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Swordy Turkey
Join Date: Jan 2011
Location: Where turkeys can actually fly
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He's just a useless engineer who isn't even in the ISA. Also, I would like to make a suggestion: Since we have an OC index, why not make a fanfiction index? Last edited by theflyingturkey; 2011-02-14 at 04:02. |
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2011-02-14, 04:07 | Link #222 |
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Join Date: Aug 2009
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Finally done...I might included more weapon pack(We need MISSILES and LASER)in the future EDIT: Added some lacking information(Not important,but it's needed to make him a 100% trap...)because I forgot Last edited by Dragonkid11; 2011-02-14 at 23:58. |
2011-02-14, 06:41 | Link #223 |
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Oh, delicious, another irregular for Lamby to *cough*stalk!*cough.*
Don't make too many smooth moves, e.g. acquire his own harem, or else Lamby's gonna have to ask the obvious question: how can one engineer be amassing his own private stable of IS pilots, so easily? There MUST be something DEVIOUS going on here!
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2011-02-14, 06:48 | Link #224 | |
Swordy Turkey
Join Date: Jan 2011
Location: Where turkeys can actually fly
Age: 30
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2011-02-14, 06:49 | Link #225 | |||||||||||
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Join Date: Dec 2008
Location: 346Pro
Age: 38
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Pahlawan is very close to what I had in mind, but Askari too. At this point, I guess Askari Battle Armor may be a better idea. Quote:
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The Real Karon is closer to Tsukasa from Amagami. She has a calm and confident demeanor which is bothersome as people often see it as cold and calculative. Karon has come to suppress it and let Imouto handle her interpersonal communications. Once you factor that into the conversation and enter mindspace, this is what you see: Karon Imouto: ...B is not flat. It's not flat! The Real Karon: Ara, that is not in character. Imouto: Heh?! But Onee-chan... Real: It should have been (changes voice to Imouto's pitch) 'A flat chest is a rarity and a symbol of great demand!' (changes back to usual deadpan) You have much to learn before you are a true Imouto. Maria must happen to wander into the strangest places, like the men's bathroom. *scribbles faster* Quote:
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2011-02-14, 08:02 | Link #226 | |
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http://forums.animesuki.com/showpost...&postcount=220 Her. Mysterious "Counter Guardian" and resident stalker, who pwn5 the scrubs usually in dazzling 100+ hit combos.
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How she does it is plain to see, considering her IS is on the level of Silver Gospel, except specialized purely as an Anti-IS unit, for Zero Shifting Gates of *** stabbity-stab action. "Remarks: know your place, WORMFOOD. OBLITERATE. DIE. DIE. DIE. DIE the DEATH. DEATH is the great EQUALIZER."
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2011-02-14, 09:28 | Link #227 | |
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Join Date: Dec 2008
Location: 346Pro
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"Remarks: know your place, WORMFOOD. OBLITERATE. DIE. DIE. DIE. DIE the DEATH." The last blade lance through Merlion's chest and dug into the hull of the IS. Karon screamed red blood. "Kha!!" Saji hollered and dove at the tactical console again, but was held back by Three Diagram and Sherry. "DEATH is the great EQUALIZER!!" She cackled as the hulk of an IS fell on her knees. "Arara." Lambda switched to a delighted sneer. "Oh, so you still can move, Shooting Star Girl." Gou spat out some bloodied dirt. "Oh yes, I can. What a waste of breath this has been..." "'Rules'... 'Order'... 'Punishment'..." Karon laughed. "They are excuses used by those too weak to lead on their own." "What did you say?!" "Yes, I want power... Yes, I want to bring order and justice to this twisted world..." Merlion creaked to her feet. "But..." The IS frame grasped the blade cruxifying pilot to armor. "I never doubted my friends to come through in the end!!" Gou roared as she yanked the weapon free in a shower of blood. "I believe in myself who believes in them!!!" Karon cast Ea away. "As long as I do that, I, no, we cannot be defeated!" Karon pulled out her control yolk, barely remaining conscious as the IS kept her body out of shock. "Let's go, Imouto!" The AI materialized her silver self beside her pilot, grasping a similar device. "Yes, Onee-chan!" "Third Shift, set up!" They screamed with their entire beings, thrusting their cores into the air. “APPRIPOISE!!” The twin drives resonated and exploded into brilliant pink, shockwaves washing out in all directions, striking Lambda with such force that even Ea had to struggle to remain in one spot. “They have achieved Third Shift?!” The