
ATP Junior Member Join Date: May 2009	Hi, I've been working on this for some time now, but the lack of responses (as in FF.net) was quite disheartening. The fact is, I've been writing a crossover between Code Geass and... and TWILIGHT. Yes I am a crossoverer. No I am not a fangirl/boy. I am an anti. So far, I've gotten quite a few mild insults, though not necessarily flames, by this endeavor. Do you here think that this is a lost cause?

2009-05-19, 01:44	Link #600
ATP Junior Member Join Date: May 2009	^^ I am an anti-Twilighter. Actually I've written out seven to eight chapters of this xover. On FF.net there are only two CG/Twilight xovers. The longer one is mine. As far as it goes, the idea is fleshing out all right. Here it is. http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4886489/...e_Insurrection