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Ruki0089
2016-07-06, 21:14
Speaking of Stockholm syndrome...
Well, at least my avatar quite different on this matter:heh:

Lol, raintaid, you are too honest...

rantaid
2016-07-06, 21:21
hey... if i can accept Uruza in Rance 6 Zeth destruction as love, why can't i accept MinusVitamin's opinion with disclaimer warranty? am i right?

i mean... give me another ganbang of kouhime, and we'll see.

Ruki0089
2016-07-06, 21:30
Nooooo... don't mention what what happens to kou-chan!!!

yulinard
2016-07-07, 00:02
@yulinard: but you know in the original history. ^^ :nod:



Eris Greyrat [Boreas] marries Luke Greyrat [Notos] "distant cousin I think. ^^?".


in MT Universe. 0-0 :heehee:



Eris Greyrat [Boreas] marries Rudeus Greyrat [Notos] "distant cousin I think. ^^?".
her half sister "Aisha Greyrat [aunt]" marries her elder brother's son "Ars Greyrat [her nephew]".
Rudeus's first born daughter Lucy Greyrat [her other grandmother is you know who ~_~] is dating Clift Grimoire's first born son Clive Grimoire .



so uhm I think..... it is Greyrat bloodline's or if Lucy x Clive happen it will be also that Elf's fault..... so I'm bit worried about Chris because it reminds me about Rudeus and Eris..... T_T :T_T:
http://i283.photobucket.com/albums/kk308/0kusabireika0/Kanade%20Emoticon/Kanade025_zps4d7638f3.jpg


also incest or cousin or marrying each other or non-clone marrying similar genetic clone do exist in Mahoukaverse am I right or wrong dragon1412, so uhm I think it's ok to accept if the author want's to go into this route.... -_- :nod:
http://i283.photobucket.com/albums/kk308/0kusabireika0/Kanade%20Emoticon/Kanade016_zpsa98c3866.jpg

After eating multiple fist? No. its not tradition. It just happens.

You forgot that Notos and Boreas are at war.
Aisha have soft spot on younger guy and her spec is way too high.
And I think its save that Lucy x Clive ship is sunk already, and she probably will be married off to the royalty.

Ruki0089
2016-07-07, 00:16
Nah, Aisha pretty much just a cheap women... if you keep confess your love to her persistently.. you will gain her in no time...

kusabireika
2016-07-07, 00:16
After eating multiple fist? No. its not tradition. It just happens.

You forgot that Notos and Boreas are at war.
Aisha have soft spot on younger guy and her spec is way too high.
And I think its save that Lucy x Clive ship is sunk already, and she probably will be married off to the royalty.

It depends beside rudeus doesn't force his children to marry royalty probably her other daughter maybe Lily Greyrat perhaps. 0_0

I think Boreas vs Notos have stop now because they are scared of Rudeus's wrath if they hurt Eris. 0_0

Onii Sama
2016-07-07, 00:25
After eating multiple fist? No. its not tradition. It just happens.

You forgot that Notos and Boreas are at war.
Aisha have soft spot on younger guy and her spec is way too high.
And I think its save that Lucy x Clive ship is sunk already, and she probably will be married off to the royalty.

Clive proposed in the last Nanahoshi Gourmet chapter.

kusabireika
2016-07-07, 00:31
Clive proposed in the last Nanahoshi Gourmet chapter.

uhm can I have the link of the side chapter plz, I want to read them plz. T_T :T_T:

Onii Sama
2016-07-07, 01:16
This chapter specifically:
http://ncode.syosetu.com/n4251cr/26/

For translation, you'll have to wait for pielord.

kusabireika
2016-07-07, 01:22
This chapter specifically:
http://ncode.syosetu.com/n4251cr/26/

For translation, you'll have to wait for pielord.

uhm last question if it's ok to ask did the author tell something about Aisha x Ars on Nanahoshi arc if it's ok to ask. T_T :T_T:

Onii Sama
2016-07-07, 01:38
uhm last question if it's ok to ask did the author tell something about Aisha x Ars on Nanahoshi arc if it's ok to ask. T_T :T_T:

Sure.

Nanahoshi Gourmet is the last four Redundancy Chapters currently available. As we learned from the main story, Nanahoshi decided to hibernate to avoid mana poisoning before she could return home. This short arc featured her one-day-a-month awaking, when she get awfully hungry, and Rudeus comply by bringing her home cooking. It's really sweet to see them (plus Perugius) bound over food. You can really see how much they both valued their platonic friendship in these chapters.

In between the food channel-esk descriptions, Rudeus would comment on his current family situation. The chapters cover a wide time period. In Chapter 23, Lucy was 14 and Clive 12. Rudeus asked how to deal with the kids dating. In Chapter 26, Lucy was 18 and Clive 16, and Clive had asked Rudeus for Lucy's hand. Rudeus wasn't opposed to the marriage, just that the young couple already had went through rest of the family before taking him on.

Chapter 25 was concurrent to the Aisha/Ars situation. As result, Rudeus wasn't able to visit Nanahoshi in person, but sent Zanoba instead. Quick translation of relevant section:

> "Rudeus isn't coming today?"
> "Shishou got his hands full in recent days. It's that thing."
> "Ah..."
>
> He mentioned some heavy topic previously.
> That Aisha and Arc had disappeared.
> Honestly the details were rather tough for me to swallow. I really didn't know how to respond, only to offer some meaningless suggestions.
> That day Rudeus brought doughnuts, but I don't really remember how they tasted at all. It was all a blur.
> That's still ongoing, probably.


(In Chapter 24, Rudeus called Nanahoshi fat.)

kusabireika
2016-07-07, 01:43
Sure.

Nanahoshi Gourmet is the last four Redundancy Chapters currently available. As we learned from the main story, Nanahoshi decided to hibernate to avoid mana poisoning before she could return home. This short arc featured her one-day-a-month awaking, when she get awfully hungry, and Rudeus comply by bringing her home cooking. It's really sweet to see them (plus Perugius) bound over food. You can really see how much they both valued their platonic friendship in these chapters.

In between the food channel-esk descriptions, Rudeus would comment on his current family situation. The chapters cover a wide time period. In Chapter 23, Lucy was 14 and Clive 12. Rudeus asked how to deal with the kids dating. In Chapter 26, Lucy was 18 and Clive 16, and Clive had asked Rudeus for Lucy's hand. Rudeus wasn't opposed to the marriage, just that the young couple already had went through rest of the family before taking him on.

Chapter 25 was concurrent to the Aisha/Ars situation. As result, Rudeus wasn't able to visit Nanahoshi in person, but sent Zanoba instead. Quick translation of relevant section:

> "Rudeus isn't coming today?"
> "Shishou got his hands full in recent days. It's that thing."
> "Ah..."
>
> He mentioned some heavy topic previously.
> That Aisha and Arc had disappeared.
> Honestly the details were rather tough for me to swallow. I really didn't know how to respond, only to offer some meaningless suggestions.
> That day Rudeus brought doughnuts, but I don't really remember how they tasted at all. It was all a blur.
> That's still ongoing, probably.


(In Chapter 24, Rudeus called Nanahoshi fat.)


did it appear on revise edition I hope it will if not I will be disapointed.

uhm thx for the info about the spoilers. ^^ :blush:

dragon1412
2016-07-07, 02:02
@yulinard: but you know in the original history. ^^ :nod:



Eris Greyrat [Boreas] marries Luke Greyrat [Notos] "distant cousin I think. ^^?".


in MT Universe. 0-0 :heehee:



Eris Greyrat [Boreas] marries Rudeus Greyrat [Notos] "distant cousin I think. ^^?".
her half sister "Aisha Greyrat [aunt]" marries her elder brother's son "Ars Greyrat [her nephew]".
Rudeus's first born daughter Lucy Greyrat [her other grandmother is you know who ~_~] is dating Clift Grimoire's first born son Clive Grimoire .



so uhm I think..... it is Greyrat bloodline's or if Lucy x Clive happen it will be also that Elf's fault..... so I'm bit worried about Chris because it reminds me about Rudeus and Eris..... T_T :T_T:
http://i283.photobucket.com/albums/kk308/0kusabireika0/Kanade%20Emoticon/Kanade025_zps4d7638f3.jpg


also incest or cousin or marrying each other or non-clone marrying similar genetic clone do exist in Mahoukaverse am I right or wrong dragon1412, so uhm I think it's ok to accept if the author want's to go into this route.... -_- :nod:
http://i283.photobucket.com/albums/kk308/0kusabireika0/Kanade%20Emoticon/Kanade016_zpsa98c3866.jpg

Again, no one here care about incest, what we are talking about is how shallow this romance is. Since you support them so much, can you tell me how did they even fall in love in the first place

kusabireika
2016-07-07, 02:06
Again, no one here care about incest, what we are talking about is how shallow this romance is. Since you support them so much, can you tell me how did they even fall in love in the first place

nope I haven't seen romance to tell the truth anyway I want to see their romance bloom if the arc still continue....

anyway it seem Aisha x Ars is such taboo here. ~_~ it's that one fault always bringing it up geez..... >_<

rantaid
2016-07-07, 02:32
@kusabireika

no. please continue. i enjoy reading non consensual relationship and its whole copulation process. please continue.

@dragon1412

from what i remember, did not she creepily lusted over him since he was just a fetus because her lust to Rudeus was unreciprocated. and suddenly that pent up desire exploded when the said chapter was published *before taken down as if disowned, lol), and she saw him as replacement goldfish to Rudeus and projected everything she desired from Rudeus onto him while imagining that she is doing Rudeus on the deed while she was molesting her 10 years old nephew? and.... she got unwanted pregnancy after that while fearing of their future... what a love story! compare to Nabokov, please...

Lolita, light of my life.... fire of my loins! <creepier version of this> :D i remember Humber was incarcinated after killing the dude who impregnate Dolores, while the little dolly accept her future (and... stillborn if i recall in author note)

Ruki0089
2016-07-07, 02:43
No one talking about incest... Ars x Aisha love is insult to all romance story which PiSS me off so bad...
She even admitted she was seducing her own nephew, didn't love him and have unwanted pregnancy that made her couldn't sleep and she think that wimp-deus... excuse me... Rudeus might kill her and that Devil spawn...

kusabireika
2016-07-07, 02:45
^see... what happen rantaid. ~_~

if he doesn't like then plz don't drag this so long geez we know that you hate geez don't always keep repeating like a cassette tape it's kinda repetitive sigh. =.= :T_T:

rantaid
2016-07-07, 03:01
okay, sorry. because personally Aisha X Ars remind me of Yuuko's heart wrenching confession (in ef Tales of Melodies). man... i love that anime (an...vn, she is hot)

kusabireika
2016-07-07, 03:06
we already know rantaid but it's hard to argue someone forever always keep repeating this repeating that sigh, still uhm we and ruki are still friend but I don't want to restart this argument again sigh..... :T_T:

Ruki0089
2016-07-07, 03:09
Then don't call it love or incest... what what happen to Aisha x Ars wasn't love but lust and dependency towards each other... which leave a very disgusting taste on my mouth...

kusabireika
2016-07-07, 03:11
^ I know still I don't want to argue again I'm bit tired... still got cold/fever ugh...... my headache started again. T_T :T_T:

anyway ruki what are you bet about Christina Greyrat will she marries Leroy Greyrat like the past repeating itself again -_-

for me it could happen because of the Greyrat Bloodline. T_T :T_T:

Onii Sama
2016-07-07, 04:23
How about read a new chapter instead of arguing in circles? I just posted Asura Princess and the Angel of Miracles on BT.

Waxman
2016-07-07, 08:09
Thankz you @Onii Sama, someone already said that the extra chapter was of the first meeting between Ariel and Silphy but i didnt knew it was the story of Derrik Redbat.
.
It was a great little story, it may not be quite on the level of the Abs chapter but good nonetheless.
.
I wonder what god answered all those prayers...

Ruki0089
2016-07-07, 08:59
^ I know still I don't want to argue again I'm bit tired... still got cold/fever ugh...... my headache started again. T_T :T_T:

anyway ruki what are you bet about Christina Greyrat will she marries Leroy Greyrat like the past repeating itself again -_-

for me it could happen because of the Greyrat Bloodline. T_T :T_T:

Once again... Dude, i'm not talking about incest....:heh:

kusabireika
2016-07-07, 09:11
Once again... Dude, i'm not talking about incest....:heh:

I know still I want your opinion about Chris future will she become the second Version of Aisha x Ars or.....



Uhm Ruki don't call me dude just call me kusa geez. ~_~ :T_T:

Ruki0089
2016-07-07, 09:25
Who know? maybe she will married to a good man? or she always be daddy's little girls forever?
Or she will become Holy mother?

kusabireika
2016-07-07, 09:43
uhm you know she might suffer the same faith like Aisha if she still her daddy complex...... she might lust over Leroy Greyrat because she has similarity to her father..... ~_~

Ruki0089
2016-07-07, 09:52
I've been wondering about this for a while... Who the hell is Leroy Greyrat??
Well, as long their love story develop very well then i will like it... cousin or distant cousin? who give damn care about it...
Aisha x Ars? nah... Their lust more talkative than their love.... well, as if there is love from beginning on their heart...

kusabireika
2016-07-07, 09:56
I've been wondering about this for a while... Who the hell is Leroy Greyrat??
Well, as long their love story develop very well then i will like it... cousin or distant cousin? who give damn care about it...
Aisha x Ars? nah... Their lust more talkative than their love.... well, as if there is love from beginning on their heart...

Aisha's sons which has both the bad side of notos Greyrat "fond of ....." + Aisha's intellect if he somehow inherit Redues look and personality there will be scary future happen. +_+


it will be Cris x Leroy. :T_T:

A what if scenario if somehow Chris can't find a good Partner..... she might Lust over Leroy if that happen.

Ruki0089
2016-07-07, 10:10
Now you mention it... Ars's granddaughter, Ferris was resemble to Eris, but her hair color was brown or light brown...? i forgot.... but Is that it? Oh shit.... Author gonna repeat the history once again....he won't right....?
I see... Aisha's Bastard child name is Leroy?? Is he gonna become a King as his name state?

yulinard
2016-07-07, 11:27
It depends beside rudeus doesn't force his children to marry royalty probably her other daughter maybe Lily Greyrat perhaps. 0_0

I think Boreas vs Notos have stop now because they are scared of Rudeus's wrath if they hurt Eris. 0_0

Notos and Boreas already friends when Notos sell Ariel to Darius. Their feud are centered around who support who.

Also I remember Ariel plan about marrying their children.

MinusVitamin
2016-07-07, 12:41
i see your point. rape first, love later like some Stockholm syndrome then. nice....

well, it just that daughter of homewrecking whore refused sylphy suggestion of being gangbanged by the other dude. making all her nonsensical argument as moot point and armchair debate.

I find it odd how you interpreted my comment that way. When i meant that it's fine to develop sexual affections before falling in love, the first thing you connect that to is unsolicited sex

Hakatri
2016-07-07, 12:42
Again, no one here care about incest, what we are talking about is how shallow this romance is. Since you support them so much, can you tell me how did they even fall in love in the first place

Misplaced maternal love + misplaced familiar devotion + pent up lust + misplaced son devotion + newly awakened to lust

Now you mention it... Ars's granddaughter, Ferris was resemble to Eris, but her hair color was brown or light brown...? i forgot.... but Is that it? Oh shit.... Author gonna repeat the history once again....he won't right....?
I see... Aisha's Bastard child name is Leroy?? Is he gonna become a King as his name state?

Nope, she was a redhead and pretty much a second Eris without the mindlesss violence

Ruki0089
2016-07-07, 12:44
I find it odd how you interpreted my comment that way. When i meant that it's fine to develop sexual affections before falling in love, the first thing you connect that to is unsolicited sex

Hmmm...
Soo... if i go to america or Europe... i can have physical contact first then fell in love.... for some reason... that was... sound weird...
it so hard to understand people from west....:heh:

Misplaced maternal love + misplaced familiar devotion + pent up lust + misplaced son devotion + newly awakened to lust

Nope, she was a redhead and pretty much a second Eris without the mindlesss violence

THAT WAS what i complain about!!!!
why no one understand it!! their romance is so.... shallow or rather... insult to all romance story

Really? Red hair? hmmm, i guess i need to reread last chapter....

Onii Sama
2016-07-07, 14:14
Good news, everyone!

Someone picked up Joblesse Oblige!

http://dailydallying.com/mushoku-tensei-jobless-oblige-chapter-1/

MinusVitamin
2016-07-07, 14:50
Hmmm...
Soo... if i go to america or Europe... i can have physical contact first then fell in love.... for some reason... that was... sound weird...
it so hard to understand people from west....:heh:
.

If it works for you then it works for you.

Good news, everyone!

Someone picked up Joblesse Oblige!

http://dailydallying.com/mushoku-tensei-jobless-oblige-chapter-1/

YASH! I'm so happy for this right now.

kusabireika
2016-07-07, 18:10
so uhm if my guess is right the one the Ariel Anemoi Asura gonna get for her children royal wedding is either Sieghart Greyrat or Lily Greyrat since 4 out 6 "Lara seem to have a partner in the future" have partners already. 0-0 :blush:

rantaid
2016-07-08, 04:06
@Minus Vitamin

Well, okay.

just want to point out how hypocritical that kind of reasoning in Aisha's case when she refused to teach the other kids on this rabbit like performance as Sylphy suggested, not even a gangbang! i mean come on! i will not scorn her that much as lying hypocritical if she agrees to Sylphy's proposition, am i right?

who knows whether she likes it and also fall in love with them in the end. logically speaking, that should apply with no problem to her! more lover for her and more interesting scene for us. there, everyone happy.

Waxman
2016-07-08, 05:14
I just now read Aisha's Chapter, and i want to point some fairly obvious things that everyone already knew.
.
So the treasures from that Orsted need aren't just to reach Hitogami (well, one of the is) but to fight him.
.
"The Sword" that cut through everything should be the God Sword that Orsted can summon, "The Brasalet" that ward off against the devil whispers is obviously the one Orsted lend to Rudeus, "The Ship" that can take you anywhere must be Chaos Breaker, i don't thine we have seen "The Shield" yet but it may very well be Orsted special touki, and finally "The Power" to make full use of the previous treaures must be what Laplace holds.
.
Orsted must need to kill the Dragon Kings (and the Dragon Emperor) to fully power the treasures, that's why he can't create more brasalets.
.
On another note we know that Kishirika have other forms, could it be that after becoming a beautifull woman the next stage is that of Diablo?

Onii Sama
2016-07-08, 15:40
Chaos is the dollmaker and former owner of Rudeus' house, right?

Hakatri
2016-07-08, 18:05
I just now read Aisha's Chapter, and i want to point some fairly obvious things that everyone already knew.
.
So the treasures from that Orsted need aren't just to reach Hitogami (well, one of the is) but to fight him.
.
"The Sword" that cut through everything should be the God Sword that Orsted can summon, "The Brasalet" that ward off against the devil whispers is obviously the one Orsted lend to Rudeus, "The Ship" that can take you anywhere must be Chaos Breaker, i don't thine we have seen "The Shield" yet but it may very well be Orsted special touki, and finally "The Power" to make full use of the previous treaures must be what Laplace holds.
.
Orsted must need to kill the Dragon Kings (and the Dragon Emperor) to fully power the treasures, that's why he can't create more brasalets.
.
On another note we know that Kishirika have other forms, could it be that after becoming a beautifull woman the next stage is that of Diablo?

"The power" may as well be a large mana generator equivalent to Laplace mana pool

Chaos is the dollmaker and former owner of Rudeus' house, right?

