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Rasty
2017-07-05, 17:49
Lately this thread is a bit slow...

So for some fun: n1110eb - because one Yandere is never enough.
The jokes are funny and the story isn't bad too. Might turn for worse later on, but worth reading.
btw. FAQ ?YY (? because he has cheats, but for the time being not really OP).

So what do you guys think about yandere harem like this?

sasuke706
2017-07-05, 18:10
I've been meaning to get to that yandere world one. Only read the first chapter for the time being and all.

Yandere harems are kind of questionable.
Because unless they're all immortal for some reason, typically you'd expect one yandere to kill all the other ones. Or them all to die in a free-for-all.
Or like Sevens had a few yanderes and they all went around trying to get the non-yanderes to join their own cliques, or undermine the other yanderes. That was pretty amusing.
I personally don't mind the concept of yandere harem (tsundere harem is about as awful as you can get as a stereotype), but of course it's all about how it's handled.
Going by the Sister Harem series he does I bet it isn't bad, but him getting conned (if you can call convincing an idiot to be stupid getting "conned") into becoming an extreme feminist immortal limits his possible interactions with girls, since he can't even really get aggressive toward them in any manner.

Also, I only post in the thread when it's a reply to something or I have a series I want to recommend. Which the latter has been very disappointing as of late.
I suppose I've also done a rant or two but those are rare. I could just throw up what I think are average or decent series, but standard of quality and whatnot.
Plus a lot of series just die or end super early, and I lose all motivation to mention the ones that end early and am cautious about recommending new series due to the death rate they go through.

Rasty
2017-07-06, 05:46
^ Well mild yanderes for this series, so they still have some borders beynd which they won't go, and they are not completely in their own world. "Even I wouldn''t cut off all your limbs if I couldn't attach them back. What kind of person do you take me for?" kind (and yeah, she did).

Actually, the MC for this one isn't really dumb (in LN/WN standards) and the feminist skill only prevents him from using physical (and magical) violence on girls (seems to be a bit lax too, as he was able to pinch one girl's cheek for going too far in her delusions), so verbal atacks, tricks and asking someone else for help is OK (actually MCs that do physically atack girls are rather rare in the isekai genre anyway).

But yeah, I had little luck finding new good series lately too. If you find something good/interesting you can always recommend.

travelingbum
2017-07-06, 05:57
well if you liked how Boku wa Isekai de Fuyo Mahou to Shoukan Mahou wo Tenbin ni Kakeru started

if the author just hasn't disappeared on the readers. n9613dp
sadly the create magic shortcut too easy.

Rasty
2017-07-06, 11:58
Btw. what can you tell me about sister harem? I kind of did not like him not really trying too hard and I ragequit when he decided he is gonan go and try to save his scum brother (that was beating him while he couldn't resist caused him to get imprisoned, waste his best chance to save his sister and tried to rape one heroine) of course while having close to zero chance to win and while endangering the (almost raped) heroine...(half of chapter 3-8) Does it get at leasta bit better later?

sasuke706
2017-07-06, 13:10
^^I tried that and dropped it; don't remember why.
Probably the part where his ability is to be able to do basically anything he wants.
The solution to everything being to pull it out of your ass whenever you need it is really boring to me.

^Ah, the brother. Yeah, there are some pretty try hard moments but it seems to mellow out pretty severely a little after that. The brother gets what's coming to him, by the way.
I haven't read it since chapter 108 as it was at a low point for a while by then, so I figured I'd let it build some up since reading slow development chapter, then waiting, then reading slow development is a quick way to kill my interest if it goes on for too long. So I'll get back to it...eventually.

The protagonist apparently can fight decently but he never does; any actual battle issue is generally solved by the younger sister who reincarnated into an elf from his previous life and is now older than him.
That said, it's mostly a slice of life with Naisei and drama here and there, basically.
Due to the efforts of his sisters he starts accepting the whole sister harem thing as well.

That said, aside from like volume ends where he gets some sentimental time with his sisters individually, there really aren't any super notable or memorable moments.
So I suppose I'd chalk it up to average. The start wasn't bad and was handled well, I think, though. It's just the momentum it had slowed down to a steady walk.
This is probably partially because he doesn't really have a goal other than get with his "sisters" and vaguely further develop their territory. There's no foreseeable, achievable end game.

grecefar
2017-07-07, 17:16
well I'm almost done with junai x ryoujoku, so anyone knows another R-18 novel with vanilla harem like this?

sunsown
2017-07-08, 18:11
Does anyone know if there was a web novel for the manga / novel 'Yankee wa Isekai de Seirei ni Aisaremasu' ? If there was one and it was removed because it was digested does anyone know what the code was in syosetu website.

sasuke706
2017-07-08, 18:20
Yeah, there was one. It was n0555ct (http://ncode.syosetu.com/n0555ct). And yeah, removed due to Alphapolis and their usual ways.

sunsown
2017-07-09, 03:06
^Awesome. I wanted to see how the story is since it is at the beginning stages in the manga.

Rasty
2017-07-09, 05:10
well I'm almost done with junai x ryoujoku, so anyone knows another R-18 novel with vanilla harem like this?
Wait, you call rape harem vanila?


Just for the sake of my curiosity, what series do you guys know (not noct, or at least not pure porn) that contain snusnu (MC with heroines, don't care about other people or prostitutes as some Sugar cube). From what I remember:

The good ones:
チート魔術で運命をねじ伏せる
Re-Tale ~二度目の冒険譚~
異種族間戦争 ~交錯する二人の転生者~
デュアルライフ~昼は勇者パーティ、夜は魔王軍~
ヤンデレ女神の箱庭 ~この異世界で“も”、ヤンデレに死ぬほど愛される~

The not so bad ones:
調教師は魔物に囲まれて生きていきます
ありふれた職業で世界最強
黒の召喚士 ~戦闘狂の成り上がり~(旧:古今東西召喚士)
槍使いと、黒猫
落ちこぼれ魔法師と異端の力 (I think, don't remember it so much)
マジックイーター(Magic Eater :通称ME) 〜ゴブリンデッキから始まる異世界冒険〜
ディメンショナル シーリング -依代と巫女-
八男って、それはないでしょう!
コミュ難の俺が、交渉スキルに全振りして転生した結果
異世界迷宮で奴隷ハーレムを
俺のペットは聖女さま (my teeth couldn't stand the sweetness)

any other ones?

guyy
2017-07-09, 05:49
^魔王になったら領地が無人島だった - Has kids, I think there was a noc extra chapter with some actual snusnu written out
塔の管理をしてみよう - Has kids but snusnu and romantic gestures etc. happen completely "off screen"

Kaito Yamakage
2017-07-09, 10:01
^^ Just while ignoring some of the more obvious ones... here's a couple. (Because there's really no end to them if we get into the really small ones)

29歳独身は異世界で自由に生きた…かった。
ワールド・ティーチャー -異世界式教育エージェント-
ニートだけどハロワにいったら異世界につれてかれた
呼び出された殺戮者
男なら一国一城の主を目指さなきゃね
天才外科医が異世界で闇医者を始めました。
魔王になったら領地が無人島だった ^ repost of guyy
成長チートでなんでもできるようになったが、無職だけは辞められないようです
俺はバリアで無双する
マギクラフト・マイスター
理想のヒモ生活
Deviant ー妖魔転生ー
異世界に来たみたいだけど如何すれば良いのだろう
無色騎士 ニートの伝説
転生したら最初は苦労したけど、今は何とかなりそうです!(旧:人生やり直そうと思ったら苛烈なファンタジ ー!)
異世界の王女様に勇者として召喚されたけど、願いを断ったら投獄されました。
レベルイーター
死に戻りと成長チートで異世界救済 ~バチ当たりヒキニートの異世界冒険譚~
異世界くじと神々の塔
結界師への転生
オットー・フォン・ハイデッカーはゲーム脳。
回復術士のやり直し~即死魔法とスキルコピーの超越ヒール~
俺が異世界でダンジョンマスターでゴブリン!?
めざせ豪華客船!!
扉の管理者 〜輸送チートで経済勝利を〜
異世界から仕送りしています
全力で腰を振れ!
悪いな勇者、このダンジョンは小人用なんだ
女神様から同情された結果こうなった
異世界転移後、一週間で建国してしまいました…
ステータスマイスター

Also to add to that I make no guarantees on them being good or ongoing. Though at the very least they're ones that had at least some aspect of them that kept them in my memory. And it's only obvious but on narou a lot of sex scenes are done off screen.

sasuke706
2017-07-09, 11:09
Adding to the boink list.

モンスターのご主人様 - Pretty good on the romance. Protag works for it.
異世界旅行は落ち着かない - Eventually does and makes it a habit.
敵の姫様が綺麗だったので、略奪婚してしまった巨人の俺 - Single heroine series; actually starts with the marriage stuff and goes from there. Pretty alright.
シェイプシフター転生記 - The main heroine gets nothing. Not even sure if harem.
酷幻想をアイテムチートで生き抜く - Everyone gets the D.
国を作る! - Wish fulfillment with scum protagonist.
洒落にならないモノを失ったが、最強メイドは手に入ったからまあいいか - World ending yandere maid.
魔剣師の魔剣による魔剣のためのハーレムライフ - Katana love strong.
黒髪の王〜魔法の使えない魔剣士の成り上がり〜 - I haven't read this in forever but the first heroine got boinked and then he ditched her.
吸血鬼の魔界生存戦記 - Boinks but there's like no satisfaction to it; no build-up and happens way off-screen. Kinda lost interest in it altogether.
必勝ダンジョン運営方法 相手に合わせる理由がない - Everyone, D.
悪いな勇者、このダンジョンは小人用なんだ - Protag is usually a hetare but actually does it with the first two heroines.
「あなたの人生、ロードしますか?」「はい/いいえ」 - Even has Nocturn versions for them.
カンナのカンナ 異端召喚者はシナリオブレイカー - Not the main heroine lolol
とある転生者の革命戦記 - Average with a lot of filler tech text but it happens with mother and two daughter donburi.
神さまSHOPでチートの香り - Unfortunate main heroine; gets boinked, ditched, and hasn't been seen for over half the series now. Good build-up to the initial romance, though.

Garn
2017-07-09, 12:19
I think that yandere megami has a version in noc

異世界から来た勇者
異世界建国記
異世界転移 パワードスーツの錬金術師
未来の万能チート兵器で異世界転生無双ハーレム~相棒は5000年後の超兵器~
落ちこぼれの俺は一の魔法と百の戦技を持って、魔王殺しの英雄へと至る
ファンタジー世界を現代兵器チートが行く。
モンスター娘ハーレムを作ろう!(At first I liked it, but the author seemed to want to finish the story so that many events feel rushed and with potential for further development.)

El Rue
2017-07-09, 16:56
Nice to see Genocide Reality finally getting published w/ pretty good art all around.
http://ga.sbcr.jp/bunko_blog/nekopyon/20170707b/
http://ga.sbcr.jp/bunko_blog/wp-content/uploads/2017/07/GEN002.jpg
http://ga.sbcr.jp/bunko_blog/wp-content/uploads/2017/07/GEN004.jpg

sasuke706
2017-07-09, 17:04
Yeah, I saw that Genocide Reality got published. Art is nice too.
The surprise is Usa is on the first cover. While she is the only one he promised to marry, and way early on at that, he has no intention of actually doing it and makes it pretty clear.

But I suppose putting the trap friend on the cover might pose an issue despite s/he being the true heroine.

Ruki0089
2017-07-09, 20:18
What is that?? Harem??

travelingbum
2017-07-09, 20:21
no
don't know when it was last posted if there ever was but damn.

first posted back in page 78 lol

sasuke706
2017-07-09, 21:45
Is is harem. It's just the protagonist only cares about one person. His best friend, who looks like a girl. And he is very open about it.
It's harem in the sense that multiple girls do like him and on more than one occasional try to get into his pants. Which he drives off fairly well.
So it's not a "true" harem but I digress.

The second arc gets a bit weird in several ways but the first arc is very solid, in a story sense.

wuhugm
2017-07-09, 22:04
Is is harem. It's just the protagonist only cares about one person. His best friend, who looks like a girl. And he is very open about it.
It's harem in the sense that multiple girls do like him and on more than one occasional try to get into his pants. Which he drives off fairly well.
So it's not a "true" harem but I digress.

