Nanoha FanFiction Discussion

[Van Silverlight]

Originally Posted by Lhklan

Look, I'll just point out a few problems I saw okay?

- First, how does the OC "can erase The corrupted program in reinforce Eins completely without harming anybody and reinforce Zwei still will born though"? Where does he get such an ability? Born with it, modified human, etc...

- Second, how does he even know it would work? Because the BoD has been around for so long, there's bound to be people who tried and failed to cure it.

- Third, how does he even know HOW to use said ability? I mean, he can't just suddenly know how to use it. (Except in case of modified human)

- Fourth, if he can use it and he KNOW it would work, why come out NOW? Why not seek out and disarm the BoD a long time ago? Or alternatively, why doesn't whoever came up with this method solve the BoD?

- Fifth: Why is he even on Earth anyway? It's a backwater planet far out of the TSAB juridiction. And relatively unknown too.

That's just five problems I got by just glancing at the concept.

i will answer your questions in the story that i will write soon.Hopefully!XD

[Van Silverlight]

By the way,did yuuno ever mention about his family/close relatives in the series?

[Gx Hero]

Like I said about Zwei you have to break off from cannon to get that right. The materials are manifestations of the corrupt defense program, or was it the Unlimited Dark program from gears of destiny, well in short make it where Zwei is born as a result of destroying the corruption in the tome of the Night sky.

Also as for how an OC would know how to destroy the corruption of the book of darkness, how much about it dose anyone truly know, a forgotten fail safe to turn off the defense program long enough to remove it. Heck maybe the oc is a descendant of the one who added it and it cannot refuse the command of their descendant master or no.

It can be done, but making sense of it in the story i another matter because two other authors I know of have actually had the defense program destroyed and reinforce eins live.

[Van Silverlight]

HUHU,you will see my friend,how i am going to twist this story.

[Van Silverlight]

Regarding the idea of letting Clyde Harlown to stay alive,i think i'm gonna toss that idea.

[Gx Hero]

it was an idea for anyone to use. But thank you for actualy considering the idea even if breifly

[Van Silverlight]

Too many "suprisingly" survived characters gave me headache,better pick one only

[Van Silverlight]

I think today Nanoha series are no longer about magical girls.It's about magical woman!

[Akiyoshi]

Originally Posted by Van Silverlight

I think today Nanoha series are no longer about magical girls.It's about magical woman!

Who use lots of robotic stuff and fight non-magical threats.

[Van Silverlight]

luckily it doesn't use "mahou shoujo" in its title anymore.

[Van Silverlight]

I think i got the idea how to start my story but don't know how to write it/how to describe it.Can you guys help me?here the material,cold weather with snow falling heavily from the sky,Hayate's parent just return from honeymoon by car.They drive on the road alone without other vehicle on the road.They talking among themselves.Suddenly,hayate's father push the brake,stopping the car from hitting someone/a kid laying on the road.They got out of the car.Check the kid condition and the end of the story.(P:S,Hayate was still not born during this time but her mother already pregnant with her.)

[FlameSparkZ]

Good to see the FF thread is still going strong

Been working on a little something (I think I mentioned this before), my own take on the final stages of the Belka era, based off the information provided by the anime, mangas, and psp games.
Obviously, it'll have quite an amount of OCs from that era (Kings, knights, etc).
I'll also be doing illustrations of certain scenes.

Anyway...I might post it soon, provided something doesn't distract me

[Gx Hero]

Hey I was wondering why there are few stories about either Fate's job as in enforcer which involves going after lost logia, or the missions that Nanoha and cast have between A's and Strikers.

For the Fate stories it seems appropriate since the first two seasons the lost logia were what brought the characters together. I don't like though when Fate's job is made into where she is an undercover agent which several stories have annoyed me of especially when it doesn't fit her personality.

Sorry about that it has annoyed me recently.

One of favorite stories involving Fate is Case of the murderous murder.

[Van Silverlight]

Can I ask you guys something?Did TSAB accused Hayate as a criminal in the Book Of Darkness accident?

[Gx Hero]

Yes only because Hayate lied about making SIgnum and the others hunt for linker cores. This is no doubt to make their punishment lighter after all if they did it on their own it may have meant that the judges saw it was a natural instinct and that they would later do it again. So yes Hayate made herself guilty to spare her knights

[Van Silverlight]

Hey,does anybody know how big mid-childa is?

[Gx Hero]

no And I doubt there is any reference to the size. though if I had to guess its is probably earth size, perhaps smaller perhaps bigger slightly.

[DKN117]

It's not Nanoha-verse canon, but in one of my mega-crossover stories, I gave size and age comparisons between Earth, Midchilda, and Reach (Halo-verse; data is Bungie/343i canon):

DIAMETER:
Earth: 12,742 KM
Midchilda: 11,947 KM
Reach: 15,273 KM

AGE:
Earth: 4.5 billion
Midchilda: 3.7 billion
Reach: 1.1 billion

Does that sound reasonable?

[Ickarium]

Pretty much the only canon info is Mid has one large continent only. Whether it's the size of Asia, or a Pangaea and the size of all of Earth's continents or what isn't said.

[Van Silverlight]

True.They didn't gave enough info on its size.