I dont remmember his name but it wasnt Chaos, Chaos breaker is Perugious castle so i guess you may be confusing them

kusabireika
2016-07-08, 18:09
can anyone translate the the title of the last redundancy volume if it's ok thx. T_T :T_T:
http://i283.photobucket.com/albums/kk308/0kusabireika0/Kanade%20Emoticon/Kanade035_zps17173049.jpg

Onii Sama
2016-07-08, 18:14
23: Grilled Rice Balls
(Yaki Onigiri)

24: Miso Noodle Soup
25: Sandwich
26: Takoyaki

Xellos-_^
2016-07-08, 18:14
"The power" may as well be a large mana generator equivalent to Laplace mana pool



I dont remmember his name but it wasnt Chaos, Chaos breaker is Perugious castle so i guess you may be confusing them
He is talking about Mad Dragon King Chaos

kusabireika
2016-07-08, 18:58
23: Grilled Rice Balls
(Yaki Onigiri)

24: Miso Noodle Soup
25: Sandwich
26: Takoyaki

how about the title, the main title of the arc "ナナホシのグルメ". ^^?
http://i283.photobucket.com/albums/kk308/0kusabireika0/Kanade%20Emoticon/Kanade035_zps17173049.jpg

well I re-updating the redundancy chapters pdf..... "not the tl itself ok", don't want to use gt to translate it. T_T :T_T:
http://i283.photobucket.com/albums/kk308/0kusabireika0/Kanade%20Emoticon/Kanade032_zpsfc71cde9.jpg

Onii Sama
2016-07-08, 19:14
Nanahoshi Gourmet

kusabireika
2016-07-08, 20:43
Nanahoshi Gourmet

thx.. now working thx everyone and Onii Sama. ^^ :blush:
http://i283.photobucket.com/albums/kk308/0kusabireika0/Kanade%20Emoticon/Kanade006_zps56d322e6.jpg

ok done update the pdf... still waiting for the missing chapters. ^^V
http://i283.photobucket.com/albums/kk308/0kusabireika0/Kanade%20Emoticon/Kanade059_zpsd39d4157.jpg
https://mega.nz/#F!AA0jmZIJ!ZJMDmpIQjtnBfLQdvh4vzg

Waxman
2016-07-08, 21:32
So if Orsted need to kill the Dragon Kings or consume their souls to power the treasures that should be the reason why Hitogami manipulated Badi into spliting Laplace's.
.
It may be that "The Power" is only Laplace's mana, but since Laplace is also the TG, it must be that "Te Power" is also the right way to use all the treasures.
.
I wonder if Orsted already collected TG half of Laplace's power.
.
In any case, it seems that Hitogami is more powerful than i believed if Orsted need all that to defeat him, i thought that Hitogami was only good using other people but he may even put up quite the fight.

Hakatri
2016-07-09, 13:07
He is talking about Mad Dragon King Chaos

I remmembered a dragon king something but not chaos, my bad then

So if Orsted need to kill the Dragon Kings or consume their souls to power the treasures that should be the reason why Hitogami manipulated Badi into spliting Laplace's.
.
It may be that "The Power" is only Laplace's mana, but since Laplace is also the TG, it must be that "Te Power" is also the right way to use all the treasures.
.
I wonder if Orsted already collected TG half of Laplace's power.
.
In any case, it seems that Hitogami is more powerful than i believed if Orsted need all that to defeat him, i thought that Hitogami was only good using other people but he may even put up quite the fight.

It was also stated that Lapalce could use mana in a way that would destroy a human body so "The Power" may include the magic techniques.. or a piece of his body to use as a catalyst, nah

We assumed that Hitogami had a reason to stay in the void world and it may be related with getting power

Onii Sama
2016-07-10, 01:59
Volume 4 LN Extra Chapter: Guardian Magician Fitz done. It's on BT.

Those of you that read extra chapters in 3 and 4 may felt a sense of deja vu. That's because the LN release rewrote web novel's Sylphiette Chapter and sprinkled them in as LN-only. I like that choice, since these events happened roughly concurrent to the main Rudeus story.

This chapter was particular though, since it actually rewrote the "Ariel rape attempt incident" from web novel chapter 83 into something more palpable (for print consumption?). I'm not entirely sure whitewashing Ariel's actions are appropriate, given her characterization.

As an aside, currently I have the LN only chapters edited into the chapter flow on BT. I'm not entirely convinced that would be the best idea now. Given the chapter reshuffling, new readers that read from start to finish would basically be reading some chapters twice, and we still have to consider how to deal with the LN Vol.7 in the narrative flow.

Waxman
2016-07-10, 02:08
I see, well the author treated Roxy and Eris the same way in the WN after all, that is, put a short story of how they're doing after they left Rudeus.
.
Maybe the reason Silphy wasn't as popular was because her story wasn't "sprinkled" in the same way.
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Hm... I believed that WN vol 9 was the same as LN vol 10, i wonder if the author will only change the order of the story or will he also change things after Rudeus reunites with Roxy.

Onii Sama
2016-07-10, 02:42
Checking my notes again:

LN 6 = WN 6
LN 7 new
LN 8 = WN 7 + WN 8 (ch70, 71, 72, 73)
LN 9 = WN 8 (ch 74, 75, 76, 77, 78, 79, 80) WN 9 (85, 88, 89, 90)

New chapter titled Sylphiette 1 2 in LN 8, and Sylphiette 3 4 & 0 in LN 9. According to World3, these are rewritten from the missing webnovel chapters (81, 82, 83, 84, 86, 87).

kusabireika
2016-07-10, 20:11
uhm done I finish Volume 1 (https://mega.nz/#!dEU3RbQL!MrO1YGikZ_PUUMXKaLCzC32KsP0fLTZD7HyXM1P RUfE) and Volume 2 (
https://mega.nz/#!lZlFAASa!XBPzJo0tdQmmjwxex6GufQB4impmSmDVnBWKxqB Dm7c
) "with 2 new chapters"
http://i283.photobucket.com/albums/kk308/0kusabireika0/Kanade%20Emoticon/Kanade059_zpsd39d4157.jpg

@Onii Sama: uhm quick question are there any ss or only ln exclusive's story on LN Volume 3-11+ I hope it's ok to ask. ^^? :blush:
http://i283.photobucket.com/albums/kk308/0kusabireika0/Kanade%20Emoticon/Kanade006_zps56d322e6.jpg


lastly everyone if is there any wrong on pdf for ex. page no. or something plz tell so I can re-edit again. ^^ :heehee:
http://i283.photobucket.com/albums/kk308/0kusabireika0/Kanade%20Emoticon/Kanade003_zpsb0d60c94.jpg

laclongquan
2016-07-12, 04:44
Reread Mushoku Tensei and check out the extra Aisha chapters for the 1st time.

If they are removed from official MT wn roster, I agree it's a good move.

I dont mind a few major things in there, but in return I do mind a few minor retcon authors sneaked in.

The reason Rudeus didnt touch Aisha or Norn is not a problem of suppressing biological responses or desires. It is because those responses or desires doesnt exist in him in the 1st place.

Stepmother Lilia? Sproing!
Mother Zenith? Nope.
Wifey Sylphy? Sproing! Even when she's in male disguise and he's in ED, it's Sproing!
Norn/Aisha? Nope. Even when Aisha naked in bath with him, or when she's maturing and got great boobs, still nope.
Aunty Therese? Nope. Even when she's young, or older, or when Rudeus didnt know who she was, no reaction at all.

It's a matter of biological response, not morals. So yeah, author should retract those retcons.

The Aisha-Ars ship still can exist in future, but keep it older than Ars' 12, and have Aisha madly in love and have it rewritten better. It would be funnier and more logical, considering it's Aisha we are talking about. Aisha's too smart to be caught redhanded and unprepared like that.
++Another problem is the big number of Aisha-fans. And we poorly hate to see she get into a pickle like that for a brat like 12yo Ars. He can stand to mature a bit more to worth standing beside her.

Also, one thing to note is the beastmen's nose to sniff out sexual tensions. Aisha work too frequently with Beast People so her intentions might have been caught before. Even if she can suppress the detections, it's notlike she can do it all year long, considering Leo in house and therefore can transmit thoughts to Lara. (Zenith might approve of it from the beginning, I guess).

branantho5
2016-07-12, 04:58
Interesting read. Really enjoyed browsing through this thread.

obnuchious
2016-07-13, 01:35
haven't read it ... only the dry spoilers . . . that was just too much . . . considering that I also like her bubbly character

Breimn
2016-07-14, 03:44
>Asking for info about loli messiah
Hitogami s agent?

kusabireika
2016-07-14, 04:34
I do wonder if future Hitogami's Apostle gonna stole Rudeus dead remain and use it "with evil modification" to fight his descendant & Dragon God Orsted......
http://i283.photobucket.com/albums/kk308/0kusabireika0/Kanade%20Emoticon/Kanade034_zps524cda2e.jpg

will Orsted put a barrier on Rudeus dead remain so it won't be stolen by Hitogami or Laplace group [I]"well in the dream he saw Lara waving at Hitogami..... did she notice Rudeus spirit too".... 0-0
http://i283.photobucket.com/albums/kk308/0kusabireika0/Kanade%20Emoticon/Kanade032_zpsfc71cde9.jpg

laclongquan
2016-07-15, 11:28
Data come from dreams with Hitogami appearing has no credibility. No way to know how much he tampered with it.

Hakatri
2016-07-18, 00:19
uhm done I finish Volume 1 (https://mega.nz/#!dEU3RbQL!MrO1YGikZ_PUUMXKaLCzC32KsP0fLTZD7HyXM1P RUfE) and Volume 2 (
https://mega.nz/#!lZlFAASa!XBPzJo0tdQmmjwxex6GufQB4impmSmDVnBWKxqB Dm7c
) "with 2 new chapters"
http://i283.photobucket.com/albums/kk308/0kusabireika0/Kanade%20Emoticon/Kanade059_zpsd39d4157.jpg

@Onii Sama: uhm quick question are there any ss or only ln exclusive's story on LN Volume 3-11+ I hope it's ok to ask. ^^? :blush:
http://i283.photobucket.com/albums/kk308/0kusabireika0/Kanade%20Emoticon/Kanade006_zps56d322e6.jpg


lastly everyone if is there any wrong on pdf for ex. page no. or something plz tell so I can re-edit again. ^^ :heehee:
http://i283.photobucket.com/albums/kk308/0kusabireika0/Kanade%20Emoticon/Kanade003_zpsb0d60c94.jpg

The second link alredy expired so, reupload pretty please

The book format is actually kind of classy, i wasnt expecting something so elaborate after the simple format in baka-tsuki, the colors for the outline and titles are too soft and they surprised me because those are colours i would never use since im more of a dark tones myself but they make a lot of sense with the girls and yeah, why not, those are proper colors after considering it for a second

The final side story its so damn silly, it would be fun to seee more of those


I do wonder if future Hitogami's Apostle gonna stole Rudeus dead remain and use it "with evil modification" to fight his descendant & Dragon God Orsted......
http://i283.photobucket.com/albums/kk308/0kusabireika0/Kanade%20Emoticon/Kanade034_zps524cda2e.jpg

will Orsted put a barrier on Rudeus dead remain so it won't be stolen by Hitogami or Laplace group [I]"well in the dream he saw Lara waving at Hitogami..... did she notice Rudeus spirit too".... 0-0
http://i283.photobucket.com/albums/kk308/0kusabireika0/Kanade%20Emoticon/Kanade032_zpsfc71cde9.jpg

I dont get why people keep thinking about an evil Rudeus (well, i do) because since he is a magician the actual evilization would be to use his particular magic and the magic armor against the good guys, to evilize his legacy makes much more sense than bringing him back to life and im sure it would be so damn easier

kusabireika
2016-07-18, 08:54
uhm here is the link (https://mega.nz/#F!AA0jmZIJ!ZJMDmpIQjtnBfLQdvh4vzg)..... working on volume 4 now.... ^^ :blush:
http://i283.photobucket.com/albums/kk308/0kusabireika0/Kanade%20Emoticon/Kanade006_zps56d322e6.jpg

Hakatri
2016-07-19, 05:46
uhm here is the link (https://mega.nz/#F!AA0jmZIJ!ZJMDmpIQjtnBfLQdvh4vzg)..... working on volume 4 now.... ^^ :blush:
http://i283.photobucket.com/albums/kk308/0kusabireika0/Kanade%20Emoticon/Kanade006_zps56d322e6.jpg

Thanks, i will check them later as the second chapter of Jobless Oblige is alreadi translated and there is also a pic of... Sieg?

He does look quite heroic, clearly more than Rudeus at his age

http://dailydallying.com/jo/

kusabireika
2016-07-19, 06:14
@Hakatri: oh uhm.... about Jobless Oblige the tl said he/she will make the pdf version. ^^ :blush:
http://i283.photobucket.com/albums/kk308/0kusabireika0/Kanade%20Emoticon/Kanade033_zpsa4c1b1e5.jpg

Ruki0089
2016-07-19, 06:26
At least Sieg not looks Wimp or coward like certain dad...

kusabireika
2016-07-19, 08:56
uhm probably because Sieg didn't experience hardship, Trauma, his father low self esteem in his original world and near dead experience from this world..... I guess Sieg is very lucky that he grow strong due to guidance by his parents, siblings, close relatives, friends and a good environment "for him to become a better person better than his father" if I'm gonna guess some weird reasons. ^^ :blush:
http://i283.photobucket.com/albums/kk308/0kusabireika0/Kanade%20Emoticon/Kanade033_zpsa4c1b1e5.jpg

Nirvash0
2016-07-20, 15:34
I'm catching up with the side stories, we need more homo dwarf.

So, is the aisha stuff canon, retconned, erased or what?

Holy damn, the sieg thing is 15 chap?

What's next?

Sebazu
2016-07-20, 17:32
Sieg is the kid that takes the most after Rudeus.

teddychan
2016-07-21, 11:04
Why erase aisha side story =_=
He could have just made ars a little older like 13 then it will be fine =_=
hayz, so many haters =_=
You should have just let the other whine.

laclongquan
2016-07-22, 13:05
You can use baka suki site to read the TL of the deleted chapters.

As for why, well. In a nutshell, they are badly written in term of cohesion, and retcon a few pretty important details. More over, author arbitrarily decide to treat a favourite character to unwonted hardship, the loli maid sister.

Sieg is the kid that takes the most after Rudeus.

Not really. Ars is pretty much in Rudeus' mold: early sexual maturation, and lacking in psychological mature. Sieg is just after Rudeus in the chuuni side. Because he's half-Migurd, so his maturation is slower. Once he's of age he might be a big horndog.

Proto
2016-07-22, 13:08
That is just an opinion on the quality of the chapter. The real reason is that the author broke the terms of service for the website hosting the web novel given the sexually questionable nature of its content.

FIBC
2016-07-22, 14:20
You can use baka suki site to read the TL of the deleted chapters.

As for why, well. In a nutshell, they are badly written in term of cohesion, and retcon a few pretty important details. More over, author arbitrarily decide to treat a favourite character to unwonted hardship, the loli maid sister.



Not really. Ars is pretty much in Rudeus' mold: early sexual maturation, and lacking in psychological mature. Sieg is just after Rudeus in the chuuni side. Because he's half-Migurd, so his maturation is slower. Once he's of age he might be a big horndog.

sieg is shilphy's son, not roxy's

Ladiusman
2016-07-22, 22:34
Lol, somehow someone missed the chapter where Slyphy was giving birth to Sieg. How is that even possible?

Hakatri
2016-07-23, 02:04
I just finished reading the redundance chapters (the ones uploaded by kusabireika) and the Aisha chapter is quite good actually

Aisha was a shotacon with a crush and with low life experience, more like a savant with low social skills as most of her relationships were based on achieving goals more than sharing goals and she had a way to relate to people based on knowing their secrets/weaknesses to ensure an easier flow of events (like the way she knew about Rudeus shrine and used that to get permissions from him) and had a hard time when she was the one with secrets and desires because she wasnt used to rely on people for her personal matters

Ars could not decide to refuse her desicions but after maturing a little he still was not willing to act in a way that separated him from her

Aisha panicked and fleed with Ars because she assumed Rudeus was going to harm them both or/and to force them into political marriages due to her idea of Rudeus building a legacy like nobles do and her "ruining his plans" and stealing his most-precious-firstborn-son/upholder-of-the-name-and-legacy/hope-of-the-family/pride-of-his-father/almost-promised-to-a-princess/wtf-was-she-imagining?

Lilia accepted that Aisha got her homewrecker genes and overreacted all the way, that was fun

Norn was totally on Rudeus side, i think is the first time

Cliff overreacted offscreen, i would have liked to see that rant but i guess is only funny after the mater has been solved

Also Aisha deducted Rudeus was a reincarnator due to his conversations with Orsted and Nanahoshi, that was unexpected

Aisha overreacted about how much she should be punished based on that world punishments for similar cases

To summarize: Aisha and Ars fell in love (due to their unusual inclinations) but both were too inexperienced with their own desires and panicked, Rudeus felt repulsion due to his past life and while he reacted properly by overreacting he failed to calm himself and underestimated the effect his authority has over his family leading to Aisha and Ars eloping before Rudeus could calm down because he would have accepted them given more time and after imposing them some restrictions, wich happened after one year when they were caught

What i liked the most was to see the personal quirks of the characters turned into actual plot elements, it was fun to see Ars as a small pervert in the making and Aisha as an eficcient slarywoman imouto until those atributes were given weight and made to interact, Mushoku Tensei is good because it develops beyond the cliches it is based on and as there are some readers who dont like Rudeus being weak there are other who disliked the development... but we are talking about perverted skilled kids and other people with their own deviations, this development is quite possible when we think about it

I guess much of the fans rejection was due to be shown a scenario were the anime cliches were confronted with a realistic scenario wich destroyed the magic, just magine what would happen in Dragon Ball if suddenly there was an arc about Goku being a terrible parent with realistic development, it would look ugly with the general tone of the story wich is kept purposely as something too simple for the fans to digest

Ruki0089
2016-07-23, 02:31
Aisha fell in love? Heh! What a funny jokes... her love is an insult to all romance story that I really like...

kusabireika
2016-07-23, 03:53
uhm updated volume 4 (https://mega.nz/#!kVNgFLQT!KWSAJ9NvhyxgVlgQ2ybnkNZWpLlUhi-Q-c5LtG0EROQ) has been finish will update volume 5 when Onii Sama finish translating it ln ss..... "me faint due to.... +__+" have fun everyone. ^^ :blush:
http://i283.photobucket.com/albums/kk308/0kusabireika0/Kanade%20Emoticon/Kanade059_zpsd39d4157.jpg

rantaid
2016-07-23, 03:55
beating the dead horse again? how classy....

kusabireika
2016-07-23, 03:59
uhm should I remove this instead. T_T :T_T:
http://i283.photobucket.com/albums/kk308/0kusabireika0/Kanade%20Emoticon/Kanade061_zpsfae4fce7.jpg

rantaid
2016-07-23, 04:02
no, no... i mean hakatri bringing back the aisha argument... sorry for misunderstanding.

kusabireika
2016-07-23, 04:04
no, no... i mean hakatri bringing back the aisha argument... sorry for misunderstanding.

uhm everyone has a right to express their opinion rantaid that include you, me and everyone as long everyone here is discussing in civilize manner without forcing their opinion to us then I'm ok with it.... sorry if I confuse you. ^^ :blush:
http://i283.photobucket.com/albums/kk308/0kusabireika0/Kanade%20Emoticon/Kanade003_zpsb0d60c94.jpg

rantaid
2016-07-23, 04:14
no, no.. it should be i who said sorry. perhaps my previous opinion sound offensive to some people. you are correct to remind me.

btw, Even the worst Netorare is still better written than Ars and Aisha story.

kusabireika
2016-07-23, 04:24
no, no.. it should be i who said sorry. perhaps my previous opinion sound offensive to some people. you are correct to remind me.

btw, Even the worst Netorare is still better written than Ars and Aisha story.

I know no worries anyway.... I hope in the future I hope that certain future won't happen Leroy x Chris..... I hope Ars won't make same mistake again on his son..... T_T :T_T:
http://i283.photobucket.com/albums/kk308/0kusabireika0/Kanade%20Emoticon/Kanade020_zpsbe5fcd9d.jpg

a certain someone will be mad if that happen.... >_> :nod:
http://i283.photobucket.com/albums/kk308/0kusabireika0/Kanade%20Emoticon/Kanade033_zpsa4c1b1e5.jpg

Hakatri
2016-07-23, 22:39
beating the dead horse again? how classy....