The second arc gets a bit weird in several ways but the first arc is very solid, in a story sense.

Is there snusnu yet for that?

This is the author for Kokugensou yo~

sasuke706
2017-07-09, 22:51
I actually need to catch up on it (only a little behind), but likely not.
The protagonist likes 2 things: fighting, and his best friend who got genderswapped into a girl.
He bathes with the other girls fairly frequently (because they come in uninvited) but never even muses to do anything.
At one point he even uses the pink hair girl as a pillow (not body pillow) on hard ground because she won't behave too.

There is one character you'd like though; total two-faced bitch.
She feigns innocent, trying to get boys to protect her through good looks, later tries to kill him, fails and immediately starts hitting on him, where she just gives up and changes their relationship to she does things for him for lots of gold.
A very cash-ready girl. The protagonist doesn't particularly mind either, of course. Given she does her work.

wuhugm
2017-07-09, 23:07
I actually need to catch up on it (only a little behind), but likely not.
The protagonist likes 2 things: fighting, and his best friend who got genderswapped into a girl.
He bathes with the other girls fairly frequently (because they come in uninvited) but never even muses to do anything.
At one point he even uses the pink hair girl as a pillow (not body pillow) on hard ground because she won't behave too.

There is one character you'd like though; total two-faced bitch.
She feigns innocent, trying to get boys to protect her through good looks, later tries to kill him, fails and immediately starts hitting on him, where she just gives up and changes their relationship to she does things for him for lots of gold.
A very cash-ready girl. The protagonist doesn't particularly mind either, of course. Given she does her work.

But still no snusnu yet, huh?
Please tell me when there is one, I'll jump into this

cabman11
2017-07-10, 20:54
Oh yeah I remember genocide reality .... like 3 years ago

grecefar
2017-07-11, 12:17
Wait, you call rape harem vanila?

well it's pretty vanille after the rape thought...

Senia
2017-07-12, 06:24
Hmm... Some series that caught my eye lately:

我が名はエルフライダー
The story is pretty fun but at the same time it feels a bit too hard to digest and keep track of what's going on because of how the story keeps running in different directions.

不死者(ノスフェラトウ)に愛の手を!
Pretty interesting series although I didn't really like the format of meet heroine and get separated at the end of arc then meet new heroine. Like most other series of its type, it's probably going to end in all of them coming together as a harem though.

いずれ最強へと至る道
Overall good story though the power creep is unending... Just when you think the protagonist has become stronger you find out he's still weak.

使徒戦記
Good series that kinda resembles Vanadis. Due to the heroines all being spread out in different countries I'm somewhat questioning how the harem (if there will be one) is going to come together though.

竜操者は静かに暮らしたい
Dragons are huge. Basically the protagonist is obsessed with being a baker from the time he was a child. Except it turns out his father was a baker during the day but assassin for the kingdom during the night and he succeeded his father in his work. And then it turns out he was chosen to be a dragon rider making his dreams of being a baker impossible.

勇者の影で生まれた英雄
There's a NTR tag and there's several comments about the NTR so I came in with caution but as it turns out, it seems it was mostly just reviewers being overly sensitive about NTR. The NTR exists but it honestly felt quite clear the author was pushing her aside as a heroine from the very start (while she took an important role, she had very little presence while the protagonist was having sex with multiple girls).

王族に転生したから暴力を使ってでも専制政治を守り抜く!
It's a shame the heroines basically had no presence after the first part of the story ended. Other than that, standard sword and magic fantasy with the protagonist as a king with the ability to freely generate and detonate plastic bombs that was initially recognized by most people as "clay".

魔王の器
This should be ending pretty soon. On the bright side, the development starting from their innocent(?) school days to the final arc seeing how all of them became after growing up was pretty interesting. On the downside as the scale of the story expanded it felt like most of the characters lost their presence and became air in the overall plot.

lexlexz
2017-07-12, 19:15
genocide reality is the one sky translated right?
the mc looks cool

Rasty
2017-07-13, 10:05
勇者の影で生まれた英雄
There's a NTR tag and there's several comments about the NTR so I came in with caution but as it turns out, it seems it was mostly just reviewers being overly sensitive about NTR. The NTR exists but it honestly felt quite clear the author was pushing her aside as a heroine from the very start (while she took an important role, she had very little presence while the protagonist was having sex with multiple girls).

Well another series to avoid. And if she sleeps with the MC than it is rather severe type of NTR for narou (though depends on many other factors). I generally think, that even if the author wants to get rid of heroine he should just let her go away and never mention her again, no reason to go onto writing about her sleeping with other guys.


王族に転生したから暴力を使ってでも専制政治を守り抜く!
It's a shame the heroines basically had no presence after the first part of the story ended. Other than that, standard sword and magic fantasy with the protagonist as a king with the ability to freely generate and detonate plastic bombs that was initially recognized by most people as "clay".

Does the MC go the absolute monarchy + tyrany style with killing any rebeling peasants and such? Or is it just the usual type and the title is only exaxerating (which I expect it to be)?


魔王の器
This should be ending pretty soon. On the bright side, the development starting from their innocent(?) school days to the final arc seeing how all of them became after growing up was pretty interesting. On the downside as the scale of the story expanded it felt like most of the characters lost their presence and became air in the overall plot.

Geh, you really love NTR, don't you? Actually, how is it going now? Has the MC and main heroine finally gotten together, or is the author still meaninglessly dragging it out?

Senia
2017-07-13, 12:34
^

1. As I said, it's not anywhere as bad as the nips make it to be. Though she does take an important role, past some point she barely even appears while the protagonist trips flags with many girls while developing relationships with them as well while she was sidelined.

Then later she was literally considered to be dead and got shoved out of the story for a long, long time. She only reappeared in the latest arc.

2. Rather than killing rebelling peasants, he completely annihilates rebelling aristocrats and any other enemies that appear, though of course peasants are included.The story pretty much started with him killing the king, first prince and all of the aristocrats on his side after all Otherwise he's a fairly standard ruler (by the standard of the genre I mean)

3. Yep they've gotten together but as I said, towards the latter half the author started focusing a lot more on the story and greatly neglected characters (is what I feel anyway). I don't really consider there to be NTR in this series, it's just a heroine who ended up giving up trying to compete for his D early on amusingly punished for that as her husband went on a path of ruin and her character development stopped or even degraded. Much like the other one, once the school age ended her presence in the story faded pretty fast. Pretty sure she actually flat out completely disappeared from the story for a long while in the middle.

Rinvelt
2017-07-13, 12:50
Can you say more about いずれ最強へと至る道?

Senia
2017-07-13, 14:17
Can you say more about いずれ最強へと至る道?
Pretty much as the title states it's about the protagonist trying to become the strongest. He gets strong quite fast but then even stronger enemies appear so it's been cycling back and forth like that. If you can accept the power creep though, it's a fun harem adventure story.

Rasty
2017-07-13, 14:20
^^ Can't say I would be too impressed by that one. Firstly it doesen't take itself seriously. The "getting stronger" (especially in the first phase) is horrible (more of juke than serious, though not funny). It keeps changing directions all the while and the MC is imposing on himself various limitations and such just for the story to get interesting.
Also as was said, power creep and the logic doesen't makes sense. I stopped reading after

supposedly omniscient and omnipotent being kind of happens to arrive late to fight some deamon or whatever (where has the "gods can't interfere in human world" gone to?) and MC because of that loses third of his status and one arm. I know that the author is trying to make it serious by this (and that the MC is most likely gonna get some shiny artificial arm or whatever), but it just felt too stupid by this point to continue reading.

darkdhaos
2017-07-15, 12:39
Here's a novel that I already recommended, it got a LN adaptation on "GA Novels" and the first volume got released this week.

http://i.imgur.com/to4IbdS.jpg?1

Original Title: 織田信長という謎の職業が魔法剣士よりチートだったので、王国を作ることにしました
Romaji: Oda Nobunaga to Iu Nazo no Shokugyo ga Mahou Kenshi yori Cheat Dattanode, Oukoku wo Tsukuru Koto ni Shimashita
Author: Morita Kisetsu (森田 季節)
Illustrator: Shibano Kaito (柴乃 櫂人)
NCode: n8486dn

The young Alsrod (Arusuroddo), it's eagerly waiting for the day that he's granted a "job" in the temple. In this world when one reaches adulthood, they are granted "jobs" like swordman or magician by divine revelation, among them the one said to be the strongest it's magic swordman.

Alsrod is the illegitimate second son of a small feudal lord, and the seat is already succeded by his elder brother who already put him in the front lines, he's in a position that could lose his life on the battlefield any day. If he became a magic swordman, a job that was possesed by the famous heroes of the past, he could change his situation.

However the job that's granted to Alsrod it's not magic swordman nor any of the other common jobs, it was a mysterious job called "Oda Nobunaga" that none of the temple's people knew anything about it.

However, this job makes one battle power become the top-level in the battlefield, gives administration capabilites that allow to turn a small city into a big commercial city and it also elevates the leadership of the troops, becoming a Haou capable of building a country!

Before long, Alsrod defeats his elder brother and becomes the feudal lord. Furthermore, he prepares himself to become a king and build his own country, considering it to be the shortest route to protect the important persons in his life and his people.

And for the usual questions:


1.
Since childhood, he trained his swordmanship and studied anything related to magic in order to raises his chances in becoming a magic swordman. After he got "Oda Nobunaga" as his job, he got some special abilities, some of those abilities are:

-Haou' Strength (覇王の力): It doubles the physical abilities of the user while in battle.
-Haou's Pride (覇王の矜持): While the user it's protecting it's possessions, it doubles it's offensive capabilities (if it's used with Haou' Strength, the offensive abilities are multiplied by 4).
-Haou's Guidepost (覇王の道標): The reliability and concentration of the soldiers or workers under command rises up a 50%.
-Haou's Insight (覇王の見通し): The sense of anything related to the the city and the commerce's economy, will be like Oda Nobunaga. This ability it's usually active, except when the user it's in a state of drunkness or madness.

The MC also receives advice from a mysterious voice (which he later comes to realize that it comes from Oda Nobunaga).

2.
Yes, here are some of his harem members:

-Laviala Aweille(ラヴィアラ.アウェイユ): She's the daughter of Alsrod's wet nurse and his childhood friend, she's a half-elf. She's an all-rounded girl who can handle well in both combat and tactics.

Seraphina Curtis(セラフィーナ.カルティス): Alsrod's wife, she's the daughter of Ales Curtis, she has a rare job called "holy woman".

Kerala Hirara(ケララ.ヒララ): A female dwarf military officer that serves Hasse. She's a talended woman well-versed in both literature and military arts that posseses a job called "Akechi Mitsuhide".


3.
There's no snusnu depiction in the novel, but it's implied.
The first 2 harem members got pregnant on chapter 27.

wuhugm
2017-07-15, 12:44
^Oh, I remember checking that when you first mentioned it
The scene transitions were kinda weird, like it jumps from one scene to another, couldn't get into it

Kaito Yamakage
2017-07-15, 14:58
^ ^^
Same, I tried reading it way back but it takes something insanely interesting for me to get into a series with Oda Nobunaga in the title at this point.

Seeing the response to #3 does make it a bit more tempting though. Oda Nobunaga + Hetare ... WTF are some authors thinking. (not referring to that one)

charasu
2017-07-16, 04:52
^^^ oi that 3rd girl, dont tell me it will end like in history she will back stab MC and burn him with whole mountain a.l.a yandere @@

darkdhaos
2017-07-16, 05:25
^^^ oi that 3rd girl, dont tell me it will end like in history she will back stab MC and burn him with whole mountain a.l.a yandere @@

I don't think so, remember that the mc receives advices from Oda Nobunaga on his head. The first thing he said to the mc after hearing the 3rd girl's job was "this woman may betray you some day", so I don't think she will have it that easy (she doesn't seem to have any traitorous thoughts against the mc) if the mc job is wary of her.

charasu
2017-07-20, 19:15
reading noc with tag lovecome, yan, comedy and harem
>newest chapter, 2nd heroine die......*not even snusnu with her yet
(ノ°Д°)ノ︵ ┻━┻

Ruki0089
2017-07-20, 19:39
What is that??

charasu
2017-07-20, 20:34
n2794ec > この異世界でも、ヤンデレに死ぬほど愛される :v

Garn
2017-07-20, 22:10
I did not expect this "n1822dl" to receive a publication, I read it a while back but the more I read the morehurt, since it is similar to KonoSuba (and others), where MC is not the most brilliant person in the world but the others around him are deplorable characters (especially the human queen), adding the fact that when he finally goes to move to the next base is cockblocked and another arc begins, and being the main heroine (and only as far as I read [9Xchp] who has romantic feelings towards the protagonist) an deadpan maid tsundere.

