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Old 2004-02-20, 04:28   Link #1
PeppstaR
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Working with new styles again

Here's my character again in another style.


I'll post it up again once it's colored.
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Old 2004-02-20, 04:46   Link #2
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ok, seems my tired eyes may be playing games with me.. but i kinda note that her right shoulder looks too big, and that her right arm seems to be at a not so comfy angle.... but you're the artist..

... 2hrs sleep before i got to go back to work @ 4.
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Old 2004-02-20, 07:43   Link #3
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I like it, shoulder dosnt look bad to me, looks like shes leaning it this way in kinda an over done sexy walk thing. (that that over done is bad, its just not how normal people walk :P this is anime of corse ) Are you gonna color this one as well? I wanna see it colored
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Old 2004-02-20, 09:57   Link #4
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yeah, I'd like to see it colored as well, you do a really good job with that.
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Old 2004-02-20, 15:42   Link #5
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Agree with Mundain there, the curvature of her bodyline doesn't look real. It doesn't look like a natural pose. Everything else is good.
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Old 2004-02-20, 15:57   Link #6
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Thanks for the feedback guys.

Yeah, if you look at her hip line, it's angled to where her right (our left) is dropped and her shoulder on the same side is raised to give that "sexy walk thing" effect.

I will be coloring this soon, maybe this weekend.
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Old 2004-02-20, 15:59   Link #7
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BTW- Asura... good to see you around again ^_^
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Old 2004-02-20, 17:32   Link #8
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man, that's a nice drawing... she looks really really sexy..yeah, that's really cool
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Old 2004-02-20, 21:27   Link #9
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I like your draw ^^ she looks very cute to me
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Old 2004-02-20, 22:30   Link #10
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wow this is nice. i like the eyes. there seems to have life in it.
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Old 2004-02-20, 23:19   Link #11
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thats hot. it would be hotter if i could see her legs too. yup, the whole thing. but yeah its pretty sexy. but dont you think shes leaning back a bit too much? yeah i know its a whole stylized pose but i think if you alter the amount of lean it would be perfect and the rest of the legs too.
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Old 2004-02-21, 03:16   Link #12
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Quote:
Originally Posted by PeppstaR
BTW- Asura... good to see you around again ^_^
domo. though i'm around, i may not be posting any new stuff. overloaded @ work and waay too tired by the time i got home.
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Old 2004-02-21, 05:12   Link #13
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It's a nice style, I like your lines and stuff... (I simply can't do lines like that o_O)


Of course, I would kill to have such a thin waist. Gawd... does anything outside of Barbie dolls have such thin waists? o.o

Like Asura said, the shoulder on the left (from this POV - it's her right shoulder really) looks a bit out of place, but it is possible, if you picture it... yeah... aesthetically it may look a bit odd, but it's perfectly fine. Doesn't have to be a generic pose either.

The only real suggestion I have is, to make her sexier, you might want to give her a bit of a bust-lift The left breast (from this POV) is a little saggy, IMO. But yeah.

It's a great pic overall. Gee, I wish I'd put in the effort to draw again.
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Old 2004-02-21, 05:59   Link #14
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personally i think it looks pretty good but isnt she a tad to skinny?
kinda reminds me of that aeon flux thing but its just her stomach

overall though she looks awesome
WAY better then i could do
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Old 2004-02-21, 15:10   Link #15
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That's incredible...*is envious*
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Old 2004-02-21, 15:40   Link #16
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woah woah...wow!
amazing...perfect!
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Old 2004-02-21, 19:16   Link #17
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very nice, Peppstar. I really like this style a lot, maybe even better than any previous ones.
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Old 2004-02-21, 19:25   Link #18
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I like this one alot! IMO much better than your last style attempt (though that one was good too!) What I really like about this picture are the breasts, the problem with your last one was that they seemed to defy the laws of gravity while these are much more realistic! Kudos, shes very sexy
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Old 2004-02-22, 01:11   Link #19
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it looks like mari cary and thats why i hate it pose looks like one of her dumbass poses that just pisses me off thinking about it
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Old 2004-02-22, 20:59   Link #20
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Thanks for the comments.

As for the rest of her legs... it's already to the edge of the paper. I would work it out on a larger sheet, but I'm too lazy.

Mari Cary? That porn star that ran for governor?

Anyways, I'll post the color version soon.
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