Not even a little, as in the previous discussions were mostly about how the readers felt about the arc but not about the iner coherence of said arc

Aisha fell in love? Heh! What a funny jokes... her love is an insult to all romance story that I really like...

You know, shoujo stories are full of "Older guy falls for a little girl and protects her" stories, wich makes them lolicons, if there are some stories like that i dont see why a shotacon cant have a similar development, it may be not the most moral option but is what happens when a character gets development outside their cliche

Is like HunterXHunter when the MC goes apeshit after his friend is killed and becomes an unreasonable asshole who tortures the bad guy, is a very reasonable reaction for a person unlike the cliche reactions of justice rants we get from most stereotypical MCs

Ruki0089
2016-07-23, 22:42
Dude, don't bother making argument... Aisha discussion will made the thread completely closed...

Hakatri
2016-07-24, 10:10
I just finished the Volume 4 Side Story about Fitts and its quite good, it really takes its time to flesh the idea of Fitts as the representative of an unknown suporter and the perverted nobles are given some screentime, also in that part where Fitts and Ariel are going to sleep together the way Fitts is adressed changes from he/his to she/her while is supposed to be completely addressed as a boy, those are the sentences:


According to Ariel's command, Fitts nervously planted herself beside her.

Fitts panicked in (re)treat, desperately keeping her distance.

This other one is strangely worded
No matter what, this was too much. Even though he thought that in his heart, his body he relent to let Ariel take as she pleased.

I gues it should be "his body relented to let Ariel to take/do as she pleased"

And more gender stuff

Surprised, Fitts turned her sight toward her, and coincidentally looked into Ariel's, face to face

Full of confusion, Fitts didn't know what to do, her body remained stiff

Even if Fitts knew no magic, Ariel would stuck by her side. Because they had been comrades in arm.

ooPeaToo
2016-07-25, 08:32
Cover Vol 12 :smile:

http://i.imgur.com/EKYJQx4.jpg

kusabireika
2016-07-25, 08:35
Cover Vol 12 :smile:

http://www.mx7.com/i/af8/gNMehD.jpg

fix the link plz... =_= :T_T:

Breimn
2016-07-25, 08:52
Cover Vol 12 :smile:

http://i.imgur.com/EKYJQx4.jpg

No! Noo! Not this!
:T_T:
One of the saddest scenes incoming. Wonder if it will get illustrated.

kusabireika
2016-07-25, 08:58
No! Noo! Not this!
:T_T:
One of the saddest scenes incoming. Wonder if it will get illustrated.

ah.. I will know what will happen...


I hope we can see this volume illustration can't wait for it.

CNine
2016-07-25, 09:12
Cover Vol 12 :smile:

http://i.imgur.com/EKYJQx4.jpg

Roxy is back

kusabireika
2016-07-25, 09:18
Roxy is back

The Water Emperor and the Water King. ^^V

Ladiusman
2016-07-25, 09:46
Wow, so they really are gonna combine WN volume 12 and 13 into the LN version of volume 12.

FIBC
2016-07-25, 11:47
Wow, so they really are gonna combine WN volume 12 and 13 into the LN version of volume 12.

ln volume 11 covered almost half of wn volume 12

Ladiusman
2016-07-25, 11:56
ln volume 11 covered almost half of wn volume 12

Ah, okay. The other half of WN 12 all the way to 13, then.

Not saying it's a bad thing, it means that the story will progress more quickly to a certain diary...

Onii Sama
2016-07-25, 17:47
I just finished the Volume 4 Side Story about Fitts and its quite good, it really takes its time to flesh the idea of Fitts as the representative of an unknown suporter and the perverted nobles are given some screentime, also in that part where Fitts and Ariel are going to sleep together the way Fitts is adressed changes from he/his to she/her while is supposed to be completely addressed as a boy, those are the sentences:



This other one is strangely worded


I gues it should be "his body relented to let Ariel to take/do as she pleased"

And more gender stuff



Fixed. Thanks for the edits. Translating for Fitts was a mental challenge, since I keep forgetting she's in reverse-trap mode. Feel free to update the BT page directly, if you feel like it!

Sorry for the delay, I finished the LN extra chapters I wanted to work on, and will turn my attention to Overthrow of the King Dragon King side chapter this week.

kusabireika
2016-07-25, 18:17
Fixed. Thanks for the edits. Translating for Fitts was a mental challenge, since I keep forgetting she's in reverse-trap mode. Feel free to update the BT page directly, if you feel like it!

Sorry for the delay, I finished the LN extra chapters I wanted to work on, and will turn my attention to Overthrow of the King Dragon King side chapter this week.

uhm... will fix volume 4 pdf too. ^^

Waxman
2016-07-26, 00:36
Hm... So Vol 12 of the LN will include WN 13 or could it be that the Vol will end after the fight with the Hydra so the vol 13 of the LN start with the still in Begarito?
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The author may want put 2 slice of life vol before Nanahoshi's crisis, that way what follows (the future diary's chapters) may have a strong punch.
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I teared up a little the first time i was reading them.

Hakatri
2016-07-26, 13:29
So, did they skipped the Ariel rape attempt for the edited version?, and now the light novel go towards the Rudeus rape, man, Paul wasnt the only one being excused for that

The latest side story "The death of Ariel" was good and it would be cool to see it animated/ilustrated as a Law & Order chapter, for some reason it reminded me of the Superman chapter "The late Mr. Kent" were Clark Kent is killed and superman has to find the culprit

laclongquan
2016-07-26, 23:21
That is just an opinion on the quality of the chapter. The real reason is that the author broke the terms of service for the website hosting the web novel given the sexually questionable nature of its content.

Oh poops! That means if he doesnt change the content it will remain that way....
I just finished reading the redundance chapters (the ones uploaded by kusabireika) and the Aisha chapter is quite good actually

Aisha was a shotacon with a crush and with low life experience, more like a savant with low social skills as most of her relationships were based on achieving goals more than sharing goals and she had a way to relate to people based on knowing their secrets/weaknesses to ensure an easier flow of events (like the way she knew about Rudeus shrine and used that to get permissions from him) and had a hard time when she was the one with secrets and desires because she wasnt used to rely on people for her personal matters

Ars could not decide to refuse her desicions but after maturing a little he still was not willing to act in a way that separated him from her

Aisha panicked and fleed with Ars because she assumed Rudeus was going to harm them both or/and to force them into political marriages due to her idea of Rudeus building a legacy like nobles do and her "ruining his plans" and stealing his most-precious-firstborn-son/upholder-of-the-name-and-legacy/hope-of-the-family/pride-of-his-father/almost-promised-to-a-princess/wtf-was-she-imagining?

Lilia accepted that Aisha got her homewrecker genes and overreacted all the way, that was fun

Norn was totally on Rudeus side, i think is the first time

Cliff overreacted offscreen, i would have liked to see that rant but i guess is only funny after the mater has been solved

Also Aisha deducted Rudeus was a reincarnator due to his conversations with Orsted and Nanahoshi, that was unexpected

Aisha overreacted about how much she should be punished based on that world punishments for similar cases

To summarize: Aisha and Ars fell in love (due to their unusual inclinations) but both were too inexperienced with their own desires and panicked, Rudeus felt repulsion due to his past life and while he reacted properly by overreacting he failed to calm himself and underestimated the effect his authority has over his family leading to Aisha and Ars eloping before Rudeus could calm down because he would have accepted them given more time and after imposing them some restrictions, wich happened after one year when they were caught

What i liked the most was to see the personal quirks of the characters turned into actual plot elements, it was fun to see Ars as a small pervert in the making and Aisha as an eficcient slarywoman imouto until those atributes were given weight and made to interact, Mushoku Tensei is good because it develops beyond the cliches it is based on and as there are some readers who dont like Rudeus being weak there are other who disliked the development... but we are talking about perverted skilled kids and other people with their own deviations, this development is quite possible when we think about it

I guess much of the fans rejection was due to be shown a scenario were the anime cliches were confronted with a realistic scenario wich destroyed the magic, just magine what would happen in Dragon Ball if suddenly there was an arc about Goku being a terrible parent with realistic development, it would look ugly with the general tone of the story wich is kept purposely as something too simple for the fans to digest

My problem with that chapter is that author retcon a bloody lot of small yet important details. Most important is the reason why Rudeus stay away from incest: not because of moral but because of his physical reason, he cant get hard over biological relatives. ANd not because of past memory either, he cant even get hard over Aisha and Norn EVEN though he's pretty sproing for childmode Kirishika. Hell, the aged Lilia can just hold him and sproing he goes~

And the way author describes the Aisha psychology is insufficient. In order to make the genius Aisha losing her head in planning counter measures like that, it need to have more pink moments in her head so it color her judment.

Aisha Ars is not that unusual. Basically it's a reverse Hikaru Genji scenario, a cougar shota scene not that uncommon in both literature and real life. And Aisha is not a shotacon, as she doesnt have any inclination toward Sieg that way. Just a basic body compatibility, it's all.

Hakatri
2016-07-28, 13:07
Oh poops! That means if he doesnt change the content it will remain that way....


My problem with that chapter is that author retcon a bloody lot of small yet important details. Most important is the reason why Rudeus stay away from incest: not because of moral but because of his physical reason, he cant get hard over biological relatives. ANd not because of past memory either, he cant even get hard over Aisha and Norn EVEN though he's pretty sproing for childmode Kirishika. Hell, the aged Lilia can just hold him and sproing he goes~

And the way author describes the Aisha psychology is insufficient. In order to make the genius Aisha losing her head in planning counter measures like that, it need to have more pink moments in her head so it color her judment.

Aisha Ars is not that unusual. Basically it's a reverse Hikaru Genji scenario, a cougar shota scene not that uncommon in both literature and real life. And Aisha is not a shotacon, as she doesnt have any inclination toward Sieg that way. Just a basic body compatibility, it's all.

With more pink moments hell would broke loose... or looser, in my case the way Aisha was scared of Rudeus justified the lack of previous build up since it was supposed to be a surprise development to hit the reader as it hit rudeus

I found a gender bender fanart


http://noticias.roxysmo.org/wp-content/uploads/2016/07/CgUSKH7UsAAfSp_.jpg

And i made a Ruijerd fanart


http://pre15.deviantart.net/de0b/th/pre/f/2016/210/8/d/pedoruijerd_by_juracan-dabtrc9.jpg


Edit: i found more fanart

http://pre05.deviantart.net/f1bb/th/pre/i/2016/033/d/8/sylphy_by_in_tea-d9q84d4.png


http://pre00.deviantart.net/17b9/th/pre/i/2015/330/b/e/rinia_and_pursena_by_in_tea-d9i374b.png

kenga
2016-08-01, 02:11
So, did they skipped the Ariel rape attempt for the edited version?, and now the light novel go towards the Rudeus rape, man, Paul wasnt the only one being excused for that

The latest side story "The death of Ariel" was good and it would be cool to see it animated/ilustrated as a Law & Order chapter, for some reason it reminded me of the Superman chapter "The late Mr. Kent" were Clark Kent is killed and superman has to find the culprit


can you link the story "The death of Ariel"

Kazandu
2016-08-01, 04:42
Aisha fell in love? Heh! What a funny jokes... her love is an insult to all romance story that I really like...

with all due respect, nobody cares, i think you ranted about this topic for 3 months.

by the way i think the aisha arc isn't bad but isn't good either.

Hakatri
2016-08-01, 05:03
can you link the story "The death of Ariel"

There was another extra chapter with the adventures of Rudeus Ramsay, the food critic

LN Extra Chapter - Nanahoshi Grilled Dragon (https://www.baka-tsuki.org/project/index.php?title=Mushoku_Tensei:Volume_05_Extra_Cha pter)

LN Extra Chapter - Death of Ariel (https://www.baka-tsuki.org/project/index.php?title=Mushoku_Tensei:Volume_05_Extra_Cha pter_2)

Waxman
2016-08-01, 06:55
Poor Randolph, I nearly pity him, if not for the fact that he attacked our Goddess.
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But its nice that the author is planting things for those that only read the LN vols.
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It could have been interesting if depresed Rudeus was crossing the border at the same time Ariel (and Silphy) were, but pulling that off without the meeting may have been difficult.

Hoopla
2016-08-13, 01:26
Oh poops! That means if he doesnt change the content it will remain that way....


My problem with that chapter is that author retcon a bloody lot of small yet important details. Most important is the reason why Rudeus stay away from incest: not because of moral but because of his physical reason, he cant get hard over biological relatives. ANd not because of past memory either, he cant even get hard over Aisha and Norn EVEN though he's pretty sproing for childmode Kirishika. Hell, the aged Lilia can just hold him and sproing he goes~

And the way author describes the Aisha psychology is insufficient. In order to make the genius Aisha losing her head in planning counter measures like that, it need to have more pink moments in her head so it color her judment.

Aisha Ars is not that unusual. Basically it's a reverse Hikaru Genji scenario, a cougar shota scene not that uncommon in both literature and real life. And Aisha is not a shotacon, as she doesnt have any inclination toward Sieg that way. Just a basic body compatibility, it's all.

Did you even read the chapters? Rudues literally says the reason why he can't accept incest is due to his scumbag past.

laclongquan
2016-08-14, 02:51
I do and that's why I disagree so strongly with author's writings. Everything he ever wrote on that specific issue is that Rudeus does NOT get hard over relatives, no matter what he said. He doesnt even know that Therese is his relative but his 'son' just lie dormant when she buried his face on her bosom. His mother, his sister, his aunt: no response. But Lila can always elicit a response from him no matter that she's old aged, which was pretty amusing to see her trying to get reassurance about her feminity the last time she did it.

The old boy of previous world might have been a lolicon, but Rudeus is all-round carnivore (disregard the incest issue). Flat chest or full, adult or child-form, he can eat it all. Read his response toward July after his restoration in the hand of Sylphi.

If the issue is due to old wolrd's incident lead to his inhibition in this world, Therese would have gotten a response from him, since he didnt know about the relation at the time, innit? She was a full grown woman and he was in puberty at that time.

And finally, it's more than 4 decades of a very active life since his death. One would think the incident's influence reduced to nothing after that.

Characters can get mistaken or author misremember, but it's pretty hard to argue with what has been put down not just once but several times.

Hokoga
2016-08-14, 03:08
But Lila can always elicit a response from him no matter that she's old aged, which was pretty amusing to see her trying to get reassurance about her feminity the last time she did it.What chapter was this? :confused:

Ebrie
2016-08-14, 11:34
What chapter was this? :confused:

I'm pretty sure that only happens when Rudeus is a baby. After she becomes a wife, there's no mention that I can recall of him thinking of Lilia as someone other than 'attractive'. He offhandedly mentions a few times that she has big boobs, but that's about it.

laclongquan
2016-08-14, 12:38
"Ah, I'll give you some travelling money, but if it seems like you're lacking then try to find one of fathers' subordinates in the Adventurer's Guild."
"I understand and will comply."
"I think you can trust the soldiers escorting you, but since the other side is unknown, please take care of yourself."
"There's no problem. We're already acquainted."
"Ah, I see, ummm..."
"Rudeus-sama."

While I was thinking of various things, Lilia suddenly stood up and walked over.
And then she hugged me with my head in her chest.
Her voluptuous chest was being pressed against my face.
Reflexively my nasal breathing got rough.

"Umm, Lilia-san, it's touching?"
"Rudeus-sama hasn't changed since the past."

While Lilia was saying that she made a small laugh.
Lilia's description at that scene is mid 30s. It looks like she has aged a bit after five years, but it seems like her skin has a variety of bends in it piled on top, since she got involved in that teleport incident, it can't really be helped.

"It's alright to stay and watch."

Although Suzanne said that, I still refused.
Even if she's someone I know, I shouldn't be looking at another wife's breasts.

After all, Suzanne's breasts will never lose to Zenith and Lilia's size.
Moreover, I did not know whether now is her milking period, her breasts seem to be much bigger.
If I saw them, the Sennin[27] from my heart will be awakened.
Then I would be dripping saliva over Lilia.
Sylphiette and Roxy will be disappointed.
Indeed, it’s clear that their breasts couldn't win.
But, I did not choose them because of their breasts.
That kind of worry is needless.

Well then, here I've once again experienced something mysterious.
Just now, Aisha took off her small, baggy maid outfit, tore off the wet panties she was wearing, wiped down her body, and then put the shirt I normally wear on.
In my hands is a wooden bucket and soap for the purpose of laundry, as well as a primary schoolgirl panties.

If it was the me from my past life, in this situation with these items, I would probably fall into an aroused state.

I'd like you to think about it and see.
On the nearby bed is a little girl who after being stripped once is now wearing my baggy clothes after she just wet herself and is currently crying.
Obviously with no panties.
If it's a gentleman, then anyone who falls into such a situation would normally be excited.

It's not like I can put Eris's panties on her.
Her panties are No Touch.
That's one of the important rules of this "Dead End".
No matter how much of an emergency situation it is, how could I possibly dig through her belongings when she's not around and pull some panties out...
Just thinking about it is frightening.

If I were to break the rules Ruijerd won't come to save me and if I use demon eyes to run away Eris will be displeased for around three days.
Even though I say that, if I get hit defenselessly then my face will change enough that I won't be able to taste meals for around three days.
Well, I could use healing magic to fix it.

In any case, it's a situation where it wouldn't be strange for the wild beast of my heart to be howling.

However, even in that situation, my heart is currently as calm and silent as the surface of a lake
Putting aside arousal, there's not even a single wave.
Clear and serene.

It's a strange thing.
In regards to the sobbing Aisha I felt "She's a troubled child" while embracing her, yet I can't remember any sexual arousal beyond that.
I wonder if I became a Sage while I wasn't paying attention.
Or else, maybe I touched upon Eris's imperial wrath without realizing it, and my Pocket Monster was made incompetent for battle.[13]
Maybe in order to forget the overwhelming fear of that time, I placed a seal on the memories.

No, never!
That can't be the case, are you alright, My Son?

And while I was thinking like that, the laundry ended in a flash.
The linen panties with no sex appeal and the small maid outfit that appears to be made of relatively high class material.
I handed those over to Aisha who at some point had stopped crying, and she cheerfully started changing her clothes.
I carefully stared at that.

After all I'm not getting aroused.
I wonder if this body won't get aroused by family.
Even though my previous life it was men and women of all ages without discrimination...
The thing known as life is mysterious.
Even though he knows Aisha is his sister, he still have dirty thoughts as a matter of reflex. But the disconnect between his thoughts and his body response are starkly contrast.

"I see."

The female knight had said this, and then crouched down and embraced me tightly.

"...Eh!"

I was shocked.
I suddenly got hugged out of nowhere.

"It must have been hard on you..."

While saying this, she started patting my head.

Because she's wearing armor, this doesn't feel very good.
However, she gives off the sweet and soft scent of a woman.
Naturally my lower parts... don't rise.

That's strange.

Why, oh son of mine?
What's happened?
It's the smell of slightly sweaty women that you love so much.
Just recently, even that time with Eris...
Which reminds me.
I look at Eris, find that her eyes are wide open and she's clenching her fists.

Scary.

"Umm... errm?"

After patting my head, the female knight had risen to a stand.
Without looking towards me, she then declared,

"I'll be taking custody of them."
"What!? One is a demon, you know!"

Baqciel is confused.
The female knight snatches the letter from my hand, and quickly looks over it.

"There's no problem with the letter, either. This is Lord Galgard's handwriting."
"It can't be. Is a Temple Knight going against Milis' teachings...?"

At that point, with an "Ah-", Eris raised her voice.
The female knight turns to face Eris and winks.
What?

"I, the Middle Leader[48] of the Order of the Temple's 『Shield Group』 have spoken."
"Ku-, even though you had lost your subordinates, and were then demoted..."
"Hmph. I'll send those words right back at you. However, between I who had completed my duty, and you who had given up halfway, there's quite a difference in our positions."