Rasty
2017-07-21, 03:25
reading noc with tag lovecome, yan, comedy and harem
>newest chapter, 2nd heroine die......*not even snusnu with her yet
(ノ°Д°)ノ︵ ┻━┻

Try not droping it yet. It is noc version of Syosetu one (I actually like the 15+ version more though) and it is fairly good.
She revives

charasu
2017-07-21, 09:50
Eh, there is 15+ ver!?Σ(⊙ω⊙)

wuhugm
2017-07-22, 10:57
Waw... So many dead series now...

If you checked the : 長期連載停止作品

Which means excluding hiatus series, the search result is very few...

The writing rush is over... sad... :(

Ruki0089
2017-07-22, 11:32
Some nocturne wn is deleted for no reason... So sad... Few of them is my favorite...

Kaito Yamakage
2017-07-22, 11:42
^^ It's just another one of those periods again. Like once a year half of the current series finish/go on hold. But things always start back up again. Just go into hibernation for a bit and it'll be over.

I saw one series go on hold from like 2011 to 2016 last year. Not counting Slave Harem Labyrinth.

Garn
2017-07-23, 11:57
Now that mention about deleted wn, I find that some that were already finished (especially in noc) were deleted along with the author, stupidly I never thought to have a spare copy, now I'm searching for the network in vain

Rinvelt
2017-07-25, 09:39
Saw this on NU: 転生ごときで逃げられるとでも、兄さん?(n7437dj)

Anyone read it? Not really in yandere, but the comments make me kinda curious.

Rinvelt
2017-07-26, 03:38
And while I'm at it, saw this one too: 大陸英雄戦記 (n7105co)

charasu
2017-07-26, 19:12
reading with tag beastialy, somehow feels weird but still bearable compared to yaoi/suka......:v

Rasty
2017-07-26, 21:15
Saw this on NU: 転生ごときで逃げられるとでも、兄さん?(n7437dj)

Anyone read it? Not really in yandere, but the comments make me kinda curious.

Well since you mentioned it I started reading it. The sister is serious yandere (not like the mild type from Yandere Megami no Hakoniwa) and it seems to be taking itself rather seriously. After reading 19 chapters, I quite like it, well it can always go in some bad direction, but I guess it is worth trying.

Rasty
2017-07-28, 19:07
... OMG
What the hell am I reading? What the hell am I recomnding to other people? Even though I expected good half of the development I never expected the author to go THIS far. Yep THIS is why I always hated the serious tag... I guess it's about time I started to avoid it again.

Btw. is there any other victim of this novel? I got to about half, but most likely will never get further. Also, I hate multiyear timeskips.

Ruki0089
2017-07-28, 19:16
^What happen, dude?

Rasty
2017-07-28, 19:21
^ The wall is so white... why is there a wall?... why am I there?... who is the "I" anyway?... ah, who cares ha, haha, hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahah... haha... ha... haha?

Kaito Yamakage
2017-07-28, 19:40
This is why you NEVER go full spear or full cat.

Ruki0089
2017-07-28, 20:03
^ The wall is so white... why is there a wall?... why am I there?... who is the "I" anyway?... ah, who cares ha, haha, hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahah... haha... ha... haha?

Hoh~
LMAO:heh:

wuhugm
2017-07-28, 21:45
^ The wall is so white... why is there a wall?... why am I there?... who is the "I" anyway?... ah, who cares ha, haha, hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahah... haha... ha... haha?

Calm down bro
Tell wuhu-sensei what happened

sasuke706
2017-07-28, 22:33
^If he's talking about the yandere imouto one, it's probably because the novel is very tryhard.
You have gradeschoolers layering plot upon plot to outwit each other, the powers are way more complicated than they need to be, it takes the author a good deal of time to get the point of a dialogue session if he even does at all, and arcs/plotlines overstay their welcome.

It seems like "deep" and "meaningful" dialogue is what particularly set him off.

Rasty
2017-07-28, 23:32
^ Well not really. The point that the novel is stupid is not so bad (I got used...). And it even managed to surprise me sometimes (which is nice) but:

As for the fact, that the main heroine that spent the lovey-dovey 5 years with MC is in fact his crazy little sister - yep, I expected this from the moment the girl appeared.
I can also stomach the fact, that she for some stupid reason decides to massacre the whole population of the capital (largely succesfully). The point of most of the people around MC being in fact zombies is still OK. But was there the need for the MC to strangle her by his own hands, her last words being of the girl he fell in love followed by him breaking and finished by 7 year timeskip?

For random complaints:
Yeah alos, the fighting is mostly stupid, like the fight against female bandit, it wasn't bad in the begining, but she supposedly had some teleportation gate ability (too small to pass her body through) and was using it rather well for long range atacks, and managed OK against MC using high speed random movement, yet when MC switched to straight atacks using gravitation she never just stubbed him while he was falling was predictable and could do nothing. Which also reminds me, that she never used the ability to just pick-up the knife she lost...

There are some totally OP powers that the characters just decide to use only in portion for whatever reason and the MC's power, while being stupid removing of weight, seems to be ever-growing. Like seriously, there is a guy, that can do the same as MC, even from distance, and it's just a small portion of things he can do, and he can even reverse it (adding weight), and he can generally rewrite the world AND he is almost omniscient YET the MC is for some reason stronger then him (not even difference in effort or talent or such, as they train for long time together with them being for some reason similarly strong rivals)...WTF. Not even speaking about te other powers.
And the MC, while sometimes acting rather smart, is idiot oftentimes just doing really stupid things because the author feels it's cool. The novel doing at one point 180° turn with the MC deciding he will no longer kill anyone was stupid and the conversation of MC with the twins was the most stupid conversation I have read in a long while...

The 11 year old kids doing the whole plotting thing was not the smartest, but I got used to such things, and the author seriously overestimates how much you can do countrameassures against abilities (and ignores how much would the common ability vs common ability fighting methods get developed and used in few years).

Also having one of the girls realize she loves MC, half confess to him and all just for the NEXT chapter the MC and main heroine to decide they will marry each other with the MC not sparing single though about the girl was... Having a girl falling in love with MC just for the simple purpose of her getting rejected in the next moment is just stupid.
But I guess this should be enough complaints.

sasuke706
2017-07-28, 23:45
^By main heroine do you mean the childhood friend?

And does killing her even matter? She seems to be able to reincarnate freely anyway.
Since she made god her bitch, or something.

Rasty
2017-07-28, 23:51
^


Yep, the childhood frined and yep, it seriously dosen't matter the least bit as long as the little sister is conserned. Actually killing her was stupid as this way she just can become random different person. If he really wished to get rid of her he should have thrown her in random hole and just make her unable to die.

Breimn
2017-07-29, 02:05
Wait, you mean to say that
after he kills the sister she comes back again? What the fuck is the goddess doing.
MC should outright kill her too .

Ruki0089
2017-07-29, 02:22
...I...I..I don't follow...what the hell?? Kill childhood friend and imouto??

Rinvelt
2017-07-29, 02:41
Well... I guess I won't read it, then. Thanks for the sacrifice!

Rasty
2017-07-29, 06:12
Wait, you mean to say that
after he kills the sister she comes back again? What the fuck is the goddess doing.
MC should outright kill her too .

The goddess seemed 100% scared of the little sister. And yeah, no matter how many times she gets killed she just reincarnates again. Also, MC doesen't have any way to communicate with the goddess, so no way for him to kill her.

...I...I..I don't follow...what the hell?? Kill childhood friend and imouto??

Spoilers guy

And yeah, till where I have read he has already killed the imouto 3 times. Once in the original world, once when he was 1 year old (she actually found him before he got born and acted as his nurse for a year, that was a bit of surprise as I was expecting her to be searching for him) and once after 5 years living with her (thus her becoming his childhood friend), some passionate kissing, lovey-dovey moments, engaging to her and such. Btw. he had no idea she can reincarnate again.
It was rather easy guessing her to be his childhood friend, but with everything going so well with her I was expecting some softer solution... I guess not.


Well... I guess I won't read it, then. Thanks for the sacrifice!

Geh, I should have created some trap (but true) comments to increase the number of victims.... might create a thread for this once everyone forgets it a bit :heh:.

wuhugm
2017-07-29, 06:32
^Why did he kill her? Is he an idiot?

Rasty
2017-07-29, 07:16
^Why did he kill her?

I guess it could have something to do with her:
-killing his parents
-detaining him for 5 years (actually reverse-raping him and such in the process)
-tearing out the tongue of his ex-girlfriend
-frying the face of his girlfriend with frying pan
-gouging out the eyes of his senior from tennis club (girl, and she had a crash on him)
-killing all 3 aforementioned
-doing a double-suicide after he tried to kill her

-killing his parents (take 2)
-killing her own parents
-having them as zombies pretend to live for several years
-killing good half of the capital
-trying to kill the other half, all his friends included, or rather especially them
-preparing a giant doom of bones to skewer everyone

and him being completely out of it



Is he an idiot?
Yes

wuhugm
2017-07-29, 07:25
^That's supreme yandere you got there, that idiot MC should just stay put in his kennel lol :heh:

amatsunagi
2017-07-30, 04:44
that's what yandere is, overkill everything

Ruki0089
2017-07-30, 04:53
I guess it could have something to do with her:
-killing his parents
-detaining him for 5 years (actually reverse-raping him and such in the process)
-tearing out the tongue of his ex-girlfriend
-frying the face of his girlfriend with frying pan
-gouging out the eyes of his senior from tennis club (girl, and she had a crash on him)
-killing all 3 aforementioned
-doing a double-suicide after he tried to kill her

-killing his parents (take 2)
-killing her own parents
-having them as zombies pretend to live for several years
-killing good half of the capital
-trying to kill the other half, all his friends included, or rather especially them
-preparing a giant doom of bones to skewer everyone

and him being completely out of it




Yes

Maybe... I should I change my title.. :heh:

charasu
2017-07-30, 22:19
that's really a high quality yandere o_O! that MC really hetare that cant even receive yandere love @_@

Mirable
2017-07-30, 23:06
^That MC should take Shizuru form Black Maria as an example. No matter what kind of yandere the girls are, he accepted all of them and manage them pretty well XD.

Althought i hate the part when he tortured his doting older sister (cut off her limb tendon and stabbed her 30 times) and killed her in the end..well actually he killed her twice but his sister never blame him and still love him dearly, their last meet depressed me for a week..

charasu
2017-07-30, 23:37
^the difference of
normal japanes MC that even after got isekai'ed and still hetare
between
normal japanes MC then isekai'ed, amnesia, then got trained resulted he pop his cherryhetare curse

Rinvelt
2017-07-31, 01:30
So you guys are ok with girls who kill all the people important to you, restrain you and don't let you do anything? And someone who can't like such a girl is hetare?

Not to be rude, but you guys have a problem. :heh:

wuhugm
2017-07-31, 05:06
^If you can't beat them, join them :heh:
MC should just become her pet until she got bored of him

^That MC should take Shizuru form Black Maria as an example. No matter what kind of yandere the girls are, he accepted all of them and manage them pretty well XD.

Althought i hate the part when he tortured his doting older sister (cut off her limb tendon and stabbed her 30 times) and killed her in the end..well actually he killed her twice but his sister never blame him and still love him dearly, their last meet depressed me for a week..

So you read Black Maria in Alphapolis too?

Mirable
2017-07-31, 08:29
^yes, actually i read it before author delete his work on narou. I remember you asked me once. Did you forget?
So you guys are ok with girls who kill all the people important to you, restrain you and don't let you do anything? And someone who can't like such a girl is hetare?

