2011-08-17, 08:08 | Link #33861 |
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.... that was adorable to the point of absurdity. Olivie must be a fantastic mother.
Overall a very good chapter, as usual. There was one passage that struck me as 'off', but for whatever reason I can't find it right now. I'll shoot you a PM if I do.
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2011-08-17, 08:49 | Link #33862 |
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True enough, indeed. I don't want to make it too cracky since in all honesty, when it comes to actual published work I'm not that good at crack. But I would like to keep it as a humor piece instead of something serious, so maybe I'll just bend the rules of how someone would react in that situation.
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2011-08-17, 09:19 | Link #33863 | |
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The second cranks it up so high the scale breaks.
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2011-08-17, 10:14 | Link #33864 |
Test Drive
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Ask Moczo about our AIM or text conversations, he'll tell you just how cracky I can get when I'm bouncing off of someone else for ideas and character interaction. But when it actually comes to writing it by myself, I'm always worried that I'll cross the point where it's not so much funny as it is forced, which makes me wary of writing it at all. Especially since a lot of the time, it's hard to tell when you cross that line.
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2011-08-18, 14:46 | Link #33865 |
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Sure is quiet.
Been slightly distracted. and, just an update notice, for those who care... I gave Yasanagi the next Material Days script, so, Material Days should update sometime in the next few days, depending on a few things. Red Peek's Mini-Arcs: Yagami Mid Four Dwell Takamachi Scrya Start Scrya 2 Scrya 3 Scrya 4 Spoiler for Blood That Flows - Peek - Scrya End:
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2011-08-18, 17:39 | Link #33866 |
Under Death by College
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Yuuno's not learning very quickly is he? Still, that reminded me of my own brother and sister though from people at a reasonable age it's much cuter and seems to emphasize the family aspects a lot.
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2011-08-18, 17:50 | Link #33868 | |
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*got hit with a Fireball* HOT!!!!*looks around* Who did that? *sound of silence* oh well, the scene where Erio meeting Caro kinda reminded me about one of Ranma and Akane quarrels: inserts foot in mouth and female reacts badly. At least no Mallet-sama popping left or right.
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2011-08-18, 18:45 | Link #33869 |
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@Raiser or any person that want to pick up the idea of the VivioXYuuno (who won't vomit at this proposal/idea)
It was said that Yuuno had no parents (or we can assume that either his parents died during his childbirth or was abandoned) and raised by the Scrya tribe. Now, if he was a heir to royal lineage of MidChilda, or has the bloodline from the original founders of the civilisation. Vivio, we know is of he Royal Belkan blood, so if the two were to have kid(s) together, wouldn't that make a awesome mage, containing a hybrid MidChilda/Belkan compared to TSAB mages of using one or having small elements of both?
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2011-08-18, 19:14 | Link #33870 |
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Well I had considered the possibility that Yuuno might be of the Saint Kaiser lineage (based on his resemblance to Vivio). That might just add squick to it, I suppose.
In Daemon Kaiser, the original idea was for Volvo to possess Yuuno. However later on I considered the idea that Yuuno was indeed dead, but Volvo just looks like him because he's Yuuno's ancestor. That would have certainly worked as a better twist since everyone was expecting Yuuno to be alive but of course that would mean that Yuuno... well, wouldn't be alive
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2011-08-18, 20:19 | Link #33871 |
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So that's why I'm a bit edgy about the whole Yuuno/Vivio thing. besides the age difference
I was thinking that Yuuno was a decedent of some Royal Family since he does looks somewhat like a prince. And if he gets put in a dress I think he would look like a princess. I didn't think that he would be a decedent of Olive. Which I should had considered since Yuuno and Vivio share the same hair color, eye(s), and most of all the same VA. Edit: Also Vivio being able to Use the Infinity Library Effectively. Last edited by ZeroIchiNi; 2011-08-18 at 20:45. Reason: More Simularity |
2011-08-18, 20:42 | Link #33873 | |
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I read this comment and the thought from it was: "Yuuno/Olivie. FUND IT." Damn my mind.
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2011-08-18, 20:46 | Link #33875 | ||
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Unless perhaps the Scrya clan really found Yuuno sealed in some ruins and he actually is from Olivie's time. I don't have any issue with incest regardless. Quote:
Well, I liked the conversation between Yami and Lutecia in this part.
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2011-08-18, 20:51 | Link #33876 | |
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Yeah, Lutecia needs to get laid, big time.
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2011-08-18, 21:35 | Link #33877 | |
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Lutecia just learned something, you DON'T mess with the Material(s) especially D, aka your majesty. Can someone explain something to me, was MidChilda magic ONCE belonged as belkan (modernised or w.e) , or were they completely different? Olivie/Yuuno is fine, although we're going to get lots of Kaori Mizuhashi making a pairing of herself, and oh boy if we had to add Vivio into the picture. xD
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2011-08-18, 22:03 | Link #33879 | |
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2011-08-18, 22:10 | Link #33880 |
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consentual tentacle love? If you are going for the grape, might as well go inyouchuu style. xD (I am sure shoku had bugs too, so yea, that'll satisfy)
@Raiser: Have we ever heard on any founding members of the midchilda, that was where my possible thesis was coming from, of Yuuno being of royal midchilda rather than royal belka.
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