Baqciel gnashed his teeth at that.
Somehow, it seems that he's also been demoted.
Considering this, despite being called 'Duke', the position seems quite a bit less important.
It's strange.

Bacqiel's eyes are full of hatred.

"You... No matter how high of birth you may be, if you get too carried away..."

Baqciel never finished his complaint.
The female knight had quickly lowered her head.

"No, I apologize. I've said too much. I have no intention of quarreling further with you. This case is a personal matter. Please forgive me."

I had been thinking that she had great timing.
Saying as much as she wanted, and then immediately apologizing.
With those few words, she had dispelled Baqciel's anger as well.
I'll try and copy her the next time I anger someone.

"A personal matter, you say?"
"Mmn."

The knight nodded firmly in the face of Baqciel's puzzled expression.
Then, with a slap she then places her hand on my shoulder.

"This child is my nephew."

What was that!?
....
....
....
Right now I'm in a West Port Inn, and am currently being hugged.
The ones in the room are Therese, Eris and I.
It might be because Ruijerd had read the mood, but he's not here.

While saying this, Therese is burying her face into the nape of my neck.
"Rudeus-kun. I know about you from Nee-sama's letters."
"Is that so? What did mother[49] write?"
"That you were extremely cute. And though I'd never imagined that I'd see the real thing, you truly are extremely cute."

While saying this, Therese is burying her face into the nape of my neck.
Thinking about it, in the 12 years I've been alive, though I've been called brazen, suspicious looking, or disgusting, the only one who's ever thought of me as cute is Zenith.

However, though I'm being embraced by a large-breasted beauty, for some reason the railgun between my legs isn't firing off any coins with its super electromagnetism.[50]
Speaking of which, my VICTORY never did STAND UP when it was Zenith.[51]
Thinking about it, I never did think to become any closer to Norn than necessary.

...I wonder if it's because we're related.

"Therese. It's about time you let go of Rudeus."

Resting her chin in her hand, Eris taps at Therese.
She's in a bad mood.
She might be jealous.

I'm a sinful man.

"Eris-sama. Though I understand your feelings, I don't know when I'll be able to see Rudeus-kun again. Moreover, the next time we meet, he'll have definitely lost his cuteness. It's a fleeting moment. Please pardon this."

Without any shame, Therese continues to stroke my body.

"Therese-san, why are you speaking to Eris so respectfully?"
"I owe her my life, after all."

I decide to investigate further.

Eris had gone out to suppress goblins, and saved Therese when she was driven into a corner by enemy forces.
At the time, Therese had been protecting a certain VIP and had it not been for Eris, that VIP would have lost their life as well.
The story was something like that.

I hadn't heard a word of this.
When I had looked towards Eris, I found that she was making an awkward expression.

"Sorry, Rudeus. I had forgotten about it..."

According to Eris, she had seen me all depressed and forgotten all about about the goblin hunting incident.
It's my fault, huh?
Guess it couldn't be helped.

Therese is (I'm being hugged from behind so I'm not sure, but) probably making an expression of ecstasy and groping my body.

I won't go so far as to say it feels disgusting, but somehow I feel kind of uncomfortable.
At any rate, even having my body touched, with boobs pressed against my back, I'm not getting aroused.
It's a new sensation.

"Ahh, but Rudeus-kun really is cute. Cute enough that I'd eat him up."
"Do you mean eating me up in a sexual sense?"

I had tried to drop an appropriate joke in, but my mouth was covered up by her hand.

"...You're cuter when you don't talk, huh? When you do, I recall that Paul guy's face."

It appears that Therese doesn't like Paul very much.

"Still, Grand Master Gash is the same as ever, huh?"

While she continued to stroke me, Therese changed the subject.

"You'd think that it'd be obvious that that kind of thing would happen if you handed over such a letter to Baqciel."



Therese was an adult woman at the time, as far from the girl in that incident of the previous world as possible.
In contrast, just month earlier,



"O...oh??"

It was a little girl dressed in a risque, black leather styled outfit.
Boots that come up to her knees. Leather short-shorts. A leather tube-top.
Her collarbone, curveless waist, navel and thighs - all of her skin is pale.
And finally her most noticeable features; voluminous and wavy violet hair, and horns like a goat.

I understood the moment I saw her.
It's a succubus.
Not only that but a little girl.
Without a doubt she should be younger than me.
Could this possibly be a reward the Hitogami is giving me for giving it my best.
That guy can occasionally do some good things it seems.

No, it shouldn't be a succubus.
In this world the succubus related species are considered a type of monster.
If I remember correctly it's a monster that inhabits the Begaritto Continent.
I remember back to when Paul said in an unusually serious face, "Our family cannot win against them."
I'm sure if I were to actually meet a succubus I would lose to its technique and be exhausted by it.
Succubus are the Greyrat family's natural enemy.
Well, putting that aside.

There's no monsters in the middle of the town.
In other words, she is not a succubus.
She should just be a child from a normal magic race wearing erotic clothing.

"O..ohhhh! Yo... you bastard, what have you doneeeee??! Look at what you have done!"

The little girl was trembling all over.

"Th...this man was... this man you know...?!"

She made an unbelievable face.
What have you done? What are you going to do about this? Sort of face.[4]

"Ah, sorry about that, was he an acquaintance?"

Is what I asked while tilting my head.
It wasn't the sort of feeling and face a normal middle aged man would speak with to an acquainted child.
How do I put it, it was more like the exact feeling of an aroused middle aged lolicon.
Look at this bright red face, even after he's lost consciousness he still has that loose smile.

He may have been about to take the little girl home and feed her an extravagant meal and offer a warm bed, but in return he would have requested a hot night, that sort of feeling.

This man was going to feed this one with an empty stomach fo... food!!
"This man was going to feed this one[5] with an empty stomach fo... food!!"

I heard a loud gurgling noise from somewhere.
It was a sound like the ground was rumbling.
Just as that sound was about to end the little girls knees gave out and she fell to the ground.

"Are...are you alright?"

Without thinking about it I crouched down and picked her up.
I wouldn't let a justified reason to touch a little girl pass me by.
However, don't be mistaken.
I came to save her on the orders of the Hitogami.
Different from that middle aged man just now.

"Gu?? Ugh? It's been 300 years since this one revived. To think this one would fall in this sort of place? This one cannot let Laplace know about this matter!"

Somehow a strange self play started up.
Could it be that this outfit is some sort of cosplay?

"Fo...for the time being, eat this and get a hold of yourself."

I shoved three of the skewers I had prepared into the mouth of the little girl.

"Mogyumogyumogyu"

The moment they were shoved into the little girls mouth her eyes flew wide open, with her eyes open just like that she kept chewing away eating the skewered food.
Then she even plundered the skewers I had in my hand as well.
I still had 12 pieces left on my skewer, but 10 pieces suddenly disappeared.

"U..u..o..oh! It's good! The first meal in a year is good!"

The little girl regained her energy.
She suddenly lifted her back from the ground energetically with a spring and jumped up, and then stood on the ground after a single rotation.
Her physical ability must be surprisingly high it seems.

"This one has been saved, saved! You! With this, this one should be able to last another year!"

Then at that point the little girl's eyes finally met with mine.
It was an odd set of eyes that had a mix of purple and black.
I wonder if this is some sort of cosplay as well.
No, there shouldn't be any contacts in existence in this world.
Her eyes should have originally been like this.

"Oh?"

The little girls right eye spun around in a circle.
In that moment, the color changed to blue.

Tha....that's creepy!!

"Uwaaa! Uwaa! What's with you? Amazing! That's disgusting! What's this, what's this?! Fuhahaha! It's the first time this one has seen something like this!"

After seeing my face the little girl started to say that while jumping around energetically.

Yeah, it's a shock of course.
It's the first time in a while since anyone has looked at my face and called me disgusting.
However, I also thought that she was creepy.
I'll just call it even here.

"Is it that? During the time it was in the stomach it was a twin, then when it was born one half died, is that it?"

What?
What is she saying?

"No, I don't think that is the case."
"Really?"
"Yeah."
"Still your magic power quantity!! It's above Laplace you know."

What is higher than who?

"Well, it's fine! Name yourself!"
"I'm Rudeus Greyrat."
"Alright! This one is called Kishirika Kishirisu! A.K.A. THE GREAT EMPRESS OF THE DEMON REALM!"

With her hands on her hips, and her pelvis thrust forward, she threw out her chest with pride.
Suddenly seeing thighs in front of my eyes, I reflexively licked her.
It smells but it's sweet.

"Uhyaa! What are you doing!? That's dirty!"

The little girl started to glare at me as she clamped her legs together and started rubbing them.

However, I see now.
Great Empress of the Demon Realm, Kishirika Kishirisu.
Even I've heard that name before.
In the Human-Demon Great War, the one who lead the magic race, fought, and was easily crushed, the immortal Demon Empress.

I wonder if it's the real thing.
I came here following the advice of that Hitogami.
There is the possibility that she is the real Great Demon Empress.

However, would the real Demon Empress be in this sort of place in the middle of nowhere on the Magic Continent, furthermore collapsing from starvation.
No matter how you look at it, that can't be the case.

That's right.
This must be like where the children of the Magic Continent go around playing, pretending to be great people of the past.

And the especially popular one is the Demon God Laplace.
For someone like me who knows the truth, he's a disgusting and evil bastard but that guy is popular.
Even though he did lose the war, he subjugated the Magic Continent, gathered together the magic race and brought them status, then brought about peace.
The magic races greatest man in history, is how it's been told.

What the children usually go around imitating is the story of Laplace.
Especially, the episode where he fights the immortal demon lord, until we came here to Wind Port it was something I saw a number of times.

Great Demon Empress Kishirika as well, is a great being if you can call it a great being.
However, probably because it's from a much older era I've almost never seen make believe play of her.

This child is certainly a passionate fan of the Great Demon Empress and she has no friends to play together with, so she was playing alone in this back alley.
Thinking of it that way is smart.

Hmm.
Being alone is lonely right.
It can't be helped I'll play along as well.

"Wa, wa ha! Please excuse me! Your majesty!"

I started acting out in exaggeration and bowed over on one knee similar to a retainer.

"O? O.. oh! That's good, that's good! This one has always waited for that sort of response! The young ones these days don't have any manners after all!"

Yes, yes, Kishirika started to nod happily.
Yes, yes.
That's right, I'm sure you wanted someone to play along with you.

"Please forgive my rudeness for I did not know you had revived and acted in an impolite manner!"
"It's fine. You have saved this ones life. It's fine if you ask for any one desire."

Saved your life... I just gave you some food when you were hungry, right?

"Ummm? Then, I want great riches."
"Idiot! This one is totally broke just as it looks!"

Even though you said anything?
No, I guess it's that sort of setting.
If you were to ask for money, then there would be an episode later where you're forced to pay it back.

"Then, please give me half of the world."
"Wha! Half of the world you say! That's huge! However, half-assed. Why only half?"
"Well, since I don't really need the men."

Oh that's bad, I let out a bit of my true intentions.
It's not something to tell a little girl about.

"I see, this one understands it now? Even though you're still young, you're a lustful one. However, sorry. To tell you the truth, this one hasn't acquired the world either you know?"

Well, all of the wars Kishirika lead the magic race in lost after all.

"Then, your body is fine. Pay me back with your body."
"Oh? With this body? Even at that age you're that lustful, I'm worried for your future."
"Haha, of course that was a jo-..."

A joke, I was about to say, when Kishirika started to put her hands on her hot pants.

"Really, it can't be helped. It's the first time since this one has revived, be gentle, okay?"

Kishirika's cheeks started to change color and she started to unfasten the button on her hot pants.
Eh? Seriously?
I just meant it as a joke though...
No, but, this isn't the sort of atmosphere where you can say it's a joke.
This is where I should just carefully appreciate it as the little girl strips, then after enjoying the sensation of holding on to her majesty, gently reject her, is the correct way of doing things.

"Oh, wait, this one can't do that."

However, Kishirika stopped.
Don't stop, just a bit more and it could have been seen.

"This time this one's fiance is here as well. Sorry, but this one cannot offer you this body."

The pants that had been pulled down were pulled back up again.
I feel like a man who has just had his pure heart played around with.

Money is no good, the world is no good, the body is no good.


I showed my face in the once in a month homeroom.
Same as always, Nanahoshi was nowhere to be seen.

"Good morning, Shisho."
"Good morning, Grand Master."

Zanoba and Julie were lined up as they greeted me.
I just thought it, but Julie is fairly cute.
I think she was seven years old this year.
She's still far from my strike zone, but her long flowing, orange colored hair is cute.
I brush her head.
Julie looked up at me surprised, then quickly after she casted her eyes downwards, her body started trembling.
It seems she's still afraid.
Even though I don't plan to take her and eat her alive. [85]

He just doesnt have the body response for a relative, even when he has no reason to think the woman was one. Yet he always has a response for a nonrelative, even if that person may have been a bit aged, or a bit too young.

Read all that scenes and tell me THAT Rudeus got burdened from previous trauma to the point of staying away from either young girls or relatives. Not a trace, is my analysis. And therefore the Aisha chapter retcon those many sceness' background setting.

Ebrie
2016-08-14, 13:23
"Ah, I'll give you some travelling money, but if it seems like you're lacking then try to find one of fathers' subordinates in the Adventurer's Guild."
"I understand and will comply."
"I think you can trust the soldiers escorting you, but since the other side is unknown, please take care of yourself."
"There's no problem. We're already acquainted."
"Ah, I see, ummm..."
"Rudeus-sama."

While I was thinking of various things, Lilia suddenly stood up and walked over.
And then she hugged me with my head in her chest.
Her voluptuous chest was being pressed against my face.
Reflexively my nasal breathing got rough.

"Umm, Lilia-san, it's touching?"
"Rudeus-sama hasn't changed since the past."

While Lilia was saying that she made a small laugh.


"It's alright to stay and watch."

Although Suzanne said that, I still refused.
Even if she's someone I know, I shouldn't be looking at another wife's breasts.

After all, Suzanne's breasts will never lose to Zenith and Lilia's size.
Moreover, I did not know whether now is her milking period, her breasts seem to be much bigger.
If I saw them, the Sennin[27] from my heart will be awakened.
Then I would be dripping saliva over Lilia.
Sylphiette and Roxy will be disappointed.
Indeed, it’s clear that their breasts couldn't win.
But, I did not choose them because of their breasts.
That kind of worry is needless.


"I see."

The female knight had said this, and then crouched down and embraced me tightly.

"...Eh!"

I was shocked.
I suddenly got hugged out of nowhere.

"It must have been hard on you..."

While saying this, she started patting my head.

Because she's wearing armor, this doesn't feel very good.
However, she gives off the sweet and soft scent of a woman.
Naturally my lower parts... don't rise.

That's strange.

Why, oh son of mine?
What's happened?
It's the smell of slightly sweaty women that you love so much.
Just recently, even that time with Eris...
Which reminds me.
I look at Eris, find that her eyes are wide open and she's clenching her fists.

Scary.

"Umm... errm?"

After patting my head, the female knight had risen to a stand.
Without looking towards me, she then declared,

"I'll be taking custody of them."
"What!? One is a demon, you know!"

Baqciel is confused.
The female knight snatches the letter from my hand, and quickly looks over it.

"There's no problem with the letter, either. This is Lord Galgard's handwriting."
"It can't be. Is a Temple Knight going against Milis' teachings...?"

At that point, with an "Ah-", Eris raised her voice.
The female knight turns to face Eris and winks.
What?

"I, the Middle Leader[48] of the Order of the Temple's 『Shield Group』 have spoken."
"Ku-, even though you had lost your subordinates, and were then demoted..."
"Hmph. I'll send those words right back at you. However, between I who had completed my duty, and you who had given up halfway, there's quite a difference in our positions."

Baqciel gnashed his teeth at that.
Somehow, it seems that he's also been demoted.
Considering this, despite being called 'Duke', the position seems quite a bit less important.
It's strange.

Bacqiel's eyes are full of hatred.

"You... No matter how high of birth you may be, if you get too carried away..."

Baqciel never finished his complaint.
The female knight had quickly lowered her head.

"No, I apologize. I've said too much. I have no intention of quarreling further with you. This case is a personal matter. Please forgive me."

I had been thinking that she had great timing.
Saying as much as she wanted, and then immediately apologizing.
With those few words, she had dispelled Baqciel's anger as well.
I'll try and copy her the next time I anger someone.

"A personal matter, you say?"
"Mmn."

The knight nodded firmly in the face of Baqciel's puzzled expression.
Then, with a slap she then places her hand on my shoulder.

"This child is my nephew."

What was that!?
....
....
....
Right now I'm in a West Port Inn, and am currently being hugged.
The ones in the room are Therese, Eris and I.
It might be because Ruijerd had read the mood, but he's not here.

While saying this, Therese is burying her face into the nape of my neck.
"Rudeus-kun. I know about you from Nee-sama's letters."
"Is that so? What did mother[49] write?"
"That you were extremely cute. And though I'd never imagined that I'd see the real thing, you truly are extremely cute."

While saying this, Therese is burying her face into the nape of my neck.
Thinking about it, in the 12 years I've been alive, though I've been called brazen, suspicious looking, or disgusting, the only one who's ever thought of me as cute is Zenith.

However, though I'm being embraced by a large-breasted beauty, for some reason the railgun between my legs isn't firing off any coins with its super electromagnetism.[50]
Speaking of which, my VICTORY never did STAND UP when it was Zenith.[51]
Thinking about it, I never did think to become any closer to Norn than necessary.

...I wonder if it's because we're related.

"Therese. It's about time you let go of Rudeus."

Resting her chin in her hand, Eris taps at Therese.
She's in a bad mood.
She might be jealous.

I'm a sinful man.

"Eris-sama. Though I understand your feelings, I don't know when I'll be able to see Rudeus-kun again. Moreover, the next time we meet, he'll have definitely lost his cuteness. It's a fleeting moment. Please pardon this."

Without any shame, Therese continues to stroke my body.

"Therese-san, why are you speaking to Eris so respectfully?"
"I owe her my life, after all."

I decide to investigate further.

Eris had gone out to suppress goblins, and saved Therese when she was driven into a corner by enemy forces.
At the time, Therese had been protecting a certain VIP and had it not been for Eris, that VIP would have lost their life as well.
The story was something like that.

I hadn't heard a word of this.
When I had looked towards Eris, I found that she was making an awkward expression.

"Sorry, Rudeus. I had forgotten about it..."

According to Eris, she had seen me all depressed and forgotten all about about the goblin hunting incident.
It's my fault, huh?
Guess it couldn't be helped.

Therese is (I'm being hugged from behind so I'm not sure, but) probably making an expression of ecstasy and groping my body.

I won't go so far as to say it feels disgusting, but somehow I feel kind of uncomfortable.
At any rate, even having my body touched, with boobs pressed against my back, I'm not getting aroused.
It's a new sensation.

"Ahh, but Rudeus-kun really is cute. Cute enough that I'd eat him up."
"Do you mean eating me up in a sexual sense?"

I had tried to drop an appropriate joke in, but my mouth was covered up by her hand.

"...You're cuter when you don't talk, huh? When you do, I recall that Paul guy's face."

It appears that Therese doesn't like Paul very much.

"Still, Grand Master Gash is the same as ever, huh?"

While she continued to stroke me, Therese changed the subject.

"You'd think that it'd be obvious that that kind of thing would happen if you handed over such a letter to Baqciel."



I havent remember which later part though

To the first quote, he pretty clearly seems uncomfortable here. Lilia is the aggressor here, and Rudeus seems to be trying to distance himself. The phrase 'Reflexively my nasal breathing got rough.' could be interpreted as a horny teenager feeling aroused by being shoved into boobs (after all, he is incredibly pent up after spending so long with Eris).

To the second, I'm not entirely sure what you are trying to prove. Sure, he is attracted to Suzanne, but he's no trying to act on it because of his family. The scene is supposed to illustrate his growth towards self control.