Not to be rude, but you guys have a problem. :heh:
I don't know which part of my comment make you think i love that kind of character.

My point is that MC should learn from Shizuru cuz he know how to handle a bunch of crazy yandere around him and live peaceful with them without getting killed.

wuhugm
2017-07-31, 09:06
^yes, actually i read it before author delete his work on narou. I remember you asked me once. Did you forget?

You don't know it's still going on in Alphapolis?
New arc now

charasu
2017-07-31, 09:14
want to ask whats the different between mid and noc???

Mirable
2017-07-31, 09:27
You don't know it's still going on in Alphapolis?
New arc now
ah i already know, after Shizuru has violence 3P with his daughter and coworker, his older sister come to his dream right?

wuhugm
2017-07-31, 09:33
ah i already know, after Shizuru has violate 3P with his daughter and coworker, his older sister come to his dream right?

That's the last content in narou before it was deleted

Now it's about the sniper/former princess' revenge
It's the boss doing again

Ruki0089
2017-07-31, 09:44
His daughter?? Incest!!!?

Mirable
2017-07-31, 09:55
^okay, calm down. she is adopted daughter.
That's the last content in narou before it was deleted

Now it's about the sniper/former princess' revenge
It's the boss doing again
Speaking of Ludmilla. it such a shame author turn her to pervert bisexual.

She was one of my favorite character and one of rare sane girl (her first time with Shizuru is nice) When i reread first arc, i can't believe this is the same character.

Ruki0089
2017-07-31, 10:34
His daughter?? Incest!!!? Adopted daughter!!? It's still Incest!!! Horaay for incest~

cabman11
2017-07-31, 10:53
Any of you guys play fate go?

Ruki0089
2017-07-31, 10:56
@Cabman
I am... And I'm just start playing for 2 week... My servant is Gilgamesh, Saber Lily, EMIYA(Archer), Lancelot, Medusa, Kiyohime and 5 servant I haven't use...

wuhugm
2017-07-31, 11:19
Speaking of Ludmilla. it such a shame author turn her to pervert bisexual.

She was one of my favorite character and one of rare sane girl (her first time with Shizuru is nice) When i reread first arc, i can't believe this is the same character.

Yea, we/readers should've took that as a hint for the eventual Oboro's Tragedy

This author likes to add unpleasant settings to his characters later on

In Seventh Brave, one heroine was later revealed to be raped in the past

With the Oboro outrage hopefully he will established such quirks in the beginning instead so regular readers do not get attached to that character

apr
2017-07-31, 18:40
want to ask whats the different between mid and noc???

Mid(night) is for "adults", both men and women. Noc(turne) is primarily for men.
Then there's mnlt (Moonlight), which is primarily for women.

Rasty
2017-07-31, 19:05
want to ask whats the different between mid and noc???

Well I think that Midnight was meant as a midpoint between nocturne and syosetu, so works that couldn't make it through the strict syosetu regulations, but were mainly plot focused (actually just reading one work that got moved there because the author got warning for content exceeding 15+).
Nocturne is 99% pure porn (for men) and Moonlight is... well lets rather not mention it (I fear that some fujoshi might be hidden even on this forum).

The sad reality of Midnight is though, that it has just a fragment of popularity of syosetu/nocturne and most high ranking works would be better to be on nocturne. Well I am still hoping for it to take a better turn, not like there are not any solid works.

amatsunagi
2017-07-31, 22:51
need moar read orz, just simple or intriguing with very little spice of stress.

charasu
2017-08-01, 03:13
Mid(night) is for "adults", both men and women. Noc(turne) is primarily for men.
Then there's mnlt (Moonlight), which is primarily for women.

Well I think that Midnight was meant as a midpoint between nocturne and syosetu, so works that couldn't make it through the strict syosetu regulations, but were mainly plot focused (actually just reading one work that got moved there because the author got warning for content exceeding 15+).
Nocturne is 99% pure porn (for men) and Moonlight is... well lets rather not mention it (I fear that some fujoshi might be hidden even on this forum).

The sad reality of Midnight is though, that it has just a fragment of popularity of syosetu/nocturne and most high ranking works would be better to be on nocturne. Well I am still hoping for it to take a better turn, not like there are not any solid works.

i see so, the H one mainly in noc :v
thanks.
-----------

fuuuuu -_- read the pendng one or search new title -_-

Valky
2017-08-01, 03:25
Probably that's the reason it's not that popular, a midpoint. People might prefer to just go full throttle when you already surpass the R-15 barrier.

Btw, have anybody read http://ncode.syosetu.com/n5606cq/ ? Kinda want to hear the impression if you have. It seems to have quite a lot of info dump too.

amatsunagi
2017-08-01, 05:25
haven't read that much but my impression of it is... kinda generic? maybe it's because the setting is academy.

Rasty
2017-08-01, 05:46
Probably that's the reason it's not that popular, a midpoint. People might prefer to just go full throttle when you already surpass the R-15 barrier

Well that is most likely the reason (and the fact, that it is the newest of the three and has the least content). Though I like VNs, so I got accustomed to heavily story focused novels containing 18+ (I kind of hoped there would be more pepople like me in Japan...).

amatsunagi
2017-08-01, 06:03
by the way, speaking about noc, I think I just read something about rape harem vanilla a few pages before... don't know if it is already posted here or no, n5715cs

Valky
2017-08-01, 06:26
^^^Yeah, it seems. Post-apocalyptic world, OP mc, academy, and have harem element. It screams generic as hell. :heh:

Kinda want to know whether it is well written or not. If yes, well, I might read it later.

^^Since when did Midnight launched again?

I'm actually not that sure there will be a lot of works there though. Other than sex scenes, until how far did a work actually allowed in the usual r-15 narou? Gore or dark theme already rampant in the usual r-15 though ...

Rasty
2017-08-01, 06:36
^ Well the gore and such are extremely lax on narou. I guess you would have to try really hard (to the point of scarring off most readers) to get 18+ by that. On the other hand the ecchi scenes got lately rather strict regulation, so as long as you have snusnu in novel it's actually rather easy to unintentionally go over the 15+ border.

Valky
2017-08-01, 06:52
Yeah, I'm not sure if people would read that kind of gore in the first place. Unless you have quite a peculiar taste .. I really doubt that.

Also, well, Midnight is supposed to be focused not on the sexual stuff. If it's deemed not fit for the R-15 due to ecchi, it'll be just censored (since R-15 narou has the largest reader share so there's no way the author will delete it) and make a copy at Nocturne instead of Midnight. Kinda beat the point isn't it.

Maybe it's supposedly a seinen type of wn. It'll "supposedly" have a lot of kanji, complicated issues, mature theme, and complex plot. Something like that.

wuhugm
2017-08-01, 06:57
by the way, speaking about noc, I think I just read something about rape harem vanilla a few pages before... don't know if it is already posted here or no, n5715cs

Ou, that one is in my bookmark, but haven't read
Rape female class in uninhabited island

amatsunagi
2017-08-01, 07:11
@erotora
was expecting nausea but instead I got diabetes

wuhugm
2017-08-01, 07:30
^Is good?
That's stress-free, right?
Coz no other males

Rasty
2017-08-01, 08:11
Noc stories actually tend to be rather stress free... if you don't accumulate loads of stress by going through dozens of horrible works there.

I wish there was some tag (used) for low H content on nocturne. It's not like I hate the scenes, but when there is one H scene after another every single chapter it's no longer interesting, neither exciting, just boring.

sasuke706
2017-08-01, 10:17
^Ah, I know the feel. That's why I don't actually read many (i.e. currently any really) Noc series.
I occasionally check them out since mature content can definitely add to a story, but most of what I find are series that update at the pace of a glacier melting so I just don't bother, or are literally just sex.
Like I see several concepts that could be fun, but instead of story it's 10 chapters of the protagonist being a horndog scumbag and 1 chapter of maybe "story".

And to make it worse there isn't even a proper genre system on Noc. You have to hope the author uses tags aside from for sex stuff for any genre labeling.

As an unrelated side note, I found a weird series. n9779ec says it has 29k characters, but from my count there's 2k tops.
Does he have unreleased chapters that are counted toward the total letter count or something?

Rasty
2017-08-01, 15:28
^ I suppose so (he certainly uses the timer, because both the chapters got released exactly at 5:00), though I always though the character count is only from already released chapters. Guess I was wrong.
But I can't see any bright future for this series. Not starting by at least one weak of daily updates means no chance of high popularity and mini chapters + every three days right of the bat... it won't last long.

As for Noc/Mid I had no luck lately too, reading just one 15+ series that got moved to Mid.
Btw. the earlier mentioned n5715cs, scanned through 3 chapters (read half of one and then just went throughthe direct speech with occasional one or two sentences around it) - just porn period.

Speaking of which I kind of like if the MC gets the girl(s) as a result of making some serious effort. Don't care whether it is training to get stronger and saving them, trying hard to win their attention or just wile trickery, abduction and brainwashing (the Maou no Hajimarikata type)., I guess even trying to stay alive and not get killed by them counts too (yandere harem). It kind of feels too cheap if the girls get just served to the MC on a silver plate and I couldn't care less about H scenes with heroines I don't care about in the first place (whether he has a skill that makes every girl fall for him once they see him or just the author is too lazy to write more than couple sentences about it).

charasu
2017-08-01, 16:18
Noc stories actually tend to be rather stress free... if you don't accumulate loads of stress by going through dozens of horrible works there.

I wish there was some tag (used) for low H content on nocturne. It's not like I hate the scenes, but when there is one H scene after another every single chapter it's no longer interesting, neither exciting, just boring.

accumulate loads of stress cause reading some works is what my mind state right now + some works that i strike my preference either had low update time or isn't update for long time (╯°□°)╯︵ ┻━┻ ...

amatsunagi
2017-08-01, 23:28
Adding a tidbit of details:
The story is about a man (whose name is unknown) who was going to throw away his virginity to brothel and get kidnapped into an uninhabited island by the owner who are a demon. There he is coerced to help the demon's company to do their job to make human in despair. If he wanted to survive, he have rape 30+ girls who was kidnapped the same like him, or else he will be chosen instead, as a sacrifice.

The flow of the story is pretty much like this: the guy brought one girl to a torture room=> intimidate => rape => midway, stockholming her => in the end getting lovey-dovey => moved on to next girl, rinse and repeat. If there is any plot to this title, it would be: some background of the girls, the background of the guy and the company, the mystery of lost student. Actually he doesn't have to rape them all, if he managed to find one evil girl. The key to that is the mystery of a student girl from that class who was disappeared a few years prior the start of the story. The guy was an orphan and during his childhood he stayed in orphanage managed by demon-worshipping cult, he is saved when the orphanage was demolished and after that lived pretty much a typical hard life as part-timers (by the way, although unofficial this guy loved and was once married to a disabled granny).

As mentioned by Rasty above, this is just pure porn. I just go for the interaction between characters which, in my opinion is quite lively, and most importantly, are sweet. Despite rape, this title is stress free, so I think you can enjoy it if you're looking for easy side-dish to blow.

One of my favorite scene would be:
Girl A (Who was raped the very first) encourages Girl B & Girl C, telling them to stay strong. A few days later Girl A met with the guy and berates him:
Girl A: What have you done to my friends!? You lecher!!
Guy: Huh? Of course I did "what"
Girl: Not that! I mean, several days ago we are like close in sympathy but the next time I see them again they suddenly like: "I'll not lose to you, that guy is mine" and so on... how did they change so quick like that!?
Guy: I love you.
Girl: S-stupid! what are you suddenly saying!?
Well, I don't remember the detail but it should be something close like that.

Ruki0089
2017-08-01, 23:51
To be honest, I already tired of reading nocturne... Seriously, I only see something cliches over and over again... I only want something like Junai x Ryoijuku... But it seems impossible... Since most of Japanese author is wimp and want choroi heroine...

