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Old 2009-01-05, 04:33   Link #4861
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Percival? . Yeah, I just made a lot of changes on her barrier jacket and device. The first one was too plain. Well, to me at least...

Oh, since I'm at it, I'll repeat myself, her new device is called, "Blitz Fang Calibur"

I kinda rushed through it since I was asked by a friend to make a Vampire Knight sketch. I might go back and adjust some areas in the sketch later.

-EDIT-

I understand now what you meant about Ginga becoming the new Percival. ( ̄▽ ̄)
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Old 2009-01-05, 04:42   Link #4862
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Percival? . Yeah, I just made a lot of changes on her barrier jacket and device. The first one was too plain. Well, to me at least...

Oh, since I'm at it, I'll repeat myself, her new device is called, "Blitz Fang Calibur"

I kinda rushed through it since I was asked by a friend to make a Vampire Knight sketch. I might go back and adjust some areas in the sketch.

-EDIT-

I understand now what you meant about Ginga becoming the new Percival. ( ̄▽ ̄)
*sigh*, Code Geass will be Code Geass.

Some areas is about right. I would suggest the shoulders - the ballooning effect is being taken a little too far there, and the arm width in relation to the torso (which means you need to adjust both). Besides that, is it just me that the close up of Gin-nee has an unnatural pharaoh's chin? That might need a little fixing as well.

That's just a brief sweep, shan't criticise more than some idiot who hasn't drawn a thing in 2 and a half months should, really.
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Old 2009-01-05, 04:50   Link #4863
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Thanks for pointing out my mistakes ;D. And yes, Ginga's chin needs to be adjusted . As for the ballooning effect, I kinda did that in purpose. The reason for that is because there are metal plates inside...is that a bad idea? o_O
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Old 2009-01-05, 05:06   Link #4864
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Hur, sorry, I think it IS a bad idea.

Firstly: Barrier Jackets in and of themselves aren't needing of protection: They ARE protection.

Secondly, from an aethestic point of view, it looks a little huge no matter what reasons you give it. If it was meant to have metal plates, then all the more I think it'd be sleeker for it. And more importantly, it changes the way her shoulders look; it makes them unnaturally and unnecessarily wider, which, I'm afraid, isn't a very good idea.

Okay, next, the arms and the torso:

I think you can keep the torso, but in that case, you'll need to decrease the length (just a bit is fine), and the width of the arms (just a bit too.) Just remember that for most people, two arms should only equal the torso at its thinnest point, even for guys (unless it's a variation of the Buff Man, then that's different.) For this one, her arms equal her torso even at the Oppai Section, which is...well, kinda weird. You know, because Gin is supposed to be pretty fine there and all...?

As to the chin, filing off the hook at the end of her chin should resolve the issue, although one thing could lead to another while you're fixing it. It happens to me a lot; me and my self-made complications.

Lastly, I just noticed. Is the drill made of two seperated screwdriver-like segments? If it is, then I note some degree of perspective error; since Gin-nee has her hand out flat-horizontally, and not at an angle, then the further drill segment should be a bit lower down and be less thick than the foreground drill segment. Right now the difference isn't very large, and at the very tip of them, the visibility of the further drill should be near nil (if my perspective is not mistaken anymore), since it would be increasingly blocked by the foreground drill.
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Old 2009-01-05, 05:12   Link #4865
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Lastly, I just noticed. Is the drill made of two seperated screwdriver-like segments?
It's a blade drill if I'm not mistaken: Those are two flat hooked blades that rotate around the wrist to form a drill-like effect.
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Old 2009-01-05, 05:15   Link #4866
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Looks like I'm more relevant that I thought, then
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Old 2009-01-05, 05:15   Link #4867
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Wow =D. Thank you for the detailed explaination. It actually helps me what to watch out next time I make a sketch. I'll make the necessary adjustments later. Honestly though, I really appreciate you telling me my mistakes in the sketch.


Now then, after learning that I have to improve in many things...I have to do my best and improve (in other words, sketch a lot) while I'm still on vacation!.
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Old 2009-01-05, 05:20   Link #4868
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Wow =D. Thank you for the detailed explaination. It actually helps me what to watch out next time I make a sketch. I'll make the necessary adjustments later. Honestly though, I really appreciate you telling me my mistakes in the sketch.


Now then, after learning that I have to improve in many things...I have to do my best and improve (in other words, sketch a lot) while I'm still on vacation!.
Hur hur. It's my pleasure, (although it does give me pangs of guilt that I'm not doing anything with my own advice myself.)

...Maybe I should really get down to drawing again, preferably without jeopardizing my studies or my fic-writing. Suffice it to say that I cannot yet balance all three. Two or nothing is what I've got right now; and thus far drawing has been the main casualty XD

Oh well, maybe I could do one now since I'm not really doing much...mmm.
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Old 2009-01-05, 05:22   Link #4869
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Lord Mulloch furrowed his brow. "Wha hae ye praett aen boot?"

