2011-08-08, 12:46 | Link #33621 | |
A Drifter...
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First quote, I was under the impression that Nanoha had managed to come to terms about her ability to care for Vivio as a mother by the end of StrikerS. In subsequent materials, I haven't seen her doubting that decision. I will look at that sentence again and see what needs tuning though. Second quote, I see your point. Will probably cut out that '... eh' line in the updated FF.Net draft.
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2011-08-08, 20:52 | Link #33622 | |
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Join Date: Jan 2011
Location: Philippines
Age: 36
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Will Nanoha be communicating with her Darker self? And if she does, can we name her Seikou? Material-S name in GoD doesn't suit a Japanese native... XD
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2011-08-09, 03:51 | Link #33625 |
Queen of Tragedy
Join Date: Mar 2009
Location: Place of rocks and trees, and trees and rocks...and water.
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Posted "Please Don't Hurt Me" to Fanfiction.net ^^.
I have to say thank you to everyone who commented about the flow of the piece and suggested possible changes that I could have made to smooth those rough edges over. In the end, I chose to flesh out a few places (probably padding the "filler", as Dezo had put it!) but not to make any major changes to the story itself. This is because even after reflection I prefered the story in its raw, jagged form, and also because I considered that I had achieved the purpose of the fic in how I had first written it, and so I'm allowing the lack of elaborate words to also help me express the theme of the story. So thanks again to everyone who reviewed the first draft ^^--I did seriously think about the suggestions, but ultimately chose to make only the few edits that I did . Cheers!
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2011-08-09, 04:04 | Link #33626 | |
"Bi?!" BI?!
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Join Date: Oct 2007
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Now I can wipe that happy tear from my eyes. Cheers for Lindy.
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2011-08-09, 20:45 | Link #33627 |
Test Drive
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Brief update/announcement/whatever:
I just wanted to apologize to anyone reading Shadowverse, because I've been very slow and unfortunately it probably won't be better. I do have the timeline for the whole 'verse (major thank you to Dezo for putting it together!) and I'm adding the links to the document right now. If all goes well, it should be posted to the FFT tonight. Hopefully. Maybe. ... Keep your fingers crossed.
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2011-08-09, 20:50 | Link #33628 | |
"Hey, Isaac?"
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So... you posted to tell us you had nothing to post, then?
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2011-08-09, 20:51 | Link #33631 | ||
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Join Date: Mar 2009
Location: Place of rocks and trees, and trees and rocks...and water.
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It'd be cool to have a list with links, that would definitely make reading (or re-reading) it much easier! I'm glad I started early with my list though!
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2011-08-09, 20:54 | Link #33634 | |
Test Drive
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So true writers use no logic?
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2011-08-09, 20:55 | Link #33635 |
"Hey, Isaac?"
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The logic of the insane is what drives us to torture ourselves with this thing called 'writing'. Ours is a system of no logic, and yet mad logic. We thrive in the contradictions and rarely, if ever, make sense to anyone who isn't seeing the world in the same insane wavelength.
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2011-08-09, 21:17 | Link #33638 |
Burst Mode
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And a post about not having anything to post gets more replies than most fics do
Sorry to butt in on such an important conversation, but I came to deliver as promised: Spoiler for Materials no Jikan chapter 5: Sick Days:
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So to decide on what I work on next I'm gonna do something different. Here we have Doors #1 to #4. Behind them is a different fic and whichever door gets the most votes is what I work on. A hint: Three's Company is behind one of them. This time I'll aim to have it done for Sunday, which means I'll probably post it on Monday The first person to post the answers to what I said in the notes will get 2 votes.
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