Rasty
2017-08-02, 18:30
Speaking about Nocturne, when searching some random things I found this: n6477de
The first thing to say about it is, it is unique (quite rare for a novel on Nocturne). Sickly guy not loved by any and living in distopic world dies and gets reincarnated into another world. Now there is certainly magic, but there also seems to be a sci-fy civilization (on another planet) and the plot seems to by quickly moving into interplanetary or even multiworld fighting. Also the MC's powers are still kind of unknown, because he had 3 wishes that are really wide open to interpretation.

But just the 3rd chapter and I have a big problem with this work... the first harem member is a guy.......... Btw. the gender of MC is kind of iffy, might be changing in time.

charasu
2017-08-03, 09:40
want to ask, is there any work with blind or disable heroine??? like this one /n7126cq/

Rasty
2017-08-04, 09:19
^ I don't remember any, but it might be hard finding any of that kind on Nocturne..

Btw. speaking of the dark side, n7067du is moving to midnight as n9835ed (that's actually the one I found), so is there anyone who reads that? How is it? Seems like it has quite high character count so it's strange noone mentioned it.

sasuke706
2017-08-04, 09:29
Ah, I've read about half of it then decided to come back to it later since I wasn't particularly invested in it (I don't remember what chapter I left at, though).
It's not like it's bad, but it's a socially inept reincarnated scumbag "hero" decides to become a hermit in the middle of a deserted village that happens to next to an ancient vampire's castle.
He's a scumbag in that he can't take relationships with women seriously and the first heroine became a heroine since he effectively raped her, as much as she had it coming.

It has some in-story character drama as well but it's hard to care when you really can't relate or sympathize with the protagonist.

I suppose the most interesting thing to note would be he boinks said ancient vampire into submission? And she never learns her lesson despite getting angry about it afterwards?
Which is probably why it's moving sites, really.

I did bring it up before as well, actually. On the "boink list" series we did a few pages back.

charasu
2017-08-05, 06:53
^ I don't remember any, but it might be hard finding any of that kind on Nocturne..

Btw. speaking of the dark side, n7067du is moving to midnight as n9835ed (that's actually the one I found), so is there anyone who reads that? How is it? Seems like it has quite high character count so it's strange noone mentioned it.

it's midnight actually, and i got it from recomended webnovel in this thread backthen :v

Rasty
2017-08-05, 11:12
^^ Sorry about that, I must have missed it and I searched this forum only for the number not for the title name.
I kind of can't come to terms with the "Don't care about anything" and "Trying (futilely) to be funny" writing style. I read a bit and was still hoping for the MC to have some sudden change of attitude and the story to turn into the more traditional half-serious + gags, but I guess if it stays the way it is it's not for me.


^ Ah sorry, I was reading it too, but I forgot from where it is since I downloaded it to my smartphone.
It's quite nice and sweet (my poor teeth...), but I don't know whether there is anything to expect from it after the ojousama returns from Switzerland (50th chapters). Kind of feels like there is nothing to continue with.

And I again got to realize why I like harem stories, or rather dislike non-harem ones (though I liked this one even so). The authors just love to add second heroine, have her develop a crush on the MC and have the readers get attached to her, just for her to get rejected by the MC a bit later. In non-harem novels some girls just have to draw the short stick and more likely than not one of them is my favourite heroine (not in this case, thanks god). Why don't have the girls as just little sisters/osananajim/friend/close classmate as they used to be? Is there the need to have them fall for the MC if they are gonna fall out of the fight (that usually never really heats up, because they back off themselves) soon after anyway?

Yeah and for some reason the attempted NTR is soooo frequent in single-heroine ones...

wuhugm
2017-08-05, 11:19
^Main heroine always wins

Mirable
2017-08-05, 12:09
And I again got to realize why I like harem stories, or rather dislike non-harem ones (though I liked this one even so). The authors just love to add second heroine, have her develop a crush on the MC and have the readers get attached to her, just for her to get rejected by the MC a bit later. In non-harem novels some girls just have to draw the short stick and more likely than not one of them is my favourite heroine (not in this case, thanks god). Why don't have the girls as just little sisters/osananajim/friend/close classmate as they used to be? Is there the need to have them fall for the MC if they are gonna fall out of the fight (that usually never really heats up, because they back off themselves) soon after anyway?
For me, that is worst part of harem stories. i really hate when this happened to my favorite harem stories, i tried to avoid those false harem stories but it's really hard cuz you never know it until close to the end, by that time you already attached to the story..

charasu
2017-08-05, 17:29
^ Ah sorry, I was reading it too, but I forgot from where it is since I downloaded it to my smartphone.
It's quite nice and sweet (my poor teeth...), but I don't know whether there is anything to expect from it after the ojousama returns from Switzerland (50th chapters). Kind of feels like there is nothing to continue with.

And I again got to realize why I like harem stories, or rather dislike non-harem ones (though I liked this one even so). The authors just love to add second heroine, have her develop a crush on the MC and have the readers get attached to her, just for her to get rejected by the MC a bit later. In non-harem novels some girls just have to draw the short stick and more likely than not one of them is my favourite heroine (not in this case, thanks god). Why don't have the girls as just little sisters/osananajim/friend/close classmate as they used to be? Is there the need to have them fall for the MC if they are gonna fall out of the fight (that usually never really heats up, because they back off themselves) soon after anyway?

Yeah and for some reason the attempted NTR is soooo frequent in single-heroine ones...

i see
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the heroin want to build reverse harem maybe :v she want surrounded by many pole rod stick :v

amatsunagi
2017-08-05, 19:50
^^ Sorry about that, I must have missed it and I searched this forum only for the number not for the title name.
I kind of can't come to terms with the "Don't care about anything" and "Trying (futilely) to be funny" writing style. I read a bit and was still hoping for the MC to have some sudden change of attitude and the story to turn into the more traditional half-serious + gags, but I guess if it stays the way it is it's not for me.


^ Ah sorry, I was reading it too, but I forgot from where it is since I downloaded it to my smartphone.
It's quite nice and sweet (my poor teeth...), but I don't know whether there is anything to expect from it after the ojousama returns from Switzerland (50th chapters). Kind of feels like there is nothing to continue with.

And I again got to realize why I like harem stories, or rather dislike non-harem ones (though I liked this one even so). The authors just love to add second heroine, have her develop a crush on the MC and have the readers get attached to her, just for her to get rejected by the MC a bit later. In non-harem novels some girls just have to draw the short stick and more likely than not one of them is my favourite heroine (not in this case, thanks god). Why don't have the girls as just little sisters/osananajim/friend/close classmate as they used to be? Is there the need to have them fall for the MC if they are gonna fall out of the fight (that usually never really heats up, because they back off themselves) soon after anyway?

Yeah and for some reason the attempted NTR is soooo frequent in single-heroine ones...

For me, that is worst part of harem stories. i really hate when this happened to my favorite harem stories, i tried to avoid those false harem stories but it's really hard cuz you never know it until close to the end, by that time you already attached to the story..

THESE, I absolutely agree with them. And with these mentions, I suddenly remembered about anime SHUFFLE which become a little bit of traumatic experience for me.

Speaking of which, lately I think I like stories with indomitable MC with epic comeback. So far are:
- Gacha hime
- Dungeon Harem Master
- Infinity Dendrogram
- World Frontier
- Gensousaiki Allusionist

Any others similar to these?

charasu
2017-08-05, 20:05
Shuffle? Iirc Isn't that bassed VN?

amatsunagi
2017-08-05, 20:21
Yup, SHUFFLE by Navel soft, I disliked that anime ending, it's not like I hate Asa but it feels so abrupt.

wuhugm
2017-08-05, 22:15
Yup, SHUFFLE by Navel soft, I disliked that anime ending, it's not like I hate Asa but it feels so abrupt.

I like that ending~

Ruki0089
2017-08-06, 01:44
Nah, i think it's better for mc stabbed by his childhood friend in the ending~:heh:

Rasty
2017-08-06, 04:17
For me, that is worst part of harem stories. i really hate when this happened to my favorite harem stories, i tried to avoid those false harem stories but it's really hard cuz you never know it until close to the end, by that time you already attached to the story..

That's why I like true harems.


Yeah shuffle, I was rather newcommer to anime by the time I saw it, but seriously the ending... Asa was the most boring girl of them (well maybe Kaori was worse), it was quite a surprise (not good) for Asa to get the main heroine seat.

I lately tried the VN, but can't say much about it, it's just kind of boring. Well tells a lot about how much the VN industry moved from that time (I played just the goddess route, and the best girl not even having a route was a pity). Btw. why is there a harem-OK world, yet no harem ending? That's just unfair.

Xellos-_^
2017-08-06, 21:36
That's why I like true harems.


Yeah shuffle, I was rather newcommer to anime by the time I saw it, but seriously the ending... Asa was the most boring girl of them (well maybe Kaori was worse), it was quite a surprise (not good) for Asa to get the main heroine seat.

I lately tried the VN, but can't say much about it, it's just kind of boring. Well tells a lot about how much the VN industry moved from that time (I played just the goddess route, and the best girl not even having a route was a pity). Btw. why is there a harem-OK world, yet no harem ending? That's just unfair.
Asa was a nice surprise since 99% of the time, the winner is usually the childhood friend. It was nice break form tradition.

wuhugm
2017-08-06, 22:41
Asa was a nice surprise since 99% of the time, the winner is usually the childhood friend. It was nice break form tradition.

Winner is usually the "magical girl/girl fallen from the sky" though

Osananajimi usually the losing heroine

Rinvelt
2017-08-07, 01:46
Asa was a nice surprise since 99% of the time, the winner is usually the childhood friend. It was nice break form tradition.

From what parallel universe do you come from?

charasu
2017-08-07, 03:46
osananajim win percentace is like UR/SSR in gacha......
koi senkyo anime.ver osananajimi win for example, fug that (ノ°Д°)ノ︵ ┻━┻

Rinvelt
2017-08-07, 05:52
^Well, she IS the True Route after all.
Though, to be fair, there are two childhood friends in this one.

Amelgar
2017-08-07, 06:40
Yeah, n1133dy looks to be his Nocturn title.

That said, I'm not reading it; I like to stay away from the futa tag.

It's actually quite funny and the futa element has been rather minor so far. 大魔王様 is too much of a fan of Akuim-kun...

charasu
2017-08-07, 10:05
^Well, she IS the True Route after all.
Though, to be fair, there are two childhood friends in this one.

more like forced route:heh:

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need recommend WN with theme gotta catch 'em all/raising pets, i'm kinda hard to find good one .........

Rasty
2017-08-07, 10:44
Well there are several WN's with catch them (girls) all, like Death March (though he is not doing anything after catching them).

But more seriously are there really any raising ones (without the pet turning bishoujo)? For what I know MC in Yaritsukai to Neko has a cat with some appearance, but does nothing like raising it. Also, for some reason japanese authors tend to like slimes, so you have for example n5824ct (breeding slimes).
Also Monster Breeder (but I dropped it because of lack of progress = too small chapters and every could be expressed in 1 sentence).

The slime one might be the closest I know.

Kyureki
2017-08-07, 16:01
^ The Japanese love slimes because of Dragon Quest which is more popular than Final Fantasy to them.

charasu
2017-08-07, 17:13
but little of the slime's evolve line to be ''metal slime'', usually end up as monmusu tho or had humanification skill.
i think because slime play, the same as tentacle's tag.

WyrdMonger
2017-08-09, 18:01
Any stories where a whole class becomes evolving monsters?

Xellos-_^
2017-08-09, 19:18
Any stories where a whole class becomes evolving monsters?
My Entire Class Has Been Reincarnated – I Became the Weakest Skeleton!

Rasty
2017-08-10, 01:26
^ Do they evolve in that one? I dropped it too soon to get to know, but they didn't seem to show any signs of that.

Garn
2017-08-12, 14:44
Sigh, from dozens of novels I read, a number that does not reach the 2 digits describes everyday situations like kisses and hugs, or an affective contact of any kind, but only in chapters related to a romantic or dramatic theme, I would like to change the food scenes by scenes of that kind, but I think I'm asking too much.

cabman11
2017-08-13, 23:04
Any of you guys go to c92?

Ultimateninjax
2017-08-14, 16:18
I wish... but alas pharm school

Rasty
2017-08-15, 10:05
ウロボロス・レコード ~円環のオーブニル~

Deviant ー妖魔転生ー


Though that is a good question, there are very few akuyaku nobles that actually remain really akuyaku. Even the worst of them just put up a front to keep their akuyaku image.