"As it so happens, that is an excellent example of the sort of thing I mean," Ginga said. "With all due respect, sir, you do not speak Midchildan."

"Las, nae ken ye t'lanj spooch t'ye plaean as dy?"

"Sir, the polite way to say it is that you have a burr, a lilt, a brogue, an accent. But that is an euphemism for the true problem, which is that you are not speaking Midchildan."
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Old 2009-01-05, 06:22   Link #4870
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Random Thought #2 (#1 is somewhere back there, too lazy to search)

A thought came to me while re-reading Katharine Kerr.

I wonder if it's possible (or canon) for telepathic conversations to convey hints of the speaker's current emotional state as well as any hidden thoughts. It's like the proverbial hearing the anger/fear/joy/etc in one's vocal voice/tone, but more tangible, since (AFAIK) the conversation links the minds of all parties involved, thus allowing each to greater access the others' inner thoughts/feelings. It's like how cooking, as depicted in manga and anime, is sometimes (or is it usually?) shown to convey the cook's internal state to the perceptive.

For thoughts like treachery and bloodlust, the listen might receive them in the form of a physical reaction or phenomenon that s/he associates with that kind of thought, like a sickeningly sweet stench for treacherous thoughts and a sharp pain for murderous ones.

In a way, it's like reading the other parties' minds, since that's what telepathy (in the usual sense) does. Of course, this theory automatically collapses if canon states that telepathic conversations are like talking over the phone or walkie-talkie and measures are in place to avoid invasions of mental privacy.
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Old 2009-01-05, 13:33   Link #4871
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And I return from a short trip back home .
Glad to see this place isn't all that dead. Though still a little lacking for what I was hoping for when I got back

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Unformatted as usual; will be when I post it on the internets in full.

Spoiler for It All Begins Here:
Ah, it continues . And now for the tie-in to the first season, huh?

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I has a brainchild!!! >=D This actually came to me just before I went to bed, I hope you like it.

It is a Subaru/Tiana one-shot that I wrote and dished out, so there will be errors.

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Mmm...WAFF :3

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It's part of my identity revision exercise I'm going through. I'm going to stop telling myself no I can't and move on, and that also involves trashing my past and the ingrained negative thinking. And since my internet ID is very much a part of me, the very first step I took was to attribute all my self-blame, misguided self-beating, and detached-from-reality self-perception to my other self named Kha, then erase his existence from the internet. Since Kha is such a big net-ID, the process is been slow.

It's not a whim of mine; this is part of the psychotherapy I'm going through to fix my ADHD and identity issues. We shouldn't see that sock-puppet account any more than we should from now on thus.

It has helped a bit. I'm actually starting to see some hope in my writing. I have never felt more... like I can do something right for once, for frankly the first time in my entire life, with my own power.

1,718 words. I can do this!
...sounds like something you should see a shrink about

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The Santa of the OC, huh?

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EDIT:

I guess I should tell all. So I was napping with meds still active, meaning sleep would be disturbed, but I was too tired so I knocked off.

Anyway I woke up thinking I was sleeping with Fate, but to my horror I realized it was Keroko-chan. @__@

Then I got "backrubbed" by Anita, Deed, Kaguya and Saber, if you know what I mean. @____@

Before I got my bearings, it ended with me getting Zambered by a dark!Fate. @___________@

Then I woke up again.

Yeah I know, WTF is going on. @_________@

Kha...seriously...don't fall asleep while on meds again. I think this confirms that you're nuts, in more ways than one. (And damn glad I was not part of your dillusion otherwise I'd have to mail you a RIDER KICK)

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lol I just had to do this

Spoiler for YUUSHA'OH SUBARU:
...

....

Oh lawd

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Ix: Oh Subaru, I made a song for you!

~ Na-Na-Na-Na-Na-Nakajima, Na-Na-Na-Na-Na-Nakajima~

Subaru: ...
Teana: Subaru's recording it!!!



*FLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEES*
*whacks Lowe with the IXA Knuckle*
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Old 2009-01-05, 18:26   Link #4872
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just to remind everyone that I'm not dead, a little drabble skit that suddenly popped into my head:

Spoiler for snippet:


For those wondering about the comments about device modes, picture of the device and modes in question is below. You work it out.

Spoiler for Device modes picture:
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Old 2009-01-05, 20:20   Link #4873
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I'm still around, just been busy with the holidays and some other things.

Looking over the Internal Affairs Department at the moment and trying to come up with a roughly final version, along with coming up with some general bios for the team I'm creating for a fanfic I plan to write.
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Old 2009-01-06, 04:19   Link #4874
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I'm back. :3

Happy New Year to everyone!

