Hangyaku no Soul Eater <Soul Eater of The Rebellion>

[wuhugm]

Original Title : 反逆のソウルイーター　～弱者は不要といわれて剣聖（父）に追放されました～
Author : Gyokuto
Status : 92 WN chapters
Length : 0.3 Million Japanese Characters

Webnovel : Syosetsu
Translation : NU

Spoiler for NU:

The Mitsurugi household was given the important task of guarding the demon gate by the emperor.

Sora Mitsurugi, who was the heir of the family, was called on to take the trial ceremony at the age of thirteen.

It’s a trial that he must overcome in order to learn the phantom blade style that was passed down the Mitsurugi household from generation to generation.

The other seven pupils of the same age who had taken the trial have all passed. And now only Sora remained.

His father, brother, fiancee, and a pair of siblings who have watched over him were all looking, as Sora’s trial ceremony solemnly began…

Spoiler for FAQ:

1. Is the MC OP?
Yes

2. Is this a harem?
Yes

3. Is there snusnu in this novel?
Yes

Great netori boi~

[Rinvelt]

Posted about it on the main thread, it's really dumb and badly written (as in, not the story (though it's bad too), but the structure of the text and story).

FAQ:
Will be
Yes
Yes

EDIT: Found the post

Originally Posted by Rinvelt

^I actually read that and it's so bad I just couldn't care to post anything here.
All the characters are illogical and the author loves to end chapters in a way that let you think there'll be something next chapter only to have a time skip and say what happened in a few lines. It almost always happens, it's just frustrating.
But yeah, it's really bad and I don't even understand why so many people like it.

[wuhugm]

^Oh, that's why it's familiar to me
I did search for the existing thread
So it was in syosetu thread
Thanks for the FAQ~

[wuhugm]

^^So I'm in ch 42 now, and I didn't find the problems you mentioned
My only complain is the H-scenes are totally skipped

[Rinvelt]

Won't say anything about what you think of the story and characters, it's subjective.
But the other thing I said about the time skips is objectively bad. If you don't mind, that's fine. But you can't say the problem isn't here.

[wuhugm]

^It isn't there
The time skip you said probably the one where the magician girl got confined and released, right?
It was there for a reason
You thought she was fine, but actually...

[Rinvelt]

^If there was only one, it wouldn't bother me so much.
Many times Sora is going to do something at the end of a chapter, then the next one everything happened and it's explained in a few lines.

[wuhugm]

^I noticed that
For example, Sora wanted to ask the oni girl what to do after she wakes up
But next chapter, they are already in negotiation with the guild
But it's not like it's just skipped for lulz
Everything is explained
Another example is when Sora wanted to get permission for his wyvern
But only dozens chapter later what happened to the wyver is explained
But again, all of them have explanations, just not in chronological order
This style doesn't bother me coz I binged it, but for daily readers it might be frustating indeed

[Rinvelt]

Well, as long as you're fine with it, it's a good thing.
I may not like the novel, but it's not like I want other people to not like it too.

[wuhugm]

^Black Maria had this style too
It was when Shizuru about to have threesome with best girls
And then next chapter is about dream world instead... and the dream arc went on for weeks
I was furious
I just wanted to know whether the threesome happened or not goddamnit, why must you insert this boring ass arc in between!?

Well, what I want to say is it's not "badly written" but just "author's style"
So it's not a flaw per se, but annoying indeed

[wuhugm]

Ah, I forgot to add the Tags
Netori yo Netori

[Darkwolf907]

^i also read the raw but i feel sorry to that ntr-ed guy

[wuhugm]

^Same

But the revenge and the MC here is I think the best of all revenge stories
Compared to that Recovery Magic MC for example

This MC, Sora, can compromise

[wuhugm]

Whew, finally read all chapters

The last few chapters are totally epic
I really like the idea of Onigashima, the hidden super force of the world

Btw, this got LN

[Garn]

The only bad thing I find is the typical problem of size, which seems to happen in a territory similar to part of Europe (with several countries next to each other), and although that happens in almost all novels, when they are like this one where the origin of all supernatural power comes from a single entity and that the antithesis is only one faction feels even smaller (all in Onigashima), the best example would be Zetsuen no Tempest.

I forgot, I was hoping that Sora's old fiancée did not end up being good, but it seems that this way, on the other hand, the sister of Sora's instructor needs some bad karma, say goodbye to Sora announcing that will be the wife of the father who exile him is not a good way to say goodbye.

[Darkwolf907]

Originally Posted by wuhugm

^Same

But the revenge and the MC here is I think the best of all revenge stories
Compared to that Recovery Magic MC for example

This MC, Sora, can compromise

What kind compromise ?

[wuhugm]

Ch 93 updated

Originally Posted by Garn

The only bad thing I find is the typical problem of size, which seems to happen in a territory similar to part of Europe (with several countries next to each other), and although that happens in almost all novels, when they are like this one where the origin of all supernatural power comes from a single entity and that the antithesis is only one faction feels even smaller (all in Onigashima), the best example would be Zetsuen no Tempest.

I forgot, I was hoping that Sora's old fiancée did not end up being good, but it seems that this way, on the other hand, the sister of Sora's instructor needs some bad karma, say goodbye to Sora announcing that will be the wife of the father who exile him is not a good way to say goodbye.

To me this is more like mainland Asia and Japan
Onigashima is Japan and the Empire is China, while the Kingdom MC's in is Korea

Ayaka is a bitch
But just like Miloslav, the badder the girl the higher the focus on her as a heroine
So, probably fiancee is still a heroine

Originally Posted by Darkwolf907

What kind compromise ?

Like the fact that MC hates Boukensha Guild for hiding the crime of his former party
But later when Stampede happens and the people follows the Guild's older without panicking
MC realized that what the Guild Master did was not really a mistake and MC temporarily joined hands with the Guild

Btw, what I like most is the sub-heroine branching
- MC wants to Netori former party member, but fell for her mom instead
- Noble girl got close to MC but MC got her sister instead

[Darkwolf907]

^Haha, i also laugh when i read that about sub heroines for the mom is she already with the mc, i remember the last time i read is mc still trying to raised all floag for her.
For the noble girl(princess?) i think author first made her pov first so mc can save the sister but i hope mc can get them together for shimaidon

Originally Posted by wuhugm

But the revenge and the MC here is I think the best of all revenge stories
Compared to that Recovery Magic MC for example

Really? what kind of different do you feel ?
For me i think recovery magic is the good

[wuhugm]

^Shimaidon and Oyakodon are still possible

I simply hate brainwashing
and in Recovery people are mostly black and white, either good or evil
Here everyone is gray, they have reasons to do "evil", well, maybe for the exception of his brother and fiancee

[Darkwolf907]

^im the opposite, brainwashing my favorite

in recovery, white end black is clear so i dont have any sentimental feeling with the revenged guy and brainwashing made it essier for mc get heroine and how ruthless mc when he use his brainwashing
In here, i sometimes feel sad for the revenged guy (example the party leader) beacuse as you said the evil is not really evil. Thats why for this kind of wn i always imagined mc doing not revenge but forgive instead, thought i see its really contradict