Merlion jettisoned its shattered armor and absorbed the blades, remolding and reforming the debris anew. Starting with the overhead claws, the triplet Yggdra Engines washed rainbows over the wounded body, heralding its second birth. The Matador bazookas exploded and reformed as Strike Cannons; the Leopards claws became adorned with brilliant gold. And Karon's shredded inner suit dissolved into golden butterflies. “Dazzling the stage!” A lavish skirt rolled down the girl’s hips in a tumble of shining stars. “The Galactic Pretty Boy!!” An equally-Baroque blouse blinked around her small frame. “MERLION! RE-BOOOOOOORNS!!” “A girl can be a Galactic Pretty Boy?!” Rachel exclaimed. "Since you insist on this false path," the AI and pilot of Merlion Reborns shouted in unison. "I'll just have to shatter that illusion of yours with my claws!!" ~~~~~~ Karon woke with a start. Another weird magical girl dream?! "That's the last time we're having Rin's mudpies before lights out!!" "Heeeh!!" Imouto groaned. ~~~~~~ (OOC: Heh... Too much crack for one night)
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2011-02-14, 11:24 | Link #230 | ||||
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Join Date: Nov 2007
Age: 35
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I tried drawing Helena, but it wasn't as good with pencil marks and smudges all over the place. Spoiler for Helena:
I created a mess of the pic because I could not decide on her hairstyle and hair-decs. Her wolf ears hairband is a little hard to draw....maybe I'll give up for now and draw Kari first.
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2011-02-14, 12:06 | Link #231 |
Dictadere~!
Join Date: Oct 2010
Location: On the front lines, fighting for inderpendence.
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I've been continually downgrading my IS to keep it fair and quite frankly, fun. It's not all to entertaining in a battle when your IS can drop an opponent with ease whenever the pilot decides it's go-time.
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2011-02-14, 13:16 | Link #232 | ||
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Join Date: May 2009
Location: Mauritius
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Blargh, characters popping up here and there. Woot, omg!
Time to REVISE The OC Chart... with lots more details! So I was tired of having to link to different posts every single time. When someone thinks his OC is complete, could he either compact everything in one post or put it up on google docs? Here's the new and updated OC Character List. Of course, as it is Alex Hikari that's writing it, the Omega Division's stamp is on it. :P Infinite Stratos Canon Universe Character List! Quote:
Silver Maiden and Lumine are still stronger than your generic IS, but I'd suggest you guys to see them like "late level" units. The pilots themselves might appear early (if Houki getting Aka Tsubaki is early in your fic), but should mostly not be using their IS because either they're "Somewhere else" or "Busy doing other stuff". The same would go for Alex, although as I did say before, stick him into the trainer IS for his early appearances. Belial should show up later perhaps. JE's Gilgamesh-tan is kinda balanced in the way that she isn't always your "nice guy". She's the wild card, attacking allies and foes alike, so we might get her to fight us at one time. *Imagines epic fight between Gilgamesh-tan and the three Omega Division members.* Of course, hilarity would ensue as Haruka would STILL be acting like the Onee-san to Alex, yelling orders at him (well, she's higher ranked technically, being a Captain vs Alex being a Lieutenant). Meister, I don't think Imouto could handle Ea alone... if ever you plan on fighting her in your story, you should have quite a lot of people to handle her... being made by JE, she DOES border on SRW limits. XD Quote:
I then played the Infinite Stratos Vids in HQ, screenshotted parts where the girls or Ichika did a nice pose, and proceeded into shooping everything together. Also, to the other authors: About the relationship developments for my chars outside of the circle between them, here's the sum up of my ideas (some are old): - Alex becomes a good friend with Edward. Often does a complaint chorus with Saji about the girls. Befriends Monori as well (he keeps his somewhat cold and stoic personality though) - Sarah becomes friends very fast with Charlottes (French Woman). She perhaps gets along very well with Erika as both are the "kind hearted" type. Gets along the Karon/Rachel/Helena group and joins it when she's not with Haruka and Alex perhaps? - Haruka, being Haruka, mostly cares about Sarah and Alex... She's sociable with everyone else, but doesn't seem to like bother talking to them too often. If we get a Yamato Nadesico, she might befriend her (Lyn was of that type). As for James, feel free to use the two chars. They do have a dark background that you can exploit in your alternate universe if you want. P.S: If guys think that the power levels for your IS is wrong, just tell me, I'll adjust it. Also, came up with the fan-fic index! Infinite Stratos Fan-Fiction List!