BTW I'm in the mood for more zombies, anyone have any good zombie series other than these? Nocturne or narou either is fine, though if it's a narou series preferably not a hetare without a brain (Including justice retards).

崩壊した世界、それはまるで異世界のようだった…… (Technically not zombies though it has the zombie apocalypse feel, gobzombies)
ゾンビ・マスター
休業勇者・いん・ゾンビ世界
パンデミックで俺は英雄になった
ゾンビ達との共同生活
ゾンビのあふれた世界で俺だけが襲われない
片側赤目のゾンビエンペラー
世界がデスゲームになったので楽しいです。
終焉のコドク
CRAZY OF THE DEAD -屍たちの鎮魂歌-
終わった世界の復讐者 ―僕はゾンビを操ってクラスメイト達に復讐する―

Now, I know that this is a really old post, but even so. Which of the series are worth reading?
As a small gift, 蛇と生きる is modestly good for the time being (and this series made me look for more zombie ones). Might become a bit too much of easy mode later on though.

WyrdMonger
2017-08-15, 12:48
Is there any harems where the heroines are aggressive, ferocious, and savage as hell?

Xellos-_^
2017-08-15, 14:55
Is there any harems where the heroines are aggressive, ferocious, and savage as hell?
Kuro No Maou
Sevens

Harems done right :heh:

xTachibana
2017-08-15, 23:28
rip, when did http://novel18.syosetu.com/n5857cy/ get taken down :v


anyone have any clue why/have any archive of it?

Ruki0089
2017-08-16, 00:19
What is that? Cure Semen? LOLI MANKO?:heh:

travelingbum
2017-08-16, 00:23
the older sister that became a yandere

but yeah no idea why the author just deleted the account :(

Ruki0089
2017-08-16, 00:31
Oooh, that's too bad...

Mirable
2017-08-16, 00:43
oh that's one get deleted

Last time i checked mc's Nee-san gone crazy and about to cut his D off because of his cheating and liar, well he deserves it anyway. shame that i will never know the result.

cabman11
2017-08-16, 03:57
Anyone here read Knights and Magic? Yeah there's hentai now.
It's up on Sad Panda.

Rasty
2017-08-16, 10:40
^^ Nothing much, really, the author would just have to add the 女性主人公 tag :heh: .

Oh geez, 休業勇者・いん・ゾンビ世界, such a nice "I don't care about you people, so just let me play with those zombies" MC is turning more and more into Seigi-kun...

Garn
2017-08-22, 13:20
異世界建国記 - novel

Xellos-_^
2017-08-22, 19:02
異世界建国記 - novel

So how much details does this novel gets into country building?


i am getting sick of these country building novels. 99% of the time the author have no idea the politics or economy that goes into making a country and give it no more then a waive of a hand. Instead country, just add water.

Garn
2017-08-22, 21:31
As far as I can remember, the area where the MC begins is governed by tribes, and that among the heads of each one choose a chief to rule the whole area, so that development begins at first with the orphans with slight details and when he begins to take power from the region, little by little begins to develop the areas he is acquiring, I stopped by Chapter 90, where by wars and conflicts, the development of infrastructure and economy is not resumed.


http://img1.mitemin.net/c5/mg/7nsbguuo63gx6w0j1mpl5vgbeu7b_jmp_1ep_ou_1ma0.png.5 80.jpg

The green zone is the forest at the beginning, to the right the region of the tribes, and the others are the other nations.




http://img1.mitemin.net/36/xt/fdsvehvj5q6miarqja7ier0pkc4r_4ge_5lg_2ps_euha.png. 580.jpg

MC under the blue

wuhugm
2017-08-25, 00:53
Just flashed into my mind...

Isn't boukensha/adventurer rank is flawed and kinda useless to determine someone's combat prowess?

I mean, no matter how powerful you are, when you just signed up, you'll start around the bottom ranks
So even if it's a freaking God, it will be a low ranker at the beginning

So why is it so often people ridicule or underestimate someone just because he's a low ranker?
Like : "Haha, he's only a D rank, let's kill him boys!" or something
Isn't that idiotic?

guyy
2017-08-25, 01:59
^Usually in those novels every human starts from the bottom. Even the high ranking adventurers were rookies once. And by doing missions and stuff is how they slowly gain experience and improve in strength and rank. So in 99% of cases the adventurer rank is a rather accurate estimate of someone's strength. I think it's silly to expect the adventurers to even come up with the thought that the xxth rookie they're beating up is a god, an invader from another world with super cheats, a bored dragon or a mountain hermit martial artist or even just a strong guy without fame switching occupations. For them, that just doesn't really happen.

wuhugm
2017-08-25, 02:42
^But it does, it always happen (with MC and his harems mostly :p)
But just think about it
It's not like EVERYONE in that world an adventurer
There are many cases of ex-knights or nobles that become adventurer later in life
Obviously starts from low rank despite actual skill
But almost nobody put this into consideration before bullying a low-ranker

guyy
2017-08-25, 03:15
^Well they aren't reading tons of japanese webnovels to know all the ins and outs of cliches that happen in them :twitch: for them, the MC is usually the first one. As for people switching occupations, it would be a rare occasion as well and one you wouldn't connect with some scrawny teenage kid who probably blushes and stutters when the receptionist smiles at him

Rasty
2017-08-25, 03:32
^ As he said. They also might start from higher rank and their equipment is gonna be much better at the first glance so if they see a F rank blushing teenage boy with bronze sword and leather armor they are rather justified to think of him as an idiot rookie (don't ask me why they are idiots who think Momonga who clearly seems as an ex-knight is weak, but the adventurers are mostly half criminal idiots, so that tells a lot).

I think the S ranks having to accept the guilds obligatory quests is much stranger. I would expect it to be the other way around because otherwise there is usually no reason to raise your rank so high and S rankers are so strong that you might not want to force them to do anything (and risk they go out of control).
Also, what is the reason to control people's origin before they enter the city if all they need to do is go to the adventurer's guild and they get a free pass? That like kills all the meaning...

Breimn
2017-08-25, 04:43
If i remember well they tought that Ainz was some idiot noble who just bought the armor with money and wanted to play adventurer.
Tough that should give them even more reason to.not offend him as nobles are known to be ruthless and corrupt bastards over there.

charasu
2017-08-26, 00:59
is the real adv guild exist back in middle age or before?

Ruki0089
2017-08-26, 09:36
Anyone read this n5009dl and n7325dn??

Rasty
2017-08-28, 08:30
After you threw the two codes there I tried the first (n1136cw). It is 80% hentai with some story in between that tries to look reasonable and it is not a pure hentai logic, but still, the logic is childish at best. The MC generally has no character traits to speak of except for being too much into H (well which H MC isn't).
The emotion changes are lame and the heroines are just tropes and objects to be competed over by the males, not individuals. Don't know whether the H scenes are good or not (never was so much into hentai to evaluate it). For a hentai work, it is in the upper half, but not worth reading for the plot.

For n5009dl, wtf is that title? He should use this as the synopsis and give it a reasonably long title like "XYZ no tabi" for example. I got rather used to long titles in WNs, but this is overdone.


Now one question from me. How is n3170ed ? Does the MC ever stop being an underdog? It is rather high in ranking and the writing isn't really bad, but after reading several chapters and with the "dark" tag I can't help but feel a bit iffy about it.

Rinvelt
2017-08-28, 12:55
^Seems interesting. And to the backlog it goes.

Hope you'll share your opinion after you're up to date. Or about what you already read.

Ruki0089
2017-08-28, 14:49
@Rasty
I not even read those yet...

Xellos-_^
2017-08-30, 12:20
can someone explain how to use the wayback machine to search for certain titles?

Ultimateninjax
2017-08-30, 19:19
Just go to web archive org (put period between spaces) and then type in the URL of the website you want to visit a past version of and then select the date of when you want to go back to.

Rasty
2017-08-31, 01:19
^ That's not what he was asking about. He was asking about how to find titles, that already got deleted (thus he doesn't have the URL). And I don't know how to do that to.

wuhugm
2017-08-31, 01:22
^Google to find the title first then use that dead link on webarchive

Ultimateninjax
2017-08-31, 15:40
Or I think you can just pull up an old version of syosetu and just search from there.

wuhugm
2017-09-01, 02:40
超絶鈍感系主人公........................

Rasty
2017-09-01, 10:18
^ Well considering that the usual donkan MC has to get raped by the heroines for him to realize that they have feelings towards him, this tag could mean that even if he gets raped he is gonna create his own version of the truth so that it seems like they don't feel a thing to him.

wuhugm
2017-09-01, 10:35
^I want narou to have a "non donkan" tag so I can easily avoid all of those
Isn't like 70% narou's protagonist freaking donkan?

Ruki0089
2017-09-01, 10:46
Because everyone think donkan is cool... Tsk...puih...
Donkan = good and kind, real mc
Aware = not cool man... He's not mc just side character.

charasu
2017-09-01, 11:39
Since when aware=not cool?
Isnt donkan popular type because it's most easy use as base comedy materials mc, get hit by heroine, missunderstanding and such? Just my though tho :v

造られしイノチとキレイな世界 ~新しい家族、できました~ (yomeru-hj.net/novel/kireinasekai/)

Anyone read this series? It's pure heartwarming type :D

wuhugm
2017-09-01, 11:46
^Ruki intended for sarcasm

Donkan is popular coz it's everywhere though
Like Justin Bieber, if you're exposed to it on daily basis, you'll tolerate it

Rasty
2017-09-01, 13:23
^ I used to tolereta donkan and seigi baka protagonists much more before I got fed up with them being everywhere...

Anyway, I would say it's really easy to do love comedy with donkans, it's possible to do pseudo harems and hold status quo for an indefinite amount of time. Considering that the presence of snusnu in the novel can make its publishing much less likely (and that romance sells) the authors are avoiding it, which means you don't want the romance to progress too far and the MC being a donkan helps a lot with that.

Ruki0089
2017-09-01, 13:25
Some reincarnated mc choose to be donkan...
I remember one of them said "I will be donkan type MC"

wuhugm
2017-09-01, 13:36
^So shameless

^ I used to tolereta donkan and seigi baka protagonists much more before I got fed up with them being everywhere...

Anyway, I would say it's really easy to do love comedy with donkans, it's possible to do pseudo harems and hold status quo for an indefinite amount of time. Considering that the presence of snusnu in the novel can make its publishing much less likely (and that romance sells) the authors are avoiding it, which means you don't want the romance to progress too far and the MC being a donkan helps a lot with that.

Donkan milking :heh:
Most LN in circulation is in status quo, which is the main reason I stick with WN now, though even WN with non-donkan is minority

Need great authors for non-donkan
Nagaikoto can do great romcom even with snusnu

It seems mediocre authors can only think of donkan-ness to prevent romance from happening
Even Godsuya from Mahouka has more valid reason

Rasty
2017-09-01, 13:36
^^ The one in Nidome no Yuusha is trying (he has his reasons, it's not only about being herbivore). He is frequently complaining how hard it is to pull off (like when another party they are speaking with openly says that the harem members sure love him). Not like his donkan act works on the girls, they are pretending they don't realize and slowly taking him down.

^ But Nagaikoto MC has the stupid "don't kill" rule, that's why I stopped reading it (and the stupidity of the MC).
As for Tatsuya, he has serious reasons (though he is kind of donkan too). That did not stop the romance completely though.

Actually, are there any LNs (not pure porn) with fulfilled romance?

charasu
2017-09-01, 13:48
Some reincarnated mc choose to be donkan...
I remember one of them said "I will be donkan type MC"

This kind of thing exist?


Actually, are there any LNs (not pure porn) with fulfilled romance?

Maybe there is, but it rare/got shadowed by popular genre's

wuhugm
2017-09-01, 14:05
^ But Nagaikoto MC has the stupid "don't kill" rule, that's why I stopped reading it (and the stupidity of the MC).
As for Tatsuya, he has serious reasons (though he is kind of donkan too). That did not stop the romance completely though.

Actually, are there any LNs (not pure porn) with fulfilled romance?

