Nanoha FanFiction Discussion

[MaxwellDemon]

Originally Posted by Shigan

*Takes a thinker pose*

I shall consider this. I mean, I've got one of the lines already, all I need is the rest of the story...

Sounds easy enough.

Page claimed for inspiring one-liners.

[Akiyoshi]

Originally Posted by MaxwellDemon

Page claimed for inspiring one-liners.

Search for a compillation of Horatio Caine one-liners, it can help xD!

[RadiantBeam]

Originally Posted by Shigan

*Takes a thinker pose*

I shall consider this. I mean, I've got one of the lines already, all I need is the rest of the story...

Well.... we could always do a fic exchange, if that might help you with it.

[Shigan]

Originally Posted by RadiantBeam

Well.... we could always do a fic exchange, if that might help you with it.

Oh? Exchange how?

[RadiantBeam]

Originally Posted by Shigan

Oh? Exchange how?

Well.... I'd like to see the lead up to Yui's pic, if it's not too much for you. And in exchange, I'll write something you want to see, Shadowverse or otherwise. Lemons are a no go, obviously.

[Shigan]

Originally Posted by RadiantBeam

Well.... I'd like to see the lead up to Yui's pic, if it's not too much for you. And in exchange, I'll write something you want to see, Shadowverse or otherwise. Lemons are a no go, obviously.

Well, that Lutecia on seduction mission vs Takamachi-Harlaown family out on a celebration story would be awfully nice . But if you've already written it I'll just have to think of something, huehuehueee...

I'll see what I can do! I can't guarantee that it will be that exact line and Yui's exact scene, but I'm sure my shortfics skills needs some polish. Lets see what my lady Muse says .

[RadiantBeam]

Originally Posted by Shigan

Well, that Lutecia on seduction mission vs Takamachi-Harlaown family out on a celebration story would be awfully nice . But if you've already written it I'll just have to think of something, huehuehueee...

I'll see what I can do! I can't guarantee that it will be that exact line and Yui's exact scene, but I'm sure my shortfics skills needs some polish. Lets see what my lady Muse says .

PM me with your request/idea then, and I'll get down to it. Also, do we want to set a deadline, or just post it when we get it done?

[yuiseppe]

Originally Posted by NTFTH

Can you be bribed by anyone?

Of course, silly. It's the bribe that counts

Originally Posted by RadiantBeam

Darn it, I have nothing to bribe you with if I wanted to make a request!

And what, m'girl, makes you say that?

Originally Posted by RadiantBeam

Well.... I'd like to see the lead up to Yui's pic, if it's not too much for you. And in exchange, I'll write something you want to see, Shadowverse or otherwise. Lemons are a no go, obviously.

WHEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEeeeeeeeeee~~~~~~~~ 2 birds 1 stone!! XD *pats self on back for job well done*

Originally Posted by deathcurse

Very true . We should time our nudges to different days, so there's a constant stream of puppy-dog eyes and begging to sway Shigan's mind .

(.........OMG, I can't believe I missed that on my first look! XD I was so preoccupied with the hotness of the scene, but yes, I love the screwed up sleeves! Thanks for the continuity nod!)

psst I think it's working ;D

(and I think I'm a bit of a Vivio in the sleeves rolling area =_=)

[Shigan]

Originally Posted by RadiantBeam

PM me with your request/idea then, and I'll get down to it. Also, do we want to set a deadline, or just post it when we get it done?

Just post when it is done. To be frank, I'm no speedy writer due to the language barrier. English is truly a schizophrenic thing to handle when you're not burning in writing-moe. Secondly, I'm still on vacation and spends most of my time in arcades, bars and creameries xD. This does not make for a writy Shigan...

[RadiantBeam]

Originally Posted by Shigan

Just post when it is done. To be frank, I'm no speedy writer due to the language barrier. English is truly a schizophrenic thing to handle when you're not burning in writing-moe. Secondly, I'm still on vacation and spends most of my time in arcades, bars and creameries xD. This does not make for a writy Shigan...

Awesome, then. Especially since my bunny for DC is due to be posted in about four days, and I haven't even opened up Microsoft Word for it yet.

[Kagerou]

Alright, here we go. Thanks to __________ for this one.

Challenge: One-Shot, VivioxCinque, upon one confesses to the other. It must occur during or after the events of Vivid.

Note: Does not have to have a happy ending. Or a sad one. Just do the best you can XD.

I'll give everyone three days to post something up before I start deliberating the next one .