Suffice to say, I had a very fun Christmas Vacation. It always happens, but I can never stop marveling at how wonderful it feels to be at your hometown. There wasn't a single moment I was bored despite the lack of the internet and other common city commodities. I realized that I was only usually bored in the city due to the feeling of the lack of freedom there. At the province, I could do usually do anything I want, whenever I want at my leisure. I also had lots of open space and clean air too.

And the best part, the computer that we were using in a different place was brought back to our house! And of course, that means I was able to write a lot for my OC works!!! The combined progress count already exceeds 10,000 words on a couple or so of my fics. >=3

I remember that around last year I posted the first chapter of GenerationS during a similar time, which was around the start of the year as well. I also remember that I gave the fic as a belated birthday gift to both LoweGear and Keroko. Well, it looks like I have the birthday gifts again...

And thus, I, Aaron008R of the OCT Veterans, officially (tries to) gives a start-of-the-year kick start to the thread for the second time running! Let's go through the Year of the Ox at
ZENRYOKU ZENKAI!!!

HYPER BLUECHEESIUM!!!
BUSTAA CANNON!!!!!





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=MGLN StrikerS: Outer Cadia Episode Series=
~Solitary Perspective~

Spoiler for Episode 1: Part 1:


*commercial break*
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Old 2009-01-06, 04:21   Link #4875
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Spoiler for Episode 1: Part 2:


*Episode One: End*


This is the first of the number of works that I’ll be releasing/re-releasing this year. ’Solitary Perspective’ is basically my training and introductory fic to the StrikerS timeline. Using the same world as Kerokanon, I plan to make myself a few more ‘episodes’ of this fic as a fitting way of introducing my OC to readers without the need for a profile. It also gives me proper training in handling several different characters, since I’ll be playing with the StrikerS characters here. As for development, I just don’t plan on using this fic for OC-benefit, since I also plan on giving a couple or so characters some of my perceived development that weren’t developed satisfactorily in the series. Of course, I won’t be breaking what Canon has established in the events in StrikerS, I am simply inserting my own sub-episodes into StrikerS. As such, expect to see me insert my own idea of fun and development into the show thru these episodes. I can only hope that I don’t go too far off the Canon/Kerokanon mark with this. I won't make any big promises for now, except for maybe doing the best that I can currently do in making this fic as good as possible.

Of course, several thanks to Keroko for the OC’s Keroko-chan and Tesla; and also to Mercurianangel, who’s artwork I used here in my fic! Keroko! I finally got the groove (hopefully) to write with Keroko-chan too!

And above all, I hope the readers would enjoy reading my little piece of work.

Thanks in advance for reading, dear readers. And once again, HAPPY NEW YEAR!!!

Well, I'll be back after a bit. >:3


*Goes back to rebuilding his OC stocks and catching up with backlog*
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Old 2009-01-06, 05:12   Link #4876
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Well, I'll be damned!

AM I LIKE THE FIRST TO GREET AARON?!
HECK YEAH!!!!!

Dammit, I've never been first at anything of this sort XD...maybe I should thank my father, my mother (and not to mention my hayate fanboyism for ribbing me into coming back here!)

Anyway, congrats about your computer and your progress (Damn, you'll overtake my speed at this rate, even given that I've been relatively fast lately...filled in over 8000 words for Zenith's Chapter 2 while you were away...I should speed up.) You didn't have to talk about breaking Canon. Since when was Aaron a canonbreaker? XD

In other matters, I'll get down to reading Solitary Perspective later...(once I'm done with this jog among other things :3)

Anyway...

WELCOME BACK, BROTHER. WE HAVE MISSED YOU.


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Zenith Chapter 3 Progress Report
6,251 words (Plot-wise, I'm only 30% through or less what I intended to write in this chapter, so this worries me a little XD)

And that's all

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Old 2009-01-06, 05:17   Link #4877
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He dropped by IRC, welcomed back by Tempest and me. And I think that ATC was here and awake too ;3
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Old 2009-01-06, 05:20   Link #4878
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Hur. I considered that possibility already (and chose conveniently to ignore it, of course)

But since I was talking about ASuki only, I suppose you wouldn't fault me for being too presumptious I guess
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Old 2009-01-06, 05:24   Link #4879
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But since I was talking about ASuki only, I suppose you wouldn't fault me for being too presumptious I guess
Someone had to do it. I was too lazy to type in huge colored fonts. Well, it's not my kind of posting.

Page Claim!

I will post the profiles of the two main OCs featured in JourneyerS chapter 3.

For one of them, it was rather easy to find a pic that computed with her:

Spoiler for from the same race as Sieraza who was in chapter 2, but different tribe:


For the other, it will come later. Finding the suitable pic of a Goliath-sized three-eyed mercenary is a pain in danbooru.

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Old 2009-01-06, 08:30   Link #4880
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Ah damn, I forgot to put in Mercurian's drawing. D:

*quickly edits the second part to add the pic.*


@Xena: Thanks for the welcome.


EDIT: If Kha loves his new sig, I love my new avi!
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