Well, if he kills someone, the comedy would be over...

LN with fulfilled romance are Rakudai, Hikaru Chikyuu, Madan... Generic Harem usually at the end only

Rinvelt
2017-09-01, 14:30
Velt is 'stupid' in a good way. I would actually call him 'simple' though, as he do think, and is really philosophical sometimes. (another reason I really love Nagaikoto, the take on the reincarnation thing and how the characters deal with it)

^^Pretty sure it's the case in Mushoku Tensei.

charasu
2017-09-01, 16:39
http://ncode.syosetu.com/n8725k/ errrrr isn't this author had problem with tax or something :twitch:

travelingbum
2017-09-01, 16:48
yes and here you go, the 203 page log horizon thread https://forums.animesuki.com/showthread.php?t=122300

charasu
2017-09-01, 17:24
^i already abandon that series when translation stop + LN licensed back then , dunno that the WN still ongoing @@
lost interest to novel that got "L" tag or something similar :v

Ruki0089
2017-09-04, 07:55
Did anyone have read this?
転生オークは姫騎士を守りたい

Ork~~~

Garn
2017-09-04, 12:56
^DoM Ork, the first two heroines (human-elf) are DoS plus the first one wanted to be raped by orks but MC wanted to "Title" and stop the attempt, obviously she got upset and rape him, I hate that type of combination so I dropped in the firsts chapters, several scenes are reverse "rape" with this two, but, I just remember the beginning so maybe I'm wrong about future events (has a novel)

wuhugm
2017-09-04, 14:24
Lately more and more novels have MC with few dozens of powers/skills

Like I can remember every single one of them duh

Prefer smaller number but multi-purpose powers instead

Garn
2017-09-04, 15:06
Un un, with only the ability of evolution, adaptation or agglutination, you can defeat any protagonist, evolve or adapt or agglutinate beyond the limits to be an entity close to an Outer Gods:eyespin:.

wuhugm
2017-09-04, 15:18
^Aye that's fun~ Anyone remembers that Aptom guy from Guyver? :D

Recently I found an MC with only 4 powers

But then 1 of them is Life Magic

He can give life to weapons, thus giving them human forms

MC kept collecting legendary weapons, now it's >50

Can't remember them :heh:

Garn
2017-09-04, 15:30
is not that, where the childhood friend of the protagonist leaves him for not having a good Skill and that in a suicide attempt (or something) he meets someone who teaches him that he does have power and how to use it, then he build a Tsukumogami like harem, code?

kari-no-sugata II
2017-09-04, 17:23
Lately more and more novels have MC with few dozens of powers/skills

Like I can remember every single one of them duh

Prefer smaller number but multi-purpose powers instead

In a recent chapter of "I Was a Sword When I Reincarnated" (n6006cw), the MC has too many skills. As in, it's serious matter rather than "oops it's a bit hard to keep track of them all, teheh".

Only series I've seen that handles lots of skills well is "kumo desu ga, nani ka" - the skills are systematically organised and group together nicely, for the most part. You can't cast magic with just one skill, unlike in pretty much every other series. Not that many stand-alone or special skills either and nearly everything is combat orientated.

The bigger problem I have with skills is not the raw number but when they seem to be just made up on the spot for plot convenience, or otherwise seem too random. ie the author didn't plan them out in advance.

Ruki0089
2017-09-04, 17:59
@Erotora
I remember Aptom... He is my favorite in Guyver...

travelingbum
2017-09-04, 20:05
異世界来ちゃったけど帰り道何処? is as hiatus as ever with only 11 chs last year and currently only 1 this year.

wuhugm
2017-09-04, 21:06
The bigger problem I have with skills is not the raw number but when they seem to be just made up on the spot for plot convenience, or otherwise seem too random. ie the author didn't plan them out in advance.

Death March?

@Garn : Yes

@Ruki : Aptom's evolution is great boi~

Ruki0089
2017-09-04, 21:11
Erotora
His OmegaBlast Form is truly cool...

Garn
2017-09-05, 00:13
Anything about this? 嫌われ者始めました〜転生リーマンの領地運営物語〜

kari-no-sugata II
2017-09-05, 17:58
Death March?

Yeah. The way that skills were done there was really quite annoying. I dunno if it gets any better but I stopped reading it...

Sword-bro is really bad at the start for skills but it gets much better once Fran turns up.

Rasty
2017-09-06, 00:04
^ Nope, it gets worse. After Satou gains magic he becomes literally able to create and use whatever he wants.

Ruki0089
2017-09-06, 00:30
And he still not f*** any girls beside prostitute?:heh:

Mirable
2017-09-06, 00:34
^^yeah, Sugar basically a god now, he can even turn dying miko baba to loli for save her life, in other word he can cheat people death.

wuhugm
2017-09-06, 00:39
^Like that smartphone guy

I watch the anime and got bored to death
This smartphone guy can do anything lol :heh:
And the girls are swooned by his divinity
In reality it is repulsive
MODELLING!

Ruki0089
2017-09-06, 00:59
A man capable to do anything... But still tied by moral is boring... Satou and ....erm... Who is it again... Mc of smartphone... Both of them literally a living Gods... But they are suck...

personal
2017-09-06, 09:48
Excuse me but anyone still have epub or pdf files for this one:
ReBirth 上位世界から下位世界へ

charasu
2017-09-07, 03:52
A man capable to do anything... But still tied by moral is boring... Satou and ....erm... Who is it again... Mc of smartphone... Both of them literally a living Gods... But they are suck...

Well what you can say, they are race of honest ippanjin that following nippon rules + gourmet expert
Or broken mind because cheat giving by god and became rapist, mindcontroler, tentacles etcetc well, types that doing whatever s/he wis in the new world either by reborn/transfer :v

Leventor
2017-09-07, 07:36
Honestly why can't these "overpowered mc" author realize that if you know that nobody can challenge him on power they should have at least some noteable character flaw :rolleyes:

wuhugm
2017-09-07, 08:23
Honestly why can't these "overpowered mc" author realize that if you know that nobody can challenge him on power they should have at least some noteable character flaw :rolleyes:

Character Flaws?

Oh yes there are

Hetare and Donkan

:heh::heh::heh::heh::heh:

dragon1412
2017-09-07, 08:57
Honestly why can't these "overpowered mc" author realize that if you know that nobody can challenge him on power they should have at least some noteable character flaw :rolleyes:

Making story around OP character is hard, since there are very few opponents or situation that pose threat to MC so no tension

Leventor
2017-09-07, 09:20
Making story around OP character is hard, since there are very few opponents or situation that pose threat to MC so no tension

That's why you don't focus on that. One of my favourite op mc would be mob from mob psycho 100, He got probably one of the strongest psychic power in the world and yet his power can't give what he wants that is impressing a girl that he likes. that's why he have to become a better person and he have to be doing that with nothing but his own hardwork to overcame all of his flaws (weak physically, shy, not smart, etc)


Give me some character drama if you're not planning to have him losing :heh:

wuhugm
2017-09-08, 01:31
Anyone reads : カット&ペーストでこの世界を生きていく ? Cut & Paste

FAQ please~

I checked the latest chapter and the princess that was kidnapped and imprisoned by the enemy when she is finally rescued is already impregnated lol :heh::heh::heh:

Valky
2017-09-08, 01:44
I read until around 20-ish chapters .. honestly, it's not good. You might want to skip it.

sasuke706
2017-09-08, 03:20
Anyone reads : カット&ペーストでこの世界を生きていく ? Cut & Paste

FAQ please~

I checked the latest chapter and the princess that was kidnapped and imprisoned by the enemy when she is finally rescued is already impregnated lol :heh::heh::heh:I considered it extremely boring and below average.
I recall one thing that particularly irked me was the author's vindication to avoid describing anything about the heroines whatsoever.

Before I dumped it there was 2 heroines and the author's stance was 'I don't know what I want to do yet' about the harem thing, and they couldn't be farther from snu snu because the romance was extremely shallow to begin with.
The characterization wasn't anything special and the protagonist's motives for using his abilities amounted to a child trying to be on the side of justice with flimsy ideals.
I'm surprised an impregnated princess appeared all, to be honest.

charasu
2017-09-08, 03:38
cut and paste i only read story of little bird, chun chan iirc....
then afterthat somehow or another the WN became wacky to read,
suddenly meet with osananajimi saint, then get power to combine skill, the other's start to throw him new wife candidate, when he already marry first princess and ex-guild recepcinist.
around chater 190 i think.

impregnated princess must be princess from another kingdom that already defeated from demonic tribe invasion :v

wuhugm
2017-09-08, 04:59
^There is a marriage?

^^Yea, I jump read and found no interesting moments :heh:

MC made promise to the king to limit his skill stealing power lol :p

The pregnant princess is the 3rd princess Luca, of Oose Kingdom or something

Mirable
2017-09-08, 06:12
^may i ask who's the father?

wuhugm
2017-09-08, 06:49
^The kidnapper (demon king) Xanadu or something

Ruki0089
2017-09-08, 06:59
You still reading that?

wuhugm
2017-09-08, 07:06
^That princess is not a heroine so dun care
But the romance is nill anyway so nut reading

Mirable
2017-09-08, 07:13
^^^So princess got raped and pregnant by demon king before white knight come and save her :heh:

Ruki0089
2017-09-08, 07:20
Heh, I rather read this 逆転異世界の救世主 ~異世界トリップした先で美女に感謝され、イチャラブ生活送ってます~
While it's not good as another one... This one got more chapter...

wuhugm
2017-09-08, 07:21
^^^So princess got raped and pregnant by demon king before white knight come and save her :heh:

Yea boi :heh:
Rarely happens
Didn't happen in Yaritsukai despite Princess gone for months
Lol stress free

charasu
2017-09-08, 10:14
^There is a marriage?

MC made promise to the king to limit his skill stealing power lol :p




Yep there is marriage, whole city celebrated. It's the first princess marriage afterall. And iirc he limited stealing skill only for criminals and monster tho...

Yea boi :heh:
Rarely happens
Didn't happen in Yaritsukai despite Princess gone for months
Lol stress free

A captived princess from ruined countries gone for months isn't pregnant, then the kidnaper either too nice or someone had DE:heh:

wuhugm
2017-09-08, 10:31
^So there's snusnu?
I searched the entire novel for romantic events and didn't find any

Usually when the kidnapped girl isn't raped, the reasons be :

1. No time to do that because immediately saved (most examples)
2. The kidnappers are asexual (monsters/other girls)
3. Can't harm the girl because for negotiation purpose or hindered by protection magic/curse/etc
4. No particular reasons (bad novel)

Ruki0089
2017-09-08, 10:33
Or the consequences for touching the girls will be very nasty...

wuhugm
2017-09-08, 11:51
^If they were afraid of the consequences, they wouldn't kidnapped her in the first place duh

Ruki0089
2017-09-08, 11:53
Kidnapping but no touching is good enough to save their lives:heh:

charasu
2017-09-08, 12:40
^^^^
What snusnu you expect, they married in end of cp, next cp they already go adv

^
The kidnaper afraid of hiv? :heh:

wuhugm
2017-09-08, 12:54
^Oh, so it's shit like that, yuks...

Found 2 Isekai Farmer thingy...
One is fake farmer
One is boring as fuck

Xellos-_^
2017-09-08, 12:59
^If they were afraid of the consequences, they wouldn't kidnapped her in the first place duh

Kidnapping but no touching is good enough to save their lives:heh:
it really depend on what the goal is for the kidnapping.

charasu
2017-09-08, 12:59
farmer???
code?

oh right, anyone had read this wn monster factory (http://ncode.syosetu.com/n9166dv/)????? ranch story?

Ruki0089
2017-09-08, 13:10
Lately I rarely find good wn... So I stick with Shin Koihime mysou fanfiction(JP)

Kyureki
2017-09-08, 15:39
farmer???
code?

oh right, anyone had read this wn monster factory (http://ncode.syosetu.com/n9166dv/)????? ranch story?

Looked into it. By the same author of OSO.

travelingbum
2017-09-08, 17:30
got bored. decided to read a 18+

and it finally happened as the title states
his harem of 3 has exhausted him..... break up time? lol
----------------
though i dropped various things...........

i see that 地龍のダンジョン奮闘記! is in its final vol.