Have fun everyone! :3

[Justin_Brett]

...*throws in towel*

[shiroi mahotsukai]

Originally Posted by Kagerou

Alright, here we go. Thanks to __________ for this one.

Challenge: One-Shot, VivioxCinque, upon one confesses to the other. It must occur during or after the events of Vivid.

Note: Does not have to have a happy ending. Or a sad one. Just do the best you can XD.

I'll give everyone three days to post something up before I start deliberating the next one .

Have fun everyone! :3

I'll give it a go, can't promise anything though. My knowledge of Vivid could be held in a thimble but sounds like fun.

Edit: For the record how would Cinque address Vivio? And to clarify it doesn't matter what happens as long as one confesses to the other right?

[deathcurse]

Originally Posted by yuiseppe

psst I think it's working ;D

(and I think I'm a bit of a Vivio in the sleeves rolling area =_=)

Yes, I think so too!

(So am I, actually XD. I never button up my jacket sleeves because I keep scrunching them up all the time.)

Originally Posted by RadiantBeam

Awesome, then. Especially since my bunny for DC is due to be posted in about four days, and I haven't even opened up Microsoft Word for it yet.

You shouldn't tell me that!

Originally Posted by Kagerou

Alright, here we go. Thanks to __________ for this one.

Challenge: One-Shot, VivioxCinque, upon one confesses to the other. It must occur during or after the events of Vivid.

Note: Does not have to have a happy ending. Or a sad one. Just do the best you can XD.

I'll give everyone three days to post something up before I start deliberating the next one .

Have fun everyone! :3

My response to this challenge:

Spoiler for Courage to Speak:

Courage to Speak

“Cinque, I…” Vivio blushed, her cheeks turning as red as her left eye. She scuffed the toe of her nice leather shoe on the ground, adding another scratch on its beaten surface. “Um…I have something I need to say to you…”

Cinque blinked, scratching at her eyepatch absently. “Sure, Vivio. What do you need to tell me?”

“It’s…actually more of a…” Vivio’s voice fell softer and softer until she was barely audible as she mumbled, “…a confession…”

“…Okay…”

“I mean, I wasn’t going to say anything, but it’s been weighing on my mind, and I just can’t keep quiet about it.” A determined, very Nanoha-esque expression filled Vivio’s countenance as she straightened, lifting her chin as the blonde took a deep breath.

“I was the one who spilled orange juice on your favourite duster!”

Cinque stared, speechless.

“I’m sorry, but it’s your duster, you know—everyone wanted to wear it at least once! And I really didn’t see that glass on the counter when I did the cool swish with the coattails, and…Cinque? Why are you…Are those your knives? W-Wait, we can talk about this!!!”

Spoiler for Author's Note:

It's a confession!

[Moczo]

Originally Posted by deathcurse

My response to this challenge:

Spoiler for Courage to Speak:

Courage to Speak

“Cinque, I…” Vivio blushed, her cheeks turning as red as her left eye. She scuffed the toe of her nice leather shoe on the ground, adding another scratch on its beaten surface. “Um…I have something I need to say to you…”

Cinque blinked, scratching at her eyepatch absently. “Sure, Vivio. What do you need to tell me?”

“It’s…actually more of a…” Vivio’s voice fell softer and softer until she was barely audible as she mumbled, “…a confession…”

“…Okay…”

“I mean, I wasn’t going to say anything, but it’s been weighing on my mind, and I just can’t keep quiet about it.” A determined, very Nanoha-esque expression filled Vivio’s countenance as she straightened, lifting her chin as the blonde took a deep breath.

“I was the one who spilled orange juice on your favourite duster!”

Cinque stared, speechless.

“I’m sorry, but it’s your duster, you know—everyone wanted to wear it at least once! And I really didn’t see that glass on the counter when I did the cool swish with the coattails, and…Cinque? Why are you…Are those your knives? W-Wait, we can talk about this!!!”

Spoiler for Author's Note:

It's a confession!

... ... ....

*hug*

They don't have a word for how much I needed a good laugh today, dc. XDDDDDDDDD

[shiroi mahotsukai]

Well, here goes. My first challenge response.

Spoiler for I Didn't See That Coming:

“Huh? I’m sorry but could you repeat that please?”

“Cinque-san, will you tell me why?” Vivio’s brow was furrowed with determination as she stared at the fifth Combat Cyborg

“Why what exactly, Vivio?” if you looked closely you could almost see the little question mark floating around Cinque’s head as she tilted it slightly to one side.