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2011-02-14, 16:25 | Link #233 | |||
OC Belka Scriptor
Join Date: Oct 2007
Location: Germany
Age: 40
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Ok or his stealth systems are actually good enough to fool her "hardened sensor suite intended to defeat all manner of stealth systems and ECM". Blame my incompetence in creating good stories and characters... but I totaly ran against a wall here... it makes my character feel somewaht obsolete, as he should be there as something threatening that could just appear out of nowhere. ... And... Well... we have Lambda for this role now, have we? Well at least both don't need to excist in the same universe. ^^ Quote:
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2011-02-14, 18:30 | Link #234 |
Dictadere~!
Join Date: Oct 2010
Location: On the front lines, fighting for inderpendence.
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Okay, so it has come to my attention that Alice's personality is quite bland. I edited it a tad, but I still find it unappealing and uninteresting. Someone, please help me out. I'm no good with this kind of thing (or really anything here for that matter ).
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Terminator, this Omega division you keep using, can you elaborate on it for me? It sounds like an interesting concept, and I've been thinking of making my own original organization for Alice to be associated with, and further her history, but I'm blank, and would like something to work around; that something being an idea-skeleton of your Omega Division's.
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Join Date: May 2009
Location: Mauritius
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Reaper would make a fine villain as he is. It's not Reaper that's the problem, James's Ea is actually the overpowered lady here. But as Ea's seems to be quite the "wild card", she isn't under control, and often acts as both good and bad guy. We can always remember that not everything boils down to IS combat when you're a villain. Reaper could easily sabotage like half of the school's IS or activate an "IS Activation Inhibitor" just to get his plan done. Or some other evil plan to get his objectives achieved. By the way Kyral, I would advise you to check Alex's Hikari biography, scroll down to the info on his IS, and look at Sovreign's Cousin. XD A fight between the two Stealth residents would be fun! Quote:
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As you can see, it's some form of "in the shadow" organization that meddles around, being "good" and "bad" guys at the same time. Alex's and Haruka's background story in their biography docs might enlighten you up on how it looks like. The organization ranges from Lawful Neutral to Chaotic Evil characters. I'm eventually planning for one last guy that might be quite an assistance to Reaper...
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2011-02-14, 21:22 | Link #236 |
Dictadere~!
Join Date: Oct 2010
Location: On the front lines, fighting for inderpendence.
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I was pretty much intending an onee-san at this point, but -being me- I have little ability to describe such a character.
Damn, Omega nearly covers everything I'd intend in an organization of my own. :\ Not only is it associated with America, it's underground, meaning that any other secretive groups wouldn't be too secret after all. And like in the old West, one town can sometimes be too small for the two of us.
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2011-02-14, 21:24 | Link #237 | |
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Honestly if this was say a One Year War thread like half the cast would be new types piloting custom gundams or something. I don't mind people having there own assigned IS, I'm not looking to be a Nazi, but Gen 3 is NEW. Units of that level are still rare and most models should be customized mass production units of late Gen 2 at most. Instead everyone and there mother is busting out one off Gen 3 or even higher super prototypes and crap. I can perfectly understand wanting to stand out a bit and tailor your fighting style, but there's a fine line between that and just ignoring the setting and becoming overpowered and unrealistic.
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2011-02-14, 21:32 | Link #238 | |
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Join Date: May 2009
Location: Mauritius
Age: 30
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Yukihura can manage one hit kills... it just needs to score a correct slash/hit. Same goes for my own units. The tech beyond Belial's mysterious abilities is what I'll explore in my fan-fic. It's been explained pretty much that Belial is a one of a kind experiment that yielded very high end weapons. Take in account that when screwing around with multiple units, Belial will fail, as it was made for short terms engagements. Other than that... as I listed in my list, I don't see so many "god" units. Mind giving us a complete list of what you think is overpowered? edit: Btw... Every single IS has an I-Field. XD
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2011-02-14, 21:40 | Link #240 | |
Dictadere~!
Join Date: Oct 2010
Location: On the front lines, fighting for inderpendence.
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He meant that it was strange that the cloak could also serve as an I-Field, not that it was strange that an I-Field was present.
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