Amelgar
2017-09-08, 21:06
Anyone read n2692cx? Nice stress-free ero-comedy :D

Ruki0089
2017-09-10, 01:04
Did anyone play this
パパドキッ! ~パパが大好きだけど、家族だから問題ないよね!
Incest~~
My old save from 2013 still exist lol

apr
2017-09-13, 17:40
Sure is depressing to read a really good web novel (http://novel18.syosetu.com/n4776cb/), then get to the "end" which is in mid-climax, and notice it has been abandoned for three years. Seems to keep happening to me. Still worth it, with this quality.

Garn
2017-09-14, 11:11
無能と呼ばれた俺、4つの力を得る - publication by Overlap.


http://blog.over-lap.co.jp/wp/wp-content/uploads/2017/08/%E7%84%A1%E8%83%BD%E3%81%A8%E5%91%BC%E3%81%B0%E3%8 2%8C%E3%81%9F%E4%BF%BA-768x1097.jpg


http://blog.over-lap.co.jp/wp/wp-content/uploads/2017/08/%EF%BC%91%E3%80%80%E3%83%AD%E3%83%BC%E3%83%89-768x1084.jpg

http://blog.over-lap.co.jp/wp/wp-content/uploads/2017/08/%EF%BC%92%E3%80%80%E3%83%AC%E3%83%B4%E3%82%A3-768x1084.jpg

http://blog.over-lap.co.jp/wp/wp-content/uploads/2017/08/%EF%BC%93%E3%80%80%E3%82%A2%E3%82%B9%E3%83%8A-768x1084.jpg

http://blog.over-lap.co.jp/wp/wp-content/uploads/2017/08/%EF%BC%94%E3%80%80%E3%82%AF%E3%83%A9%E3%82%A6%E3%8 3%B3-768x1084.jpg

Ruki0089
2017-09-14, 11:13
Gilgamesh???

Garn
2017-09-14, 11:19
Legendary weapons catalog, don´t know if it has a function like Gilga

wuhugm
2017-09-14, 17:26
無能と呼ばれた俺、4つの力を得る - publication by Overlap.


http://blog.over-lap.co.jp/wp/wp-content/uploads/2017/08/%E7%84%A1%E8%83%BD%E3%81%A8%E5%91%BC%E3%81%B0%E3%8 2%8C%E3%81%9F%E4%BF%BA-768x1097.jpg


http://blog.over-lap.co.jp/wp/wp-content/uploads/2017/08/%EF%BC%91%E3%80%80%E3%83%AD%E3%83%BC%E3%83%89-768x1084.jpg

http://blog.over-lap.co.jp/wp/wp-content/uploads/2017/08/%EF%BC%92%E3%80%80%E3%83%AC%E3%83%B4%E3%82%A3-768x1084.jpg

http://blog.over-lap.co.jp/wp/wp-content/uploads/2017/08/%EF%BC%93%E3%80%80%E3%82%A2%E3%82%B9%E3%83%8A-768x1084.jpg

http://blog.over-lap.co.jp/wp/wp-content/uploads/2017/08/%EF%BC%94%E3%80%80%E3%82%AF%E3%83%A9%E3%82%A6%E3%8 3%B3-768x1084.jpg




The battle is corny
Too much miracles
No snuanu

sasuke706
2017-09-14, 17:42
^It seems to have a sexy dark elf lady with a monocle in it so it can't be THAT bad, right?

While I'm at it, 悪いな勇者、このダンジョンは小人用なんだ's character designs (http://blog.over-lap.co.jp/kobito_chara/) have also been released.

Don't suppose anyone has read 望まぬ不死の冒険者? Actually got interested in it because the protagonist looks like a death knight (http://blog.over-lap.co.jp/nozomanuhushi_tokuhou/), but the synopsis does it no justice and the tags for it are basically nothing.
So some more information, like anything at all, would be nice.

Didn't realize スライム転生。大賢者が養女エルフに抱きしめられてます got published either.
Literally everything he does has been getting novel adaptions and even manga adaptions.
And to think he's started another goddamn series recently too.

wuhugm
2017-09-14, 18:31
^It's that bad imo

It's that type when MC got beat down many times but got up with willpower and enemy said "bakana!". Yuck so corny.
Also heroine lived for thousands of years but still stupid.

Garn
2017-09-14, 20:15
Now I remember why stop reading it, that king (and anyone in those 4k + years ), they had steel balls, for not having put their hands on that demon girl, and how everything is due to a kind of curse and in fact the people are good (only in the first 5 chapters ruined my revenge).

wuhugm
2017-09-14, 21:19
^LOL~

Meaningless 4k years :heh:
MC's 1 month > Immortal 1 millennium :heh:
Ah btw, that sexy dark elf (actually mazoku) is the main heroine

The munou development is disappointing too
In this novel, MC and others are munou/incompetent who doesn't have/have shit ability
But lo and behold, incompetents are actually powerful, like the strongest on the planet -__-
And later, the threats mainly come from incompetents instead (they made an organization called Titanomachia)

Valky
2017-09-14, 21:56
The slime is only a matter of time anyway. He(her?) and Miki Nazuna are publishing bunch of their works one after another. I prefer Rui's works though.

There's also another author that recently got 2 of his works published and 1 already decided to follow. すみもりさい, Sumimori Sai.

^For something that bad you seem to read it quite a bit. lol. So what is the mc powers?

Garn
2017-09-14, 22:30
Wanted to give it another chance, but reading discourages me, development is generally poor, a protagonist who announces to all lungs that it is not useless showing their power and weapons (legendary, how can you say that you have legendary weapons as if nothing ?) As a child looking for attention, I will take the liberty of thinking that heroine seeks the protagonist's heat quickly since his "papa...papa...nn" will not comfort her in the nights... hihihi.

Amelgar
2017-09-15, 03:52
Don't suppose anyone has read 望まぬ不死の冒険者? Actually got interested in it because the protagonist looks like a death knight (http://blog.over-lap.co.jp/nozomanuhushi_tokuhou/), but the synopsis does it no justice and the tags for it are basically nothing.
So some more information, like anything at all, would be nice.


lol. if only the protagonist was as bad ass as that looks... Apart from the mc being undead its got a somewhat generic feel to it.


MC had a dream to become a platinum (highest) class adventurer due to somethings in his past, but doesn't have much talent in the area. Thus spends ~10 years as bronze (lowest) class, but garners respect within the local adventurers guild as a mentor to newbies. Then randomly runs into a dragon one day in a beginner labyrinth and dies.

After that he revives as a skeleton and the story progresses from there as he attempts to become human or something close to it by evolving up the ranks of undead. Can guess what he is at latest from the arc names... Disappointingly he doesn't seem to have many reasons for wanting to become human again, but just wants to. Whereas remaining undead seems like a much more appealing choice with few demerits after a few evolutions.

Not much in the romance department either. There's one main heroine up to where I'm at and shes about as donkan as the mc. Apart from her there is a few others interested in the mc but doesn't get touched on as much since he is solo most of the time (due to being undead).

darkdhaos
2017-09-15, 04:45
無能と呼ばれた俺、4つの力を得る - publication by Overlap.


http://blog.over-lap.co.jp/wp/wp-content/uploads/2017/08/%E7%84%A1%E8%83%BD%E3%81%A8%E5%91%BC%E3%81%B0%E3%8 2%8C%E3%81%9F%E4%BF%BA-768x1097.jpg


http://blog.over-lap.co.jp/wp/wp-content/uploads/2017/08/%EF%BC%91%E3%80%80%E3%83%AD%E3%83%BC%E3%83%89-768x1084.jpg

http://blog.over-lap.co.jp/wp/wp-content/uploads/2017/08/%EF%BC%92%E3%80%80%E3%83%AC%E3%83%B4%E3%82%A3-768x1084.jpg

http://blog.over-lap.co.jp/wp/wp-content/uploads/2017/08/%EF%BC%93%E3%80%80%E3%82%A2%E3%82%B9%E3%83%8A-768x1084.jpg

http://blog.over-lap.co.jp/wp/wp-content/uploads/2017/08/%EF%BC%94%E3%80%80%E3%82%AF%E3%83%A9%E3%82%A6%E3%8 3%B3-768x1084.jpg




I remember this one, here's some info I posted about it months ago:

Ncode: n9340du (http://ncode.syosetu.com/n9340du/)


When a person becomes 15 years old, god grants them a magic, that magic cannot be ever changed and they have to use it for their entire life. there are many kinds of different magic, from battle oriented magic to helpful magic for the everyday life, so it doesn't matter what type of magic is it, it'll certainly be helpful for one's live.

However, in a rate of 1 in several millions of persons, there's the appereance of an "incompetent", those who are not able to use magic, they are the object of people's scorn and ridicule.

In such a world, the 18 year old Lord lifes a harsh and painful life, his only way of dealing with his daily life is his childhood friend Asuna, the town's idol who posses a great magical talent and also the only one that treats him nicely.

One day, the hero comes to his town searching for Asuna, asking her to be his companion, which she happily accepts. The night before her departure, he happens to listen to a conversation of Asuna with her parents, discovering that in reality while she treats him nicely on the front, on his back she scorns and despises him like everyone else.

Losing his only moral support, he goes to an abandoned well outside the town with a short sword with the intention of ending his life, but he loses his footing and ends up falling in the well. When he awakes, he's greeted by and old man and her young beautiful maid, they introduce themselves as Crown Vandemion, an old king that unified the world in the past and Rebecca, his demon race servant.

After listening to Lord's reason to try to end his life, Crown informs him that this is his chance to be reborn again, as he informs him that he possess not only a powerful magic, but also a powerful skill.


The MC is considered an incompetent because he was not able to use his magic, but that's because his magic was though to be "Manipulation Magic" (it allows to manipulate any object), but in reality his magic is "Life Magic" (it allows him to give life to any object) a much more powerful and rare type of magic, it was though to be manipulation magic because life magic it's very similar to it. There's a limit on how many things he can use his life magic on, and there's also restrictions because of his magic level (magic has levels that goes from 1 to 100, the more it's used, the stronger it grows), at the beginning the MC cannot use his life magic on things heavier than him or taller than him (he has a height of 1'78m, and he weights 70 kg).

He also possess a personal skill (skills are basically like talents, everyone has them, but without a way to discover them, a person could go their entire life without using them) called "all martial arts" (it allows the user to be a master of any kind of weapon), and a special skill called "no eating, drinking or sleeping" (it allows the user to continue for extended periods of time without eating, drinking or sleeping, the MC was able to work for 3 days continuously at the farms thanks to this ability).

He also got from Crown a grimoire that contains about hundreds of differents legendary weapons, and when he applies his life magic on any of these weapons, they gain human form (legendary weapons are different because they possess both will and soul). At the beginning, he's only able to use 5 weapons because the other weapons have not yet recognized him as their master.

wuhugm
2017-09-15, 05:06
^Yea, too many weapons for me, there's like 60 at the latest?
The 3 days no eating etc is just making him not die during that time, if he doesn't eat etc he will have no energy to do anything
Latest development it's trying to go harem with Asuna and some of the girls that crush on him trying to reach him

That battle when his book stolen by that new Maou was dumb
Levi/Rebecca was kidnapped by him too and brainwashed
But not raped, sigh

cabman11
2017-09-15, 18:42
Wait the girl didn't hate him?

Also what chapter did the book stealing things happen. I want to be able to prepare myself and when does it get resolved

Rinvelt
2017-09-16, 02:58
何故か学校一の美少女が休み時間の度に、ぼっちの俺に話しかけてくるんだが? is currently moving to Kakuyomu because the author's account was deleted. Found his twitter and apparently the cause is someone with the same IP (he releases chapters from a net cafe sometimes, so...) did a violation.

https://kakuyomu.jp/works/1177354054884043614

Hope it'll be back quickly, I really like it.

reinastar
2017-09-16, 03:02
Onii-Sama and Onee-Sama can you suggest me a good Yandere or Corruption/Brainwash type story in Syosetsuka pretty please my nii sama and nee sama~

wuhugm
2017-09-16, 03:38
^Niisan, tensei gotoki de nigerareru to demo?