For Therese, I'm not sure why he would be attracted. She's basically treating him like a plush doll, while also being in full armor. Not only would that hurt, but it would possibly be awkward for him, knowing Eris looking from afar. As for his 'son' not rising, I can come up with two possibilities: maybe because of his feelings toward Eris, his lust is redirected elsewhere (or was afraid of Eris watching him). Or maybe he didn't like the infantlization.

Those quotes still do not prove that Lilia was always an object of lust for him, rather than her being someone he finds attractive. I'd want to see proof of this after she arrives to the Magic City, but I doubt there is any. Rudeus stays pretty devoted to his wives once he marries them.

drkurochan
2016-08-14, 13:53
"Ah, I'll give you some travelling money, but if it seems like you're lacking then try to find one of fathers' subordinates in the Adventurer's Guild."
"I understand and will comply."
"I think you can trust the soldiers escorting you, but since the other side is unknown, please take care of yourself."
"There's no problem. We're already acquainted."
"Ah, I see, ummm..."
"Rudeus-sama."

While I was thinking of various things, Lilia suddenly stood up and walked over.
And then she hugged me with my head in her chest.
Her voluptuous chest was being pressed against my face.
Reflexively my nasal breathing got rough.

"Umm, Lilia-san, it's touching?"
"Rudeus-sama hasn't changed since the past."

While Lilia was saying that she made a small laugh.
Lilia's description at that scene is mid 30s. It looks like she has aged a bit after five years, but it seems like her skin has a variety of bends in it piled on top, since she got involved in that teleport incident, it can't really be helped.

"It's alright to stay and watch."

Although Suzanne said that, I still refused.
Even if she's someone I know, I shouldn't be looking at another wife's breasts.

After all, Suzanne's breasts will never lose to Zenith and Lilia's size.
Moreover, I did not know whether now is her milking period, her breasts seem to be much bigger.
If I saw them, the Sennin[27] from my heart will be awakened.
Then I would be dripping saliva over Lilia.
Sylphiette and Roxy will be disappointed.
Indeed, it’s clear that their breasts couldn't win.
But, I did not choose them because of their breasts.
That kind of worry is needless.

Well then, here I've once again experienced something mysterious.
Just now, Aisha took off her small, baggy maid outfit, tore off the wet panties she was wearing, wiped down her body, and then put the shirt I normally wear on.
In my hands is a wooden bucket and soap for the purpose of laundry, as well as a primary schoolgirl panties.

If it was the me from my past life, in this situation with these items, I would probably fall into an aroused state.

I'd like you to think about it and see.
On the nearby bed is a little girl who after being stripped once is now wearing my baggy clothes after she just wet herself and is currently crying.
Obviously with no panties.
If it's a gentleman, then anyone who falls into such a situation would normally be excited.

It's not like I can put Eris's panties on her.
Her panties are No Touch.
That's one of the important rules of this "Dead End".
No matter how much of an emergency situation it is, how could I possibly dig through her belongings when she's not around and pull some panties out...
Just thinking about it is frightening.

If I were to break the rules Ruijerd won't come to save me and if I use demon eyes to run away Eris will be displeased for around three days.
Even though I say that, if I get hit defenselessly then my face will change enough that I won't be able to taste meals for around three days.
Well, I could use healing magic to fix it.

In any case, it's a situation where it wouldn't be strange for the wild beast of my heart to be howling.

However, even in that situation, my heart is currently as calm and silent as the surface of a lake
Putting aside arousal, there's not even a single wave.
Clear and serene.

It's a strange thing.
In regards to the sobbing Aisha I felt "She's a troubled child" while embracing her, yet I can't remember any sexual arousal beyond that.
I wonder if I became a Sage while I wasn't paying attention.
Or else, maybe I touched upon Eris's imperial wrath without realizing it, and my Pocket Monster was made incompetent for battle.[13]
Maybe in order to forget the overwhelming fear of that time, I placed a seal on the memories.

No, never!
That can't be the case, are you alright, My Son?

And while I was thinking like that, the laundry ended in a flash.
The linen panties with no sex appeal and the small maid outfit that appears to be made of relatively high class material.
I handed those over to Aisha who at some point had stopped crying, and she cheerfully started changing her clothes.
I carefully stared at that.

After all I'm not getting aroused.
I wonder if this body won't get aroused by family.
Even though my previous life it was men and women of all ages without discrimination...
The thing known as life is mysterious.
Even though he knows Aisha is his sister, he still have dirty thoughts as a matter of reflex. But the disconnect between his thoughts and his body response are starkly contrast.

"I see."

The female knight had said this, and then crouched down and embraced me tightly.

"...Eh!"

I was shocked.
I suddenly got hugged out of nowhere.

"It must have been hard on you..."

While saying this, she started patting my head.

Because she's wearing armor, this doesn't feel very good.
However, she gives off the sweet and soft scent of a woman.
Naturally my lower parts... don't rise.

That's strange.

Why, oh son of mine?
What's happened?
It's the smell of slightly sweaty women that you love so much.
Just recently, even that time with Eris...
Which reminds me.
I look at Eris, find that her eyes are wide open and she's clenching her fists.

Scary.

"Umm... errm?"

After patting my head, the female knight had risen to a stand.
Without looking towards me, she then declared,

"I'll be taking custody of them."
"What!? One is a demon, you know!"

Baqciel is confused.
The female knight snatches the letter from my hand, and quickly looks over it.

"There's no problem with the letter, either. This is Lord Galgard's handwriting."
"It can't be. Is a Temple Knight going against Milis' teachings...?"

At that point, with an "Ah-", Eris raised her voice.
The female knight turns to face Eris and winks.
What?

"I, the Middle Leader[48] of the Order of the Temple's 『Shield Group』 have spoken."
"Ku-, even though you had lost your subordinates, and were then demoted..."
"Hmph. I'll send those words right back at you. However, between I who had completed my duty, and you who had given up halfway, there's quite a difference in our positions."

Baqciel gnashed his teeth at that.
Somehow, it seems that he's also been demoted.
Considering this, despite being called 'Duke', the position seems quite a bit less important.
It's strange.

Bacqiel's eyes are full of hatred.

"You... No matter how high of birth you may be, if you get too carried away..."

Baqciel never finished his complaint.
The female knight had quickly lowered her head.

"No, I apologize. I've said too much. I have no intention of quarreling further with you. This case is a personal matter. Please forgive me."

I had been thinking that she had great timing.
Saying as much as she wanted, and then immediately apologizing.
With those few words, she had dispelled Baqciel's anger as well.
I'll try and copy her the next time I anger someone.

"A personal matter, you say?"
"Mmn."

The knight nodded firmly in the face of Baqciel's puzzled expression.
Then, with a slap she then places her hand on my shoulder.

"This child is my nephew."

What was that!?
....
....
....
Right now I'm in a West Port Inn, and am currently being hugged.
The ones in the room are Therese, Eris and I.
It might be because Ruijerd had read the mood, but he's not here.

While saying this, Therese is burying her face into the nape of my neck.
"Rudeus-kun. I know about you from Nee-sama's letters."
"Is that so? What did mother[49] write?"
"That you were extremely cute. And though I'd never imagined that I'd see the real thing, you truly are extremely cute."

While saying this, Therese is burying her face into the nape of my neck.
Thinking about it, in the 12 years I've been alive, though I've been called brazen, suspicious looking, or disgusting, the only one who's ever thought of me as cute is Zenith.

However, though I'm being embraced by a large-breasted beauty, for some reason the railgun between my legs isn't firing off any coins with its super electromagnetism.[50]
Speaking of which, my VICTORY never did STAND UP when it was Zenith.[51]
Thinking about it, I never did think to become any closer to Norn than necessary.

...I wonder if it's because we're related.

"Therese. It's about time you let go of Rudeus."

Resting her chin in her hand, Eris taps at Therese.
She's in a bad mood.
She might be jealous.

I'm a sinful man.

"Eris-sama. Though I understand your feelings, I don't know when I'll be able to see Rudeus-kun again. Moreover, the next time we meet, he'll have definitely lost his cuteness. It's a fleeting moment. Please pardon this."

Without any shame, Therese continues to stroke my body.

"Therese-san, why are you speaking to Eris so respectfully?"
"I owe her my life, after all."

I decide to investigate further.

Eris had gone out to suppress goblins, and saved Therese when she was driven into a corner by enemy forces.
At the time, Therese had been protecting a certain VIP and had it not been for Eris, that VIP would have lost their life as well.
The story was something like that.

I hadn't heard a word of this.
When I had looked towards Eris, I found that she was making an awkward expression.

"Sorry, Rudeus. I had forgotten about it..."

According to Eris, she had seen me all depressed and forgotten all about about the goblin hunting incident.
It's my fault, huh?
Guess it couldn't be helped.

Therese is (I'm being hugged from behind so I'm not sure, but) probably making an expression of ecstasy and groping my body.

I won't go so far as to say it feels disgusting, but somehow I feel kind of uncomfortable.
At any rate, even having my body touched, with boobs pressed against my back, I'm not getting aroused.
It's a new sensation.

"Ahh, but Rudeus-kun really is cute. Cute enough that I'd eat him up."
"Do you mean eating me up in a sexual sense?"

I had tried to drop an appropriate joke in, but my mouth was covered up by her hand.

"...You're cuter when you don't talk, huh? When you do, I recall that Paul guy's face."

It appears that Therese doesn't like Paul very much.

"Still, Grand Master Gash is the same as ever, huh?"

While she continued to stroke me, Therese changed the subject.

"You'd think that it'd be obvious that that kind of thing would happen if you handed over such a letter to Baqciel."



Therese was an adult woman at the time, as far from the girl in that incident of the previous world as possible.
In contrast, just month earlier,



"O...oh??"

It was a little girl dressed in a risque, black leather styled outfit.
Boots that come up to her knees. Leather short-shorts. A leather tube-top.
Her collarbone, curveless waist, navel and thighs - all of her skin is pale.
And finally her most noticeable features; voluminous and wavy violet hair, and horns like a goat.

I understood the moment I saw her.
It's a succubus.
Not only that but a little girl.
Without a doubt she should be younger than me.
Could this possibly be a reward the Hitogami is giving me for giving it my best.
That guy can occasionally do some good things it seems.

No, it shouldn't be a succubus.
In this world the succubus related species are considered a type of monster.
If I remember correctly it's a monster that inhabits the Begaritto Continent.
I remember back to when Paul said in an unusually serious face, "Our family cannot win against them."
I'm sure if I were to actually meet a succubus I would lose to its technique and be exhausted by it.
Succubus are the Greyrat family's natural enemy.
Well, putting that aside.

There's no monsters in the middle of the town.
In other words, she is not a succubus.
She should just be a child from a normal magic race wearing erotic clothing.

"O..ohhhh! Yo... you bastard, what have you doneeeee??! Look at what you have done!"

The little girl was trembling all over.

"Th...this man was... this man you know...?!"

She made an unbelievable face.
What have you done? What are you going to do about this? Sort of face.[4]

"Ah, sorry about that, was he an acquaintance?"

Is what I asked while tilting my head.
It wasn't the sort of feeling and face a normal middle aged man would speak with to an acquainted child.
How do I put it, it was more like the exact feeling of an aroused middle aged lolicon.
Look at this bright red face, even after he's lost consciousness he still has that loose smile.

He may have been about to take the little girl home and feed her an extravagant meal and offer a warm bed, but in return he would have requested a hot night, that sort of feeling.

This man was going to feed this one with an empty stomach fo... food!!
"This man was going to feed this one[5] with an empty stomach fo... food!!"

I heard a loud gurgling noise from somewhere.
It was a sound like the ground was rumbling.
Just as that sound was about to end the little girls knees gave out and she fell to the ground.

"Are...are you alright?"

Without thinking about it I crouched down and picked her up.
I wouldn't let a justified reason to touch a little girl pass me by.
However, don't be mistaken.
I came to save her on the orders of the Hitogami.
Different from that middle aged man just now.

"Gu?? Ugh? It's been 300 years since this one revived. To think this one would fall in this sort of place? This one cannot let Laplace know about this matter!"

Somehow a strange self play started up.
Could it be that this outfit is some sort of cosplay?

"Fo...for the time being, eat this and get a hold of yourself."

I shoved three of the skewers I had prepared into the mouth of the little girl.

"Mogyumogyumogyu"

The moment they were shoved into the little girls mouth her eyes flew wide open, with her eyes open just like that she kept chewing away eating the skewered food.
Then she even plundered the skewers I had in my hand as well.
I still had 12 pieces left on my skewer, but 10 pieces suddenly disappeared.

"U..u..o..oh! It's good! The first meal in a year is good!"

The little girl regained her energy.
She suddenly lifted her back from the ground energetically with a spring and jumped up, and then stood on the ground after a single rotation.
Her physical ability must be surprisingly high it seems.

"This one has been saved, saved! You! With this, this one should be able to last another year!"

Then at that point the little girl's eyes finally met with mine.
It was an odd set of eyes that had a mix of purple and black.
I wonder if this is some sort of cosplay as well.
No, there shouldn't be any contacts in existence in this world.
Her eyes should have originally been like this.

"Oh?"

The little girls right eye spun around in a circle.
In that moment, the color changed to blue.

Tha....that's creepy!!

"Uwaaa! Uwaa! What's with you? Amazing! That's disgusting! What's this, what's this?! Fuhahaha! It's the first time this one has seen something like this!"

After seeing my face the little girl started to say that while jumping around energetically.

Yeah, it's a shock of course.
It's the first time in a while since anyone has looked at my face and called me disgusting.
However, I also thought that she was creepy.
I'll just call it even here.

"Is it that? During the time it was in the stomach it was a twin, then when it was born one half died, is that it?"

What?
What is she saying?

"No, I don't think that is the case."
"Really?"
"Yeah."
"Still your magic power quantity!! It's above Laplace you know."

What is higher than who?

"Well, it's fine! Name yourself!"
"I'm Rudeus Greyrat."
"Alright! This one is called Kishirika Kishirisu! A.K.A. THE GREAT EMPRESS OF THE DEMON REALM!"

With her hands on her hips, and her pelvis thrust forward, she threw out her chest with pride.
Suddenly seeing thighs in front of my eyes, I reflexively licked her.
It smells but it's sweet.

"Uhyaa! What are you doing!? That's dirty!"

The little girl started to glare at me as she clamped her legs together and started rubbing them.

However, I see now.
Great Empress of the Demon Realm, Kishirika Kishirisu.
Even I've heard that name before.
In the Human-Demon Great War, the one who lead the magic race, fought, and was easily crushed, the immortal Demon Empress.

I wonder if it's the real thing.
I came here following the advice of that Hitogami.
There is the possibility that she is the real Great Demon Empress.

However, would the real Demon Empress be in this sort of place in the middle of nowhere on the Magic Continent, furthermore collapsing from starvation.
No matter how you look at it, that can't be the case.

That's right.
This must be like where the children of the Magic Continent go around playing, pretending to be great people of the past.

And the especially popular one is the Demon God Laplace.
For someone like me who knows the truth, he's a disgusting and evil bastard but that guy is popular.
Even though he did lose the war, he subjugated the Magic Continent, gathered together the magic race and brought them status, then brought about peace.
The magic races greatest man in history, is how it's been told.

What the children usually go around imitating is the story of Laplace.
Especially, the episode where he fights the immortal demon lord, until we came here to Wind Port it was something I saw a number of times.

Great Demon Empress Kishirika as well, is a great being if you can call it a great being.
However, probably because it's from a much older era I've almost never seen make believe play of her.

This child is certainly a passionate fan of the Great Demon Empress and she has no friends to play together with, so she was playing alone in this back alley.
Thinking of it that way is smart.

Hmm.
Being alone is lonely right.
It can't be helped I'll play along as well.

"Wa, wa ha! Please excuse me! Your majesty!"

I started acting out in exaggeration and bowed over on one knee similar to a retainer.

"O? O.. oh! That's good, that's good! This one has always waited for that sort of response! The young ones these days don't have any manners after all!"

Yes, yes, Kishirika started to nod happily.
Yes, yes.
That's right, I'm sure you wanted someone to play along with you.

"Please forgive my rudeness for I did not know you had revived and acted in an impolite manner!"
"It's fine. You have saved this ones life. It's fine if you ask for any one desire."

Saved your life... I just gave you some food when you were hungry, right?

"Ummm? Then, I want great riches."
"Idiot! This one is totally broke just as it looks!"

Even though you said anything?
No, I guess it's that sort of setting.
If you were to ask for money, then there would be an episode later where you're forced to pay it back.

"Then, please give me half of the world."
"Wha! Half of the world you say! That's huge! However, half-assed. Why only half?"
"Well, since I don't really need the men."

Oh that's bad, I let out a bit of my true intentions.
It's not something to tell a little girl about.

"I see, this one understands it now? Even though you're still young, you're a lustful one. However, sorry. To tell you the truth, this one hasn't acquired the world either you know?"

Well, all of the wars Kishirika lead the magic race in lost after all.

"Then, your body is fine. Pay me back with your body."
"Oh? With this body? Even at that age you're that lustful, I'm worried for your future."
"Haha, of course that was a jo-..."

A joke, I was about to say, when Kishirika started to put her hands on her hot pants.

"Really, it can't be helped. It's the first time since this one has revived, be gentle, okay?"

Kishirika's cheeks started to change color and she started to unfasten the button on her hot pants.
Eh? Seriously?
I just meant it as a joke though...
No, but, this isn't the sort of atmosphere where you can say it's a joke.
This is where I should just carefully appreciate it as the little girl strips, then after enjoying the sensation of holding on to her majesty, gently reject her, is the correct way of doing things.

"Oh, wait, this one can't do that."

However, Kishirika stopped.
Don't stop, just a bit more and it could have been seen.

"This time this one's fiance is here as well. Sorry, but this one cannot offer you this body."

The pants that had been pulled down were pulled back up again.
I feel like a man who has just had his pure heart played around with.

Money is no good, the world is no good, the body is no good.


I showed my face in the once in a month homeroom.
Same as always, Nanahoshi was nowhere to be seen.

"Good morning, Shisho."
"Good morning, Grand Master."

Zanoba and Julie were lined up as they greeted me.
I just thought it, but Julie is fairly cute.
I think she was seven years old this year.
She's still far from my strike zone, but her long flowing, orange colored hair is cute.
I brush her head.
Julie looked up at me surprised, then quickly after she casted her eyes downwards, her body started trembling.
It seems she's still afraid.
Even though I don't plan to take her and eat her alive. [85]

He just doesnt have the body response for a relative, even when he has no reason to think the woman was one. Yet he always has a response for a nonrelative, even if that person may have been a bit aged, or a bit too young.

IMO, these just show how Rudeus started to mature without him realizing.
He used to be a shut-in with only fictional and sexual relationship. So basically, all the so-called "women" he used to interact are only for pleasing his sexual urges (loli, incest, and so on...)
Now, he lives a "real life" and, like you and me, he is not really a beast. If a woman, even if she is good-looking, hugs you without a reason, I don't think you'll think "OK, let's have sex".
For Julie, he clearly says he is not interested in her. It's not because you say a child is cute that you have a "response".

laclongquan
2016-08-15, 12:48
Yall are delusional.

Rudeus is exactly that type horndogs. People see him as a gentleman only because he works so very hard to control his aspect, but he's exactly that type of pervert. Remember: he's a member of Notus Greyrat, and his father is also a typical horny guy of that blood.
++ The incredible aroma of lust his adult self disperse is awesome to behold to beastman's nose. The two beast princesses mentioned this several times.
The first two examples are to show he do want to slobber all over Lila and try hard to control it. Object of lust. desirable. Whatever term you want to use. Even if she's middle aged nearing to old.
I dont want to bother to find more, but let me remind you that blackskin, 4hand, thousand year old, grandmother with adult grandson, Demon Lord Atofe is not out of his strike zone.

Ebrie
2016-08-15, 18:39
Yall are delusional.