“Why you joined the Nakajima family?”

“Most of my younger sisters went either there or to join the Church. I never thought Church life would suit someone like me very well but I couldn’t bear to leave my sisters.”

“Cinque-san, that’s… that’s really admirable.” Vivio’s face was almost, but not quite, luminescent as she looked up at the slightly taller girl. “Y-you know, this is… this is probably a good time to say this s-so here goes.” Vivio took a deep breath and the next words came in a rush, as though fighting to get out. “I’ve always thought that you were really admirable Cinque-san.”

“Thank you?” Cinque looked confused, her one visible eye darting around the small room constantly, deliberately avoiding making eye-contact.

“So you see, I-I wanted to say this now, while we’re alone, really alone.” Another deep breath, “I like you Cinque-san, I’ve liked you for a long time now.” Face flaming Vivio turned away looking for the entire world as though she were terrified of the Cyborg’s answer.

But no answer came.

Vivio waited,

And waited,

But still nothing, steeling her resolve Vivio chanced a glance over her shoulder – and stared. Her eyes staring wide the Combat Cyborg Cinque lay on the floor of the room out stone cold.

“Brilliant Vivio-chan, brilliant.” A voice boomed from the entryway.

“Was that sort of what you were expecting, Hayate-san, Sein-san?”

“Yes, yes! And the best part, I got it all on video!”

Spoiler for Author's Notes:

You can't trust them... any of them.

[Nanya01]

Well, here's my entry into the challenge.

Spoiler for The Breakup:

Vivio blinked as Cinque looked at her. "Um, yes?"

"I'm sorry, Vivio. We just can't do this anymore."

Vivio gasped as she looked at the cyborg. "Bu... But... We always do this!" Her eyes teared up as Cinque shook her head. "Bu... But, why?"

"I'm sorry, but it's just not working out."

"Is it because I'm so young?" Vivio sniffled softly.

"That's... Part of it." Cinque nodded slowly. "But, it's mostly because I'm going to be gone for a few months on deployment."

"Then..." Vivio sniffled as her eyes teared up.

"Yes. No more Super Soaker battles."

Spoiler for Comments:

What?

[NTFTH]

Originally Posted by Nanya01

Well, here's my entry into the challenge.

Spoiler for The Breakup:

Vivio blinked as Cinque looked at her. "Um, yes?"

"I'm sorry, Vivio. We just can't do this anymore."

Vivio gasped as she looked at the cyborg. "Bu... But... We always do this!" Her eyes teared up as Cinque shook her head. "Bu... But, why?"

"I'm sorry, but it's just not working out."

"Is it because I'm so young?" Vivio sniffled softly.

"That's... Part of it." Cinque nodded slowly. "But, it's mostly because I'm going to be gone for a few months on deployment."

"Then..." Vivio sniffled as her eyes teared up.

"Yes. No more Super Soaker battles."

Spoiler for Comments:

What?

Poor Vivio

[sniperk]

My 2 Cents then.

Spoiler for Miss:

"I like you." The Hegemon descendant pronounced to the mismatched eyed girl in front of her. Seeing that no response came, she smiled wryly and turned her back walked away from younger girl, turning around the corner.

When the little blonde saw the other's back turning the corner after that confession, she just ran with all her might and, upon turning the corner, closed her eyes and screamed at the top of her lungs. "I LIKE YOU TOO!!!"

The silverhaired girl's single non-eyepatched eye widened when the little blonde appeared out of nowhere in front of her and shouted that phrase. "Hmm... Vi-" She tried being cut out by the younger Takamachi.

"I'm very sorry for not saying anything back there, but I was just so happy that my mind simply went blank. I had to answer it today otherwise it would be meaningless after the tournament and I can't bear the thought of going on with this without ever knowing if the true meaning behind the words you said to me are really what they meant or if I'm going bananas, so I want to accept..."

She was startled when she felt a hand on her shoulder. Looking up she saw a different person than she was expecting. "Cinque...?" She realized what she had just said that the person she was talking to wasn't who she thought she was.

And that the target of her outburst was walking away even faster now. Cinque simply watched as Vivio dashed after her, not too sure of what just happened.

Spoiler for Author Note:

Erm... No eggs or tomatoes, please.

[Craxuan]

Eggs and tomatos AND stones it is. To the pitchfork!

I kinda fried my brain when I went crazy with a MMORPG game last night, so not today... Need sleep...