Rudeus is exactly that type horndogs. People see him as a gentleman only because he works so very hard to control his aspect, but he's exactly that type of pervert. Remember: he's a member of Notus Greyrat, and his father is also a typical horny guy of that blood.
++ The incredible aroma of lust his adult self disperse is awesome to behold to beastman's nose. The two beast princesses mentioned this several times.
The first two examples are to show he do want to slobber all over Lila and try hard to control it. Object of lust. desirable. Whatever term you want to use. Even if she's middle aged nearing to old.
I dont want to bother to find more, but let me remind you that blackskin, 4hand, thousand year old, grandmother with adult grandson, Demon Lord Atofe is not out of his strike zone.

Rudeus definitely stays a bit perverted throughout the series (just look at the Automaton in Redundancy). However, being perverted and lustful can be viewed on a spectrum, from noting someone is attractive to being an uncontrollable sex machine. As the series goes on, most of lust tapers off and focuses on more healthy avenues (only having sex with his wives/soon to be wives) and he doesn't really stray from it. I think you are conflating 'Rudeus notices when people are attractive' with 'Rudeus is furiously suppressing his lust for every woman he meets'. Again, I would want to see proof of Rudeus actively suppressing his lust for Lilia after he's married, but I don't believe that ever happens. If you want to hold onto your opinion without that proof, that's fine, believe whatever you want, it's just a story.

drkurochan
2016-08-16, 01:57
Yall are delusional.

Rudeus is exactly that type horndogs. People see him as a gentleman only because he works so very hard to control his aspect, but he's exactly that type of pervert. Remember: he's a member of Notus Greyrat, and his father is also a typical horny guy of that blood.
++ The incredible aroma of lust his adult self disperse is awesome to behold to beastman's nose. The two beast princesses mentioned this several times.
The first two examples are to show he do want to slobber all over Lila and try hard to control it. Object of lust. desirable. Whatever term you want to use. Even if she's middle aged nearing to old.
I dont want to bother to find more, but let me remind you that blackskin, 4hand, thousand year old, grandmother with adult grandson, Demon Lord Atofe is not out of his strike zone.

As you've said Rudy is definitively a pervert, but as he grows up he controls his urges. He has morals whereas in his previous life he didn't. Most people who don't like MT say they find him disgusting. However, I've always found his pervert side funny, and never took it seriously. Because, I know he will never cross the red line.That's why he is an interesting character. We know his thoughts, all his thoughts that crossed his mind, including his most idiotic and pervert thoughts. However, when things are serious, he become serious.
IRL, everybody is like him, or rather, he is like everybody.

Back to the topic about Lilia, I don't remember he was so attracted to Lilia, at least, I never felt he was. If there were a scene it was imply he were, I think that would be more a joke, something to amuse the readers from the author than anything else.

Btw, anybody knows what this Sara from vol 7 in the LN will become ? At the end of this volume are there any hints of her future ? Will she get married ? Will she die ? Thanks

Hakatri
2016-08-16, 15:59
I forgot about this until now but I seem to recall that in the WN version the pre reincarnation rudeus was fapping to a picture of his niece and it was retconed to a random loli for the LN, since the first volumes were already out when the translation started they simply used the LN for the first three volumes and went with the WN for the posterior ones, I know about of it because of some comments stated in reviews but the baka-tsuki translation has nothing of it

So yeah, the niece incident was there all along but was rewritten for the LN, i guess the Aisha marriage chapter will also be rewritten to match the previous modifications



Btw, anybody knows what this Sara from vol 7 in the LN will become ? At the end of this volume are there any hints of her future ? Will she get married ? Will she die ? Thanks

Sara was mentioned in rudeus memories as an adventured he almost bedded but failed to due to the loins sleeping that night and there were no regrets nor longing even in the posterior LN volumes so i assume she will simply move away with her life like other side characters did

Personally i ship her with Soldat because the both of them are tsunderes

drkurochan
2016-08-16, 22:53
Sara was mentioned in rudeus memories as an adventured he almost bedded but failed to due to the loins sleeping that night and there were no regrets nor longing even in the posterior LN volumes so i assume she will simply move away with her life like other side characters did

Personally i ship her with Soldat because the both of them are tsunderes

OK, thanks. Too bad there aren't any hint of what would happen to her, could have been interesting

MinusVitamin
2016-08-17, 01:38
Btw, anybody knows what this Sara from vol 7 in the LN will become ? At the end of this volume are there any hints of her future ? Will she get married ? Will she die ? Thanks

it'll be quite funny if she was travelling around to cure herself similar to Rudeus when he got ED.

Tommk
2016-08-18, 15:44
I was reading the comments, and guys, I want to know how do all of you withstand Ruki0089 from Indoneisia complaints on Aisha 24/7. It all started around page 600 until now with comments like
2016-02-06,
''Ok.....I finally have reason to drop this....hah~~, drop... I totally disappointed with this...
Fuck you author!!!''

2016-07-23,
''Aisha fell in love? Heh! What a funny jokes... her love is an insult to all romance story that I really like...''

Don't you all feel that he is suffering from false sense of entitlement, implying he is contributing anything at all. Not to mention, he said he is dropping the series at feb but still carry on being a lil kid? And you know, you can drop a series without ranting and repeating in the forum for 40 pages.

Freaking hell lmao

Ruki0089
2016-08-18, 15:48
Ahahahaha.....:heh:

MinusVitamin
2016-08-18, 15:49
I've recently read Jobless Oblige chapt, and wondering if anyone else thinks the inn owner is an apostle? The guy who kept asking Seig about his sis Lara





I was reading the comments, and guys, I want to know how do all of you withstand Ruki0089 from Indoneisia complaints on Aisha 24/7. It all started around page 600 until now with comments like
2016-02-06,
''Ok.....I finally have reason to drop this....hah~~, drop... I totally disappointed with this...
Fuck you author!!!''

2016-07-23,
''Aisha fell in love? Heh! What a funny jokes... her love is an insult to all romance story that I really like...''

Don't you all feel that he is suffering from false sense of entitlement, implying he is contributing anything at all. Not to mention, he said he is dropping the series at feb but still carry on being a lil kid? And you know, you can drop a series without ranting and repeating in the forum for 40 pages.

Freaking hell lmao

SHHH! he might come back!

Hakatri
2016-08-18, 18:22
I've recently read Jobless Oblige chapt, and wondering if anyone else thinks the inn owner is an apostle? The guy who kept asking Seig about his sis Lara


He was an info dealer so its reasonable and Sieg only told him regular infor that anyone could get by diving a little and not the private info that only close people can get, like her adivination method based on voyeurism

I as going to say he sounds like a fan of Lara but then i remmembered that Norn fans are not shown anymore after their only chapter

MinusVitamin
2016-08-18, 19:47
He was an info dealer so its reasonable and Sieg only told him regular infor that anyone could get by diving a little and not the private info that only close people can get, like her adivination method based on voyeurism

I as going to say he sounds like a fan of Lara but then i remmembered that Norn fans are not shown anymore after their only chapter

For info dealer it would be normal, but he was also giving out some heavy info (location, time drugs being dealth) in exchange for some small talks.
And Lara hardly ever steps out of her labratory so it can also be difficult to tell what she's up to.

Okashira
2016-08-18, 19:54
For info dealer it would be normal, but he was also giving out some heavy info (location, time drugs being dealth) in exchange for some small talks.

Duh? It's obvious that the info dealer's main paycheck was selling info about Sieg to Rudeus, that's why he was "feeding" stuff to Sieg via "pennyless trade", it was for the sake of producing more juicy first hand info to sell.

MinusVitamin
2016-08-18, 20:49
Duh? It's obvious that the info dealer's main paycheck was selling info about Sieg to Rudeus, that's why he was "feeding" stuff to Sieg via "pennyless trade", it was for the sake of producing more juicy first hand info to sell.

forgot about rudeus, this would makes more sense.

Onii Sama
2016-08-22, 19:09
Just want to drop a line and let you know that because of a new assignment, I won't able to translate the dragon slayer side story for some time.

Sorry for dropping the ball, guys. My bad! I'll post here again when I can restart work on it again.

MinusVitamin
2016-08-23, 12:44
Just want to drop a line and let you know that because of a new assignment, I won't able to translate the dragon slayer side story for some time.

Sorry for dropping the ball, guys. My bad! I'll post here again when I can restart work on it again.

Don't worries, go do your real world stuff first. It's much more important than having us nerds die from the lack of MT translation. No biggie.

Breimn
2016-08-24, 12:15
New vol s illustrations are out. Lets hope someone share dramacd.

fggt
2016-08-25, 00:28
From 4chan:
http://puu.sh/qNzgI.jpg
http://puu.sh/qNzhD.jpg
http://puu.sh/qNzi7.jpg
http://puu.sh/qNzl7.jpg
http://puu.sh/qNzlG.jpg
http://puu.sh/qNzmb.jpg
http://puu.sh/qNzmW.jpg
http://puu.sh/qNznv.jpg
http://puu.sh/qNzo1.jpg
http://puu.sh/qNzoZ.jpg
http://puu.sh/qNzpv.jpg
http://puu.sh/qNzqC.png

Now where is muh anime adaptation?

Ruki0089
2016-08-25, 00:47
They won't adapted it to anime~~��

u2L2rQ
2016-08-25, 04:29
From 4chan:
http://puu.sh/qNzgI.jpg
http://puu.sh/qNzhD.jpg
http://puu.sh/qNzi7.jpg
http://puu.sh/qNzl7.jpg
http://puu.sh/qNzlG.jpg
http://puu.sh/qNzmb.jpg
http://puu.sh/qNzmW.jpg
http://puu.sh/qNznv.jpg
http://puu.sh/qNzo1.jpg
http://puu.sh/qNzoZ.jpg
http://puu.sh/qNzpv.jpg
http://puu.sh/qNzqC.png

Now where is muh anime adaptation?

Roxy is not loli anymore? she gotten a sudden growth spurt maybe because it would be bad to have loli H scene in the publish light novel.

dark44
2016-08-25, 04:55
They won't adapted it to anime~~��

no way it have shit end

Waxman
2016-08-25, 07:28
If i am not wrong Roxy looks about 14 years old while Rudeus and Silphy are 16 years old at the time of Paul's death.
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That's why she doesn't look quite so young.
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So a Drama CD? Is there some info on it?

Breimn
2016-08-25, 07:37
If i am not wrong Roxy looks about 14 years old while Rudeus and Silphy are 16 years old at the time of Paul's death.
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That's why she doesn't look quite so young.
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So a Drama CD? Is there some info on it?

Still did not find anything.
http://imgsrc.baidu.com/forum/w%3D580/sign=234a2770df2a60595210e1121835342d/25e361deb48f8c54e6ab0e9632292df5e1fe7f46.jpg

Hakatri
2016-08-25, 21:43
Roxy is not loli anymore? she gotten a sudden growth spurt maybe because it would be bad to have loli H scene in the publish light novel.

She is smaller than Silphy whom is also not a tall girl, she is still a loli and she is finally being shown with more casual charms as in the manga

Of the bunch this was my favorite

http://puu.sh/qNzmW.jpg

laclongquan
2016-08-27, 06:31
I am pretty curious about the LN change on Rudeus-Elinalise journey toward the dungeon.

Fairy Water
2016-08-27, 12:28
Can't wait to see grow up Eris!

Waxman
2016-08-28, 01:04
I can't wait to meet Badi's onee-chan, Nina and Isolte.
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And of course finally get an illustration of Rudeus' Magic Armor.
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Anyways it doesn't seem there's news on the Drama CD... Hm... I have already stated wich actors i would have choiced to voice the cast but now i realize i don't know what story it can tell...
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Oh well i suppose it will be an slice of life of Rudeus and his 2 wifes.

lexlexz
2016-08-29, 01:19
i dont remember does rudeus lost his hand in the webnovel too?:confused

i forgot he lost his hand but got a ?protetic? (new golem arm from ZANOBA right)
but he recover his arm right? though i dont remember when?

Ebrie
2016-08-29, 10:41
i dont remember does rudeus lost his hand in the webnovel too?:confused

i forgot he lost his hand but got a ?protetic? (new golem arm from ZANOBA right)
but he recover his arm right? though i dont remember when?

Rudy loses his hand in the Teleport Labyrinth, and gets it back after he fights Orsted (Orsted grows it back after he becomes a subordinate).

MinusVitamin
2016-09-03, 15:22
I think he's still using the golem arm after having his arm grown back in place.

aohige
2016-09-03, 16:51
Re:Zero anime episode 23 preview narration was written by Mushoku Tensei author. :heh:

Hoping for a MT anime adaptation next.

kusabireika
2016-09-03, 17:52
Re:Zero anime episode 23 preview narration was written by Mushoku Tensei author. :heh:

Hoping for a MT anime adaptation next.

I hope not...... T_T :T_T:

El Rue
2016-09-03, 17:57
You don't want an MT anime adaptation?

I mean sure, such things rarely go perfect but still...

Proto
2016-09-03, 19:29
Having a MT anime adaptation that makes justice to the source material is going to take a massive investment from whoever decides to be the production theme given the amount of material available. That or we get the Zero no Tsukaima treatment.

Waxman
2016-09-03, 23:05
The LN is just starting the really good parts, in other words the return of Roxy.
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All Hail Our Godess!
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The LN hasn't covered yet the things i would love to see on anime, like Nanahoshi's illness, meeting Atofe, the battle with Orsted, Ariel fight for the throne, etc.
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I believe there woul not be an anime for MT (sadly) but if there ever is (a good) one it will be when the LN finish to catch up with the WN.
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That's why i welcome a Drama CD, that's the next best thing i can hope for.
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I would love if it covered Nina first encounter with Rudeus and Badi.

aohige
2016-09-04, 02:25
You don't want an MT anime adaptation?

I mean sure, such things rarely go perfect but still...

Having a MT anime adaptation that makes justice to the source material is going to take a massive investment from whoever decides to be the production theme given the amount of material available. That or we get the Zero no Tsukaima treatment.

Re:Zero team did a fantastic job of adapting the novel, I'd love to see the same team give their shot at Mushoku Tensei.

kusabireika
2016-09-04, 02:46
then they will remove incest part of mt... no thanks... ^^ :blush:

Ruki0089
2016-09-04, 02:50
Nah, this thing... won't get anime adaptations....the best they can do is CD drama...

Breimn
2016-09-04, 03:48
And drama cd was announced.

Ruki0089
2016-09-04, 04:32
Yah, that's why I said drama CD...

Zooasaurus
2016-09-05, 09:35
Tbh, I would like to see the goodpath Rudeus focused on magic more rather than gadgets like the badpath Rudeus

Okashira
2016-09-05, 09:44
Re:Zero team did a fantastic job of adapting the novel, I'd love to see the same team give their shot at Mushoku Tensei.

I have this series pegged as one that would be adapted by one of those studios that adapt LNs because they like them first rather than taking a contract due to budget (like Madhouse and JC Staff, they tend to sneak their tastes inbetween their "job")

fggt
2016-09-06, 09:01
Forget anime, is there any info of the drama CD?

teddychan
2016-09-07, 11:06
this novel will 100% fail as an anime, because the LN isn't meant to be watch as an anime sry
just stick to the drama novels

Proto
2016-09-07, 11:44
this novel will 100% fail as an anime, because the LN isn't meant to be watch as an anime sry

tl;dr Circular arguments are circular.

Would you mind explaining yourself? I don't mean to sounds confrontational, I just want to understand where you are coming from.

Ebrie
2016-09-08, 00:09
tl;dr Circular arguments are circular.

Would you mind explaining yourself? I don't mean to sounds confrontational, I just want to understand where you are coming from.

There are a few reasons why I don't see Mushoku Tensei having a good adaptation.

1) There is a lot of stuff to cover so the story would not fit into a 2-cour. However, I doubt many studios would want to invest in such a long project, so it's likely that studios would end on a cliffhanger at some noteworthy point (most likely either Eris leaving or Hitogami's villain reveal). Eris would be a pretty ideal point (from a studio's PoV), but even then that only gives three episodes per volume. Can you imagine how rushed the series would feel?

2) If they did end with Eris, the second season would feel jarring to people because of the tone shift to SoL and a new girl seemingly NTRing Eris. Many people reading the story already dislike the change to a school arc, and I can see the millions of memes calling Sylphy an elf thief.

3a) Not much action happens in this story. Many of Rudeus' achievements (like chantless magic) would seem underwhelming to someone who wants to see intense fights (just think how much Megumi in Konosuba gets from Explosion). The only intense periods of action would be at the Magic Continent, which I feel would be rushed to at the expense of developing Roxy and Sylphy.

3b) What makes Mushoku Tensei work (in my opinion) is the amount of downtime given in the story to develop the characters. The first two volumes do nothing but give exposition about the characters and the world, only then to have the characters show their growth on the Magic Continent. The school arc is the only reason the series had its longevity, because it spent 4 volumes developing all the minor characters. All of this time would seem like padding to those who want an action series and could be cut to rush to Orsted or Pax's war.

4) Even if they get the pacing right, it's very hard to portray a first person perspective well. The manga tries to do it by always cutting back to his NEET self, which already feels off-putting there. Can you imagine if they hang the NEET form to have thoughts when he starts talking to his dad at Millshion? It would destroy the mood of the scene.

I love Mushoku Tensei, but I don't think an anime adaptation would be great in the end. Here's hoping though. If they did choose to do it, I'd hope that it got the Bakemonogatari treatment (but very few series are that lucky).

Hokoga
2016-09-08, 00:56
Some novels don't need an anime because they are great by themselves and sometimes anime can be a real turn off from the story if done incorrectly. (I just can't imagine an anime being done right)

But if this novel was suddenly adapted into a Hollywood trilogy then I'd watch it.

Why Hollywood? Well once MC reincarnates into the otherworld as Rudeus then most of the cast would be none-Japanese anyway, after the beginning of the movie the only Japanese main cast members should be whoever plays the role of older inner soul Rudeus and who ever plays the role of Nanahoshi. And also because Hollywood just does a better job when it comes to making adaptations of books, tv series, games.etc, but don't get me wrong though because I already know that they don't always get it right.. has anyone else ever seen that abomination known as Dragonball Evolution....:sad: (I blame the cast & mostly the director himself)
and with this comment I am pretty much done with the Mushoku Tensei thread for the night.

Hakatri
2016-09-09, 13:50
There are a few reasons why I don't see Mushoku Tensei having a good adaptation.

1) There is a lot of stuff to cover so the story would not fit into a 2-cour. However, I doubt many studios would want to invest in such a long project, so it's likely that studios would end on a cliffhanger at some noteworthy point (most likely either Eris leaving or Hitogami's villain reveal). Eris would be a pretty ideal point (from a studio's PoV), but even then that only gives three episodes per volume. Can you imagine how rushed the series would feel?

2) If they did end with Eris, the second season would feel jarring to people because of the tone shift to SoL and a new girl seemingly NTRing Eris. Many people reading the story already dislike the change to a school arc, and I can see the millions of memes calling Sylphy an elf thief.

3a) Not much action happens in this story. Many of Rudeus' achievements (like chantless magic) would seem underwhelming to someone who wants to see intense fights (just think how much Megumi in Konosuba gets from Explosion). The only intense periods of action would be at the Magic Continent, which I feel would be rushed to at the expense of developing Roxy and Sylphy.

3b) What makes Mushoku Tensei work (in my opinion) is the amount of downtime given in the story to develop the characters. The first two volumes do nothing but give exposition about the characters and the world, only then to have the characters show their growth on the Magic Continent. The school arc is the only reason the series had its longevity, because it spent 4 volumes developing all the minor characters. All of this time would seem like padding to those who want an action series and could be cut to rush to Orsted or Pax's war.

4) Even if they get the pacing right, it's very hard to portray a first person perspective well. The manga tries to do it by always cutting back to his NEET self, which already feels off-putting there. Can you imagine if they hang the NEET form to have thoughts when he starts talking to his dad at Millshion? It would destroy the mood of the scene.

I love Mushoku Tensei, but I don't think an anime adaptation would be great in the end. Here's hoping though. If they did choose to do it, I'd hope that it got the Bakemonogatari treatment (but very few series are that lucky).

This was covered before and we concluded that only an anime with three seasons and 24 chapters per season could do it right and that is a great risk

Indeed, the low pacing makes it hard to sell as a battle anime but it has proper character developing and stuff happening besides exposition, the childhood meetings, paul dealing with a smart kid, phillip planning to use rudeus in his plots, its not a battle story but an adventure story which also has a good appeal and that part is not really the problem

The biggest problem i can see is if they make rudeus an overly perverted character since he is aware of his pervertedness and knows when he fucks up like when he almost banged eris in his birthday, when he decided to be dense with silphy or when he jokes about girls with paul but the problem would be if they make him a stupid accidental pervert like many other characters since the whole point of mushoku tensei is the character growth

Rudeus may be disgusting to some people because of his flaws since they like to identify themselves with the main characters and that is why we have so many beta MCs so full of good feelings that never do wrong and maybe a studio would choose to make rudeus more acceptable by making him another wimpy MC and to offset his flaws as innocent mistakes, that is the biggest risk i see for an adaptation

Another point is the strength, a recurrent theme in MT is that no one can achieve his goals by themselves alone despite their power and because of that i have seen some readers disliking rudeus for not being a standard badass who steamrolls the enemies by himself and his inner power, this leaves a minor risk to adapt him as (again) a more traditional MC with emotional power ups, is really a minor point but is also a risky point

And as i always say when they mention the possibility of an anime adaptation MT may be adapted after the market gets saturated with more of the same light novels with main characters as described before because only then a studio would be willing to look for a different material which also has a lot of the regular elements of light novels


Some novels don't need an anime because they are great by themselves and sometimes anime can be a real turn off from the story if done incorrectly. (I just can't imagine an anime being done right)

But if this novel was suddenly adapted into a Hollywood trilogy then I'd watch it.

Why Hollywood? Well once MC reincarnates into the otherworld as Rudeus then most of the cast would be none-Japanese anyway, after the beginning of the movie the only Japanese main cast members should be whoever plays the role of older inner soul Rudeus and who ever plays the role of Nanahoshi. And also because Hollywood just does a better job when it comes to making adaptations of books, tv series, games.etc, but don't get me wrong though because I already know that they don't always get it right.. has anyone else ever seen that abomination known as Dragonball Evolution....:sad: (I blame the cast & mostly the director himself)
and with this comment I am pretty much done with the Mushoku Tensei thread for the night.

Dafuq?

Hollywood may be good for a reincarnation movie but the concept has to be reworked, the MC must also be flawed and in a quest for redemption and growth but it has to be told around a more compact concept like abandoning a friend/lover who died because of that to have a fast concept to understand, also since there is little time to make connections there would be another reincarnators even if they dont remmember their past lives to have fast reasons to act towards them because there is no time to develop the relationships

Silphy: three years of personal interaction
Roxy: two years of personal interaction + five years of interaction by mail
Eris: three years of personal interaction at home + three and a half years of adventuring

The harem would be deleted because it takes too much space, also it would have to be battle oriented since there is little time for the adventuring and drama

A movie can do it but for another story, MT simply takes too much time

Hokoga
2016-09-09, 15:37
Dafuq?

Hollywood may be good for a reincarnation movie but the concept has to be reworked, the MC must also be flawed and in a quest for redemption and growth but it has to be told around a more compact concept like abandoning a friend/lover who died because of that to have a fast concept to understand, also since there is little time to make connections there would be another reincarnators even if they dont remmember their past lives to have fast reasons to act towards them because there is no time to develop the relationships

Silphy: three years of personal interaction
Roxy: two years of personal interaction + five years of interaction by mail
Eris: three years of personal interaction at home + three and a half years of adventuring

The harem would be deleted because it takes too much space, also it would have to be battle oriented since there is little time for the adventuring and drama

A movie can do it but for another story, MT simply takes too much timeYou do realize that's why I said trilogy right?

Obviously Mushoku Tensei wouldn't be able to fit into one movie, because the first movie would have to tell of his Juvenile years, the second movie would tell of his teen years and the third movie would tell of his adult years leading up to his final fight with Fighting God(Hitogami). Although truthfully there may have to be 2 or 3 more movies in between if they want to be more detailed about certain key events that transpires in the novel. (of course this excludes the redundancy chapters)

Ruki0089
2016-09-09, 16:09
Oh~ you mean like Garry Porter or Barry Potter movie? that has around 7 trilogy?

Hokoga
2016-09-09, 16:23
^ Pretty much.

Hakatri
2016-09-12, 18:31
You do realize that's why I said trilogy right?

Obviously Mushoku Tensei wouldn't be able to fit into one movie, because the first movie would have to tell of his Juvenile years, the second movie would tell of his teen years and the third movie would tell of his adult years leading up to his final fight with Fighting God(Hitogami). Although truthfully there may have to be 2 or 3 more movies in between if they want to be more detailed about certain key events that transpires in the novel. (of course this excludes the redundancy chapters)

I knew you were talking about a trilogy but still there is not enough space, first of all movies usually have a clear objective to beat/achieve in a (usually) simple way to understand, MT doesnt have enough short term objectives that are big enough for that

Think about the objectives we were shown in the early years:
Mastering basic magic/maxing the mana pool
Educating Silphy
Educating Eris
Beating the kidnappers
Blending in the demon continent
Spending time with the beastmen

Which are not bad but dont have enough weight to hold a movie by themselves because they are part of the world building as much as they are part of the story progression, they are to be known in detail so we can care about them

The only true big objective is getting back home but it doesnt end with a dramatic high point and ends more with a "life goes on", even a good part of the story is spending time with his family and friends

The ways of storytellings are too different, in a movie usually we get a single underlying theme that surfaces more and more as we know the story while there are more superficial themes used for world and character setting, this is like trying to compress a 30 chapters live action series into a single movie or trilogy

Somethindarker
2016-09-19, 22:01
Personally I don't think an anime would do this story justice. First the story is basically a rinse and repeat of(the LN could be different I have the first couple of volumes I just haven't rad them yet) "the MC starts to get a hang of his current situation(harem, magic, situation)->a major plotline is uncovered->a cataclysm/major event happens and he has to start all over again somewhere else-> back square one". Secondly the MC actually marries and has kids which would alienate certain groups of people within the target demographics. Lastly the story's ending isn't a complete finality so unless they completely ignore or gloss over major plot points in the middle towards the end of the story it'll leave the fanbase with a sense of incompletion. Maybe if the anime market was closer to what it was 10-15 years ago instead of just a glorified commercial to sell tanks, LN's and records then a studio could pull it off as a move trilogy or a couple of seasons. You gotta remember the anime demographic and the LN demographic are completely different the vast majority of LN readers don't buy the BD's the only reason an anime is adapted is to sell to anime viewers who will buy up the LN's and other merch.

edit; I find myself disappointed in most adaptation Absolute Zero, High School DxD, Blade Dance, Strike the Blood etc; they rarely live up to expectations most of the time I end up dropping the anime 3-4 episodes in anyway they hardly ever get a 2nd season, epic fights are mediocre, plot points are either glossed over or ignored completely and there is usually no heart in the plot. Manga is a different story though, most manga are actually not bad.

fggt
2016-09-20, 10:57
Story-wise an 2 course 25 episode running straight to the end of Labyrinth arc should be fine though. With the pace of 2 eps = 1 vol, that wont be a problem (hence, if the timing is right, first cour can end with Orsted fight and sex scene, which is great).

I feel the adaptation could be a success. It's a change of pace. We got some Isekai based animes recently, but non of them is similar to MT. We have Overlord - "trapped" into game world, Konosuba - "reincarnated" while keeping both your memory and appearance, Re:Zero - "transported".

It may not be full of actions nor cheating abilities at first, but will still be worth watching, just believe it.

LynnLen
2016-09-20, 16:33
I would like an anime just so I can see how people react to it. Will people lose there shit like with SAO or Re:zero, will they call it fucking garbage like with Grimgar, or will just be meh. Plus if this gets an anime and if gets popular then we can very likely see an English publication of the series and we can finally support the physical release; but I can see why people are skeptical about an anime adaptation, unlike other LN Mushoku Tensei doesn't have the volume=arc format that other LN have so it might be difficult to find a good spot to stop at.

Proto
2016-09-20, 19:16
Will people lose there shit like with SAO or Re:zero, will they call it fucking garbage like with Grimgar

I don't know which forums you frequent, but at least on Animesuki all those three were very well received. Particularly Grimgar in terms of relative approval.

Xellos-_^
2016-09-20, 20:19
Story-wise an 2 course 25 episode running straight to the end of Labyrinth arc should be fine though. With the pace of 2 eps = 1 vol, that wont be a problem (hence, if the timing is right, first cour can end with Orsted fight and sex scene, which is great).

I feel the adaptation could be a success. It's a change of pace. We got some Isekai based animes recently, but non of them is similar to MT. We have Overlord - "trapped" into game world, Konosuba - "reincarnated" while keeping both your memory and appearance, Re:Zero - "transported".

It may not be full of actions nor cheating abilities at first, but will still be worth watching, just believe it.
Overlord is NOT trap in a game world.

Somethindarker
2016-09-20, 20:58
I don't know which forums you frequent, but at least on Animesuki all those three were very well received. Particularly Grimgar in terms of relative approval.

I thought SAO was ok but didn't like the 2nd season that much, Re:zeo I couldn't get into I didn't like the characters at all and Grimgar was boring AF most people everyone here is usually receptive of series which is why I like posting there is no blind hate or bandwagoning and people tend to respect opinions. But the overall opinion of those series were "they're okay" with SAO being the most popular because it appealed to a wider audience.

Proto
2016-09-20, 21:52
I mean I really only need to go to the episode threads for SAO and Re:zero to get that the median scoring for most episodes was a 9. I was talking about the forum opinion in general, not yours (or anyone's) in particular. We don't have such hard numbers for Grimgar, but the overall opinion of anyone that made past episode 4 is very positive.

mors86
2016-09-21, 14:23
Overlord is NOT trap in a game world.

... In the sense that Ainz is not trapped in the world as much as the people of that world are trapped in there with him :heh:

LynnLen
2016-09-22, 13:47
I don't know which forums you frequent, but at least on Animesuki all those three were very well received. Particularly Grimgar in terms of relative approval.

Ok I was spit balling examples without thinking about the different communities; but my case still stands I'm curious about how people in the anime and critic community if this gets an anime.

Nirvash0
2016-09-22, 18:30
So... is the gaiden/side stuff complete? Is a while from the last one.

Hakatri
2016-09-23, 04:47
Ok I was spit balling examples without thinking about the different communities; but my case still stands I'm curious about how people in the anime and critic community if this gets an anime.

Im also curious since there have been people who complained because rudeus is too weak since he always needs someone else to cover his back while others dismissed the story as a power fantasy as rudeus was an op magician

In sites like mangaupdates the reviews have people saying they were outright disgusted by rudeus being a pedo while the manga has people calling him cute, one caused the effect due to the internal perception of the reader while the other was bypassed and benefited from the drawn characters as perceived by the readers

Even in the last manga chapter there were people complaining about his emotional troubles after the metastasis event, the closer i saw was people complaining about the MC in Re:zero as he has actual mental strain due to his situation

So... is the gaiden/side stuff complete? Is a while from the last one.

Pielord said his interest has dwindled and he would release the chapters more slowly and from the bunch he was translating there was still the visit to the holy sword land and nanahoshi eating through the years, the people translating Jobless Oblige also stopped their releases so its not done yet

Waxman
2016-09-23, 08:13
What i am curious abot is if the author finished the filler chapters and will move to a new story maybe in the same universe.
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I can see how many would be disgusted by Rudeus, since he himself is disgusted with himself but for me it was a great story beyond it's Main Character, the best part were all the other characters.
.
Maybe the Big Bad wasn't quite at the level i would have wanted but then Rudeus never was the "Chosen One".

LynnLen
2016-09-23, 11:51
Knight's & Magic is getting an anime and I'm sad now, not trying to bad mouth Knight's & Magic. It's just I'm sad that Mushoku Tensei wasn't first.

Nirvash0
2016-09-23, 17:20
Pielord said his interest has dwindled and he would release the chapters more slowly and from the bunch he was translating there was still the visit to the holy sword land and nanahoshi eating through the years, the people translating Jobless Oblige also stopped their releases so its not done yet

I mean from the author.

MinusVitamin
2016-09-25, 01:44
Even in the last manga chapter there were people complaining about his emotional troubles after the metastasis event, the closer i saw was people complaining about the MC in Re:zero as he has actual mental strain due to his situation



You can always expect hate from anything that is viewed uncomfortable or conflict with your own conscience. It's much more simpler to hate a pedo than it is to identify with one.

Fufufu
2016-09-28, 02:03
One of the tags is incest so with whom did he do it?

Hokoga
2016-09-28, 02:49
Little maid sister did it with his son and later married said son.

Ruki0089
2016-09-28, 04:01
And that's made me drop this wn ~~~

laclongquan
2016-10-02, 07:36
Rejoice! That chapter/arc is dropped from the official WN source, so you can just consider it to be a side story that never make the cut~

Ruki0089
2016-10-02, 07:38
And rejoice! I already know that! But that short story already give me a scar that won't heal...

XFire
2016-10-02, 08:39
And rejoice! I already know that! But that short story already give me a scar that won't heal...

That's surprisingly fragile for a guy who keeps drooling over junai x rokujyou.

Ruki0089
2016-10-02, 08:53
Well, this novel used to be one of my top favorite novel~~

watisit
2016-10-02, 11:31
That's surprisingly fragile for a guy who keeps drooling over junai x rokujyou.

And with what could pass for an ahegao for a profile pic

Hokoga
2016-10-02, 12:44
And with what could pass for an ahegao for a profile picIts not that it could pass as an ahegao for a profile pic, but that IT IS an ahegao pic of a warped princess/queen from a hentai game/anime called Rance that twisted Ruki is using as his profile pic. :heh:

Hakatri
2016-10-04, 18:45
One of the tags is incest so with whom did he do it?

Wait, was that tag there all along from the beginning?

fggt
2016-10-05, 21:22
Wait, was that tag there all along from the beginning?

Since the day the little sister maid was born.

laclongquan
2016-10-06, 06:41
I always think of it as a trollish tag~

Ruki0089
2016-10-06, 07:18
Yeah, a troll tags that actually happening on this shi- I mean Novel

fggt
2016-10-06, 10:44
Still no info of the drama CD?

Hakatri
2016-10-08, 08:49
I always think of it as a trollish tag~

So, can we get a "naked prisoner homo massage" tag?

LynnLen
2016-10-10, 15:14
New cover is out

http://vignette3.wikia.nocookie.net/mushokutensei/images/3/36/Mushoku_Tensei_Vol12.jpg/revision/latest?cb=20160806193758

sorry if the quality is shit

Hokoga
2016-10-10, 16:01
New cover is out

http://vignette3.wikia.nocookie.net/mushokutensei/images/3/36/Mushoku_Tensei_Vol12.jpg/revision/latest?cb=20160806193758

sorry if the quality is shit................Cover Vol 12 :smile:

http://i.imgur.com/EKYJQx4.jpgFrom 4chan:
http://puu.sh/qNzgI.jpg
http://puu.sh/qNzhD.jpg
http://puu.sh/qNzi7.jpg
http://puu.sh/qNzl7.jpg
http://puu.sh/qNzlG.jpg
http://puu.sh/qNzmb.jpg
http://puu.sh/qNzmW.jpg
http://puu.sh/qNznv.jpg
http://puu.sh/qNzo1.jpg
http://puu.sh/qNzoZ.jpg
http://puu.sh/qNzpv.jpg
http://puu.sh/qNzqC.png

Now where is muh anime adaptation?

El Rue
2016-10-10, 18:08
Oh dear, Roxy~

LynnLen
2016-10-10, 18:48
................
sorry didn't notice

dark44
2016-10-11, 02:04
is there any chance that the author may change the lame Web novel end and have Rudi killing hitogami in the light novel and avoide Aisha crap end ?
cause i dont think his idea about making Mushoku Tensei prologue for another series well be sucesse

Ruki0089
2016-10-11, 04:46
Yeah, I wonder if author going insert Shitty chapter in LN version... it's secret chapter even though it was deleted but it still canon.. hah~, I wonder when I can heal my wound...

Proto
2016-10-11, 07:54
Well, the entire premise of the second half of the story is based on Orsted going for the long con, so although doable it will be a different story if it is rewritten to be over in Rudeus lifetime. About Aisha, it sure can be rewritten to make it palatable to most people. Like many people have suggested, just shift the entire thing 5 years forward and make it less smutty.

rantaid
2016-10-11, 08:03
well... as long as Mushoku Tensei get even more famous, and get lotsa doujin, i would wish them the best. i want to see lot of Mushoku Tensei NTR doujin in comiket.

ps. i think Ars and Aisha work the best if it was Ars who have the lead and initiative in the act. a man who can't take the innitiative and make decision for himself is not a good family man. it irked me a bit that he need Aisha to babysit and defend him for the whole thing.

fggt
2016-10-11, 09:22
is there any chance that the author may change the lame Web novel end and have Rudi killing hitogami in the light novel and avoide Aisha crap end ?
cause i dont think his idea about making Mushoku Tensei prologue for another series well be sucesse

Idk, I think a sequel of the children will be fun. I mean look at Jobless Oblige, it is so fun already.

pezzie
2016-10-11, 09:28
Yea I think there is almost no chance of that happening. Plus I'm really looking forward to a sequel series.

teddychan
2016-10-11, 11:43
please don't make any anime of this Y_Y

it's good because it's a novel,
because if it will be anime, they won't cover the whole novel. so Don't bother. PLEASE DON'T MAKE IT TO ANOTHER SHITTY LIGHT NOVEL ANIME WHERE FANSERVICE IS THE KING Y_Y

kusabireika
2016-10-12, 02:05
Yeah, I wonder if author going insert Shitty chapter in LN version... it's secret chapter even though it was deleted but it still canon.. hah~, I wonder when I can heal my wound...

i hope that chapter is canon. ^^ :blush:

Hakatri
2016-10-14, 07:34
well... as long as Mushoku Tensei get even more famous, and get lotsa doujin, i would wish them the best. i want to see lot of Mushoku Tensei NTR doujin in comiket.

ps. i think Ars and Aisha work the best if it was Ars who have the lead and initiative in the act. a man who can't take the innitiative and make decision for himself is not a good family man. it irked me a bit that he need Aisha to babysit and defend him for the whole thing.

Or Elinalize adventures, i was looking for any Bible Black doujinshi but only found two of medium-low quality, it seems like works that are already kinky get little interest from the public and they like more to profanate things, or maybe the doujin scene was still small at the time?

The whole older man younger girl is a staple of shoujo stories, it would be hilarious if someone makes a crossdressing version of AishaxArs parodying that

rantaid
2016-10-14, 09:15
@Hakatri

nope not always. i am sure doujinka would prefer to make one that sell more, one that is already safe to sell, and one that is because they want to draw it. and unfortunately, the "want to draw it because they want to" is often niche.

e.g. To-Love-ru which already border to H sans the porn. still remain popular as ever.

genderbent AishaXArs would be more viable i guess.....

Hakatri
2016-10-15, 08:40
I dont consider To Love Ru even close to hentai, more like a coward echi as there was no real development and just excuses to throw panty shots, i really hate when a work is just an excuse for something because everything else is just filler, its so coward the doujinsters want to take the steps the manga never will

What i meant is that hentai works dont get doujins which i found strange

laclongquan
2016-10-19, 07:58
Ars do take the lead in that deleted chapter.
The problem is
Does he deserve Aisha?

That chapter has some serious flaws. Underage boy, or reverse Hikaru Genji scenario, is bottom of the list.

rantaid
2016-10-19, 08:17
Yoshida's obsession to Yukino in Junai Ryujoku is more valid and legitimate. you can know that deep down, Yoshida is genuinely in love with her . that is what i call romantic.

Ruki0089
2016-10-19, 08:36
And what Ars felt to Homewrecker bit-- maid is just a lust in disguise... His lower half is so talkative~ while the maid is confusing love with curiously ~
So both of them didn't deserve each other ~

Breimn
2016-10-19, 14:04
Any info about that drama cd?

Okashira
2016-10-24, 23:09
Author is going to post a new series at in 6 more hours, ncode is n3765dp (http://ncode.syosetu.com/n3765dp/) (aka, it's out at 19 hours in japan)

Title is 古龍の昔話 or "Old Tales of the Ancient Dragon" (well, 古龍 is a chinese name, but since it's isekai, I doubt it fits?). No word if it's related to the Mushoku Tensei universe.

Additionally, the author had made a comedy which totally slipped past me, it's a single arc story that goes for the name of 超絶イケメン勇者ジェラールと愉快な仲間達

edit : The author said about this new series, 新作ですが、半スピンオフみたいな感じです。 , New work, but feels like (half) a spin off?



Second-Hand Dragon? What? It's just Ancient Dragon imho?

( ・ف‎≤)9☆ Took me awhile to make the connection, specially since 老 wasn't used for age. Well, one of his previous titles had a pun I didn't got, so I'm basically not sure about anything?

wuhugm
2016-10-24, 23:25
^古龍の昔話 or "Old Tales of the Second-Hand Dragon"

Second-Hand Dragon? What? It's just Ancient Dragon imho?

CNine
2016-10-25, 06:28
Author is going to post a new series at in 6 more hours, ncode is n3765dp (http://ncode.syosetu.com/n3765dp/) (aka, it's out at 19 hours in japan)

Title is 古龍の昔話 or "Old Tales of the Ancient Dragon" (well, 古龍 is a chinese name, but since it's isekai, I doubt it fits?). No word if it's related to the Mushoku Tensei universe.

Additionally, the author had made a comedy which totally slipped past me, it's a single arc story that goes for the name of 超絶イケメン勇者ジェラールと愉快な仲間達

edit : The author said about this new series, 新作ですが、半スピンオフみたいな感じです。 , New work, but feels like (half) a spin off?




( ・ف‎≤)9☆ Took me awhile to make the connection, specially since 老 wasn't used for age. Well, one of his previous titles had a pun I didn't got, so I'm basically not sure about anything?

^古龍の昔話 or "Old Tales of the Second-Hand Dragon"

Second-Hand Dragon? What? It's just Ancient Dragon imho?

the stories take a place in seemingly the peak of red dragon mountain range.
The narrator of the story is Laplace or maybe Technique God.
Orsted mother also made her appearance.
The MC is LAPLACE

Breimn
2016-10-25, 09:52
Fk, we finally get the one we most needed info on.Any spoilers? A bit busy and cant read right now.

ggyeti
2016-10-25, 14:28
That was THE hitogami right? The one who offered to have periodic meetings/swap info and everything? I always knew he was the best boy, screw Rudeus.
I wonder from which time period is laplace telling that story, he did mention それとも悪い神に操られ、勝てない戦いに身を投じざるをえなかった聖人の話。
 ……いや、最後のは楽しい話ではなかったかな
With that last line maybe he doesn't mean Rudeus

Fk, we finally get the one we most needed info on.Any spoilers? A bit busy and cant read right now.
I think you should just read it later considering the infodump in second chapter, but for now it was mentioned how the world/6 worlds were made and kept in balance and the issue that seems to plague it lately(MAMONO).
As well as how Laplace came to be/survived the harsh makai, and that he is a half dragon and demon, but his birth is still a mystery since nobody from the dragon race should've visited the demon world at that time. He also gets the best dad that might just end up being dead very soon considering what we know. We also get to see the Dragon world(Its literally inverted), how they live there and etc. The narrator and the MC of the story of course is Laplace

LynnLen
2016-10-26, 18:55
I'm near the end of the sylphiette chapter and I have to say if this get a brotherhood style anime I'm expecting a lot of dick symbolism. I can just picture it now, Rudeus goes in and has sex with Sylphy and instead of fading to black we just see oppai-sennin rise from the grave with a golden light behind him, he's buff as full powered master roshi and he screams I'M BACK!! STORNGER THEN EVER!!!!

Ruki0089
2016-10-26, 19:21
@LynnLen
You... have same reason as I am...
And you will be destroyed the moment you reach certain chapters... just like me... I hope you won't...

Hoopla
2016-10-28, 13:04
Holy shit...

Laplace's master was Perugius' mother? Sasuga Rifujin, everything just connects in the grand plot.

What a fucking tragedy Laplace's life is.

Gets killed by his own brother (Orsted, although they have no blood relation, is still his younger brother).

And later on gets killed by his master's son...

Also, I lol'd when I read the part where Badigadi (or Badigadi's father) beat the shit out of him before he got adopted by Orsted's parents.

CNine
2016-10-28, 20:32
Holy shit...

Laplace's master was Perugius' mother? Sasuga Rifujin, everything just connects in the grand plot.

What a fucking tragedy Laplace's life is.

Gets killed by his own brother (Orsted, although they have no blood relation, is still his younger brother).

And later on gets killed by his master's son...

Also, I lol'd when I read the part where Badigadi (or Badigadi's father) beat the shit out of him before he got adopted by Orsted's parents.
Well, not exactly as the one being hunted by Pergius is the "Demon" half of Laplace, while the "Dragon" half is the one who's strongly inheriting Laplace before his battle with Badi.
And it's look like the Laplace who become the narrator is "dragon" half of Laplace since he mentioned a "Story About A Demon Lord Who's Tricked By Human God to Kill the [Demon Dragon King Laplace]" which resulted in Fighting God.

Kazandu
2016-10-29, 05:10
is there any chance that the author may change the lame Web novel end and have Rudi killing hitogami in the light novel and avoide Aisha crap end ?
cause i dont think his idea about making Mushoku Tensei prologue for another series well be sucesse


I really hope he doesn't change the ending, in fact to me is the best possible ending, mushoku tensei was always centered in rudeus life, he did his part of the job, then is time that other do the rest.

Rather than a crap standard ending like rudy killing hitogami, the actual ending closes the rudeus story, and leaves us an open ED and the chance to pass to the next generation. In fact i'm interested a spin off based in other of his descendants or orsted, in fact we don't know much about his past itself.

CNine
2016-10-30, 05:24
Another revelationapparently the name of the king of red dragon is "Solyackt[Soruyakuto]" and he is Laplace………]

Honoakari
2016-10-30, 06:01
I'm surprised that no one commented on this:

Orsted's mother is Hitogami's daughter. :uhoh:

"Grandpa Hitogami". :heh:Another revelationapparently the name of the king of red dragon is "Solyackt[Soruyakuto]" and he is Laplace………]

Actually, it's "Sare Yakuto" (サレ ヤクト)...

Ruki0089
2016-10-30, 06:37
Now.... this story turn to family fraud... men...

CNine
2016-10-30, 07:09
I'm surprised that no one commented on this:

Orsted's mother is Hitogami's daughter. :uhoh:

"Grandpa Hitogami". :heh:

Actually, it's "Sare Yakuto" (サレ ヤクト)...

Ah, you're right

laclongquan
2016-11-02, 06:18
And what Ars felt to Homewrecker bit-- maid is just a lust in disguise... His lower half is so talkative~ while the maid is confusing love with curiously ~
So both of them didn't deserve each other ~

Shut your trap! Aisha totally deserve her fruit of Reverse Hikaru Genji project!

Ooooooon the other hand, that ducky totally doesnt deserve a hot and super intelligent half-aunt. Not when he hasnt done anything to deserve that!

Ruki0089
2016-11-02, 07:11
No! You're the one who should shut your trap! Aisha confusing love with curiosity! She always wondering what LOVE is? After seeing Rudeus and Norn being so happy.. and she start want to experience it! and there, the lower half so talkative boy come! He always confessed his love(LUST) to his aunt, and always rejected by his aunt but... why so suddenly she accept it? if she really love him, she will accept him when he become splendid man! and not sleeping with him after he confess for countless time!
she also mentioned it, she start regretting her actions after spending time with LUSTY boy, while being happy, she also have big burden and regret...! If it was me, i will bit** slap her! also her mother need some bit** slap too!
Haha~, now, we return to this old argument~~
better run~~

CNine
2016-11-02, 08:50
Shut your trap! Aisha totally deserve her fruit of Reverse Hikaru Genji project!

Ooooooon the other hand, that ducky totally doesnt deserve a hot and super intelligent half-aunt. Not when he hasnt done anything to deserve that!

Let's just ignore him and tasteless rambling as I also see that Aisha deserved her own happy ending. I must give a thumb up to Scratcher-sensei for his out of the box idea. As for Aisha hater Let's just say that they judge another world normal standard with EARTH NORMAL STANDARD. C'mon, THIS IS A STORY ABOUT ANOTHER WORLD, you'll only made a fool of yourself by comparing it's cultures with EARTH cultures.
It's just like they're comparing two country with many different cultures.
The unpredictable twist is what I love from this story rather than predictable and Honestly boring like certain common professionand no one protesting the mc for become target of love interest both of mother and daughter pair, which I found more revolting than Aisha case[and more disgusting]but strangely very few questioned the author
Anyway, Laplace releasing his killing intent in the end of last chapter to a certain FMA wanna be faceless being and regreting of not killing him.
Btw, he demolished a mountain in today chapter

Hokoga
2016-11-02, 09:29
^ Actually if you go on that thread right now you would see that I did voice my dislike of that particular matter and it shouldn't be the first time I did either.

CNine
2016-11-02, 09:31
^ Actually if you go on that thread right now you would see that I did voice my dislike of that particular matter and it shouldn't be the first time I did either.

Thank you, edited

Prongs
2016-11-02, 12:06
Holeshit!!! At Last We can see Incest snu snu here!!! Fuuck why do people feel repulsive.. godamn otakus!!

rantaid
2016-11-02, 22:01
because it was sloppily written.

Aisha do deserve her own ending but it does not justify a story which lacked proper build up and done so abruptly. to be honest i don't care if she is doing incest, gangbang or bdsm or any other crazier fetish (heck i applauded when Rudeus first appearance is him masturbating to his own loli niece, during his own parent funeral.... not that i condone such act....... but it was refreshing to see things so f*cked up)... but when your love story and romance is worse than Heidi Turner and Eric Cartman (South Park Season 20 Ep.3 Damned).... you know that it is f*cked up.

CNine
2016-11-02, 23:02
because it was sloppily written.

Aisha do deserve her own ending but it does not justify a story which lacked proper build up and done so abruptly. to be honest i don't care if she is doing incest, gangbang or bdsm or any other crazier fetish (heck i applauded when Rudeus first appearance is him masturbating to his own loli niece, during his own parent funeral.... not that i condone such act....... but it was refreshing to see things so f*cked up)... but when your love story and romance is worse than Heidi Turner and Eric Cartman (South Park Season 20 Ep.3 Damned).... you know that it is f*cked up.

It's already hinted many chapter how close they're before they're going to snusnu

bronx819
2016-11-02, 23:53
Just finished the Aisha x Ars chapters and I enjoyed it very much~ yeah it is written fairly poorly compared to the rest but overall I loved it. It was the first time that a supposed forbidden love felt forbidden instead of having the relative only act like a love interest. Well the only other noteworthy incest stuff I know that I haven't gotten into is OreImo (hate Kirino too much) Mahouka (MC is so stupidly overpowered he makes Kirito look like a common mob) and Yosuga no Sora (waiting for the VN translation).

The coupling did feel like it came out of nowhere a bit, but it does make a bit of sense since Aisha was originally more than happy to sleep with Rudeus. Though I was pissed at him for being so against their relationship, essentially everything that happened was because he let his emotions get the better of him, but its also Aisha's fault for not laying the groundwork or talking about it first with Rudeus. I'm also glad that everything turned out the way it did, even if it was a bit shocking that Eris cut off her own sons hand.

rantaid
2016-11-03, 00:42
@CNine

it is written and executed very poorly .

why do Aisha were unable to defend herself when Sylphy (who is Rudeus pointy ears wife again?) suggested Aisha should educate the other children like Ars.

i mean, if Aisha or even ars can overcome such simple obstacle instead of eloping.... i would gladly applaud their relationahip; even if Aisha says "Sure, why not !? more shotas for me!" i would feel respect for her.

pervypig
2016-11-03, 02:29
^ INCEST HAREM IZ JUSTICE.

I dig incest in hentai but not so much in RL (don't want to see people with strange mutations sprouting all over now, do we?). Still, I find it ironic that Eris went chopper on Ars - she was proud to declare that she gave Ruddy-chan an heir when her first child was male.

Ruki0089
2016-11-03, 02:32
Yeah, his heir basically leaving his house for lust....
No wonder his big mom chop his hand...

bronx819
2016-11-03, 03:02
Yeah, his heir basically leaving his house for lust....
No wonder his big mom chop his hand...

He left the house because he left everything to Aisha since he was still immature and couldn't stand for himself. I can even get behind the reason why Aisha eloped, when he refused Rudeus had the same look when he was building the magic armor to fight against Orsted to protect his family. Aisha thought that he considered her an enemy, that's plenty reason to run away, especially since they did love each other, and it wasn't entirely lust either since even several years later Ars still loved her.

EDIT
@pervypig to be fair their blood relationship is pretty thin, and don't forget that Eris was Rudy's cousin too. It's also a different world, so different sense of morals, hell Lilia encouraged Aisha to comply with Rudy's sexual demands if he had any.

Prongs
2016-11-04, 06:05
because it was sloppily written.

Aisha do deserve her own ending but it does not justify a story which lacked proper build up and done so abruptly. to be honest i don't care if she is doing incest, gangbang or bdsm or any other crazier fetish (heck i applauded when Rudeus first appearance is him masturbating to his own loli niece, during his own parent funeral.... not that i condone such act....... but it was refreshing to see things so f*cked up)... but when your love story and romance is worse than Heidi Turner and Eric Cartman (South Park Season 20 Ep.3 Damned).... you know that it is f*cked up.

Well I agreed if they hate sloppy story... I'm okay with them having relationship. And I hate why do writer didn't write moar about romance build up between Aisha and his nephew!!!

Shieet this fucking author ruined best romance evaaa in this story!!!!

laclongquan
2016-11-05, 00:59
In term of blood, Aisha and Ars is as close as cousin twice removed. The term of art is "kissing cousin". And in most of the world outside of USA, as well as many places inside, marrying cousins of that degree is nothing strange or illegal, let alone immoral.

I see that some boys here get confused and uncomfortable by the fact that both father and son being the target of love and lust of a woman (hell, Aisha's first is taken by Ars, so I dont know what the fuck you are complaining about, even). Well, for such innocent babies, I have just the place for you: (((safe space))) . Please get inside and watch I maniacally and gleefully destroy that place.

Kwans got plenty of quirks though of different degree than Japan. One of them is exogamy, with tendency to label anything and everything as incest.

Second, you all tend to forgive the fact that authors retcon a lot and sloppily too. I blame the US comic genre for that.And this arc author has retcon one pretty important factor, though of less notice: Rudeus' attitude toward incest and lust. Rudeus, until the last major battle, retain a lot of his japanese life. He simply not that strict toward incest. The fact that he hasnt done anything of that sort is because, physically, bodily, he doesnt get it up for any relatives. Again, this has been point out during various time of his life: when he met, unknowingly, aunty Theresa for the 1st time during childhood, when he met Aisha after that, as well as his other sister. Hell, at that time he's still kept pretty much his old life's attitude and he did wonder at the fact that he didnt feel any lust toward his two sisters at that point.
That is why his reaction in the arc is frankly strange. Very strange. And the explaination turn into a retcon~
In a short term: Sloppily written.

pervypig
2016-11-05, 03:51
^ oh rite, I forgot dat Aisha and Ars have less blood relationship than normal aunts and nephews. If dat's the case, let the incest harem begin! Slopy or not, who cares... just adapt it into hentai.

laclongquan
2016-11-05, 04:16
Dont you dare the japs~ They might have done it already and the raws is just not out on Net yet.

rantaid
2016-11-05, 04:35
in this case i agree with pervypig. ars and his beasty aunt, plus gangbang mode as Sylphy suggested.

Hoopla
2016-11-05, 12:13
Another revelationapparently the name of the king of red dragon is "Solyackt[Soruyakuto]" and he is Laplace………]

Sare Yakuto is Laplace's first dragon that he tames under Dola...

He is not Laplace...

How did you even come to that conclusion lol.

CNine
2016-11-05, 16:17
Sare Yakuto is Laplace's first dragon that he tames under Dola...

He is not Laplace...

How did you even come to that conclusion lol.

Look carefully, I added many dots right, I already know that Laplace isn't Sareyakuto since the first chapter

Hakatri
2016-11-07, 10:13
In term of blood, Aisha and Ars is as close as cousin twice removed. The term of art is "kissing cousin". And in most of the world outside of USA, as well as many places inside, marrying cousins of that degree is nothing strange or illegal, let alone immoral.

I see that some boys here get confused and uncomfortable by the fact that both father and son being the target of love and lust of a woman (hell, Aisha's first is taken by Ars, so I dont know what the fuck you are complaining about, even). Well, for such innocent babies, I have just the place for you: (((safe space))) . Please get inside and watch I maniacally and gleefully destroy that place.

Kwans got plenty of quirks though of different degree than Japan. One of them is exogamy, with tendency to label anything and everything as incest.

Second, you all tend to forgive the fact that authors retcon a lot and sloppily too. I blame the US comic genre for that.And this arc author has retcon one pretty important factor, though of less notice: Rudeus' attitude toward incest and lust. Rudeus, until the last major battle, retain a lot of his japanese life. He simply not that strict toward incest. The fact that he hasnt done anything of that sort is because, physically, bodily, he doesnt get it up for any relatives. Again, this has been point out during various time of his life: when he met, unknowingly, aunty Theresa for the 1st time during childhood, when he met Aisha after that, as well as his other sister. Hell, at that time he's still kept pretty much his old life's attitude and he did wonder at the fact that he didnt feel any lust toward his two sisters at that point.
That is why his reaction in the arc is frankly strange. Very strange. And the explaination turn into a retcon~
In a short term: Sloppily written.

The niece stuff was not a total retcon as it was the original beginning of the series in the web novel and it was retconned and softened for the light novel but the autor seem to forgot about that and used his original setup for the explanation, an un-retconning?


So, is hitogami a physical person in that new story?

bronx819
2016-11-08, 02:33
^ oh rite, I forgot dat Aisha and Ars have less blood relationship than normal aunts and nephews. If dat's the case, let the incest harem begin! Slopy or not, who cares... just adapt it into hentai.

I'd gladly accept a Mushoku Tensei hentai, same with a Nekopara hentai from that kickstarter (I'd genuinely be glad for both). I don't know if you forgot but Rudeus and Aisha are half siblings, Ars gets half his DNA from Rudeus, course you've gotta factor in the minor blood relation between Rudeus and Eris since they are related by their grandparents I believe. If you want to put it into a percentage it'd be less than a 30% blood relationship.

I still don't get why some people are up in arms about Ars and Aisha, again Lilia was perfectly ok with Aisha sleeping with Rudeus. Plus with all the hentai, manga, anime, and light novels with clear incest, this shouldn't be a huge issue.

Proto
2016-11-08, 17:44
I still don't get why some people are up in arms about Ars and Aisha, again Lilia was perfectly ok with Aisha sleeping with Rudeus. Plus with all the hentai, manga, anime, and light novels with clear incest, this shouldn't be a huge issue.

For many people it was not an issue of incest, but one of being believable, poor writing and pedophilia.

Breimn
2016-11-08, 17:46
And do not forget all those who believed till the end that she would rape MC and finally join the harem lol.

Proto
2016-11-08, 21:22
And do not forget all those who believed till the end that she would rape MC and finally join the harem lol.

Those are the people projecting way too much into their MC. I just wanted an entertaining story damnit. :(

Sebazu
2016-11-08, 23:35
Those are the people projecting way too much into their MC. I just wanted an entertaining story damnit. :(
Isn't it actually like 2 people who are louder than the rest?